Analisis Alien
Analisis Alien
Analisis Alien
ALIEN
1976
SYNOPSIS
En route back to Earth from a far part of the galaxy, the crew of the
starship SNARK intercepts a transmission in an alien language,
originating from a nearby storm-shrouded planet.
Certain clues in the wrecked ship lead them across the hostile surface
of the planet to a primitive stone pyramid, the only remnant of a
vanished civilization. Beneath this pyramid they find an ancient tomb
full of fantastic artifacts. Lying dormant in the tomb are centuries-
old spores, which are triggered into life by the men's presence. A
parasite emerges and fastens itself to one of the men's faces -- and
cannot be removed.
Ultimately it is dislodged from its victim and ejected from the ship,
and they blast off from the Hell-planet. However, before they can seal
themselves into suspended animation for the long voyage home, a
horrible little monster emerges from the victim's body -- it has been
growing in him, deposited there by the parasite... and now it is loose
on the ship.
Finally there is only one man left alive, alone on the ship with the
creature, and only six hours till his air runs out; which leads to a
climax of horrifying, explosive jeopardy, the outcome of which
determines who will reach Earth alive -- man or alien.
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CAST OF CHARACTERS
CHAZ STANDARD,
Captain.................A leader and a politician. Believes that
any action is better than no action.
MARTIN ROBY,
Executive Officer.......Cautious but intelligent -- a survivor.
DELL BROUSSARD,
Navigator...............Adventurer; brash glory-hound.
SANDY MELKONIS,
Communications..........Tech Intellectual; a romantic.
CLEAVE HUNTER,
Mining Engineer.........High-strung; came along to make his
fortune.
JAY FAUST,
Engine Tech.............A worker. Unimaginative.
The crew is unisex and all parts are interchangeable for men or women.
IMAGE -- starmap.jpg
FADE IN:
FOOM! FOOM! FOOM! With explosions of escaping gas, the lids on the
freezers pop open.
ROBY
Oh... God... am I cold...
BROUSSARD
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Is that you, Roby?
ROBY
I feel like shit...
BROUSSARD
Yeah, it's you all right.
FAUST
(groans)
Ohh... I must be alive, I feel dead.
BROUSSARD
You look dead.
MELKONIS
The vampires rise from their graves.
BROUSSARD
(shakes his fist in the
air triumphantly)
We made it!
HUNTER
(not fully awake)
Is it over?
STANDARD
It's over, Hunter.
HUNTER
(yawning)
Boy, that's terrific.
STANDARD
(looking around with a grin)
Well, how does it feel to be rich
men?
FAUST
Cold!
STANDARD
Okay! Everybody topside! Let's get
our pants on and get to our posts!
MELKONIS
Somebody get the cat.
There are seats for four men. Each chair faces a console and is
surrounded by a dazzling array of technology.
STANDARD, ROBY, BROUSSARD, and MELKONIS are entering and finding their
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seats.
BROUSSARD
I'm going to buy a cattle ranch.
ROBY
(putting down the cat)
Cattle ranch!
BROUSSARD
I'm not kidding. You can get one if
you have the credit. Look just like
real cows, too.
STANDARD
All right, tycoons, let's stop
spending our credit and start
worrying about the job at hand.
ROBY
Right. Fire up all systems.
STANDARD
Sandy, you want to give us some
vision?
MELKONIS
Feast your eyes.
BROUSSARD
(after a pause)
Where's Irth?
STANDARD
Sandy, scan the whole sky.
Melkonis hits buttons. On the screens the images all begin to pan.
When the pullback is finished, WE SEE THE FULL LENGTH OF THE STARSHIP
"SNARK," hanging in the depths of interstellar space, against a
background of glimmering stars.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
ROBY
Where are we?
STANDARD
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Sandy, contact traffic control.
MELKONIS
This is deep space commercial vessel
SNARK, registration number E180246,
calling Antarctica air traffic
control. Do you read me? Over.
BROUSSARD
(staring at a screen)
I don't recognize that constellation.
STANDARD
Dell, plot our location.
BROUSSARD
I got it. Oh boy.
STANDARD
Where the hell are we?
BROUSSARD
Just short of Zeta II Reticuli. We
haven't even reached the outer rim
yet.
ROBY
What the hell?
STANDARD
This is Chaz speaking. Sorry, but we
are not home. Our present location
seems to be only halfway to Irth.
Remain at your posts and stand by.
That is all.
ROBY
Chaz, I've got something here on my
security alert. A high priority from
the computer...
STANDARD
Let's hear it.
ROBY
(punches buttons)
Computer, you have signalled a
priority three message. What is the
message?
COMPUTER
(a mechanical voice)
I have interrupted the course of the
voyage.
ROBY
What? Why?
COMPUTER
I am programmed to do so if certain
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conditions arise.
STANDARD
Computer, this is Captain Standard.
What conditions are you talking
about?
COMPUTER
I have intercepted a transmission of
unknown origin.
STANDARD
A transmission?
COMPUTER
A voice transmission.
MELKONIS
Out here?
COMPUTER
I have recorded the transmission.
STANDARD
Play it for us, please.
STANDARD
Computer, what language was that?
COMPUTER
Unknown.
ROBY
Unknown! What do you mean?
COMPUTER
It is none of the 678 dialects
spoken by technological man.
STANDARD
(silencing them)
Just hold it, hold it!
(glares around the room)
Computer: have you attempted to
analyze the transmission?
COMPUTER
Yes. There are two points of salient
interest. Number one: it is highly
systematized, indicating intelligent
origin. Number two: certain sounds
are inconsistent with the human
palate.
ROBY
Oh my God.
STANDARD
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Well, it's finally happened.
MELKONIS
First contact...
STANDARD
Sandy, can you home in on that beam?
MELKONIS
What's the frequency?
STANDARD
Computer, what's the frequency of
the transmission?
COMPUTER
65330 dash 99.
MELKONIS
I've got it. It's coming from
ascension 6 minutes 32 seconds,
declination -39 degrees 2 seconds.
STANDARD
Dell -- show me that on a screen.
BROUSSARD
I'll give it to you on number four.
BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
That's it. Let me straighten it out.
He twists a knob, moving the image on the screen till the dot is in
the center.
STANDARD
Can you get it a little closer?
BROUSSARD
That's what I'm going to do.
BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
Planetoid. Diameter, 120 kilometers.
MELKONIS
It's tiny!
STANDARD
Any rotation?
BROUSSARD
Yeah. Two hours.
STANDARD
Gravity?
BROUSSARD
Point eight six. We can walk on it.
Standard rises.
STANDARD
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Martin, get the others up to the
lounge.
MELKONIS
If it's an S.O.S., we're morally
obligated to investigate.
BROUSSARD
Right.
HUNTER
I don't know. Seems to me we came on
this trip to make some credit, not
to go off on some kind of side trip.
BROUSSARD
(excited)
Forget the credit; what we have here
is a chance to be the first men to
contact a nonhuman intelligence.
ROBY
If there is some kind of alien
intelligence down on that planetoid,
it'd be a serious mistake for us to
blunder in unequipped.
BROUSSARD
Hell, we're equipped --
ROBY
Hell, no! We don't know what's down
there on that piece of rock! It
might be dangerous! What we should
do is get on the radio to the
exploration authorities... and let
them deal with it.
STANDARD
Except it will take 75 years to get
a reply back. Don't forget how far
we are from the Colonies, Martin.
BROUSSARD
There are no commercial lanes out
here. Face it, we're out of range.
MELKONIS
Men have waited centuries to contact
another form of intelligent life in
the universe. This is an opportunity
which may never come again.
ROBY
Look --
STANDARD
You're overruled, Martin. Gentlemen
-- let's go.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
The men are strapping in, but this time it is with grim determination.
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STANDARD
Dell, I want greater magnification.
More surface detail. I want to see
what this place looks like.
BROUSSARD
I'll see what I can do.
He jabs his controls. The image on the screen ZOOMS DOWN TOWARD THE
PLANET; but all detail quickly vanishes into a featureless grey haze.
STANDARD
It's out of focus.
ROBY
No -- that's atmosphere. Cloud
layer.
MELKONIS
My God, it's stormy for a piece of
rock that size!
ROBY
Just a second.
(punches buttons)
Those aren't water vapor clouds;
they have no moisture content.
STANDARD
Put ship in atmospheric mode.
The great dish antenna on the SNARK folds down against the main body
of the ship, and other parts flatten out, until the ship has assumed
an aerodynamic form.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
STANDARD
Dell, set a course and bring us in
on that beam.
EXTERIOR - SPACE
The SNARK's engines cough into life, and send it drifting toward the
distant dot that is the planetoid.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
STANDARD
Activate lifter quads.
BROUSSARD
Activated. Vertical drop checked.
Correcting course. On tangential
course now, orbiting.
(brief pause as he
studies his instruments)
Crossing the terminator. Entering
night side.
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Beneath the orbiting SNARK, night's curtain rolls across the planet.
Descending at an angle, the SNARK drops down into the thick atmosphere
of the planetoid.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
ROBY
Atmospheric turbulence. Dust storm.
STANDARD
Turn on navigation lights.
EXTERIOR - "SNARK"
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
BROUSSARD
Approaching point of origin. Closing
at 20 kilometers, 15 and slowing.
Ten. Five. Gentlemen, we are
directly above the source of the
transmission.
STANDARD
What's the terrain down there?
BROUSSARD
Well, line of sight is impossible
due to dust. Radar gives me noise.
Sonar gives me noise. Infrared --
noise. Let's try ultraviolet. There.
Flat. It's totally flat. A plain.
STANDARD
Is it solid?
BROUSSARD
It's... basalt. Rock.
STANDARD
Then take her down.
BROUSSARD
Drop begins... now! Fifteen
kilometers and dropping... twelve...
ten... eight and slowing. Five.
Three. Two. One kilometer and
slowing. Lock tractor beams.
ROBY
Locked.
BROUSSARD
Kill drive engines.
ROBY
Engines off.
BROUSSARD
Nine hundred meters and dropping.
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800. 700. Hang on gentlemen.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
BROUSSARD
And we're... down.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
The whole ship VIBRATES VIOLENTLY FOR AN INSTANT -- then all the
panels in the room flash simultaneously and the LIGHT'S GO OUT.
BROUSSARD
Jesus Christ!
STANDARD
What the hell happened?
ROBY
(hits a switch)
Engine room, what happened?
FAUST
(over, filtered)
Just a minute, hold it, I'm
checking.
ROBY
Has the hull been breached?
BROUSSARD
Uh...
(scans his gauges)
No, I don't see anything. We've
still got pressure.
FAUST
(over, filtered)
Martin, this is Jay. The intakes are
clogged with dust. We overheated and
burned out a whole cell.
STANDARD
(strikes his panel)
Damn it! How long to fix?
ROBY
(into microphone)
How long to fix?
FAUST
(over, filtered)
Hard to say.
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ROBY
Well, get started.
FAUST
(over, filtered)
Right. Talk to you.
STANDARD
Let's take a look outside. Turn the
screens back on.
BROUSSARD
Can't see a blessed thing.
Only a few glittering lights distinguish the ship from the absolute
darkness around it.
THE WIND MOANS AND SCREAMS. DUST BLOWS IN FRONT OF THE TINY GLIMMERING
LIGHTS.
STANDARD
Kick on the floods.
ROBY
Not much help.
STANDARD
Well, we can't go anywhere in this
darkness. How long till dawn?
MELKONIS
(consults his instruments)
Well... this rock rotates every two
hours. The sun should be coming up
in about 20 minutes.
BROUSSARD
Good! Maybe we'll be able to see
something then.
ROBY
Or something will be able to see us.
DISSOLVE TO:
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ALIEN
RUN TITLES.
PULL BACK FROM SCREEN. The men (Standard, Roby, Broussard, and
Melkonis) are sitting and standing around the room, drinking coffee
and staring at the screens, which reveal only the billowing dust.
ROBY
There could be a whole city out
there and we'd never see it.
BROUSSARD
Not sitting on our butts in here,
that's for sure.
STANDARD
Just settle down. Sandy, you get any
response yet?
MELKONIS
(pulls off his earphones)
Sorry. Nothing but that same damn
transmission, every 32 seconds. I've
tried every frequency on the
spectrum.
BROUSSARD
Are we just going to sit around and
wait for an invitation?
Roby gives Broussard a black look, then stabs a button on his console
and speaks into the mike.
ROBY
(into mike)
Hello, Faust!
FAUST
(over, filtered)
Yeah!
ROBY
How's it coming on the engines?
FAUST
I never saw anything as fine as this
dust... these cells are all pitted on
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a microscopic level. I have to
polish these things smooth again, so
it's going to take a while. Okay?
ROBY
Yeah, okay.
(puts down the mike)
STANDARD
Sandy... how far are we from the
source of the transmission?
MELKONIS
Source of transmission is to the
northeast... about 300 meters.
ROBY
Close...
BROUSSARD
Close enough to walk to!
STANDARD
Martin, would you run me an
atmospheric?
ROBY
(punches buttons and
consults his panels)
10% argon, 85% nitrogen, 5% neon...
and some trace elements.
STANDARD
Nontoxic... but unbreathable.
Pressure?
ROBY
Ten to the fourth dynes per square
centimeter.
STANDARD
Good! Moisture content?
ROBY
Zero. Dry as a bone.
STANDARD
Any microorganisms?
ROBY
Not a one. It's dead.
STANDARD
Anything else?
ROBY
Yeah, rock particles. Dust.
STANDARD
Well, we won't need pressure suits,
but breathing masks are called for.
Sandy -- can you rig up some kind of
portable unit that we can use to
follow that transmission to its
source?
MELKONIS
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No problem.
BROUSSARD
I volunteer for the exploration
party.
STANDARD
I heard you. You want to break out
the side arms?
Standard, Broussard and Melkonis enter the lock. They all wear gloves,
boots, jackets, and pistols.
Broussard touches a button and the inner door slides silently shut,
sealing them into the lock.
STANDARD
(adjusting the radio on his
mask)
I'm sending. Do you hear me?
BROUSSARD
Receiving.
MELKONIS
Receiving.
STANDARD
All right. Now just remember: keep
away from those weapons unless I say
otherwise. Martin, do you read me?
ROBY
Read you, Chaz.
STANDARD
Open the outer door.
Ponderously, the outer lock door slides open. ORANGE SUNLIGHT streams
into the lock, and clouds of dust swirl in. We hear the MOANING OF THE
WIND OUTSIDE.
The three men trot down the gangplank to the surface of the planet.
Their feet sink into a thick layer of dust and loose rock.
The men huddle together, looking around. The wind screams and tugs at
their clothes. Nothing can be seen.
STANDARD
Which way, Sandy?
MELKONIS
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(pointing)
That way.
STANDARD
You lead.
Melkonis walks into the blinding dust clouds, followed closely by the
others.
STANDARD
Okay, Martin. We're on our way.
ROBY
Okay, Chaz, I hear you. I've got you
on my board.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Good. I'm getting you clear too.
Let's just keep the line open.
The three men plough their way through a limbo of yellow dust and
shrieking wind. With their rubbery masks and deliberate movements,
they look like deep-sea divers at the bottom of a murky ocean.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Can't see more than three meters in
any direction out here. We're
walking blind, on instruments.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
What's wrong?
MELKONIS
My signal's fading.
MELKONIS (CONT'D)
(over, filtered)
It's the dust, it's interfering...
MELKONIS (CONT'D)
(over, filtered)
... Hold it, I've got it again. It's
over that way.
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HUNTER
What's happening?
Startled out of his wits, Roby GASPS and whirls around to face Hunter.
ROBY
(startled silly)
Hell!
The three men push their way through the storm. Melkonis stops again,
studies the direction finder.
MELKONIS
It's close, real close.
STANDARD
How far?
MELKONIS
We should be almost on top of it. I
just can't quite...
Suddenly, Broussard grabs Standard's arm and points. The others stare
in the direction he is pointing.
Through the dense clouds of swirling dust we can just barely make out
some kind of HUGE SHAPE.
They are struck dumb by the sight of the craft. Finally, Standard
finds his voice.
STANDARD
Martin, uh, we've found it.
ROBY
(sharply -- over, filtered)
Found what?
STANDARD
It appears to be some sort of
spacecraft. We're going to approach
it.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(over, filtered)
There are no signs of life. No
lights... no movement...
