Success Is Counted Sweetest
Success Is Counted Sweetest
Success Is Counted Sweetest
Themes
It follows that the less likely success is to come to someone, the more intensely they will
desire it. The use of “sweetest” and "nectar" in the first stanza further draw a link
between success and desire, as though “success” is something deliciously luxurious to
those who don't have it. Indeed, the metaphor in the second half of the first stanza
suggests that this paradoxical relationship between success and valuing success is
engrained in nature itself. A honey bee, for example, desires “nectar” more and more
the hungrier it gets. Likewise, those whose longing for success is met only with failure
feel increasingly hungry for success (according to this poem anyway).
The poem develops this idea further with a metaphor about military conflict. In this
scenario, a soldier lies “dying” on the ground, hearing the “distant” sounds of “triumph”
made by the victorious army (the “purple Host”). It is this dying soldier, not the victors
themselves, who best understands what success actually means. He senses the vast
distance between his “failure”—the fact that his side has lost the battle and he is now
dying—and the goal of the battle in the first place: victory. In other words, the position
he finds himself in is as far away as it possibly could be from the position he desired to
be in.
The poem's central idea doesn’t seem limited to the specific examples given. Its
message could equally apply to the “agony” of unrequited love or a sportsperson failing
to win the tournament they’ve always dreamed of winning. People who don't have
something want it all the more strongly. Yet the more that thing becomes a part of daily
reality—be it success in terms of battle, love, career, or anything else—the less it
actually means.