Four-Letter Word
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“Tender, gripping, and deceptively haunting.” —Brendan Kiely, New York Times bestselling coauthor of All American Boys and The Last True Love Story
“Bold and edgy…will leave readers breathlessly turning pages.” —Gae Polisner, author of The Memory of Things and The Summer of Letting Go
Eight friends. One game. A dozen regrets. And a night that will ruin them all, in this high-stakes gripping story of manipulation and innocence lost, from the author of Bleed Like Me.
Chloe Sanders is ready for a change. She’s tired of watching her best friend Eve turn away from her for the more interesting and popular Holly Reed, and tired of living with her grandparents while her parents volunteer overseas. Chloe spends her days crushing on a guy named Mateo, being mostly ignored by Eve and Holly, and wishing the cornfields of Iowa didn’t feel so incredibly lonely.
Then a new girl transfers to her high school—Chloe Donnelly. This Chloe is bold and arty and instantly placed on a pedestal by Eve and Holly. Now suddenly everyone is referring to Chloe Sanders as “Other Chloe” and she figures the only thing to do is go with it.
Chloe Donnelly introduces all her friends to a dangerous game: a girls vs. guys challenge that only has one rule—obtain information by any means necessary. Chloe Donnelly’s got power over everyone—secrets she’s exploiting—and she uses it to keep them all playing. When the game turns nasty, soft-spoken Mateo chooses Other Chloe to help him expose everything Chloe Donnelly has done. But neither realize just how much the truth could cost them in the end.
Christa Desir
Christa Desir writes dark contemporary fiction for young adults. She lives with her husband, three small children, and overly enthusiastic dog outside of Chicago. She has volunteered as a rape victim activist for more than ten years, including providing direct service as an advocate in hospital ERs. She also works as an editor at Samhain Publishing. Visit her at ChristaDesir.com.
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- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/53.5 Stars
Four-Letter Word tells the alarming story of Chloe Sanders and her sort-of friends as they give in to the whim of the new girl, the seemingly larger than life Chloe Donnelly that gives narrator Chloe a new nickname, Other Chloe. New Chloe comes from Chicago, seems to know about everything, and uses a game to control the 7 friends. What seems to be a simple game becomes something much scarier when the truth is revealed, people will do anything they need to in order to protect their secrets. When the game turns nasty and the friends are turned against each other a plan is formed to shut Chloe Donnelly down, but the truth could cost them more than their secrets.
While I can't imagine myself ever giving in to a game like this, Christa Desir brings the game and the characters to life in Four-Letter Word. I ached for Other Chloe as she dealt with typical and non-typical teenage drama, I wouldn't know what to do in her shoes. Though the believability of the novel is a bit far-fetched, the way the friends treated each other was very accurate. I actually liked the dramatization of the game, this idea that people, especially teenagers, would do nearly anything to both keep secrets and to uncover them. Chloe is the sort of girl who hasn't figured it all out yet, unaware that her naivety is actually a good thing in many ways. She's both independent and codependent, her role created by her so-called friends and the lack of parental supervision. The secondary characters include her previous best friend Eve, Eve's present bestie Hollie, Other Chloe's crush, three other boys, and of course, New Chloe. Each is very well developed and had distinct voices and characteristics even when only being described by Other Chloe. The interactions Other Chloe has with her friends are impactful and very true to reality, at least from what I can remember of high school.
As for the game, it's twisted and not something I would've come up with or been willing to play at that age. It reveals a lot about the characters and about teenagers in general. The ending was lackluster for me and for me, I think a novel of this style should leave a lasting impression and Four-Letter Word just didn't for me. I think Christa Desir did a stunning job portraying the age group and the secrets they feel are most important. The things the teens were willing to do though, it's a bit harsh and a little sad too, as they came across as trying so hard to be adult at an age where they shouldn't have to worry about these things. The teens had a proclivity to make things sexual and that added an even more adult feel to the novel. Ultimately, I would have to categorize this as New Adult or even Adult.
I enjoyed the mystery and thriller aspect of Four-Letter Word, as well as the bits of coming-of-age tale that we got from Chloe. The characters and their secrets were interesting and allowed for a complex novel that kept me fairly engaged.
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Four-Letter Word - Christa Desir
1
Chloe Donnelly transferred to our high school the day Melissa McGrill miscarried a baby none of us knew about on the floor of the disgusting locker room showers. It wasn’t like I didn’t notice a new girl, of course. It was after spring break, and who starts in a new school after spring break? Particularly small, boring Grinnell High School, which had little to show for itself beyond a decent baseball team and a state-recognized antibullying poster slogan. But still, any interest I might’ve had in a new student was sidelined by the mental image of a blood-covered baby gasping its last breath on unclean, scuzzy tiles.
