Integrating Quotes 2 PDF
Integrating Quotes 2 PDF
Integrating Quotes 2 PDF
Problem
Writers often use quotations from sources to support and develop their own claims and
arguments. Less experienced writers risk letting other authors’ words, ideas, and claims
overwhelm their own, or use quotations out of context in ways that are confusing or change
the author’s original meaning. Common problems include the following:
Solutions
ALERT THE READER WHO YOU ARE QUOTING WITH A SHORT SIGNAL-PHRASE
LEAD-IN AND COMMA.
Example:
Theater critic Rohan Preston observes, “Director Lou Bellamy has a way of looking so
deeply into the theatergoer’s soul that audience members often call out involuntarily to
characters—responding to their queries and whims, offering advice and succor.”
Example:
According to theater critic Rohan Preston, “Director Lou Bellamy has a way of looking so
deeply into the theatergoer’s soul that audience members often call out involuntarily to
characters—responding to their queries and whims, offering advice and succor.”
Example:
Although there are “procedural aspects related to the measurement of conditioned
inhibition of fear potentiated startle,” Engelmann argues that researchers should also be
concerned with “the actual conditioning procedure that is used” during training (35).
argues demonstrates
agrees emphasizes
asserts illustrates
claims implies
comments observes
compares notes
declares responds
disagrees states
disputes suggests
INTEGRATE PART OF THE QUOTATION INTO YOUR COMPLETE SENTENCE.
Example:
Rohan Preston suggests that Bellamy is a skillful director because he “has a way of
looking so deeply into the theatergoer’s soul that audience members often call out
involuntarily to characters.”
Example:
Preston demonstrates that Director Lou Bellamy knows how to get the audience
involved: “members often call out involuntarily to characters—responding to their
queries and whims, offering advice and succor.”
Example:
In her study of Division I student-athletes, ethnographer Julie Cheville notes the
identity-related challenges that come with playing a team sport: “the perpetual dilemma
for players and coaches is to recognize and sustain identities of difference in the midst of
public pressures to be the same and conceptual pressures to think the same” (55). In
other words, student-athletes must struggle to maintain their own senses of self while
still integrating seamlessly into the team. Student-athletes are not the only ones involved
in this identity struggle; rather, “public pressures” and “conceptual pressures” can work
against their own and their coaches’ abilities to see them as individuals.
Example:
Engelmann summarizes a current theory about the relationship between learning and
anxiety disorders: “When these [learning] processes fail to work properly… , a state of
chronic fear or anxiety may develop because the animal cannot discriminate between
periods of safety and danger” (1-2).
“Incorporating Quotations into Sentences.” UW-Madison Writing Center Writer’s Handbook. UW-
Madison Writing Center, 2009. Web. 13 Jun. 2012.
Works Cited:
Cheville, Julie. Minding the Body: What Student Athletes Know About Learning. Portsmouth, NH:
Boynton/Cook, 2001. Print.
Preston, Rohan. “Audience Can’t Help Talking Back to the Incisive ‘Diva Daughters.’” Star Tribune 15
Feb. 2004: 4B. Print.