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The candidates provide detailed resumes highlighting their educational backgrounds and qualifications, leadership experiences, extracurricular activities, and career experiences.

Both candidates attended prestigious universities and achieved high GPAs. They list coursework, awards, and honors to emphasize their academic qualifications.

The candidates held several leadership positions in student organizations and volunteer work to demonstrate their leadership abilities. They also participated in various extracurricular activities.

Ellen Yale

Campus Address: PO Box 200000, New Haven, CT 87000; Cell Phone: 203-222-3333; E-mail: ellen.yale@yale.edu

EDUCATION
Yale University , New Haven, CT Bachelor of Arts in American Studies, Expected May 20XX, Cumulative GPA 3.4; Major GPA 3.75 Coursework Includes: Directed Studies One of 120 students selected to participate in competitive freshman program focusing on intensive study of major works of the Western Canon; Computers and Society; Environmental Politics and Law; American Consumer Culture in the Twentieth Century Mesa High School, Mesa, AZ Diploma , June 20XX, Cumulative GPA 4.0 Awards/Honors: Harvard Book Award; Senior English Award; National Merit Finalist; AP Scholar with Distinction; City of Mesa Academic Scholar Award

EXPERIENCE
New Generation Energy, Development and Outreach Intern, Boston, MA, Summer 20XX Identified and contacted potential donors for environmental non-profit promoting the use and benefits of renewable energy. Developed and maintained a schedule of grant reporting deadlines and requirements. Updated and oversaw database of donors and granting agencies, including all contacts and outcomes. Integrated Computer Solutions, Inc., Administrative Assistant, Gilbert, AZ, Summer 20XX Maintained customer and inventory files for information technology consulting firm. Answered phones and assisted with general administrative duties. Shadowed consultants during client meetings and on-site visits.

LEADERSHIP
Yale University Freshman Class Council , Representative, Fall 20XX-Spring 20XX E Elected by peers as one of 24 representatives of the freshman class. Served as liaison between the administration and s special events committee. Assisted in planning and promoting class-wide recreational events; oversaw budget for c class barbeque and class Olympics. National Honor Society Mesa High School Chapter, President, Fall 20XX-Spring 20XX N C Coordinated monthly community service events for 150-member organization. Formalized a mentoring program for n new members and future society leaders. Ran weekly meetings and coordinated monthly guest speakers to discuss t topics including civic engagement, service learning and leadership. Mesa High School Varsity Soccer Team, Captain , Fall 20XX-Spring 20XX M L daily warm-up and cool-down sessions for 20-member team. Represented team at games and coordinated social Led a activities to promote team bonding. Awards: State Champions, 20XX; Most Valuable Player, 20XX; 2 Varsity Letters

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VOLUNTEER WORK
Salvation Army , Soup Kitchen Volunteer, 20XX-20XX America Reads, Reading Tutor, 20XX-20XX; Volunteer Instructor, 20XX-20XX AIDS Walk Phoenix , Volunteer Coordinator, 20XX-20XX

SKILLS
Languag es: Proficient Spanish, Intermediate French Computer: Microsoft Office Suite, Photoshop, In Design, Lexis Nexis Interests: Running, Waterskiing, 19 th Century Novels, Environmental Activism, Horseback Riding

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ETHAN YALE
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

P.O. Box 232323, New Haven, CT 06520 565 South Main Street, Media, PA 19063 EDUCATION

ethan.yale@yale.edu 610-777-7777

Yale University, New Haven, CT Bachelor of Arts, projected major: Economics. Expected graduation: May 20XX. Media High School, Media, PA Salutatorian, Diploma 20XX. SAT: 780 Math, 750 Verbal.

College Experience ACTIVITIES

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Yale Entrepreneurial Society, Fall 20XX - Present Co-wrote mid-year financial report for executive board as Finance Department member Co-planned annual educational event in New York City attended by over 100 people Yale College Intramural Sports, Fall 20XX - Present Compete in intramural soccer, basketball and ultimate Frisbee games

High School Experience AWARDS National Merit Scholarship Scored in 99th percentile on the PSAT, 1 of 2500 students nationwide to receive scholarship Principals Leadership Award Awarded to senior with best leadership skills, reflected through ability, style, and success Yale Book Award Awarded to junior who best reflects excellence in academics, extracurriculars, and service Department Award, French Awarded to senior who best reflects excellence in a specific subject Optimist Oratorical Contest, State Competition Competed in state speaking contest after winning local and regional competitions Hi-Q Team, Captain, Fall 20XX Spring 20XX Developed competition strategy, led daily practices, managed budget and schedule for the oldest continuous academic quiz competition in the United States Award: Won second place in the Hi-Q championship Award: First student selected from high school to join the All-Delco Hi-Q Team Envirothon Team, Captain, Fall 20XX Spring 20XX Led daily practices, motivated team members, managed oral presentations for the largest academic science competition in the United States Award: Team won first place in North America after winning county and state competitions Award: Personally won first place in North America in individual category Physics Olympics Team, Co-Captain, Fall 20XX Spring 20XX Led daily practices, motivated team members, managed schedule, coordinated logistics Award: Won first place in Physics Olympics competition to continue longest national record National Honor Society, President, Spring 20XX Spring 20XX Coordinated service opportunities and events Led annual induction ceremony and managed monthly meetings Award: Received the NHS Service Award for school and community service Theatre, Secretary/Treasurer, Spring 20XX Spring 20XX Co-directed fall production for three years: wrote scripts, led daily rehearsals Award: Awarded 4-Star Thespian in International Thespian Society for dedication to theatre World Language Honors Club (French), Co-President, Fall 20XX Spring 20XX Coordinated service opportunities and events Led annual awards and induction ceremony and managed monthly meetings Philadelphia Inquirer, Summer 20XX Spring 20XX Wrote bi-weekly article for newspapers Neighbors section as a student contributor The Lions Roar, Penncrest High School Newspaper, Fall 20XX Spring 20XX Wrote one feature article for each quarterly publication as a staff writer Assistant Principal Office Aid, Spring 20XX Answered phones and assisted with general administrative tasks

