DOC: style changes in release notes for PGPROEE10

Author: Liudmila Mantrova

doc/src/sgml/release-proee-10.sgml

@@ -14,51 +14,66 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          In the <application>multimaster</application> extension:
+          Improved the <application>multimaster</application> extension:
           <itemizedlist>
             <listitem>
               <para>Fixed GUC escaping rules.</para>
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             </listitem>
             <listitem>
-              <para>Fixed bug in mtm-proto. The positive value of <literal>MtmIsFilteredTxn</literal> flag
-                is only valid for prepare phase, but not for precommit.</para>
+              <para>Fixed a bug in replication protocol.</para>
               <!-- bae149f190c451d33cb9af1c65938d15c3b1e440 -->
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
-              <para>Fixed 2PC decoding.</para>
+              <para>Fixed two-phase commit (2PC) decoding.</para>
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             </listitem>
             <listitem>
               <para>
                 Corrected the behavior of the autonomous transactions when used in
-                conjunction with <application>multimaster</application> extension.
+                conjunction with the <application>multimaster</application> extension.
               </para>
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             </listitem>
           </itemizedlist>
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Fixed a problem that occurs when using INCLUDED INDEXES and data recovery from WAL.</para>
+        <para>Fixed a bug in replication for B-tree indexes with
+        the <command>INCLUDE</command> clause.</para>
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       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Unsafe <function>memcpy</function> calls replaced by <function>strcpy</function> in
+          Replaced unsafe <function>memcpy</function> calls by <function>strcpy</function> in
           the <application>pgpro_scheduler</application> extension.
         </para>
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       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Fixed xact callback handling in the <application>in_memory</application>
+          Fixed transaction callback handling in the <application>in_memory</application>
           extension.
         </para>
         <!-- cdaa94905cefcded9695ed4596e6fc9fe7cd6d21 -->
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect2>
+  <sect2>
+    <title>Migration to Version 10.2.1</title>
+
+    <para>If you are upgrading from a <productname>Postgres Pro Enterprise</productname> version
+      based on the same <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> major release,
+      it is enough to install the new version into your current installation directory.
+      </para>
+    <para>To migrate from <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>,
+      <productname>Postgres Pro</productname>, or
+      <productname>Postgres Pro Enterprise</productname> versions based on
+      any previous <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> major release, see the instructions
+      in <link linkend="release-proee-10-1-1">Postgres Pro 10.1.1 Release Notes</link>.
+    </para>
+
+  </sect2>
 </sect1>
 <sect1 id="release-proee-10-1-1">
 <title>&productname; 10.1.1</title>