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(over, filtered)
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We're, uh, approaching the base.
A strangely shaped DOOR yawns open at the base of the ship. Dust and
sand have blown in, filling the lower part of the entrance.
With great caution, the men approach the entrance and group around it.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Appears to be a door hanging open,
the entrance is clogged with debris.
BROUSSARD
Looks like a derelict.
STANDARD
Martin, we're going in. I'm going to
hold the conversation to a minimum
from here on.
IMAGE -- datastick.jpg
Carefully, peering around, they pick their way past the indistinct
machinery.
MELKONIS
Air lock?
STANDARD
Who knows?
BROUSSARD
Let's try and find the control room.
As they move their lights around, they can see that the walls,
ceiling, and machinery are FULL OF HUGE, IRREGULAR HOLES.
MELKONIS
Look at these holes. This place
looks like Swiss cheese.
BROUSSARD
This hole goes up several decks --
looks like somebody was firing a
military disintegrator in here.
STANDARD
Climbing gear.
Standard draws out a stubby spear gun with a graplon attached to it.
He aims it up into the hole and fires.
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is a dull CLUNK, and the wire dangles.
BROUSSARD
I'll go first.
STANDARD
No, you'll follow me.
Standard attaches the wire to a powered gear box on his chest, and
presses a button. With a mechanical whine, he is pulled up into the
hole, using his feet for leverage where he can.
Broussard unclips himself from the climbing wire, then raises his own
light. At that moment, Melkonis arrives at the top of the hole.
THEIR LIGHTS SCAN THE ROOM. The beams are clearly visible as columns
of light in the floating dust. They reveal heavy, odd shapes.
MELKONIS
Holy Christ...
Standard shines his light on the console at which the hideous skeleton
is seated. He moves his light closer and peers at the panel.
STANDARD
Look at this...
They approach.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Something has been scratched here...
into the veneer. See?
IMAGE -- scrawledtriangle.jpg
Hearing something, Broussard flashes his light across the room. As the
beam scans the walls, it briefly touches on SOMETHING THAT MOVES.
MELKONIS
LOOK OUT, IT MOVED!
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STANDARD
Keep away from that gun!
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Just machinery.
BROUSSARD
But functioning.
MELKONIS
That's where the transmission is
coming from.
BROUSSARD
A recording. A damned automatic
recording.
SINISTER ANGLE ON THE SNARK. As we watch, the sunlight turns the color
of blood, and then the sun is down, leaving murky blackness in its
wake. The ring of floodlights on the ship flares into life, feebly
combatting the darkness and the storm.
STANDARD
... This is the control room...
Two or three pictures click onto the screen in succession, showing the
suited men standing against banks of machinery.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
... Some details of the control
room...
The SKELETON appears on the screen. The men react with mutters.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
... This is the skeleton... another
view of the skeleton... the
transmitting device...
The triangle that was cut into the alien's console appears.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
... This is a closeup of the triangle
we found scrawled on the console in
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front of the skeleton...
STANDARD (CONT'D)
... And that's it.
HUNTER
Phenomenal. Staggering.
BROUSSARD
We've got to go back and take a lot
more pictures, holograph
everything.
MELKONIS
And bring back as much physical
evidence as possible, too. The rest
of the skeleton. Some of the
machinery. Written records, if there
are any.
STANDARD
Martin?
ROBY
I agree. This is the single most
important discovery in history.
STANDARD
But?
ROBY
What killed it?
BROUSSARD
Hell, that thing's been dead for
years. Maybe hundreds of years. The
whole planet's dead.
FAUST
The way I figure it, they landed
here for repairs or something, then
they couldn't take off again. Maybe
the dust ruined their engines. They
set up an S.O.S. beacon, but nobody
came. So they died.
ROBY
He died.
FAUST
What?
ROBY
Not they... he...
They all turn to look in the direction of Roby's nod. CAMERA MOVES
OVER TO REVEAL THE ALIEN SKULL SITTING ON A TABLE.
ROBY (CONT'D)
... There was only one skeleton.
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STANDARD
Jay... how's it coming on the
repairs?
FAUST
Well... I'm going to have to blow the
engines out...
STANDARD
And when will you be ready to do
that?
FAUST
Oh -- I'm not near ready yet.
STANDARD
Then why the hell are you sitting
around here?
FAUST
Right.
The men rise and begin to disperse, but Roby remains seated, deep in
thought, staring at the skull. Melkonis lingers in the room with him.
MELKONIS
And there sits man's first contact
with intelligent life in the
universe.
FAUST
You ready up there?
BROUSSARD
Sure, we're ready.
FAUST
Okay. I'm going to start the
extraction procedure now.
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STANDARD
Alas, poor Yorick.
Roby STARTS, puts down the skull. Standard sits at the table.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(nodding at the screen)
Find anything we missed?
ROBY
(shrugs)
I don't even know what I'm looking
for.
STANDARD
Still worried?
ROBY
Oh well... you know me.
STANDARD
I've always respected your opinion,
Martin. If something worries you, it
worries me.
Roby reaches over and changes the slide, to the one of the CRUDELY
DRAWN TRIANGLE ON THE ALIEN CONTROL PANEL.
ROBY
What would you say that was supposed
to mean?
STANDARD
Well... it's obviously intentional...
some kind of attempt at
communication... maybe it's a symbol
that means something to them...
ROBY
But why draw it on the wall?
Roby switches off the projector, sits up, and rubs his face wearily.
ROBY (CONT'D)
(picking a hair out of
the coffeepot)
This ship is full of cat hair.
STANDARD
Tell you what, Martin. As soon as
the engine's fixed --
STANDARD (CONT'D)
This is Chaz.
BROUSSARD
(over, filtered)
Chaz, this is Dell. Can you come
topside for a minute?
STANDARD
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What's up?
BROUSSARD
(over, filtered)
Well, the sun just came up again,
and it seems the wind's died down.
It's as clear as a bell outside.
There's something I think you ought
to see.
STANDARD
I'm on my way.
Broussard is alone in the control room when Standard and Roby arrive.
STANDARD
What is it?
BROUSSARD
Take a look.
The dust no longer blows. The day is crisp, clear, and silent.
BROUSSARD
I was scanning the horizon to see
what I could pick up. Look there, on
that screen.
STANDARD
What is it, I can't --
They all stare at the image for a long moment. The silhouette of the
PYRAMID IS INSTANTLY SUGGESTIVE OF THE SCRAWLED TRIANGLE in the alien
ship.
IMAGE -- pyramid.jpg
Standard presses the nearest communicator and speaks into the grille.
STANDARD
This is Chaz. All hands topside.
Now.
STANDARD
Doesn't seem much doubt about it,
does there?
MELKONIS
That creature sure must have
considered it important... using his
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last strength to draw it...
BROUSSARD
Maybe they built it.
FAUST
As what?
BROUSSARD
A marker for buried instrumentation?
HUNTER
Or a mass grave.
BROUSSARD
Maybe the rest of the crew is in
there -- in some kind of suspended
animation, waiting to be rescued.
MELKONIS
It wasn't necessarily built by them.
ROBY
Here comes the dust again.
WITH A SHRIEK, THE DUST STORM RETURNS, completely obscuring the SNARK.
STANDARD
Well, does anyone else agree with
Martin that we should not explore
it?
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Then the sooner we get moving, the
better.
STANDARD
We can't make out any details or
features yet... but it's definitely
too regular for a natural
formation...
Roby and Hunter are present. They are listening to Standard's VOICE ON
THE RADIO.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(over, filtered)
... There's one thing I can say for
sure though...
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ROBY
Now what's wrong?
HUNTER
I've completely lost their signal.
ROBY
Can you get them back?
HUNTER
I'm trying.
The three men come to the base of the massive structure. Dust and sand
have piled thickly around the crumbling, grey stones that form the
base.
MELKONIS
This looks ancient.
STANDARD
Can't tell -- these weather
conditions could erode anything,
fast.
BROUSSARD
There's no entrance.
MELKONIS
Maybe the entrance is buried. Could
be under our feet.
STANDARD
Maybe there is no entrance; the
thing may be solid.
ROBY
Well, there ought to be some way we
can get through to them --
FAUST
(over, filtered)
Sorry to interrupt, but I'm gonna
charge up the engines for a minute,
okay?
ROBY
Yeah, okay. Go ahead.
ROBY (CONT'D)
Yes!
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COMPUTER
I have a temporary sequence on the
monitor --
ROBY
Hold it, I can't hear a damn thing!
He puts an earphone to his ear and switches the computer's voice over.
ROBY (CONT'D)
Go ahead!
There is a PAUSE while Roby listens to the computer. His eyes widen.
ROBY (CONT'D)
You mean... you've translated it?
ROBY (CONT'D)
Well come on, come on! What does it
say?
Another PAUSE. Roby's face changes; he looks CHILLED TO THE BONE. His
mouth works.
HUNTER
(looking over at Roby)
What? What was that?
ROBY
The computer just translated the
goddamn message. It's not an S.O.S.
It was a warning.
BROUSSARD
Maybe we can get in by the top.
STANDARD
You want to try?
BROUSSARD
Sure.
Broussard takes out the graplon-gun, and fires the hook up toward the
top of the pyramid. It catches. He clips himself to the wire.
BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
You guys just wait down here till I
say it's okay to come up.
Broussard turns on the climbing device, and begins to walk up the side
of the pyramid.
BROUSSARD
There's a hole at the top.
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STANDARD
Can we come up?
BROUSSARD
(over, filtered)
No, it's too small, only room enough
for one person.
STANDARD
Can you see anything in the hole?
Broussard leans over and looks into the hole. He sees only blackness.
Freeing one arm, he unclips his datastick from his belt, switches on
the "flashlight" function, and shines it down into the hole.
BROUSSARD
I can see... partway down. It just
goes down like a stovepipe. Smooth
walls. I can't see the bottom --
light won't reach.
FAUST
Yes? What is it?
ROBY
Jay, we've got a problem. I was
wondering if there was any way you
could shortcut the repairs and give
us immediate takeoff capability.
FAUST
(quickly)
Why, what's wrong?
ROBY
The computer's translated the alien
signal, and it's kind of alarming.
FAUST
What do you mean?
ROBY
It couldn't translate the whole
thing, only three phrases. I'll just
read it to you the way I got it:
(reads from a strip of paper)
"... HOSTILE... SURVIVAL... ADVISE DO
NOT LAND... "
(looks up at the others)
And that's all it could translate.
Hanging from the lip of the hole, Broussard is unclipping gear from
his belt.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Dell, you want to come down, we can
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figure out where to go from here.
BROUSSARD
No, I want to go in.
STANDARD
Okay, Dell, but just for a
preliminary look-around. Don't
unhook yourself from your cable. And
be out in less than ten minutes.
BROUSSARD
Right.
He climbs over the lip and drops into the hole. He is now hanging by
the wire, with his head and shoulders out of the hole.
BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
Okay, I'm in the mouth of the
chimney now, and I'm starting down.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Take care.
Broussard activates the climbing unit and lowers himself down into the
hole.
Bracing his feet against the rough stone wall of the vertical tunnel,
Broussard switches on his datastick and points it down into the
depths.
The beam penetrates only thirty feet or so, then is lost in darkness.
BROUSSARD
It's noticeably warmer in here. Warm
air rising from below.
He starts down, paying out the line and moving down in short hops,
pushing off each time with his feet.
A little sunlight filters down from above. Looking up, he can see the
mouth of the hole, a glowing spot of light.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Are you okay in there?
BROUSSARD
(gasping for breath)
Yeah, I'm okay. Haven't hit bottom
yet. Definitely a column of warm air
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rising; it keeps the shaft clear of
dust.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
What was that Dell, I lost you, do
you read me?
BROUSSARD
Yeah, but this is hard work. Can't
talk now.
He kicks off and continues down, taking longer and longer hops as he
gains confidence.
Pausing for a moment to regain his breath, he shines the light on his
instruments.
BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
I'm way below ground level.
STANDARD
What'd he say?
MELKONIS
I couldn't make it out -- too much
interference.
HUNTER
I'm getting nowhere. The whole area
around the pyramid is dead to
transmission. I think we should go
after them.
ROBY
No.
HUNTER
What do you mean, no?
ROBY
We're not going anywhere.
HUNTER
But they don't know about the
translation! They could be in danger
right now.
ROBY
We can't spare the personnel. We've
got minimum takeoff capability right
now. That's why Chaz left us on
board.
HUNTER
Why, you chickenshit bastard --
ROBY
Just can that crap! I'm in command
here till Chaz returns! And nobody's
leaving this ship!
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Broussard resumes his downward climb. SUDDENLY, HIS FEET LOSE THEIR
PURCHASE AS THE WALLS OF THE SHAFT DISAPPEAR.
BROUSSARD
(huffing and puffing)
Tunnel's gone -- cave or something
below me -- feels like the tropics
in here; air is warm and humid...
(consults his instruments)
... high oxygen content, no dust,
it's completely breathable --
Puffing with exertion, he releases his purchase on the stone walls and
begins to lower himself on power. Now he is dangling free in darkness,
spinning slowly on the wire as the chest unit unwinds.
Finally, his feet hit bottom. He grunts in surprise and almost loses
his balance.
BROUSSARD
It's unbelievable! It's like some
kind of tomb... some primitive
religion! Hey, is anybody there? Do
you read me? Standard!
Annoyed, Broussard yanks off his breathing goggles, and leaves them
hanging around his neck. He takes a deep breath of the wet air.
STANDARD
If we don't hear from him soon, I
think we better go in after him.
MELKONIS
Sun will be down in a minute.
He walks around the urns, studying them. They all have sealed lids. He
shines his light on one of them; then he lays his gloved hand on it.
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BROUSSARD
I don't know if you can hear me, but
the place is full of large bottles
or jars, just like the one we found
on the other ship -- except these
are all sealed. Also they're soft to
the touch.
BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
Another funny thing -- I just put my
hand on it, and now there are these
raised areas appearing where my
fingertips were.
THE SUN DROPS BELOW THE HORIZON, throwing the landscape into gloom.
Standard and Melkonis switch on their lights.
STANDARD
Let's go.
He shines his light on the floor at the base of the "urn." There lies
the "lid" -- the stopper that had filled the hole. He picks it up and
studies it. It appears more organic than artificial; the inside
surface is spongy and irregular.
He bends over the mouth of the "urn" shining the light in, AND WITH
SHOCKING VIOLENCE, A SMALL, OCTOPUS-LIKE THING LEAPS OUT AND ATTACHES
ITSELF TO HIS FACE, WRAPPING ITS TENTACLES AROUND HIS HEAD.
IMAGE -- facehugger.jpg
The dust blows and howls as Standard and Melkonis arrive at the top,
lights bobbing in the darkness.
STANDARD
(puffing with exertion)
Here's his line. We can haul him out
of there if we have to.
MELKONIS
It'll yank him right off his feet if
he's not expecting it. The line
could get tangled in something.
STANDARD
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But what can we do? He's out of
radio contact.
MELKONIS
Maybe we should just wait a few more
minutes.
STANDARD
(making up his mind)
No, I told him to be out in ten
minutes. It's been much longer.
Let's get him out of there.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
The line's slack. Christ, do you
think the idiot unhooked himself?
STANDARD (CONT'D)
There, it caught!
MELKONIS
Is it still coming up, or is it
hooked on something?
STANDARD
No, it's coming.
MELKONIS
Can you see anything?
STANDARD
No, I can't see far enough. The
line's moving, though.
For a moment, the two men hang to the narrow top of the pyramid,
saving their strength, while the line reels in and the wind howls.
Then Standard shines his light back down in.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
I can see him! Here he comes!
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Get ready to grab him!
Broussard appears at the top of the pit, dangling limply from the
wire. Standard reaches for him -- then RECOILS SHARPLY.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Look out! There's something on
his face!
MELKONIS
What is it?
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STANDARD
Don't touch him, watch it!
MELKONIS
Oh God, oh God no.
STANDARD
Help me -- I'm going to try to get
it off.
With his gloved hands, Standard grasps the tentacled mess and tries to
pull it from Broussard's head.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
It won't come -- it's stuck.
MELKONIS
What is it?
STANDARD
How the hell should I know? Come on,
give me a hand, let's get him out of
there!