Most of the morning I couldn’t shake the picture in my head. I had to ask Mr. Meyers to repeat his question about As I Lay Dying twice before I finally could answer correctly. By the time I got to lunch, the miscarried baby in my mind had grown extra hands and a mouth that opened and closed like a hungry fish.
Did you hear about Melissa?
Eve asked as soon as she slid onto the bench across from me in the cafeteria. It was burrito day, and I couldn’t stand the wet-dog smell of the school’s cafeteria burritos. Eve always got two of them.
Yep,
I answered, and shoveled a handful of pretzel sticks into my mouth, trying not to breathe through my nose.
Eve squinted at me, then adjusted her headband so her zit-free forehead was on full display, all that flat-ironed light-brown hair framing her face. She waited a few seconds and then huffed, Is that all you have to say?
Things with Eve had been pretty crappy since spring break. Even before that, really. I hated seeing the side of her that was so impatient with me, but it’d be a lie to say that side didn’t come out more and more frequently every day. I’d been trying everything I could to be more what she wanted, but it never seemed to be enough.
Did you want me to say something else?
I tried, going for teasing, but maybe sounding snippy because the burrito smell was bad and my stomach already hurt thinking about that dead baby.
The first two years of high school Eve and I had been best friends, barely able to make it through class without texting each other. But that was before Holly. Holly with her beautiful face and her perfect dancer body, and her insistence that Eve ditch me over spring break.
A girl miscarried at the Catholic school last year,
Holly said, setting her tray of burritos down and squishing on the bench beside Eve. Always beside Eve, never sliding in next to me. But not during gym class. Gross. I can’t even imagine. . . .
Neither could I, was the thing. Or rather, I didn’t want to imagine it anymore. That was part of the reason why I didn’t have anything to say about it. Because everything my imagination was conjuring up was horrible, and I couldn’t reconcile that with what I knew about Melissa. Melissa, who helped me run a lemonade stand during new student orientation at nearby Grinnell College when we were in elementary school. Melissa, who was the person I’d told about my own mom’s miscarriage when I was thirteen years old and how for a while I didn’t think my family would survive it.
It’s not that big a deal,
a voice said next to me, and before I could look up, I was being shoved down the bench by a large canvas messenger bag and a girl whom I’d never spoken to before. Half of one of my butt cheeks was hanging off the side of the bench, but I was too shy to push back. Abortions are way bloodier than miscarriages. I’m Chloe, by the way. Chloe Donnelly.
I dropped my head and studied her through my curtain of hair—my bangs were taking way too long to grow out, but my forehead was a mess of acne so I didn’t mind so much. Plus, my hair was the perfect two-way mirror. No one could see in, but I could see out.
There was nothing interesting about the way Chloe Donnelly looked; she was plain, dark hair to her shoulders, and a basic face with slightly too much makeup, including bright-pink lip liner, which I thought made girls look trashy. I almost dismissed her altogether as not really worth getting to know in the two months we had left of our junior year. But then she pushed my hair from my face and tucked it behind my ear like we were friends, and studied me with her wide, light-blue eyes. They looked practically white, and I couldn’t decide if they were creepy or angelic, but they made her look less average.
I shifted my butt back onto the bench and shook my hair back to its curtain position. Chloe Donnelly’s clothes were dark and a bit New York arty for being in Grinnell, Iowa, but not exactly drastic or extreme enough to make her stand out. Except the longer I studied her, the more she did stand out. And not just her eyes. It was as if the atoms around her were all sucking in their stomachs to give her more space.
I just started here,
she said, pulling a recycled lunch sack from her messenger bag. The sack was faded green and had an Earth Day logo peeling off the side. She had rings on every finger of her left hand, and a single ring on the pointer finger of her right hand, a thick silver band that almost covered her first knuckle with a purple stone embedded in it.
Eve and Holly stared at her—no curtains of hair to hide their full-on gaping—before Eve finally said, I’m Eve, this is Holly, and her name is Chloe too.
She swatted the air toward me like I was a fly circling her wet-dog burrito, hoping to eat it and then barf it back up. Hurt must have registered on my face because Eve crossed her eyes and gave me a goofy smile like she used to when the two of us were being stupid. I laughed and Eve did too until Holly nudged her.
