Oet Writing Tips
Oet Writing Tips
Oet Writing Tips
Your writing will be rated by at least 2 assessors who will use the criteria below to determine your writing level. Therefore
study this information carefully so that you can develop the skills to write at A or B level.
Appropriateness of Language
Organise the information clearly Is the letter organised into
into paragraphs. Remember, the paragraphs?
sequence of information in the
case notes may not be the most Is the information logically
appropriate sequence of presented?
information for your letter.
Is the expression of suitable
Always keep in mind the reason formality?
for writing – don’t just add
information randomly. Is the vocabulary and expression of
a suitable standard?
Avoid informal and casual
expression and maintain a formal Have the abbreviations and
tone. acronyms been written in full?
Check for spelling mistakes and Are there a lot of spelling errors?
for spelling consistency through
your writing e.g. misspelling the
patient's name is not good!
1. 5 minutes reading time, during which you can not take notes or underline any details
2. 40 minutes to read the task and write your letter in a booklet provided. You can use pen or pencil.
You can expect the stimulus material to be between 2 & 3 pages long, and include social history, medical history and/or
discharge plan. Most tasks will require you to identify the important aspects of the history & discharge and summarise this
into letter format. The common formats used by OET include:
Discharge to a community nurse: focus on medical history and on going care required
Discharge to social worker: focus on social factors rather than medical details. Use lay language rather than technical
jargon
Transfer to palliative care: focus on medical history and on going care required
Transfer to patient's home: use lay language rather than technical jargon
Psychiatric condition: focus on social factors & behavioural problems and issues
The important point is to always read the task question carefully and respond appropriately.
Handy Hint
Do not just summarise the medical history. Always consider what the referred to person needs to know and what they will do
with information. The social factors are sometimes very significant, hence the need for ongoing care, and are included to
make the task more complex and challenging for the candidate.
Task Types
Letter Type Chief Complaint & Purpose of Complicating factors in case notes
Writing
Language barrier
Letter of advice to parents Son discharging home after a Letter of advice not referral
fracture
Summarise treatment procedure
Social situation
Referral to Lactation Consultant Baby not feeding well Complex social factors of mother
Referral to Post-Operative Care Discharge after eye operation Detailed medication history
Centre
2. Read the most recent information to understand patient’s current condition/situation. Always focus your writing on the
main problem and any connected information. Ignore unrelated information as these have been put in the case notes
to distract the reader.
3. Read the history to identify trends in medical condition, treatment, medication etc.
4. Bring a highlight pen on test day and highlight related points with the same colour pen to help you summarise and
group the information
5. On test day write with a pencil so that you can erase any mistakes
Planning
Ask yourself the following questions when reading the case notes:
Introductions
There are a variety of ways to write introductions and with practice you can develop a formula that works for you. For the
purpose of this document, the opening salutation and subject will be included as part of the introduction.
Salutation: If the name of the person is included in the case notes then it should be used. This can be followed by either a
comma or full colon.
If the name of person is not mentioned then you can begin with Sir/Madam
o Dear Sir/Madam,
Subject: The subject is a place where information such as the name & age of the patient can be included. This can save you
words in the body of the letter, but be careful not include too much information here, and definitely no phrases or sentences.
Both Re & RE are acceptable.
Handy Tip 1
You can save on word length by added some detail after Re, such as the patient name and age. However, take care not to
write too much here, and always use note form i.e nouns only (no articles, verbs, adjectives)
Basically, the introductory sentence of the letter can contain the following:
1. Background information such as name, age, occupation, marital status and gender of the patient if relevant and not
mentioned in the subject line
2. A brief summary of the chief complaint, purpose of writing or your main concern
It will usually be only 1 or 2 sentences long and detailed information about the patient's history and condition should go in
the main body of the letter.
1. I am writing to refer this patient. He is due to be discharged today. He has made a full recovery.
2. I am writing to refer this patient who is due to be discharged today after making a full recovery.
Example 2
Appositives: This is a noun or a noun phrase that is placed after another noun to explain or identify it, and a comma is
required to separate these nouns. It has a very important use in the introductory sentence of referral letters as in the
example below.
1. I am writing to refer Mr. Barry Booth. He is 68 years old. He is a pensioner. He is a widower. He requires dietary advice
after undergoing heart surgery.
