J2HH34
J2HH34
J2HH34
General information
Superclass: FJ
Version: 02
Unit purpose
The purpose of this unit is to develop skills in applying the conventions of the English
language and genres to edit and proofread text for creative and professional purposes. It is
aimed at learners studying communication, media and journalism who wish to develop their
editing and proofreading skills.
Outcomes
On successful completion of the unit the learner will be able to:
Core Skills
Achievement of this Unit gives automatic certification of the following Core Skills component:
There are also opportunities to develop aspects of Core Skills which are highlighted in the
Support Notes of this Unit specification.
Outcome 1
Edit text to meet a brief.
Outcome 2
Proofread and amend text.
Learners will need to provide evidence to demonstrate their knowledge and/or skills across
all outcomes by showing that they can complete the tasks below.
Outcome 1
The learner should be presented with a piece of text of approximately 1,000 words. This
should include elements that could be cut, such as repetition, unnecessary adjectives or long
sentences. The learner should reduce the length to 750 words.
It should retain:
This is a supervised, open-book assessment. Learners may have access to resources such
as dictionaries, thesauruses and technology such as checking, reviewing and tracking tools.
Outcome 2
Unseen
500 words in length
It should include twenty errors. These should include several of the following: lapses in
spelling, syntax and register, misuses of commas, full stops, apostrophes and conjunctions
and others as appropriate.
Learners should be told that there are only twenty errors and that they should only make
twenty corrections. As a minimum, they should correctly amend sixteen of the included errors
(80%).
This is a supervised, open-book assessment. Learners may have access to resources such
as dictionaries, thesauruses and technology such as checking, reviewing and tracking tools.
While the exact time allocated to this unit is at the discretion of the centre, the notional
design length is 40 hours.
The unit can be delivered as part of a group award or as a free-standing unit for learners who
want to develop editing and proofreading skills and improve the technical accuracy of their
writing.
The skills developed in this unit will help learners avoid common errors of spelling,
punctuation and grammar. The unit will also make them aware of the principles of language
usage to increase the impact of their work. They are likely to engage more fully with tasks if
these are contextualised within their vocational area.
In this unit, learners will demonstrate knowledge of English language usage and genre
conventions by editing and correcting errors in creative text. They will refine and apply their
knowledge and skills to produce accurate text that is ready for publication. Text is taken to
mean any written content produced for a creative purpose or any piece of edited writing.
Elements that could be edited or proofread are: words, sentences, paragraphs, stanzas,
captions; layout, including spacing; structure; hyperlinks; bibliographies; indexes; written
content in tables, graphs, diagrams, etc. Creative need not mean fictional.
Relevant text for study and assessment is any that has been written for distribution to an
audience, online or offline, for a particular purpose. This may include feature articles, blog
content, stories, scripts, journalistic and advertising copy or any other creative writing that is
intended for publication. It could be any piece of writing that achieves a publishable standard
and could include the work of the learner and their peers.
Both outcomes focus on the accurate use of grammar, punctuation and syntax. Learners are
required to make decisions about the application and usage of conventions. They need to be
able to identify the most widely accepted written forms, and relate these to the genre and the
inferred intentions of the writer to recognise deliberate manipulation. Awareness of
techniques of style appropriate to genre should include an understanding of the impact of
complexity of word groups, word choice, register and word order. The characteristics of
standard, colloquial, journalistic and American English could be considered.
At all stages, the need for accuracy should be reinforced and attention to detail encouraged.
Outcome 1 requires learners to fact-check content and Outcome 2 requires the correction of
spelling and language use. Learners should be given access to resources such as
dictionaries, thesauruses, spellcheckers and online and offline search resources. Although a
wide range of editing and proofreading tools and assistive technology is available to support
learners, they should be made aware of the limitations of these, and be encouraged to work
from hard copies with less support on occasion where possible, as this reflects industry
practice in some areas.
Reading a range of published texts to analyse writing and conventions used in the creative
industries should be encouraged throughout delivery in order to exemplify good practice. It
will be evident that the rules and conventions of English language can be manipulated to
create impact and effects when they have been mastered.
