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23 February 2016

• 07:4907:49, 23 February 2016 diff hist +4 The Adventures of Phoebe Zeit-Geist Missing word Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:4707:47, 23 February 2016 diff hist +3 Frank Springer Missing word Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:4607:46, 23 February 2016 diff hist −10 Frank Springer Un-italicized feature title, making it consistent with rest of article. Features are in quotes, magazine and comic-book titles are in italics. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:3907:39, 23 February 2016 diff hist 0 The Adventures of Phoebe Zeit-Geist Typo fix Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:3907:39, 23 February 2016 diff hist −19 The Adventures of Phoebe Zeit-Geist Features are in quote marks, comic books and magazines are italicized. For ex., "The Mighty Thor" in ''Journey into Mystery'' Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 February 2016

• 19:1519:15, 18 February 2016 diff hist +60 Lexington Steele →Career: clearer where the "corner of Madison and Lex" notion comes from
• 19:1119:11, 18 February 2016 diff hist −49 Lexington Steele don't need to say "it should be pointed out" -- just point it out
• 19:1019:10, 18 February 2016 diff hist +247 Lexington Steele archive
• 19:0719:07, 18 February 2016 diff hist −126 Lexington Steele →Directing: wp:dated and uncited
• 19:0719:07, 18 February 2016 diff hist −4 Lexington Steele →Directing: WP:DATED
• 19:0719:07, 18 February 2016 diff hist +246 Lexington Steele archived
• 19:0519:05, 18 February 2016 diff hist +424 Lexington Steele →Personal life: current wife, per interview Tag: possible BLP issue or vandalism

18 January 2016

• 15:5315:53, 18 January 2016 diff hist −45 Frank Quitely →Personal life: We don't give their favorite foods, their favorite colors or their favorite ball teams, either. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:4615:46, 18 January 2016 diff hist −6 Frank Quitely →Career: Less wordy and a grammatical fix. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:4415:44, 18 January 2016 diff hist −583 Frank Quitely →Career: Can't make uncited claims about awards, alleged censorship or that something was controversial, and we can't make uncertain "supposedly" claims. An encyclopedia doesn't rumor-monger or speculate. Also feel a WP:Peacock term. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 January 2016

• 06:3506:35, 3 January 2016 diff hist −18 Havok (character) Neal Adams had nothing to do with Havok creation in #54 Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3006:30, 3 January 2016 diff hist −81 Don Heck Mandarin intro already mentioned in this paragraph Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 December 2015

• 03:1703:17, 29 December 2015 diff hist −91 Tawny Peaks can't make uncited personal-life claims about living people. WP:BLP violation. Tag: possible BLP issue or vandalism

25 December 2015

• 09:0009:00, 25 December 2015 diff hist −1 Raggedy Ann Typographical Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

12 December 2015

• 14:2314:23, 12 December 2015 diff hist −133 Mason Williams →Environmentalism: Nonencyclopedic purple prose Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:2114:21, 12 December 2015 diff hist −957 Mason Williams →Comedy: you can't make a claim of an extraordinary first like that and cite it to the guy making that huge claim. WP:exceptional Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:1714:17, 12 December 2015 diff hist −220 Mason Williams →Comedy: Is this entire thing lifted from IMDb? Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:1314:13, 12 December 2015 diff hist −106 Mason Williams →Comedy: IMDb no - just cite the doc Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:0814:08, 12 December 2015 diff hist −113 Classical Gas No IMDb citing allowed Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:0714:07, 12 December 2015 diff hist −1 Classical Gas Typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:0614:06, 12 December 2015 diff hist +64 Classical Gas Uncited claims Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:0014:00, 12 December 2015 diff hist −62 Classical Gas Speculation, peacock Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:1206:12, 12 December 2015 diff hist −398 Joy Mangano →Other products: Removed peacock terms, repetition and promotional language. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:0606:06, 12 December 2015 diff hist +13 Joy Mangano →Miracle Mop: Citations needed Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:5405:54, 12 December 2015 diff hist +93 Joy Mangano Cleanup tag for promotional, non-encyclopedic tone and inappropriate lead. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 December 2015

• 15:3115:31, 9 December 2015 diff hist +5 Kecksburg UFO incident Can't say "recent" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 December 2015

• 17:3917:39, 2 December 2015 diff hist −5 Jonathan Frid Fan sites WP:ELNO and official bio has this anyway Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:3617:36, 2 December 2015 diff hist −226 Jonathan Frid Removed repetitious material and completely uncited claims about family. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 September 2015

• 04:1604:16, 22 September 2015 diff hist −1 Jay Scott Pike →Comic books: Corrected name Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:1504:15, 22 September 2015 diff hist +1 Jay Scott Pike →Early life and career: Missing quote marks Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 August 2015

• 21:4321:43, 22 August 2015 diff hist +394 Inki →History and description: additional background, cite req

11 August 2015

• 03:3303:33, 11 August 2015 diff hist −22 Carmen Dell'Orefice →Career: Many claims here needed citation. Removed extraneous and uncited claims about other models, and "etc." has no place in an encyclopedia. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:3003:30, 11 August 2015 diff hist +41 Carmen Dell'Orefice →Retirement and return to modeling: Many claims here need citation. Also, there was a WP:DATED violation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 August 2015

• 07:5707:57, 9 August 2015 diff hist 0 BoJack Horseman →Season 1: Standardized language Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:5507:55, 9 August 2015 diff hist −211 BoJack Horseman →Season 2: WP:TONE, and a redundant interpretive sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:4907:49, 9 August 2015 diff hist +18 BoJack Horseman →Music: Cite needed for title Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:4807:48, 9 August 2015 diff hist 0 BoJack Horseman →Guest characters: Grammar, punctuation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:4607:46, 9 August 2015 diff hist −1,112 BoJack Horseman →Celebrities: Wordiness, grammar and fancruft overdetail. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:3107:31, 9 August 2015 diff hist −381 BoJack Horseman →Minor characters: Some wordiness, and also more uncited, POV / OR speculation / interpretation. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:1907:19, 9 August 2015 diff hist +1 BoJack Horseman →Recurring characters: TV show name is italicized Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:1807:18, 9 August 2015 diff hist −878 BoJack Horseman →Recurring characters: Wordiness and much POV / original research speculation about Little Rascals, Milton Berle, Bill Cosby and more. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3706:37, 9 August 2015 diff hist −73 BoJack Horseman →Main characters: OR, wordy spots, misuse of a couple words, and some grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3006:30, 9 August 2015 diff hist −9 BoJack Horseman POV. It was advertised, it was in the press. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:2806:28, 9 August 2015 diff hist −12 BoJack Horseman →Premise: End-theme lyrics and other references within the show say 1990s. Made another sentence less wordy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 July 2015

• 14:1814:18, 18 July 2015 diff hist −11 John Glenn It was March 1964, not March 1965. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit