Peer Review - Draft 1
Peer Review - Draft 1
Peer Review - Draft 1
Directions: Creative writer read your narrative aloud to your group. Creative writer should ask
the questions below. As the audience/responders answer the questions, take notes about their
suggestions.
1. What is something you liked about my piece of writing? Why?
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2. What questions do you have? (Note: Take notes about questions, for you can add
information that will help a reader to not have any unanswered questions.)
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3. Is there something I did not consider or include that you would be interested in knowing
more about? What do you think that I should change or add?
What is something you wanted to know more about that I did not include?
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4. What could I add or change about the introduction to draw you in as a reader?
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5. What are your opinions and suggestions about the topic of my narrative?
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6. What specific words, things, or events stand out to you?
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7. Is there a point in my narrative that could benefit from more details, information, or that
could be changed? Is there anything that is unclear, too wordy, confusing, etc.? Do I include
enough details, imagery, and/or figurative language? If not, what suggestions do you have?
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8. What are your thoughts and suggestions about how my narrative is organized?
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9. What do you think about the ending and the message?
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Audience/Responder
Listen actively
Do not interrupt
Give your full attention:
Eye contract & Body language
Think about the strengths of the
work
Audience/Responder