Learners should be made aware of the markets in which editors and proofreaders work and
the wide range of vocational contexts in which the skills acquired in this unit can be used.
Exposure to case studies of professionals, field trips to businesses and visits and
masterclasses from working proofreaders and editors will be motivating. If studying
communication, media and journalism, learners should be made aware of the essential
contribution to the work of the creative industries by editors who correct and modify writing to
meet specific standards. In replicating this role, they could, for instance, be assigned
journalistic roles such as sub-editor and work in teams to produce pieces for an online news
site by a given deadline. Many professional bodies and businesses publish guidance on their
house style. While learners will work towards using their skills in a specific vocational
context, they may be encouraged to note that these are transferable and there are many
openings for skilled proofreaders in freelance or paid employment. They should understand
the difference and boundaries between proofreading and copy-editing. The importance of
sticking to the brief and planning for and meeting deadlines should be clear.
At this level, the focus is on improving accuracy of language use, encouraging more concise
expression and increasing knowledge of genres and styles. Skills can be further developed in
the SCQF level 8 unit D7XK 35 Editing and Proofreading where there is fuller consideration
of how to maintain style and organise content.
The National Occupational Standard for Proofread content SKS PUB14 informed the
development of this unit. Its aim is to ensure that ‘all content is accurate and consistent’. It
can be found in the NOS Directory at www.ukstandards.org.uk
It will be helpful to establish early in the session the varying abilities of learners in order that
differentiated tasks can be designed. It is important to deliver knowledge about English
usage and correction and editing techniques using a variety of approaches and materials.
There are many excellent websites offering interactive support, and online quizzes can be
used to good effect to test knowledge and motivate learning. Assistive technology may help
some learners to develop knowledge and apply skills prior to being assessed.
Centres are reminded that prior verification of centre-devised assessments would help to
ensure that the national standard is being met. Where learners experience a range of
assessment methods, this helps them to develop different skills that should be transferable to
work or further and higher education.
While there is some overlap in the skills required for editing and proofreading, they are
distinct activities. Therefore, it is likely that the assessment of each will be separate. This
approach may make it easier for learners to understand the difference between the roles and
associated tasks.
Across both outcomes, learners should be able to distinguish between rules and guidelines
and appreciate the limits of technical correctness in professional writing. English language
usage covers a very wide range of elements, so it would not be possible to assess
everything that is learned.
The text for the assessment of Outcome 2 will be sufficiently demanding for this level and
include the stated number of errors. It should be a piece that has not previously been studied
in class. It should not be too complex nor allow a range of interpretations.
Words that are often confused and which would not be identified as incorrect by
software, including American variations
Mistakes in the use of traditionally recognised parts of speech and definite and indefinite
articles
Noun-pronoun and subject-verb disagreement
Inconsistency of verb tense and pronoun reference
Unacceptable comparison of adjectives and adverbs
Misplacement of prepositions
Omission or misuse of the full stop, comma and apostrophe
Mismatch of singular and plural forms
Misuse of conjunctions within compound and complex sentences
Incorrect application of adverb modifiers
Unattached phrases or clauses and false series in sentence parts
Both assessments are supervised and open-book. It is recommended that each assessment
should take place during a single event. There should be one opportunity for remediation,
after which a new text should be issued.
It is suggested that learners should have the opportunity to edit and submit text in both print
and digital forms. It may also be appropriate to set deadlines and time limits. These
additional requirements reflect practice in some areas of industry. Accordingly, learners may
have access to online and offline resources such as dictionaries, thesauruses, search
resources and checking, reviewing and tracking tools as would be the case in the workplace.
The limitations of technology in editing and proofreading should, however, be highlighted.
The skills developed in this unit are particularly useful for learners studying media,
communication and journalism, but are transferable to many other vocational areas. There
will be significant development of skills in reading and analysing writing which will support
practical work in other units. Accuracy in the use of language, spelling, punctuation and
syntax is integral to achievement. It will also enhance general employability and the ability to
work at degree level.
