Ebook Fce Writing 4schools
Ebook Fce Writing 4schools
Ebook Fce Writing 4schools
Index:
Introduction ...................................................................................................... 3
Who is this book for? .................................................................................... 3
What’s in the FCE for Schools writing exam? .............................................. 3
Content: ........................................................................................................ 3
Summary ...................................................................................................... 3
Time allowed: 1 hour 20 minutes.................................................................. 3
Part 1............................................................................................................ 4
Part 2............................................................................................................ 4
How is the exam assessed? ......................................................................... 4
4 essentials for good answers ...................................................................... 5
Part 1: Writing essays ...................................................................................... 5
Introduction and tips (Writing essays) .......................................................... 5
Useful phrases (Writing essays) ................................................................... 5
Sample questions (Writing essays) .............................................................. 6
Part 2.1: Writing formal letters or emails .......................................................... 7
Introduction (Writing formal letters or emails) ............................................... 7
Useful phrases (Writing formal letters or emails) .......................................... 7
Sample questions (Writing formal letters and emails) ................................ 11
Part 2.2: Writing informal letters or emails ..................................................... 13
Introduction (Writing informal letters or emails) .......................................... 13
Useful phrases (Writing informal letters or emails) ..................................... 14
Sample Questions (Writing Informal Letters and emails) ........................... 15
Part 2.3: Writing articles ................................................................................. 17
Introduction and tips (Writing articles) ........................................................ 17
Useful phrases (Writing articles)................................................................. 17
Sample questions (Writing articles) ............................................................ 18
Part 2.4: Writing reviews ................................................................................ 19
Introduction and tips (Writing reviews) ....................................................... 19
Useful phrases (Writing reviews) ................................................................ 19
Sample questions (Writing reviews) ........................................................... 21
Part 2.5: Writing stories .................................................................................. 22
Introduction and tips (Writing stories) ......................................................... 22
Useful phrases (Writing stories) ................................................................. 22
Sample questions (Writing stories) ............................................................. 23
Finally ............................................................................................................ 25
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Introduction
Who is this book for?
This book is for students who want good marks in the writing section of the
Cambridge Fist Certificate Exam (FCE). It is also useful for any Upper
Intermediate student who would like to improve his or her writing.
It is also for teachers. Use it exactly as you like. Forward it to students. Print
it out. Use it in class. It’s completely up to you.
Alan Bray
P.S. You can find other free materials to help you prepare for the B2 First
Certificate Exam at the following website, brays.es
To buy a Complete FCE or FCE for Schools Online Course with 100 – 150
hours of Listening, Reading, and Use of English practise (including over 50
Exam Practice Papers) click here. Simply practise and take the mock exams
until you are sure of exam success.
Students are required to produce two pieces of writing. The first piece is
compulsory and will be an essay of 140–190 words. For the second, they can
choose from an article, email/letter, essay, review or story of 140–190 words.
Summary
Number of parts: 2
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Part 2: one question from a choice of four, including one set text question
Part 1
Students are given an essay title and two ideas. They write an essay giving
their opinion about the title, using the ideas given and adding an idea of their
own. The title will be a subject of general interest – students won’t need any
specialised knowledge.
What do I have to practise? Giving an opinion and providing reasons for that
opinion.
Part 2
How many questions are there? Students choose one question from a
choice of four, including one set text question.
Content: focuses on how well you have completed the task, in other words, if
you have done what you were asked to do.
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Organisation: focuses on the way you put together the piece of writing, in
other words, if it’s logical and ordered.
It is essential to plan your writing. This should take at least 5 minutes to plan
for each question.
In a relatively short piece of writing you will need 4 or 5 paragraphs. The first
paragraph will be your introduction. Paragraphs 2, 3 and perhaps 4, will
contain the body of your answer, and the last paragraph your concluding
comments.
Allow at least 5 minutes for each question to check your answer. Look out for
silly mistakes with tenses, word order, spellings etc.
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Presenting two advantages or disadvantages together:
Expressing Contrast:
nevertheless
even so
even though
however
in spite of
despite
but
although
Expressing results:
because of this
therefore
thus
as a result
for this reason
consequently
Giving examples:
such as
like
for example
for instance
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1. You have done a project on transport in your English class. Your teacher
has asked you to write an essay giving your opinions on the following
statement.
2. You have had a discussion on fashion in your English class. Your teacher
has asked you to write an essay, giving your opinions on the following
statement.
Famous people such as footballers, film stars and politicians, deserve to have
a private life without journalists constantly following them.
This page from First Certificate Writing gives 5 further titles with sample plans
and answers. An excellent page.
Writing formal letters is a necessary skill that you need for most ESL or EFL
exams at Intermediate Level and above.
Examples:
You are given an article to read from a newspaper. You write to the
newspaper disagreeing with the article.
You write to complain about something.
You write making suggestions about something.
You write requesting information.
You write giving information.
