User contributions for Jrgsf

20 November 2015

• 22:2522:25, 20 November 2015 diff hist −5 m Daawat-e-Ishq Fixed grammar ~~~~

27 January 2015

• 17:4817:48, 27 January 2015 diff hist −6 m Anna Malikova Changed "Uzbekistani" to "Uzbek", per the usage noted on Uzbekistan page ~~~~

2 January 2015

• 23:5123:51, 2 January 2015 diff hist +577 Talk:Jeroen van Veen (pianist) Incorrect Photo Appears in Google Preview of this Page

11 December 2014

• 19:5619:56, 11 December 2014 diff hist −10 m Short Trip Home Changed "classically trained" to "classical violinist" for Bell. The latter inaccurately implies that his repertoire is mainly other than classical.

24 November 2014

• 07:4707:47, 24 November 2014 diff hist +7 Jackie Speier →Congressional aide: changed last word to "murder-suicide", per details of most available reports. (Many small children, adults tricked, etc.)~~~~

25 September 2014

• 20:4120:41, 25 September 2014 diff hist +37 User talk:Gerda Arendt →Reversion of my edit to Bach Cantata title "Da(r)zu ist erschienen der Sohn Gottes", BWV 40
• 20:2420:24, 25 September 2014 diff hist +438 User talk:Gerda Arendt →[https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Classical_music&curid=740526&diff=627019333&oldid=627019210]
• 20:2420:24, 25 September 2014 diff hist −436 User talk:Gerda Arendt →Reversion of my edit to Bach Cantata title "Da(r)zu ist erschienen der Sohn Gottes", BWV 40
• 20:2320:23, 25 September 2014 diff hist +437 User talk:Gerda Arendt →Reversion of my edit to Bach Cantata title "Da(r)zu ist erschienen der Sohn Gottes", BWV 40
• 19:5219:52, 25 September 2014 diff hist −11 Darzu ist erschienen der Sohn Gottes, BWV 40 Title Should be "Dazu...." Only wikipedia has this spelling. "Darzu" is meaningless, at least in Modern High German. While it's conceivable that it's a spelling that's changed over time, I can find no other source with this spelling. Most use "Dazu".
• 19:4919:49, 25 September 2014 diff hist +347 Talk:Darzu ist erschienen der Sohn Gottes, BWV 40/GA1 →Title Should be "Dazu....": New section (sorry if this is the wrong way to add a section. ~~~~

5 June 2014

• 21:0021:00, 5 June 2014 diff hist −10 m Crossover music →Classical to pop and vice-versa: axed use of 'seminal' on NPOV grounds ~~~~
• 20:5720:57, 5 June 2014 diff hist +35 m Crossover music →Classical to pop and vice-versa: added full names and links for 3 tenors

17 February 2014

• 00:1200:12, 17 February 2014 diff hist +40 Bill Russell →College career: Previously "Woolpert was unaffected by issues of skin color." This is surely controversial, as many would argue that such is impossible. Clarified by adding a few words. ~~~~

16 December 2013

• 19:3019:30, 16 December 2013 diff hist +1 m Big Pimpin' added line break ~~~~
• 19:2919:29, 16 December 2013 diff hist −67 Big Pimpin' 1) The original song is "Khosara Khosara" (spellings vary). 2) 2007 lawsuit was over use of this piece, not "Big Pimpin". 3) Also changed "copyright of" to "on", since referring to a work, not an owner.4) general cleanup. ~~~~

19 November 2013

• 22:4122:41, 19 November 2013 diff hist +367 Talk:Hakata Bay Why redirect from "Cat Heaven Island"

11 November 2013

• 21:0921:09, 11 November 2013 diff hist +43 The Yellow Dogs →November 2013 shooting: Added crucial "according to band manager Ali Salehezadeh", from linked source, for obvious credibility/libel issues. No report has mentioned any arrests, just this quote.~~~~

22 October 2013

• 18:2718:27, 22 October 2013 diff hist −40 m Jesús Gómez Alonso →Biography: Changed reference to more formal last name, per English standards~~~~

3 October 2013

• 23:1423:14, 3 October 2013 diff hist +2 m Nauset Regional High School →Notable Alumni: changed 2nd reference to last name, per formal convention ~~~~

5 August 2013

• 07:3307:33, 5 August 2013 diff hist −2 m CeCe McDonald →Media and public attention: Removed quotes around the term support committee, since this common expression implies no value judgement around the case, and is NPOV. ~~~~ Tag: Visual edit

6 May 2013

• 21:1321:13, 6 May 2013 diff hist −3 m Nikolaj Coster-Waldau →Personal life: Fixed minor grammatical problem~~~~

8 April 2013

• 18:5618:56, 8 April 2013 diff hist +158 Talk:Stradella bass system →Named for composer Alessandro Stradella?