LEADERSHIP

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ACTIVITIES

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ELLIS YALE
EDUCATION

P. O. Box 200000 New Haven, CT 06520 (203) 203-2222 ellis.yale@yale.edu

Yale University, New Haven, CT Bachelor of Arts in Psychology, expected May 20XX Current GPA: 3.9/4.0 Awards : Psi Chi National Honor Society in Psychology; Richter Fellowship for Summer Research Public Speaking Prizes: Teneyck Prize, runner-up, 20XX; Buck-Jackson Prize, runner-up, 20XX Relevant Coursework: Statistics; Multivariable Calculus; Game Theory; International Trade Theory and Policy; Psychology and the Law; International Monetary Theory and Policy Institute of Public Administration, Dublin Ireland Irish Studies Program, GPA: 4.0/4.0, Summer 20XX Lived with host family and completed coursework in Irish political history and culture

EXPERIENCE Jan. 20XX present

Student Researcher, Alzheimers Disease Research Unit, Yale University Investigate whether certain key genes can predict differential courses of decline in Alzheimers Disease. Build and analyze spreadsheet of cognitive and behavioral data using linear and logistic regression models. Conduct brain image analysis for PET and SPECT studies at the Veterans Affairs Hospital neuroimaging lab. Interpret results and co-author manuscripts for publication, collaborating closely with clinic directors. Chief Masters Aid, Pierson College Masters Office, Yale University Act as liaison between the Pierson College Masters Office and students, parents and faculty fellows. Make decisions about policy, purchasing and hiring, to improve the service the Office provides to the community President (20XX-present), Representative (20XX 20XX), Pierson College Council, Yale University Set council agenda and lead meetings with representatives with the goal of enhancing the quality of life in the residential college. Oversee all council activities, namely hosting study breaks and social events, purchasing new equipment for the college, disbursing an annual budget of approximately $14,000, and publishing a newsletter for students. Recruiter (20XX-present), Participant (20XX-20XX), Yale University-New Asia College Exchange Participate in a cultural exchange program with students from the Chinese University of Hong Kong. Organize talks, events and activities for Chinese peers as part of a team of Yale student representatives. Travel to Hong Kong to speak at a symposium on the subject of public service in America. Promote the program, host information sessions and interview prospective participants.

Dec. 20XX present

LEADERSHIP Jan. 20XX present

Sept. 20XX present

Sept. 20XX-April 20XX Financial Coordinator, Youth Together Mentorship Program, Yale University Led fundraising drive that yielded nearly $10,000 in grants and private donations to support teen mentoring program. Managed finances of program that encompasses approximately 140 members and has an annual budget of $5,000. Jan. 20XX-May 20XX Member, Yale College Course of Study Committee, Yale University Worked with faculty to approve all new undergraduate courses and uphold academic standards in existing programs.

Oct. 20XX May 20XX Crossword Writer, Yale Herald Newspaper, Yale University Composed only student-written weekly crossword at Yale. Published on-line versions of the puzzles. SKILLS Language: Proficient Spanish Computer: SPSS, Adobe PhotoShop, Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint

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Elian Yale
1000 Chapel Street, Apt. 1 New Haven, CT 06510 (777)244-2222 elian.yale@yale.edu 4242 East Elm Parkway Littleton, CO 80000 (444)444-7711 elian.yale@gmail.com

Education
Yale University, New Haven, CT Bachelor of Arts, Double Major Political Science and Philosophy Expected Graduation May 20XX. Undergraduate Member, Brady-Johnson Studies in Grand Strategy Graduate Seminar. Cherry Creek High School, Littleton, CO High School Diploma, Graduated w/ Honors, May 20XX. Activities/Awards: National AP Scholar, Two time AP Scholar with Distinction, National Merit Scholarship Program Commended Student, Two time Varsity Basketball Captain, Senior Class Senator, Peer Counselor.

Experience
The United States Treasury Department, Washington, DC, Summer 20XX Intern, Domestic Finance Division, Office of Federal Finance Authored numerous detailed reports on internal matters including the composition of internationally-owned Treasury securities and the historical interrelationship between receipts, outlays, GDP and total outstanding marketable debt. Closely followed daily market trends as a foundational member of the newly reinstituted Treasury Markets Room and formulated morning, afternoon and evening Market Updates for widespread internal distribution. Compiled and delivered briefing materials on daily market activities to Secretary Paulson, Under Secretary Steele and other senior Treasury officials while receiving and responding to market inquiries throughout the trading day. The White House, Washington, DC, Summer 20XX Intern, Office of Presidential Personnel, National Security Portfolio Worked on behalf of the President to search for, research and screen candidates for Presidential appointed positions at the Departments of State, Homeland Security, Defense, Justice, Veterans Affairs, and in the CIA and FBI. Assisted the Special Assistant to the President for Personnel in a variety of tasks including gathering background information on potential candidates, coordinating interviews and guiding candidates through the selection process. Developed briefing material and talking points used by the President to pick candidates for Presidential appointments. The Federalist Society, Washington, DC, Summer 20XX Research Associate Completed multiple writing projects on topics ranging from states rules of evidence to the Supreme Court. Performed detailed legal research on numerous additional Federalist Society initiatives. Obama/Biden 2008, Littleton, CO, Summer 20XX Full-time Intern / Assistant to the Executive State Director for Colorado and Louisiana Acted as campaign Press Coordinator for both state wide Parties for the President and the Colorado Rally for Freedom. Researched new Help America Vote Act guidelines and helped write recommendation to cut down on voter fraud.

