Fathom
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Cherie Priest, who stormed onto the scene with the stunning Southern Gothic trio that began with Four and Twenty Blackbirds, now brings the same masterful writing and unforgettable characterization to the realm of near-contemporary rural fantasy. The result, Fathom, is fast-paced, stunning, and quite unlike anything you've ever read.
"I can't fathom them, and neither can you."
The ageless water witch Arahab has been scheming for eons, gathering the means to awaken the great Leviathan. She aims to bring him and the old gods back to their former glory, caring little that their ascendance will also mean an end to the human race. However, awakening the Leviathan is no small feat. In fact, Arahab can't complete the ritual without human aid.
Arahab's first choice is José Gaspar, a notorious sea pirate from eighteenth-century Spain. But when the task proves too difficult for Gaspar, she must look elsewhere, biding her time until the 1930's, when the ideal candidate shows up: a slightly deranged teenager named Bernice.
Bernice is sophisticated, torn from New York and forced to spend a miserable summer on Anna Maria Island, a tiny rock off the coast of Florida. She's also been saddled with the companionship of her farm-raised cousin Nia. Eventually, Bernice's disenchantment gives way to rage, which in turn leads her to commit a deadly crime. When Nia won't cover for Bernice's actions, she turns on Nia, chasing her into the deadly coastal waves.
But the timing is right and the elementals have better ideas: the moment the girls go under, Bernice is commandeered for Arahab's task force, and Nia is turned into a strange and powerful new creature by a servant of the earth who doesn't want to surrender his green fields and muddy plains—not yet, at least. Add in a hapless fire inspector who's just trying to get his paperwork in order, a fire god whose neutrality has been called into question, and a bizarre religious cult, and rural Florida doesn't seem quite so sleepy anymore.
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Cherie Priest
Cherie Priest is a full-time novelist, perhaps most famous for the Clockwork Century series, starting with the highly-acclaimed and award-winning Boneshaker. She is also a member of the Wild Cards Consortium, George R. R. Martin’s superhero universe. She currently lives in Tennessee with her husband, and you can find out more at www.CheriePriest.com.
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- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5While lacking the detailed complexity of "American Gods" this book presents a world in which the supernatural lives startlingly close to ordinary life, and is far more potent than most people dream.
I especially enjoyed the characterizations in this book, especially that of Arahab. Other characters refer to her as "the sea witch" but she is clearly a primordial goddess on the order of Tiamat. It would have been easy to present her as a raging, simplistic nightmare, but Arahab has tender feelings for her 'children' -- which makes the story more interesting.
I enjoyed Priest's writing style, and will be keeping an eye open for her other books. - Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5A tale of elemental magic.
A young woman goes to visit a troubled cousin that she barely knows - and nearly immediately, both the women are thrown into the ancient plots and machinations of an ancient water witch and her earth-magic-wielding rival.
The fate of the planet may be at stake - but which of these beings that seek to use humans as pawns should we really be rooting for?
The book does an excellent job of portraying powerful, inhuman forces of nature personified. There's a nicely eerie, weird feel to it, and strange, lovely imagery.
However, I did feel it would have worked even better if the 'human' elements of the story had felt more grounded. There's a strange, floating timelessness to them, as well as some extreme events introduced very abruptly and never fully explained, that make the non-supernatural elements here feel almost as incomprehensibly alien as the magical ones. It's interesting, but I'm not sure it fully worked for me. - Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5This was my least favorite Cherie Priest book I've read, although I don't mean to suggest it's bad by any means. It's an interesting fantasy novel that I read in two sittings and enjoyed, but it's also a book filled with characters that lacked purpose. Some "elementals" take hold of humans to have them do their bidding, but even after all the supernatural intervention, the humans don't really achieve anything. When I read a fantasy novel, I usually go into it assuming that the good guys will save the day, but here it didn't seem like the good guys had to do anything to uphold the status quo, they just had to wait for the bad guys to fail. Lots. I'm also not sure how the end was a resolution to anything.I'd recommend Priest's Eden Moore trilogy or Boneshaker instead of this one.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5As you can see from my other reviews, Cherie Priest is firmly planted at the top of my Authors Y'all Should Be Reading Already list. If you're not much for steampunk or psychics, try Fathom, which is about
a battle between Elementals to save humanity and the humans who are "called into service" to help.
Arahab is a water witch, capable of manipulating oceans, lakes and even puddles. For millenia, she has plotted to awaken the Leviathan sleeping at the center of the earth. She's been searching for humans who could actually get down into the core to plant a 'call' totem and get things moving. So far, she has only found one human deemed capable of the task: Jose, a pirate who drowned himself to avoid capture. But he's tried once and failed, so Arahab's on the prowl for a deckhand.
