Error Analysis
Error Analysis
REPORTING A SCHOOLOFTHEELEVENTHYEARSTUDENTSOFSMA
NEGERI1SEMININ2011
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TEACHERTRAININGANDEDUCATIONFACULTY
WIDYADHARMAUNIVERSITYKLATEN
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This research report has been approved by the consultant and the lecturer of
Error Analysis of English Department of the Faculty of Teacher Training and
EducationofWidyaDharmaUniversity.
Klaten,January2012
Drs.PurwoHaryono,M.Hum
Consultant
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
Praise to Allah SWT, Lord of the Universe that the writer is finally able to
finish her research report. This research report is writen to fulfill one of the
requirementsforgraduatingErrorAnalysisLessoninfifthsemester.
The writer deeply realizes that this research is prepared with so much help
from others. So in this chance, the writer would like to express her sincerely
gratitudeandapreciationto:
1. Drs.PurwoHaryono,M.Hum,thelecturerofErrorAnalysisLesson,whohave
patiently given their guidance, suggestion, correction, and motivation from the
beginningofwritingthisresearchtothewriter.
2. Beloved parents and my older sisters who give help in form of spirit, love,
materialandmoral.
3. Mr. Cornel as English teacher of SMA Negeri1Seminwho givesthewriternew
opinionandeverythingtofinishthisresearch.
4. The students of class XI Social III and the students of class XI Science 11 of
SMANegeri1CeperKlatenwhohelpthewritertodothisresearch.
5. The beloved friends (my boarding house friends The cebrettas,), my closely
friends (Terangi, Winda, Syabila, Rifqi, Affan, Kurniawan, Fitri), my social
networkfriends(Facebook,YahooKoprol,andMigg33)
The writerisreallyawarethatthisresearchisfarfrombeingperfectbecauseof
her limited knowledge and experience. Therefore,thewriterwillreceivewiththanks
thecriticsandsuggestionforthesakeofperfectionofthisresearch.
Finally, the writer deeply hopes that this research can be real contribution to
theimprovementofteachingEnglishinIndonesia.
Klaten,December2011
Thewriter
TABLEOFCONTENT
TITLE
APPROVAL
ii
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
iii
TABLEOFCONTENT
ABSTRACT
vii
CHAPTERIINTRODUCTION
A.
TheBackgroundoftheStudy
B.
TheReasonforChoosingtheTopic
C.
TheLimitationoftheStudy
D.
TheStatementoftheProblem
E.
TheAimoftheStudy
F.
TheUseoftheStudy
G.
TheClarificationoftheKeyTerms
H.
TheOrganizationoftheStudy
CHAPTERIIREVIEWOFRELATEDLITERATURE
A.
B.
C.
ContrastiveAnalysis
1. TheMeaningofContrastiveAnalysis
2. TheHypothesisofContrastiveAnalysis
ErrorAnalysis
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1. TheMeaningofErrorAnalysis
10
2. TheSourcesofError
11
3. TheTypes/KindsofError
15
4. ThePracticalUsesofErrorAnalysis
20
5. TheMethodologyofErrorAnalysis
21
TheTheoryofWriting
23
D.
ReportText.......................................................................29
CHAPTERIIITHEMETHODOFTHESTUDY
A.
TheMeaningofResearchMethod
32
B.
TheStrategyoftheResearch
32
C.
TheDataandtheSourceofData
33
D.
TheTechniqueofCollectingtheData
34
E.
TheTechniqueofAnalyzingtheData
34
CHAPTERIVTHERESULTOFTHESTUDY
A.
TheAnalysisoftheData
36
B.
TheDiscussionoftheFindings
50
CHAPTERVCONCLUSION,IMPLICATIONANDSUGGESTION
A.
Conclusion
54
B.
Implication
55
C.
Suggestion
55
BIBLIOGRAPHY
APPENDIX
ABSTRACT
This research aims at giving description on the errors done by the eleventh
year studentsofSMANegeri 1 Seminin2011.Thewriterrevealstheerrorsandtheir
factor contributing to the errors as the answer of the problem of this study namely
omissionandmisorderingerror(1omissionofprepositionandmisorderingof clause,
and omission of pronoun and misordering of clause),2 misordering and omission
error (misordering of adverb, omission of article, and omission of pronoun and
misordering of clause and omission of preposition), 1 misformation addition and
misordering error (misformation of verb, addition of pronoun and misordering of
clause) and the last 1 omission, misordering and omission error (1 omission of
preposition,misorderingofverb,andomissionofrelativepronoun.
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CHAPTERI
INTRODUCTION
A.
TheBackgroundoftheStudy
Communication is the process of delivering information or an idea, and
expressing human feeling each other. Human needs a language to communicate
with other people. Language is used for communication. When people want to
speak or to deliver the information with the other people, they can not do it
withoutlanguage.
Language is a means of communicationwhichtakesanimportantrolein
human life. As social being, people cannot be separated from language since
theyneedtocommunicatetoothersbyalanguageasthemedium.
OneoftheinternationallanguagesuseduntilnowisEnglish.Inthiscase,
English as a means of communication has the most important role. Obviously
English has dominated world communication either in speaking or writing.
Without learningEnglish,itcanbeestimatedthatacountrywillbeleftbehindin
makingcooperationwithforeignersinimprovingthepowerofknowledge.
English is as a foreign language in Indonesia. It means English is the
second language for Indonesian people. It makes English important, so that
Englishmustbelearntbythelearners.EnglishistaughtatJuniorHighSchoolfor
the beginner, but in this time English is taught at elementary school and
kindergartenasintroductionandsupplementarysubject.
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B.
TheReasonforChoosingtheTopic
Thereasonswhythewriterhaschosenthetopicareasfollows:
1.
2.
3.
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C.
TheLimitationoftheStudy
In order to focus the topic discussed in this study the writer limits the
discussionasfollows:
ThestudyislimitedtotheeleventhyearstudentsofSMANegeri1Seminin
1.
2011.
This study is limited to know the errors done by the eleventh year students
2.
inclassXIofSMANegeri1Seminin2011inmakingareporttext.
The data that are analyzed are limitedtothosetakenfromthetest by asking
3.
thestudentstowriteareporttextabout
School.
D.
TheStatementoftheProblem
In this study, the writer would like to present the problem of the study is
what kinds of grammatical errors are found inthestudentswritingofreporting
ASchool
oftheeleventhyearstudentsofSMANegeri1Seminin2011?
E.
TheAimoftheStudy
Based on the problem above, the writerhastheaimasfollow:toidentifyand
describe kinds of errors in writing a report teks entitled
A
School
that isdone
byeleventhyearstudentsofSMANegeri1Seminin2011.
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F.
TheUsesoftheStudy
Theuseofthestudycanbeclassifiedinto:
1.
Thetheoreticaluse.
The result of this study is hoped to be able to enrich therepertoireof
teachingwritingtheory.
2.
Thepracticaluse.
This study can be used to improve the teaching of English especially
inteachingwriting.
G.
