Location via proxy:   [ UP ]  
[Report a bug]   [Manage cookies]                
Scribd Logo
Upload

Welcome to Scribd!

  • 90 views

    Peer Review Research Outline 2fdraft 1

    Uploaded by

    api-372792850
    The reviewer provides feedback on a peer's research paper outline/draft. They note that each slice in the outline should have a clear point, example, and explanation and focus on only one topic. The slices should also be logically ordered and understandable to outsiders. Overall the reviewer thought the outline was impressive and looked forward to seeing the completed paper, with some minor suggestions like shortening long sentences. They praised the thesis and inclusion of support for claims.

    Copyright:

    © All Rights Reserved
    Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online from Scribd

    Peer Review Research Outline 2fdraft 1

    Uploaded by

    api-372792850
    90 views2 pages
    The reviewer provides feedback on a peer's research paper outline/draft. They note that each slice in the outline should have a clear point, example, and explanation and focus on only one topic. The slices should also be logically ordered and understandable to outsiders. Overall the reviewer thought the outline was impressive and looked forward to seeing the completed paper, with some minor suggestions like shortening long sentences. They praised the thesis and inclusion of support for claims.

    Original Title

    peer review research outline 2fdraft 1

    Copyright

    © © All Rights Reserved

    Available Formats

    DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online from Scribd

    Did you find this document useful?

    Is this content inappropriate?

    The reviewer provides feedback on a peer's research paper outline/draft. They note that each slice in the outline should have a clear point, example, and explanation and focus on only one topic. The slices should also be logically ordered and understandable to outsiders. Overall the reviewer thought the outline was impressive and looked forward to seeing the completed paper, with some minor suggestions like shortening long sentences. They praised the thesis and inclusion of support for claims.

    Copyright:

    © All Rights Reserved
    Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online from Scribd
    Download as docx, pdf, or txt
    90 views2 pages

    Peer Review Research Outline 2fdraft 1

    Uploaded by

    api-372792850
    The reviewer provides feedback on a peer's research paper outline/draft. They note that each slice in the outline should have a clear point, example, and explanation and focus on only one topic. The slices should also be logically ordered and understandable to outsiders. Overall the reviewer thought the outline was impressive and looked forward to seeing the completed paper, with some minor suggestions like shortening long sentences. They praised the thesis and inclusion of support for claims.

    Copyright:

    © All Rights Reserved
    Download as DOCX, PDF, TXT or read online from Scribd
    Download as docx, pdf, or txt
    of 2

    Peer Review: Research Outline/Draft 1

    Reviewer:___Jennifer Huerta__________________

    Reviewee:_Ayra Nunez____________________

    Directions:
    Look at the content of your peers outline/draft. Make marginal comments and a summative
    comment for the author of the paper which you are reviewing. Carefully consider the authors
    implementation of the P.I.E elements in each of their slices. Also consider how and why they
    need to be changed. BE CLEAR about what you are saying and why you are saying it.

    Keep in mind the following (but also include things you think should be added):
    Does each P.I.E element do what it is supposed to in each of the slices?
    Does each slice have only one flavor? (is the slice talking about more than one thing?)
    Is each slice placed logically within the paper?
    Did you understand the content of the slice as it was presented? Tell the author what you
    did understand and didnt.
    Are the slices understandable for an outsider? Explain what the author can do to make it
    more understandable.
    Did you understand the content of the paper as a whole? (Is this an effective research
    paper? Explain)

    Write detailed and helpful comments that will help your peer consider how to
    better shape their slices to make a well formed research paper.

    Prompt

    1. Extended Response: In an academic voice, discuss the most/least important skill (particular
    ability or expertise) or idea (understanding or awareness) that can be gained from this course by an
    outsider student considering the readings which have been completed.

    You may discuss:


    Why one reading is more important than another based on the ideas presented in those readings.
    A particular unit within the course.
    A critique on a major assignment within the course.
    Other (See me for approval)

    Format and Requirements


    1300-1700 words, 12pt Times New Roman, single spaced, 1 inch margins.
    Proper title and MLA header.
    Correct comma use and sentence boundary awareness.
    Use MLA format (8th edition) for in-text citations.
    A works cited page is required.
    You must use Detached Impersonal Style for the entire paper.
    Quotes may be no longer than 3 lines.

    Summative Comments:
    Overall I think your outline was very impressing. I loved how your thesis of our RR are a
    sense of development when learning new forms of characteristics to use when writing. I saw
    other reviewers nip picket on grammar errors and so but that can be fixed fairly easy. I would
    recommend shortening some points and just getting to the point then and there but if you have
    backup info to help support there is really no big problems with long sentences. Im excited to
    see how your paper will turn out because your outline was very impressive, good job girly! (:

    You might also like