Up on land, a farmgirl named Nia visits her spoiled cousin, Berenice, who is staying with her mom and stepfather on an island in the Gulf. When Berenice nearly drowns, she is taken by Arahab; Nia is swept up onto the shore and into the form of a statue. Workmen find her and leave her in the aunt's garden. The aunt flees town and slowly statue-Nia goes crazy trapped in her shell alone.
Enter Sam, a slightly bumbling insurance agent called by a possible buyer to inspect the grounds and a creature called Mossfeaster, who forms out of whatever earth-y matter is at hand (vines, dirt, rotting plants, other fun stuff) and is determined to stop Arahab. First, however, he has to save Nia before a group of local nutjobs have one too many midnight ceremonies around her and bring on the attention of something bad.
This is where I stop telling you stuff and you start reading instead.
Interested? Thought you might be.
Slightly deterred from diving or gardening? Sorta suspected that, too. - Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5This is well-written, it's just not to my taste.
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5This is an odd little book, in a mostly good way. Typical of Priest, the cosmology is heavy on the folkloric feel and the setting is pure South (albeit the Florida kind of South, which is not quite the same and was interesting.) None of the characters are entirely likeable but they're all intriguing, and while I would have liked a broader scope (or maybe a narrower one - Fathom isn't quite a pure character piece, nor is it really an epic adventure) the action works well enough for me.
Short version: not the best of Priest's generally excellent work, but a good read nonetheless. - Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5Typically, I love the atmosphere and world-building that Cherie Priest does. Not so much here, for me it fell quite a bit flatter than anything I've read so far (by her). Nia goes to meet her cousin Berenice. During this 1st visit, Nia sees her kill her stepfather and has to run when Berenice tries to kill her too. Both girls run into the water, Nia hoping to escape. But...the water-witch takes Berenice and Nia rejects the witch, yet is saved by another elemental who remakes her into a statue (for a time). Time goes by. Eventually both girls are set loose to do what their creators wanted them to do: destroy (Berenice)/save (Nia)the world. I thought it sounded pretty exciting when I read the back of the book, but honestly it comes out slow and a bit muddied at times - a far cry from previous Priest efforts. If you haven't read Priest before, don't start here. If you have and you just want to see what the book is like, be warned - I found it to be sorely lacking (vs. other works).
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Over the past months and probably years if I’m honest, I’ve read some good things about Cherie Priest’s books (Boneshaker and Four and Twenty Blackbirds come to mind) so when browsing the library for something new, I stumbled upon Priest’s Fathom and decided immediately it should come home with me. I liked this book well enough but I don’t know how to classify it --- it was surely fantasy, felt a little like a fairy-tale re-telling of a few mashed up stories, and then a story about sleeping gods. Arahab waits in the water for the right moment. Waiting for a foot to dip in or a body to be thrown overboard so she can find her next pet child to mold into the beast she needs to wake the Leviathan. She finds her next child in Beatrice a spoiled teenager, murderer, and genuinely wicked person. Her cousin Nia would have been a better capture for Arahab but it was Beatrice she caught. Nia, lured into the water as a means of escaping Beatrice on a murderous rampage, runs from Arahab and believes she has escaped until she realizes she’s been turned to stone. While the beast that made Nia waits for her to awaken, the gods begin to play their own games. Priest created a strange little world to drop Nia and Beatrice into. Toyed with by gods in the hope these two mortals will do their bidding, they are surprised by the strength the mere humans possess. Nia and Beatrice defy both gods that created them in ways the gods never imagined. The roles they played were interesting even if they were being used as a means to show how the gods have fallen. What I really wanted though was background. In some books I’m good with nothing --- drop me in and I’ll learn as I go. Other times, I want ropes. This time I wanted ropes. Not because the story was hard to follow, it wasn’t at all, but because I felt I was missing vital information that would have made me love it more. We know no more of the gods than Nia and Beatrice which is fine and understandable, but I wanted more and that I think is my hang-up. Would I recommend it? Yes, to someone who is OK with being dropped in to a story. If you are, then all good. Read it because it’s a good book. I was slightly disappointed with it though but still found it well done. I’ve been seeing a lot of talk (or maybe it’s only me looking for something specific) about Four and Twenty Blackbirds. When I get through the stack of towering books threatening to fall off my desk and dent my floor, I’ll be on a hunt for it.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5This novel was quite unlike anything I've read before. Cherie Priest quickly became one of my favorite authors with her Clockwork Century series. I breezed through Boneshaker, Clementine and Dreadnought, and loved them all. That said, this work by Priest is an entirely different beast from those novels. However, it is worth mentioning that it is still undeniably Priest. The styling is masterful, and her great skill at story-crafting makes the book an interesting and enjoyable read. Having always been a bit of a mythology geek, I very much liked the idea of the gods, goddesses, and the like. Crafting a story about these beings into one about Florida takes skill, and Priest manages it more than capably. One of my favorite things about this book is that, near the end, all of the many story threads and arcs come together to form a nice, neat close. As I reader, I enjoy the realizations of "oh, that's why the that happened the way it did!" I would recommend this novel to readers who enjoy fantasy, particularly if they enjoy urban fantasy, dark fantasy, and a heaping dose of mythology.