2. I am writing to refer Mr. Barry Booth, a 68-year-old widowed pensioner who requires dietary advice after undergoing
heart surgery.
Example 3
Age: There are specific rules regarding how to refer to a patient's age. The first is that it must be hyphenated when used
before a noun such as man/woman, and the second is that an article is required. For more details refer to Year Vs Years in the
Grammar and Vocabulary Clinic.
Incorrect Correct
• I am writing to refer this patient, a 63-year-old man who
I am writing to refer this patient, a 63 years old man lives alone.
who lives alone. • I am writing to refer this patient who is 63 years old and
lives alone.
I am writing to refer this patient, 63 years old man who
lives alone.
Handy Tip 2
Mastery of the patterns above will ensure that you start your letter on a positive note.
Sample Introductions
Introduction Analysis
Dear Ms. Attard,
Does not include patient name as this is clearly stated
Re: Ms. Robyn Harwood in the subject line
DOB: 04/02/1948
Uses relative clause and appositive sentence structures
I am writing to request daily home visits by the Blue Nurses to which demonstrate ability to use complex sentences
provide care and support for this patient, a 61-year-old widow
who lives on her own. States purpose of writing clearly
Dear Sir/Madam,
Includes shorter for a patient name as full name stated
Re: Mr. Henry O’Keefe in the subject line
I am writing to request aged care assistance for Mr. O’Keefe, Uses appositive and relative clause sentence structure
an 83-year-old man who is recovering from a malignant which demonstrates ability to use complex sentences
melanoma in his left shoulder.
States both purpose of writing and chief complaint
Dear Sir/Madam,
Includes shorter for a patient name as full name stated
Re: Mr. Bill O’ Riley in the subject line
I am writing with regard to Mr. O’Riley, a 53-year-old man who Uses appositive and relative clause sentence structure
was admitted the hospital on the 2nd of September and which demonstrates ability to use complex sentences
diagnosed with obstructive coronary artery disease. He
underwent a coronary artery bypass graft on the 4th of Summarises chief complaint and treatment
September.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Does not include patient name as this is clearly stated
Re: Mrs. Carol Bradley in the subject line
I am writing to request a respite admission for this patient, a Includes relevant biographical detail: age, marital
41-year-old married mother of two who has been receiving status, mother
personal care from our organisation over the last two months.
Uses relative clause and appositive sentence structures
which demonstrate ability to use complex sentences
Dear Parents:
Purpose of writing stated clearly in the subject line
Re: Outbreak of headlice
Informs parents of main problem
I am writing to inform you of a recent outbreak of headlice at
Mt Gravatt Primary School. Although headlice spread easily
and cause several symptoms of itchiness and discomfort, they
are easy to diagnose and treat.
Summarises symptoms and treatment briefly
Common Errors
Incorrect Correct
Dear Ms. Jones, Dear Ms. Jones,
Re: Mr. Adrian Lamp Re: Mr. Adrian Lamp
DOB: 10/10/1949 DOB: 10/10/1949
I am writing to refer Mr Adrian Lamp to you, an 61-year-old I am writing to refer this patient to you, a 61-year-old widower
widower. He is due to be discharged today. He has made a full who is due to be discharged today after making a full
recovery from chest congestion. recovery from chest congestion.
Explanation: No grammatical errors, but it lacks
sophistication in the use of simple sentences. Also, it repeats
the patient name in full which is not necessary and repetitive
since it was written directly above in the subject line.
Dear Sir/Madam, Dear Sir/Madam,
Thank you for admitting Mrs. Saunders, an 80-year-old Thank you for admitting Mrs. Saunders, an 80-year-old
dementia patient,requires respite care for a period of two dementia patient who requires respite care for a period of two
months. months.
Explanation: Relative pronoun required.
Dear Mrs. Smith, Dear Mrs. Smith,
I am writing in regards of Annette MacNamara , single, age I am writing in regards of Annette MacNamara , a single age
pensioner, requesting your assistance when she discharged pensioner who will require your assistance when she
from this hospital today. discharges from hospital today.
Explanation: Several errors in terms of sentence structure or
and grammar. I am writing to request assistance for Annette MacNamara , a
single age pensioner who is due to be discharged from this
hospital today.
Dear Doctor, Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to refer Mrs Atherton, an 77 year old woman who I am writing to refer Mrs Atherton, a 77-year-old woman who
is a resident at the Sandy Beach Retirement Village, who is a resident at the Sandy Beach Retirement Village. She
needs urgent admission to your hospital due to chest pain. needs urgent admission to your hospital due to chest pain.