TheClarificationoftheKeyTerms
To make the topic easy to understand, the writer clarifies the terms of the
studyasfollows:
1.
Error
According to Sujoko (1989: 5), an error is noticeable deviation from the
Analysis
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examining its parts and their relationship a statement of the result. From the
quotation above, analysis is the study oferrorsdonebytheeleventhyearstudents
ofSMANegeri1Seminongrammarofdescriptivewriting.
3.
ErrorAnalysis
Error analysis in this study is the study of errors done by the students
writing of
A
School in report text of the eleventh year students of SMA Negeri1
Semin.
4.
Grammar
According to Hornby (1995: 517), grammar is rules in a language for
changing the form of words and combining them into sentences. In this study,
grammar means the rules in a language for changing the form of words and
combining them into sentences in report writing that bedonebytheeleventhyear
studentsofSMANegeri1Seminin2011.
5.GrammaticalErrorofWriting
Error is noticeable deviation from the adult grammar of a native
speaker, reflecting the interlanguage competence of the learner (Sujoko,
1989: 5). Writing is literary work (Hornby, 1995: 996). In this study, the
writer can state that grammatical error of writing is the printed word of
grammaticalerrorofthestudentswriting.
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H.
TheOrganizationoftheStudy
The give clear understanding about the content, the writer would like to
clarifytheterms.Thestudyconsistsoffivechaptersasfollows:
Chapter I
is introduction
. It consists of the background of the study, the
reasons for choosing the topic, the limitation of the study, the statement of the
problem, the aim of the study, the use of the study, the clarification of the key
terms,andtheorganizationofthestudy.
ChapterIIisreviewofrelatedliterature
.Itconsistsofcontrastiveanalysis,
error analysis, descriptive writing. Contrastive analysis consists of the meaning
of contrastive analysis and the hypothesis of contrastive analysis.Erroranalysis
consistsofthemeaningoferroranalysis,thesourcesoferror,thetypesoferrors,
the practical uses of error analysis, and the methodology of error analysis.
Descriptive writing consists of the language features of descriptive writing, and
thetechniqueofdescriptivewriting.
Chapter III
is the method of the study
. It consists of the meaning of
research method, the strategyoftheresearch,thedataandthe sourceofdata,the
techniqueofcollectingthedata,andthetechniqueofanalyzingthedata.
Chapter IV
is the result of the study
. It consists of the analysis ofthe data
andthediscussionofthefindings.
Chapter V is conclusion, implication and suggestion
. It consists of
conclusion,implication,andsuggestion.
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CHAPTERII
REVIEWOFRELATEDLITERATURE
In this chapter there are three important points. Its must be explainedon
review of related literature, that are Contrastive Analysis, Error Analysis and Error
Analysis at Descriptive Writing. They determine the writer on analysisthestudents
grammaticalerrors.
A.
ContrastiveAnalysis
1.
TheMeaningofContrastiveAnalysis
According to Haryono (2011: 1) contrastive analysis compares
structure or two languages (Native Language and Target Language) to find
out similarities and differences. Structures can be in the formsofphonology,
morphology, syntax, semantic, and even cultures.Contrastiveanalysiscanbe
usedtoimprovethequalityofteachingtargetlanguage.
The contractive analysis hypothesisstressedtheinterferingeffectsof
the first language on second language learning, and claimed in its strong
from, that second language is primarily, if not exclusively, a process of
acquiring whatever items are different from the first language (Sujoko,1989:
1) So, contractive analysis is a producedure for comparing of two languages
toshowthedifferencesandsimilarities.
From the definition above, it can be stated that the contrastive
analysis is compare two things concering with linguistics points. Contrastive
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TheHypothesisofContrastiveAnalysis
The contrastive analysis hypothesisstressedtheinterferingeffectsof
the first language on second language learning, and claimed in its strong
from, that second language is primarily, if not exclusively, a process of
acquiring whatever items are different from the first language (Sujoko,1989:
1) So, contrastive analysis is a producedure for comparing of two languages
toshowthedifferencesandsimilarities.
Haryono(2011:12)statescontrastiveanalysishypothesisisstressed
the interfering effect of L1 on L2 learning,claimedinitsstrongformthatthe
L1,ignoretheintra lingualeffectoflearning.L2learningisacreativeprocess
of constructing a system in which the learner is consciously testing
hypotheses about the TL form a number of possible sources of knowledge:
limited knowledge of the TL itself, knowledge abouttheNL,communicative
function of language, language in general, life, human beings, and the
universe.
B.
ErrorAnalysis
1.
TheMeaningofErrorAnalysis
Error is a noticeable deviation from the adult grammar of native
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TheSourcesofErrors
According to Sujoko (1989: 15), they are four major sources that
causethelearnerserror,theyareasfollows:
a.
InterlingualTransfer
Before the system of second language is familiar, the native
language is the only linguistic system in previews experience upon which
the learner can draw. StudentshadneverheardEnglishword,sotheyhave
some difficulties in their learning. Fluent knowledge of analyzing such
errors: however, even familiarity with the language can be of help in
pinpointingthiscommonsource.
Forexample:
1.
TheshoesofIrman
insteadof
Irmansshoes
2.
TShirtyourisnew
insteadof
YourTShirtisnew
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IntralingualTransfer
Beside the interlingual transfer from the nativelanguagetotarget
language, therearealsoerrorscausedbynativetransfersbetweenelements
in the target language itself. This is also called intralingual errors or
interference, or incorrect generalization of the rules within the target
language. It becomes a major factor in second language learning. For
example:Heeatedaloafofbread.
Eated in the sentence is influenced English itself. In the learners
mind, past tense is madebyV1+ed,butitusesinregularverb.And
eatis
an irregular verb, pasts form is
ate
. So, the rightsentenceis
Heatealoaf
ofbread
.IthappensbytransferringTLtoTL.
Thus, intralingual transfer is the native transfer of items withinthe
target language or incorrect generalization of rules within the target
language.
c.
ContextofLearning
The third major source of error can be illustrated in the context of
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CommunicationStrategies
A communication strategy is the conscious employment of verbal
or nonverbal mechanism for communicating an idea when precise
linguistic formsareforsomereasonnotreadilyavailabletothelearnerata
point in communication.Incommunicationstrategy,therearefivetypesof
strategy.Theyare:
1.
Avoidance
Avoidance is a common communication strategy that can be
broken down into several subcategories and thus distinguished from
othertypeofstrategiesare:Syntacticorlexicalavoidance, Phonological
avoidanceandTopicavoidance(Sujoko,1989:24).
The most common type of avoidance is synthetic or lexical
avoidance within a semantic category. For example when the learner
referred the earlierofIlostmyway,hefirstavoidedtheuse ofway
with the synonym road. This was not appropriate in the context and
paraphrasedthesentenceIgotlost(Sujoko,1989:24).
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PrefabricatedPattern
Another common communication device is to memorize certain
stock phrases or sentence without internalized knowledge of the
components of the phrase. How much does this cost? Where is the
toilet? I dont understand you are the sorts of the prefabricated
patterns that one sometimes learns at the beginning of a language
learning experience when the structure of the language is not known.