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5One of my favorite authors. Bernice and Nia are cousins, both reluctantly on a humid island in 1920's Florida. Bernice is dark and malevolent, Priest fleshing out an unrepentently evil person (who reminds me of high school mean girls). Nia is drawn into Bernice's evil against her will and unknowingly into a battle of the earth's elementals. Water, Fire, Earth, and Wind. A motley crew, including Sam the insurance adjustor, Jose the 120 year old pirate, and Mossfeaster (my favorite) help Nia in her efforts to try and stop the Water Witch from awakening the Leviathin. Fast-paced, with lots of twists and turns.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5I read this book in one sitting, too engrossed to remember the tea I'd left steeping or that (for the first thirty minutes) I should probably sit down. I've read Four and Twenty Blackbirds, also by Cherie Priest, and it was good, but it was nowhere near as good as this.This book makes me want to geek out in so many ways. It's a story that clearly references myths and mythical characters, but itself follows many of the elements of myths; the cyclic nature, the importance of kin, the notion of family (both inclusion into and exile from), and duty, and rebirth, and transformation. At the same time, though, it's a rather grim tale of saving the world, and not the kind of saving the world where the hero is armed with magical swords and is foretold by prophecy.Mrs. Priest, I'll be buying more. You've impressed me.As an aside, someone on Amazon commented that this work is much like Tim Powers's books, which is so very much true; this is like an inverted version of Last Call.
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5Starts out dark like a Tanith Lee, but doesn't maintain the darkness. Still quite enjoyable, and come to a satisfying conclusion where lee's later books do not.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5This novel is more dark fantasy than the Gothic-type horror I've seen from Cherie Priest, but it was still pretty weird and fantastic and a wee bit creepy. Nia, who lives in the country and works on her grandmother's farm, goes to visit her sophisticated cousin Beatrice in Florida. Beatrice hates Florida (she usually lives in New York). And she hates her stepfather. A lot. And she's not too sure about Nia for that matter. So when a tragedy occurs, and Nia refuses to help cover it up, a chase ensues. As the result of that chase, Bernice is taken into the realm of Arahab the water witch, who wants to waken Leviathan and cover the world with water. And of course it falls to Nia to prevent this.Some quite unusual characters, especially Mossfeaster, who I really loved. And I love the way Priest writes. I have yet to be disappointed by one of her books.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5For an unknown purpose, a sort of earth elemental convinces a man to build a tower in a specific place. In pursuit of a way to awaken her father (Levithan), a kind of water goddes takes a drowning girl and changes her into something new. The girl's cousin is turned into a statue and set in a garden near the shore for reasons which we don't find out until much later.The book follows a number of different threads and it's not obvious until far into the story how they relate and who is good or bad.Actually, it's never entirely clear, but if I were a human living in that world, I know who I would want to win.It's rare to find a book where not having answers is as fascinating as having them would be. But in this book, in which very little has concrete explanations and most of the characters aren't human (even if they once were), the story is more important than the explanations, and I loved it.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Water witches are ambitious folk, always climbing that corporate witch ladder, not above dirty little tricks to get a rung up. Like putting two tons of water witch keister in the face of an earth witch reaching for the same rung, or repeatedly stomping on the knuckles of a fire elemental; only briefly satisfied when they’ve finally been promoted to President of Evil Doings. The Head Honcho of Hell on Earth, the big fish in an evil ocean.And once minted in their new corporate top-dog position, with their high-tech ergonomic faux leather chair, and eager minions who salivate way too much—that’s when they go for the big Evil, the one that shakes things up. The kind of Evil that ruins the world for the rest of us, the little people. And they cackle, maliciously, while doing it, like a scheming investment banker huddling over spreadsheets.Stepping into the Chief Evil Doer role in Cherie Priest’s excellent novel “Fathom” is Arahab, water witch and bane of humanity. See Arahab has a plan, an ambitious plan, one that humanity isn’t going to like very much. Since it means their complete and utter destruction. But she needs help pulling it off; someone to do the legwork for her. Someone who can actually walk across the land, and isn’t confined to bodies of water. Can’t get much evil accomplished if you’re stuck in a swimming pool. So she needs minions. Evil minions. Quicker than you can say winged monkeys, an opportunity arises. Two girls, cousins, running along the beach, crash into the surf. Into her world. One cousin Arahab will choose, one she’ll leave behind. To be unexpectedly chosen by another.Cherie Priest’s “Those Who Went Remain There Still” was an incredible surprise, a three-ton jack-in-the-box of a novel, and an introduction to a new and