Activities
Co-President and Treasurer, Senior Class Council, Yale University, Spring 20XX-Present Led a council of 24 members while allocating nearly $200,000 for Senior Class activities and events. Organized and directed Yales Senior Week and the Class of 20XX Commencement Ceremony that follows directly after. Director, Yale Alumni Fund Board of Directors, Yale University, Spring 20XX-Present Coordinated fundraising efforts as the class of 20XXs appointed representative to the Yale Alumni Fund Board of Directors. Recruited and managed a team of 30 college co-chairs solicit contributions for the yearlong Class Gift campaign. President, Calhoun College Council, Yale University, Spring 20XX-Spring 20XX Planned activities and events within Calhoun College while directing a team of 20 representatives on issues pertinent to undergraduates in Calhoun. Representative, Yale College Council, Yale University, Fall 20XX-Spring 20XX Developed Campus Cash program, which will allow undergraduates to use declining balance accounts on their student IDs in New Haven at dining and retail opportunities. President, Freshman Class Council, Yale University, Fall 20XX-Spring 20XX Worked with top Yale University officials on issues and concerns related to the Freshman Class.

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Elaine Yale
5555 Elm Street, Vancouver, B.C., V6M 4C8, Canada, (000) 222-4444 Yale University, P.O. Box 222222, New Haven, CT, 06520, (203) 777-8888, elaine.yale@yale.edu

Education Yale University, New Haven, CT Bachelor of Arts in English, graduation expected May 20XX, GPA 3.74 Writing Concentration (selective English track with extra writing courses and final project) Coursework includes Literature of Fact (journalism), Non-Fiction Writing: Voice & Structure (creative non-fiction reportage), and Daily Themes (daily creative assignment) Yale-in-London, London, UK (Summer 20XX) Participated in study-abroad program with two full-time Yale courses in art history and literature. Visited London-area theaters and museums and Oxford and Cambridge universities. Traveled during free weekdays and weekends around London, the UK, and Europe. Crofton House School, Vancouver, BC (June 20XX) First Class Honours with Distinction, GPA 4.0 Journalism Experience Yale Herald weekly newspaper, Staff, Yale University, New Haven, CT (20XX-Present) Editor-in-Chief (Dec. 20XX-Present): approve and edit all content, arrange printing and distribution, oversee event planning, delegate responsibilities to 10-person team, liaise with publisher and Yale administration, run weekly production, plan special issues, appoint next editorial board. Managing Editor (Sept.-Dec. 20XX): monitored and advised section editors, managed cover stories, edited pages for content and layout, helped run weekly production, wrote articles. Editor-in-Chief, 20XX Freshman Issue (Mar.-Aug. 20XX): led production, appointed staff, edited and approved all content, liaised with publisher and Yale administration. Section Editor (Sept.20XX.-May. 20XX): assigned, wrote, and edited articles, laid out section. Copy Editor and Staff Writer (Sept. 20XX-May. 20XX): proofread, wrote various articles weekly. Yale Y a Record magazine, Staff Writer, Yale University, New Haven, CT (20XX-present) Write 1-2 articles and contribute to group pieces monthly.

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Reputations R e Corporation, Intern, Vancouver, BC (Summer 20XX) Attended press conferences, helped prepare and run conference media room, accredited and liaised with journalists and media outlets from around the world. Compiled press coverage, organized and edited databases. Wrote and edited documents such as award applications, fresh sheets, brochures, letters, press releases, proposals, final reports, presentations, and business announcements. Media Writing Week, University of British Columbia, Vancouver, BC (Summer 20XX) Learned tips on pitching and writing freelance humour, lifestyle, and travel articles. Crofton Chronicle , Staff Writer and Copy-Editor, Crofton House School, Vancouver, BC (20XX-20XX) Wrote monthly student life column and proofread articles Additional Experience Spry Hawkins Micner, Legal Assistant, Richmond, BC (Summer 20XX, 20XX, 20XX) Answered phones, faxed, photocopied, sorted mail, and typed and edited client bills and letters. Activities Yale Taps dance troupe, Treasurer, Yale University, New Haven, CT (20XX-present) Co-coordinate yearly performance, organize workshops and social events, and manage all finances. Speech and Debate Team, Member, Crofton House School, Vancouver, BC (20XX-20XX) Participated in monthly debates with regional schools Skills Foreign languages: Proficient in French and Spanish, Basic knowledge of Hebrew Technology: PageMaker, Photoshop, Microsoft Word, SMART Boards, Windows and Mac OS X

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ELISA YALE
Elisa.yale@yale.edu P.O. Box 200000 | New Haven, CT 06520 | 555.555.5555