Oral Communication
The written component of the Communication Core Skill is developed in this unit. Reading
will be developed as learners study and apply language conventions. They will access,
analyse and evaluate complex texts in a variety of genres and contexts as they undertake
formative work. Learners will read, proofread and edit creative text that is complex in
structure and meaning and will make edits based on their understanding of its purpose,
context and audience. They will use industry-specific terminology and conventions to
communicate the reasons for changes. In reducing the length of text, they will develop their
summary skills. Overall, they will evaluate fitness for purpose and amend copy accordingly
for publication.
Providing/Creating Information
Use ICT independently to carry out a range of processing tasks
Learners will use ICT independently and this will generally help them to develop confidence
in using tools for education and work. They will access digital and online sources for fact-
checking and use software tools to access, proofread, edit and share texts and copy. These
activities will enhance their ability to proofread and edit to a professional standard.
Essential skills
This unit is designed to encourage independent working, raise awareness of professional
practice and enhance employability skills including:
Communication
Creativity
Digital competence
Working autonomously/independently
Using initiative and being proactive
Research and investigation
Planning and organising
Time management and meeting deadlines
Critically analysing and evaluating.
Citizenship
Texts selected for analysis and editing should raise awareness of issues involving cultural
sensitivities and representations, diversity and inclusion and highlight the learner’s role in
dealing with these sensitively.
Sustainability
The use of digital media for tutor/learner communication, editing and proofreading and the
submission of work is to be encouraged. Working practices could be reviewed to ensure
environmental sensitivity, recycling and waste reduction.
The Critical Thinking component of Problem Solving at SCQF level 6 is embedded in this
unit. When a learner achieves the unit, their Core Skills profile will also be updated to include
this component.
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This unit will provide you with the skills required to apply the conventions of the English
language and genres to edit and proofread text for creative and professional purposes.
These skills are important in all sectors of the creative industries and will help you to improve
your writing. It may be necessary to revise some English language knowledge, for example,
syntax and punctuation use. You will apply English language and genre conventions to a
standard that is sufficiently high for publication.
There are two outcomes. For both, you will develop your ability to apply language and genre
conventions to make amendments to text to get it ready for publication online and/or in print.
You will study how editing and proofreading is used in relevant industry and creative contexts
and learn to identify the features and conventions of a range of genres such as feature
articles, blogs, prose, scripts and journalistic and advertising copy.
You will take part in practical exercises involving the editing, proofreading and amendment of
text. To help you understand how these skills are used in vocational contexts, you may adopt
roles and follow processes like those used in journalism, publishing or other relevant sectors,
although you are not required to do so to pass the unit. You will be encouraged to follow
established editing and proofreading practice by using accepted styles and proofreading
conventions where appropriate, and will refer to guidance from professional bodies. You will
also benefit from collaborating with others in your class by commenting on each other’s work
and acting on relevant feedback.
You will be given two pieces of text to improve. In Outcome 1 you will use editing skills to
check accuracy and reduce the length of the text. In Outcome 2 you will use proofreading
techniques to correct common errors in grammar, punctuation and syntax. For both
Outcomes, you will have access to online and offline resources such as dictionaries,
thesauruses, search resources and checking, reviewing and tracking tools to help you
achieve the required level of accuracy of text and factual content.
While there are no embedded Core Skills in this unit, you will be given the opportunity to
further develop and consolidate your skills in Communication and Information and
Communication Technology (ICT).
Analysis of complex texts and the amendment of the work of others will improve your critical
reading and as a result, your own writing. You will use digital and online tools to prepare your
own work and that of others for publication that will improve your proficiency in the use of
ICT.
Communication
Creativity
Digital competence
Working autonomously/independently
Using initiative and being proactive
Research and investigation
Planning and organising
Time management and meeting deadlines
Critically analysing and evaluating
The skills developed in this unit are particularly useful for learners studying Media,
Communication and Journalism, but are transferable to many other vocational areas. They
will enhance your general employability and ability to work independently. You will become
aware of the need for sensitivity in how critique is communicated and the impact of written
ideas and representations on people in society. You will be encouraged to adopt sustainable
working practices in line with best practice in communities and industry.
The Critical Thinking component of Problem Solving at SCQF level 6 is embedded in this
unit. When a learner achieves the unit, their Core Skills profile will also be updated to include
this component.