unique voice in the genre. A voice so impressive it immediately plunged me into a mini-Cherie Priest bender. A lost weekend of fantasy/horror debauchery spent splashing around in delicious southern-flavored monster stories, consuming “Fathom” as if it came packaged in dime bags. This is the good stuff.Priest’s novels are familiar, but unique. How? Imagine Greek mythology—the terrible monsters roaming the land; the larger-than-life gods, always bickering, always meddling, trying to get a leg up on their rival deity, using ignorant humans to accomplish their ends. Now beer-batter that Greek mythology up, coat it real good, maybe give it a dash of Gothic seasoning, and throw it in some sizzling grease. And fry it up—Kentucky style. That’s Deep South mythology. That’s “Fathom.” That’s Cherie Priest. She’s Neil Gaiman—if Neil Gaiman wrote about hillbillies, and the monsters that burp them up. “Fathom” feels short, almost a tease, to the point where the characters still have an air of mystery afterwards. They still have hidden layers to reveal, their exposure far from complete, a few clothing articles short of a Full Monty. It’s like a charming dinner party conversation, brief but utterly engaging, almost addictively so. A tantalizing slice of life of the most interesting person you can imagine. You desire to know more, to see more, and to go beyond the introductory chit-chat. To hear other stories. Please—you beg—more. The end bringing only one question: then what happens?Last Word:Cherie Priest has quickly become one of my favorite writers for her ability to deliver unique and engaging stories; stories that embody a Southern-flavored mythos, about country bumpkins and the things that bump them back. It’s one half Greek mythology, one half Southern Comfort; the resulting concoction percolated out of some backwater still. It’s both exciting, and scary. Like moonshine from Hell. Because one taste can change you forever. “Fathom” exemplifies this, proudly; chin high up in the air. Taste it. It’s worth it.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5I picked up this book because I really enjoyed Priest's Eden Moore series. That also meant I hadn't read anything about it -- including reviews or the inside cover summary. So, it was much to my surprise when I realized this book wasn't the horror story/ghost story that I had expected. Instead, it was something rather different and quite awesome. Priest tells us one story from multiple points of view. While in other books this might be tedious, it was not for Fathom. Instead, we learn to love the different characters, even when they do things we don't understand/agree with. I think this was what made the story so good. Instead of just focusing on a third person omniscient narrator or a single, first person point of view, we got variations on both of those. What Priest created was a stunning story set in a world not unlike our own, while at the same time, altogether different. She draws on unknown (including, though not necessarily central to the plot, ghosts) as main characters who are in a battle to save the human race. Priest does not shy away from heartache, violence and death, and that is one of the things that makes this book so good.
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Fathom - Cherie Priest
Lake Wales, Florida
It’s as if you’ve asked me to build an ark. Only this . . . this is even stranger. It’s not that I don’t believe you, and obviously it’s not the money."
Edward shielded his eyes against the gleaming, glaring afternoon sun. Below the hill where he stood, the scorched gray-green tops of live oaks and winged elms stretched as far as he could see in every direction. Here and there, the view was pocked with low, swampy places and trailing streams of tepid water thick with algae.
"It’s just this place. And I should tell you, he continued,
this is the highest point on the peninsula. Can you believe that? This little mound is as high as the landscape ever climbs away from the ocean."
He rubbed at the grass with the shiny black toe of his shoe, pushing past the topsoil and into the gritty red dirt just beneath it. But you say this isn’t clay? It looks like clay. Except . . .
He jabbed at a clod and it disintegrated like sand. Except it’s awfully dry. And that color, it’s much redder than clay.
The broken clod looked like an injury, there on the ground.
It isn’t clay,
his companion said. It’s iron.
Edward nodded. Iron,
he echoed. Through and through. A small mountain made of it, and God knows why. But this is the place, you say?
This is the place. Build it here, as tall as the earth will stand it. Send it into the sky. Make it a sanctuary.
Edward tugged at his collar, wiping at the sweat he found underneath it. He gazed across the landscape and then back down at his feet. He did not look over his shoulder. It was one thing to hear that voice made of gravel and mulch; it was another thing to see the speaker, both oddly shaped and terribly misshapen.
Edward found it easier to listen than to look. And you’ll be here? You’ll stay here, I mean?
I’ll stay, and I’ll watch. I’ll wait in your sanctuary.
I like the sound of that, yes. A sanctuary. I’ll buy out the land as far as we can see from this point, and we’ll reshape it. I know a man who does great work with landscaping.
Edward was warming to the idea, building momentum as he pushed it around in his head. We’ll make it into a proper garden. We’ll plant orchards. We’ll have birds, and butterflies, and how do you feel about swans? We should have at least a pair of them. There’s plenty of water to keep them happy, and we could import fish, too. Do you like fish?
For a long moment, there was no answer. It depends.
Edward was afraid that he’d asked an inappropriate question, but his escort did not offer a formal objection or complaint. Well, all of that—the fish, the swans—it’s all a ways off yet. This will take several years, if not longer.
A man with your resources should be able to speed things up considerably.
