Argumentative Essay Draft 2
Argumentative Essay Draft 2
Argumentative Essay Draft 2
Madelyne
Hamblett
Mrs.
Thompson
AP
Lang,
Block
1,
Skinny
B
24
March
2015
MLK
Argumentative
Essay
Imagine
that
everywhere
you
go,
you
are
seen
in
higher
status
than
those
in
your
community.
This
status
brings
respect
and
a
louder
voice
in
your
community.
Now,
you
are
asked
to
give
this
up;
many
people
would
not
want
to
give
up
this
status
or
the
perks
that
come
with
it.
People
would
not
understand
what
is
wrong
or
unjust
about
them
holding
this
status.
This
is
the
exact
conflict
Martin
Luther
King
Jr.
faced
when
he
was
fighting
for
civil
rights.
However,
instead
of
a
person,
or
a
few
people,
Martin
Luther
King
was
facing
an
entire
race
and
asking
them
to
give
up
their
status
for
a
just
cause.
While
MLK
did
succeed
in
his
cause
for
civil
rights,
it
was
not
through
the
voluntary
relinquishing
of
privileges
by
the
privileged.
I
believe
advancements
in
civil
rights
and
equality
throughout
history
have
only
been
made
through
the
effort
and
force
of
unprivileged
peoples.
Indeed, this does not mean that all people do not want equality and fairness;
in
fact,
most
individuals,
privileged
and
unprivileged,
want
equality.
The
problem
of
inequality
lies
in
large
groups
of
privileged
people
because
when
people
are
part
of
a
large
group,
they
feel
like
a
majority.
So,
the
majority
believes
the
injustices
occurring
are
for
the
best
of
the
majority,
and
they
are
supported
in
this
feeling
by
the
rest
of
the
group.
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One example of this is Nazi Germany. The Germans during the time of the
Nazi
Regime
noticed
the
injustices
being
done
to
Jews
and
other
groups
of
people;
however,
the
country
was
doing
the
best
it
had
since
WW1,
and
the
people
who
were
in
the
governments
favor
were
enjoying
the
privileges.
So,
the
German
people
allowed
the
injustices
done
to
the
Jews
in
order
to
keep
the
benefits
of
a
good
economy
and
government
for
the
rest
of
the
German
people.
The
German
people
only
gave
up
their
privileges
when
forced
to
after
losing
the
war.
In the end, I am not saying people are not capable of voluntarily relinquishing
their
privileges
to
provide
equality
for
the
unprivileged.
However,
history
does
not
seem
to
support
the
idea
that
privileged
people
will
do
this
to
advance
civil
rights.
It
seems
the
only
realistic
way
to
advance
civil
rights,
as
MLK
and
his
followers
did
is
to
use
some
type
of
force.