Ielts Writing Task 1
Ielts Writing Task 1
Ielts Writing Task 1
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The pie chart shows the worldwide distribution of sales of Coca-Cola in the year 2000 and the graph shows the change in share prices between 1996 and 2001. In the year 2000, Coca-Cola sold a total of 1 .1 billion cases of their fi!!y drin" product worldwide. The largest consu#er was $orth %#erica, where &0.' per cent of the total (olu#e was purchased. The second largest consu#er was )atin %#erica. *urope and %sia purchased 20.+ and 16.' per cent of the total (olu#e respecti(ely, while %frica and the ,iddle *ast re#ained fairly s#all consu#ers at per cent of the total (olu#e of sales. -ince 1996, share prices for Coca-Cola ha(e fluctuated. In that year, shares were (alued at appro.i#ately /&+. 0etween 1996 and 199 , howe(er, prices rose significantly to / 0 per share. They dipped a little in #id-199 and then pea"ed at /10 per share in #id-91. 2ro# then until 2000 their (alue fell consistently but there was a slight rise in #id-2000. #2 The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, C s and video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. ! or
The chart shows the changes in the sales of (ideo #aterial 3 454s, ga#es software and C4s around the world in billions of dollars o(er a three-year period. It can be seen that the sales of (ideos 3 454s and ga#es software ha(e increased, while the sales of C4s ha(e gone down slightly. 0etween 2000 and 200&, the sale of (ideos and 454s rose by appro.i#ately 1& billion dollars. In
2000, 6ust under 20 billion dollars worth of these ite#s were sold, but in 200&, this figure had risen to a little o(er &0 billion dollars. The sales of ga#es software also rose during this period, but less sharply. -ales increased fro# about 1& billion dollars in 2000 to 6ust under 20 billion dollars three years later. 0y contrast, during the sa#e ti#e period, the sale of C4s fell fro# &+ billion dollars in 2000 to about &2.+ billion dollars in 200&. #" The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in #ritain according to s"$ and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
model answer: The three graphs pro(ide an o(er(iew of the types of #usic people purchase in the 78. %t first glance we see that classical #usic is far less popular than pop or roc" #usic. 9hile slightly #ore wo#en than #en buy pop #usic, the roc" #ar"et is do#inated by #en with &0: buying roc", co#pared to 1 : of wo#en. 2ro# the first graph we see that interest in pop #usic is steady fro# age 16 to '' with 20: of the population continuing to buy pop C4s after the age of '+. The interest in roc" #usic reaches its pea" a#ong the 2+ to &' year olds, though it ne(er sells as well as pop. Interest also drops off after the age of &+ with an e(en sharper fall fro# age '+ onwards, a pattern which is the opposite to the classical #usic graph.
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The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia !rite a report for a university teacher describing the information shown
model answer: The two decades between 1975 and 1995 brought significant changes in the representation of women in Freedonia's work force, according to the graphs. In 1975, for examp e, some !"" """ men and #5" """ women worked in the communications sector. Twent$ $ears ater, though the number of men remained unchanged, the number of women rose to 55" """. % simi ar situation was seen in the who esa e and retai trade sector, where the number of women rose from about 55" """ in 1975 to a most &"" """ two decades ater. The number of men in this sector remained stab e o'er the period, at around 7"" """. (omen a so made gains in both the finance)banking industries and in the defence*re ated pub ic sector. (hereas some 1#5 """ women worked in finance and banking institutions in 1975, the number increased to +5" """ b$ 1995. The number of men grew on $ margina $
from +#5 """ to +&" """ o'er the same period. In defence, the number of men dec ined from ##5 """ to #"" """, whi e the number of women rose from #5 """ to o'er 1"" """. Two sectors that retained stab e emp o$ment numbers for both men and women were manufacturing, which had about !"" """ women and ,5" """ men in both sur'e$ed $ears, and the pub ic sector -non*defence., which emp o$ed ,5" """ women and &5" """ men. Thus, women appear to ha'e made gains in the Freedonian work force but not at the expense of men. -#+! words. /5
The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia !rite a report for a university teacher describing the information shown
model answer: The two decades between 1975 and 1995 brought significant changes in the representation of women in Freedonia's work force, according to the graphs. In 1975, for examp e, some !"" """ men and #5" """ women worked in the communications sector. Twent$ $ears ater, though the number of men remained unchanged, the number of women rose to 55" """. % simi ar situation was seen in the who esa e and retai trade sector, where the number of women rose from about 55" """ in 1975 to a most &"" """ two decades ater. The number of men in this sector remained stab e o'er the period, at around 7"" """. (omen a so made gains in both the finance)banking industries and in the defence*re ated pub ic sector. (hereas some 1#5 """ women worked in finance and banking institutions in
1975, the number increased to +5" """ b$ 1995. The number of men grew on $ margina $ from +#5 """ to +&" """ o'er the same period. In defence, the number of men dec ined from ##5 """ to #"" """, whi e the number of women rose from #5 """ to o'er 1"" """. Two sectors that retained stab e emp o$ment numbers for both men and women were manufacturing, which had about !"" """ women and ,5" """ men in both sur'e$ed $ears, and the pub ic sector -non*defence., which emp o$ed ,5" """ women and &5" """ men. Thus, women appear to ha'e made gains in the Freedonian work force but not at the expense of men. -#+! words. /, 0ou shou d spend about #" minutes on this task. "ating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth# which can cause tooth decay $%igh acid levels are measured by low p% values& 'escribe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
model answer: %n$one who has 'isited a dentist has been to d that eating excessi'e amounts of sweets risks harming the teeth. This is because sweets ower p1 e'e s in the mouth to dangerous e'e s. (hen the p1 e'e in the mouth is kept abo'e 5.5, acidit$ is such that teeth are un ike $ to be in danger of deca$. 2weet foods, howe'er, cause p1 in the mouth to drop for a time, and the onger p1 e'e s remain be ow 5.5, the greater the opportunit$ for deca$ to occur. 3$ comparing fruit sugar, cane sugar and hone$, which are a common ingredients of sweet foods, we find that cane sugar owers p1 e'e s for the ongest period, thus producing the greatest risk of the three. %pproximate $ fi'e minutes aftfter consuming cane sugar, p1 e'e s
drop to as itt e as p1 !.5. The$ then begin to rise s ow $, but do not rise abo'e p1 5.5 unti at east !" minutes ha'e e apsed. 3$ contrast, fruit sugar, which causes the mouth's acidit$ to fa to 4ust abo'e p1 +, poses a danger for a shorter period5 tooth deca$ is un ike $ #" minutes after consumption. 1one$ appears an e'en ess risk$ substance. Though acidit$ fa s to about p1 +.75 within fi'e minutes of consumption, it returns to abo'e p1 5.5 in under fifteen minutes. The imp ications, then, are that peop e who insist on eating sweet foods shou d be aware of the ingredients, and that fruit sugar or hone$ appear preferab e to cane sugar. -#+# words.
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The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid wor% per wee% done by people in different categories. &'npaid wor% refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housewor% and gardening.( escribe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. )uggest reasons for what you see.
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model answer: The diagra# re(eals that the nu#ber of hours per wee" spent in unpaid wor" is une;ually distributed between #en and wo#en. In households where there are no children, wo#en are reported to wor" so#e &0 hours per wee" in such tas"s as housewor" and gardening. ,en<s contribution to these unpaid 6obs a(erages a
considerably lower 11 hours. 9hen children enter the household, howe(er, the ine;uality beco#es e(en #ore pronounced. In fa#ilies of 1 - 2 children, #en #aintain appro.i#ately the sa#e nu#ber of hours of unpaid wor" as in childless households, but the nu#ber of hours wo#en wor" in the ho#e rises to +2 per wee", #uch of it, on doubt, due to childcare responsibilities. Interestingly, when there are three or #ore children in the household, #en are found to wor" e(en fewer hours around the house than before the appearance of the third child. 9hereas wo#en<s unpaid hours rise to appro.i#ately +6 per wee", the corresponding figure for #en, 16, actually represents a decrease. The data suggest that the increased presence of wo#en in the paid wor" force has yet to lead to an increased role for #en in the ho#e. #The chart below shows the amount of leisure time en.oyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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model answer: The chart shows the nu#ber of hours of leisure en6oyed by #en and wo#en in a typical wee" in 1991-9, according to gender and e#ploy#ent status. %#ong those e#ployed full-ti#e, #en on a(erage had fifty hours of leisure, whereas wo#en had appro.i#ately thirty-se(en hours. There were no figures gi(en for #ale part-ti#e wor"ers, but fe#ale part-ti#ers had forty hours of leisure ti#e, only slightly #ore than wo#en in full-ti#e e#ploy#ent, perhaps reflecting their wor" in the ho#e. In the une#ployed and retired categories, leisure ti#e showed an increase for both se.es, as #ight ha(e been e.pected. =ere too, #en en6oyed #ore leisure ti#e o(er eighty hours, co#pared with se(enty hours for wo#en, perhaps once again reflecting the fact that wo#en spend #ore ti#e
wor"ing in the ho#e than #en. )astly, housewi(es en6oyed appro.i#ately fifty-four hours of leisure, on a(erage. There were no figures gi(en for househusbands> ?(erall, the chart de#onstrates that in the categories for which statistics on #ale leisure ti#e were a(ailable, #en en6oyed at least ten hours of e.tra leisure ti#e. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
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model answer: The graph co#pares the rate of s#o"ing in #en and wo#en in -o#eland between the years 1960 and 2000. It can be clearly seen that the rate of s#o"ing for both #en and wo#en is currently declining and that fewer wo#en ha(e s#o"ed throughout the period. In 1960, 600 #en in e(ery 1,000 was s#o"ing. This nu#ber decreased gradually to +00 by 19 ' and continued to decrease but #ore steeply to 2+0 in 2000. In contrast, the rate of s#o"ing in wo#en in 1960 was (ery low at only 10 in e(ery 1,000. 0y 1961 this increased to 1 0, and increased again but #ore steeply to &20 in 19 . The rate of fe#ale s#o"ers then re#ained stable at &20 until 191' at which point the figures began to decline and had dropped to 200 by 2000. In conclusion we can see that the rate of s#o"ing in #en dropped throughout the whole period but was always at a higher le(el than the fe#ale figures. The rate of s#o"ing in wo#en increased until 19 but then decreased for the rest of the period.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.