3 April 2013

• 18:2518:25, 3 April 2013 diff hist +4 Symphony No. 6 (Bruckner) →Discography: Added link to Lizzio article (mostly taken from this citation)~~~~
• 18:2418:24, 3 April 2013 diff hist +12 Alberto Lizzio No edit summary
• 18:2218:22, 3 April 2013 diff hist −122 Alberto Lizzio Totally reworked article.~~~~

2 April 2013

• 22:3222:32, 2 April 2013 diff hist +511 Talk:Alberto Lizzio ~~~~

1 April 2013

• 23:4523:45, 1 April 2013 diff hist +36 Federico Agostini added purpose of article to first sentence~~~~
• 19:0219:02, 1 April 2013 diff hist +17 Ann Schein Carlyss Added what she does to first sentence.~~~~

29 March 2013

• 22:0622:06, 29 March 2013 diff hist +13 Andrew Penny clarified where Hull is.~~~~
• 22:0322:03, 29 March 2013 diff hist +12 Andrew Penny clarified and linked to composer Malcolm Arnold in 2nd sentence.~~~~

28 March 2013

• 23:3923:39, 28 March 2013 diff hist −14 m Lindsey Stirling Deleted "musician" from 1st sentence. All violinists are musicians, by definition, so this is redundant. ~~~~

26 March 2013

• 17:5117:51, 26 March 2013 diff hist +26 m Antony Pay changed opening sentence to include what he is famous for(!!)~~~~
• 17:4917:49, 26 March 2013 diff hist −10 m Sharon Kam changed opening sentence from "classically trained"-- in accordance with standard format for classical musicians.~~~~

21 March 2013

• 23:4123:41, 21 March 2013 diff hist −1 m Talk:Johann Ludwig Krebs →Baroque, not "Rococo": typos in my previous post
• 23:3823:38, 21 March 2013 diff hist +350 Talk:Johann Ludwig Krebs →Baroque, not "Rococo"
• 23:3623:36, 21 March 2013 diff hist +1 Johann Ludwig Krebs Changed "Rococo" to Baroque.~~~~

20 March 2013

• 21:4521:45, 20 March 2013 diff hist +7 m Luca Marenzio →Music: Added "almost" to " featuring a modulation through the entire circle of fifths", since this phrase starts in G and ends in A. The coming D (which would complete the circle) is not present.~~~~
• 21:0821:08, 20 March 2013 diff hist 0 m Eric Stern →Career: Changed "Eric" to "Stern", more formal style is idiomatic for an encyclopedia article. ~~~~

19 March 2013

• 17:5717:57, 19 March 2013 diff hist +4 m Alexander Rahbari Added "has" to 1st sentence. If he's still alive, there's still the possibility he could play with more orchestras. Thus: present perfect.~~~~
• 17:2017:20, 19 March 2013 diff hist −5 m Foday Musa Suso Changed "

14 March 2013

• 18:0418:04, 14 March 2013 diff hist +12 David Greilsammer →Biography: Modified initial sentence per standard entry (explaining who he is!)~~~~

13 March 2013

• 17:5917:59, 13 March 2013 diff hist −1 m Gary Karr →Foundations: changed colloquial "gifted" to more standard "given"

11 March 2013

• 17:3917:39, 11 March 2013 diff hist +156 Talk:The 12 Cellists of the Berlin Philharmonic No edit summary

8 March 2013

• 18:5718:57, 8 March 2013 diff hist +3 Alexis Weissenberg →Early life and career: Cleaned up weird punctuation leftover from previous edit. ~~~~
• 18:5618:56, 8 March 2013 diff hist −10 Alexis Weissenberg →Early life and career: After the guard told the young AW, 'good luck', removed "...in German". Obvious and irrelevant that this would be translated for an English version.~~~~

7 March 2013

• 21:4121:41, 7 March 2013 diff hist 0 Mstislav Rostropovich →Further career: Switched 1991 story from "plane ticket to Japan via Moscow", which seems to have been an unintentional error. ~~~~
• 19:5319:53, 7 March 2013 diff hist −46 Cuarteto Latinoamericano Deleted opening phrase "Celebrating its thirtieth anniversary season," since this will only apply (applied??) for one year. Better to include "...founded in [year]" at the end of this sentence. ~~~~
• 00:1500:15, 7 March 2013 diff hist +1 Talk:Arnold Schoenberg →Name spelling change is still standard German
• 00:1400:14, 7 March 2013 diff hist +432 Talk:Arnold Schoenberg →Monn arrangements -- were they really by Schoenberg?