Prefabricatedpatternsaresometimesthesourceofsomemerriment.
2.
CognitiveandPersonalityStyle
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AppealtoAuthority
In this error, the students just memorize without understanding
and the students just store the particular word or phrase, get the
differencetheyaskorcheekinthedictionary.
4.
LanguageSwitch
The students use their native language in the target language,
because the students just have limited vocabulary. Sujoko, (1989: 28)
states that surprisingly, the context of communication coupled with
some of the universal of nonverbal expression sometimes enable a
learner to communication an idea in his own language to someone
unfamiliarwiththatlanguage.
3.
TheTypesofError
According to Dulay, Burt and Krashen (1982: 155) as quoted by
Haryono (2011: 6), there are four types of errors based on the surface
strategytaxonomy,omission,addition,misformationandmisordering.
a.
Omission
Omission errors are characterized by the absence of items that must
bepresentinawellformedutterance.
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Example:
1. Heisgoodstudent.
1.
Sheisbestteacherinmyschool.
In utterance the studentsomits anindefinitearticle1
forHeisgood
student
, while in utterance 2 a definite article
the is omitted for
She is
bestteacherinmyschool.
b.
Addition
Addition errors are the opposite of omission errors. They are
characterized by the presence of an item which must not be present in a
wellformed utterance. Dullay, Burt and Krashen, (1982: 156) as quoted
by Haryono (2011: 6) divides addition error into three types, they are as
follows:
1.
DoubleMarking
Many addition errors are more accurately described as the
failure to delete certain items which are required in some linguistics
construction,butnotinothers.
Example:
a.Theydidntwenthere.
b.Ididnotarrivedontime.
In utterance a two items rather than one are marked for the
samefeature(tenseintheseexamples).
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2.
Regularization
Regularization errorreferstoanerrorhavingexceptionalitems
ofthegivenclassthatdonottakeamarkersform.
Forexample:
Incorrect
correct
Mans
:
Men(
pluralfromman)
Buyed
:
Bought(
pasttensefrombuy)
Childs
:
Children
(pluralfromchild)
SimpleAddition
Errors of simple addition refer to the addition of one element
tothecorrectutterance.
Example:
1.
Iamisastudent.
2.
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word
to
. So, the correct sentence is
You can swimintheswimming
poolanytime
.
c.
Misformation
Misformation errors are characterized by the use of the
unacceptable forms of the morpheme or structure. While in omission
errors the item is not supplied at all, in misformation errors the learner
supplies something, although it is incorrect. There are three subtypes of
misformationerrors,theyareasfollows:
1)RegularizationErrors
Regularization errors are errors in which regular marker are
used in place of irregular ones, as in runn
ed for
ran
or
sheeps for
sheep
.
2)Archiforms
The selection of marker of one member of a class of forms to
represent other in the class is a common characteristic ofallstagesof
secondlanguageacquisition.Theformselectedbythelearneris called
archiforms.
The following examples are dealing with the use of
demonstrativeadjective
this,that,these,andthose
.
Example:
1.
Thatcats.
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2.
Thisstudents.
3.
Thesebook.
4.
Thosetable.
This type of misformation errors has been called archi form.
She
seen
heryesterday.
b.
Hewouldhaves
aw
them.
The utterances above have incorrect verbs
seen
and
sawinstead
of
saw
andseen
respectively
.
d.
MisorderingErrors
The incorrect placement of a morpheme or group of morphemes in
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Idontknowwhoishe.
2.
Whatyouarethinkingabout?
Idontknowwhoheis.
2.
Whatareyouthinkingabout?
In addition to these creative misordering errors, the students have
ThePracticalUsesofErrorAnalysis
Studying learners errors serve some benefit, particularly for the
teacher. Sujoko(1989:48)suggeststhepracticaluseoferroranalysisistothe
teacher,theyareasfollows:
a.
Errors provide feedback they tell the teacher something about the
effectivenessofhisteachingmaterialsandhisteachingtechniques.
b.
They show him what parts of the syllabus he has been following have
beeninadequatelylearnedortaughtandneedfurtherattention.
c.
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termofbroaderplanningandwithnewgroupoflearners.
d.
significant both to the teacher and the learner. The significance of the
practical uses of error analysis is to the teacher. Itmeansthatheanalyzesthe
learners error and corrects the error that made by the learners. For the
learners the practical uses of error analysis can facilitate them in improving
theEnglishmastery.
2.
TheMethodologyofErrorAnalysis
Methodology is procedure in carrying out the research dealing with
the technique of collecting and analyzing the data. The writer realizes that
writingsuchkindofpapermustusemethodology.
The methodology of Errors Analysis according to S.N Sridhar (1985:
222)asquotedbyHaryono(2011:5)isasfollows:
a.
b.
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c.
Classificationintoerrortypes.
d.
Statementofrelativefrequencyoferrortypes.
e.
Identificationoftheareaofdifficultyinthetargetlanguage.
f.
Therapy(remedialdrill,lesson,etc)
The data of error analysis are taken from written test given to the
students. The written data are taken from the summary of the written tests
given the students. In order to get the valid data, the writer determines the
aims of analyzing, the method or technique, the instrument and data
gathering.
After collecting the data, the writer identifies them in what part of
error the data belong to, in the process ofidentifyingthewriterusestherules
of English as a target language to be the norm followed in determining the
kindsoferrorsbythestudents.
Then the writer classifiedthembasedonthetaxonomydecidedbefore
in order to get the valid analysis, it is better to combine the four taxonomies
inthisprocessofanalysis.
The next step done by the writer is counting the error, frequencies,
deciding the lace of errors, making the percentages of the errorsmadebythe
students and finding the best terrify. After that, the writer will give the
evaluation of errors that done by students and the final, the writer would
correctionthedata.
A.
TheTheoryofWriting
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TheMeaningofWriting
1.
Complexprocesses
b.
Someapproach
According to Hornby (1995: 1383), Writing is the activityoroccupation
Activity
b.
Occupation
c.
Personalexperience
d.
Socialidentities
Meanwhile writing is used for a wide variety of purpose it produced in
many different forms (Harmer, 2004: 4). The element of writing based on the
definition,theyare:
a.
Varietyofpurpose
b.
Differentform
According to Somekh and Cathy (2005: 2) state writing enables the
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Togain
b.
Distance
c.
Experience
Pardiyono (2006: ix) states
writing adalah salah satu bentuk
Petwujudanlinguistic
b.
Penngunaanbahasatulis
Wishon and Julia (1980: 281282) comment in writing definition, the
Explained
b.
Usingbyword
Based on the statement above the writer wants to conclude, writing is
as the result of complex processes of writing activity that is used for a wide
variety of purpose and communicate which would be both entertaining and
informative that is sometime based on the personal experiences and social
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identitiesbyusingbyword(inthewrittenform).
