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NBPTS 1- Teachers recognize individual differences A preunit writing assessment and prereading of student individual writing will help me identify the areas of
in their students and adjust their practice accordingly. support each student needs in their writing for their nonfiction writing about what they read. This will help me
TLMS 2a- Assists colleagues in accessing and using build an individual plan for them as to how to best improve their writing abilities. Researching different
research in order to select appropriate strategies to methods and presenting and reflecting on them with my colleagues will help us identify the best practices to
improve student learning. incorporate into the writing curriculum at the school.
Colleagues (Summarize how two colleagues have addressed similar leadership roles OR the status of the issue at department/school/district level.)
Tina worked to build the consistency of writing instruction in teachers from k-4 at our school. She researched and built a presentation about
utilizing Step Up to Writing in the classrooms. She reported that our colleagues were very open and collaborative when presented with new
information as they all had the best interest of the students in mind. She thinks that creating strategies to build the articulation of student writing
Tina Bowers- Second Grade Teacher- Holy Family School San Jose
across all grade levels at our school is valuable at this time to ensure scaffolded instructional practices and consistency.
Shelly Caron- Fourth Grade Teacher- Holy Family School San Jose
Shelly identified trying individualized writing conferences in her classroom and saw progress in students, but she noted the difficulty to maintain
such a program with a high number or students in the classrooms, and a limited number of resources. This will be an important aspect for me to
address in my own presentation in order to get my colleagues to want to incorporate and adapt this type of instruction into their writing lessons.
Section 5: Results and Reflection
Initial Revised
CSTP Element Evidence/Rational for Rating Suggestions for Moving Forward
Rating Rating
Promoting critical
T– To move to INNOVATING level: Consider how to increase
thinking through T – Applying Teacher asked questions of analysis and evaluation.
Integrating complexity of task beyond a single lesson so that there are
1.5 inquiry, problem S– Students answered questions that included all levels of Bloom’s. Students created their
S- continuing opportunities for students to engage in inquiry in
solving, and Exploring own math problems.
Integrating complex problem. How could you extend lesson into PBL?
reflection
4.5 Adapting
instructional plans and Teacher identified the individual writing needs of her students, and Moving forward, the instructor could continue to
curricular materials to
4.5 T- Integrating T- Innovating adjusted their individual lessons and conferences in order to better document student growth in order to better
meet the assessed
learning needs of all meet that students needs. understand the success of this instructional plan.
students.
Using a variety of In the individualized conferences, the teacher utilizes any resources at Moving forward, I can utilize professional
instructional strategies,
resources, and T- Integrating T- Innovating his or her disposal in order to meet the needs of the students; in turn development opportunities to learn more about
1.4
technologies to meet S- Integrating S- Innovating the students get and utilize the materials specifically needed to resources and instructional strategies and
students’ diverse
learning needs develop their skills. technologies available in my field.
Special Emphasis (Teacher Leader Model Standards or NBPTS Core Propositions
Key Learnings and New Skills/Knowledge Contribution to
Product(s) Generated
Developed by Teacher Others/Department/School/District
This project really enabled me to see the impact of identifying the
individual needs of my students and establishing ways that my lessons The real product that I am most proud of for this project is This project really helped my school have better articulation of
can target specific needs. In the case of writing, one of the best ways is all of the individual plans that the other teachers made in skills across the writing curriculum. Through this type of
through a diagnostic, then individualized assessment of skills, followed order to incorporate these conferences into their own instruction we can, as a staff, ensure that the students are
by one-on-one conferences. It was nice to discuss this with the other classrooms. I cannot wait to see how this goes for them meeting the objectives and are really deepening their
teachers art our school and create shared understanding of writing and what their students gain from this type of instruction. understanding of the concepts.
instruction.
Mentor Feedback
Directions: The Mentor should Identify strengths and areas of improvement in each of the following areas.
The presentation was really well designed and clear. Each slide only had a limited number of words on it, which helped the
Effectiveness of resources designed by Candidate, people attending stay focused on what Jennifer was presenting. The handouts had great notes- a lot of good extra information
including presentation, notes, handouts, and other for the people listening to the presentations. The worksheet that had space for them to work was really great because it
resources. reminded people of the questions and gave them space to think. It would have been nice to have some graphics on the
handouts that helped remind people of the presentation, or to put the slide pictures on the notes.
Effectiveness of Candidate in teaching and coaching Jennifer was really effective in teaching the other writing teachers the value of the process that she was explaining and
adults. (Refer to Adult Learning Principles in FOTIP helping them execute this process in their own way. This was especially evident in the other teacher’s motivation to learn.
Handbook [https://www.fotip.org/adult-learning- They all were eager to try something new in the classroom that would help their students succeed. Her presentation was both
theory.html]. action and application oriented.
This is a really valuable topic at our school because one of our accreditation goals was to build the articulation of the writing
expectations and standards across the grade levels. Because we started a new program, and Jennifer has been the leader of
Value of topic for audience. this process, this presentation was a really valuable way for the other teachers at the school to learn more about the
curriculum and how to use it.
Overall delivery by Candidate of the professional The highlight of the presentation was Jennifer’s responsiveness to the audience- both their needs and their questions. She
development experience, including audience was open to what would help the audience best meet the needs of their students and how they learn. The experience was
engagement, pacing, tone, and response to questions. professional, engaging, and valuable to all the people in the audience.
Teachers attending the presentation found the presentation to be helpful to the overall needs of their students. They noted that the presenter was both helpful and knowledgeable, and that
the handouts provided also supported their understanding of the concept. All attendees noted that they agreed or strongly agreed that the material was appropriate for their classrooms and fit
into the time given for the presentation.
Other
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