EDUCATION
YALE UNIVERSITY, New Haven, Connecticut. May 20XX B.A., History, expected. GPA: 3.5 (Overall) / 3.8 (History). Preliminary Thesis Topic: Brinkmanship: Native American and Colonial Treaty Negotiation, 1730-1754 Activities: Club Archery Team (20XX-present) Yale Residential College Seminar Selection Committee (20XX) Yale Elementary School Tutoring Program (20XX) Yale Student Microfinance Initiative (20XX) Summer 20XX

INSITUT DE TOURAINE, Tours, France. Completed six-week full-immersion French language and culture program. SPANISH RIVER HIGH SCHOOL, Anytown, Florida. Diploma, GPA: 4.0 / HPA: 5.12. Class Rank: 7 of 709. Activities: Editor-in-Chief, The Galleon (Student Newspaper)

May 20XX

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EXPERIENCE
YALE LIBRARY SYSTEM, Student Supervisor & Independent Projects Manager. May 20XX - Present Design and execute independent circulation management projects for the Access Services Supervisor Produce and coordinate daily and weekly student employee budget schedules Develop data projections for future student labor needs and conduct associated budgetary analyses Administer and monitor quality control protocols for computerized library circulation systems YALE POLO TEAM 20XX - Present Advisor (20XX - Present) A Provide guidance on fundraising, team management, and Yale Athletic Department relations President (Fall 20XX) P Oversaw all aspects of alumni relations, fundraising, and day-to-day club management Acted as primary club liaison between team members and the Yale Athletic Department Designed and implemented $3000 fundraising campaign Managed Yales hosting of the annual Harriman Cup; coordinated 30-person event staff Organized fundraising, match logistics, and social events for annual 50-person Alumni Weekend Supervised publication and distribution of semi-annual alumni/club member newsletter Recruited new players from the freshman class YALE DRAMA COALITION, Associate Producer, The Pillowman. Fall 20XX Supervise 20-member cast and crew Administer and manage production budget of $1200 Coordinate logistics with university administration on behalf of production team. YALE INTRAMURAL SWIMMING, College Captain. Spring 20XX Organized intra-college competition matches; scheduled and ran biweekly practices.

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INTERESTS
Dutch warmblood show horse training, Dostoevsky novels, running, dressage/combined training.

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Elias Yale
P.O. Box 201010, New Haven, CT 06520 (330) 703-0303 elias.yale@yale.edu li l @ l d 6464 Davenport Lane, Anytown, OH 44444 (330) 307-0707

EDUCATION
Yale University, New Haven, CT  B.S. in Biology, Concentration in Neurobiology expected May 20XX  Cumulative GPA: 3.71 Jackson High School, Jackson, OH  Diploma: 20XX, Cumulative GPA: 4.80/4.00, 1st in class of 448 (Valedictorian)  Awards: Mr. Jacksonite (awarded to senior who most excels in academics, extracurriculars, leadership, and service), National Merit Commended Scholar, Canton Repository Teen of the Month  Activities: Class President, National Honor Society Vice-President, Captain of Varsity Basketball Team

EXPERIENCE
UCB Pharmaceuticals Health Policy Office, Washington DC (May 20XX Aug. 20XX)  Researched current health trends, prepared briefs, and presented information to supervisors  Attended Congressional hearings and other health-related meetings on Capitol Hill  Designed a health initiative to prevent MRSA outbreaks in universities Directed Research Taylor Psychiatry Lab, New Haven, CT (Sept. 20XX May 20XX)  Designed and conducted experiments to elucidate the function of various signaling molecules in learning and memory pathways in rodents  Wrote a research paper on the role of the guanine exchange factor EPAC in learning and memory and presented data to lab members Research Assistant Santos Primate Cognition Lab, New Haven, CT (Jan. 20XX May 20XX)  Explored the evolutionary origins of various cognitive processes by studying capuchin monkeys  Wrote a research paper discussing differences between human and primate notions of fairness

ACTIVITIES
Nutrition Detectives Program Co-Founder and Co-Director, New Haven, CT (Sept. 20XX Present)  Educate children on the importance of healthy eating and how to make better food choices  Established relationships with local elementary schools and youth groups to coordinate teaching sessions  Recruit and train new teachers Yale Daily News Staff Reporter and Columnist, New Haven, CT (Sept. 20XX Present)  Beat reporter for both football and mens basketball (three articles per week)  Interview players and coaches at press conferences  Biweekly column exploring and analyzing a wide range of sports-related issues South Asian Society, New Haven, CT (Sept. 20XX Present)  Treasurer (May 20XX May 20XX) Fundraised and managed finances of entire organization  Social Chair (May 20XX Present) Organize and advertise various social events, including annual cultural show, Harvard-Yale mixer, and membership meals  Helped pioneer, design, and establish the South Asian Studies major at Yale Elder-Horizons Intern, New Haven, CT (Oct. 20XX Present)  Record patient histories, enroll patients into the program, and present information at rounds  Visit elderly patients at Yale-New Haven Hospital and administer social, cognitive, and physical intervention to prevent delirium Leeway AIDS Clinic Volunteer, New Haven, CT (Jan. 20XX Present)  Meet with and provide companionship for long-term care patients weekly  Assist patients with basic needs and provide social intervention Luther House Tutors, New Haven, CT (Oct. 20XX Present)  Tutor and mentor local 2nd through 6th graders weekly Sophomore Class Council Davenport College Representative, New Haven, CT (Oct. 20XX May 20XX)  Elected as Council Publicist and Communications Committee Chair  Managed and publicized various class-building academic and social activities including majorinformation night, charity events, parties, and a beach trip