As one of the four language skills, writing has alwaysoccupiedaplace
in most English language course. One of the reasons in that more and more
peopleneedtolearntowriteinEnglishforoccupationaloracademicpurposes.
ThePurposeofWriting
2.
Writing, inadditiontobeingcommunicativeskillofvitalimportance,is
skill which enables the leaner to plan and rethink the communication process
(Murcia, 2001: 213). The element of writing purpose based on the definition,
theyare:
a.
Enables
b.
Toplan
c.
Rethink
d.
Communicationprocess.
Writing has always been used as a means of reinfocing language that
has been thought (Harmer, 2004: 32). The element of writing purpose based on
thedefinition,theyare:
a.
Meansofreinfocinglanguage
b.
Thougt
Hyland (2002: 1) comments the various purpose of writing, then, the
increased complexity of its contexts of use and the diverse backgrounds and
needs of those wishing to learn it, all push the study of writing into wider
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Variouspurpose
b.
Context
c.
Puss
d.
Analysis
e.
Understanding
Based on the definition, the writerwanttoconcludethatthepurpose
TheWritingProcess
Concerning with the stages in the process ofwritingseveralscholars
on the field classify th em differently. Brown (2001 : 352353) states there are
several steps in the writing process. Theyaregeneratingidea,writinginthefirst
draft, peerediting, and revising. Campbell (1998: 11) in Fauziati (2010: 50)
mentions thatthestagesareillustratedandpracticedfromthegenerationofideas
and compilation of information through a series of activities for planning,
gatheringinformation,drafting,revisingandediting.
Good technical writing has just the opposite characteristics.Itisclear
and direct. It isgrammatically correct both in letter and in spirit. Furthermore, it
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utilizes the great richness and variety in English expression to convey ideas in
themostefficientandeffectivemanner
This sequence of activities typically occurs in four steps prewriting,
composing or drafting, revising and editing Badge and White (2000: 154) in
Fauziati(2010:50).
a.
Prewriting
Prewritingisthephaseofideagathering
b.
Drafting
Draftingistheprocessofwritingaroughoutlineofwhatwillbeaddressed.
c.
Revising
Revisingorelaboratingonthefirstdraft,takesplaceatthispoint.
d.
Editing
Planning
Experienced writers plan what they are going to write.Beforestartingto
writeortype,theytryanddecidewhatisgoingtosay.
2.
Drafting
We can refer to the first version of piece of writing as a draft. This first
goattextisoftendoneontheassumptionthatwillbeamandedlater.
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3.
Editing(reflectinngandrevising)
Oncewrittershaveproducedadrafttheythen,usually,read throughwhat
theyhavewrittentoseewhereitdoesnt.
4.
Finalversion
Once writers have edited their draft, making the changes they consider
tobeneccessary,theyproducetheirfinalversion.
Based on the statement above the writer wants to conclude the writing
process. The first step in writing anything of consequence is to prepare an
outline indicating the organization and content of the paper. We can call it as
planning. The outline should include each main purpose together with the fact
for it. We can refer to the first version of piece of writing as a draft (drafting).
This outline is actually a first draft for the preparation and revision of the
organization of the paper. At this point, one considers the general thesis of the
paper and how thevarious sections should be organized to develop it best.After
one has completed and revised the outline, the first draft of the text may be
prepared. The major concern inwritingthefirstdraftisthestructureandcontent
oftheparagraphs.
Having written a wellorganized and logically sound first draft, the
arduous process ofrevision may begin. Once writters have producedadraftthey
then, usually, read through what they have written to see where it doesnt
(editing, include reflectinng and revising). The goal of good sentenceformation
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is to achieve a grammaticalstructurethatembodiesthestructureandrelationsof
the content. If the tasktothispointhasbeenperformedcarefully,onlyquestions
of individual sentence structure and vocabulary will remain. At the very most,
three successive sentences may have to be rearranged. However, most of the
workwillconcerntherevisionofsinglesentences.
As the final step, the revised copy should be reread toguaranteethatthe
final result is smooth and intelligible. Once writers have edited their draft,
making the changes they consider to be neccessary, they produce their final
version (final version).This concludes the writing of the paper. The general
principle for good writing can be stated concisely: At eachleveloforganization
inthepaper,carefullyconstructtheformtoindicatetherelationshipsoftheideas
discussed
4.
TheCriteriaofGoodWriting
According to Pardiyono (2006: xviii),
untuk bisa menghasilkan
sebuah tulisan yang baik anda perlu memperhatikan budaya (culture, yaitu
bagaimana suatu maksud harus dituangkan secara cultur agar dapat diterima .
selain itu anda juga perlu memperhatikan ketatabahasaan, dan membaca
teksteks lain lebih banyak lagi ehingga anda memiliki gaya tulis yang lebih
baik.
Heyes and John (1981:368)state imaginethatyouhavebeenasked
tostart fromscratchand designanimaginary,workingwriter.Inorderto built
a write or theoretical system that would reflect the process of a real writer ,
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youwouldwanrttoatleastthreethings:
1.
First, you would need to define the major alements or subprocesses that
make up the larger process of writng. Such subprocesses would include
planning, retrievinginformationfromlongtermmemory,reviewingnandso
on
2.
3.
And finally, since a model is primaritya tool for thinking with, you would
want your model to speak to critical uestions in the disclipline. It should
helpyouseethingsyoudidntseebefore.
Traditionalconceptions ofwritingexpertisearebasedontheviewthat
good writing is good writing, regardless of audience, purpose or context
(Hyland:59)
While according Brown (2001: 346) , But as you contemplate
devising a technique that hasawritinggoalinit,considerthevariousthings
that efficient writers do, and see if your technique includes some of these
practices.Forexample,goodwriters
a.
Focusonagoalormainideainwriting.
b.
Perceptivelygaugetheiraudience.
c.
Spendsometime(butnottoomuch!)planningtowrite.
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d.
Easilylettheirfirstideasflowontothepaper
e.
Followageneralorganizationalplanastheywrite
f.
Solicitandutilizefeedbackontheirwriting
g.
Arenotweddedtocertainsurfacestructures
h.
Revisetheirworkwillinglyandefficiently
i.
Patientlymakeasmanyrevisionsasneeded.
A.
ReportText
Hornby (1995: 993) sates report is written account of something heard,
seen, done, etc, esp one that is is published or broadcast. Based on the definition
above, a writing a report text is a text which presents information about something,
asitis.
Meanwhile Priyono, Riandi and Anita (2008:20)statethesocialpurposeof
information reports is presenting information about something. They generally
describe an entire class of things, whether natural or made: mammals, theplanets,
rocks, plants, computers, countries of origin, transportation, and so on. It is as a
result of systematic observation and analysis. Writing a report text is needed very
much togiveaclearexplanationordescriptionofaplace,person,orobject.Tomake
the readers understand the content orthemeaningofeachsentenceintheparagraphs
formingareporttext,thesentencesmustbewrittengrammaticallyandacceptably.