Explanation: Incorrect sentence structure with two relative or
clauses. I am writing to refer Mrs Atherton, a 77-year-old female
resident at the Sandy Beach Retirement Village who needs
urgent admission to your hospital due to chest pain.
Dear Sir/Madam, Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to refer Cooper a 12-year-old boy, who is a year 6 I am writing to refer Aiden, a 12-year-old boy who is a year 6
student at Wellers Hill State School. student at Wellers Hill State School.
Explanation: Two errors 1. Use first name when referring to a
child. Click here for more details. 2. Incorrect comma
placement
Study Strategy
When writing introductions, find a style which you like and use it for all tasks. However, take care to understand the basic
grammar rules and always remember to include the chief complaint, purpose of writing or your main concern. Practice writing
introductions using the sample case notes provided in your course.
Body Paragraphs
Most referral letters will contain 2 or 3 body paragraphs located between the introduction and the conclusion. Each of the paragraphs should have a main idea which the
writer needs to convey to the reader. All the sentences with the paragraphs must relate to this main idea. The length of the paragraphs will vary, but an approximate guideline
to meet the required word length of 180~200 words in OET is as follows:
Introduction: 25 words
Conclusion: 25 words
Paragraph Structure
A good paragraph will contain 3 main elements
1. A Topic Sentence which introduces the reader to the main idea of the paragraph. In many cases it will identify and/or summarise an area of concern regarding the
patient. Quite often it is written in original words rather than from words in the case notes.
2. Supporting sentences which may contain the detail regarding patient history, descriptions of symptoms, significant aspects from the treatment record, causes and
effects, trends and so on. Quite often this information can be taken directly from the case notes, and written as full sentences. However, you will need to paraphrase
the information into your own words. This includes:
o Using synonyms
3. Signal words link sentences together so that the information flows smoothly and is easy to read.
Common signal words which can help you present information clearly and logically include:
o Time: At that time, On review today, On consultation today, Recently, Over the past 3 weeks...., Two weeks later, On her next visit, During, Since that time,
Initial examination..., On 19/08/10...
o Emphasis: Please note, May I remind you, My main concern is...., What concerns me most is.....
o Subject: In terms of her social history..., With regard to her medication....,Based on the blood test results....., Regarding her medical history....., Her dental
history shows..., The risk factors include....., Treatment to date includes...
Example 1
Case Notes Paragraphs Analysis
Diagnosis Ms. Harwood was admitted to our hospital on the 30th
Right partial rotator cuff tear of October with a diagnosis of right rotator cuff tear
Topic sentence is introduced with the phrase:
Presented to Mater hospital with pain and weakness in following a fall while descending stairs. Therefore,
the right shoulder, especially when lifting arm overhead. surgery has been suggested, however, she prefers non- Ms. Harwood was admitted to our hospital
Descending stairs at home and slipped, falling onto surgical treatment. She has received ibuprofen and on....
outstretched arm. cortisone as prescribed and also daily visits by a
Xray and MRI showed a partial rotator cuff tear. physiotherapist. Supporting sentences transform case notes into
Orthopaedic surgeon discussed surgery. Patient prefers to complete sentences
try non-surgical treatment.
Date of admission: 30-10-2008
Date of discharge: 01-11-2008 Signal words express cause and effect and
express contrast
Treatment
Ibuprofen orally QID o Therefore,
Cortisone injections
Daily physiotherapy
o However
Medical History In terms of her medical history, she suffers from type 2
Diabetes Mellitus Type 2 diabetes mellitus for which she is taking metformine
Topic sentence is introduced with the phrase: In
Metformin 500mg mane 500mg. However, following her discharge, she will need
a regular monitoring on the blood glucose level which terms of medical history,
Nursing Care Needs may become elevated due to administration of cortisone
Needs blood glucose level monitoring 4 hourly during hospitalisation. She will also require assistance Supporting sentences transform case notes into
May be elevated because of cortisone in showering and home help. As well as this, she needs complete sentences
Needs assistance with shower and housework to review her condition with an orthopaedic surgeon on
Orthopaedic review on 19th November the 19th of November.
