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Glenn Stout, editor of The Best American Sports Writing 2015, describes a
good sports story as one that “provides an experience that… takes you
from one place you’ve never been before and by the end leaves you in
another place, changed.”
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After that, the story follows by giving an account of big plays, players who
contributed tremendously to the final outcome, and after-game insights,
quoting both players and coaches.
Many high school and college sports use the straight-lead game story,
but sports writers for professional sports events have veered away from
this format.
The reason is that TV already shows the entire game and fans usually
know the scores and highlights before the article makes it to publication.
It’s the start of yet another season. The quiet of the night contrasts with
the vibrant group gathered in the upper room of their local church,
fervently praying. As the clock ticks closer towards midnight, the
spiritual coach of the state’s professional rugby team receives an
impression from God – “the last placed team he is mentoring will win the
entire league this very year.”
It is a bold revelation, and he grapples with what to do with this.
After opening with this unique angle, the writer proceeds to describe the
prominent rugby coach’s background, as well as what was going on at the
time he had this unusual experience.
Instead, the story gives them a different perspective of the game and the
people involved.
3. Profiles
Whereas a feature game story spotlights a game, a profile features an
individual character. This person might be a rookie athlete rising in the
ranks, or perhaps an influential coach.
To show you the difference between a feature game story and a profile,
here is an example of a real-life personality profile opening of the same
rugby coach Tevita Koloi:
He stood on the bridge, pondering how everything in his life had gone
wrong. After several years of depression, disappointment, abuse and
separation, he had reached the end of his rope and was ready to end it
all. He closed his eyes, readying himself to take this irreversible step. At
that very moment, he heard a seemingly innocuous noise from below,
“Beep-beep! Beep-beep!” He opened his eyes and reached into his
pocket for his phone, intending to read this message before he went
forward with his tragic plan. The words he read, sent from an
acquaintance he was not even particularly close to, shocked him out of
his stupor: “Jesus loves you. He will never leave you. Receive His love.”
The story then proceeds to describe his battle with depression and
suicide, and how he used the same thing that saved him, text messaging,
to help others in the sports world.
These stories take a bird’s eye view of the season: they normally share
the expectations that coaches and players have, or how they feel at the
end of a season.
Coach Sandy Miller has high hopes for the Bannerview High School
women’s volleyball team this year. With the Royals being the county
champions last year, led by dynamic team captain Serena Delgado, who
continues to lead the team this year as a senior. “We believe she’ll bring
the team to greater heights this year,” Coach Miller says.
5. Columns
A sportswriting column is the place where a sportswriter shares their
opinion. Sometimes these columns may include venting when a team,
player, or coach doesn’t meet expectations. Other times, they may write
about what they admire in a team, player or coach.
The best sports writers are able to convey the sense of awe readers feel
when watching a game.
To write a good sports lead, first pick which of the 5 types of sports
stories you would like to write. The type of story you choose will
determine the lead you write.
If you opt for a straight-news story, pick a highlight from the game you are
writing about and focus on that in your first paragraph.
If you choose a feature or profile, pick something that stands out about
the team or person. Think of a scene that best describes the
characteristic you want to highlight. Do you describe a practice session?
A game huddle? Or an after-game interview?
For a season preview or wrap-up story, pick a sport you love and describe
a broad perspective of an upcoming season or the season that just
wrapped up, beginning with the best teams.
For or an opinion column, find one angle that you would like to express
your opinion on and that you feel passionate about.