Money can accomplish only so much. You’re talking about tons upon tons of stone and metal. I’ll need to hire workers, arrange for the transport of materials, and contact my friend the landscaper—and that will only be the beginning. I’ll do my best, I assure you. But I’m only human,
he said. "Perhaps there’s something that you could . . ."
I’ll assist you any way I can. But my abilities are better suited to breaking things down than building them up.
But there are others like you, aren’t there? Is there someone else who can help?
Edward had always wanted to know, and here was a perfect window for asking.
His companion laughed, and it was a bitter, raspy sound. Yes and no. There are none who would answer any call of mine, if that’s what you want to know. The ones who remain despise me. I chose this exile because I was tired of their scorn. I was exhausted by their contempt, and I would rather bury myself in the Iron Mountain than endure it another day.
Edward Bok did not know how to respond. It had been several years since he’d first met his strange friend, and in that time he’d rarely heard anything so revealing or personal. He was acutely aware that he knew precious little about the creature that stood behind him.
But he was not a stupid man, and he’d inferred a thing or two. He’d gathered that the creature was alone, and that it was angry. He’d surmised that it was very old, and that it was suffering terribly as a result of some punishment. But the thing was selective about the questions it answered, and Edward had grown careful about what he asked.
Exile,
Edward repeated, wondering how best to ask more.
They won’t come after me here, if that’s what’s bothering you.
Edward shook his head. No, I’m not worried. I trust you.
Why is that?
I beg your pardon?
Edward wanted to turn around, but only shifted his head to peer over his shoulder.
Why would you trust me?
Do I have a choice?
Everyone has a choice. You have more at your fingertips than most people do.
Because of the money?
Edward frowned. I do my best to share the wealth. I build libraries and fund schools. I—
Don’t defend your expenditures to me. I’m not your god, and not your accountant. I don’t care where or how you spend your funds, so long as we agree in this one great venture.
We agree,
Edward said quickly. Of course we do. I gave you my word, didn’t I? I’ll build your tower, and I’ll cast your bells. I’ll make your sanctuary according to whatever directions you see fit to give me.
Don’t do it for me, you ridiculous man. Do it for yourself, and for your children and grandchildren. You have a grandchild now, yes?
I have two.
That’s twice the reason to build the tower, then. You’re building it for them, and for everyone else you love. You’re preparing to save the world, Bok. Don’t behave as if you’re doing me a favor.
Edward withdrew a handkerchief from his pocket and used it to swab his forehead. The air was dense with humidity, and the sun felt too close; it cooked the sweat on his face and seared pink burns into his skin. I didn’t intend it that way. I only wonder, sometimes, why you’re going to the trouble.
From behind him, there came the muffled crackling noise of rocks being tumbled in sand. And when he finally twisted on his heels to look, he saw no one and nothing there.
All right,
he told himself. I’ll get started.
He began by purchasing fifty acres, including the Iron Mountain itself. He declared his intention to create a wildlife preserve; he arranged for the pipe-work and water system installation, and imported nourishing topsoil by the ton. The iron-rich sand and dirt could hold only so much life, and it had to be supplemented. The landscaper, Frederick Olmsted, would not even visit the site until that much had been prepared.
In 1924, once the groundwork had been established, Olmsted came down from Massachusetts with an army of gardeners, stocked with native and imported flora of every stripe. He believed deeply in conservation, and he applauded Bok’s plans.
Mr. Olmsted also wanted to save the world.
The landscape architect plotted the grounds, set down trails, and laid out the gardens. He arranged the oaks, pines, and geometrically styled orange groves. He planted date and sabal palms, papyrus, creeping fig, and hollies. Wafting up through the clattering ruckus of construction and digging came the sweet, light scent of jasmine and camellias.
So when the land had been cleared, and the pipes had all been laid, and the gardens were under way, Bok turned his attention to the sanctuary’s centerpiece: the Singing Tower. His friend Milton Medary designed it.
Medary drew his inspiration from the best of art deco and Gothic overindulgence. He looked to the great European cathedrals and he liked what he saw there; he wondered how it might be shaped to better fit the heat, the sun, and the shifting, sandy earth of the peninsula.
He brought cream and lavender marble from Italy and pink coquina from St. Augustine by the cartload, by the truckload, by any kind of load that would carry it deep into central Florida, through heat that could bake or kill anything that breathed.
It wasn’t easy. It wasn’t quick.
Foot by foot, year by year, the ornate tower stretched itself up to the clouds.
While the tower grew, and while the gardens sprawled, and while tidy rows of orchards were groomed around the Iron Mountain, sixty great bells were cast in bronze. Shaped like cups and designed to work with a special clavier, the bells ranged in size from sixteen pounds to twelve tons.
The largest bell could have hidden a horse.
On February 1, 1929, Calvin Coolidge dedicated the property as Edward Bok’s gift for the visitation of the American people.