While another, According to Pardiyono (2006: 166), the information of
report is
berisi sajian informasi masa kini tentang suatu hal atau fakta didukung
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GenericStructure
ThegenericstructureofreporttextusuallyhasTwocomponents:
a.
GeneralInformation
It is introducing the thing that will be talked about. It can include
optionaltechnicalclasification
b.
Bundlesofmorespecificinformation.
It is elaborating and reporting on the subject in detail. It can be include
part(andtheirfunctions),qualities,habits/behavioursorusesifnonnatural.
2.
GrammaticalPattern
Thecommongrammaticalpatternsofaninformationreportinclude:
a.
dog.
b.
Useofrelatingverbstodescribefeatures,eg
Moleculesaretinyparticles
c.
Someuseofactionverbswhendescribingbehaviour,eg
Emuscannotfly
.
d.
thebeginningfocusoftheclause.
DevelopingaReporttext
3.
b.
a.
Focusonanyorallofthequestionbellow:
a.
How is the assigned work related to ideas and concern discussed in the
course?
b.
b.
Howistheworkrelatedtoprobleminourpresentdayworld?
c.
Howistheworkrelatedtoyourlife.
Evaluate the nerit of the work, the importance of its point, its accuracy,
completeness, organization and so on. And here are someimpportanntmatters
toconsiderasyouprepareareport:
a.
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b.
Document quotations from all works by giving the page number in parentheses
afterquotedmaterial.
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CHAPTERIII
THEMETHODOFTHESTUDY
A.
TheMeaningofResearchMethod
According to Hornby (1995: 734) states that method means way of doing
B.
TheStrategyoftheResearch
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to solve the problem in this time, which has actual characteristic. Because of this
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characteristic, the writer does not use the hypothesis as temporary answer to solve
the problem. The work way of descriptive qualitative is collecting the data,
arranging the data and interpreting the data. Qualitative research is concerned with
description.
Descriptiveresearchisatypeorcategoryofresearchthatreferstoinvestigation
with utilizes already exiting data or nonexperimental research with preconceived
hypothesis.
C.
TheDataandtheSourcesofData
1.
TheData
Richards, and Ricard (2002:142)state,dataisinformation,evidence
or facts gathered through experiments or studies which can be analyzed in
ordertobettertheunderstandingofaphenomenonortosupportatheory.
While Hornby (1974: 219) defines the data as facts, things certainly
known(andfromwhichconclusionmaybedrawn).
In this research, the data are students errors on grammar in writing a
report text of A School that is done by the eleventh year students of SMA
Negeri1Seminin2011.
2.
TheSourcesofData
The source is a place from which something comes or is obtained
(Hornby, 1995: 1136). According to the meaning of the data and source
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above, the sources of data mean places from which something comes or is
obtained and furthermore it is taken as datainaresearchorsomethingwhich
can be as object of research. The sources of data are important in doing
research because without the sources of data, the research does not have the
good quality and validity. In this research, the sources ofdataaretakenfrom
the works of eleventh year students of SMA Negeri 1 Semin in 2011 on
writingofTellingDailyActivities.
D.
TheTechniqueofCollectingtheData
Collecting data is a part of a process of supplying the primer data for
necessary of the research. Collecting data is the systematic and standard procedure
to get the needed data. There is connection between the methods of collectingdata
with the research problem that will be solved. The collected data must be valid
enough for used. The validity of data can be increased if tool and qualityoftaking
thedataisvalidenough.
In collecting the data, thewritercanusesomeinstrumentsthatcanbeusedin
a research. The technique can be used to collect the data are a test, an interview, an
experiment,afilednote,etc.
In collecting the data, the writer useswrittentestmethod.Themethodmeans
that the way of collecting the data by giving question in written form in
accomplishment, then, it is impossible to use other techniques such as interviewing
or literature method. In this research, the writer collected from the students work.
withthetitleASchool.
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E.
TheTechniqueofAnalyzingtheData
The data available in this research are analyzed by using descriptive
qualitative analysis. It means that the writer tries to give the description of what
types of grammatical error that the students make when they compose the report
text.
Inthisresearch,thewriteranalyzesthedatabyusingthestepsasfollows:
1.
The data are collected from the students work. The writer identifies the
errorsinreporttextofaschool.
2.
Thedataarewrittenonpiecesofpaper.
3.
Theresearcherreconstructstheerroneoussentences.
4.
5.
Theresearcherdescribesthedifferencesoftheerrors.
6.
Thedataareclassifiedaccordingtothekindoferrors.
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CHAPTERIV
THEANALYSISOFTHEDATA
This chapter is about data analysis. The writer analyzes the data she has
gainedfromthestudentsworkinwriting.Then,she discussestheresultofanalysisin
discussionofthefindings.Thewriterfurtherexplanationsareasfollows:
A.
TheAnalysisofData
In this case, the writer analyzes thedatahavinggrammatical errorin
the students composition about
ASchool
.Thetypesoferrorcanbedividedinto
some categories, namely omission error, addition error, misformation error,
misordering error, misformation error and omission error, omission error and
misformation error, misformation error and addition error, omission error and
misordering error, misordering error and omission error, misformation error,
addition error and misordering error, omission error andmisformationerrorand
thelastisomissionerror,misorderingerrorandomissionerror.
1.
ErrorsofOmission.
In this case, omission error happened when the students forget some
element of the good sentence. In this research, the writer analyzes errors of
omissionfoundinstudentswriting.Fromthedata,thewritercanclassifythe
categoryofomissionerror.Thereare
a.
OmissionofPreposition
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2.
...becauseifthereisnoroomteachingandlearning,...(G.07)
In the data (1) the sentence is incorrect, because the student omits
OmissionofPreposotionandOmissionofTobe
The data of omission of preposotion and omission of verb that have
beenfoundinthisresearchis:
3.
...andsomeoffavoriteplacestudentinthecanteenandlibrary(A.03)
In the data (3) the sentence is incorrect, because the student omits
prepositionforandomitstobeareinthatsentences.Sothecorrectsentence
is
...andsomeoffavoriteplaceforstudentareinthecanteenandlibrary.
c.
OmissionofNounandOmissionofPredicate(Tobe)
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Underthesupervisionofteachers(C.02)
In the data (4) is incorrect because the student omits noun and omits
predicat
is
.Sothecorrectsentenceis
itisunderthesupervisionofteachers
.
d.
OmissionofArticleandOmmisionofVerb
The data of omission of verb and article that have been found in this
researchare:
5.
Inthesesystem,studentprogressthroughseriesofschools(C.04)
In the data (5) the sentence is incorrect, because the student omits
article
the
and verb
make
. So the correct sentence is
In these system, the
studentmakeprogressthroughseriesofschools
.
e.
OmissionofPronoun
The data of omission of preposotion and omission of verb that have
beenfoundinthisresearchis:
6.
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for young children and secondary school for teenager who have completed
primaryeducation.
f.
OmissionofArticle
The data of omission of article that have been found in this research
arefollows:
7.
Firstisteacherroom(E.03)
8.