Chloe Donnelly looked at me, taking in my hockey shirt and dress-code-regulation-length jean skirt. Another Chloe, huh?
I wanted to say I was the first Chloe, but my tongue felt too thick in my mouth, so I resigned myself to nodding and hoping people wouldn’t start calling me Chloe S. like they did in elementary school when Chloe Brockenrick was in my class.
So you’ve had an abortion?
Eve leaned forward and asked, because this was what she would ask. Eve was extremely curious, always wondering aloud what stuff would be like. What do you think it’s like to have a pierced tongue? Do you think the principal still has sex with his wife? Would you ever let anyone tie you up? I was the opposite of curious. Thinking about those things scared me a little. Or maybe more than a little.
The thing with Eve, though, was that as curious as she was, she usually never did anything about it. Her curiosity was all just out-loud speculation. Freshman year, when everyone was doing all those challenges
on social media that involved shot glasses or cinnamon or marshmallows, Eve would endlessly tag people for them but never actually participate. She was the last one to ever try anything, and not only because of her hovery mom, who always seemed to be popping up at school events for one reason or another. Eve was as unadventurous as me, stuck in a tiny town in the middle of Iowa. It was one of the things that made us friends, being perpetually bored and not quite willing to change that.
Of course I’ve had an abortion,
Chloe Donnelly answered, lifting a bony shoulder as if she was used to these sorts of lunchtime conversations. I’m from Chicago.
Is Chicago an abortion hot spot?
I blurted out, going red as soon as the words dropped from my lips. That was the thing with me: I was a blurter. I had this humiliating habit of saying something inappropriate as soon as I was pushed out of my comfort zone.
Eve used to think it was hilarious—she’d even egg me on—but like everything else, she seemed embarrassed for me now. Chloe. Oh my God.
Chloe Donnelly turned to me. No, Other Chloe, Chicago isn’t an abortion hot spot. But we are firmly a blue state, which is more than I can say about the mercurial, often-red-state status of Iowa.
Mercurial? I blinked once, twice, then blurted, Chicago’s not a state.
Jeez, what was wrong with me?
Chlo-e,
Eve said again, holding out the final e like a whiny note of judgment and intolerance. I looked at her, hoping for the goofy eye-crossing face to spring up again, but that wasn’t happening.
Holly touched the bracelet on Eve’s wrist where she wore her half of their BEST FRIENDS charm. Don’t you mean . . . ‘Other Chloe’?
Eve touched Holly’s bracelet like it was some secret signal, then looked at Chloe Donnelly, totally ignoring the no-doubt-defeated expression on my face. "Yeah, that’s what I meant. Other Chloe."
So within ten minutes of wet-dog-burrito lunch, I got to watch the Wonder Twins activate their best-friend superpower, I became Other,
and Chloe Donnelly was launched onto a pedestal for Holly and Eve to fawn over. Another crap day in my life.
I’d completely lost my appetite, which no one seemed to notice, but Eve offered to share her second burrito with Chloe Donnelly. She passed, but then made us all exchange numbers with her. Though she did ask me first, and told me she thought my penguin phone case was adorably retro,
so at least there was that.
* * *
Did you hear about Melissa?
I said, as I sat next to Mateo in the back row of Spanish class, last and best period of the day. I always got there as early as possible because Señor Williams was a total hard-ass about during-class chatter and I didn’t want to squander even thirty seconds with Mateo. Melissa McGrill? In gym class?
Mateo raised his dark eyebrows so they made this upside-down V. And the tiny balloon of hope inside me that always surrounded talking to Mateo deflated. I hated his disappointed look. Hated it. I’m not one to follow gossip, Chloe,
he said in this way that wasn’t exactly judging, but more a statement of fact about his character. I shoved my left ring fingernail into my mouth to gnaw at it, trying to figure out if there was a way to regroup.
He wasn’t a gossiper. I knew this. And he wouldn’t see this as an opportunity to ask about me and my life; he’d see it as me spreading rumors. Which sucked. It was a stupid thing to bring up with him, and I should’ve planned out a better conversation topic. A different way for him to get to know me. To see me.
Mateo wasn’t like anyone else in our high school. He was quiet and thoughtful and mysterious in an almost shy way. He’d moved to Grinnell the summer before this school year started, and I’d spent six months doing everything I could to get him to like me. Though I wasn’t completely sure what I’d do if he ever really did. Somehow my fantasies of us always stopped with him smiling and holding my hand and asking me out—wanting to spend time with me for real.
