Lesson 6 Writing An Essay PDF
Lesson 6 Writing An Essay PDF
a. Identify which of the numbered verbs are action or state verbs. Write A for
action, and S for state below:
b. Fill in the gaps with the correct form of used to, or would (in some cases both
used to and would are acceptable):
Dear Nick
I’m sending this through SchoolMates.com. Do you remember me? When we were
young, we _______________ (1) walk to Elementary school together. We
_______________ (2) sit together for lunch, but after some time, Mr. Smith made us
sit apart because we _______________ always (3) giggle so much. I think we
_______________ (4) enjoy ourselves a little too much!
I remember you _______________ (5) go to piano lessons after school, but you
_______________ (6) hate playing the piano! Also, we _______________ (7) ride our
bikes to the park after class and stay there until late, and you _______________ (8)
often get into trouble. Do you remember that day when I set my text book on fire?
The teacher went crazy the next day! We _______________ (9) call him ‘Rabbit’
because we thought he had enormous teeth! He didn’t _______________ (10) like
us very much!
Jason Cash
Task 3.2
a. Identify which of the numbered verbs are action or state verbs. Write A for
action, and S for state below:
(1)_____
A (2)_____
A (3)_____
A (4)_____
S (5)_____
A (6)_____
S (7)_____
A (8)_____
A (9)_____
A
(10)_____
S (11)_____
S (12)_____
A (13)_____
b. Fill in the gaps with the correct form of used to, or would (in some cases both
used to and would are acceptable):
Dear Nick
I’m sending this through SchoolMates.com. Do you remember me? When we were
used to/would (1) walk to Elementary school together. We
young, we _______________
would/used to (2) sit together for lunch, but after some time, Mr. Smith made us
_______________
would/used to always (3) giggle so much. I think we
sit apart because we _______________
used to (4) enjoy ourselves a little too much!
_______________
Jason Cash
Habits in the Past: Used To vs. Past Continuous
We can also use the past continuous to describe a repeated action in the past.
Often, it is an annoying or irritating habit. In this case, a frequency adverb is
necessary, such as always, constantly, repeatedly, occasionally, rarely etc etc.
When Anna was younger, she was constantly getting into trouble.
I remember my next door neighbour was often playing loud music.
Thomas was always texting when we went out for dinner.
Past now
Unit 3B
Writing: Essay
Writing: Essay
composition
essay(n.): a short piece of writing on a particular subject
• It is compulsory
you have to do it, you have no choice
• Your essay must be between 140 and 190 words in length
• You have 40 minutes to complete your part 1 writing (and 40 minutes for part 2). I advise
that you allocate your time as follows:
Planning - 10 minutes
Writing - 25 minutes
Checking - 5 minutes
• For an essay, you need to present information, express your opinion, and compare
and contrast ideas, then bring it all together to clearly express your final opinion at the
end - your conclusion.
• You are required to use varied ways to express yourself and your opinions (contrasting
ideas/organising and linking ideas/generalising/giving examples etc etc.).
Example brief:
Part 1
You must answer this question. Write your answer in 140 - 190 words in an appropriate style on the
separate answer sheet.
___________________________________________________________________________________
1. Your teacher has asked you to write your response to the following statement taken from a recent
newspaper article:
Essay: Structure
I’m going to decide on this after I have finished my writing. You cannot name your
Title essay the same as the subject description. Try and create a title which connects
to what you are writing about. You can be creative with the title if you want to.
Aim to “grab the readers attention” and set the theme for what you are going to be
presenting. This could be done with startling information (one or 2 facts on the
Introduction topic), or a short anecdote re: a personal experience on the subject, then lead
them into the body of your essay. shocking/surprising
Idea 1
(paragraph 1)
These are your body paragraphs. Each one should present an idea connected
Idea 2 directly to your topic, a supporting point, and then some elaboration.
(paragraph 2)
go into more detail
Idea 3
(paragraph 3)
This is following on from all your points which you have made in your
Conclusion body text, and a final perspective on your opinion.
Introduction
Content notes/ideas (write down your ideas for your introduction, then develop them in your writing):
• It is clear that…
It is widely known that many large city inhabitants suffer from traffic and pollution problems, but it
wasn’t until a few weeks ago when I was stuck in traffic in central Bangkok, coughing up carbon
dioxide, that I fully realised the extent of this problem.
Idea 1 Idea 2 Idea 3
(paragraph 1) (paragraph 2) (paragraph 3)
Content notes/ideas (write down your ideas for your paragraphs, then develop them in your writing):
2. Pollution is getting worse traffic jams more and more cars unhealthy city centres ineffective
transport 3. leaders focusing on wrong things living with pollution 1. Technology vs. pollution
Useful language
Organising and
Expressing your opinion Contrasting ideas Generalising Giving examples
linking ideas
-In my opinion…
-for example
-In my experience…
-for instance
1. We are in an era where we, the human race, have excelled in science and technology, and are reaching toward
the stars. So why is it that we cannot seem to control the most important thing in our lives - our living
environments?
2. I think it’s time that we, as a species, accepted the fact that this inner city pollution problem is only going to get
worse if we don't act now. I firmly believe that banning cars from all city centres is the first and most important
step.
3. Why is it that our greatest minds work tirelessly on projects like colonising Mars, as opposed to focusing on
creating systems for inner city transport which will work efficiently for everyone, without poisoning the air that
we breathe?
Conclusion
“Cars should be banned from the centres of all major cities.”
Content notes/ideas (write down your ideas for your conclusion, then develop them in your writing):
imagine future cities it’s up to us we are responsible for our own future
Useful language
• Finally…
• In conclusion…
• To sum up…
• All in all…
• In short…
Finally, take a moment and visualise the cities of the future. Are they lush, green and clean? Or
are they thick, dark and dirty? It’s up to us to decide.
Final writing example with title:
Introduction It is widely known that many large city inhabitants suffer from traffic and pollution
problems, but it wasn’t until a few weeks ago when I was stuck in traffic in central
Bangkok, coughing up carbon dioxide, that I fully realised the extent of this problem.
Idea 1 We are in an era where we, the human race, have excelled in science and technology, and
(paragraph 1) are reaching toward the stars. So why is it that we cannot seem to control the most
important thing in our lives - our living environments?
Idea 2 I think it’s time that we, as a species, accepted the fact that this inner city pollution
(paragraph 2) problem is only going to get worse if we don't act now. I believe that banning cars from all
city centres is the first and most important step.
Idea 3 Why is it that our greatest minds work tirelessly on projects like colonising Mars, as
(paragraph 3) opposed to focusing on creating systems for inner city transport which will work efficiently
for everyone, without poisoning the air that we breathe?
Conclusion Finally, take a moment and visualise the cities of the future. Are they lush, green and clean?
Or are they thick, dark and dirty. It’s up to us to decide.
*Take Note: the handwritten notes on the left are just for guidance, and must not be
included in your final writing.
Task 3.3
• Some people believe that humans should not eat meat. Do you agree?
Remember:
• Take some time to think of (and note down) ideas for your essay before
you start writing.
• Try and use some of the “useful language” you have seen in this lesson.
TAKE NOTE:
• This writing must be done as a Google Doc., then shared with me.
Please can you have this writing task finished and shared with me by Friday the
16th of February.
Good luck!