The two men grapple with Broussard's limp body, lifting him from the
hole.
Roby and Hunter are sitting moodily, silent. There is a long moment
while nothing is said, then:
HUNTER
I've got 'em! They're back on my
screens!
ROBY
(leaps to his feet)
How many?
HUNTER
Three blips! They're coming this
way!
ROBY
(into mike)
Hey, can you guys hear me?
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Yeah, we hear you! We're coming
back!
ROBY
Thank Christ! We lost you! Listen,
there's been a new development --
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Can't talk now; Broussard's injured.
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We'll need some help getting him
into the ship.
ROBY
(to himself)
Oh no.
HUNTER
(into intercom)
Jay, this is Cleave! Meet me at the
main air lock!
Hunter comes racing down the steps and hurries up to the inner lock
door.
HUNTER
(into intercom)
Martin, I'm by the inner lock door!
I'll wait here for you to let them
in!
ROBY
(strangely quiet)
Right.
FAUST
What the hell's going on?
HUNTER
Don't know -- Broussard got hurt
somehow.
FAUST
Hurt! How?
HUNTER
Don't know -- maybe we'll be real
lucky and he just broke his neck.
(a beat)
I knew we shouldn't of come down
here.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Martin, are you there?
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Roby leans forward and speaks into the microphone.
ROBY
Here, Chaz.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
We're coming up now, open the outer
lock door.
ROBY
Chaz -- what happened to Broussard?
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
It's some kind of organism, it's
attached itself to him. Let us in.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(over, filtered)
You hear me, Martin? Open the outer
door.
ROBY
Chaz, if it's an organism, and we
let it in, the ship will be
infected.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
We can't leave him out here, open
the door.
ROBY
(urgently)
Chaz, listen to me -- we've broken
every rule of quarantine. If we
bring an organism on board, we won't
have a single layer of defense left.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Martin, this is an order! Open the
door!
A RED LIGHT goes on, on a console on the wall. The whine of a large
servo is heard, followed by a solid metallic CLUNK.
HUNTER
Outer door's open.
After a moment, they hear the motor sound again, followed by another
CLUNK. The outer door has closed again. The red light goes off.
The inner door slides open, and Standard and Melkonis stagger through,
carrying the sagging body of Broussard. A cloud of choking dust
follows them out of the lock.
STANDARD
(pulling off his mask)
You men stay clear, there's a
parasite on him.
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Hunter and Faust RECOIL.
HUNTER
Oh -- God -- oh --
FAUST
Is it alive?
STANDARD
I don't know but don't touch it.
Give us a hand here, let's get him
up to the Autodoc.
Hunter and Faust move in carefully to help with the limp burden.
INTERIOR - INFIRMARY
One of them flicks on the lights as they come shuffling into the
medical room, carrying Broussard.
STANDARD
Help me, come on, let's get him up
here.
HUNTER
That thing, God almighty, didn't you
try to get it off him?
STANDARD
It wouldn't come.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Medical gloves.
They pull thin elastic gloves from a dispenser in the wall, and pull
them on.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
It's really on there tight.
FAUST
Here, let me try.
Faust takes a pair of pliers from a rack, and carefully grasps the tip
of one of the tentacles. Squeezing tightly, he leans back with all his
weight.
STANDARD
(grabbing Faust's hands)
Stop it, you're tearing his face.
MELKONIS
It's not coming off -- not without
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his whole face coming off too.
STANDARD
Let's let the machine work on him.
Standard turns and looks at him. For a long moment, the two men regard
each other, then STANDARD STEPS FORWARD AND SLAPS ROBY ACROSS THE
FACE.
HUNTER
Hey now, what is this?
STANDARD
Ask him.
ROBY
(slowly puts his hand
to his cheek)
I understand why you did that.
STANDARD
Good.
MELKONIS
He wouldn't open the lock; he was
going to leave us out there.
HUNTER
Yeah... well, maybe he should have. I
mean, you brought the goddamn thing
in here. Maybe you deserve to get
slapped.
FAUST
(embarrassed)
Excuse me, I've got work to do.
Faust exits.
HUNTER
I keep my mouth pretty much shut,
but I don't like hitting.
ROBY
(to Standard)
I guess I had it coming. Let's call
it settled.
After a hard stare at Roby, Standard gives him a curt nod and turns
his attention to the machinery.
ROBY (CONT'D)
(slowly)
Would somebody fill me in?
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STANDARD
He went into the pyramid alone. We
lost radio contact with him. When we
pulled him out, it was on his face.
It won't come off, not without
injuring him.
HUNTER
Where did it come from?
MELKONIS
He's the only one that knows that.
HUNTER
How does he breathe?
MELKONIS
Blood's thoroughly oxygenated.
HUNTER
Yeah, but how? His nose and mouth
are blocked.
STANDARD
Let's look inside his head.
ROBY
Look at that.
HUNTER
What is it -- I can't tell
anything --
ROBY
It's some kind of organ -- it's
inserted some kind of tube or
something down his throat.
HUNTER
(turning sick)
Oh... God...
ROBY
I think that's how it's getting
oxygen to him.
HUNTER
It doesn't make any sense. It
paralyzes him... puts him into a
coma... then keeps him alive.
MELKONIS
We can't expect to understand a life
form like this. We're out of our
back yard. Things are different
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here.
HUNTER
Well, can't we kill it? I mean, we
can't leave the damn thing on him.
MELKONIS
We don't know what might happen if
we tried to kill it. At least right
now it's keeping him alive.
HUNTER
How about cutting it off? We can't
pull it loose, but we can cut off
everything but the bottom layer,
where it's stuck to his face.
STANDARD
You're right... we can't stand here
and do nothing.
Standard picks up his dusty breathing mask and pulls it over his head.
Then he pulls back on his bulky gloves. Finally, he presses a switch
and Broussard slides back out of the booth.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(muffled in his mask)
Somebody give me a scalpel.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(muffled)
I've made an incision... it's not
reacting... but some kind of
yellowish fluid is leaking out of
the wound...
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(muffled)
Hold it, this stuff's smoking!
By now, the yellow fluid has eaten a hole through the bunk bed and has
dripped down onto the floor below. The metal floor begins to bubble
and sizzle, and more smoke rises.
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MELKONIS
God, that smoke's poisonous!
HUNTER
(pointing)
It's eating a hole in the floor!
Abruptly, the men jostle their way out of the room and huddle in the
corridor outside, coughing their lungs out.
STANDARD
That stuff's eating right through
the metal! It's going to eat through
the decks and right out through the
hull!
STANDARD
There! Look!
MELKONIS
Jesus, what can we put under it?
Standard and Hunter charge down the stairs to the level below.
STANDARD
(pointing)
There. Should be coming through
about there.
HUNTER
Careful, don't get under it!
Roby and Melkonis crouch by the spot on the floor where the acid
sizzles.
MELKONIS
Christ, that stinks.
Roby fishes a pen out of his pocket and probes into the hole in the
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floor.
ROBY
Seems to have stopped penetrating.
HUNTER
What's happening up here?
ROBY
I think it's fizzled out.
Hunter approaches and looks. Roby straightens up, starts to put the
pen back in his pocket, then changes his mind and stands holding it by
the end.
MELKONIS
I never saw anything like that in my
life... except molecular acid.
HUNTER
But this thing uses it for blood.
MELKONIS
Hell of a defense mechanism. You
don't dare kill it.
STANDARD
It's stopped?
MELKONIS
Yes, thank heaven.
STANDARD
We're just plain lucky. That could
have gone right through the hull --
taken weeks to patch it.
MELKONIS
Reminded me of when I was a kid and
the roof leaked -- everybody running
for the pots and pans.
ROBY
My God, what about Broussard?
INTERIOR - INFIRMARY
They all come into the room (Roby carrying the partially melted pen).
Broussard is still motionless on the bunk, with the thing on his face.
ROBY
Did it get on him?
STANDARD
No, thank God... just missed him.
MELKONIS
Is it still dripping?
STANDARD
(examining it)
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It appears to have healed itself.
HUNTER
It makes me sick to see him like
that.
MELKONIS
Isn't there some way we can get it
off him?
STANDARD
I don't see how. But let's do what
we can for him.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
I think we'd better get some
intravenous feeding started. God
knows what that thing is leaching
out of him.
ROBY
(studying the screens)
Look there, what's that stain on his
lungs?
MELKONIS
It appears to be a heavy fluid of
some sort... it blocks the X-rays...
ROBY
That tube must be depositing it in
him.
MELKONIS
Could be some kind of venom, or
poison...
HUNTER
This is horrible.
ROBY
Hey! what about the film?
STANDARD
What film?
ROBY
Broussard had film in his datastick,
didn't he? We can see what happened
to him.
Again we are watching slides in the darkened room. This time Standard,
Roby, Melkonis, and Hunter are watching the sequence of photographs
taken automatically by Broussard's datastick as he probed the tomb.
The camera reveals the "urns." The climax of the sequence of stills
comes when THE CREATURE LEAPS OUT OF THE "URN" TOWARD THE CAMERA --
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and after that the camera drops to a useless angle and proceeds to
show a series of meaningless blurs. Then the reel ends.
HUNTER
That must have been when he got it.
ROBY
The same thing must've happened to
the creatures on the other ship...
except they took one of those jars
on board, and opened it there.
MELKONIS
(clicks back through the
slides to a picture of
one of the "urns")
At first I thought they were jars
too, or artifacts anyway. But
they're not. They're eggs, or spore
casings. Let's go back to the
heiroglyphics.
STANDARD
I personally can't make any sense
out of it...
MELKONIS
It's a crude symbolic language --
looks primitive.
HUNTER
You can't tell -- that kind of stuff
could represent printed circuits...
STANDARD
That sounds a little fanciful...
MELKONIS
Primitive pictorial languages are
based on common objects in the
environment, and this can be used as
a starting point for translation...
ROBY
What common objects?
HUNTER
Listen, hadn't somebody better check
on Broussard?
STANDARD
(rising)
I'll do it. The rest of you
continue.
HUNTER
(rising)
I'll come with you.
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STANDARD
You know, it's fantastic -- the
human race has gone this long
without ever encountering another
advanced life form, and now we run
into a veritable zoo.
HUNTER
What do you mean?
STANDARD
Well, those things out there aren't
the same, you know -- the spaceship
and the pyramid. They're from
different cultures and different
races. That ship just landed here --
crashed like we did. The pyramid and
the thing from it are indigenous.
HUNTER
How could anything be indigenous to
this asteroid? It's dead.
STANDARD
Maybe it wasn't always dead.
INTERIOR - INFIRMARY
The door slides open, and they step into the room. Hunter activates
the bed, and it slides out of the wall.
HUNTER
It's gone.
They rush to Broussard's prone form. THE PARASITE IS GONE FROM HIS
FACE.
HUNTER
Now we're in for it.
STANDARD
The door was closed. It must still
be in here.
They immediately grow very tense. Hunter starts edging toward the
door. Standard grabs his arm.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
No, don't open the door. We don't
want it escaping.
HUNTER
(very nervous)
Well, what the hell good can we do
in here? We can't grab it -- it
might jump on us --
STANDARD
Maybe we can catch it.
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
As long as we're careful not to
damage it...
Tray in one hand, lid in the other, Standard begins moving slowly
around the room. There are very few places to hide.
He rises, and HIS SHOULDER BRUSHES THE TENTACLE. THE PARASITE DROPS TO
THE FLOOR.
STANDARD
(leaping back)
Shit!
But the thing is not moving. It lies motionless on the floor, its
tentacles curled up. Its color has faded to a dead-looking grey.
Without taking his eyes off the thing, Standard reaches behind him and
takes a long probe from the wall. He prods the thing; it does not
respond.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
I think it's dead.
With great care, he uses the probe to fish the motionless parasite
into the tray. Then he quickly closes the lid.
INTERIOR - LABORATORY
STANDARD
Look at these suckers -- no wonder
we couldn't get it off him.
ROBY
Is that its mouth?
MELKONIS
More likely that organ -- the tube-
like thing -- fits up in there.
ROBY
Ugh.
STANDARD
Quick -- it's decomposing -- gimme
something to grab it with!
Roby grabs a long pair of tongs from the wall and thrusts them at
Standard -- who throws down the pliers, snatches the tongs and seizes
the thing in the tongs.
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It is smouldering and dripping acid on the floor.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Christ! Let's get it out of here!
The men run down the passageways, Standard carrying the dripping thing
in the tongs. It leaves little smoking droplets on the floor.
They come running up to the airlock. Roby stabs the button and the
inner door slides open. By the time Standard is in the lock, Roby is
already on the intercom:
ROBY
(shouts into intercom)
For Chrissake, open the main lock!
Roby stumbles in as the inner door closes; and with a heavy whine, the
thick surface door rumbles open. Orange sunlight billows in, followed
by the inevitable dust.
The parasite hits the ground and begins to sink into the dust,
smouldering and fuming.
ROBY
(slumping against the
wall)
My God, it's lethal even when it's
dead!
Melkonis gets down on his knees and studies the small burn-holes in
the floor.
Standard opens the inner door and steps out into the corridor. There,
he activates the wall intercom and punches out a combination.
HUNTER
(over intercom,
filtered)
Yes?
STANDARD
How's Broussard?
HUNTER
(over, filtered)
He's running a fever.
STANDARD
Still unconscious?
HUNTER
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(over, filtered)
Yes.
STANDARD
Can you do anything for him?
HUNTER
(over, filtered)
The machine will bring his
temperature down. His vital
functions are strong.
STANDARD
Good.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(suddenly exhausted)
I need some coffee.
The cat is strolling around as Roby and Melkonis drop into seats;
Standard draws a cup of coffee from the machine.
MELKONIS
These day and night cycles are
totally disorienting. I feel like
we've been here for days, but it's
only been how long?
ROBY
(stroking the cat)
About four hours.
STANDARD
(staring into his coffee
cup)
I'm sorry to say it looks like you
were right in the first place,
Martin. We never should have landed
here.
ROBY
Look, I'm not trying to rub
anybody's nose in anything. The
important thing is just to get away
from here as fast as possible.
STANDARD
I can't lean on Faust any harder --
he's been working non-stop on the
engines.
ROBY
If we knew exactly what happened to
the beings on the other ship --
MELKONIS
We do know that.
ROBY
Yeah?
MELKONIS
They never made it off the planet.
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The parasites won.
ROBY
Where did the parasites come from?
STANDARD
They seem native to the planet. It's
got an atmosphere and a dense
gravity. It's dead now, but once it
must have been fertile.
MELKONIS
No. It's just too small to support
fauna as big as the parasites. If
there were a native ecology, it
would have to be microscopic.
ROBY
Couldn't the pyramid have been built
here by space travellers?
STANDARD
Too primitive. It's a pre-
technological construction. That
slab was engineered by an Iron-Age
culture at best.
MELKONIS
They're from a dead civilization;
they're spores from a tomb. God
knows how long they've been here.
ROBY
I think we better take another look
at those heiroglyphs.
Suddenly the door opens and Faust sticks his head in. He is covered
with dirt and grime.
FAUST
Hey, guess what?
STANDARD
What?
FAUST
The engines are fixed.
The SNARK's engines cough and then with a ROAR BEGIN TO BELCH OUT
STREAMS OF SUPERHEATED AIR, cutting through the tulgy dust.
The ship roars and vibrates like a huge beast, capable of unlimited
power.
STANDARD
Switch on tractor beams.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
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Lock tractor beams.
The pitch of the hum changes, and the ship levels itself.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Retract landing struts.
STANDARD
Take us up.
ROBY
(into intercom)
Up one kilometer, Jay.
The SNARK begins to levitate up into the sky, on the beams of light.
STANDARD
Switch on lifter quads.
STANDARD
Engage artificial gravity.
ROBY
Engaged.
STANDARD
Let's take her into an escape orbit.
ROBY
I'm altering our vector now; should
give us an easy escape velocity --
FAUST
(over, filtered)
This dust is getting clogged in the
intakes again!
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STANDARD
Just hold us together till we're in
space, that's all!
Abruptly the ship CLEARS THE TOP OF THE CLOUD LAYER AND BURSTS OUT
INTO STAR-SPRINKLED SPACE, trailing a wake of dust behind it.
ROBY
(pounds his panel)
We made it! Damn, we made it!
