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Talk:Audi S and RS models/GA1

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:18, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:18, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Prose Suggestions

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@Iazyges and Anton V.: Hello! What is the status of this review? Just checking since it looks like no progress has been made in over a month.--Dom497 (talk) 01:40, 2 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Links were corrected--Anton V. (talk) 03:16, 2 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Anton V.: What is the status on the missing citations? -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 04:19, 25 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Done--Anton V. (talk) 20:54, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Review

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Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • Audi S and RS models are a range of high performance versions of certain car models of the German automotive company AUDI AG. suggest:
    Audi S and RS models are a range of high performance versions of certain car models produced by the German automotive company AUDI AG.
  • Since 1994, the development of the Audi S and RS sports series was started directly from the Quattro GmbH (Audi Sport GmbH). suggest:
    Since 1994, the development of the Audi S and RS sports series was based directly from the Quattro GmbH (Audi Sport GmbH).
  • Audi "S" models should not be confused with the Audi "A, Q, TT" series, equipped with a package "S line" models, which feature leather trim, S-line badging, sports steering wheel and sports suspension, but they are not equipped with a high-power engine. suggest:
    Audi "S" models should not be confused with the Audi "A, Q, TT" series, equipped with a package "S line" models, which feature leather trim, S-line badging, sports steering wheel and sports suspension, but not a high-power engine
  • @Anton V.: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 22:52, 1 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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