You write requesting permission.
Greetings:
Dear Sir
Dear Madam
Dear Sir/Madam
Dear Mr Brown
Dear Ms Jones etc.
Firstly
In the first place
First of all
My first complaint is
The first problem is
The first thing I would like to draw your attention to is
My first concern is
Secondly
In the second place
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Not only …….but also
In addition
In addition to this
Added to this
…….was also unacceptable
Demanding action:
I am writing to suggest
I am writing to arrange
I am writing to offer suggestions
I am writing make arrangements
My first suggestion is
First of all I suggest
I would like to suggest
Another possibility is
A further possibility is
I further suggest
I would further suggest
Secondly
Offering a choice:
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I would also like to inform you that
You might also find the following information useful
It might also be useful for you to know that
Another piece of information that might be useful
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Academy. Read the letter and the notes you have made. Then write a letter to
Mr Webster using all your notes.
I am very glad to see that you are coming to our academy in July. I am sure
you will all have a very enjoyable time and that you will learn a lot of English.
Your can either stay all together in a youth hostel, or individually with local
families. Please tell me which you would prefer.
Tell me something about your group so that I can organise interesting spare
time activities. What sort of things do they like doing?
Yours sincerely,
John Webster
Your notes:
Write your letter in 140-190 words. You must use grammatically correct
sentences with accurate spelling and punctuation in a style appropriate for the
situation.
You have just returned from a trip to Canada. You flew there and back with
Maple Air. You decide to write to the airline to complain about your flight and
ask for some money back.
Read the advertisement and the notes you made and then, using the
information, write a letter to the airline. You may add other relevant points of
your own.
3 flights a day
wide, comfortable seats
friendly, well-trained staff
a good choice of food – special diets no problem
the latest in-flight entertainment
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Phone 0179 765893 now or see your travel agent for more details.
Your notes:
Late boarding
Staff quite rude
No vegetarian food for me
Old film
They want you to send an email to ask for further details including answers to
the following questions:
Where?
Places available in August?
How much for a week?
Drinking allowed?
Any trips?
What type of exercise?
Click here for 5 samples of formal emails from First Certificate Writing,
answers included, and click here for 5 formal letters, again with suggested
answers.
Writing informal letters and emails involves writing letters or emails to friends
or relatives.
When writing an informal letter or email our language is more relaxed and we
are able to use abbreviations which is rare in other forms of English writing,
except perhaps when using direct speech.
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Dear Jim
Hello Jim
Hi Jim
By the way
Did you hear about
Did you see
Have you seen
Tell me about
Oh, another thing
Well, time to go
Well, it's time to go
Well, got to go
Well, time to close
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I've got to leave off now
Write soon
Make sure you write soon
Love
Lots of love
All my love
Will write again soon
Look after yourself
Take care of yourself
All the best
Everything good
Your Scottish friend, Maggie, has sent you an email asking you to help her
organise a special surprise birthday party for her brother Rupert. Read
Maggie’s email and the notes you have made. Then write an email to Maggie
using all your notes..
We must make sure that Rupert doesn't know we are planning this surprise.
I'm not sure how many people to invite but our house is definitely too small.
Do you think we should book the Royal hotel for the evening and have the
party there? You know that Rupert is very keen on music so we could hire a
live band.
I've also been wondering what we could all buy as a present. What do you
think?
Could you come the day before the party to help with preparations. There's a
lot to plan so I'd really like your help. Can you suggest something else that will
really make the party special?
best wishes,
Anne
Your notes:
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Write your email. You must use grammatically correct sentences with
accurate spelling and punctuation in a style appropriate for the situation.
You are studying in Britain and you've recently received a letter from a friend,
Susan, who is interested in in arranging a day trip for a group of students.
Read Susan's letter, the advertisement and the notes you have made. Then
write a letter to Susan, using all your notes.
….. and the students in my class are really interested in going on a day trip. I
know you went on a boat trip with your class recently. Could you tell me what
it was like and whether you'd recommend it?
Susan
Your notes:
Write your letter. You must use grammatically correct sentences with
accurate spelling and punctuation in a style appropriate for the situation.
3. Your friend, Jim, has written you an email, part of which says:
My parents have given me some money for passing my exams. I don’t know
whether to spend it on going to watch United in Madrid, or whether I should
save up a bit more and buy some clothes. What do you think?
5 more sample informal email questions with answers, from First Certificate
Writing, can be found on this page. An informal letter can be found here.
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Ask rhetorical questions to get your readers' attention. Eg. What would the
world be like without oil? What will life be like in 20 years time?
Speak directly to your readers. Eg. Let's just imagine some of the possibilities.
Rhetorical phrases:
Firstly
In the first place
First of all
The first thing to consider is
One thing to consider is
To begin with
Secondly
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Another consideration
Yet another consideration
Another thing to consider is
Added to that
Apart from that
In addition to this
In conclusion
To conclude
To sum up
So
I think
In my opinion
Personally I believe that
In my view
If you ask me
To my mind
My personal opinion is
Your school wants to start some new after school clubs. Chess, table-tennis,
judo, guitar playing and cookery have been suggested as possible clubs.