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model answer: The graphs co#pare the nu#ber of deaths caused by si. diseases in -o#eland in 1990 with the a#ount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. It can be clearly seen that the a#ount of research funding in #any cases did not correlate with the seriousness of the disease in ter#s of nu#bers of deaths. In 1990 there were around 0.2 #illion deaths fro# %I4-, 0.1 #illion deaths fro# leprosy, 0.& #illion deaths fro# tropical diseases, 0.+ #illion deaths fro# diarrhoea, 0.' #illion deaths fro# #alaria and 1.1 #illion deaths fro# T0. These figures can be contrasted with the a#ount of funding allocated for each disease. In 1990 %I4- recei(ed 110 #illion dollars in research funding, leprosy 10 #illion dollars in research funding, tropical diseases 9 #illion dollars in research funding, diarrhoea 60 #illion dollars in research funding, #alaria +0 #illion dollars and T0 20 #illion dollars in research funding. In conclusion it is clear that funding allocation for disease research in -o#eland is not wholly deter#ined by the nu#ber of deaths for which each disease is responsible in a gi(en year.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the two graphs below.
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model answer: The pie charts co#pare the highest le(el of education achie(ed by wo#en in -o#eland across two years, 19'+ and 199+. It can be clearly seen that wo#en recei(ed a #uch higher le(el of education in -o#eland in 199+ than they did in 19'+. In 19'+ only &0: of wo#en co#pleted their secondary education and 1: went on to a first degree. $o wo#en had co#pleted post-graduate studies. This situation had changed radically by 199+. In 199+, 90: of wo#en in -o#eland had co#pleted secondary education and of those, half had graduated fro# an initial degree and 20: had gone on to postgraduate studies. %t the other end of the scale we can see that by 199+ all girls were co#pleting lower secondary, although 10: ended their schooling at this point. This is in star" contrast with 19'+ when only &0: of girls co#pleted pri#ary school, &+: had no schooling at all and &+: only co#pleted the third grade. In conclusion, we can see that in the +0 years fro# 19'+ to 199+ there ha(e been huge positi(e de(elop#ents to the education le(els of wo#en in -o#eland.
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The chart shows stri"ing differences in the le(el of co#puter and Internet penetration in the %rab world. The 7%* and 8uwait are by far the #ost co#puteri!ed countries, with )ebanon a distant third. The 7%* has o(er 1+0 co#puters for e(ery 1000 inhabitants, co#pared to 8uwait<s 1&0 and )ebanon<s 60. In contrast, countries such as *gypt, ,orocco and -yria ha(e less than 20 co#puters per 1000 inhabitants. There are also great differences in Internet use and a(ailability. The 7%* has by far the highest proportion of users, with #ore than one-third of its population using the Internet. 8uwait and )ebanon are second and third again, with 100 users per thousand in 8uwait and 10 in )ebanon. In so#e countries the nu#ber using the Internet is negligible@ -audi %rabia has less than 20 users per thousand, and there are fewer than + users per thousand in -yria. ?ne unusual feature of the graph is that Internet use does not see# to be directly related to the nu#ber of co#puters. In se(eral countries Athe 7%*, )ebanon, Bordan and ?#anC, there are #ore Internet users per thousand people than co#puters. =owe(er, in other countries, such as 8uwait, -audi %rabia and -yria, the nu#ber of Internet users is lower than the nu#ber of co#puters. In su##ary, there are #a6or differences between co#puter use and Internet use in the %rab world, but the 7%* clearly leads the area in both nu#ber of co#puters and nu#ber of internet users per capita.
The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from wor% in one 0uropean city in 112,, 11-, and 2,,,. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
model answer: The graph shows the changing patterns in co##uting by train, car, tube or bus for co##uters in )ondon in the years 1960, 1910 and 2000. The nu#ber of people using trains at first rose fro# 6ust under 20: in 1960 to about 26: in 1910, but then fell bac" to about 2&: in 2000. 7se of the tube has been relati(ely stable, falling fro# around 2 : of co##uters in 1960 to 22: in 1910, but cli#bing bac" to reach 2+: by 2000. ?n the other hand, the use of cars increased steadily fro# 6ust o(er +: in 1960 to 2&: in 1910, reaching al#ost '0: by 2000, whereas the popularity of buses has declined since 1960, falling fro# 6ust under &+: in 1960 to 2 : in 1910 and only 1+: in 2000. The graph indicates the growing use of cars for co##uting to wor" between 1960 - 2000, and the corresponding decline in the popularity of buses fro# being the #ost popular #ode of transport in 1960 to the least popular in 2000.
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model answer: The graphs show hea th and education spending and changes in ife expectanc$ and infant morta it$ in the 6%7. 8'era , as the percentage spent on hea th and education increases, infant morta it$ and ife expectanc$ impro'e. 9raph 1 shows the percentage of 9:; spent on hea th and education between 19&5 and 199!. There were big increases in both areas. 1ea th spending stood at about &< in 19&5 but rose to 9< in 199" and 1"< in 199!. 2pending on education was e'en higher. It was 1"< in 19&5, and shot up to 1+< in 199" and 15< in 199!, a 5"< increase in 4ust & $ears. 9raph # shows impro'ements in ife expectanc$ and infant morta it$ between 197" and 199#. =ife expectanc$ was 4ust ," in 197" but rose to a most 7# in 199#. In contrast, the number of babies d$ing dropped dramatica $, from ," per 1""" in 197" to on $ ## in 199#.
In conc usion, peop e in the 6%7 are i'ing onger and hea thier i'es because of the go'ernment's spending on education and medica faci ities.
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model answer: The graph shows wee"ly e.penditure on fast food in 0ritain by food and inco#e group. There are two #ain trends. 2irst, the e.penditure is directly related to inco#e. -econdly, there are differences in the types of fast food eaten by each group. The a#ount of #oney spent on fast food is related to inco#e. Deople in the high-inco#e group spent the #ost - o(er 1+ pence per person per wee". Deople in the low-inco#e group spent the least - less than half of what the high-inco#e earners spent. The type of fast food eaten also depends on the group. =igh-inco#e earners spent & ti#es #ore on ha#burgers than people in the low-inco#e group. Di!!a was generally the least fa(orite food. 2ish and chips was the #ost popular food with the low-inco#e group but consu#ption was fairly si#ilar a#ong all groups.
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model answer: The pie charts show changes in %#erican spending patterns between 1966 and 1996. 2ood and cars #ade up the two biggest ite#s of e.penditure in both years. Together they co#prised o(er half of household spending. 2ood accounted for '': of spending in 1966, but this dropped by two thirds to 1': in 1996. =owe(er, the outlay on cars doubled, rising fro# 2&: in 1966 to '+: in 1996. ?ther areas changed significantly. -pending on eating out doubled, cli#bing fro# : to 1':. The proportion of salary spent on co#puters increased dra#atically, up fro# 1: in 1996 to 10: in 1996. =owe(er, as co#puter e.penditure rose, the percentage of outlay on boo"s plunged fro# 6: to 1:. -o#e areas re#ained relati(ely unchanged. %#ericans spent appro.i#ately the sa#e a#ount of salary on petrol and furniture in both years. In conclusion, increased a#ounts spent on cars, co#puters, and eating out were #ade up for by drops in e.penditure on food and boo"s.
