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    Essay 1: Many Offenders Commit More Crimes After Serving The First Punishment. Why Is This

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    While studying hard can provide benefits like improved test scores, spending too much time studying and too little time on other activities can negatively impact children's development and society. Parents should help children maintain a balanced schedule of studying as well as social activities and hobbies. An over-emphasis on academics to the exclusion of communication skills and social engagement could produce adults ill-equipped for future careers and contribution to their communities.

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    Essay 1: Many Offenders Commit More Crimes After Serving The First Punishment. Why Is This

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    While studying hard can provide benefits like improved test scores, spending too much time studying and too little time on other activities can negatively impact children's development and society. Parents should help children maintain a balanced schedule of studying as well as social activities and hobbies. An over-emphasis on academics to the exclusion of communication skills and social engagement could produce adults ill-equipped for future careers and contribution to their communities.

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    While studying hard can provide benefits like improved test scores, spending too much time studying and too little time on other activities can negatively impact children's development and society. Parents should help children maintain a balanced schedule of studying as well as social activities and hobbies. An over-emphasis on academics to the exclusion of communication skills and social engagement could produce adults ill-equipped for future careers and contribution to their communities.

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    Essay 1: Many Offenders Commit More Crimes After Serving The First Punishment. Why Is This

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    While studying hard can provide benefits like improved test scores, spending too much time studying and too little time on other activities can negatively impact children's development and society. Parents should help children maintain a balanced schedule of studying as well as social activities and hobbies. An over-emphasis on academics to the exclusion of communication skills and social engagement could produce adults ill-equipped for future careers and contribution to their communities.

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    Essay 1: Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.

    Why is this
    happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
    SOLUTION:
    There are two effective ways that could be taken to resolve the problem described above.
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