Punctuation 101: A Fiction Writer's Guide to Getting it Right
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THE FICTION WRITER'S GO-TO GUIDE FOR PUNCTUATION RULES
You don't need to be an expert in grammar and punctuation to write great novels, but you do need to learn the basics. This handy reference book includes all the need-to-know punctuation rules for fiction writers, and it's presented in a clear, user-friendly format with many examples for the visual learner—including some from popular novels.
Award-winning novelist Jill Williamson is a gifted teacher who helps writers develop their craft at conferences and online on the Go Teen Writers and Storyworld First blogs. Are you tired of paging through massive style manuals or scouring the internet for information on em dashes, colons, or which words to capitalize in a title? Punctuation 101 will save you time and energy, which you can spend writing your novel.
Buy Punctuation 101 to start saving time today.
Jill Williamson
Jill Williamson writes fantasy and science fiction for teens and adults. Jill grew up in Alaska, staying up and reading by the summer daylight that wouldn't go away. This led to a love of books and writing, and her debut novel, By Darkness Hid, won several awards and was named a Best Science Fiction, Fantasy, and Horror novel of 2009 by VOYA magazine. She loves giving writing workshops and blogs for teen writers at www.GoTeenWriters.com. She now lives in the Pacific Northwest with her husband, two children, and a whole lot of deer. Visit her online at www.jillwilliamson.com.
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Punctuation 101 - Jill Williamson
To Deborah, Lisa, and Tracie for all your help.
INTRODUCTION
One of the hardest things for beginning writers to learn is how to get the story they see in their head out onto the page—the same way they see it in their heads. This is a tricky art form called the craft of writing, and doing it well takes a lot of practice.
Punctuation marks are signals to readers that tell them when to pause or stop and when to change the inflection of a character’s voice. Learning to use punctuation correctly will greatly improve your writing craft because written words alone cannot create volume, tone, or emotion. Correct punctuation will also guide your readers through your story so they can understand what you want to say and the way you want them to experience what you say.
Punctuation has never been one of my favorite subjects, but since I wanted to become a published (and professional) author, I needed to learn to do it right.
And so do you.
One mistake in your submission to a literary agent or editor won’t likely get you rejected, but if your manuscript is filled with punctuation errors, an agent or editor won’t keep reading. They will reject you.
If you want to be treated like a professional, learn what you need to learn to bear that distinction.
From 2011 through 2013, I wrote on the Go Teen Writers blog a series of posts titled Punctuation 101. In each post, I tackled one punctuation topic and taught how it related to the specific craft of writing fiction. Some punctuation rules are different if you are writing screenplays or nonfiction articles for magazines or newspapers. This book won’t help you with those mediums. This book is for writers of fiction.
This book also won’t be 100 percent accurate to help you with a term paper, which most often reference MLA (Modern Language Association) style. Check with your teachers to see which style they want you to use for each assignment. Don’t assume! If it will help you get a better grade, make your teachers happy by doing it their way.
But if you are writing a novel that you hope to publish in the United States of America, you should find everything you need to know about punctuation (and likely more) in this book. If you’re looking to publish a novel in another country, I urge you to find the industry standard for that country.
If you’re serious about writing fiction, I also recommend picking up a copy of The Chicago Manual of Style. It’s the publishing industry’s standard reference guide for works of fiction published in the USA. You don’t have to buy the newest version, since the important rules have not changed in quite some time. Add the most recent used copy you can find to your wish list or take a peek at it the next time you visit your local library. It’s a great tool to have on your shelf. Until then, this little book should tide you over.
Let’s start punctuating, shall we?
Jill
PART ONE
What Every Fiction Writer Needs to Know
1
BREAKING THE RULES
This is a book of rules.
Boo, right?
Writing fiction should be fun and creative. Rules only bog down authors and stifle their creativity.
Not so.
The truth is, consistently using incorrect punctuation could keep you from being published by a traditional publishing house. And if you’re an indie author, misusing punctuation will likely earn you some negative book reviews online.
Part of respecting your dream of being a novelist is learning the rules of the English language (or whatever language you’re writing in), and that includes learning correct punctuation.
Once you learn the rules and understand them, you’re welcome to break them if you have good reason. I do. Here are some ways that I consistently break the rules.
I love sentence fragments. Because they’re real. They’re how people talk. But they’re incomplete sentences. Yet when I write fiction, I use sentence fragments all the time because I like to write in deep points of view that get inside characters’ heads.
I tend not to break punctuation rules very often, however, because punctuation is meant to be invisible. It’s a guide to the reader, and I want readers to be able to smoothly navigate my novels without stumbling.
I have broken punctuation rules, though. One example is from my Mission League novels in which I show texts between two characters. Grace always misspells words and uses twenty exclamation points when she texts, and I felt it was important to show the reader what that looks like and how much it puzzles my main character.
This is a book of rules. Learn these rules and use them, but if you have a good reason to break a rule, go for it. And if any of these terms confuse you or I neglect to define something, don’t just wonder, Google it. The internet is your friend when it comes to this subject.
There are a lot of punctuation marks out there. The fact that a type of punctuation exists is not reason enough for you to use it in your novel. Case in point, the section sign: §
Punctuation is meant to be an invisible guide for the reader to navigate a group of words on a page. If your punctuation gets too fancy or veers too far from the norm, that unfamiliar symbol or oddball usage is going to pull your reader out of the story as they ponder what on earth it’s supposed to mean.
Pulling your reader out of the story is a bad thing. Novelists want readers immersed in their stories, turning pages until the wee hours of the morning. We want to entertain.
So keep things simple, and don’t get fancy unless you have good reason. There is rarely a good reason to use an asterism, a section sign, or an interrobang in a novel.
Trust me.
2
SOME BASICS
You don’t need to know every grammar term to write a great novel, but if I’m going to teach you about punctuation, I’m going to have to use some textbook words like subjunctive and appositive. This chapter is a need-to-know glossary of sorts to help you understand a few terms up front.
Sentence Types
Throughout this book, I will occasionally refer to different types of sentences. There are four sentence types in the English language:
Declarative
Imperative
Interrogative
Exclamatory
A declarative sentence makes a statement or expresses an opinion. A declarative sentence almost always ends with a period.
An imperative sentence gives a request or makes a command. Imperative sentences usually end in a period but sometimes end in an exclamation point.
An interrogative sentence asks a question and almost always ends in a question mark.
And finally, an exclamatory sentence expresses great emotion and often ends in an exclamation point.
Anything that isn’t a complete sentence is a fragment.
What does set in Roman
mean?
The phrase set in Roman
simply means regular text that is not italicized, bolded, or anything out of the norm.
What’s the difference between