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model answer: The graph shows changes in the a#ount of fast food consu#ed in the 78 between 19 0 and 1990. -e(eral trends are apparent. 2irst, 0ritons are eating #ore and #ore fast food. -econdly, the type of fast food has changed. In 19 0, the #ost popular fast food was fish and chips. ?(er &00g were consu#ed each wee". 0y 1990, howe(er, this had fallen to 6ust o(er 200g - a +0: drop. Consu#ption of other fast foods such as pi!!a and ha#burgers increased, howe(er. The a#ount of pi!!a eaten shot up fro# about 20g a wee" to #ore than 2 0g, o(erta"ing fish and chips in the late 1910s. =a#burger consu#ption also increased, rising fro# about 10g in 19 0 to al#ost &00g in 1990. %cco#panying this change in the choice of foods was an increase in the a#ount of fast food consu#ed. In 19 0, 0ritish consu#ers ate about '+0g a wee" of fast food. In 1990, on the other hand, this had #ore than doubled, to 1000g.
alternative answer: The graph shows the a#ount of fast food eaten between 19 0 and 1990 in gra#s per person per wee". ?(erall, the a#ount of fast food eaten #ore than doubled. The a#ount of fish and chips eaten declined slightly. In 19 0, the consu#ption was about &00g3wee". This fell to 220g3wee" in 1990. In contrast, sales of ha#burger and pi!!a roc"eted. In 19 0, (ery little pi!!a was eaten - less than +0g3wee". This rose to 210g3wee" by 1990. In the sa#e period, ha#burger sales shot up by #ore than +00:, fro# 100g3wee" in 19 0 to +00 gra#s in 1990. In conclusion, although there was a big increase in the consu#ption of pi!!a and ha#burger, sales of fish and chips decreased.
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model answer: The chart shows stri"ing changes in the fertility rate of wo#en in si. Eulf countries F -audi %rabia, the 7%*, ?#an, Gatar, 8uwait and 0ahrain between 1990 and 2000. In the ten year period, there was a decline in the nu#ber of births per wo#an in all countries. The biggest declines were in two countries which had low fertility rates at the start of the decade, 0ahrain and the 7%*. 2ertility rates (ary greatly between the si. countries. ?#an and -audi %rabia had the highest rates, with o(er se(en births per wo#an in 1990. This co#pared with around ' births per wo#an in 0ahrain and the 7%*, and 6ust &. + in 8uwait 0y 2000, the rate had fallen below three births per wo#an in 8uwait, 0ahrain and the 7%*, with a drop of o(er 2+: in a decade in the 7%*. =owe(er, in -audi %rabia and ?#an, the rates fell by 6ust 20:, fro# .0 to +.+. In su##ary, there were #a6or decreases in birth rates in all countries, but so#e countries in the region ha(e double the fertility rate of others.
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model answer: The line graph shows esti#ated sales of gold in 4ubai for 12 #onths in 2002 in #illions of dirha#s. There were two #ain seasons for gold sales. The #ain season for sales is in the 4ece#ber to ,ay period. -ales were consistently abo(e 200 #illion dirha#s per #onth, rising sharply to a pea" of &+0 #illion dirha#s in ,arch. =owe(er, for the ne.t four #onths, sales declined steadily, reaching an annual low of 120 #illion dirha#s in Buly. In %ugust, there was a sudden increase. -ales al#ost doubled, rising fro# 120 #illion dirha#s in Buly to 210 #illion dirha#s in %ugust. This was followed by a drop in -epte#ber, bac" to the Buly figure. 2ro# -epte#ber to ?ctober, sales reco(ered, fro# 120 to 110 #illion. In ?ctober and $o(e#ber, sales re#ained steady, and there was a s#all increase in 4ece#ber to 190 #illion dirha#s. In conclusion, the #ain sales period is in the early part of the year, slu#ping in the su##er, e.cept for a sudden increase in %ugust.
The chart below shows the amount of money per wee% spent on fast foods in #ritain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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model answer: The chart shows that high inco#e earners consu#ed considerably #ore fast foods than the other inco#e groups, spending #ore than twice as #uch on ha#burgers A'& pence per person per wee"C than on fish and chips or pi!!a Aboth under 20 penceC. %(erage inco#e earners also fa(oured ha#burgers, spending && pence per person per wee", followed by fish and chips at 2' pence, then pi!!a at 11 pence. )ow inco#e earners appear to spend less than other inco#e groups on fast foods, though fish and chips re#ains their #ost popular fast food, followed by ha#burgers and then pi!!a. 2ro# the graph we can see that in 19 0, fish and chips were twice as popular as burgers, pi!!a being at that ti#e the least popular fast food. The consu#ption of ha#burgers and pi!!a has risen steadily o(er the 20 year period to 1990 while the consu#ption of fish and chips has been in decline o(er that sa#e period with a slight increase in popularity since 191+.
The charts below show the number of 3apanese tourists travelling abroad between 11-+ and 111+ and /ustralias share of the 3apanese tourist mar%et. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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model answer: This chart shows us that Bapanese tourists go abroad for tra(elling in a decade and %ustralians share of #ar"eting for Bapanese tourists. 0etween 191+ and 199+ Bapanese tourists tra(elling abroad was dra#atically increased. In 1+ there was about + #ilions tra(eller go abroad. -ince 1+ nu#ber of tra(eller went up dra#atically until '0. It was alo#ost twice then between 90 and 9& the nu#ber ri#ain stateable, which is about 12 #illions. 2ro# 9& to 9+ it rose slightly. Therefore in 199+ there were about 1+ #illions people went abroad.
I a# going to write about the other chart, which is %ustralians share of Bapaneses tourist #ar"et. This is also between 191+ and 199+. %bout 2 #illion Bapanese tourist went to %ustralia in 191+. 0etween 1+ and 19 people went there is increased sharply, which is al#ost & ti#es #ore. In 1990 it fall nu#ber slightly but fro# 90 to 9' nu#ber is went up. =owe(er 9' to 9+ is not so went up nu#ber of people who went to %ustralia. It ri#ain is the sa#e or slightly decreased.
Comment: This is an answer written by a candidate who achie(ed a 0and + score. =ere is the e.a#iners co##ent@ The writer does what is re;uired of her in ter#s of tas" fulfil#ent, and the #essage can be followed, but the wea"nesses in gra##atical control and in spelling cause difficulty for the reader. Co#ple. sentence structures are atte#pted, but the greatest le(els of accuracy are found in basic, si#ple structures.
The chart below shows the amount spent on si$ consumer goods in four 0uropean countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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model answer:
The chart shows that 0ritain, a#ong the four *uropean countries listed, has spent #ost hea(ily on the range of consu#er goods included. In e(ery case, 0ritish spending is considerably higher than that of other countriesH only in the case of tennis rac;uets does another country, Italy, co#e close. In contrast, Eer#any is generally the lowest spender. This Is #ost e(ident in photographic fil#, where Eer#any spends #uch less than 0ritain. Eer#any only spends #ore than another country, 2rance, in two casesH tennis rac;uets and perfu#es. ,eanwhile, 2rance and Italy generally #aintain #iddle positions, a(eraging appro.i#ately si#ilar spending o(erall. -pecifically, 2rance spends #ore on C4s and photographic fil# but less on tennis rac;uets than Italy does. Italys spending on personal stereos is only #arginally greater than that of 2rance, while spending on toys is e;ual between the two. It is clear fro# the data gi(en that there are so#e significant differences in spending habits within *urope.
The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. )ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ma%e comparisons where relevant.
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model answer: The first graph shows that there is a gradual decrease in study for career reasons with age. $early 10: of students under 26 years, study for their career. This percentage gradually declines by 1020: e(ery decade. ?nly '0: of '0-'9yr olds and 11: of o(er '9yr olds studing for career reasons in late adulthood. Con(ersely, the first graph also shows that study ste##ing fro# interest increases with age. There are only 10: of under 26yr olds studing out of interest. The percentage increases slowly till the beginning of the fourth decade, and increases dra#atically in late adulthood. $early sa#e nu#ber of '0-'9yr olds study for career and interest. =owe(er 0: of o(er '9yr olds study for interest in co#parison to 11: studing for career reasons in that age group. The second graph shows that e#ployer support is #a.i#u# Aappro.i#ately 60:C for the under 26yr students. It drops rapidly to &2: up to the third decade of life, and then increses in late adulthood up to about '':. It is unclear whether e#ployer support is only for career-focused study, but the highest le(el is for those students who #ainly study for career purposes.
This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 8 score. Here is the examiner's comment: This answer su##arises the "ey features of both charts and integrates the# well. Clear trends are identified and supported with appropriately-selected figures. The answer could only be i#pro(ed by adding an introduction to the general topic of the charts. The infor#ation is well organised, with a clearly-signalled progression. )in"ing words are used accurately and precisely, although there is occasional o#ission. Daragraphing is used well initially, but lapses in the later section. % (ery good range of (ocabulary is used to con(ey the infor#ation concisely and accurately with only occasional inappropriacy. 9ords are used precisely and there are no errors in spelling or word for#. % wide range of structures is used and #ost sentences in this answer are accurate. *rrors are rare and do not affect co##unication in this answer.