Secondisadministrationroom(E.05)
9.
Thisisfacilitytostudents(G.03)
In the data (7) the sentence is not correct, because the student omits
article
the
.Sothecorrectsentenceis
Thefirstisteacherroom.
In the data (8) the sentence is not correct, because the student omits
article
the
.Sothecorrectsentenceis
thesecondisadministrationroom.
In the data (9) the sentence is not correct, because the student omits
article
a
.Sothecorrectsentenceis
Thisisafacilitytostudents.
g.
10.
In the data (10) the sentence is incorrect, because the student omits
determiner
someandthestudentomitstobe
is
andthepronoun
it
.Thestudent
also omits article
a
. So the correct sentence is
in this room, teacher can
prepare some materials for lessons conveeyed tostudentsanditisaplaceto
brake.
h.
OmissionofArticleandOmissionofTobe
The data of omission of article and omission of tobe that had been
foundintheresearcsis:
11.
Otherroomwhichintheschollisclassroom(G.06)
In the data (11) the sentence is incorrect, because the student omits
article
the
and tobe
is
. So the correct sentence is
the other room which is in
theschoolisclassroom
.
2.
ErrorsofAddition
In this research, the wrieter analyzes error of addition found in student
writing.
a.
AdditionofArticle
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Aschoolisainstitutiondesigntoallowandencouragestudentsto learn
(C.01)
13.
Andtherearetheotherfasilitationsofschool...(D.05)
In the data (12) the sentence is incorrect, because the student writes
ErrorsofMisformation
In this type, the writer finds out misformation error in writing.
Misformation error happened when the students use theformandthestructureof
word or morpheme incorrectly. The writer can classify the category of
misformationerror.Thereare:
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a.
MissformationofVerb
The data of misformation ofverbthathavebeenfoundintheresearch
are:
14.
15.
16.
...theteacherwillteachsthestudentsaboutthelesson...(D.03)
17.
...andthestudentsmusttrytounderstandwhattheteachersay(D.04)
18.
19.
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correct sentence is
In thisstep,studentsbegintolearnscienceknowladgeand
socialknowladge...
.
In the data (16) the sentence is incorrect, because the studentusesthe
wrong verb. That is future tense form, so it should put base form of verb. So
thecorrectsentenceis
...theteacherwillteachthestudentsaboutthelesson.
In the data (17) the sentence is incorrect. because the studentusesthe
wrong verb. That is present tense form, so it should put
says
. So the correct
sentence
is...andthestudentsmusttrytounderstandwhattheteachersays.
In the data(18)thesentenceisincorrect,becausethe studentsuses the
wrong verb. The student should use
has
in present tense, because the subject
is singular. The student should also use
room to instead
rooms , because the
school usualy has one headmasterroom.So thecorrectsentenceis
Schoolhas
many rooms such as library, canteen, mosque, some classes, teacher rooms,
headmasterroom,laboratory,etc.
In the data(19)thesentenceisincorrect,becausethe studentusesthe
wrong verb. The student should use
place or singular form,because itfollow
by singular form. And the the sudent should use
like
or invinitive form in
present tense. The student should use
there in that sentences also, because it
is an adverb. So the correct sentence is
Thefavoriteplaceiscanteen,because
manystudentslikegoingtothere
.
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b.
MisformationofDeterminer
The data of misformation of determiner that havebeen found in the
researchare:
20.
21.
teachersroom,etc)
4.
ErrorsofMisordering
In this research, the wrieter analyzes error of misordering found in student
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writing
a.
MisorderingofQuantifier
The wrong placement of morpheme or group of morphemes in an
utterance characterizes misordering error. The writer finds that the students
still incorrect in making sentencesthattheycannotplacethewordsinsuitable
position.
The data of misordering of determiner that had been found in the
researchis:
22.
Theroomveryimportantisateacherroom(G.04)
In data (22) is incorrect, because the student can not place the
determiner
The room veryimportant
inrightposition
.Sothecorrectsentence
fordata(21)is
themostimportantroomisateacherroom.
5.
ErrorofMisformationandOmission
In this result, thewriteranalyzesmisformationandomission errorfoundin
thestudentswriting.Theerroneousareasfollows:
a.
Misformationofadverbandomissionofverb
The data of mosformation of verb and misformation of verb that had
beenfounfintheresearchis:
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23.
Librarymanyused,becauselibrarytheimportantforstudent(A.04)
MissformationofPronounandOmissionofArticle
The data of Missformation of noun and omission of article that had
beenfoundintheresearchis:
24.
6.
ErrorofOmissionandMisformation
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OmissionofVerbandMisformationofDeterminer
The data of omission of verband misformationofdeterminerthathad
beenfoundintheresearhis:
25.
Thenamesforthesevarybycountry(C.05)
The data (25) is incorrect, because the student omits predicate
are
in
OmisssionofArticleandMisformationofVerb.
The data of omisssion of article and misformation of verb that had
beenfoundintheresearhis:
26.
27.
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b.
OmissionofTobeandMisformationofVerb
The data of omisssion of verb and misformation of pronoun that had
beenfoundintheresearhis:
28.
...thatmoredifficultthanyouareinJuniorHighSchool(F.03)
The data of (28) is incorrect, because the student omits tobe
are and
7.
ErrorofMisformationandAddition
In this result, the writer analyzes omission andmisformationerrorfoundin
thestudentswriting.Theerroneousisasfollow:
a.
MisformationofRelativeAdverbandAdditionPronoun
The data of misformation of relative adverb and misformation verb
thathadbeenfoundintheresearchare:
29.
Junior HighSchoolisaplacewhenchildrenschangefromchildhoodto
mature(B.02)
30.
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The data (29) is incorrect. The student should uses relative adverb
where
and shoulduses
children
.Sothecorrectsentenceis
JuniorHighSchool
isaplacewherechildrenchangefromchildhoodtomature
.
The data (30) is incorrect, because the students uses wrong relative
adverb and uses pronoun
its
. The student should uses relative adverb
where
and pass
it
. So the correct sentence is
Senior High School is a place where
transformteenagertomature
.
8.
ErrorofOmissionandMisordering
In this result, the writer analyzes omission andmisformationerrorfoundin
thestudentswriting.Theerroneousareasfollow:
a.
OmissionofPrepositionandMisorderingofClause
Thedataofomissionofprepositionandmisorderingofclausethathad
beenfoundintheresearchare:
31.
32.
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b.
OmissionofPronounandMisorderingofclause
The data of omission of pronoun and misordering of clause that had
beenfoundintheresearchis:
33.
Intheschoolalsocanhaveseveralfriends(H.07)
The data (33) incorrect, because the student omits the pronoun
weas
subyek, and she is wrong to place
also.
She shouldtake
also
aftermodal
can
.
Sothecorrectsentenceis
Intheschoolwecanalsohaveseveral.
9.
ErrorofMisordeingandOmission
In this result, the writer analyzes omission andmisformationerrorfoundin
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thestudentswriting.Theerroneousarefollow:
a.