STANDARD
You bet we made it. Martin, set
course for Irth and accelerate us
into stardrive.
ROBY
With great pleasure.
MELKONIS
I feel like an escapee from Hell.
DISSOLVE TO:
ROBY
That's the part that always makes me
feel like I'm gonna puke -- when we
accelerate into light speed.
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STANDARD
Quit complaining; we're in space.
INTERIOR - CORRIDOR
STANDARD
I think the best thing to do with
Broussard is to just freeze him as
he is. It'll arrest the progress of
his disease, and he can get complete
medical attention when we get back
to the Colonies.
ROBY
We'll have to go into quarantine,
maybe for quite a while.
STANDARD
That's okay, he can remain in
hypersleep until they're ready to
treat him.
INTERIOR - INFIRMARY
As they enter the room, THEY ARE SHOCKED TO SEE BROUSSARD SITTING UP
in BED -- AWAKE.
BROUSSARD
(hoarsely)
... Mouth's so dry... can I have some
water...
BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
More.
STANDARD
(softly)
How do you feel, Dell?
BROUSSARD
(weakly)
Wretched. What happened to me?
STANDARD
Don't you remember?
BROUSSARD
Don't remember nothing. Can't hardly
remember my name.
ROBY
Are you in pain?
BROUSSARD
Not exactly, just feel like
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somebody's been beating me with
rubber hoses for about six years.
STANDARD
Hell, you're in great shape, you've
got your sense of humor back!
BROUSSARD
God I'm hungry.
ROBY
Dell, what's the last thing you can
remember?
BROUSSARD
... I don't know...
ROBY
Do you remember the pyramid?
BROUSSARD
No. Just some horrible dreams about
smothering. Where are we?
STANDARD
We're going home. We're in
hyperspace.
MELKONIS
We're going into the freezers now.
BROUSSARD
I'm really starving; can we get some
food before we go into the freezers?
STANDARD
(laughs)
I think that's a pretty reasonable
request.
The entire crew is seated around the table, eating huge portions
greedily. The cat eats from a dish on the table.
HUNTER
Boy do I feel a lot better. It's a
straight shot back to the Colonies,
and then we can start taking bids on
the paydirt. Any bets on the top
bid?
FAUST
(chewing)
Well, we should at least be able to
each buy our own planet.
MELKONIS
I'm going to write a book about this
expedition. I'm going to call it
"The Snark Log."
STANDARD
(stiffly)
The commander normally has first
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publication rights.
MELKONIS
Maybe we could write it together.
ROBY
First thing I'm going to do when we
get back is eat some biological
food.
MELKONIS
What's the matter, you don't like
this stuff?
ROBY
Tastes like something you'd feed a
chicken to make it lay more eggs.
STANDARD
Oh it's okay. I've had better cag
than this, but I've had worse too,
if you know what I mean.
FAUST
I kind of like it.
ROBY
You like this shit?
FAUST
It grows on you.
ROBY
You know what they make this stuff
out of?
FAUST
(annoyed)
Yes, I know what they make it out
of, so what? It's food now. You're
eating it.
ROBY
I didn't say it was bad for you,
it's just kind of sickening, that's
all.
HUNTER
Do we have to talk about this kind
of crap at the dinner table?
STANDARD
What's wrong?
BROUSSARD
(his voice straining)
I don't know... I'm getting these
CRAMPS!
The others stare at him in alarm. Another GROAN is torn from his lips.
He clutches the edge of the table with his hands, his knuckles
whitening.
STANDARD
Breathe deeply.
BROUSSARD
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(screaming)
OH GOD IT HURTS SO BAD!
ROBY
What Dell -- what?
BROUSSARD
(incoherent shriek)
OhmygooaaAAAHHHHH!!!
THEIR EYES ARE ALL RIVETTED TO BROUSSARD'S CHEST AS THE FABRIC OF HIS
TUNIC IS RIPPED OPEN, AND A HORRIBLE NASTY LITTLE HEAD THE SIZE OF A
MAN'S FIST PUSHES OUT.
Everybody SCREAMS and leaps back from the table. The cat spits and
bolts.
HUNTER
Oh, no. Oh, no.
FAUST
What was that? What the Christ was
that?
MELKONIS
It was growing in him the whole time
and he didn't even know it!
ROBY
That thing used him for an
incubator!
A hatch slides open on the side of the ship, and Broussard's wrapped
body tumbles silently out.
INTERIOR - CORRIDORS
MELKONIS
We can't go into hypersleep with
that thing running around loose.
HUNTER
We'd be sitting ducks in the
freezers.
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ROBY
But we can't kill it. If we kill it,
it will spill all its body acids
right through our hull and out into
space.
FAUST
Shit...
STANDARD
We'll have to catch it and eject it
from the ship.
MELKONIS
(sighs)
Well, I kind of hate to point it
out, but all our supplies are based
on us spending a strictly limited
amount of time out of suspended
animation... and as you know, we used
up most of that time in harvesting.
STANDARD
We've got about a week left, right?
HUNTER
And then we run out of food and
oxygen.
FAUST
The water will still recycle.
ROBY
We won't need it then.
STANDARD
All right, so that's what we've got.
A week. It's plenty of time.
ROBY
But if we haven't caught it in a
week, then we have to go into the
freezers anyway.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
STANDARD
So does anybody have any
suggestions?
FAUST
We could put on our pressure suits
and blow all the air out of the
ship. That would kill it.
STANDARD
No, we can't afford to lose that
much oxygen. We're going to have to
flush it out.
MELKONIS
How?
STANDARD
Room by room, corridor by corridor.
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MELKONIS
And what do we do when we find it?
STANDARD
We'll have to trap it somehow. If we
had a really strong piece of net, we
could bag it.
FAUST
We could cut a section out of that
metallite netting. It won't hold up
to that acid, but aside from that
it's pretty strong.
ROBY
We have to avoid injuring it. What
we really need is some electric
animal prods.
HUNTER
I think I could cobble something
together. A long metal rod with a
battery in it. Give it a hell of a
shock.
STANDARD
Good. Get on it. But first, I'm
issuing a standing order: from this
moment forth, every one of us will
wear protective garments, including
helmets. Let's get down to the
locker and change.
The SNARK continues on its way through the weird vortex of hyperspace.
He reaches a corner and turns. But this new passageway has a different
gravity orientation -- Standard seems to be walking down a vertical
wall.
STANDARD
I thought I'd find you here.
MELKONIS
I was thinking of a line from an old
poem: "Water, water everywhere, but
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not a drop to drink." All that space
out there, and we're trapped in this
ship.
STANDARD
That's the one about the albatross,
right?
MELKONIS
We can't even radio for help; the
carrier wave wouldn't reach its
destination till long after we'd
died and turned to dust. We are
utterly, absolutely alone. Can
anybody really visualize such a
scale of distances? Halfway across
Creation...
STANDARD
We came out there, we'll go back. A
long time by the clock, but a short
time to us.
MELKONIS
Time and space have no meaning out
here. We're living in Einsteinian
equation.
STANDARD
I can see you're putting your spare
time to good use.
(leans forward and taps
him on the knee)
Let me tell you something: you keep
staring at hyperspace for long
enough, they'll be peeling you off a
wall. I've seen it happen.
MELKONIS
(smiles at him)
We're the new pioneers, Chaz. We
even have our own special diseases.
STANDARD
Come on -- let's go above and see
how they're coming with the gear.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
Hunter hands out five thin rods, like metal broom handles.
HUNTER
These have portable generators in
them. They're insulated down to here
-- just be careful not to touch the
end.
FAUST
Might even incinerate the damn
thing.
STANDARD
(sharply)
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I hope not.
HUNTER
Don't worry, it won't damage it,
it'll just give it a little
incentive.
STANDARD
How do we locate the creature?
FAUST
With these.
FAUST (CONT'D)
Tracking device. You set it to
search for a moving object... It
hasn't got much range, but when you
get within a certain distance, it
starts beeping.
STANDARD
These will be very useful. At least
we won't have to go digging around
in closets with our bare hands. All
right, here's the battle plan: we're
going to break into two teams and
start systematically covering the
ship. Whoever finds it first,
catches it in the net and ejects it
from the nearest airlock. Clear?
ROBY
Even simple.
STANDARD
For starters, let's make sure the
bridge is safe.
Faust takes the device and turns it on. He scans it around the room.
FAUST
It's clear.
STANDARD
All right -- Roby and Melkonis will
go with Faust. Hunter and I will
make up the second team.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
We'll all carry communicators. We
want to keep in constant touch.
Melkonis and Roby carry the net, while Faust walks directly behind it,
carrying the tracking device. He continually scans it from side to
side.
FAUST
Nothing yet... nothing... we can move
pretty fast as long as there's
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nothing on the tracker.
INTERIOR - CORRIDORS
FAUST
Hold it.
FAUST (CONT'D)
I've got something.
ROBY
Where's it coming from?
FAUST
(peers closely at tracker
and frowns)
Machine's screwed up, I can't tell.
Needle's spinning all over the dial.
MELKONIS
Is it malfunctioning?
Faust turns the tracker on its side, and the needle stabilizes.
FAUST
No, just confused. It's coming from
below us.
Roby, Melkonis, and Faust come carefully down a set of crude metal
stairs, into a drab, functional section of the ship.
The corridors in this level are lit by rows of bare bulbs in the
ceiling. The effect is ugly and confining.
They stop at the foot of the stairs and move into position, spreading
the net across the corridor.
ROBY
Okay.
FAUST
(looking at tracker and
nodding down the passageway)
That way.
They begin to walk down the passageway, footsteps clanging on the raw
metal flooring. It is extremely dark.
ROBY
What happened to the lights?
FAUST
Bulbs burned out, nobody bothered to
replace 'em.
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FAUST (CONT'D)
Hold it.
FAUST (CONT'D)
(whispering)
It's within 4 meters.
Roby and Melkonis heft the net, each keeping his prod in hand. Faust,
prod in one hand and tracker in the other, has the unpleasant job of
approaching the source of the signal.
He moves with great care, in a half crouch, ready to leap back at any
second, prod extended, constantly glancing at the tracker.
The tracking device leads him right up to a small hatch or door in one
wall.
Behind his plastic mask, sweat is pouring down Faust's face as he sets
down the tracker and reaches for the little door. He raises the prod,
grasps the door handle, yanks it open, and jams the electric prod
inside.
ROBY
(very annoyed)
Oh, hold it!
They open the net and release the creature. IT IS THE CAT. Hissing and
spitting, it scampers away.
MELKONIS
We're making fools of ourselves!
ROBY
(into communicator)
Yes!
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
We've got it up here! It's trapped!
Get up here fast!
ROBY
Where are you?
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Food-storage room!
ROBY
We're coming!
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Roby, Faust, and Melkonis charge down the hallways until they arrive
at:
HUNTER
We saw it inside and slammed the
door on it! It's in there now!
On the other side of the door, CRASHING AND BANGING can be heard.
ROBY
What's it doing, having a seizure?
STANDARD
It started crashing around right
after we locked it in.
ROBY
Now what?
STANDARD
I guess we open the door and net it.
HUNTER
I hate to open that door.
STANDARD
It looks completely different from
the first one -- it's more like a
worm with legs... and tentacles.
FAUST
Well we better do something.
HUNTER
Maybe we don't have to. It's trapped
in there. We could just leave it in
there all the way back to Irth.
STANDARD
(snaps)
Don't be an idiot.
FAUST
I know what we can do. We can pump
poison gas into the room and kill
it. Through those ventilator slots
there.
ROBY
Hey, wait a minute! That's all our
food supplies in there! We can't
pump poison gas all over them!
STANDARD
Once we kill the thing we won't need
the food any more -- we can go
straight into hypersleep. Also, it
sounds like that thing is already
doing a pretty good job on our
supplies; it may be fouling them
all.
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ROBY
You win.
FAUST
Somebody gimme a hand, I'll get the
stuff.
CAMERA PULLS BACK TO REVEAL THAT they are fastening a large funnel-
shaped device over the ventilator grill at the bottom of the door.
This funnel is attached to a thick hose, which runs back to a large
metal tank with pressure gauges.
STANDARD
Get those masks on.
ROBY
This stuff's deadly -- I hope we
know what we're doing.
STANDARD
Go ahead, Jay.
Immediately, THE CRASHING NOISES RISE IN CRESCENDO, AND THE THING CAN
BE HEARD SCREECHING AND SQUEALING.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Shut it off.
ROBY
Now what?
STANDARD
What do you think? Now we go in.
Standard steps to the door and opens it. A thick cloud of gas billows
out.
The room is thick with the poison gas. The men look like insects in
their gasmasks.
The food packages are ripped to shreds, and foodstuffs are scattered
all over the floor.
FAUST
Looks like he helped himself.
Carefully, the men poke through the garbage, net and prods raised.
HUNTER
God damn it.
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HUNTER (CONT'D)
It escaped.
They move to the shredded ventilator and shine their lights into it.
ROBY
Where does that go?
FAUST
All over the ship; we'll have to
check the charts to know for sure.
STANDARD
Then let's go and do it.
HUNTER
Have we got any food at all left in
the ship?
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
FAUST
That one section of the ventilator
shaft has only two outlets -- you
notice? The food storage room on one
end --
HUNTER
-- And the cooling unit on the
other.
STANDARD
So it's trapped in between -- now we
have to drive it out.
FAUST
Poison gas...
HUNTER
We can't pump poison gas down into
the cooling unit! It'll flood the
whole ship!
STANDARD
The only other thing I can think of
is for somebody to crawl in there
and flush it out.
ROBY
Are you crazy?
STANDARD
The man would need protection,
obviously -- as well as some way to
drive the thing before him.
FAUST
How about a flamethrower? That
wouldn't poison the air.
MELKONIS
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So one of us goes into the airshaft
and drives the thing along --
STANDARD
While the rest of us wait down in
the cooling unit with the net.
HUNTER
Sounds like a rough one.
STANDARD
Got a better idea?
Hunter shrugs.
ROBY
So the only question left is: who
gets to crawl down the airshaft?
STANDARD
Let's be democratic.
He tears five small sheets of paper from a pad on his console. On one
of them, he draws a large X. Then he wads each piece of paper into a
tiny little ball.
He rolls the paperballs between his hands and tosses them on the table
like dice.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Martin, take one.
Faust picks up a ball, and Standard immediately picks his own up. They
are both blank.
They all look at Hunter, who has not yet unfolded his.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Open it up, Cleave.
FAUST
Well, uh... good luck. I hope you
won't need me, but if you do, I'm
here.
HUNTER
(grimly)
Right.
Hunter turns and climbs into the ventilator opening, which is just
large enough to crawl through.
HUNTER
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Hey, do you guys read me down there?
Standard, Melkonis and Roby are spreading out the net. We hear the hum
of huge cooling plants, and their hair ruffles. Large airshafts run
off in different directions.
STANDARD
Yeah, we're getting into position.
HUNTER
Okay, I'm starting now.
Hunter twitches. He raises his flamethrower and FIRES A BLAST INTO THE
DARKNESS. It roars loudly in the confined tube, and the air instantly
heats up. Smoke drifts back into his face. He begins to sweat.
ROBY
(pointing)
There. That's where it's got to come
out.
He throws a switch, and a large metal panel rises and seals off the
opening.
ROBY (CONT'D)
That's a flip-flop gate to channel
the air, but we can use it to trap
the thing.
STANDARD
Right now let's keep it closed.
MELKONIS
I've got Hunter... and something else
as well, in front of him.
STANDARD
Are they close?
MELKONIS
They're on the next level up.
STANDARD
Let's get moving with this net.
Hunter is still crawling on hands and knees. Up ahead, he can see that
the shaft takes an abrupt downward turn.
He crawls toward the down angle, then fires another blast from his
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flamethrower.
Then he has the weapon into position, and sprays another lethal
flaming burst toward the sound.
MELKONIS
They're getting pretty close now.
STANDARD
All right, then -- when it gets to
the other side of the door, you sing
out, then drop the door. Okay?
MELKONIS
Okay.
STANDARD
(to Roby)
And you and I will bag it, and then
we'll take it to the ventral air
lock, got it?
ROBY
(tensely)
Uh-huh.
HUNTER
(whispers)
Hey, you guys.
STANDARD
(into communicator)
Yes!