Signal words connect ideas and express contrast
o However,
o due to
o also
o As well as this,
Social Background Ms. Harwood lives alone and has no children. Her next
Marital status: Widow. No children. Lives alone of kin is her niece, Megan Mack who lives in Sydney.
There is no topic sentence, but the main idea of
Next of kin: Megan Mack (Niece) Regrettably, she has no relatives or friends to support
Niece lives with husband in Sydney who works as her. social history is clear
software engineer for Google Australia. Sister died
recently. No other relatives. Supporting sentences expand the case notes into
complete sentences, note the use of verbs,
articles and conjunctions (and)
Example 2
Case Notes Paragraphs Analysis
Birth History The patient was born via vaginal birth at term with a
Normal vaginal birth at term birth weight of 3400 grams. During a heatwave at
The topic sentence is begins with the baby's
Birth weight: 3400gm Christmas, the baby became unsettled, due to lack of
Apgar score at 5min: 9 fluids. When the mother became sick for a few days, her birth.
No antenatal or postnatal complications mother-in-law visited to help out but has advised her to
change to formula feeds and to put more powder in the Supporting sentences transform case notes into
Feeding bottle to improve weight gain. However, the mother complete sentences
Breast fed for first three weeks after birth. believes that breast milk is the best for her baby and
would like to breast feed full-time but is worried that she
Baby became unsettled during heatwave at Christmas. doesn’t have enough breast milk for the baby. Therefore, Displays understanding of the long case notes
Mother got sick and had a fever for a few days. Mother- she has been giving extra formula feeds to the baby. by summarising the main idea. Explains
in-law came to visit and advised changing baby to conflicting views of mother and mother-in-law.
formula feeds. Mother-in-law advised extra powder in
formula feeds to improve weight gain. Mother-in-law Signal words express a time line, contrast and
says her son (Ray Charles) also had feeding problems cause and effect.
and difficulty gaining weight as a baby.
Mother says she is worried she does not have enough o During a heatwave
breast milk and now gives extra formula feeds as well as
breast feeding. She wishes she could breast feed properly o When...
as she believes it would be the best thing for her son. He
hasn’t taken to the bottle. o However,....
o Therefore,....
Assessment
Mild constipation and dehydration
Plan Could you please support and advise the mother
Increase breast feeds. Refer to breast feeding support regarding breastfeeding and correct preparation of
Topic sentence is a request of support
service. Check formula is correctly prepared. If formula feeds if required. In addition, advice on how to
continuing formula feeds, advise to supplement with keep the baby cool in hot weather is necessary. Please
water (boiled and cooled). Advise on keeping baby cool note, the patient is due for review on 17/01/2010. Supporting sentences expand case notes into
in hot weather. Return for review in 48 hours. formal sentences
o In addition,
o Please note,
Conclusions
The conclusion or final paragraph in the letter should be fairly standard in structure. It should be based on the task question which is found at the end of case notes. It may
contain one or two of the following points:
an offer of future assistance if required (this can be useful if you choose to omit some details from the case notes)
It is useful to be familiar with some standard patterns so that you are able to conclude your letter confidently, quickly and most importantly, accurately. However, some degree
of originality will impress the assessors. Therefore, where possible try to ensure that your conclusion is related to your task and not simply a memorised ending.
Can you examine and treat the patient as you Please examine and treat the patient as you feel Could you please examine and treat the patient
feel appropriate appropriate. as you feel appropriate
I will be pleased if you can examine, diagnose Please examine, diagnose and treat the patient I would be grateful if you could examine,
and treat the patient as you feel appropriate. as you feel appropriate. diagnose and treat the patient as you feel
appropriate. (active)
Can you arrange someone to help this family Please arrange someone to help this family and
and provide proper medical support. provide proper medical support. I would appreciate it if you could examine,
diagnose and treat the patient as you feel
appropriate. (active)
Conditional Sentences: These sentences are also frequently used in the conclusion of a referral letter and the rules are as follows:
Closer and signature
Leave a space between the last line of the conclusion and the closer. The closer should be followed by a comma. Then write your signature below the closer, and if you have
time, print your name below your signature.
Sample Conclusions
Case Notes Conclusion Analysis
Writing Task In order to maintain a good health condition, Mr.