MisorderingofAdverb,OmissionofArticleandOmisssionofPronoun
The data of misordering of adverb thathadbeenfoundintheresearch
is:
34.
Whatismore,atsomeschoolgiveskilllesson(B.04)
In data (34) is not correct, because the student can not put theadverb
well. Sheshouldput
furthermore
toinstead
whatismore
andomitsaarticle
of
after
some and put pronoun
theytomakeanaffectivesentence. Sothecorrect
sentenceis
furthermore,atsomeofschool,theygiveskillleson.
b.
Misorderingofclause,andomissionofpreposition.
Thedateofmisorderingof clauseandomissionofprepositionthathad
beenfoundintheresearchis:
35.
...becauseinthisroomplacetechingandstudying(E.07)
The data (35) is incorrect, because the student can not arrange the
clause well. The student should uses
this is a place and uses
for
before
teaching
. The student should replace
studying
with
learning
to make it be
moreeffectiv.Sothecorrectsentenceis
...becausethisaplacefor techingand
learning.
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10.
ErrorofMisformation,AdditionandMisordering.
a.
MisformationofVerb,AdditionofPronounandMisorderingofClause.
36.
The data (36) is incorrect, because the writer write the sentence with
add
we
. She also omits the element in passive form. She should uses
by us
,
and she should not write
we after pass. The writer should write pass in
progressive form, because there is a preposition
after
in the sentence. Sothe
correct answeris
asweknowSeniorHighSchoolisthenexteducationthtmust
bedonebyusafterpassingeducationfromJuniorHighSchool
.
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11.
ErrorofOmission,MosorderingandOmission.
In this result, the writer analyzes error of omission, missordering and
omissionthatfoundinthestudentswriting.
a.
Thedata(37)isincorrect,becausethewriteromitsapreposition, uses
wrong verb, and omiits tobe. He should uses preposition
in
and invinitive
verb after modal and add relative pronoun
that
. So the correct sentence is
...because in this room teachers can stand material study that will be
delivered
.
B.
TheDiscussionoftheFindings
After analyzing the data, the writer finds all existing types of errors. They
are:omissionerror,addition,misformation, misordering,misformationandomission,
omission and misformation, misformation and addition, omission and misordering,
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misordering and omission, misformation, addition and misordering and the last is
omissionandmisformation.
Thewriterfinallylists37sentencesofgrammaticalerrorsinstudentswriting
of eleventhyearstudents ofSMA NISeminin2011.Onexistingthe data,thewinter
reveals 11 errors are omission error ( 2 omission of preposition, 1 omission of
preposition and omission tobe, 1 omission of noun and omissionofpredicate(tobe),
1 omission of article and omission of verb, 1 omission of pronoun, 3 omission of
article, 1 omission of determiner, omission of tobe, omission of pronoun and
omission of article, 1 omission of article and omission of tobe), 2 errors isadditiom
error (2 addition of article), 8 errors are information error ( 6 misformation of verb
and 2 misformation of determiner), 1 misordering error (1 misoerdering of
quantifier), 2 errors are misformation error and omission error (1 misformation of
adverb and omission of verb and 1 misformation pronounandomissionofarticle),4
errors are omission and misformation (1 omission of verb and misformatiom of
determiner, 2 omission of article and misformation of verb, and 1 omission of tobr
and misformation of verb), 2 errors is misformation error and addition error (2
misformation of relative adverb and addition pronoun), 2 errors is omission and
misorderingerror(1omissionofprepositionandmisorderingofclause,andomission
of pronoun and misordering of clause),2 misordering and omission error
(misordering of adverb, omission of article, and omission of pronoun and
misordering of clause and omission of preposition), 1 misformation addition and
misordering error (misformation of verb, addition of pronoun and misordering of
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clause) and the last 1 omission, misordering and omission error (1 omission of
preposition,misorderingofverb,andomissionofrelativepronoun)
Concerning the data analysis and types of errors,itcanbeseenthatthemost
kindoferrorisomissionerrors.
Besides finding the types of errors, the writer also findsthesourceoferrors.
The writer analyzes that the errors canbehappenedoninterlangualtransfer,because
the students often transfer the system of the native speaker language into the target
language. It can be seen in data (21) The room very important is teacher room
(G.04) The sentence
Theroomveryimportantis teacherroom
isinterferedbythe
system of the native speaker language (ruangan yang sangat penting adalahruangan
guru) which is wrong in place the determiner wll
. So, the correct sentence is
the
most important room is teacher room.
The data (6)
The names for these vary by
country (C.05) is interlangual transfer in omission and misformation errors. That
sentence is interfered by the system of the nativespeakerlanguage (namanamadari
tiap itu berfariasi di setiap negara) which actuallyreplace
by
with
each
, put
are
as predicate, and put determiner
each
after
vary.So,thesentencewillbe
thenames
for these are vary each country
. And the other sentences is (11)
other room which
in the school is class room (G.06). That sentence is interfered by the system of the
native speaker language (ruangan yang lainnya di sekolah adalah ruanngan kelas)
which is the student omits tobe
is and article
the
. So the sentence will be
the other
roomwhichisintheschoolisclassroom
.
The source of errors is also happened on intralingual transfer, which is
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which are not needed in that sentence So, the correct sentence is
in this step,
studentsbegintolearnscienceknowladgeandsocialknowladge
.
Based on the result of the research, the writer can sum up that the students
still make error in writing. They are confused which omission error, addition error,
misformation error, misordering error, misformation error and omission error,
omission error and misformation error, misformation error and addition error,
omission error and misordering error, misordering error and omission error,
misformation error, addition error and misordering error, omission error and
misformation error and the last is omission error, misordering error and omission
error. The students also only transfer fromnativelanguagetotargetlanguageanddo
notunderstandaboutthegrammarwell.
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CHAPTERV
CONCLUSION,IMPLICATIONANDSUGGESTION
In this chapter will discuss about the conclusion, the implication, and the
suggestion.Thefurtherexplanationareasfollows:
A.Conclusion
After the writer analyzes the erroneous sentences of
the Students Writing
of TellingInterestingSportofthe eleventhyearstudentsofSMANegeri1Semin
in2011
,
thewritercangettheerrorswrittenbythem.
In this case,thewriterwouldanswertheproblemstatedpreviouschapter.It
is
what kinds of grammatical errors of are found in the students writing of
reporting a school of the eleventh year students of SMA Negeri 1 Semin in
2011?
Based on the analysis and the classification of errors into their types, the
writer can conclude that errors done by the eleventh year students of SMA
Negeri 1 Semin applying report writing are errors of omission error, addition
error, misformation error, misordering error, misformation error and omission
error, omission error and misformation error, misformation error and addition
error,omissionerrorandmisorderingerror,misorderingerrorandomissionerror,
misformation error, addition error and misordering error, omission error and
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b.Givingmoreexercisetothestudents.