HUNTER
(whispering)
I don't think this shaft goes on too
much farther... anyway it's getting
pretty hot in here...
STANDARD
(into communicator)
Okay, our screens show you as being
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near to the opening. We'll open it
up, then we'll cue you and you can
start blasting. That'll drive it
right out. You don't have to go any
farther.
HUNTER
Good.
STANDARD
Okay, get ready.
He and Roby heft their respective ends of the net, crouched to catch
the small creature when it darts out. Melkonis picks up his electric
prod.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Open the vent, Sandy.
Melkonis reaches over and throws the switch. The metal gate drops
down, opening up the shaft.
Melkonis lets out a horrible shriek, and the thing grabs his head in
one claw and TWISTS IT OFF LIKE A MAN PULLING THE HEAD OFF A CHICKEN,
THEN THROWS IT TO THE FLOOR WITH AN AUDIBLE CLUNK.
Standard and Roby are left standing in shock. After a moment, Hunter
climbs out of the shaft.
HUNTER
What happened? Where is it?
They break from their paralysis, and run toward the opening the
creature just leaped into. It is another shaft, going down into
darkness.
STANDARD
(awed)
How did it get so big?
ROBY
By eating our food supplies.
HUNTER
Where's Melkonis?
FAUST
(into his communicator)
Hey, are you guys still there?
What's going on?
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STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Meet us on the bridge. Be careful --
it's huge now.
FAUST
Right.
Faust lets himself out of the food storage room and carefully locks
the door behind him.
INTERIOR - CORRIDORS
Standard, Roby and Hunter are rapidly ascending toward the bridge.
HUNTER
You mean his body was still kicking
when it ran off with him?
ROBY
It was horrible -- horrible. Like a
chicken.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
Standard, Roby and Hunter enter and drop into chairs. Faust follows
shortly. They all look blank, stunned.
FAUST
What happened? Where's Sandy?
ROBY
Dead.
FAUST
Dead!
ROBY
It's monstrous -- it grew, like some
horrible tapeworm. We were
completely unprepared.
FAUST
It's still in the ship?
STANDARD
We'd better seal off the lower
maintenance level; at least trap it
there.
(throws a switch;
circuitry lights up)
HUNTER
At least it can't get up here now.
ROBY
Two down, four to go.
STANDARD
(angrily)
What's that supposed to mean?
ROBY
Nothing.
HUNTER
Listen, it sure didn't like this
flamethrower.
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STANDARD
That's right -- we can't kill it on
the ship, but we can at least keep
it at bay -- and maybe drive it into
the air lock.
HUNTER
Thing is, I'm about out of fuel.
FAUST
There's some more combustible fuel
down in the storage lockers next to
the lounge.
(rises)
I'll go get it.
STANDARD
No, I don't want us separated.
FAUST
You just sealed it off; it can't get
to that section.
ROBY
Don't count on it.
HUNTER
We sure need this flamethrower.
STANDARD
All right... but do not go below
decks.
FAUST
Right.
(heads for the door)
STANDARD
And be right back.
Faust exits.
ROBY
I think it's time we took a hard
look at those heiroglyphs.
ROBY (CONT'D)
Can you make out any pattern in all
that?
STANDARD
(baffled)
Well... yes... there's a pattern... but
it's meaningless to me.
ROBY
I know it looks like a senseless
jumble, but if you look closely,
there are recognizable forms.
HUNTER
Recognizable! In that?
ROBY
In symbolic form... very stylized...
but if you stare at it, you can see
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some of the different creatures
we've been dealing with.
HUNTER
Well... I suppose that star-shaped
thing could be the parasite that got
on Broussard. Is that what you mean?
ROBY
And right next to it, that oval
design with the markings -- it's a
dead ringer for the spore casings.
STANDARD
That next thing there -- six legs,
tentacles -- that's the thing we saw
in the food locker.
ROBY
So the next step should be --
HUNTER
-- The big one. And there it is.
ROBY
This is all the same creature. We're
seeing the different stages in its
life-cycle.
STANDARD
Then that tomb... must have been some
kind of fertility temple... where
they stored their eggs, and maybe
held mating rituals...
HUNTER
... And Broussard got caught in their
reproductive cycle.
ROBY
You will notice, though, that there
are no more phases. Only four forms
are shown. After that the pattern
repeats.
STANDARD
Which presumably means...
ROBY
... More spores coming.
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Stealthfully, dropping back into the shadows, Faust presses the wall
intercom and speaks into it.
FAUST
(whispering)
It's in the lock -- blow the main
lock.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
Standard, Roby and Hunter are staring at the pictures. The call from
Faust catches Standard in mid-sentence.
STANDARD
(into intercom)
What?
FAUST
(whispering)
It's in the main air lock. Blow the
lock.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
With a mechanical whine, the inner door starts to close. The creature
hears it and INSTANTANEOUSLY LEAPS OUT OF THE LOCK.
The creature comes flying out of the lock and DEALS FAUST A BACK-
HANDED BLOW, KNOCKING HIM ACROSS THE THRESHOLD OF THE AIR LOCK DOOR.
FAUST SCREAMS IN MORTAL AGONY AS THE INNER DOOR CLOSES ON HIS WAIST,
crushing him to a thickness of about three inches.
Despite the fact that the inner door is still held open a few inches
by Faust's squashed body, THE OUTER DOOR BEGINS TO SLIDE OPEN.
IMMEDIATELY, THERE IS A TREMENDOUS SCREAM OF ESCAPING AIR.
In dead silence, a thick spurt of steam comes out of the open air lock
door. This is the ship's atmosphere freezing as it squirts out into
the vacuum under pressure.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
"CRITICAL DEPRESSURIZATION"
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After a moment of panic and confusion, Roby bolts out of the control
room.
INTERIOR - CORRIDORS
A huge plume of steam grows from the side of the ship, with all kinds
of tiny loose particles tumbling out in it.
INTERIOR - CORRIDORS
Ignoring the monster, he pushes off from the wall and starts running
again.
Roby stops himself by grabbing the edge of a doorway at the end of the
hall down from the airlock. Here, the wind is really terrific -- his
clothes flap on his body and all kinds of things fly by -- the sound
is a DEAFENING WHISTLE.
Then he clutches his throat and begins to gasp for breath. Because of
the thinness of the air, THE SOUND LEVEL IN THE SHIP IS VERY ODD --
THIN, DISTANT, ALMOST INAUDIBLE. Roby is gasping loudly, but we can
barely hear him; and his footsteps boom thinly like a man walking
underwater.
INTERIOR - CORRIDORS
They try to speak to each other, but the sound is so muffled we can
only hear distant croaks.
Standard mumbles something and stumbles down the hall. The others
follow him.
The door bursts open and Standard reels in, his footsteps pinging
thinly on the metal flooring. We see several rows of large oxygen
tanks, all connected by hoses to a few petcocks.
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ROBY
How much oxygen did we lose?
STANDARD
We've got six hours left.
HUNTER
(groans)
Oh my God.
STANDARD
Does anybody know what happened?
ROBY
I saw it. Faust got himself jammed
in the air lock door. His body held
it open.
STANDARD
Can we get to him?
ROBY
No, I had to seal off a whole
section. We'd lose too much of our
remaining air if we opened the
connecting door.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
The three survivors -- Standard, Roby and Hunter -- slump into chairs.
ROBY
(picking up the cat)
Poor kitty; puss puss puss.
STANDARD
At least we're rid of the damn
monster. It must have been the first
thing sucked out of the ship.
ROBY
No such luck. I saw it running down
one of the corridors.
HUNTER
(groans)
Oh no! We can't fight this thing!
There's only six hours of air left
-- we're dead men!
STANDARD
I don't buy that. There's still time
to destroy it and get ourselves in
the freezers.
HUNTER
How?
STANDARD
It's time for drastic remedies.
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ROBY
It was time for that a couple days
ago.
STANDARD
That kind of remark is pointless.
Now come on -- I want to hear every
suggestion you can come up with, no
matter how wild.
HUNTER
We can't kill it on board. It's huge
now and must have tremendous amounts
of that acid in its body.
ROBY
I've got an idea, but you're not
going to like it.
STANDARD
Let's hear it.
ROBY
Okay. First we shut down all the
cooling systems on the stardrive
engines.
STANDARD
That'll blow the ship up.
ROBY
Right... but it'll take a few minutes
for the engines to overheat and melt
down the core. In the meantime, we
get in the lifeboat and leave the
ship.
HUNTER
Blow the ship up?
ROBY
And the creature with it. We can
make it back to Irth in the
lifeboat.
STANDARD
But the lifeboat can't accelerate to
light speed.
ROBY
Doesn't matter -- we're already at
light speed. And when we get back to
the Colonies, they'll pick us up in
the network.
HUNTER
What about all the minerals and
elements in the cargo hold? That's
the only reason we came out here.
We'd have to abandon them all. We'd
be broke.
ROBY
Our lives are more important.
Anyway, we can take a small amount
of the most valuable stuff with us
on the lifeboat.
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STANDARD
No, it won't work and I just
realized why. There's only one
hypersleep freezer on the lifeboat.
Only one of us could survive.
ROBY
Yeah... I forgot.
STANDARD
But the idea's good, if we could
just turn it around somehow.
They think.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
If we could just get the creature
into the lifeboat, we could launch
it into space and blow it up.
HUNTER
Good! That's good!
STANDARD
We can load the lifeboat up with
explosives and trigger them
remotely, once the lifeboat is in
space.
ROBY
I think it's going to be almost
impossible to drive it up into the
lifeboat.
HUNTER
We can use the flamethrower.
ROBY
It's not going to work.
STANDARD
You can't say that; I think it's a
good plan.
HUNTER
The flamethrower needs more fuel.
STANDARD
Right. We've got a lot to
accomplish. Let's get moving.
The three men come down steps into this rather dirty area of the ship.
A lot of tools and large items of machinery are stored around.
HUNTER
Which explosive should we use?
STANDARD
I'd suggest the N-13 sticks. They're
portable, and they can be radio
detonated.
Hunter begins to unlock a locker and draw out long, red sticks like
broomhandles, with tiny printing on them.
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ROBY
You know, it's funny -- this stuff
we went to so much trouble to dig up
-- this treasure, the paydirt --
it'll make it back to Irth just fine
-- even if we're not with it.
STANDARD
Here, carry these.
ROBY
(grabbing at him)
Hey watch it!
STANDARD
(grinning)
It's stable; it doesn't hurt to drop
it.
INTERIOR - CORRIDOR
The three men are carrying their equipment along the hallway, when
Hunter's tracker suddenly BEEPS.
HUNTER
Hold it!
They all stop. The tracker BEEPS AGAIN. Hunter puts down his stuff and
points the tracker around.
HUNTER (CONT'D)
(nodding up some steps)
Up there.
They all look at each other. Standard puts down his bundle and picks
up the flamethrower.
ROBY
So what do we do? Do we ignore it
and finish loading the explosives
into the boat -- or do we flush it
out now?
STANDARD
Now. If we can get it into the boat,
we won't have to blow it up -- we
can just eject it into space.
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STANDARD
(shouts)
You can come up! It's safe!
ROBY
(spying the corpse)
Oh -- Jesus --
Broussard's corpse is blue and bloated where the wrappings have torn
loose. Bumping against the glass, he looks like he wants to come in.
STANDARD
The ship's gravitational attraction
must have drawn him back.
HUNTER
(horrified)
Should we go outside and bring him
in?
STANDARD
No... the risk is too great. Perhaps
after we've destroyed the thing.
Glancing back, the men retreat from the observation dome. Broussard
remains against the glass, peering in with dead eyes.
The floor slopes upward slightly here as the corridor funnels in and
ends in the entrance to a narrow passageway or crawl-way. This
passageway connects the nose of the ship with the lifeboat.
The three men come up to the entrance to the passageway, carrying the
equipment. They duck in and walk the short distance to the lifeboat.
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
STANDARD
(pointing)
Along the base of the walls there.
They begin to stack the red broomsticks against the base of the walls
on both sides of the lifeboat, and to wire them into position tightly.
HUNTER
This should do it.
ROBY
I should hope so! And we'd better
make sure it's pretty far from the
ship when we blow it.
STANDARD
It will be.
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HUNTER
(surveys the craft uneasily)
What we really need is some red meat
in here for bait.
ROBY
Well, if we had some, I'd eat it.
I'm starting to get hungry.
STANDARD
Well... now we have to herd that
thing up here.
HUNTER
(nervously)
Whoever's doing the herding is gonna
have their hands pretty full. I
think somebody should stay by the
lifeboat to slam the door on the
thing once it's inside, and to serve
as... as...
(searches for a word)
ROBY
Isn't "bait" the word you used?
HUNTER
Hey look, somebody has to have his
hands free to lock the creature in
the lifeboat!
STANDARD
Yes, and maybe launch the boat and
blow it too... if the others are
injured.
ROBY
Who gets the privilege?
INSERT: THREE CRUMPLED PIECES OF PAPER. Three hands pick them up.
ANGLE ON ROBY. He unfolds his paper, turns it so the others can see
it. It has a big X on it.
HUNTER
Just keep your finger off the button
till she's way away from the ship,
that's all.
ROBY
Is it armed?
HUNTER
If you press the button right now,
it will blow the whole nose of the
ship off.
ROBY
Thanks for the thought.
(puts detonator in his
breast pocket)
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STANDARD
All right, Martin, we'll be in touch
with you on the communicator.
ROBY
And you'll let me know when you've
got it coming this way...
STANDARD
And you stand aside while we drive
it in, then shut the hatch, launch
the boat, and --
ROBY
Kablooey.
STANDARD
Come on; we haven't much time, air
is a factor.
They leave the nose of the ship, Standard carrying the flamethrower,
Hunter the tracker.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
We've got something on the
tracker... got to be it, it's
too big for the cat.
HUNTER
(over, filtered)
It's coming from down there.
HUNTER
It must have stopped moving. I'm not
getting anything.
STANDARD
Let me go first; you stay behind me.
Carefully, Standard advances down the corridor. Then THE CREATURE POPS
OUT OF HIDING BEHIND HUNTER, AND PICKS HIM UP.
HUNTER SCREAMS.
Standard whirls around, sees the thing clutching Hunter. It holds him
off to one side, as though to keep Standard from getting at him.
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Standard doesn't know what to do.
HUNTER
The flamethrower!
STANDARD
I can't, the acid will pour out!
At that moment the creature TAKES A BITE OUT OF HUNTER, WHO SCREAMS IN
MORTAL AGONY.
Then the communicator goes dead, and all he hears is a rush of static.
ROBY
Hello? Standard? Hunter?
He waits quite a while for a response, but we can see from his
expression that he expects none.
He drops his face into his hands. When he lifts his head again, he has
managed to summon a certain amount of resolve.
Roby walks along watching the tracker, carrying a pistol in the other
hand. He comes across Standard's flamethrower, lying on the floor. He
picks it up, substituting it for the pistol.
Then he continues to follow the tracker; it takes him down the steps
into the maintenance level.
Roby follows the device for a short distance until it indicates that
the source of the signal is directly under his feet. Looking down, he
sees that he is standing on a square metal plate.
Getting down on his hands and knees, he removes the heavy plate,
revealing a black opening with a ladder going down.
Shining the light around into the darkness, Roby descends the metal
ladder to the floor.
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enough, he sees that the cocoon is semi-transparent and THE BODY OF
STANDARD IS INSIDE IT.
STANDARD
(a feeble whisper)
Kill me...
ROBY
(sickened)
What did it do to you?
STANDARD
(moves his head slightly)
Look...
Roby turns his light where Standard indicates. Another cocoon dangles
from the ceiling, but this one looks a little different. It is smaller
and darker, with a harder shell. In fact, it looks almost EXACTLY LIKE
THE SPORES IN THE TOMB.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(whispering)
That was Melkonis... it ate Hunter...
ROBY
(looking around for a tool)
I'll get you out of there.
STANDARD
No... don't...
ROBY
But I can save you -- get you to the
Autodoc!
STANDARD
No good... it's eaten too much of
me...
ROBY
(in horror)
What can I do?
STANDARD
Kill me...
Roby stares at him in horror, then bends down and takes a closer look
at him. REACTING, he straightens back up, raises the flamethrower, and
sprays a molten blast. When the entire room is in flames, he turns and
scrambles back up the ladder.