SKILLS
Computer: Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint Languages: Fluent Hindi, Proficient Spanish

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E. Li Morse
P .O. Box 200000, New Haven CT 06520 12 Pine Road, Rye, NY 10500 email: e.li.morse@yale.edu (203) 203-2222 (917) 232-7777

EDUCATION

Yale University, New Haven, CT B.A., Literature, expected May 20XX GPA 3.83 Booker T. Washington High School, Rye, NY Diploma, June 20XX GPA 4.0, Cum Laude Society

SKILLS

Computer: Microsoft Word, PowerPoint, Front Page, Excel, Lotus 123, WordPerfect, Adobe Photoshop, Macromedia Dreamweaver Computer Language: HTML, Java, C++, SML Language: Fluent Mandarin Chinese and Proficient Spanish Pre-Professional Coop Engineer, IBM TJ Watson Research Center Yorktown Heights, New York (Summer 20XX to Fall 20XX) Researched scientific journal findings concerning computer speech synthesis Designed and conducted an independent research project titled, Using Hidden Dynamic Models to Predict Pitch in English and Mandarin Created interactive presentations and presented findings to 20 members of the speech recognition team Volunteer, Family Health Clinic, Northern Westchester Hospital Mount Kisco, New York (Summer 20XX to Summer 20XX) Handled patient questions about appointments, payment, and references Organized patient files and prepared preliminary charts for incoming patients Translated hospital forms and documents from English to Spanish Student Web Designer, Cavendish College London, England (Summer 20XX) Attended workshops on graphic design, html coding, and internet safety Worked closely with a group of six other students to develop a web site for the Inter Exchange International 20XX program

EXPERIENCE

ELLY YALE
elly.yale@yale.edu P. O. Box 200000 New Haven, CT 06520 (203) 203-2222

AWARDS

Siemens Westinghouse Semi-Finalist (20XX) P. O. Box 222 New York Science Talent Search Finalist (20XX) York, PA 17500 US Army Bronze Medal for Engineering (20XX) (717) 777-7777 Intels Excellence in Computer Science Award (20XX) New York High School Journalism Award Second Best Website (20XX) EDUCATION National Merit Commended (20XX) YALE UNIVERSITY, NEW HAVEN, CT AP Scholar with Honor (20XX) B.A., Literature, 200XX (expected)
GPA 3.88/4.00

ACTIVITIES

Secretary, Publicity manager, Jonathan Edwards College Council (20XX-present) NATIONAL OUTDOOR LEADERSHIP SCHOOL (NOLS), LANDER, WY (SUMMER 20XX) VP of Information Technology, AIESEC (20XX-present) Month-long backpacking course in the Olympic Mountains in Washington State, with an emphasis on rigorous off-trail travel Webmaster of Alpha Phi Omega (20XX-present) through remote sections of the Olympic National Park, outdoor leadership skills, and the Leave No Trace wilderness ethic. Staff, Yale Daily News (20XX-present) Grade: A, with endorsements from both leaders to apply to be a NOLS leader in the future. Executive Editor and Webmaster, Booker T. Washington Tribune, Rye, NY (20XX-20XX) Student President, HuaXia Chinese School (20XX-20XX) United Kingdom, France, Spain, Mexico, China, Hong Kong, Japan, Malaysia, Thailand, Singapore MCALISTER HIGH SCHOOL, York, PA
PENNSYLVANIA GOVERNORS SCHOOL FOR THE SCIENCES, PITTSBURGH, PA (SUMMER 20XX) Intensive, college-level coursework in the sciences, mathematics, and computer sciences.

TRAVEL

Graduated 20XX; Class rank: 1 in 471; GPA: 3.98/4.00 Awards/Honors: President, National Honor Society; National Merit Finalist; Recipient of Taylor Publishing Company Scholarship; National Council of Teachers of English (NCTE) Writing Award

EXPERIENCE
THE YALE HERALD (FALL 20XX-SPRING 20XX) SENIOR EDITOR (FALL 20XX-PRESENT) Worked as part of the senior advisory board of weekly newspaper, circulation 5,000. Duties included evaluating overall content and design of paper, developing story ideas, training new editors, assisting with editing and production, revising bylaws, corresponding with faculty and administration, and writing feature articles, including 2,400-word fronts on such topics as grade inflation at the Ivies and the Teaching Assistant program at Yale. MANAGING EDITOR (WINTER-SPRING 20XX) Devoted approximately 40 hours/week to position on five-person executive board. Duties included developing story ideas, corresponding extensively with faculty and administration, managing front-page feature articles, overseeing production, designing and laying out pages, and organizing and running editorial meetings. ARTS & ENTERTAINMENT EDITOR (FALL-WINTER 20XX) Served as one of three editors for the A&E section, working approximately 15-20 hrs./week on editing and layout. CALENDAR EDITOR (FALL-WINTER 20XX) Redesigned and expanded Calendar section of newspaper. PSYCHOLOGY TODAY MAGAZINE, EDITORIAL INTERN (SUMMER 20XX) Worked closely with the editorial board on a daily basis as one of four editorial interns, for approximately 30 hours/week. Published four short articles in the September/October and November/December 2001 issues of a national magazine. Duties included developing story ideas, interviewing psychology researchers, and conducting internet research and polling. CASHIER, EAST SIDE BAGEL & APPETIZING, NEW YORK, NY (SUMMER 20XX) FIGURE SKATING COACH, YORK FIGURE SKATING CLUB, YORK, PA (19XX-19XX)

ACTIVITIES
PHI BETA KAPPA, MEMBER (FALL 20XX-SPRING 20XX) Elected to the Connecticut Chapter of PBK based on academic placement during first six semesters. Awarded to only the top 5% of each graduating class in the fall of senior year. SENIOR CLASS GIFT REPRESENTATIVE (SPRING 20XX) Served as a student liaison between the administration and the student body in order to raise funds for the Yale Alumni Fund. YALE COALITION FOR PEACE, MEMBER (FALL 20XX-SPRING 20XX) Helped to organize activities as part of a student protest group committed to peaceful resolution of global problems.