The chart below shows information about 4eart /ttac%s by /ge and 5ender in ')/. )ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ma%e comparisons where relevant.
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model answer: The graph shows how age and gender influence the fre;uency of heart attac"s in the 7-. )ess than 6: of all heart attac"s occur in the 29-'' age group. The nu#ber of wo#en who suffer heart attac"s in this group is negligible - only &000 per year, co#pared to 12&,000 #en. =owe(er the proportion of #en and wo#en with heart attac"s rises dra#atically between '+ and 6', with o(er half a #illion per year. ?(er '20,000 #en a year in this age group ha(e heart attac"s. The incidence a#ongst wo#en increases - wo#en ha(e one heart attac" for e(ery three #en in this age group. ?(er the age of 6+, the nu#ber of #en suffering heart attac"s only increases slightly. =owe(er there is a huge increase in the nu#ber of wo#en with heart attac"s - they co#prise o(er '0: of all (icti#s. In conclusion, #en are #ore li"ely to be the (icti#s of heart attac"s at all ages, but wo#en are increasingly li"ely o(er the age of 6+.
The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several 5ulf countries between 111, and 2,1,. )ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ma%e comparisons where relevant.
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model answer: The graph shows ?il Droduction Capacity in #illions of barrels per day for selected Eulf countries. There are se(eral features in this graph. The #ost significant feature is that oil production will increase sharply in al#ost all the countries shown. 8uwait and Ira; are both e.pected to double their output between 1990 and 2010, with 8uwait<s production rising fro# 1.1 #illion barrels per day AbpdC in 1990 to &.1 in 2010. Iran will also increase its output by a slightly s#aller a#ount. %fter re#aining steady at 2.+ #illion bpd fro# 1990 to 2000, the 7%*<s output is e.pected to approach '.0 #illion bpd in 2010. ?nly Gatar<s production is predicted to fall, bac" to 0.1 #illion bpd after a slight rise in 2000. =owe(er, the greatest increase will be fro# -audi %rabia. In 1990, its output capacity at 1.+ #illion bpd e.ceeded the co#bined production of Iran, Ira; and 8uwait. This lead is e.pected to continue with a +: increase in production to 1'.+ #illion bpd 2010. In su##ary, while #ost of the countries are e.pected to show increases, -audi %rabia will #aintain and strengthen its position as the #a6or producer.
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model answer: The chart shows #ale and fe#ale graduates fro# the =igher Colleges of Technology colleges in the 7%*. The #ost outstanding feature of the graph is fe#ale graduates outnu#ber #ales in all the colleges. 2or e.a#ple, in 4ubai, there are &0: #ore wo#en graduates than #en. There are also large differences in %l %in and in Ias %l 8hai#ah. =owe(er, the nu#ber of #en and wo#en is al#ost e;ual in the colleges in %bu 4habi. There are also big differences in the si!es of the colleges. Ias %l 8hai#ah has less than &00 students altogether, while %bu 4habi has about 600 and 4ubai has al#ost 1000 In su##ary, wo#en outnu#ber #en in all the colleges, and there are significant differences in the si!es of the colleges.
The graph shows 6nternet 'sage in Taiwan by /ge 5roup, 111--2,,,. )ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ma%e comparisons where relevant.
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model answer: The graph shows changes in the age profile of Internet users in Taiwan between 1991 and 2000. The #ain users of the Internet in Taiwan are young adults between 16 and &0 years old. In 1991, they accounted for #ore than half of all users. In 1999 the nu#ber dropped slightly to '+:, but e(en in 2000 they were the biggest group. The second biggest group of users is aged between &1 and +0. They #ade up '1: in 1991, falling slightly to & : in 2000. 9hen co#bined with the 16-&0 age group, o(er 9': of users in 1991 were between 16 and +0. =owe(er this nu#ber is dropping steadily as #ore children and older users log on. In 1999, the nu#ber of children online ;uadrupled fro# 2: to 1:, and it continued to increase in 2000. There were si#ilar increases for older users, rising fro# ': in 1991 to 10: in 2000. In su##ary, while adults between 16 and +0 still represent the great #a6ority of Internet users in Taiwan, their share is declining as #ore children and older users 6oin the web.
The graph shows 'nderground )tation 7assenger 8umbers in 9ondon. )ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ma%e comparisons where relevant.
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model answer: The graph shows the fluctuation in the nu#ber of people at a )ondon underground station o(er the course of a day. The busiest ti#e of the day is in the #orning. There is a sharp increase between 06@00 and 01@00, with '00 people using the station at 1 o<cloc". %fter this the nu#bers drop ;uic"ly to less than 200 at 10 o<cloc". 0etween 11 a# and & p# the nu#ber rises, with a plateau of 6ust under &00 people using the station. In the afternoon, nu#bers decline, with less than 100 using the station at ' p#. There is then a rapid rise to a pea" of &10 at 6p#. %fter p#, nu#bers fall significantly, with only a slight increase again at 1p#, tailing off after 9 p#. ?(erall, the graph shows that the station is #ost crowded in the early #orning and early e(ening periods.
The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the ':. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given. Jou should write at least 1+0 words.
model answer: The gi(en line graph illustrates infor#ation on the percentage of people who went to the #o(ies in the 7nited 8ingdo# between 1990 and 2010. The people<s attendance is di(ided into four different age groups. ?(erall, younger people see#ed to, and are predicted to, be #ore acti(e in #o(ie going than their older counterparts. =owe(er, all four age groups showed a gradual increase in attendance nu#bers during the gi(en period, e.cept for a slight drop between 199+ and 2000. To be specific, a larger percentage of people between the ages of 2' and &' went to, and are e.pected to, go to the cine#a than those in any other age group. %ppro.i#ately +1: of the respondents fro# this age group are e.pected to attend #o(ies in 2010 co#pared with only &1: in 1990. *(en in the group that had the s#allest nu#ber of #o(ie goers, those between the ages of '' and +', there was an increase of 6: in their attendance. A161 wordsC
The graph above show information of employment rates across 2 countries in 111+ and 2,,+. )ummari;e the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and ma%e comparisons where appropriate. Jou should write at least 1+0 words.
model answer: The graph shows changes in e#ploy#ent rates in si. countries between 199+ and 200+, for #en and wo#en. ?(erall #ore and #ore people of wor"ing age are e#ployed, and there ha(e been significant i#pro(e#ents for wo#en, although they leg behind #en in entering the wor"force. The #ost ob(ious trend in the graph is that wo#en ha(e lower e#ploy#ent rates in #ost of the countries in the graph. 2or e.a#ple, in %ustralia in 199+, + percent of #en could find wor" or retain a 6ob, but only 2 percent of wo#en. The difference was e(en bigger in $ew Kealand, with 60 percent of wo#en. *(en in -wit!erland and Iceland, alightly #ore #en than wo#en were in the 6ob #ar"et. The second biggest trend in the graph is the i#pro(e#ent in e#ploy#ent between 199+ and 200+. In all countries shown, figures for both #en and wo#en i#pro(ed. The biggest change was in the 7nited 8ingdo#, fro# ++ percent of #en in 199+ to & percent o(er the ten years period. 2urther#ore, the increases in e#ploy#ent rates for wo#en were #uch higher in $ew Kealand. The percentage of wor"ing wo#en 6u#ped fro# 2+ percent to '2 percent, and in the 7nited -tates fro# '+ percent to 61 percent o(er the decade. In conclusion, all the countries in the graph showed at least a 12 percent increase in e#ploy#ent rates of both #en and wo#en o(er the ten yeares. 9hile #en had relati(ely higher e#ploy#ent rate throughout the period, #ore and #ore wo#en appear to be entering the labour #ar"et
The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 19+) and 19,) !rite a report for a university# lecturer describing the information shown below 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
model answer: The tab e shows that the figures for imprisonment in the fi'e countries mentioned indicate no o'era pattern of increase or decrease. In fact there is considerab e f uctuation from countr$ to countr$. In 9reat 3ritain the numbers in prison ha'e increased steadi $ from !" """ in 19!" to &",""" in 19&". 8n the other hand in %ustra ia, and particu ar $ in >ew ?ea and the numbers fe marked $ from 19!" to 19+". 2ince then the$ ha'e increased gradua $, apart from in 19&" when the numbers in prison in >ew ?ea and fe b$ about !",""" from the 197" tota . @anada is the on $ countr$ in which the numbers in prison ha'e decreased o'er the period 19!" to 19&", a though there ha'e been f uctuations in this trend. The figures for the 6nited 2tates indicate the greatest number of prisoners compared to the other four countries but popu ation siAe needs to be taken into account in this ana $sis. The prison popu ation in the 6nited 2tates increased rapid $ from 197" to 19&" and this must be a worr$ing trend.