Roby drops to his knees and gasps for breath, trying not to throw up.
At length, he regains control of himself.
The SNARK appears to hang motionless, with planets and star clusters
rolling past in the infinite distance.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE
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ROBY
Kitty go bye-bye.
He seals the catbox, then turns on the oxygen. There is a faint hiss
of pressurized air. Wild-eyed, the cat peers out of a little window in
front. It YOWLS.
ROBY
(reading from labels)
What'll it be, Kitty? Here -- how
about some Tacitum-35, ten kilos of
it. This'll buy us an island on some
nice planet.
Catbox in one hand, flamethrower in the other, Roby enters the engine
room, containing the massive stardrive engines.
He puts down his parcels and approaches the main control board for the
engines. Studying the instructions, he begins to close switches, one
by one.
COMPUTER
Attention! The cooling units for the
stardrive engines are not
functioning! Engines will overload
in 4 minutes, 50 seconds! Attention!
COMPUTER
Attention! Engines will overheat and
main core will melt in 4 minutes, 30
seconds!
THE CREATURE IS WAITING AT THE OTHER END OF THE PASSAGEWAY, INSIDE THE
LIFEBOAT.
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Roby leaps out of the passageway, bounds to the controls, and throws
the switch. The hatch door SLAMS SHUT, locking the thing in the
lifeboat.
COMPUTER
Attention! Engines will overload in
4 minutes!
Indecisive, Roby stares at the lifeboat "LAUNCH" button. The thing can
be heard fumbling around in the passageway.
Like a maniac, Roby runs through the ship, level after level, pounding
down stairwells, his footsteps clanging metallically throughout the
ship as he sprints for the engine room.
COMPUTER
Attention! Engines will overload in
3 minutes, 30 seconds!
The door crashes open and Roby comes running in. The room is full of
smoke and the engines are whining dangerously. It is extremely hot in
the room; Roby instantly breaks out in sweat.
COMPUTER
Attention! Engines will overload in
3 minutes!
ROBY
Computer! I've turned all the
cooling units back on! What's wrong?
COMPUTER
The reaction has proceeded too far.
The core has begun to melt. Engines
will overload in 2 minutes, 35
seconds.
A look of terror comes onto Roby's face. He turns and runs from the
engine room.
Again, Roby must run through all the levels of the ship, this time
up the stairs, exhausted, stumbling, while the computer counts down:
COMPUTER
Attention! Engines will overload in
2 minutes!
Reeling, gasping for breath, Roby staggers into the vestibule where
the lifeboat is berthed. He grabs the flamethrower and turns it toward
the passageway.
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INTERIOR - PASSAGEWAY
Dripping with sweat, his face a mask of fear, Roby enters the
passageway, flamethrower gripped tightly in his hands. He is goaded on
by the siren and the computer:
COMPUTER
Attention! Engines will explode in
90 seconds!
He makes it all the way to the end of the passageway, then sticks his
head into the lifeboat.
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
INTERIOR - PASSAGEWAY
COMPUTER
Attention! Engines will explode in
60 seconds!
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
He comes in on the run, hurls the catbox and bag toward the front, and
does a dive over the back of the control chair. He is no sooner in the
seat than he hits the "LAUNCH" button.
The retainer clips drop away, and with a blast of ramjets, THE
LIFEBOAT IS LAUNCHED AWAY FROM THE "SNARK."
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
EXTERIOR - SPACE
The tiny pod of the lifeboat accelerates away from the larger bulk of
the SNARK. The scene is strangely serene for such deadly
circumstances.
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
Roby finishes strapping himself in, then he reaches and grabs the
catbox. The cat is YOWLING. Roby hugs the box to his chest and hunches
his head down over it.
EXTERIOR - SPACE
The SNARK drifts ever farther away as the lifeboat leaves it behind,
until it is barely a point of light.
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INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
Roby unhooks himself from his straps, rises, and goes to the back of
the lifeboat. He stares out through the porthole. His face is bathed
in orange light.
EXTERIOR - SPACE
What he sees is the boiling fireball, now fading and fizzling away
into nothingness, and a couple of pieces of debris floating past.
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
BEHIND HIM, THE CREATURE EMERGES FROM SOME HIDING PLACE -- IT HAS BEEN
INSIDE THE LIFEBOAT ALL ALONG.
Roby whirls, and finds himself facing the thing across the length of
the boat. It squats, then pulls out its trophy -- a man's arm.
It throws down the arm. With that, Roby dives for the open locker
door, hurls himself inside, and slams the door shut.
There is a clear glass panel in the door, and the thing puts its face
right up to the glass, peering in at Roby. The locker is so small that
Roby's face is only inches away from the creature's. The sight is
disgusting. It turns its head, looking at him in curiosity.
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
Trying to distract the monster away from the cat, Roby TAPS ON THE
GLASS.
But the monster reacts so fast that its face is instantly back at the
glass, startling the hell out of Roby.
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INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
The creature picks the catbox up in its tentacles and shakes it to see
if there is anything inside. The cat MOANS.
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
The creature throws the catbox down. It clangs, and bounces. The thing
picks it up again and hammers it against the wall. Then it jams it
into a crevice in the wall.
With one tentacle, it begins to pound the sealed catbox into the
crevice. The cat has gone beyond hysterics.
Roby pulls on the helmet, latches it into place, then turns on the
oxygen. With a hiss, the suit fills itself.
In a rack on the wall is a long metal rod with a blunt rubber tip.
Roby peels the rubber off, revealing a sharp steel point.
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
ROBY
Try a little of this, you fucking
bastard.
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
The creature rises, but just in time to catch THE STEEL SHAFT RIGHT
THROUGH ITS MIDRIFF.
IT MAKES A HORRIBLE NOISE AND CLUTCHES AT THE SPUR. The yellow acid
begins to flow from the wound.
Before the acid can touch the floor, Roby reaches back and pulls a
switch -- BLOWING THE REAR HATCH.
IMAGE -- finalbattle.jpg
Roby is now hanging halfway out of the lifeboat, with the thing
clinging to his leg. He kicks at it with his free foot, but it won't
let go.
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
Looking for any salvation, Roby grabs the hatch control lever and
yanks it.
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The hatch slams shut, closing Roby safely inside but TRAPPING THE END
OF THE CREATURE'S TENTACLE IN THE DOORJAMB.
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
"RAM JETS"
The jet exhausts are located at the rear of the craft, right where the
creature is wriggling. THE ENGINES BELCH FLAME FOR A FEW SECONDS, THEN
SHUT OFF.
INTERIOR - LIFEBOAT
Roby hurries to the rear hatch and looks out after the thing.
The burned mass of the monster drifts slowly away into space, a
writhing, smoking, foaming mass.
DISSOLVE TO:
ROBY
(dictating)
... So it looks like I'll make it
back to the Colonies on schedule
after all. I should be to the
frontier in another 250 years or so,
and then with a little luck the
network will pick me up. I'm not as
rich as I was a couple days ago --
but I'm not exactly broke either.
Incidentally, I did manage to
salvage one souvenir out of this
whole mess.
He reaches down into the carrying bag he brought on board, and pulls
out the ALIEN SKULL.
ROBY (CONT'D)
Poor Yorick here should go at least
partway toward proving I'm not a
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crank. I wish it was him we'd met in
the first place -- things might have
turned out different.
He puts the skull down on a shelf and locks a glass lid over it.
ROBY (CONT'D)
This is Martin Roby, executive
officer, last survivor of the
commercial vessel SNARK, signing off.
Come on, cat, let's go to sleep.
Roby leans forward and switches off the recorder. Then he rises and,
carrying the cat, walks to the hypersleep freezer, which stands open.
He climbs in and stretches out on his back, holding the cat against
his chest. With one hand, he presses a switch, and THE LID CLOSES OVER
HIM.
The lifeboat -- SNARK 2 -- sails away toward its rendezvous with Irth,
250 years from now.
THE END
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1. INTERIOR. BRIDGE - DAY
ROBY
Okay, Chaz, I hear you. I've got
you on my board.
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STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Good. I'm getting you clear too.
Let's just keep the line open.
murky ocean.
STANDARD
Can't see more than three meters in
any direction out here. We're
walking blind, on instruments.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
What's wrong?
MELKONIS
My signal's fading.
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2.
MELKONIS (CONT'D)
(over, filtered)
It's the dust, it's interfering...
MELKONIS (CONT'D)
(over, filtered)
... Hold it, I've got it again.
It's over that way.
HUNTER
What's happening?
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face Hunter.
ROBY
(startled silly)
Hell!
The three men push their way through the storm. Melkonis
stops again, studies the direction finder.
MELKONIS
It's close, real close.
STANDARD
How far?
MELKONIS
We should be almost on top of it. I
just can't quite...
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3.
STANDARD
Martin, uh, we've found it.
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ROBY
(sharply -- over, filtered) Found
what?
STANDARD
It appears to be some sort of
spacecraft. We're going to approach
it.
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They start toward the alien ship. INTERIOR - BRIDGE - DAY
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(over, filtered)
There are no signs of life. No
lights... No movement...
Sc
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(over, filtered)
We're, uh, approaching the base.
With great caution, the men approach the entrance and group
around it.
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STANDARD
Appears to be a door hanging open,
the entrance is clogged with
debris.
BROUSSARD
Looks like a derelict.
STANDARD
Martin, we're going in. I'm going
to hold the conversation to a
minimum from here on.
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The doorway is a glowing geometric blur of light against
blackness, spewing dust.
The doorway is a glowing geometric blur of light against
blackness, spewing dust. In the darkness of the chamber are
huge, formless shapes.
IMAGE -- datastick.Jpg
Air lock?
Who knows?
MELKONIS
STANDARD
BROUSSARD
Let's try and find the control
room.
As they move their lights around, they can see that the
walls, ceiling, and machinery are FULL OF HUGE, IRREGULAR
HOLES.
MELKONIS
Look at these holes. This place
looks like Swiss cheese.
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BROUSSARD
This hole goes up several decks --
looks like somebody was firing a
military disintegrator in here.
STANDARD
Climbing gear.
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BROUSSARD
I'll go first.
STANDARD
No, you'll follow me.
THEIR LIGHTS SCAN THE ROOM. The beams are clearly visible as
columns of light in the floating dust. They reveal heavy, odd
shapes.
Empty.
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MELKONIS
Holy Christ...
STANDARD
Look at this...
They approach.
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
Something has been scratched
here... Into the veneer. See?
IMAGE -- scrawledtriangle.Jpg
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Hearing something, Broussard flashes his light across the
room. As the beam scans the walls, it briefly touches on
SOMETHING THAT MOVES.
STANDARD
Keep away from that gun!
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Just machinery.
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BROUSSARD
But functioning.
MELKONIS
That's where the transmission is
coming from.
BROUSSARD
A recording. A damned automatic
recording.
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SINISTER ANGLE ON THE SNARK.
SINISTER ANGLE ON THE SNARK. As we watch, the sunlight turns
the color of blood, and then the sun is down, leaving murky
blackness in its wake. The ring of floodlights on the ship
flares into life, feebly combatting the darkness and the
storm.
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9. INTERIOR. MULTI - PURPOSE ROOM
STANDARD
... This is the control room...
STANDARD (CONT'D)
... Some details of the control
room...
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
... This is the skeleton... Another
view of the skeleton... The
transmitting device...
The triangle that was cut into the alien's console appears.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
... This is a closeup of the
triangle we found scrawled on the
console in
STANDARD (CONT'D)
... And that's it.
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He turns off the projector and brings the lights up.
HUNTER
Phenomenal. Staggering.
BROUSSARD
We've got to go back and take a lot
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more pictures, holograph
everything.
MELKONIS
And bring back as much physical
evidence as possible, too. The rest
of the skeleton. Some of the
machinery. Written records, if
there are any.
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STANDARD
Martin?
ROBY
I agree. This is the single most
important discovery in history.
STANDARD
But?
ROBY
BROUSSARD
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FAUST
The way I figure it, they landed
here for repairs or something, then
they couldn't take off again. Maybe
the dust ruined their engines. They
set up an S.O.S. Beacon, but nobody
came. So they died.
ROBY
He died.
What?
FAUST
ROBY
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They all turn to look in the direction of Roby's nod. CAMERA
MOVES OVER TO REVEAL THE ALIEN SKULL SITTING ON A TABLE.
ROBY
... There was only one skeleton.
FAUST
Well... I'm going to have to blow
the engines out...
STANDARD
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FAUST
Oh -- I'm not near ready yet.
STANDARD
Then why the hell are you sitting
around here?
FAUST
Right.
The men rise and begin to disperse, but Roby remains seated,
deep in thought, staring at the skull. Melkonis lingers in
the room with him.
MELKONIS
And there sits man's first contact
with intelligent life in the
universe.
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FAUST
You ready up there?
BROUSSARD
Sure, we're ready.
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STANDARD
Alas, poor Yorick.
Roby STARTS, puts down the skull. Standard sits at the table.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(nodding at the screen) Find
anything we missed?
ROBY
(shrugs)
I don't even know what I'm looking
for.
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Still worried?
STANDARD
ROBY
Roby reaches over and changes the slide, to the one of the
CRUDELY DRAWN TRIANGLE ON THE ALIEN CONTROL PANEL.
ROBY
Sc
STANDARD
Well... It's obviously
intentional... Some kind of attempt
at communication... Maybe it's a
symbol that means something to
them...
ROBY
But why draw it on the wall?
Roby switches off the projector, sits up, and rubs his face
wearily. He rises and goes to the coffee machine.
ROBY (CONT'D)
(picking a hair out of
the coffeepot)
This ship is full of cat hair.
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STANDARD
Tell you what, Martin. As soon as
the engine's fixed --
This is Chaz.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
BROUSSARD
(over, filtered)
Chaz, this is Dell. Can you come
topside for a minute?
STANDARD (CONT'D)
What's up?
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BROUSSARD
(over, filtered)
Well, the sun just came up again,
and it seems the wind's died down.
It's as clear as a bell outside.
STANDARD
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I'm on my way.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Sc
What is it?
BROUSSARD
The dust no longer blows. The day
is crisp, clear, and silent.
INTERIOR - BRIDGE - DAY
BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
I was scanning the horizon to see
what I could pick up. Look there,
on that screen.
STANDARD
What is it, I can't -- BLIP!
Broussard enlarges the image.
They all stare at the image for a long moment. The silhouette
of the PYRAMID IS INSTANTLY SUGGESTIVE OF THE SCRAWLED
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IMAGE -- pyramid.Jpg
STANDARD (CONT'D)
This is Chaz. All hands topside.
Now.
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ANGLE ON A VIEWSCREEN.
ANGLE ON A VIEWSCREEN. It shows the PYRAMID on the horizon.
CAMERA PULLS BACK to reveal all the men, sitting and standing
around the room.
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STANDARD
Doesn't seem much doubt about it,
does there?
MELKONIS
That creature sure must have
considered it important... Using
his
Sc
BROUSSARD
Maybe they built it.
FAUST
As what?
BROUSSARD
A marker for buried
instrumentation?
HUNTER
Or a mass grave.
BROUSSARD
Maybe the rest of the crew is in
there -- in some kind of suspended
animation, waiting to be rescued.
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MELKONIS
It wasn't necessarily built by
them.
ROBY
Here comes the dust again.
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WITH A SHRIEK, THE DUST STORM RETURNS, completely obscuring
the SNARK. INTERIOR - BRIDGE - DAY
STANDARD
Well, does anyone else agree with
Martin that we should not explore
it?
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Everyone looks around the room, but no one volunteers.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Then the sooner we get moving, the
better.
STANDARD
We can't make out any details or
features yet... But it's definitely
too regular for a natural
formation...
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STANDARD
(over, filtered)
... There's one thing I can say for
sure though...
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ROBY
Now what's wrong?
HUNTER
I've completely lost their signal.
ROBY
Can you get them back?
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HUNTER
I'm trying.
MELKONIS
This looks ancient.
STANDARD
Can't tell -- these weather
conditions could erode anything,
fast.
BROUSSARD
There's no entrance.
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MELKONIS
Maybe the entrance is buried. Could
be under our feet.
STANDARD
Maybe there is no entrance; the
thing may be solid.
