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    IELTS Writing Task 2

    Estimated Overall Band Score: 9

    Prompt:

    E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, but this impact has
    been negative as well as positive.

    Do the advantages of using e-mail outweigh the disadvantages?

    Model Essay:

    Communication is a principal aspect of human society; thus, innovations in means of


    communication will naturally have far-reaching consequences. Among the more recent of
    these innovations is electronic mail, or e-mail, which has changed communication both in the
    workplace and social sphere. Although there are some drawbacks associated with e-mail,
    such as undermining work-life balance, the benefits, such as reliable communication, offset
    the negatives.
    Among the main pluses of e-mail communication is its incredible reliability. In other
    words, if you want to send a message to a colleague or friend, you can be certain that your
    message will be delivered to him or her, granted that you have typed in a valid e-mail
    address. Other forms of communication, namely phone calls or letters are not nearly as
    reliable. For example, if you call someone, that person may not be available and their
    voicemail may be full. Likewise, letters may get lost, delayed, or delivered to the wrong
    address.
    Nevertheless, when used carelessly, e-mail communication has some drawbacks, in
    particular, the potential it has for disrupting work-life balance. Because e-mail can usually be
    accessed anywhere and anytime, it is difficult to disconnect from work after leaving the
    office. For example, you may be on an outing with family or friends, when you receive a high
    priority e-mail from your boss requiring immediate action. This disadvantage, however, may
    be mitigated by a more disciplined approach to e-mail communication. For example,
    workplaces can set certain guidelines on when e-mails can be sent or by when an e-mail
    should be responded to. If these guidelines are followed, the disruption to work-life balance
    can be avoided.
    All in all, e-mail ensures highly dependable communication and when used in a
    disciplined manner, the benefits far outweigh the possible negative impacts on work and
    social life.
    Writing Task 2 Band Score 9 (Public Version):

    Task Achievement fully addresses all parts of the task


    presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with
    relevant, fully extended and well-supported ideas

    Coherence & uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention


    Cohesion skilfully manages paragraphing

    Lexical Resources uses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated
    control of lexical features; rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’

    Grammatical Range uses a wide range of structures with full flexibility and accuracy; rare
    & Accuracy minor errors occur only as ‘slips’

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