SKILLS
LANGUAGE: Fluent French and Basic Korean COMPUTER: Windows 95/98 & XP, Adobe Photoshop, Adobe PageMaker, MS Word, MS Excel, Lotus 123 EMT-Basic training

Jonathan Edwards
P.O. Box 200000, New Haven, CT 06520 136 Cherry Avenue, Flushing NY 11355 Email: jonathan.edwards@yale.edu (203) 203-2222

EDUCATION: Yale University, New Haven, CT Projected Major in History, B.A. expected May 20XX. Cumulative GPA: 3.62 Coursework Includes: American Military History (1775-Present), Espionage, World War II, Evolution of International Relations, Revolutionary France 1789-1879, Fashion & Costume in the Western World Stuyvesant High School, New York, NY Diploma: 20XX, GPA: 95.46/100.00 Awards and Honors: National Merit Finalist, Secretary to Counter-Clockwise Magazine, Scholarship to MAP program at Bloomingdale School of Music: studied Bassoon EXPERIENCE: Yale Summer Housing, New Haven, CT (Summer 20XX) Guest Services Assistant Managed and supervised team of five Housing Assistants Notified Housing manager of any reported problems within rooms, see that problems and any other tasks that arose were immediately addressed Ensured university properties were kept up and un-damaged by completing daily inspections of commonly used areas in the college Ran check-ins and check-outs for the various programs that occupied Yale during the summer Saybrook Squiche, New Haven, CT (Fall 20XX present) Short Order Cook/Waiter Run the residential college buttery one night a week, serving students late-night snacks Create awareness of the buttery through weekly emails to the students Receive several concurrent orders that require ability to multi-task Interact with customers to make their visit pleasant and encourage future business American Cancer Society, Flushing, NY (Summer 20XX Summer 20XX) Fundraising Coordinator In charge of fundraising for the Daffodil Days and making Strides Against Breast Cancer events at Stuyvesant High School Raised$1400 total for two years worth of these events PO Box 200000, New Haven, CT 06520 (203) 203-2222 elton.yale@yale.edu

Elton Yale

SKILLS:

EDUCATION Yale University, New Haven, CT B.A. Political Science, Expected Graduation May 20XX ACTIVITIES: WYBC Yale Radio, New Haven, CT (Fall 20XX present) G.P.A. Involved in weekly Blueline Report news show, highlight story is interviewing Alex Trabeck and3.4/4.0
Jeopardy Clue Crew when Jeopardy visited Yale October 20XX Yale Tae Kwon Do, New Haven, CT (Fall 20XX present) Yale Political Union, New Haven, CT (Fall 20XX Spring 20XX) Member of the YPU as well as a member of the Yale Party of the Right INTERESTS: Waterskiing, Martial Arts, Painting (Oil and Watercolor)

Basic Chinese and Basic French Adobe PhotoShop and InDesign; MS Word, Excel and PowerPoint

EXPERIENCE Rowing Highlights United States National Team (Princeton, NJ) Summers 20XX-20XX Represented the U.S. in national and international competition at the junior pre-elite and elite levels. Pan American Games (Bonao, Dominical Republic), Mens Eight, Gold Medalist (August 20XX) US Rowing National Championships (Camden, NJ), Mens Elite Pair, Gold Medalist (July 20XX) World U23 Regatta [under-23 world championships] (Genoa, Italy), Mens Pair, Bronze medalist (July 20XX) Nations Cup [under-23 world championships] (Ottensheim, Austria), Mens Pair, 4th Place (July 20XX) Junior World Championships (Zagreb, Croatia), Mens Coxed Four, Bronze Medalist (August 20XX) Yale University Heavyweight Crew Team (New Haven, CT) September 20XX Present Team Captain for the 20XX-20XX season Member of the Varsity boat (20XX-20XX), practicing over 25 hours a week Recipient, George Pew Award, given to the team member who distinguishes himself through hard work, dedication and loyalty to Yale Crew. (June 20XX) CRASH-B World Indoor Championships (Boston, MA), Silver Medalist, Collegiate Division (February 20XX) Recipient, Jerry Romano Bowl, annually awarded to the oarsman who most thoroughly enjoys the freshman experience. (June 20XX) Community Rowing Program (New Haven, CT) Winters 20XX-20XX Teach basics and fundamentals of rowing to middle and high school-aged kids from schools around New Haven EXPERIENCE Work Yale Law School Library (New Haven, CT) January 20XX Present Research Assistant Assist professors in finding and retrieving materials from the entire Yale library system Perform library administrative tasks EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES Senior Class Council (New Haven, CT) September 20XX-May 20XX Member-at-large Assist in the planning and execution of senior class events (parties, competitions, exhibitions, Class Day and other social events) using a budget of $135,000 Yale Outreach Program (New Haven, CT) November 20XX-Present Visit middle schools around New Haven to discuss the value of participation in sports SKILLS Computer: Reason, Cubase, Peak (music programs); Adobe Photoshop, Pagemaker, Microsoft Excel Language: French Proficiency