The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to -ustralia by overseas residents The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from !rite a report for a university lecturer describing the information given 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
>6B37C 8F DI2IT8C2 -mi ion. 1975 ./0T% 1/2"3-4-5 6%750.827T-75 "02/4" Total #.9 !.# ".! ".+ ".9 1.1 &.& #""5 9.1 1#." ".& 1.1 #.9 +.5 !".+
model answer: The gi'en ine graph i ustrates information on the number of o'erseas 'isitors tra'e ing to %ustra ia in mi ions of peop e. 8'era , one notab e trend seems to be that %ustra ia has steadi $ become more popu ar as a destination spot. For examp e, there were #" mi ion more 'isitors to %ustra ia in #""5 than in 1975. That's a 4ump from 1" mi ion to !" mi ion in #" $ears. The second tab e gi'es statistics showing the countries whose residents went to %ustra ia between 1975 and #""5. In both $ears, the argest number of 'isitors came from Eapan, fo owed b$ 2outh Forea and 7urope. 3ritain, the 6nited 2tates and @hina a so had man$ peop e tra'e ing to %ustra ia in these $ears. In fact, the number of peop e 'isiting %ustra ia grew in e'er$ one of these countries. For examp e, in #""5, 1# mi ion peop e went there from Eapan compared with on $ !.# mi ion in 1975. -1+7 words.
The graphs show enrolment in different colleges in the %igher 6olleges of Technology in 1999 !rite a total of 15) 9 *)) words about the information in the three graphs !rite a report for a university lecturer describing the information given 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
model answer: The charts shows student enro ment b$ gender and e'e in different co eges of the 1igher @o eges of Techno og$ co eges in the 6%7. There are c ear differences in ma e and fema e enro ment. Fema es outnumber men in a the co eges, with a most #5< more students in :ubai (omen's co ege than in :ubai Ben's. Cas % *Fhaimah (omen's @o ege has a most 1&" students, compared to on $ 1"" in the Ben's co ege. Fema es a so outnumber ma es b$ e'e , with a most doub e the number of men at 1igher :ip oma e'e -!!" compared to 1&1.. 8n $ at :ip oma e'e does the number of men s ight $ exceed that of women. 8'er ha f the students are in @ertificate e'e , with ess than a Guarter at 1igher :ip oma or 3ache or e'e . In conc usion, most students in the 1igher @o eges are enro ed at :ip oma e'e or be ow, and the ma4orit$ of students are women. -1+! words.
The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 1)) people in selected countries !rite a report for a university lecturer describing the information given 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
model answer: The graph shows the number of mobi e phones and and ines per 1"" users, for se ected countries. 8'era , most of the countries inc uded in the graph ha'e more mobi e phones subscribers than and ines. Bost 7uropean countries ha'e high mobi e phone use. The biggest users of mobi e phones are the Ita ians, with && ce phones per 1"" peop e. For examp e, Ita $ has twice as man$ mobi e phones as and ines, with && mobi es per hundred peop e compared to +5 for and ines. Bobi e phone use is ow in @anada, with fewer than +" phones per 1"" peop e. :enmark is a so unusua because it has s ight $ more and ines than mobi e phones. 1owe'er, in some countries, the number of and ines is higher than the number of mobi e phones. 8ne examp e is the 62%, where the number of mobi es, at 5" per 1"" peop e, is much ower than the number of and ines, at a most 7" per hundred. % simi ar pattern can be seen in @anada. The highest number of and ines in the graph is in :enmark, with about 9" per 1"" peop e. In contrast, the owest figures for fixed ines are in Ita $ and the 6F. In conc usion, it seems that mobi e phone use is higher in 7urope than in >orth %merica.
The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year *))) !rite a report for a university lecturer describing the information below 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
model answer: In this report I wi describe a bar chart that shows the estimated wor d i iterac$ rates b$ gender and region for the $ear #""". First I wi ook at ma e i iterac$ for the , areas shown. The owest rates were in :e'e oped @ountries, =atin %merica)@aribbean and 7ast %sia)8ceania with rates of 1< -approximate $., 1"< and &< -approximate $. respecti'e $. The rates for the next three areas were much higher and Guite simi ar to each other. 2ub*2aharan %frica, the %rab 2tates and 2outh %sia had rates of approximate $ !1<, #9< and !+<. Fema e i iterac$ was much higher re ati'e $ in each area except =atin %merica)@aribbean where it was on $ s ight $ higher. The owest rates for fema e i iterac$ were again :e'e oped @ountries, =atin %merica)@aribbean and 7ast %sia)8ceania with rates of approximate $ #<, 1#< and #"<. %gain the rates for the next three areas were much higher and Guite simi ar to each other. 2ub*2aharan %frica, the %rab 2tates and 2outh %sia had rates of approximate $ +&<, 5#< and 5,<. This ends m$ report. -1,& words.
7n 3une 199:# an e;perimental flu vaccine was trialled in a large country town on females only .ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features# and make comparisons where relevant
0ou shou d write at east 15" words. 9i'e reasons for $our answer and inc ude an$ re e'ant examp es from $our own know edge or experience.
model answer: The diagrams show data for a f u epidemic which hit a arge countr$ town in 199,. Figure 1 gi'es the number of persons who diedH Figure # shows the percentage breakdown of fema es who recei'ed a new f u 'accineH and Figure ! gi'es the number of cases of f u before and during the epidemic. In Figure 1 it can be seen that the f u was responsib e for the deaths of # fema es but no ma es in the period from Barch to Ba$. 1owe'er, from Eune to %ugust, there were + fema e deaths and 1 ma e death. %ccording to the pie chart in Figure #, on $ those fema es most at risk were gi'en the new f u 'accineH #&< did not take part in the tria . 8f those fema es who took part, !5< were aged -o'er ,5 $ears o d.H #+< were babies or chi drenH and 1!< were either hospita ised or recei'ing other medica attention. From Figure ! it is c ear that the new 'accine had a positi'e effect on the number of new cases of f u reported in fema es. There were 4ust o'er 1""" cases reported in Barch, c imbing rapid $ to a peak of !5"" in Eune. Thereafter, the number of cases dropped s ow $ to about #&"" in %ugust, before e'e ing off at #5"" for the rest of the $ear. For ma es, the figures were ower but showed a simi ar trend throughout the epidemic. -#!# words. The table below shows 6/* emissions for different forms of transport in the "uropean 0nion The 4ie 6hart shows the percentage of "uropean 0nion funds being spent on different forms of transport 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
9i'e reasons for $our answer and inc ude an$ re e'ant examp es from $our own know edge or experience.
model answer: The chart shows @8# emissions per passenger ki ometre for 'ariuos methods of transport in the 7uropean 6nion whi e the pie chart shows 7uropean 6nion spending on transport. F $ing b$ air produces b$ far the greatest @8# emissions, approximate $ three times as much as passenger cars which are the next argest producers. Der$ itt e is spent b$ the 76 on air tra'e whi e roads make up more than ha f of the 76 transport budget. Trains produce about three times ess @8# emissions per passenger ki ometre than passenger cars and eight times ess than air tra'e . >ear $ a third of 76 transport funds are spent on rai wa$s. 2hips are a c ean form of transport and produce about the same amount of @8# per passenger
ki ometre as trains do. 1owe'er, on $ # percent of 76 funds are spent on ports. % further one percent is spent on in and waterwa$s. @oaches are the c eanest form of transport. 7missions of @8# per passenger ki ometre from coaches are ha f those of buses. 3uses emit ess than ha f as much @8# per passenger ki ometre as cars. The 7uropean 6nion spends 1" percent of its transport budget on pub ic transport, such as buses and coaches. -197 words.
The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit9down restaurants 0ou shou d write at east 15" words. 9i'e reasons for $our answer and inc ude an$ re e'ant examp es from $our own know edge or experience.
model answer: 8'er the past !" $ears, the a'erage fami $ has dramatica $ increased the number of mea s that the$ eat at restaurants. The percentage of the fami $'s food budget spent on restaurant mea s steadi $ c imbed. Eust 1" percent of the food budget was spent on restaurant mea s in 197", and 15 percent in 19&". That percentage more than doub ed in 199", to !5 percent, and rose again in #""" to 5" percent. (here fami ies eat their restaurant mea s a so changed during that !"*$ear period. In 197", fami ies ate the same number of mea s at fast food and sit*down restaurants. In 19&", famIi ies ate s ight $ more freGuent $ at sit*down restaurants. 1owe'er, since 199", fast food restaurants ser'e more mea s to the fami ies than do the sit*down restaurants. Bost of the restaurant mea s from #""" were eaten at fast food restaurants. If this pattern continues, e'entua $ the number of mea s that fami ies eat at fast food restaurants cou d doub e the number of mea s the$ eat at sit*down restaurants. -1,+ words. The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web !rite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
model answer: The graph shows peop e using new music p aces on the Internet in fifteen da$s period of time name $ persona choice and trend$ pop music. The o'era trend shows f uctuation with s ight Increased towards the end of the period.