Mr O’Riley has requested advice on low fat dietary O’Riley has requested advice on low fat dietary
Uses information from the writing task to
guidelines and healthy simple recipes. Write a letter to guidelines and healthy simple recipes. It would be
the Community Information Section of the Heart greatly appreciated if you could send the above formulate conclusion
Foundation, Gregory Terrace, Brisbane on the patient's mentioned information to Mr. O’Riley at his home
behalf. Use the relevant case notes to explain Mr address, 9476 Old Dam Road, Goondiwindi, QLD, Contains a polite request
O’Riley’s situation and the information he needs. Include 4390.
Medical History, Body Mass Index and lifestyle.
Information should be sent to his home address. Yours sincerely, Maintains polite tone through the use of modal
verbs would and could
Lee Wong Charge Nurse
Contains information specific to the task
Writing Task I hope you will be able to arrange someone who can
Using the information in the case notes, write a letter to help this family and provide proper medical support.
Uses information from the writing task to
The Director, Community Child Health Service, 15 Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any
Pauline Street, Kuraby, requesting follow-up of this further information about this family. formulate conclusion
family.
Yours sincerely, Contains a request using the polite expression: I
hope you will be able to..
Nurse
Contains information specific to the task
Common Errors
Incorrect Correct
I would very much appreciated your attention regarding further management I would very much appreciate your attention regarding further management
of Mr. Henderson. of Mr. Henderson.(active)
Explanation: Incorrect grammar, see above Your attention regarding further management of Mr. Henderson would be
very much appreciated.(passive)
If you have any query, please do not hesitate to contact me. If you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact me.
I will appreciate your further assessment and management I would appreciate your further assessment and management.
Kindly investigate this child and do the needful. If you need any more I would appreciate it if you could investigate this child’s condition and do the
information regarding her situation, please try to contact me without any necessary management. If you require anymore information, please do not
hesitation. hesitate to contact me.
Explanation: Several errors here. Basically it is important that the standard patterns
and style conventions are followed in conclusions.
Thanks to review and arrange a home visit for this patient, if you have any I would appreciate it if you could review and arrange a home visit for this
further questions, please be free to ask me. patient. If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate to contact
me.
Explanation: As above, several errors here. The style is casual and therefore an
inappropriate way to conclude a letter It would be appreciated if you could review and arrange a home visit for this
patient. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any further
questions.
I would be appreciated if you could take over the care of this patient.
Explanation: Incorrect grammar
It would be appreciated if you could take over the care of this patient.
(passive verb)
I would be appreciative if you could take over the care of this patient.(be +
adjective)
I would appreciate it if you could take over the care of this patient. (active
verb)
Handy Tip
As with introductions, when writing conclusions, find a style and pattern which you are confident with and use it. However, take care to understand the basic grammar rules
and always remember to respond to the task question. Practice writing conclusions using the sample case notes provided in your course.
Dos & Don’ts
Below are a list of simple points to remember on the day of your exam.
Do Don’t
Summarise all the information from the case notes into Follow a strict chronological order as your letter may become
sections such as: treatment given and obvious trends, too long, difficult to read and will not focus on the main
medication, medical history. This will be both easier to write problem and related factors.
and read as well as avoiding repition
Try to write somewhere between 180 and 200 words for the Write over 220 words as it will effect your overall result. You
body of the letter. This is the requirement of OET and the being tested on your ability to write a clear concise letter, not
assessors are quite strict in this area. a long letter.
Don’t write under 160 words as there may not be sufficient
language to get a B grade.
Omit information which is not directly relevant to your task. Try to put all the information from the case notes into the
This is a big trap for many candidates in that they try to write letter. Your letter will be too long and also poorly organised
down all the information from the task sheet. This does not and difficult to read
reflect reality.
Expand on all acronyms. For example OPG should be written as Overuse acronyms. You are being tested on you ability to
orthopantamogram, BP as blood pressure and PR as pulse rate expand on case notes so make sure you do.
& hx as history
Provide a simple clear summary of the condition so that a lay Use too much medical jargon. Remember it is a test of English
person could understand not Latin!
Spend time reading the case notes and grouping information Start writing without planning your letter. You should allow 15
which are related such as medication, persistant high blood minutes reading case notes and planning the letter.
pressure etc etc
Use synonyms so that you can express the information from the Copy directly from the case notes without any changes. You are
case notes in different ways expected to put the information into your own words.
Allow 5 minutes at the end of the test to proof read your work Submit the letter without checking for basic mistakes such as
and fix up any mistakes grammar/spelling.