What do you think?
Tell us which one of these five ideas you like best and why.
Make one other suggestion for a new club and explain why it would be
a good idea.
Write and tell us what difference this would make to your life. We will publish
the best article.
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In what ways will Cities be different in the future? In what ways will they be the
same? The writer of the best article will receive a prize.
3 more sample article questions from First Certificate Writing, with answers,
can be found here.
What I liked
What I disliked
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I was very disappointed with ….
Reviews of books:
main character
is set in
comedy
science fiction
thriller
romance
comedy:
author
written by
chapter
factual
fiction
unbelievable
bestseller
chapter
ending
lead role
star role
star
star actor
star actress
starring
secondary role
He plays a …….
She plays a …….
written by ….
is set in …..
based on a true story …..
believable
true to life
not very believable
far-fetched
comedy
romance
science fiction
ending
location
service
setting
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attractive setting
disappointing setting
owned by
run by
head chef (restaurant)
waiters (restaurant)
staff …….
staff at reception …….(hotel)
hotel facilities ….
reasonable prices …..
good value for money …..
excellent value for money …..
expensive
a bit expensive
overpriced
not worth the money
poor value for money
always fully booked
book in advance
1. Your teacher has asked you to write a review for a book you have read
recently. The best reviews will go in the school magazine. Review the book
giving your opinion and saying whether or not you would recommend it.
2. Your teacher has asked you to write a review for a film you have seen
recently on DVD or at the cinema. The best reviews will go in the school
magazine. Review the book giving your opinion and saying whether or not you
would recommend it.
3. At school you are building a tourist website in English. Your teacher has
asked you to write a review of a restaurant you have eaten at in your town.
Review the restaurant giving your opinion and saying whether or not you
would recommend it.
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Remember
Read the words you are given carefully. Sometimes you can choose whether
to start or finish with the words. At other times you have no choice.
Use past continuous for background information. For example – It was raining
heavily as we left the house….
Use past perfect before the main events of the story. but Anne had kindly lent
me her umbrella.
Use simple past for the main events. There wasn't a single person on the
street.
You can use contraction (haven't, couldn't etc). But a story should not be as
informal as an email to a friend, for example.
Time phrases:
It all began
Shortly afterwards
Meanwhile
Not long afterwards
Some time later
Later that day
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A little later
Finally
In the end
Eventually
Suddenly
All of a sudden
Without warning
Out of the blue
Just at that moment
Quite unexpectedly
As if from nowhere
Direct speech:
Concluding stories:
1. Your teacher has asked you to write a story for a student magazine. The
story must begin with the following words.
Simon opened the door and knew immediately he had made a mistake.
2. Your teacher has asked you to write a story for a student magazine. The
story must begin with the following words.
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3. You have been asked to write a story for a competition. The story must
begin with the following words.
It was five o'clock in the morning when there was a knock at the door.
4. Your teacher has asked you to write a story for a college magazine. The
story must end with the following words.
5. Your teacher has asked you to write a story for a student magazine. The
story must end with the following words.
6. You have entered a competition to write a story. The rules say it must end
with the following sentence.
7. You have entered a competition to write a story. The rules say it must end
with the following sentence.
8. You have entered a competition to write a story. The rules say it must end
with the following sentence.
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Further examples from Flo-Joe, for all writing types, can be found on this
page. A great site with authentic answers + marking with codes included.
Exam English Help is another very good site with FCE Writing Samples and
advice.
Finally
We at Brays hope that the information you have read helps you master the
English language.
The fact that you have read this far should prove useful. But, obviously, the
more you write, the better you become, especially if you have a good teacher
to guide you.
To get the best from what you have read you need now to go to the next
important stage:
Select a question!
Answer it
Ask a tutor to guide you through the correction
Repeat the process
Repeat again and again
The more practice and guidance you have, the better you will become.
If you don’t have someone with a sufficiently high level to guide you then
contact us here. If you live in Santander or Getafe we have small classes
specialising in correction of writings and spoken English (with free online
courses for FCE or FCE for Schools)
Online tutoring
If you unable to attend one of our academies Sarah Bray provides very
thorough online tutorials, with a free online course, via Skype. Sarah is a
Management graduate from Warwick University with a Masters from
Cranfield. She also has an ‘A’ grade Cambridge CELTA certificate and is a
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highly rated expert in the English teaching field. This link will take you to her
Linked In profile. She can be contacted by phone on (00 34) 916 823977.
Online Course
If you intend taking the FCE exam you can find an excellent online course,
with 100-150 hours of practice covering all sections of the exam, and
including over 50 exam papers, on this page. This course is completely free
for students of Brays.
Alan Bray
July, 2016
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