2tarting with Busic @hoice websitesH +",""" poep e went on this new site on first*da$. 1a f of them backed out the next da$. In @ontrast to this ;op ;arade net sites were 'isited b$ 1#",""" music o'ers on da$ one which decreased s ight $ on the next da$ thereafter regaining the same fame on !rd da$. %fter !rd da$ the enthusiasm for both music ines on Internet dropped s ow $* reaching maximum fa of +",""" on 7th da$. (hereas Busic choice gained popu arit$, s ight $ Improo'ing to get the origina strength of !",""" 'iewers on screen, but was getting sti 'isiters than their opponent ;op group i.e. +",""" on da$ 7.
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In the biegining of the next week both gained remarkab e reco'er$ after a few f uctuations for &th and 9th da$ ha'ing +",""" and 5",""" 'isiters respecti'e $, reaching to their peaks of one and a ha f thousand new 'iewers for ;op ;arade on 11th da$ showing a contrast of 'er$ few peop e 'isiting Busic choice for the same da$. Thereafter Busic choice gained popu arit$ on 1#th da$ for ha'ing more than 1#",""" new 'isiters on web. In the end of the period ;op sites were 'isited b$ maximum 'iewers of 1&",""" whereas sites ocated to Busic choice were not exp ored b$ more than &",""" exp orers on the ast da$ of the report. -#57 words.
This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 6 score. Here is the examiner's comment: (e organiAed with some good inking de'ices and co ocations -gain popu arit$, remarkab e reco'er$, decrease s ight $. and some 'a id comparison of the music sites. 1owe'er, some sentences are ong and confusing -paragraph 5., some co ocations are inaccurate -s ight increased, reaching to their peaks. and there is some repetition -7th da$, !rd da$, 11 th da$.. 2ome words are spe t incorrect $ -poep e, Improo'ing, 'isiters, biegining..
The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a ma<or company The survey was carried out on two groups of workers= those aged from 1,9+) and those aged 459:)# and shows factors affecting their work performance !rite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
model answer: The bar chart indicates a sur'e$ on two different age groups on the factors contributing to make their en'ironment p easant for working. These factors are di'ided into externa and interna factors. The interna factors are team spirit, competent boss, respect from co eagues and 4ob satisfaction. The externa factors are chance for persona de'e opment, 4ob securit$, promotiona prospects and mone$. 8n the interna factors abo'e 5"< in both age groups agreed that team spirit, competent boss and 4ob satisfaction are essentia to make their en'ironment p easant. (hereas on the externa factors, there are contrasting resu ts. 8n the chance for persona de'e opment and promotiona aspects, &"< to 9"< of the $ounger groups were in fa'or whi e on $ ess than 5"< of the o der group thought so. % simi ar pattern is a so noted on 4ob securit$. (ith regards to mone$, ,9< to 7"< on both age group said it is essentia . In conc usion, the interna factors ha'e simi ar responses from the two age groups whi e the$ had dissimi ar responses on the externa factors. -17" words.
This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 7 score. Here is the examiner's comment: The information contained in the bar chart has been described accurate $ and concise $ and fo ows a c ear progression. There is a c ear introduction fo owed b$ effecti'e comparisons between the age groups and a 'a id conc usion. 9ood formu aic phrases -the bar chart indicates, these factors are di'ided., a though the candidate uses the same anguage to describe the factors in the bar chart and does not attempt to rephrase them in an$ wa$.
#5+ The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of -ustralian children !rite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
model answer: The graph shows the preferred eisure scti'ities of %ustra ian chi dren aged 5*1+. %s might be expected, it is c ear from the data that sedentar$ pursuits are far more popu ar nowada$s than acti'e ones. 8f the 1",""" chi dren that were inter'iewed, a the bo$s and gir s stated that the$ en4o$ed watching TD or 'ideos in their spare time. In addition, the second most popu ar acti'it$, attracting &"< of bo$s and ,"< of gir s, was p a$ing e ectronic or computer games. (hi e
gir s rated acti'ities such as art and craft high $ J 4ust under ,"< stated that the$ en4o$ed these in their spare time J on $ !5< of bo$s opted for creati'e pastimes. 3ike riding, on the other hand, was a most as popu ar as e ectronic games amongst bo$s and, perhaps surprising $, a most ,"< of gir s said that the$ en4o$ed this too. 2kateboarding was re ati'e $ ess popu ar amongst both bo$s and gir s, a though it sti attracted !5< of bo$s and #5< of gir s. -157 words. The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries .ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features# and make comparisons where relevant (rite at east 15" words.
6ountry 3raAi
4opulation 7rrigated land !ater consumption per person 17, mi ion #,,5"" kmK 1"" kmK !59 mL & mL
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The graph shows how the amount of water used wor dwide changed between 19"" and #""". Throughout the centur$, the argest Guantit$ of water was used for agricu tura ;urposes, and this increased dramatica $ from about 5"" kmL to around !,""" kmL in the $ear #""". (ater used in the industria and domestic sectors a so increased, but consumption was minima unti
mid*centur$. From 195" onwards, industria use grew steadi $ to 4ust o'er 1,""" kmL, whi e domestic use rose more s ow $ to on $ !"" kmL, both far be ow the e'e s of consumption b$ agricu ture. The tab e i ustrates the differences in agricu ture consumption in some areas of the wor d b$ contrasting the amount of irrigated and in 3raAi -#,,5"" kmL. with that in the :.C.@. -1"" kmK.. This means that a huge amount of water is used in agricu ture in 3raAi , and this is ref ected in the figures for water consumption per person5 !59 mL compared with on $ & mL in the @ongo. (ith a popu ation of 17, mi ion, the figures for 3raAi indicate how high agricu ture water consumption can be in some countries. -1&" words.
#54 The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works .ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features# and make comparisons where relevant 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
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This diagram pro'ides an o'er'iew of a domestic centra heating s$stem. It shows how the tank, boi er and pipes ensure a constant f ow of hot waterto both the radiators and the taps. The co d water enters the house and is stored in a water storage tank in the roof. From there M f ows down to the boi er, ocated on the ground f oor of the house. The boi er, which is fue ed b$ gas or oi , heats up the water as it passes through it. The hot water is then pumped round the house through a s$stem of pipes and f ows into the radiators, ocated in different rooms. The water circu ates through the radiators, which ha'e sma tubes inside them to he p distribute the heat, and this warms each of the rooms. 2ome of the water is directed to the taps to pro'ide hot water for the house. 8nce the water has been through the pipes and radiators, it is returned to the boi er to be re* heated and circu ated round the house again. 7ntroduction= First sentence. 8'er'iew5 2econd sentence. 1ey features= 7ntr$ of co d water into boi erH circu ation of hot waterto radiators and tapsH return of waterto boi er. .upporting information= direction of f owH t$pes of boi erH ocation of radiatorsH radiator tubes 4aragraph breaks= The paragraph breaks mark stages in the process. >inkers= and, from there, then, once, again Ceference words5 it, both, there, which, this Topic vocabulary= enters, stored, roof, f ows, ground f oor, ocated, passes, pumped, s$stem, circu ates, heat, directed, returned, re*heated >ess common vocabulary= ensure, fue ed b$, heats up, distribute the heat, warms .tructures= %n appropriate mix of acti'e and passi'e structures and a range of sentence t$pes are used. >ength= 17# words
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The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed bac% to earlier stages to enable ad.ustment. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process shown.
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model answer: ,ost consu#er goods go through a series of stages before they e#erge as finished products ready for sale. Iaw #aterials and #anufactured co#ponents co#prise the initial physical input in the #anufacturing process. ?nce obtained, these are stored for later asse#bly. 0ut asse#bly first depends upon the production planning stage, where it is decided how and in what ;uantities the stored #aterials will be processed to create sufficient ;uantities of finished goods. The production planning stage itself follows the re;uire#ents of the goods< design stage that proceeds fro# e.tensi(e research. %fter asse#bly, the products are inspected and tested to #aintain ;uality control l Those units that pass the inspection and testing stages are then pac"aged, despatched and offered for sale in retail outlets. The le(el of sales, which is the end point of the #anufacturing process, helps deter#ine production planning. % product<s design is not only the result of product research, but is also influenced by testing and #ar"et research. If the testing stage Aafter asse#bly and inspectionC re(eals unacceptable proble#s in the finished product, then ad6ust#ents will ha(e to be #ade to the product<s design. -i#ilarly, #ar"et research, which e.a#ines the e.tent and nature of the de#and for products, has the role of guiding product design to suit consu#er de#ands which #ay change with ti#e. ,ar"et
research, while influenced by product sales, also ser(es to foster future sales by de(ising suitable ad(ertising for the goods. Thus the reality of consu#er goods #anufacturing goes well beyond a si#ple linear production process. The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 111<, according to 'nited 8ations statistics. escribe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries=
*ou should write at least 1+, words. /llow yourself 2, minutes for this tas%. 6ndicators %nnual inco#e per person Ain /7-C )ife e.pectancy at birth 4aily calorie supply per person %dult literacy rate A:C Canada 11100 6 &&26 99 3apan 1+ 60 1 21'6 99 7eru 160 +1 192 61 >aire 1&0 ' 1 '9 &'
model answer: % glance at four indicators of econo#ic and social conditions in four countries, Canada, Bapan, Deru and Kaire, in 199' reflects the great differences that e.ist between wealthier and poorer nations. The table shows that Bapan and Canada had annual inco#es of /1+ 60 and /11 100 per person, respecti(ely. These figures were o(erwhel#ingly greater than the corresponding figures of /160 in Deru and /1&0 in Kaire. =ealth indicators, too, reflected o(erall le(els of affluence in the four nations. )ife e.pectancy at birth, for e.a#ple, was higher a#ong the #ore econo#ically de(eloped countries. Bapan reported the highest life e.pectancy, 1. This was followed by Canada, 6H Deru, +1H and Kaire, ' H This suggests that richer societies are able to put #ore #oney into health care than poorer ones. The a#ount of calories consu#ed daily per person roughly followed the sa#e ran"ing. Canadians each consu#ed so#e & &26 calories per day while the Bapanese too" 21'6 calories. The corresponding figures for Deru and Kaire were 192 and 1 '9, respecti(ely. )iteracy rates a#ong adults, too, were higher in wealthier countries, no doubt a reflection of ability to in(est in education. Canada and Bapan both reported literacy rates of 99:, while Deru clai#ed 61:. Kaire, the least econo#ically de(eloped of the four countries, had a literacy rate of &':. The data appear to confir# the often cited lin" between national wealth and health and education standards. The chart below shows the sleep patterns of people in five different occupations according to a Canadian study. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information below. 5ive possible reasons for the differences.