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can get through to them --
FAUST
(over, filtered)
Sorry to interrupt, but I'm gonna
charge up the engines for a minute,
okay?
ri
ROBY
Yeah, okay. Go ahead.
ROBY (CONT'D)
Yes!
COMPUTER
I have a temporary sequence on the
monitor --
ROBY
Hold it, I can't hear a damn thing!
ROBY (CONT'D)
Go ahead!
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widen.
ROBY (CONT'D)
You mean... You've translated it?
Another PAUSE as he listens to the
earphone.
ROBY (CONT'D)
Well come on, come on! What does it
say?
HUNTER
(looking over at Roby) What? What
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was that?
ROBY
The Computer just translated the
goddamn message. It's not an S.O.S.
It was a warning.
STANDARD
You want to try?
BROUSSARD
Sure.
BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
You guys just wait down here till I
say it's okay to come up.
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There's a hole at the top.
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BROUSSARD
(over, filtered)
No, it's too small, only room
enough for one person.
STANDARD
Can you see anything in the hole?
BROUSSARD
I can see... Partway down. It just
goes down like a stovepipe. Smooth
walls. I can't see the bottom --
light won't reach.
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FAUST
Yes? What is it?
ROBY
Jay, we've got a problem. I was
wondering if there was any way you
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could shortcut the repairs and give
us immediate takeoff capability.
FAUST
(quickly) Why, what's wrong?
ROBY
The Computer's translated the alien
signal, and it's kind of alarming.
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FAUST
What do you mean?
ROBY
It couldn't translate the whole
thing, only three phrases. I'll
just read it to you the way I got
Sc
it:
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STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Dell, you want to come down, we can
BROUSSARD
No, I want to go in.
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STANDARD
Okay, Dell, but just for a
preliminary look-around. Don't
unhook yourself from your cable.
And be out in less than ten
minutes.
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26. EXTERIOR. TOP OF PYRAMID - DAY
Right.
He climbs over the lip and drops into the hole. He is now
hanging by the wire, with his head and shoulders out of the
hole.
BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
Okay, I'm in the mouth of the
chimney now, and I'm starting down.
STANDARD
(over, filtered) Take care.
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BROUSSARD
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It's noticeably warmer in here.
Warm air rising from below.
He starts down, paying out the line and moving down in short
hops, pushing off each time with his feet.
STANDARD
(over, filtered) Are you okay in
there?
Sc
BROUSSARD
(gasping for breath)
Yeah, I'm okay. Haven't hit bottom
yet. Definitely a column of warm
air
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
What was that Dell, I lost you, do
you read me?
BROUSSARD
Yeah, but this is hard work. Can't
talk now.
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BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
I'm way below ground level.
MELKONIS
I couldn't make it out -- too much
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interference.
HUNTER
I'm getting nowhere. The whole area
around the pyramid is dead to
transmission. I think we should go
after them.
Sc
No.
ROBY
HUNTER
ROBY (CONT'D)
We're not going anywhere.
HUNTER
But they don't know about the
translation! They could be in
danger right now.
ROBY
We can't spare the personnel. We've
got minimum takeoff capability
right now. That's why Chaz left us
on board.
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HUNTER
Why, you chickenshit bastard --
ROBY
Just can that crap! I'm in command
here till Chaz returns! And
nobody's leaving this ship!
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The tunnel has reached its end. Below him is an unfathomable,
cavernous space.
BROUSSARD
(huffing and puffing) Tunnel's gone
-- cave or something below me --
feels like the tropics in here; air
is warm and humid...
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(consults his
instruments)
... High oxygen content, no dust,
it's completely breathable --
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BROUSSARD
It's unbelievable! It's like some
kind of tomb... Some primitive
religion! Hey, is anybody there? Do
you read me? Standard!
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32. EXTERIOR. BASE OF PYRAMID - LATE AFTERNOON
STANDARD
If we don't hear from him soon, I
think we better go in after him.
MELKONIS
Sun will be down in a minute.
Sc
He walks around the urns, studying them. They all have sealed
lids. He shines his light on one of them; then he lays his
gloved hand on it.
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BROUSSARD
I don't know if you can hear me,
but the place is full of large
bottles or jars, just like the one
we found on the other ship --
except these
BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
Another funny thing -- I just put
my hand on it, and now there are
these raised areas appearing where
my fingertips were.
gloom.
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THE SUN DROPS BELOW THE HORIZON, throwing the landscape into
THE SUN DROPS BELOW THE HORIZON, throwing the landscape into
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gloom. Standard and Melkonis switch on their lights.
STANDARD
Let's go.
He bends over the mouth of the "urn" shining the light in,
AND WITH SHOCKING VIOLENCE, A SMALL, OCTOPUS-LIKE THING LEAPS
OUT AND ATTACHES ITSELF TO HIS FACE, WRAPPING ITS TENTACLES
AROUND HIS HEAD.
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STANDARD
(puffing with exertion)
Here's his line. We can haul him
out of there if we have to.
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MELKONIS
It'll yank him right off his feet
if he's not expecting it. The line
could get tangled in something.
STANDARD
But what can we do? He's out of
radio contact.
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MELKONIS
Maybe we should just wait a few
more minutes.
STANDARD
Sc
STANDARD (CONT'D)
The line's slack. Christ, do you
think the idiot unhooked himself?
STANDARD (CONT'D)
There, it caught!
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MELKONIS
Is it still coming up, or is it
hooked on something?
STANDARD
No, it's coming.
MELKONIS
Can you see anything?
STANDARD
No, I can't see far enough. The
line's moving, though.
For a moment, the two men hang to the narrow top of the
pyramid, saving their strength, while the line reels in and
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the wind howls. Then Standard shines his light back down in.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
I can see him! Here he comes!
STANDARD (CONT'D)
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Get ready to grab him!
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Look out! There's something on his
face!
Sc
MELKONIS
What is it?
STANDARD
Don't touch him, watch it!
MELKONIS
Oh God, oh God no.
STANDARD
Help me -- I'm going to try to get
it off.
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With his gloved hands, Standard grasps the tentacled mess and
tries to pull it from Broussard's head.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
It won't come -- it's stuck.
MELKONIS
What is it?
STANDARD
How the hell should I know? Come
on, give me a hand, let's get him
out of there!
The two men grapple with Broussard's limp body, lifting him
from the hole.
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Roby and Hunter are sitting moodily, silent.
Roby and Hunter are sitting moodily, silent. There is a long
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moment while nothing is said, then:
HUNTER
I've got 'em! They're back on my
screens!
ROBY
(leaps to his feet) How many?
Sc
HUNTER
Three blips! They're coming this
way!
ROBY
(into mike)
Hey, can you guys hear me?
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Yeah, we hear you! We're coming
back!
ROBY
Thank Christ! We lost you! Listen,
there's been a new development --
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
(MORE)
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
Can't talk now; Broussard's
injured.
ROBY
(to himself) Oh no.
HUNTER
(into intercom)
Jay, this is Cleave! Meet me at the
main air lock!
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Hunter dashes from the room.
HUNTER
(into intercom)
Martin, I'm by the inner lock door!
I'll wait here for you to let them
in!
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FAUST
What the hell's going on?
HUNTER
Don't know -- Broussard got hurt
somehow.
Hurt! How?
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FAUST
HUNTER
Don't know -- maybe we'll be real lucky and he just broke his
neck.
(a beat)
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I knew we shouldn't of come down here.
STANDARD
(over, filtered) Martin, are you
there?
ROBY
Here, Chaz.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
We're coming up now, open the outer
lock door.
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ROBY
Chaz -- what happened to Broussard?
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
It's some kind of organism, it's
attached itself to him. Let us in.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(over, filtered)
You hear me, Martin? Open the outer
door.
ROBY
Chaz, if it's an organism, and we
let it in, the ship will be
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infected.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
We can't leave him out here, open
the door.
ROBY
(urgently)
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Chaz, listen to me -- we've broken
every rule of quarantine. If we
bring an organism on board, we
won't have a single layer of
defense left.
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
Sc
Hating it, Roby leans forward and throws the switch. INTERIOR
- CORRIDOR OUTSIDE AIR LOCK - NIGHT
HUNTER
Outer door's open.
The inner door slides open, and Standard and Melkonis stagger
through, carrying the sagging body of Broussard. A cloud of
choking dust follows them out of the lock.
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STANDARD
(pulling off his mask) You men stay
clear, there's a parasite on him.
HUNTER
Oh -- God -- oh --
FAUST
Is it alive?
STANDARD
I don't know but don't touch it.
Give us a hand here, let's get him
up to the Autodoc.
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burden. INTERIOR - INFIRMARY
HUNTER
Sc
STANDARD
It wouldn't come.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Medical gloves.
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
It's really on there tight.
FAUST
Here, let me try.
STANDARD
(grabbing Faust's hands) Stop it,
you're tearing his face.
MELKONIS
It's not coming off -- not without
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His whole face coming off too.
STANDARD
Let's let the machine work on him.
FACE.
HUNTER
Hey now, what is this?
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STANDARD
Ask him.
ROBY
(slowly puts his hand to
his cheek)
I understand why you did that.
STANDARD
Good.
MELKONIS
He wouldn't open the lock; he was
going to leave us out there.
HUNTER
Yeah... Well, maybe he should have.
I mean, you brought the goddamn
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thing
FAUST
(embarrassed)
Excuse me, I've got work to do.
Faust exits.
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HUNTER
I keep my mouth pretty much shut,
but I don't like hitting.
ROBY
(to Standard)
I guess I had it coming. Let's call
Sc
it settled.
After a hard stare at Roby, Standard gives him a curt nod and
turns his attention to the machinery.
ROBY (CONT'D)
(slowly)
Would somebody fill me in?
STANDARD
He went into the pyramid alone. We
lost radio contact with him. When
we pulled him out, it was on his
face.
HUNTER
Where did it come from?
MELKONIS
He's the only one that knows that.
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HUNTER
How does he breathe?
MELKONIS
Blood's thoroughly oxygenated.
HUNTER
Yeah, but how? His nose and mouth
are blocked.
STANDARD
Let's look inside his head.
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The parasite is clearly visible on Broussard's face. In X-
ray, the creature is a maze of complicated biology. But the
shocking thing is that, in X-ray, we can see that Broussard's
jaws are forced wide open, and THE PARASITE HAS EXTRUDED SOME
KIND OF LONG TUBE, WHICH IS STUFFED
INTO HIS MOUTH AND DOWN HIS THROAT, ending near his stomach.
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ROBY
Look at that.
HUNTER
What is it -- I can't tell anything
--
ROBY
Sc
HUNTER
(turning sick) Oh... God...
ROBY
I think that's how it's getting
oxygen to him.
HUNTER
It doesn't make any sense. It
paralyzes him... Puts him into a
coma... Then keeps him alive.
MELKONIS
We can't expect to understand a
life form like this. We're out of
our back yard. Things are different
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Here.
HUNTER
Well, can't we kill it? I mean, we
can't leave the damn thing on him.
MELKONIS
We don't know what might happen if
we tried to kill it. At least right
now it's keeping him alive.
HUNTER
How about cutting it off? We can't
pull it loose, but we can cut off
everything but the bottom layer,
where it's stuck to his face.
STANDARD
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You're right... We can't stand here
and do nothing.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(muffled in his mask) Somebody give
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me a scalpel.
hum.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(muffled)
I've made an incision... It's not
reacting... But some kind of
yellowish fluid is leaking out of
the wound...
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
(muffled)
Hold it, this stuff's smoking!
By now, the yellow fluid has eaten a hole through the bunk
bed and has dripped down onto the floor below. The metal
floor begins to bubble and sizzle, and more smoke rises.
MELKONIS
God, that smoke's poisonous!
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HUNTER
(pointing)
It's eating a hole in the floor!
Abruptly, the men jostle their way out of the room and huddle
in the corridor outside, coughing their lungs out.
the metal!
STANDARD
That stuff's eating right through
The metal! It's going to eat through the decks and right out
through the hull!
STANDARD (CONT'D)
There! Look!
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MELKONIS
Jesus, what can we put under it?
STANDARD
(pointing)
There. Should be coming through
about there.
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HUNTER
Careful, don't get under it!
MELKONIS
Sc
Roby fishes a pen out of his pocket and probes into the hole
in the
Floor.
ROBY
Seems to have stopped penetrating.
HUNTER
What's happening up here?
ROBY
I think it's fizzled out.
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MELKONIS
I never saw anything like that in
my life... Except molecular acid.
HUNTER
But this thing uses it for blood.
MELKONIS
Hell of a defense mechanism. You
don't dare kill it.
STANDARD
It's stopped?
MELKONIS
Yes, thank heaven.
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STANDARD
We're just plain lucky. That could
have gone right through the hull --
taken weeks to patch it.
MELKONIS
Reminded me of when I was a kid and
the roof leaked -- everybody
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running for the pots and pans.
ROBY
My God, what about Broussard?
They all come into the room (Roby carrying the partially
Sc
ROBY (CONT'D)
Did it get on him?
STANDARD
No, thank God... Just missed him.
MELKONIS
Is it still dripping?
STANDARD
(examining it)
It appears to have healed itself.
HUNTER
It makes me sick to see him like
that.
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MELKONIS
Isn't there some way we can get it
off him?
STANDARD
I don't see how. But let's do what
we can for him.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
I think we'd better get some
intravenous feeding started. God
knows what that thing is leaching
out of him.
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Standard operates some controls, and the machine begins to
invade Broussard's body, sliding needles into him.
ROBY
(studying the screens)
Look there, what's that stain on
his lungs?
MELKONIS
It appears to be a heavy fluid of
some sort... It blocks the X-
rays...
Sc
ROBY
That tube must be depositing it in
him.
MELKONIS
Could be some kind of venom, or
poison...
HUNTER
This is horrible.
ROBY
Hey! What about the film?
STANDARD
What film?
ROBY
Broussard had film in his
datastick, didn't he? We can see
what happened to him.
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te
proceeds to show a series of meaningless blurs. Then the reel
ends.
HUNTER
That must have been when he got it.
ROBY
The same thing must've happened to
the creatures on the other ship...
ri
Except they took one of those jars
on board, and opened it there.
MELKONIS
(clicks back through the
slides to a picture of
one of the "urns")
At first I thought they were jars
Sc
STANDARD
I personally can't make any sense
out of it...
MELKONIS
It's a crude symbolic language --
looks primitive.
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HUNTER
You can't tell -- that kind of
stuff could represent printed
circuits...
STANDARD
That sounds a little fanciful...
MELKONIS
Primitive pictorial languages are
based on common objects in the
environment, and this can be used
as a starting point for
translation...
ROBY
What common objects?
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HUNTER
Listen, hadn't somebody better
check on Broussard?
STANDARD
(rising)
I'll do it. The rest of you
continue.
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HUNTER
(rising)
I'll come with you.
STANDARD
You know, it's fantastic -- the
human race has gone this long
without ever encountering another
advanced life form, and now we run
into a veritable zoo.
HUNTER
What do you mean?
STANDARD
Well, those things out there aren't
the same, you know -- the spaceship
and the pyramid. They're from
different cultures and (MORE)
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
different races. That ship just
landed here -- crashed like we did.
The pyramid and the thing from it
are indigenous.
HUNTER
How could anything be indigenous to
this asteroid? It's dead.
STANDARD
Maybe it wasn't always dead.
The door slides open, and they step into the room. Hunter
activates the bed, and it slides out of the wall.
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HUNTER (CONT'D)
Now we're in for it.
STANDARD
The door was closed. It must still
be in here.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
No, don't open the door. We don't
want it escaping.
HUNTER
(very nervous)
Well, what the hell good can we do
in here? We can't grab it -- it
might jump on us --
STANDARD
Maybe we can catch it.
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
As long as we're careful not to
damage it...
Shit!
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
(leaping back)
But the thing is not moving. It
lies motionless on the floor, its
tentacles curled up. Its color has
faded to a dead-looking grey.
ri
Without taking his eyes off the thing, Standard reaches
behind him and takes a long probe from the wall. He prods the
thing; it does not respond.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
I think it's dead.
STANDARD
Look at these suckers -- no wonder
we couldn't get it off him.
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ROBY
Is that its mouth?
MELKONIS
More likely that organ -- the tube-
like thing -- fits up in there.
ROBY
Ugh.
STANDARD
Quick -- it's decomposing -- gimme
te
something to grab it with!
