Writing Task 1 Official

I.
Pie chart – Evaluation & Social media 2

Pie 6: The table shows in percentage terms the results of a survey of a
new shopping complex in London.
The pie charts compare the proportion of satisfaction level in both men
and women about a new shopping complex in London.
Overall, it can be seen that a majority of men and women find new
shopping complex satisfactory. While the rate of the female who has
no comment occupied the lowest proportion. Besides, women who
dont show any comment are least, the rate of man feeling very
satisfied is lowest.
The percentage of people who felt satisfied with the new shopping
complex in London was top-charted in both genders, with 45% in the
male and 37% in the female. While the respondents in the female
finding the shopping complex very satisfying occupied 34% which
ranked second, those in the male captured the third position at 17%.
The rate of men and women who felt dissatisfied equally accounted for
20%. The surveyed participants in the male having no comment about
the shopping complex made up 18% which is twice as much as those
in the female with 9%.
Pie 5: The tables and pie chart show in percentage terms of the results
of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand.
The provided charts indicate how people felt about a new shopping
complex in Auckland, New Zealand (regarding its shops, restaurants
and design).
Overall, larger proportions of participants felt satisfied or very
satisfied with the shopping mall than those who were dissatisfied or
had neutral opinions.
To begin with, the percentage of men and women who find the shops
satisfactory occupied the biggest proportion with 55% and 32%
respectively. Besides, the surveyed participants in the female
considering the shops extremely satisfactory made up 34% which is
twice as much as those in the male with 17%. The rate of men and
women who felt dissatisfied equally accounted for 20%. The
respondents who have no comment accounted for 9% in the female
and 18% in the male.
The rates of men and women who felt satisfied with the restaurants
were highest at 55% and 32% respectively. The female who find
restaurants extremely pleased occupied 27% and the male having the
similar feedback constituted 25%. The female finding the restaurants
dissatisfied made up 21% while the male occupied 16% less. In
addition, the proportion of participants having neutral opinions
represented 15% in the male and 20% in the female.
Pie 4: The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked
visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer
service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years
2005 and 2010.
The given pie charts indicate how visitors evaluated the customer
service in the Parkway hotel in 2005 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the Parkway hotel made progress in its
customer service and the guests had appreciated them in their
response.
In 2005, the percentage of visitors who felt satisfied with the hotel’s
customer service occupied the biggest proportion with 45% and this
figure was followed by the respondents who considered customer
service poor with 21%. The rate of visitors who felt good and very
poor was nearly equal with 14% and 15% respectively. The ratio of the
surveyed participants who found customer service excellent accounted
for the smallest percentage with 5%.
After 5 years, the proportion of visitors who found the hotel’s
customer service good was highest at 39% and this figure was
followed by the respondents considering customer service excellent
with 28%. The third and fourth were the sample who felt satisfactory
and poor with 17% and 12% respectively. The smallest belonged to
the surveyed participants who rated customer service very poor which
occupied 4%.
II. Essay
1. Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news.
However, others believe that they can get news better through another
media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In recent years, reading newspapers is believed to be the best way to
get information, but the media is also chosen for its convenience
On the one hand, people can get many benefits from learning news on
the Internet or other social media. Many publishers tend to make their
articles more attractive and eye-catching in order that readers are
interested in getting news from their page. People can read news easily
and effectively with colorful photos and real stories added in articles.
Besides, news are posted almost every second so everyone can keep
up with the latest news around them.
On the other hand, broadsheet newspapers are believed to be more
reliable than the media in my country. They are written by prestigious
publishers and provide us with a variety of information illustrating
deeply about modern society.
In conclusion, although getting updated from the media has been risen
due to its convenience, the role of newspapers should not be
underrated.
2. The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents
take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?
Parents always play a vital role in the development of children so it is

believed that all mums and dads should take parenting courses so that
they are better prepared for parenthood. Although this method could
bring some advantages, it is not the most effective due to many
reasons, from my point of view.
On the one hand, parents would benefit a great deal from parenting
classes. First of all, thanks to these courses, families can acquire a
detailed knowledge of proper upbringing. Because if parents learn
some necessary information such as how to make friends with their
son, it will help them have a better understanding of their children’s
needs and take the best care of them at different ages, especially in
teenage period. Secondly, moms and dads who are equipped with basic
medical training, could deal with emergency situations more
effectively. For instance, first aid training teaches parents what to do if
their child has a high fever or a breathing issue.
On the other hand, Despite such benefits of taking part in parenting
courses or workshops, I believe it is not the best solution. At first, The
hectic pace of life always makes parents find it difficult to arrange a
suitable schedule to take part in courses. Moreover, not every family
has enough financial standard to pay the tuition fee so parenting
courses are not a good choice. Another reason is that the growth of
children is affected by lots of factors like environment, friends, the
way they interact with surroundings, so children are also provided
basic knowledge and skills through other experience or books to deal
with the troubles. Then they will become more independent, learn
practical lessons.
To sum up, in spite of some benefits that parenting classes offer, I
believe that there are better approaches for this problem.

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