He didn’t dislike me, I didn’t think, but he didn’t say a whole lot either. I didn’t know if it was because he was Mexican American in a really white high school and felt out of place, or if he was just not chatty. Lots of guys weren’t. At least they weren’t chatty with me.
Sorry,
I mumbled, tugging at a thread on the pocket of my skirt and trying to swallow down my embarrassment.
He nodded and flipped open his notebook. I peeked at him through my hair, zeroing in on his lip ring and wondering what it would feel like when I kissed him. If I kissed him. The thought of it ratcheted up a gas bubble of anxiety in my stomach, but it definitely seemed less like panic and more like excitement. Like the buzziness that comes from a maybe.
I used to be friends with her. Melissa, I mean,
I blurted. Again. I wasn’t trying to gossip. I have some experience with miscarriage.
Oh God. Did I just say that? I mean, not mine. But . . . anyway, I had no idea she was pregnant. I didn’t even know she was dating anyone.
Mateo didn’t say anything about my miscarriage experience, only shrugged. His shoulders were big—man shoulders—and I wondered if he lifted weights on his own or if it came from playing baseball or working. I’d heard he’d spent some of the summer helping his family on a farm where they lived, though I hadn’t gotten up the courage to ask him. Everything with Mateo felt a little like prying.
It was a long time ago . . . when we were friends, me and Melissa. Elementary school and most of junior high. I haven’t hung out with her in forever. I see her in church, though. And I did see her once in town with a guy in an army outfit, or navy, or whatever. How do you even tell? Maybe he’s the dad.
This seems like gossiping,
Mateo said, and my cheeks burned hot.
No. It’s not, though. I . . . I mean, I’m just worried, I guess.
The blood-baby in my imagination did another lap around my brain, and I slammed my eyes shut. What was I doing talking about this?
Other Chloe,
a voice called, but I didn’t need to open my eyes to look for who it was. Who’s your friend?
I blinked the spots out of my vision and turned to Chloe Donnelly. This is Mateo.
She stood before him and eyed him like she had a lot of experience sizing up guys. Not that she was necessarily interested in him so much as she could quickly read and catalog attributes. I wished I was good at that, but I always got hung up on one thing. The way a guy’s ears stuck out or how he had a patch of acne along his chin or how one tooth tipped in front of the others.
Mateo. Huh. So are you Latino?
she asked, as if her question was totally normal, not a million kinds of awkward and invasive and a little racist, particularly at GHS, where 92 percent of us were white kids. At least I’d never blurted-asked about his family’s background. Instead, I just waited, listening and memorizing everything he said, including him mentioning once that his mom grew up in Mexico City.
I shoved my fingernail into my mouth, gnawing the thumb this time, and let my gaze ping-pong between him and Chloe Donnelly. When Mateo—unsurprisingly—didn’t answer, Chloe Donnelly grinned wide as if she’d won something. Then she turned to me and said, Can you hang out this afternoon? I need to get some stuff from Walmart and don’t feel like going alone.
I dropped my thumb from my mouth and answered, Yeah. Definitely.
I probably agreed too quickly, but I hadn’t gotten any texts from Eve all day and the idea of going home alone right after school—again—seemed too depressing to even consider.
I used to play hockey. I started at the Grinnell Community Center when I was really young, playing every chance I got, including making my parents build a backyard skate rink every winter. But then two years ago, after my parents concocted their bucket-list plan of joining the Spirit Corps—a nonprofit organization for whole families to do humanitarian service abroad—we all moved to Burkina Faso. I lasted eight weeks before I begged and pleaded to move back home and live with my grandparents, Nan and Pops. It was a stressful few weeks after that, when my parents tried to figure out if they could get out of their Spirit Corps commitment—they couldn’t without some serious financial repercussions—and they tried to convince me to stay. When I went on a hunger strike, they agreed to send me back as long as I spent summers and winter breaks with them.
Nan and Pops lived in Grinnell too, so presumably it should’ve been a fairly smooth transition. They did open their house to me without complaining or making it seem like a hassle at all. And my grandparents were pretty okay, but they weren’t the type to cart me all over the state to play travel hockey, and GHS sadly wasn’t big enough for a hockey team. So I pretty much had no extracurricular activities.
Walmart is great. I love Walmart,
I said to Chloe Donnelly, which . . . sounded ridiculous.
You sure you don’t have other plans?
Chloe Donnelly asked, her voice a little soft and concerned. I don’t want to mess anything up for you.
I peeked at Mateo again, wondering what he thought of my overenthusiasm, and then said as normal as I could, No worries. I can rearrange things.