L. E. Calhoun
P.O. Box 200000 New Haven, CT 06520 (203) 203-2222

l.e.calhoun@yale.edu 555 rue Richelieu Quebec, QC. Canada H3J2S2 (203) 203-1111

Education

Yale University, New Haven, CT Bachelor of Arts in Political Science, expected May 20XX Cumulative GPA: 3.6/4.0, Major GPA: 3.8/4.0 Coursework includes: Visual Approaches to Legal Thought, Public Health, Journalism, Studies in Grand Strategy, Applied Mathematics and E-Commerce Senior Essay: How the Gulf War Changed Turkeys Policy Towards the Kurds Or Did It? American School of Paris, Paris, France Bilingual International Baccalaureate, 20XX: Graduated second in class of 80 Awards for Excellence in English, French and History; National Honor Society Board Member Captain of Varsity Cross Country and Track & Field teams for two consecutive years

Experience

International Conflict Research Group, President and Co-Director, Yale University, 20XX-present Organized conference on AIDS as a Threat to International Security held in November 20XX Recruited internationally known experts in the field to be panelists; completed extensive research on topics of conference in order to ensure attendance of most knowledgeable speakers Managed logistics of conference, including itineraries, space reservation and program materials Raised $20,000 to fund conference by soliciting Yale University departments and organizations Submitting article on conference proceedings for publication in reputable medical and political journals TBWA/Chiat/Day, Account Management Intern, Absolut Vodka Account, New York, NY, Summer 20XX Led intern team in conducting market research to develop a new product for Absolut Coordinated development of a fully integrated advertising campaign for this product, including print, television and interactive components Presented campaign idea to Absolut Marketing Senior Vice President and received favorable feedback Created new project status report to clearly outline the status of ongoing projects for all agency departments working on the Absolut account; efforts resulted in enhanced communication and efficient weekly agency meetings KPMG, LLC, Human Resources Analyst, Toronto, Canada, Summer 20XX Built centralized HR policy database to ensure consistent and accurate responses to employees inquiries Conducted internal interviews and examined staff communication history to identify questions about HR policies that were unanswered or required significant time and resources to address; carried out independent research on possible solutions to identified questions Inputted acquired data into Excel sheet and categorized all questions

Activities

Yale International Relations Association, Secretariat Member and Chairperson, 20XX-present ELLIE YALE Chaired Model United Nations (MUN) conference committees, moderating flow and substance of debate; researched and wrote background papers on committee topics Served as Under Secretary General for Business for MUN 20XX Conference, managing all logistical and budgetary aspects of conference Wrote conference handbook and financed its printing by selling ad space to local businesses EDUCATION Faux Pas, French Society at Yale, President and Treasurer, 20XX-20XX Yale University , New Haven, CT Co-founded society as replacement for inactive organization Bachelor Planned cultural and social events including French movie screenings, cooking classes, wine tasting of Arts in Psychology with sessions, seminars with French scholars and business leaders Graduation May 20XX, GPA, 3.7 Strengthened recruitment strategy with weekly events and sponsorship of Francophone programs on campus, resulting in membership of over 400 and establishment of permanent board The Willow School, Dallas, TX Computer: MS FrontPage, Adobe PhotoShop, Lexis Nexis, MS Word, MS Excel, MS PowerPoint Languages: French (native fluency) and Spanish (proficient) ARTS/MEDIA EXPERIENCE Lived in Canada (country of birth), France and Saudi Arabia Traveled in Europe, Middle East, North America and Asia Athletics, creative writing, science fiction, poetry, automobile racing, traveling

Cell Phone: 222-222-2222 1111 Central Ave, Apartment #1 Brooklyn, New York, 11200 Email: ellie.yale@yale.edu

Distinction in the Major

Skills

Diploma, Cum Laude, GPA 4.0

Travel

Interests

Renaissance Woman Magazine, New Haven, CT, Summer 20XX Intern: Researched articles on psychological and physical health, organized training sessions for professional models, assisted photographers in modeling sessions Womens Center of Dallas, Dallas, TX, Summer 20XX Head Student Editor of the Moira Awards: Interviewed, researched, wrote, photographed, and edited for a project honoring fifty women who have contributed significantly to the Dallas Community Vibrato: A Magazine of Literature and Art, Dallas, TX, 19XX-20XX Editor: Selected, contributed, and edited pieces of literature and art, organized lay-out using PageMaker, created advertisements and promotional videos Photography Lab of Richard Jones, Dallas, TX, 19XX-20XX Lab Assistant: Developed negatives and prints, dark room maintenance, assisted in gallery exhibitions, formatted photographs using Adobe Photoshop CLINICAL PSYCHOLOGY EXPERIENCE Fellowship Place (a clubhouse for the severely mentally ill), New Haven, CT, 20XX-present Activities Leader: Tutored in a GED program, led a drumming circle, participated in a oneon-one Buddy Program designed to reintegrate the mentally ill back into the community through friendship and cultural activities Yale Child Conduct Clinic, New Haven, CT, 20XX Intern: Conducted diagnostic interviews for children with conduct disorder, researched correlation of conduct disorder and substance abuse, collated and analyzed data AWARDS National Council of Teachers of English Award for excellence in writing, 20XX Poetry Society of Texas, First Place, 20XX SKILLS Computer: Adobe Photoshop, PageMaker, SPSS, and Microsoft Office including Word, Excel, and PowerPoint Language: Advanced Spanish: speaking, reading, and writing Photography: developing, printing, and taking photographs ACTIVITIES Art Night: founded a society to improve student life at Yale through the joy of sculpture, dance, music, and paint, 20XX-20XX Yale Womens Waterpolo Team, 20XX-present