The ceremony was well attended and highly publicized, but only one spectator watched from the very top of the carillon.
It watched in silence, and in pain. The bells burned its skin, and the noise of the crowd made its head itch. But it watched, and it was pleased with the results.
Less than a year later, Edward Bok died. He was buried at the foot of the tower, directly in front of the big brass door, in accordance with his final request.
The Orchard and the Island
According to Marjorie’s letter, her daughter, Bernice, was not adjusting very well to the move. Marjorie was aware that Bernice and Nia had barely seen each other in recent years, but since they were cousins—and almost the same age—they might enjoy each other’s company for a few months.
And wouldn’t Nia like a break from working in the orchard?
She could come out to the island, where the new house was only a few yards from the beach. She could have her own room, and swim at her leisure. She and Bernice could even catch the ferry over to Tampa and see the Gasparilla parade if they liked. The city was not so far away.
Nia’s mother and grandmother balked at the idea, but Nia was tired of climbing ladders and picking oranges like a field hand. A sunny beach on a distant island sounded like a much better way to spend the summer than working for free on the family farm; and anyway, she was eighteen and she could go if she wanted to.
She didn’t remember much about her cousin. When she thought on Bernice’s name, all she could muster was a memory of someone small and fast with curly blond hair and a smile that could cut glass.
She knew that her cousin was beautiful, and that she’d been living in New York ever since Marjorie had remarried ten years earlier. She knew that her cousin was a little wild,
or so her grandmother said with a tight little grimace bunched at the side of her mouth.
Marjorie lets Neecy run too fast. She doesn’t keep that girl close enough,
Grandmother declared during the living room gossip session that began as soon as Marjorie’s letter had been read by everyone present. She’s never whooped the girl, not even once . . . and Bernice has deserved it plenty more than once. Lord help me, but it’s true. If she came up here instead of tempting Nia down south, I’d do it myself. Better late than never.
She’s too big for that now, Momma,
Nia’s mother said. She twisted her lips around the sewing pins she held there while she worked. She’s a couple years older than Nia, even.
She isn’t too big to beat. She’s just too far away.
Nia held the envelope hard in her fist. I want to go,
she said. Aunt Marjorie invited me, and I want to do it. It sounds like a nice house they’re building, right on the beach.
Grandmother grunted and said, I’m sure it’s real nice. Marjorie’s married money both times.
Nia’s mother pulled a pin out of her mouth and folded it into the skirt she was rehemming. She mumbled around the remaining pins, Nothing wrong with falling in love with a rich man.
No, but she could’ve picked one who wasn’t a crook.
What’s that mean?
Nia asked. She squinted down at the letter, which she was fairly certain contained no mention of her uncle Antonio being a crook.
He’s a Yankee—and an Italian, to boot,
her mother said with teasing cheer. Your grandmother thinks they’re all a bunch of crooks.
No,
she argued. Not all of them. But this one in particular, yes. He’s a crook, and a carpetbagger, too.
Nia’s hands were going sweaty around the bunched letter in its crushed envelope. I don’t care if he’s so crooked, he’s got to screw his socks on every morning. I want to go. And I’m going to.
Grandmother spoke around Nia, as if she weren’t there. Marjorie’s let that girl go native, too. She’s practically a Yankee herself now. She’ll be a terrible influence on yours, I’m telling you. If I were you, I wouldn’t let her go.
You can’t make me stay,
Nia insisted.
"I can’t really make her stay, her mother agreed, talking to Grandmother past Nia’s head,
if she wants to go. We could use the help, but I think we’ll be all right. It might be good for her—getting out of town, doing a little traveling. You used to like traveling, Momma."
I’d enjoy it now, if I didn’t have a grove to run. Last time I traveled anywhere was with your daddy, back when that one
—she cocked a thumb at Nia—"was just learning to read. But that’s neither here nor there. I still don’t like Marjorie’s tone in that letter."
What’s wrong with her tone?
Nia demanded.
It’s bribery—that’s what she’s doing,
Grandmother answered. She’s trying to bribe you with her money, and with the way she lives. She’s tempting you with how you won’t have to work, and you can swim in the ocean like a little heathen if you want, and you can stay in her nice big new house over there . . . like what you’ve got here at home isn’t just as good.
Nia’s mother shook her head. I don’t think she means any of it like that.
Maybe she don’t. But that’s how it reads to me. Go on down then, if that’s what you want, girl. We’ll get along without you, if you want to spend the season getting picked on and run ragged by that wild girl. She’s older than you, and she’s been around a lot more, and she’s not going to let you forget it. Bernice didn’t write that note, and I promise you she didn’t ask her mother to write it, either.
Grandmother’s words were still humming in Nia’s ears when she finally arrived on Anna Maria Island, a small strip of sand that jutted into the ocean, south of Tampa.
After a long trip by truck, by train, and by ferry, a servant escorted her to the brand-new house at the edge of the beach. After he left her, she made her way into the courtyard behind the house, where two women were shouting at each other.