Great,
she said, slipping into the empty seat in front of Mateo as the bell rang. It’ll be so pink.
2
For the rest of class I tried to figure out what It’ll be so pink actually meant. Señor Williams snapped at me for mixing up the preterite and imperfect tenses. Mateo didn’t participate in class at all—again—but did wave at me when he took off after the bell. I pulled my phone out after class to see Eve still hadn’t texted, then I searched Google and Urban Dictionary, but neither had any compatible hits for how Chloe Donnelly used pink.
I considered asking her; if it was Eve, I would have and wouldn’t have cared—much—about looking dumb. But Chloe Donnelly wanted me to go to Walmart with her. Just the two of us. And I was determined not to screw things up by looking like I didn’t know anything.
I headed toward my locker, mostly ignoring the hallway speculation still swirling about Melissa McGrill’s miscarriage, and packed my bag up for the day. My bag was overly full and cut into my shoulder so I dropped it at my feet. I waffled for a few minutes, wondering if I was supposed to go find Chloe Donnelly or text her or what, but before I could decide, she walked down the hall toward me.
Ready to go?
she asked. She somehow looked fresher than she did five minutes ago in Spanish, and I wondered if she was one of those girls who applied a new layer of mascara after school. Then I felt small for not being one of those girls myself, particularly when I had a bunch of makeup in my too-heavy bag.
You know it’s just the Walmart,
I said, hitching my bag on my shoulder and pulling my skirt up a little.
Chloe Donnelly laughed. I know. Do you have a car?
I nodded. Nan’s crappy errands
car that was about a hundred years old and involved windows you had to manually roll down. But Nan let me drive it to school some days and it was more than most kids had, so I wasn’t above using that in my favor. Yeah, it’s in the parking lot.
Great. Let’s go.
She hooked her arm in mine like we were real friends, and I didn’t know if I should be uncomfortable with how fast she glommed on to me or excited that this new girl in black clothes with rings on six of her fingers wanted to hang out with me. I thought about my textless phone in my jean skirt’s back pocket and Holly’s and Eve’s BEST FRIENDS bracelets, and allowed myself a small grin at what Eve would think if she saw me.
* * *
The Walmart in Grinnell was noteworthy only because it was the sole superstore within a five-mile radius of Grinnell College. It was one of the bigger stores that also sold groceries, though my nan said buying Walmart groceries was like shooting all the local farmers’ puppies, so we only shopped there for the things we’d otherwise have to go to Marshalltown for. The entire store smelled like beef and starch. But it was usually busy—Grinnell College kids seemingly had no end to reasons why they needed to make a Walmart run.
What are we looking for?
I asked Chloe Donnelly as she pushed a cart with one squeaking wheel down the aisle. Her dark clothes looked less fancy and more garage sale-ish under the Walmart fluorescents. I kicked the annoying wheel three times and it stopped squeaking. Chloe Donnelly grinned, and I tried not to look super pleased with myself. She seemed so easy and confident. I got the feeling she could make friends with anyone, and if I was being completely honest, I couldn’t figure out why she’d choose me.
I’m mostly just looking for stuff to decorate my room.
When did you move in?
A few days ago. My mom got a position at the University of Iowa, and my dad’s law firm agreed to transfer him to the Des Moines office. Grinnell is sort of right in the middle; plus, my parents liked the college being here. Liberal politics are like meth to them, and the opportunity to relocate and make a real difference in a state that maybe could swing left again was too hard to pass up.
Whoa. This girl knew stuff. A million questions zipped through my brain, but I tucked them all away. If there was one thing I’d learned from Mateo, asking too-personal questions was the quickest way to shut down a conversation. So instead, I said, My parents are on their second year in the Spirit Corps, which is like a volunteer service nonprofit for families. They were assigned to Burkina Faso. In Africa. They’re pretty political too. I live with my grandparents right now.
Burkina Faso, huh? That’s cool. How come you didn’t go with them?
I scratched my cheek with my stubby nails, thinking about how much I was willing to tell this girl, whether it would make me look more real or more needy. I did, at first. But it was different from what I thought it’d be. My parents were really busy and I was lonely and . . . I don’t know. It wasn’t a great fit for me.
