DOC: reviewed RNs for PGPRO 9.6.8.2

Author: Liudmila Mantrova

doc/src/sgml/release-pro-9.6.sgml

@@ -21,20 +21,17 @@
           the <link linkend="app-pgprobackup"><application>pg_probackup</application></link>
           utility from version 2.0.11 to 2.0.16, which includes the following new features:</para>
         <itemizedlist>
-          <listitem>    
-            <para>Infinite loop while page validation has been fixed.</para>
-          </listitem>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Fixed segfault for the case of parallel ptrack connections.</para>
+            <para>Fixed an infinite loop that could happen during page validation.</para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Allowed to use delete-wal option wihtout delete-expired.</para>
+            <para>Fixed segfault for the case of parallel <literal>PTRACK</literal> connections.</para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Allowed to use pg_ptrack_get_block if it is available and page is invalid.</para>
+            <para>Allowed to use the <literal>delete-wal</literal> option without <literal>delete-expired</literal>.</para>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Fixed CVE-2018-1058. Schema name explicitly used on the every function call.</para>
+            <para>Fixed CVE-2018-1058. Schema name is now explicitly used on every function call.</para>
            </listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
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@@ -43,16 +40,16 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Reverted incorrect replacement of <function>pgpro_build</function>
-          with <function>pgpro_source_id</function> function.
+          You can now use <function>pgpro_build</function> function
+          to get the latest commit ID for this release.
         </para>
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             f26daaf0d3257d4bc8ed8b59d7e560d37a61117e
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       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Fixed problem with sort order of some russian letters in the
-          mchar module.
+        <para>Fixed an issue with sort ordering of some Russian letters in the
+          <filename>mchar</filename> module.
           Use <command>REINDEX DATABASE</command> command to update indexes.</para>
         <!-- e3b18fa73987222f1847ecc01cf792dc34bd37a5 -->
       </listitem>
@@ -119,19 +116,6 @@
       and <productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname> 9.6.7.1. All improvements
       inherited from <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> 9.6.8 are listed
       in <link linkend="release-9-6-8"><productname>PostgreSQL</productname> 9.6.8 Release Notes</link>.</para>
-    <para>Major enhancements over <productname>Postgres Pro Standard</productname>
-      9.6.7.1 include:</para>
-    <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>
-        <para>
-          The <function>pgpro_build</function> function has been renamed
-          to <function>pgpro_source_id</function>.
-        </para>
-         <!--
-             4328669d24cf070a12b585d1bcbfb0fc06c1b707
-          -->
-      </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
   </sect2>
   <sect2>
     <title>Migration to Version 9.6.8.1</title>