Nia poked her head around the wall’s edge and flinched as a plate shattered just a foot or two away from it.
Hello?
She used the quiet word to announce her presence, and it almost didn’t work; but Marjorie spied her niece and threw up her hands as if someone were pointing a gun at her.
The brunette woman in the tailored white suit smiled spontaneously, and stiffly. There you are! Welcome, dear. I’m so glad you came. I assume Roger took your things to the cottage. . . . Did you have any trouble finding us?
Oh, no,
she said, and she resisted the urge to add that she’d found her way by following the racket. Nia tiptoed into the yard to give her aunt a hug. Roger’s directions were good. And Bernice, it’s real good to see you again, too,
she said to the sharply dressed, blondly curled beauty with a fistful of expensive porcelain.
Bernice,
Marjorie said through clenched teeth. "Nia is your guest. Say hello."
"My guest? I didn’t invite her."
Marjorie pried the bit of china from her daughter’s hand and set it back on the long covered table before Bernice could throw it. Yes, I know, but it’s been a long time since you’ve seen each other. Since . . . since your grandfather’s funeral, I think. Or no, we all went to Gasparilla that next year, didn’t we?
The last part came out thoughtful, as she tried to count back the years.
But then she turned to Bernice and her voice dropped. She breathed the next part in an exhausted whine, and underneath it, Nia could almost hear a long-buried accent that sounded like her mother’s. Just for now, please? Let it go. Take Nia over to the cottage and help her get settled in.
Bernice liked the begging well enough to release the remaining plates, but even Nia could see that her truce was a temporary arrangement. Fine,
she said. She relaxed and folded her arms across an expensive ivory suit jacket. "And hello, Nia. So Roger took your things to the cottage already? I’m ever so glad we won’t be forced to carry them in this dreadful heat."
Nia stepped aside and let Bernice take the lead. Yes, your father’s assistant took care of it. He met me at the ferry.
"My stepfather’s assistant." She casually lifted another glass and smashed it into the wall as she walked past it.
Aunt Marjorie,
Nia dragged her heels and called over her shoulder, will you be joining us?
No, dear. I’ll stay and finish setting up for the party. Mr. Coyne doesn’t think it’s going to rain tonight, so we can leave everything out in the open. I want it to look nice for tomorrow. And don’t go far, girls. Supper will be ready at eight.
They left her in her perfectly trimmed garden behind her new house, carefully picking up shards of glass and arranging the surviving cups and cutlery.
Nia wondered how they’d ever have enough settings left for the party; but she knew her aunt had plenty of money, so there was probably more dinnerware waiting wherever the broken plates had come from. It must not be a problem.
She let Bernice lead her out of the courtyard, and together they wandered among the jungle-thick trees back out to the dirt strip that passed for a road.
Nee-uh,
Bernice said her cousin’s name with an exaggerated snap. That’s a weird name. I don’t like it. I want to call you something else.
Then I guess you don’t expect me to answer.
Bernice reached into a pocket in her skirt and pulled out a silver cigarette case. "You’re my guest. I’ll call you whatever I want. Nia," she said again, not calling the name but turning it over in her mouth as if she were trying to tell how it tasted.
It’s short for Apollonia. Use that, if you’d rather,
Nia suggested. Then she said, Give me one of those, if you don’t mind.
Certainly.
Nia accepted a skinny white cigarette and let Bernice light it. They stopped together in a patch of shade and puffed together in silence until Bernice spoke again. "Now where exactly are you from?"
Nia checked a nearby tree for large insects and, seeing none, she leaned against it. Tallahassee.
Where’s that?
Up north, on the mainland. Up in the panhandle.
Is it like this island?
She thought about it. Yes and no. We’re in the middle of a forest there, and we’re a long way from the beach. But it’s hot, and the greenery’s the same.
But it’s a city, right?
A city? It’s barely a town.
Hmm.
She acted like she was going to say something else, but instead she twitched her head and swatted madly. Could you—something’s stuck in my hair!
Her arms flapped like a wet dog’s ears while Nia held her head steady enough to detangle a buzzing beetle. When it was free, Bernice fluffed and combed her short shiny hair with her fingers.
Nia played with the bug and tried not to act jealous. She’d never had the nerve to cut her own hair short; it was kept off her neck with a limp brown braid. Her mother would have a fit if she ever cut it; and besides, she didn’t have any curls to fluff anyway.
What is that thing? Will it sting me?
It’s just a june bug,
Nia said as it launched off her hand with a hum. They don’t sting anybody. And they’re not nasty like the palmetto bugs.
What are those?
"They’re roaches bigger than your thumb. And they fly."
Bernice shuddered and clutched herself. "I’ve seen big roaches before. We have them all over the place in the city. I just didn’t know they lived anywhere outside. Forget this. Let’s go back to the cottage. The less time I spend outdoors, the better. Then again— She scowled and changed her mind.