I hated admitting that. It made me feel like I couldn’t handle hard things. But the truth was, I couldn’t. Ten weeks in Burkina Faso nearly killed me. I was alone and scared and it felt like I’d been dropped into another world. The first night we were there, the villagers killed three chickens in celebration of our arrival. My parents said it was a huge deal since the people were so poor and any meat was a rare commodity. But I couldn’t eat it, because the celebration feast was about twenty feet from where they’d slaughtered the chickens. The blood and the flies and the smell, it was all too much. Plus, at the end of the meal, they gave my dad the talons and beak to eat, which I guess was supposed to be a huge honor. He ate it without grimacing, but I threw up, and since there was nowhere to do it in secret, the whole village saw me. My parents were furious with how rude I was about it all. It only went downhill from there. Every day of those ten weeks, people stared at me constantly. Even now, when I went to spend my school breaks with my parents, the villagers looked at me as if I didn’t have any business being there.
Chloe Donnelly nodded as if she’d react the same way I had, and my stomach bubbled a little at the idea that she might actually understand not wanting to give up my whole life for Burkina Faso. Eve had never really asked about my experience, though she was completely thrilled sophomore year when I told her I’d be returning to GHS after all. She’d gone on and on about how hard it had been without her bestie.
Of course, that had all been before Holly.
Do you miss them? Your parents?
Chloe Donnelly asked, her voice soft and sounding interested.
I missed them terribly, but I knew enough not to admit that. Especially not to someone like Chloe Donnelly, who seemed a bit above needing parents. Well, my grandparents are pretty low-key so it’s nice not having anyone hover. I webcam with my parents every week. And I spend holidays and the summers with them. They’ll be home for good this summer.
Chloe Donnelly nodded and grabbed a set of polka-dotted bedsheets for a twin-size bed before steering us toward the women’s accessories section of the store.
I let my hair fall and studied the way she dragged her ring-filled left hand over the scarves and purses, her nonbitten nails rubbing the fake-leather handbags. She held scarves up and wrapped them around her neck as if they were already hers. Her pale skin and dark hair made her have that winter-sickly coloring that all of us usually got by January, but her eyes were bright enough to make her almost pretty.
You should get this one,
she said, thrusting a blue-green silky scarf my way. It goes with your eyes, and it’ll help keep your hair off your face.
I refolded it carefully and said, It’s not really in my budget. My grandparents are on Social Security and the Spirit Corps only pays a stipend. I mean, we’re fine. My parents planned and saved for it and everything. My mom used to run an organic coffee shop in town and my dad worked for the Iowa Environmental Council, but still, we’re not rich. I just feel bad spending my allowance on stuff I don’t totally need when my parents are . . .
I waved vaguely.
What in the hell was I doing telling her all this stuff? She didn’t care about my mom’s coffee shop or my grandparents’ Social Security checks. A bubble of shame filled my stomach. I was such an embarrassment when I got nervous.
I get it,
she said with a nod. She glanced around quickly and stuffed the scarf into her messenger bag, then pushed the cart toward the home goods section all casual like.
What are you doing?
I whispered. You’re going to get caught.
She looked at me and shook her head. "I’m not. Don’t worry. I’ve done this before. And before you start stressing over the ethics of shoplifting, I would point out that this is Walmart. Walmart, which notoriously underpays its employees and which is currently the largest seller of firearms in the nation."
Is that true?
I asked.
Chloe Donnelly didn’t even blink. Yes. Definitely.
She sounded so certain, like this was something everyone should know. Trust me. Stealing that scarf is an act of subversiveness,
she said.
An act of subversiveness, I repeated in my head. I fisted my hands to keep from biting my nails, and then, taking a deep breath, I lifted my chin the tiniest bit and let myself be proud. I was being subversive. My parents would probably high-five me. Maybe.
Once she realized I was on board with shoplifting, she continued down the aisles. The farther into home goods we got, the less it smelled like beef and the more it smelled like starch and Styrofoam. The Walmarts in Chicago are so crappy. All picked-through stuff with no one bothering to put it back in place so you can barely find anything.
When I was little, I used to think that inanimate objects moved when no one was around, and so if I’d see one out of place, I figured it was trying to make its escape and I’d move it a little closer to the exit,
I said, then I looked down because maybe that was stupid. I mean, I didn’t do it anymore—much—but it probably sounded ridiculous.
Chloe Donnelly just laughed and swatted my arm. That is the best. What a smart little kid.
Then she plucked up a picture frame and moved it down the aisle, closer to the exit. I’m so glad you came with me today. It sucks being new.
You think? I mean, you seem to be doing fine.
She twisted the ring on her right hand, and I wished my nails weren’t so wrecked so I could wear rings too. "I guess. But this late in the year, everyone’s friendships are already set. How am I going to get in on that? I fought so hard with my parents when they said we were moving. I begged them to let me finish the