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@ccupation 6- p# -1 p# 1-9 p# 9-10 p# 10-11 p# 11-12 p# 12-1 a# 1-2 a# 2-& a# &-' a# '-+ a# +-6 a# 6- a# -1 a# 1-9 a# 9-10 a# 10-11 a# 11-12 a# 12-1 p# 1-2 p# 2-& p# &-' p# '-+ p# +-6 p#
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Aull-time mother
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model answer: 4ifferences in sleep patterns appear to reflect differences in indi(iduals< occupations. % Canadian study has pointed out, for e.a#ple, that students typically sleep for a consecuti(e 1hour period each night, fro# 11 p.#. to a.#. This #ay be because the central acti(ity in their li(es, study, ta"es place in nor#al daylight hours. -i#ilarly, business e.ecuti(es sleep consecuti(e hours, but perhaps because their 6obs are especially busy and stressful they sleep for 6 hours on a(erage, getting up around + a.#.. 0y contrast, truc" dri(ers, probably because of their need to "eep their truc"s on the road o(er long periods, tend to sleep in two &-hour bloc"s@ one between and 10 a.#. and another fro# ' to p.#. %nother occupation associated with bro"en sleep schedules is that of doctors. They tend to retire to bed around 1 a.#. and start their day at a.#.., but #ay be wo"en up to deal with e#ergencies in the #iddle of the night. 2inally, full-ti#e #others, especially those with young children, tend to sleep when their babies do. Typically, they will sleep fro# 10 p.#. and be awo"en at 1 a.#. to co#fort their babies for a couple of hours. They then go bac" to bed to wa"e at 6 a.#., but nap for two hours or so in the early afternoon. Thus the influence on one<s sleep pattern is worthy of consideration when choosing an occupation. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below.
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model answer: The table shows how people in different age groups spend their leisure ti#e in -o#eland o(er the course of a year. It can be clearly seen that the a#ount of leisure ti#e a(ailable (aries considerably across the age groups and that people of different age le(els ha(e (ery different ways of spending their leisure ti#e. %ccording to the figures, as people age in -o#eland their social li(es reduce. Teenagers and people in their twenties spend on a(erage +00 hours per year on socialising and &+0 hours of that ti#e is with a group of #ore than ' people. %lthough the total hours of socialising in their &0s, '0s, +0s and 60s is fairly constant Abetween &00-&+0C, socialising with #ore than ' people drops dra#atically to +0 hours in the &0s and '0s age groups and only 2+ fro# +0 years old. Eroup and indi(idual e.ercise follow a si#ilar pattern. Deople of all ages spend a good part of their leisure ti#e on entertain#ent such as T53(ideo (iewing and cine#a. In both cases, teenagers and retired people spend around twice as #uch ti#e as those who are at wor"ing age. =o#e entertain#ent ranges fro# 6ust o(er a thousand hours for teenagers and retired people and an a(erage of 600 hours for e(eryone else. Cine#a accounts for 100 hours of the teenagers and retired peopleLs leisure ti#e and 2+-+0 hours for the rest. In conclusion we can see there is a significant trend towards solitary and s#aller group acti(ities as people grow older and that teenagers and retired people spend a lot #ore ti#e on entertain#ent than those of wor"ing age do.
The table below shows the consumer durables $telephone# refrigerator# etc & owned in 8ritain from 197* to 19,+ !rite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 0ou shou d write at east 15" words. @onsumer durab es ;ercentage of househo ds with5 197# 197+ 197, 197& 1979 19&1 19&# 19&!
centra heating te e'ision 'ideo 'acuum c eaner refrigerator washing machine dishwasher te ephone
!9 9! &7 7! ,, +#
+& 9, 9# && 71 5+
5# 9, 9# 91 75 ! ,"
55 97 9! 9# 7+ ! ,7
59 97 9+ 9! 7& + 75
," 97 95 9! 79 + 7,
model answer: The chart shows that the percentage of 3ritish househo ds with a range of consumer durab es steadi $ increased between 197# and 19&!. The greatest increase was in te ephone ownership, rising from +#< in 197# to 77< in 19&!. >ext came centra heating ownership, rising from !7< of househo ds in 197# to ,+< in 19&!. The percentage of househo ds with a refrigerator rose # 1< o'er the same period and of those with a washing machine b$ 1+<. 1ouseho ds with 'acuum*c eaners. te e'isions and dishwashers increased b$ &<, 5< and #< respecti'e $. In 19&!. the $ear of their introduction, 1&< of househo ds had a 'ideo recorder. The significant socia changes ref ected in the statistics are that o'er the period the proportion of 3ritish houses with centra heating rose from one to two thuds, and of those with a phone from under a ha f to o'er three*Guarters. Together with the big increases in the ownership of washing machines and refrigerators, the$ are e'idence of both rising i'ing standards and the trend to ifest$ es based on comfort and con'enience.
The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district .ummari?e the information by selecting and reporting the main features# and make comparisons where relevant 0ou shou d write at east 15" words. 9i'e reasons for $our answer and inc ude an$ re e'ant examp es from $our own know edge or experience. .ales= week of /ctober 791+ Tues !ed Thurs Fri N#,+5" N#,595 N!,&5" N!,++5 N#,!75 N#,5"" N!,&"" N+,!5"
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The sa es at this sma restaurant during the week of 8ctober 7 to 1!th fo owed a fair $ set pattern from Bonda$ to Frida$, and then showed notab e shift on the weekend. The unch and dinner sa es during the week peaked on Frida$ and then dipper down as the weekend set in. :uring the week of 8ctober 7*1+th, the unch sa es a'eraged at approximate $ N#,+"". The highest unch sa es occurred on Frida$, and the owest occurred on 2unda$. 2unda$'s unch sa es were approximate $ N1,""" ess than the a'erage unch sa es during the rest of the week. :inner sa es, which generated at east N1,""" to N1,5"" more a da$ than unch sa es, a so remained stead$ during the week. Eust ike the unch sa es, the dinner sa es peak on Frida$ and dipped down for the weekend. 7xc uding (ednesda$ and Thursda$, the unch and dinner sa es from 8ctober 7*11 rose gradua $ unti the end of the business week. Bidweek, on (ednesda$ and Thursda$, the sa es were s ight $ ower than the$ were on Tuesda$. %ccording to the sa es report, this restaurant has a stead$ unch and dinner crowd. The most profitab e da$ during the second week of 8ctober was Frida$. 2unda$, was the east profIitab e da$, with the fu da$'s sa es tota ing)tota ing ess than the Frida$ dinner sa es. These numbers are ref ecti'e of a restaurant that is ocated in a business)financia district where business hours are Bonda$ through Frida$. -#!+ words.
The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district .ummari?e the information by selecting and reporting the main features# and make comparisons where relevant 0ou shou d write at east 15" words. 9i'e reasons for $our answer and inc ude an$ re e'ant examp es from $our own know edge or experience. Fu fi ing the (ork 7xperience CeGuirement @redits wi be awarded when the fina report is submitted. %pp ication @hoose potentia workp aces from appro'ed ist and arrange inter'iews. 2ubmit app ications to p aces of interest. %ppro'a (hen acceptance etter is recei'ed, submit it to professor for appro'a .
