DOC: updated release notes for pgproee 9.6.8.1

Author: Liudmila Mantrova

doc/src/sgml/release-proee-9.6.sgml

@@ -16,9 +16,8 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Excluded <application>pg_wait_sampling</application> module from
-          Windows build, because it doesn't work for windows and crashes
-          entire server.
+          Excluded the <application>pg_wait_sampling</application> module from
+          Windows builds to avoid server crashes.
         </para>
         <!-- 4cacfc3575f01dfef6c90bc00a5273171597e489 -->
       </listitem>
@@ -41,7 +40,7 @@
       in this distribution. This script updates metadata information to
       handle catalog number format change introduced in 
       <productname>Postgres Pro Enterprise</productname> 9.6.4.1, as well as
-      rename the <function>pgpro_build</function> function to <function>pgpro_source_id</function>. If you are upgrading your
+      renames the <function>pgpro_build</function> function to <function>pgpro_source_id</function>. If you are upgrading your
       <productname>Postgres Pro Enterprise</productname> installation from a binary package, the
       <literal>pgpro_upgrade</literal> script is run automatically, or you
       are prompted to run it manually.
@@ -66,7 +65,7 @@
     <para>To migrate from vanilla PostgreSQL 9.6.x or <productname>Postgres Pro</productname>,
     perform a dump/restore using <xref linkend="app-pg-dumpall">.
     </para>
-  </sect2>  
+  </sect2>
 </sect1>
 <sect1 id="release-proee-9-6-7-1">
 <title>&productname; 9.6.7.1</title>
@@ -76,10 +75,10 @@
   </formalpara>
   <sect2>
     <title>Overview</title>
-    <para>This release is based on <productname>Postgres Pro</productname> 9.6.7.1
+    <para>This release is based on <productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.7.1
       and <productname>Postgres Pro Enterprise</productname> 9.6.6.3. All improvements
-      inherited from <productname>Postgres Pro</productname> 9.6.7.1 are listed
-      in <link linkend="release-pro-9-6-7-1"><productname>Postgres Pro</productname> 9.6.7.1 Release Notes</link>.</para>
+      inherited from <productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.7.1 are listed
+      in <link linkend="release-pro-9-6-7-1"><productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.7.1 Release Notes</link>.</para>
     <para>Major enhancements over <productname>Postgres Pro Enterprise</productname>
       9.6.6.3 include:</para>
     <itemizedlist>
@@ -146,10 +145,10 @@
   </formalpara>
 <sect2>
     <title>Overview</title>
-    <para>This release is based on <productname>Postgres Pro</productname> 9.6.6.1
+    <para>This release is based on <productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.6.1
       and <productname>Postgres Pro Enterprise</productname> 9.6.6.2. All improvements
-      inherited from <productname>Postgres Pro</productname> 9.6.6.1 are listed
-      in <link linkend="release-pro-9-6-6-1"><productname>Postgres Pro</productname> 9.6.6.1 Release Notes</link>.</para>
+      inherited from <productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.6.1 are listed
+      in <link linkend="release-pro-9-6-6-1"><productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.6.1 Release Notes</link>.</para>
     <para>Major enhancements over <productname>Postgres Pro Enterprise</productname>
       9.6.6.2 include:</para>
     <itemizedlist>
@@ -275,10 +274,10 @@
   </formalpara>
 <sect2>
     <title>Overview</title>
-    <para>This release is based on <productname>Postgres Pro</productname> 9.6.6.1
+    <para>This release is based on <productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.6.1
       and <productname>Postgres Pro Enterprise</productname> 9.6.6.1. All improvements
-      inherited from <productname>Postgres Pro</productname> 9.6.6.1 are listed
-      in <link linkend="release-pro-9-6-6-1"><productname>Postgres Pro</productname> 9.6.6.1 Release Notes</link>.</para>
+      inherited from <productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.6.1 are listed
+      in <link linkend="release-pro-9-6-6-1"><productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.6.1 Release Notes</link>.</para>
     <para>Major enhancements over <productname>Postgres Pro Enterprise</productname>
       9.6.6.1 include:</para>
     <itemizedlist>
@@ -327,10 +326,10 @@
   </formalpara>
 <sect2>
     <title>Overview</title>
-    <para>This release is based on <productname>Postgres Pro</productname> 9.6.6.1
+    <para>This release is based on <productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.6.1
       and <productname>Postgres Pro Enterprise</productname> 9.6.5.2. All improvements
-      inherited from <productname>Postgres Pro</productname> 9.6.6.1 are listed
-      in <link linkend="release-pro-9-6-6-1"><productname>Postgres Pro</productname> 9.6.6.1 Release Notes</link>.</para>
+      inherited from <productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.6.1 are listed
+      in <link linkend="release-pro-9-6-6-1"><productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.6.1 Release Notes</link>.</para>
     <para>Major enhancements over <productname>Postgres Pro Enterprise</productname>
       9.6.5.2 include:</para>
     <itemizedlist>
@@ -925,9 +924,9 @@
   </formalpara>
   <sect2>
     <title>Overview</title>
-    <para>This release is based on <productname>Postgres Pro</productname>
+    <para>This release is based on <productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname>
       <link linkend="release-pro-9-6-1-2">9.6.1.2</link></para>
-    <para>Major enhancements over <productname>Postgres Pro</productname>
+    <para>Major enhancements over <productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname>
       9.6.1.2 include:</para>
     <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
@@ -989,11 +988,10 @@
       <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> 9.6.x, some catalog changes should be applied.</para>
 
     <para>If you use binary packages, and your database is in the default
-      location, this upgrade should be performed automatically. If you've
-      compiled <productname>Postgres Pro</productname> from source or create your database in
-      non-default location, running <literal>initdb</literal> manually, you
-      should run <literal>pgpro_upgrade</literal> script provided in this
-      distribution.
+      location, this upgrade should be performed automatically. If you have
+      created your database in non-default location, running
+      <literal>initdb</literal> manually, you should run
+      <literal>pgpro_upgrade</literal> script provided in this distribution.
     </para>
 
     <para>Before running script, you should stop postgres service. Script