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Analysis Essay

Sayar Chong Min


Phyo Lin Kyaw
3.14.2024

The articles provide a comprehensive examination of Daylight Saving Time


(DST), covering its historical origins in the United States, perceived benefits, and
criticisms. Both supporters and critics of DST effectively present arguments,
historical contexts, research studies, and practical considerations. However, in my
point of view, the article from critics of DST seems more acceptable and reliable
according to these points.
First, the articles start with their views on energy consumption and DST. Both
articles mentioned the pros and cons of DST when it comes to energy usage and
both mentioned studies and researches to support their evidence. However, in article
1, the sentence “DST saved about 1% per day in energy costs” seems to support the
evidence but the study that the writer mentioned in this article was very general and
outdated since it took place in the 1970s. The points look very interesting but there
are no specifics. On the other hand, specific sources and studies are mentioned in
article 2. In article 2, the sentence “A2007 study in California indicated that DST had
little or no effect on energy consumption that year” makes the evidence stronger.
The study is very specific as the place where the study was done and the name of
the study are mentioned. In that sentence, the word “that year” makes the study
updated. What’s more, the second study seems more specific than that in article 1.
Second, the articles continued to discuss car accidents and road safety
related to DST. In article 1, personally speaking, the claims are not sufficient to
support the evidence because the sentence “Supporters of DST also claim that more
sunlight saves lives” is an opinion not fact. Although three decades of research is
mentioned to support the claim, I think it is a bit unnecessary because the time in
which the research has been done is so long. Despite these researches, the points
that the author adds are interesting and acceptable. In article 2, three studies are
mentioned, all of them seem reliable and updated and the points are acceptable as
well.
Third, authors added their opinions in the last paragraph to make their claims
stronger. However, article 1 mentioned another study to make the argument more
acceptable but as usual, the study seems very general and there is no credibility.
Overall, the points that are made by the author of article 2 are stronger and
more reliable than that of article 1. Because of specific details, updated studies and
reliable facts make the article 2 better.

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