2chedu e %rrange schedu e to work a minimum of 1" hours) week o'er #" weeks. Ceports @omp ete week $ Ceport Form and submit to professor e'er$ Frida$. 7'a uation :uring fina workweek, participate in e'a uation meeting with work super'isor. 2uper'isor submits 7'a uation Form. Fina Ceport 2ubmit Fina Ceport before ast week of spring term.
model answer: 9aining work experience prior to graduation he ps uni'ersit$ students to succeed in getting their first 4ob. For this reason, some uni'ersities insist that a students must comp ete a (ork 7xperience CeGuirement. @omp eting the fo owing six stages resu ts in the reGuirementsO fu fi ment. The process begins with the %pp ication stage. % student re'iews an appro'ed ist of workp aces and submits app ications to p aces where he wou d ike to work. >ext is the %ppro'a stage. (hen a student recei'es an acceptance etter, he gi'es it to the professor for appro'a . The third stage, 2chedu e, reGuires a student to arrange his work schedu e. The student shou d work at east 1" hours)week o'er #" weeks. Ceports are next. The student must comp ete a (eek $ Ceport Form and turn it in to the professor e'er$ Frida$. The fifth stage, 7'a uation, takes p ace during the fina work week. % student participates in an e'a uation meeting with his work super'isor, who submits an 7'a uation Form. The ast stage reGuires that a student submit a Fina Ceport before the ast week of spring semester. 3$ fo owing these stages and subseGuent $ submitting the fina report, the student recei'es credit from the uni'ersit$. -19# words.
The map below is of the town of Aarlsdon - new supermarket $.& is planned for the town The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket .ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features# and make comparisons where relevant 0ou shou d write at east 15" words. 9i'e reasons for $our answer and inc ude an$ re e'ant examp es from $our own know edge or experience.
model answer: The first potentia ocation -21. is outside the town itse f, and is sited 4ust off the main road to the town of 1indon, $ing 1# kms to the north*west. This site is in the countr$side and so wou d be ab e to accommodate a ot of car parking. This wou d make it accessab e to shoppers from both 1indon and 9ar sdon who cou d tra'e b$ car. %s it is a so c ose to the rai wa$ ine inking the who towns to @ransdon -#5 km to the south*east., a potentia $ arge number of shoppers wou d a so be ab e to tra'e b$ train. In contrast, the suggested ocation, 2#, is right in the town centre, which wou d be good for oca residents. Theorica $ the store cou d be accessed b$ road or rai from the surrounding towns, inc uding 3ransdon, but as the centra area is a no*traffic Aone, cars wou d be unab e to
park and access wou d be difficu t. 8'era , neither site is appropriate for a the towns, but for customers in @ransdon, 1indon and 9ar sdon, the out*of*town site -21. wou d probab $ offer more ad'antages. -179 words.
The take below gives information about the underground railway systems in si; cities .ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features# and make comparisons where relevant 0ou shou d write at east 15" words. 0nderground 2ailways .ystems
6ity 'ate opened 1ilometres of route 4assengers per year $in millions&
model answer: The tab e shows the detai s regarding the underground rai wa$ s$stems in six cities. =ondon has the o dest underground rai wa$ s$stems among the six cities. It was opened in the $ear 1&,!, and it is a read$ $e $ears o d. ;aris is the second o dest, in which it was opened in the $ear 19"". This was then fo owed b$ the opening of the rai wa$ s$stems in Tok$o, (ashington :@ and F$oto. =os %nge es has the newest underground rai wa$ s$stem, and was on $ opened in the $ear #""1. In terms of the siAe of the rai wa$ s$stems, =ondon, For certain, has the argest underground rai wa$ s$stems. It has !9+ ki ometres of route in tota , which is near $ twice as arge as the s$stem in ;aris. F$oto, in contrast, has the sma est s$stem. It on $ has 11 ki ometres of route, which is more than !" times ess than that of =ondon. Interesting $, Tok$o, which on $ has 155 ki ometres of route, ser'es the greatest number of passengers per $ear, at 19#7 mi ions passengers. The s$stem in ;aris has the second greatest number of passengers, at 1191 mi ions passengers per $ear. The sma est underground rai wa$ s$stem, F$oto, ser'es the sma est number of passengers per $ear as predicted. In conc usion, the underground rai wa$ s$stems in different cities 'ar$ a ot in the site of the s$stem, the number of passengers ser'ed per $ear and in the age of the s$stem.
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The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in -ustralia in 1999 .ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features# and make comparisons where relevant 0ou shou d write at east 15" words. 9i'e reasons for $our answer and inc ude an$ re e'ant examp es from $our own know edge or experience. Family type
sing e aged person aged coup e sing e, no chi dren coup e, no chi dren so e parent coup e with chi dren all households
model answer: The tab e gi'es a breakdown of the different t$pe of fami $ who were i'ing in po'ert$ in %ustra ia in 1999. 8n a'erage, 11< of a househo ds, comprising a most two mi ion peop e, were in this
position. 1owe'er, those consisting of on $ one parent or a sing e adu t had a most doubt this proportion of poor peop e, with #1< and 19< respecti'e $. @oup es genera $ tended to be better off, with ower po'ert$ e'e s for coup es without chi dren -7<. than those with chi dren -1#<.. It is noticeab e that for both t$pes of househo d with chi dren, a higher than a'erage proportion were i'ing in po'ert$ at this time. 8 der peop e were genera $ ess ike $ to be poor, though once again the trend fa'oured e der$ coup es -on $ +<. rather than sing e e der$ peop e -,<.. 8'era the tab e suggests that househo ds of sing e adu ts and those with chi dren were more ike $ to be i'ing in po'ert$ than those consisting of coup es. -15+ words. The diagram below gives the information about the %awaiian island chain in the centre of the 4acific /cean !rite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
model answer: The 1awaiian is and chain, in the centre of the ;acific 8cean, is approximate $ #,7"" km in ength. It is formed of 'o canoes and the acti'e ones are at the south*east tip of the archipe ago, where 1awaii itse f is ocated. It is be ie'ed that the chain began to form near $ &" mi ion $ears ago. 7ach is and started to e'o 'e after an eruption on the sea f oor. First, a Phot spot' existed on the ocean bed, which et out a p ume of materia ca ed magma. This magma ma$ originate as deep as #,&&!km be ow the ocean bed. >ext, further eruptions took p ace, which bui t up the 'o cano. 7'entua $, it emerged abo'e the surface of the ocean. 2ince that time, the spume of magma has remained static as the ;acific tectonic p ate mo'es in a north*west direction across it at a speed of 7*9cm per $ear. %s it mo'es, a 'o cano forms as it passes o'er the hotspot and then become inacti'e when it has passed it.
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The diagrams below give information about the "iffel Tower in 4aris and an outline pro<ect to e;tend it underground !rite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown 0ou shou d write at east 15" words.
model answer: The 7iffe Tower is situated c ose to the 2eine Ci'er in ;aris. It is a meta structure that is 1,",! feet high and weighs 7,+17 tonnes. The tower has been a tourist attraction since 1&&9, when it was bui t, and there are 1,,,5 steps that can be c imbed in order to reach the two 'iewing p atforms. There are now p ans to bui d be ow the foundations of the tower. These p ans inc ude the de'e opment of fi'e underground e'e s that wi incorporate the tower's ticket office, shopping faci ities, a cinema and museum and two f oors of underground parking. % though detai s ha'e $et to be fina ised, the princip e is that the fi'e f oors wi be connected b$ two 'ertica passenger ifts on either side of the tower. In addition, the f oor immediate $ be ow the tower, which is p anned to house the ticket office, wi a so consist of a arge atrium with a g ass cei ing so that 'isitors can ook direct $ up at the tower itse f. -1,# words.
The table below provide information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of >ondon !rite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 0ou shou d write at east 15" words. Weekly rents per property (/w) -rea >otting 1i Cegent's ;ark Fu ham 1 bed !75 !#5 #15 * bed +&5 +5" !9" + bed 7!& ,5" ,"" alaries needed (/year) 1 bed * bed + bed 9&,5"" 1#7,5"" 19+,""" &5,5"" 11&,""" 17",5"" 5,,5"" 1"#,5"" 157,5""
model answer: The tab e shows two sets of re ated information5 the re ati'e cost, in pounds, of renting a propert$ with one, two or three bedrooms in three different suburbs of =ondon and an indication of the kind of annua sa ar$ $ou wou d need to be earning to rent in these areas. 8f the three areas mentioned, >otting 1i is the most expensi'e with week $ rents starting at Q!75 -sa ar$ approximate $ f 1"",""". and rising to Q7!& per week for a !*bedroom propert$. To afford this, $ou wou d reGuire a sa ar$ in the region of Q#"",""" per annum. % ternati'e $, Fu ham is the cheapest area shown with rents ranging from Q#15 per week for a one bedroom propert$ to Q,"" per week for a !*bedroom propert$. To rent in this area, sa aries need to be somewhere between Q&5,""" and Q17",""" depending on the number of bedrooms reGuired. For those ab e to pa$ in the midd e price range for accommodation, Cegent's ;ark might be a more suitab e district.
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