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Nama :EkaPalupi
Kelas :11IPS1
Sekolah:SMAN1Semin
School
Aschoolisinstutuondesigntoallowandencouragestdentstolearn.Under
thesupervisionofteacher.Mostcountrieshavesystemoformaleducationwhichis
seriesofschools.Themanesforthesevarybycountrybutgenerallyincludeprimary
schoolforyoungchildrenandsecondaryschoolforteenagerswhohavecompleted
primaryeducation.
Nama :EndanRiyanto
Kelas :11IPS1
Sekolah:SMAN1Semin
School
Schoolisoneofformalinstituuteforstudy.Forstudyintheschoolthereare
somerooms.Thisisfacilitastostudents,theroomsverryimportantisateacher
room,becausethisroomteachecanstandingmaterialstudywillbedelivired.Other
roomwhichalsoimportantisadministrasionroom.becauseinthisroomtheentire
administrationismanaged.Andprovidingfacilitiesinneedofstudentwhoother
roomwichintheschoolisclassroomthisisverryimportant,becauseifthereisno
rommteachingandlearningactivitieswillnotrunsmoothy.
Nama :AriniNuryanti
Kelas :11IPS1
Sekolah:SMAN1Semin
School
SchoolisonepiblicBulidingitusuallybeusedtostudy.therearesemral
roomsinthebuildingsuchisclass,bathroom,administrationroom,canthin,
mosque,library,labatcandlibrary.Librarymanyusedbecauselibrarythe
importanceforstudent.
Nama :YuliaHardiyanti
Kelas :11IPS1
Sekolah:SMAN1Semin
School
Aschoolisinstitutiondesigntoallowandencouragestudenttolearn.Under
thesupervisionofteacher.mostcountrieshavesystemorformaleducation,whichis
commonlycompulsory.Inthesesystem,studentsprogressthroughseriesofschools.
Thenamesforthesevarybycountry,butgenerallyincludeprimaryschoolforyoung
childrenandsecondaryschoolforteenagerswhohavecompletedprimaryeducation.
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Nama :ClarraAyuOktaviani
Kelas :11IPS1
Sekolah:SMAN1Semin
School
Aschoolisinstitutiondesigntoallowandencouragestudentstolearn.Under
thesupervisionofteacher.Mostcountrieshavesystemofformaleducationwichis
commonlycampulsory.Inthesesystem,Studentprogressthroughseriesofschool
foryoungchildrenandsecondaryschoolforteenagerswhohahvecompleted
primaryeducation.
Nama :FebriSantoso
Kelas :11IPS1
Sekolah:SMAN1Semin
School
Schoolisformaleducationinstituteforstudy.intheschoolconsistofseveral
room.firstistheacherroom.inthisroomTeachercanpreaparematerialforlessons
conveyyedtostudentsandplacetobreake.secondisadministrationroom,inthis
roomisaplacetomanagealladministrationactivitiesinthisschoolprovidiny
facilitiestheneedofstudent.Otherroomwichisintheshoolisclassroom,because
inthisroomplaceforteachingandlearning.
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Nama :SiwiNurAini
Kelas :XIIPA1
Sekolah:SMAN1Semin
School
Schoolistheimportantpublicplace.Ithasafunctionforpeoples(especially
students)lookforknowledge
Schoolconsistofsomecomponentssuchus:Theoccupantofscholl
(teachers,students,headmaster,etc).Intheclassroomwherestudentsandteacher
are.Theteacheswillnteachsthestudentsaboutthellesson,andthestudentsmusttry
tounderstandwhattheteachersay.Andthereareotherfasilitationsofschoolthatuse
bytheaccupantofschool.
Nama :PutriKusumaNingrum
Kelas :11IPA1
Sekolah:SMAN1Semin
SeniorHighSchool
Asweknow,seniorhighschoolisthenexteducationthatwemustbedone
afterwepassfromjuniorhighschool.
Seniorhighschoolisaplacewhenitstransfroomteenagertomature.Inthis
stapestudentbeginningtolearnscienceknowladgeandsocialknowladgethatmore
difficultthenyouareinjuniorhighschol.Whatismoreatsomeschollgiveskill
lesson.
Nama :RenisyaDevi
Kelas :11IPS1
Sekolah:SMAN1Semin
School
AschoolisinstitutiondesigntoAllowandencouragestudentstolearn,
Underthesupervisionofteachers.Mostcountrieshavesystemofformaleducation,
whichiscommonlycompulsory.Inthesesystem,studentprogressthroughseriesof
scholls.Thenamesfortheseverybycountry,butgenerallyincludeprimaryschollfor
youngchildrenandsecondaryscollforteenagerswhohavecomplatedprimary
education.SchoolhavemanyroomsuchAsLibrary,canteen,mosque,someclasses,
teacherrrooms,headmasterrooms,laboratoryetc.Thefavoriteplacesiscanteen,
becausemanystudentslikesgoingtothem.Intheschoolalsocanhaveseveral
friends.Levelofschollstartfromkindgarden,elementaryschool,juniorhighschool,
seniorhighscoolanduniversity.
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TheTableofgrammaticalerroranalysisofthestudents
writingofASchooloftheeleventhyearstudentsofSMA
Negeri1Seminin2011
NO DATA
THEERROR
CODE
1 A.03
Thereareseveral
roomsinthebulding
suchclass,bathroom,
administrationroom,
canteen...
2 A.03
3 A.04
4 B.01
5 B.02
6 B.03
INTERPRETATION
RECONTRUCTION TYPEOF
ERROR
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Omission
digedungsepertikelas, roomsinthebulding (omission
kamarmandi,ruangan suchusclass,
of
administrasi...
bathroom,
preposition
administrationroom, )
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favoritsiswaadalahdi placeforstudentare (omission
canteenandlibrary
kantendan
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of
perpustakaaan.
library.
preposition
and
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tobe)
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digunakan,karena
used,becauselibraryis(omission
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ofadverb
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.
and
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verb)
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educationthatmustbe MenengahPertama
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doneafterpassfrom adalahsekolahlanjutan doneafterpassingfromonofverb)
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setelahmelnyelesaikan
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placewhenchildrens Atasadalahtempat
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andsocialknowladge
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7 B.04
8 C.01
9 C.02
10 C.03
11 C.04
12 C.05
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scienceknowladgeandpengetahuanalamdan
socialknowladge
ilmupenngetahuan
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schoolgiveskilllessonsekolah,mereka
memberikanppelajaran
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sebuahinstitusiuntuk studentstolearn
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menganjurkanpara
muriduntukbelajar.
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ofteachers
bawahpengawasan
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berkembangselama
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verb)
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secondaryschoolfor
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completedprimary
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bedoneafterwepass sekoahlanjutanyang donebyusafter
pronoun
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and
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gofClause
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and
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ionofVerb
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classes,teacherrooms, masjid,beberapakelas, classes,teacherrooms,
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laboratory,etc.
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canteen,becausemany kantin,karenabanyak canteen,becausemany ionofVerb
studentslikesgoingto muridsukaperkgi
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them
kesana.
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teman.
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and
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SekolahMenengah
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AtasdanUniversitas. University
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