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Elle E. Yale
121 Maple Ave. Brentwood, NJ 31111 (607) 543-5555

email: elle.yale@yale.edu P.O. Box 200000 New Haven, CT 06250 Cell: (203) 576-2222

Education

Yale University, New Haven, CT B. A., expected May 20XX Major: Ethics, Politics, and Economics Cumulative GPA: 3.56/4.0 Coursework includes: microeconomics, macroeconomics, multi-variable calculus, linear algebra, and political philosophy Willow Springs High School , Brentwood, NJ Diploma, May 20XX GPA 3.87/4.0

Skills Experience

Computer: Excel, Microsoft Word, PowerPoint, Minitab Language: Fluent Spanish and French Yale Child Study Center, New Haven, CT Survey Administrator: Worked under the direction of a Yale Child Study Center Research Team. Administered the SAHA (Social and Health Assessment) survey to middle and high school students in New Haven. Debriefed students at the end of each survey. Documented and discussed student reactions with Child Study Coordinators. (Spring 20XX) American Red Cross, Brentwood, NJ Receptionist: Provided information about Red Cross services. Handled questions and concerns about the Red Cross over the phone and in person. Greeted donors and assisted clients with inquiries at the front desk. Performed word-processing, dataentry, and filing/copying as needed. (20XX-20XX)

Activities

Independent Research, Yale University Designed and conducted independent study of natural resource policy. Researched literature on the economic consequences of pollution, waste management, and energy planning. Wrote a critical research paper on microeconomic consequences of implementing different policies. (20XX-20XX)

Environmental Club President, Willow Springs High School P. O. Box 200000 in Organized general assembly and executive board meetings. Supervised volunteers New Haven, CT 06520 the Adopt-a-Trail program. Coordinated the Annual Environmental Conference. (203) 203-2222 (20XX-20XX) National Honor Society Treasurer, Willow Springs High School Kept accurate account of income and expenditures. Allocated funds to projects and EDUCATION activities within budgetary constraints. Proposed new policies to improve structure of the organization. Prepared financial reports upon every meeting.Yale (20XX-20XX) University, New Haven, CT

ELIHU STILES

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444 Garcia Avenue Boulder, CO 77777 (203) 333-2222

elihu.stiles@yale.edu

Literary Magazine Editorial/Advertising Assistant, Willow Springs HighGPA: School Cumulative 3.68 Edited poetry and short stories. Assisted with layout and design. Coursework Consolidated Includes: Finance, Investment Analysis, Multivariable Calculus, Game Theory, Data Analysis, Physics, submissions and sorted them by category. Helped coordinate coffeehouse Material Science, Computer Programming, Fluid Mechanics, and Mechanical Design Studio fundraisers. Publicized the magazine through rigorous advertising. (20XX-20XX) Nominated for the National Scholar-Athlete of the Year ESLTutor, Willow Springs High School Roosevelt High School, Boulder, CO Mentored children of diverse cultures and backgrounds to promote leadership Graduated with Highest Honors, June 20XX, GPA: 3.96 qualities and enhance their academic performance. (20XX-20XX)

B.A. Mechanical Engineering and Economics, expected May 20XX

Varsity Sports: Football (captain) and Lacrosse (captain) Awards: Roosevelt School Athlete of the Year (20XX), All-County Football (20XX), All-American Lacrosse (20XX)

EXPERIENCE
Kontiki, Inc., Sunnyvale, CA Summer Intern (20XX) Financial Analysis: worked with CEO, CFO, and Director of Finance Created research tools to evaluate the cost/benefits of Kontikis software for clients Researched financial records of prospective clients Managed accounting of expense reports and client billing Product Marketing: designed and created HTML websites for Kontikis software solutions Q&A Department: tested and resolved software bugs on our clients operating systems Coordinated the encoding of video tapes from the AlwaysOn Conference at Stanford University Yale University Admissions Office, New Haven, CT Dean of Admissions Assistant (Summer 20XX) Acted as travel coordinator for Admission officers Interviewed prospective students as part of the admission process Coordinated group tours of 30-80 people around the campus Yale University Athletic Department, New Haven, CT Coordinator (Academic year of 20XX, 20XX, 20XX, 20XX) Coordinated setup of varsity gymnastics and track meets Worked Mens and Womens varsity basketball games Stake Boater for Crew Meets

YALE UNIVERSITY ACTIVITIES


Varsity Football: Four year starter (20XX, 20XX, 20XX, 20XX) Youth Day Volunteer for underprivileged students (Spring 20XX) Engineering Program for prospective students (Academic year of 20XX, 20XX, 20XX) Residential College Activities Coordinator (Fall 20XX)

SKILLS
Computer: Microsoft Excel, Word, and PowerPoint; Fortran; C++; Mathematica; Macromedia Dreamweaver Language: Proficient in Spanish

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