Argument Paper 1
Argument Paper 1
Argument Paper 1
Jacob Thompson
Kadin Cook
Mr. Gross
English 12B
One of the most unhealthy things for the average person on a daily basis is something that
most do not notice. Cell phones are taking over and are now becoming unhealthy physically and
emotionally to everyday citizens. They are also ruining social lives and sleep per night. Most do
not realize this because they are constantly addicted to their devices. Some physical and
emotional issues include back problems or anxiety. There are many reasons to discuss but overall
Cell phones may seem incapable of it but they cause physical health problems if used too
long without breaks or just too long per day. Back problems are the main physical issue that
comes from the overuse of cell phones. Jayne Leonard shows how harmful they are when she
says “According to 2015 statistics, 45% of young people aged 16 to 24 now suffer from back
pain as their spinal disks are put under pressure”. Physical doesn’t just have to be muscles and
bones. In this case an even larger harmful side effect of too much use is the strain on the eyes.
Leonard also states that “Direct exposure to blue light – like the one that comes from cell phone
screens – can cause damage to the retina of the eye” and that this can lead to the extreme of
losing central vision. Another effect that isn’t quite as common is weight management and the
struggle to manage it for those who are extremely addicted to their devices. In one study at a
college university Leonard observed that “ Those who spent up to 14 hours daily on their phones
were less fit than participants who only averaged about 1.5 hours of use”. All three of these
physical issues can be obviously seen as coming from the overuse of electronics. Ashley Mateo
of Shape.com states how fitness tracking apps can not only help people work out these days but
they can also help them eat right improving physical shape. Brian Mastroianni of CBS News tells
of how 46% of americans download fitness apps and then never use them or delete them. This
shows how these people do not actually become dedicated and the apps become useless for good
health.
Other than physical health cell phones can lead to emotional stress, actual medical issues
mentally and even just put people on edge. Anxiety and depression are directly correlated to the
mental health of the user. Leonard includes information from a recent survey by Northwestern
University noticing “The average daily use for a depressed person was 68 minutes, compared to
just 17 minutes for someone who has better mental health”. (Leonard). Similar to anxiety and
depression but a bit different is the issue of stress. Stress comes from us having a cell phone that
allows us to be constantly “available” to incoming calls and text messages from anyone at
anytime. Leonard mentions people constantly receiving and responding to incoming texts causes
a rise in stress level that leads to phantom vibrations (Leonard). Phantom vibrations are when
people continue to think they get texts by feeling their phone buzz even though nobody has
University in Fort Wayne, Indiana, 89% of the undergraduates in her study had experienced
these phantom vibrations about every two weeks on the average (Rosen Ph. D.). These are all
proof that actual mental health problems and irritations can come from the overuse of cell phones
and the constant “availability” that people are subject to. Though John Matisz of metronews.com
makes a valid point when he talks about Alexandre Legros’s research “The fields, he said, ‘can
alter brain activity and physical responses, opening the possibility for therapy’ for people with
neurological disorders and diseases” (Matisz). Even with this valid statement the pros are
Health does not specifically refer to pain or no pain. Health also can mean social health,
which is just slightly less as important, but cell phones can and will destroy the social life of
anyone showing its control in three main areas. First off nobody likes talking to a person and
suddenly they lose focus to look at something around them or check their phone. The expression
of somebody having the attention span of a goldfish is now somewhat true. As it turns out studies
show humans to have the attention span less than that of a goldfish (Leonard). Researchers from
the University of Essex found that people who “discussed personally meaningful topics when a
cell phone was nearby (even if they weren’t being used) reported lower relationship quality and
less trust in their partner” (Leonard). This leads into the topic of relationships. Sarah Griffiths for
OnlineMail includes in her article how 75% of women admit devices are ruining their
relationships due to the fact that them or their partners are competing with their partners
smartphone for attention (Griffiths). This is creating an unhealthy social self in most people that
communicates with a screen and not a person most of the time, until they are face to face with
someone then they pay little attention and frequently check their phones while talking. Yardena
Arar wrote a passage for PCWorld addressing something similar to this issue basically saying
“New cell phone services use handset features such as GPS and cameras to maintain and enhance
personal communities” (Arar). Previously explained in this article it shows that the more reason
to be on a phone talking to people still just lessens the socially healthy person in everyone and is
still unhealthy.
Finally the most obvious thing that even the addict-denying people out there complain
about and notice is the issue with sleep and cell phones direct involvement to less of this.
Keeping a cell phone on the nightstand at night may not seem like a big deal, but technology
affects sleep in more ways than many realize. Included in studies conducted by Sleep.org, the
blue light emitted by cell phones restrains the production of melatonin messing with the
sleep/wake cycle (How Technology). The human mind needs to unwind after spending all day
looking at and using technology. Phones addiction comes back to take over when it comes to
going to bed. Most think they are going to just check a few emails and find that one thing on the
web to look at real quick but then they look and it's an hour later. Technology can trick the mind
into thinking that it needs to stay awake when it really is ready to go to sleep (How Technology).
After people manage to finally fall asleep they are awoken by random chirps of texts,
notifications, emails, and calendar alarms. About 72% of children six to seventeen sleep with at
least one electronic in their bedroom which leads to getting less sleep compared to other children
according to parents. All these go hand in hand to prove how unhealthy these cell phones are
showing that they can lead to physical exhaustion and other physical problems. In response to
this Apple just created a new “Bedtime App” that allows people to receive the full amount of
hours of sleep per night with the ability to customize sleeping per night (Hughes). This is a great
solution to the problem but as shown previously, most people are so addicted to their phones that
they are kept up by the phones tricking their brains to think they need to stay awake. Henceforth
hardly anyone will continue to use this application once they want to check something on social
Phones and other electronics are bad for people’s health no matter how the issue is
viewed. These electronics cause physical, mental, and emotional health. They also decrease sleep
quality causing more health problems. People need to control their usage of cell phones and
realize just how harmful these devices can be. If they can manage to get this under control and
not be so sucked up into their devices for every minute waking till night then their lives will be
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