—Antonio’s in there. That son of a bitch."
You really don’t like him much, do you?
I haven’t got the words.
They crushed out their cigarettes in the sandy dirt and meandered along a path that alternately widened and tightened to accommodate the trees that no one had yet cut down.
That’s funny.
Nia dusted her hands off on her skirt. I thought I heard a bunch of good epithets back there at the courtyard. What was all that about, anyhow?
She grunted something between a cough and a chuckle. Epithet,
she said, like she hadn’t heard the rest. What’s that, a curse word or something?
Yeah. A curse word or something.
Then just say ‘curse word.’ I thought you came from a farm. You don’t talk like it.
Nia said, Sorry I’m not as dumb as you expected,
and she waited for Bernice to change the subject again. Their arrival at the cottage gave her plenty of opportunity.
This is it,
she announced. This is where we’ve been staying while the house was getting finished. And that’s Antonio. You don’t have to talk to him if you don’t want to.
Hello,
Nia said to the alleged crook, but she couldn’t muster a smile to go with it. He was hidden in the screened area that kept him shadowed and relatively cool, and all she could see was the shape of a man in a hat, holding a drink in his hand.
Bernice reached for one of the handrails that flanked the wooden steps. On second thought, let’s not go inside. We might as well get a nice view for the smell.
Antonio nodded passing acknowledgment at Nia and disregarded Bernice with skill born of long practice. Nia mumbled that it was nice to meet him, and he responded in kind, with a similar level of enthusiasm.
He leaned forward to set down his drink, and for a moment his face slipped into a patch of sun. Nia thought he was good-looking, with deep-set eyes, dark-slicked hair, and a strong nose. Or perhaps he only looked handsome because he was well-dressed.
Bernice turned away from the porch and wobbled on tottering high heels back down into the dirt-rut road. Nia quit staring at her uncle and followed her.
Let’s go out to the dock.
She peeked down at her watch. It’s almost seven thirty, but we’ll be back in time for supper. It’s not very far.
Nia had never seen such an expensive watch before, and certainly not on someone her own age. She thought it was pretty, but it looked weird on a half-deserted island.
Bernice reached for her cigarette case again and offered her cousin another before she even asked.
Nia fell into step beside her. Are you sure we’ll get back in time?
I’m sure. You ever been out here before?
No.
Well, I have, and I’m telling you it isn’t very far. Welcome to the middle of nowhere.
She took a particularly long drag on her cigarette, using the time to think or plot. When she finally spoke, her words were dry and a tiny bit menacing. There’s going to be a party tomorrow.
Nia tried not to wonder why the simple statement sounded like a threat. The courtyard looks nice,
she said. Your mother did a nice job of putting it together.
Bernice nodded. It’s all real nice,
she agreed with a scowl that guaranteed she didn’t mean it. "It’s their anniversary. Mother and Antonio have been married for ten years. Tomorrow will be their first day in their new house, and ten years together. Hoo-ray. At least someone’s happy to be here." She kicked off her shoes and climbed onto a rickety gray pier, dropping her feet into the water and twirling them around. The hem of her skirt trailed in, too, but if she noticed, she didn’t care.
Nia glanced up at the sky and observed, We’re on the wrong beach. If we wanted to watch the sun set, we should’ve gone to the other side of the island.
It doesn’t matter. We’ve got all summer, and then some.
Bernice stirred the water with her toes while Nia settled down onto the dock beside her and let her own feet dangle. You know what?
she said. You smoke like you’ve done it before, not like you’re trying to show me how smooth you are.
I’ve smoked before,
Nia admitted. The men who worked the farms smoked on their breaks, and if her mother wasn’t watching, sometimes she’d smoke with them just to taste it. If they were going to treat her like a hired hand, she figured she’d act like one.
The girls sat and smoked while the sun sank behind them.
Nia was about to mention the time again when she saw something strange in the water. At first she dismissed it as a trick of the moonlight, but it seemed to come closer, so she nudged Bernice. Who’s that?
she asked.
Where?
Bernice strained and stretched her neck.
There, did you see her? Someone was . . . swimming.
Bernice frowned. I don’t hear any splashing.
She’s gone now,
Nia said. I didn’t hear the splashing either, but I swear, I saw someone. It was a woman with long hair.
You’re crazy.
Bernice pulled her feet out of the water and shook them dry. There’s no one out there this time of night except those big damned fish. What are they called . . . dolphins.
Nia lifted her own feet out and felt around for her shoes. Dolphins aren’t fish,
she said.
Bernice was already walking away.
Nia glanced back at the water and saw the mystery woman again. This time, the woman didn’t duck away, but she stayed there, her naked torso rising up out of the water. She was much closer to the pier, only a few yards out in the bay, and Nia could see her more clearly. Her skin was dark, and her hair hung so long that it floated around in the water at her