Roby grabs a long pair of tongs from the wall and thrusts
them at Standard -- who throws down the pliers, snatches the
tongs and seizes the thing in the tongs.
ri
It is smouldering and dripping acid on the floor.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Christ! Let's get it out of here!
ROBY
(shouts into intercom)
For Chrissake, open the main lock!
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The parasite hits the ground and begins to sink into the
dust, smouldering and fuming.
te
The outer door rolls shut.
The outer door rolls shut.
ROBY
(slumping against the
wall)
ri
My God, it's lethal even when it's
dead!
Melkonis gets down on his knees and studies the small burn-
holes in the floor.
Standard opens the inner door and steps out into the
corridor. There, he activates the wall intercom and punches
out a combination.
Sc
STANDARD
How's Broussard?
HUNTER
(over, filtered) He's running a
fever.
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STANDARD
Still unconscious?
HUNTER
Yes.
(over, filtered)
STANDARD
Can you do anything for him?
HUNTER
(over, filtered)
The machine will bring his
temperature down. His vital
functions are strong.
STANDARD
Good.
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He switches off the intercom.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
(suddenly exhausted) I need some
coffee.
MELKONIS
These day and night cycles are
totally disorienting. I feel like
we've been here for days, but it's
only been how long?
Sc
ROBY
(stroking the cat) About four
hours.
STANDARD
(staring into his coffee
cup)
I'm sorry to say it looks like you
were right in the first place,
Martin. We never should have landed
here.
ROBY
Look, I'm not trying to rub
anybody's nose in anything. The
important thing is just to get away
from here as fast as possible.
STANDARD
I can't lean on Faust any (MORE)
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
harder -- he's been working non-
stop on the engines.
ROBY
If we knew exactly what happened to
the beings on the other ship --
MELKONIS
We do know that.
ROBY
Yeah?
MELKONIS
They never made it off the planet.
te
ROBY
Where did the parasites come from?
STANDARD
They seem native to the planet.
It's got an atmosphere and a dense
gravity. It's dead now, but once it
must have been fertile.
ri
MELKONIS
No. It's just too small to support
fauna as big as the parasites. If
there were a native ecology, it
would have to be microscopic.
ROBY
Sc
STANDARD
Too primitive. It's a pre-
technological construction. That
slab was engineered by an Iron-Age
culture at best.
MELKONIS
They're from a dead civilization;
they're spores from a tomb. God
knows how long they've been here.
ROBY
I think we better take another look
at those heiroglyphs.
Suddenly the door opens and Faust sticks his head in. He is
covered with dirt and grime.
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FAUST
Hey, guess what?
STANDARD
What?
FAUST
The engines are fixed.
te
The ship roars and vibrates like a huge beast, capable of
unlimited power.
STANDARD
Switch on tractor beams.
Sc
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Lock tractor beams.
The pitch of the hum changes, and the ship levels itself.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Retract landing struts.
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Take us up.
Take us up.
STANDARD
ROBY
of light.
te
The SNARK begins to levitate up into the sky, on the beams
atmosphere.
The hovering SNARK begins to accelerate through the choking
atmosphere.
ROBY
Engaged.
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STANDARD
Let's take her into an escape
orbit.
ROBY
I'm altering our vector now; should
give us an easy escape velocity --
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ROBY & MELKONIS
(in concert) What was that?
FAUST
(over, filtered)
This dust is getting clogged in the
ri
intakes again!
STANDARD
Just hold us together till we're in
space, that's all!
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Abruptly the ship CLEARS THE TOP OF THE CLOUD LAYER AND
BURSTS OUT
Abruptly the ship CLEARS THE TOP OF THE CLOUD LAYER AND
BURSTS OUT
ROBY
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(pounds his panel)
We made it! Damn, we made it!
STANDARD
You bet we made it. Martin, set
course for Irth and accelerate us
into stardrive.
ri
ROBY
With great pleasure. Roby begins to
punch buttons.
MELKONIS
I feel like an escapee from Hell.
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ROBY
That's the part that always makes
me feel like I'm gonna puke -- when
we accelerate into light speed.
STANDARD
Quit complaining; we're in space.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
I think the best thing to do with
Broussard is to just freeze him as
he is. It'll arrest the progress of
te
his disease, and he can get
complete medical attention when we
get back to the Colonies.
ROBY
We'll have to go into quarantine,
maybe for quite a while.
STANDARD
ri
That's okay, he can remain in
hypersleep until they're ready to
treat him.
BROUSSARD
(hoarsely)
... Mouth's so dry... Can I have
some water...
BROUSSARD (CONT'D)
More.
STANDARD
(softly)
How do you feel, Dell?
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BROUSSARD
(weakly)
Wretched. What happened to me?
STANDARD
Don't you remember?
BROUSSARD
Don't remember nothing. Can't
hardly remember my name.
ROBY
Are you in pain?
BROUSSARD
Not exactly, just feel like
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years.
STANDARD
Hell, you're in great shape, you've
got your sense of humor back!
ri
BROUSSARD
God I'm hungry.
ROBY
Dell, what's the last thing you can
remember?
BROUSSARD
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ROBY
Do you remember the pyramid?
BROUSSARD
No. Just some horrible dreams about
smothering. Where are we?
STANDARD
We're going home. We're in
hyperspace.
MELKONIS
We're going into the freezers now.
BROUSSARD
I'm really starving; can we get
some food before we go into the
freezers?
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STANDARD
(laughs)
I think that's a pretty reasonable
request.
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HUNTER
Boy do I feel a lot better. It's a
straight shot back to the Colonies,
and then we can start taking bids
on the paydirt. Any bets on the top
bid?
FAUST
ri
(chewing)
Well, we should at least be able to
each buy our own planet.
MELKONIS
I'm going to write a book about
this expedition. I'm going to call
Sc
STANDARD
(stiffly)
The commander normally has first
Publication rights.
MELKONIS
Maybe we could write it together.
ROBY
First thing I'm going to do when we
get back is eat some biological
food.
MELKONIS
What's the matter, you don't like
this stuff?
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ROBY
Tastes like something you'd feed a
chicken to make it lay more eggs.
STANDARD
Oh it's okay. I've had better cag
than this, but I've had worse too,
if you know what I mean.
FAUST
I kind of like it.
ROBY
You like this shit?
FAUST
It grows on you.
te
ROBY
You know what they make this stuff
out of?
FAUST
(annoyed)
Yes, I know what they make it out
of, so what? It's food now. You're
eating it.
ri
ROBY
I didn't say it was bad for you,
it's just kind of sickening, that's
all.
HUNTER
Do we have to talk about this kind
Sc
STANDARD
What's wrong?
BROUSSARD
(his voice straining)
I don't know... I'm getting these
CRAMPS!
Breathe deeply.
STANDARD
BROUSSARD (MORE)
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
(screaming)
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BROUSSARD
(incoherent shriek)
OhmygooaaAAAHHHHH!!!
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HUNTER
Oh, no. Oh, no.
FAUST
What was that? What the Christ was
that?
MELKONIS
It was growing in him the whole
time and he didn't even know it!
ROBY
That thing used him for an
incubator!
te
A hatch slides open on the side of the ship, and Broussard's
wrapped body tumbles silently out.
A hatch slides open on the side of the ship, and Broussard's
wrapped body tumbles silently out.
MELKONIS
We can't go into hypersleep with
that thing running around loose.
HUNTER
We'd be sitting ducks in the
freezers.
ROBY
But we can't kill it. If we kill
it, it will spill all its body
acids right through our hull and
out into space.
Shit...
FAUST
STANDARD
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MELKONIS
(sighs)
Well, I kind of hate to point it
out, but all our supplies are based
on us spending a strictly limited
amount of time out of suspended
STANDARD
We've got about a week left, right?
HUNTER
And then we run out of food and
oxygen.
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FAUST
The water will still recycle.
ROBY
We won't need it then.
STANDARD
All right, so that's what we've
ri
got. A week. It's plenty of time.
ROBY
But if we haven't caught it in a
week, then we have to go into the
freezers anyway.
STANDARD
So does anybody have any
suggestions?
FAUST
We could put on our pressure suits
and blow all the air out of the
ship. That would kill it.
STANDARD
No, we can't afford to lose that
much oxygen. We're going to have to
flush it out.
How?
MELKONIS
STANDARD
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MELKONIS (CONT'D)
And what do we do when we find it?
STANDARD
We'll have to trap it somehow. If
we had a really strong piece of
net, we could bag it.
FAUST
We could cut a section out of that
metallite netting. It won't hold up
to that acid, but aside from that
it's pretty strong.
ROBY
We have to avoid injuring it. What
te
we really need is some electric
animal prods.
HUNTER
I think I could cobble something
together. A long metal rod with a
battery in it. Give it a hell of a
shock.
ri
STANDARD
Good. Get on it. But first, I'm
issuing a standing order: from this
moment forth, every one of us will
wear protective garments, including
helmets. Let's get down to the
locker and change.
Sc
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STANDARD
I thought I'd find you here.
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MELKONIS
I was thinking of a line from an
old poem: "Water, water everywhere,
but
Not a drop to drink." All that space out there, and we're
trapped in this ship.
ri
STANDARD
That's the one about the albatross,
right?
MELKONIS
We can't even radio for help; the
carrier wave wouldn't reach its
destination till long after we'd
Sc
STANDARD
We came out there, we'll go back. A
long time by the clock, but a short
time to us.
MELKONIS
Time and space have no meaning out
here. We're living in Einsteinian
equation.
STANDARD
I can see you're putting your spare
time to good use.
(leans forward and taps
him on the knee)
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
Let me tell you something: you keep
staring at hyperspace for long
enough, they'll be peeling you off
a wall. I've seen it happen.
MELKONIS
(smiles at him)
We're the new pioneers, Chaz. We
even have our own special diseases.
STANDARD
Come on -- let's go above and see
how they're coming with the gear.
te
The whole crew has assembled.
The whole crew has assembled. Faust is unfolding several
yards of shimmering metallic netting.
Hunter hands out five thin rods, like metal broom handles.
ri
HUNTER
These have portable generators in
them. They're insulated down to
here
FAUST
Might even incinerate the damn
thing.
STANDARD
(sharply)
I hope not.
HUNTER
Don't worry, it won't damage it,
it'll just give it a little
incentive.
STANDARD
How do we locate the creature?
FAUST
With these.
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FAUST (CONT'D)
Tracking device. You set it to
search for a moving object... It
hasn't got much range, but when you
get within a certain distance, it
starts beeping.
STANDARD
These will be very useful. At least
we won't have to go digging around
in closets with our bare hands. All
right, here's the battle plan:
we're going to break into two teams
and start systematically covering
the ship. Whoever finds it first,
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catches it in the net and ejects it
from the nearest airlock. Clear?
ROBY
Even simple.
FAUST
Sc
It's clear.
STANDARD
All right -- Roby and Melkonis will
go with Faust. Hunter and I will
make up the second team.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
We'll all carry communicators. We
want to keep in constant touch.
Melkonis and Roby carry the net, while Faust walks directly
behind it, carrying the tracking device.
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Melkonis and Roby carry the net, while Faust walks directly
behind it, carrying the tracking device. He continually scans
it from side to side.
FAUST
Nothing yet... Nothing... We can
move pretty fast as long as there's
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75. INTERIOR. CORRIDORS -
FAUST
Hold it.
FAUST (CONT'D)
Sc
ROBY
Where's it coming from?
FAUST
(peers closely at tracker
and frowns)
Machine's screwed up, I can't tell.
Needle's spinning all over the
dial.
MELKONIS
Is it malfunctioning?
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FAUST
No, just confused. It's coming from
below us.
They stop at the foot of the stairs and move into position,
spreading the net across the corridor.
ROBY
Okay.
te
FAUST
(looking at tracker and
nodding down the
passageway)
That way.
ROBY
What happened to the lights?
FAUST
Bulbs burned out, nobody bothered
to replace 'em.
Sc
FAUST (CONT'D)
(whispering) It's within 4 meters.
Roby and Melkonis heft the net, each keeping his prod in
hand. Faust, prod in one hand and tracker in the other, has
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Instinctively, they throw the net over it, but:
Instinctively, they throw the net over it, but:
ROBY
ri
(very annoyed) Oh, hold it!
They open the net and release the creature. IT IS THE CAT.
Hissing and spitting, it scampers away.
MELKONIS
We're making fools of ourselves!
ROBY
(into communicator)
Yes!
STANDARD
(over, filtered)
We've got it up here! It's trapped!
Get up here fast!
ROBY
Where are you?
STANDARD
(over, filtered) Food-storage room!
ROBY
We're coming!
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Roby, Faust, and Melkonis charge down the hallways until they
arrive at:
HUNTER
We saw it inside and slammed the
door on it! It's in there now!
te
heard.
ROBY
What's it doing, having a seizure?
STANDARD
It started crashing around right
after we locked it in.
ri
ROBY
Now what?
STANDARD
I guess we open the door and net
it.
HUNTER
Sc
STANDARD
It looks completely different from
the first one -- it's more like a
worm with legs... And tentacles.
FAUST
Well we better do something.
HUNTER
Maybe we don't have to. It's
trapped in there. We could just
leave it in there all the way back
to Irth.
STANDARD
(snaps)
Don't be an idiot.
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FAUST
I know what we can do. We can pump
poison gas into the room and kill
it. Through those ventilator slots
there.
ROBY
Hey, wait a minute! That's all our
food supplies in there! We can't
pump poison gas all over them!
STANDARD
Once we kill the thing we won't
need the food any more -- we can go
straight into hypersleep. Also, it
sounds like that thing is already
doing a pretty good job on our
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supplies; it may be fouling them
all.
You win.
ROBY
FAUST
ri
Somebody gimme a hand, I'll get the stuff.
STANDARD
Get those masks on.
ROBY
This stuff's deadly -- I hope we
know what we're doing.
STANDARD
Go ahead, Jay.
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
Shut it off.
Now what?
ROBY
STANDARD
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Standard steps to the door and opens it. A thick cloud of gas
billows out.
FAUST
Looks like he helped himself.
Carefully, the men poke through the garbage, net and prods
raised. Then Hunter points.
HUNTER
God damn it.
HUNTER (CONT'D)
It escaped.
ROBY
Where does that go?
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FAUST
All over the ship; we'll have to
check the charts to know for sure.
STANDARD
Then let's go and do it.
HUNTER
Have we got any food at all left in
the ship?
They slam the door shut and seal it. INTERIOR - BRIDGE
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FAUST
That one section of the ventilator
shaft has only two outlets -- you
notice? The food storage room on
one end --
HUNTER
-- And the cooling unit on the
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other.
STANDARD
So it's trapped in between -- now
we have to drive it out.
FAUST
Poison gas...
Sc
HUNTER
We can't pump poison gas down into
the cooling unit! It'll flood the
whole ship!
STANDARD
The only other thing I can think of
is for somebody to crawl in there
and flush it out.
ROBY
Are you crazy?
STANDARD
The man would need protection,
obviously -- as well as some way to
drive the thing before him.
FAUST
How about a flamethrower? That
wouldn't poison the air.
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MELKONIS
So one of us goes into the airshaft
and drives the thing along --
STANDARD
While the rest of us wait down in
the cooling unit with the net.
HUNTER
Sounds like a rough one.
STANDARD
Got a better idea?
Hunter shrugs.
ROBY
So the only question left is: who
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gets to crawl down the airshaft?
STANDARD
Let's be democratic.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Martin, take one.
They all look at Hunter, who has not yet unfolded his.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Open it up, Cleave. INTERIOR - FOOD
STORAGE ROOM
FAUST
Well, uh... Good luck. I hope you
won't need me, but if you do, I'm
here.
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HUNTER
(grimly) Right.
HUNTER
te
Hey, do you guys read me down
there?
STANDARD
Yeah, we're getting into position.
Sc
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ROBY
(pointing)
There. That's where it's got to
come out.
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ROBY (CONT'D)
That's a flip-flop gate to channel
the air, but we can use it to trap
the thing.
STANDARD
Right now let's keep it closed.
ri
Melkonis is setting up a little portable unit with a screen
on it. The screen shows a section of the ship's schematic.
MELKONIS
I've got Hunter... And something
else as well, in front of him.
STANDARD
Are they close?
Sc
MELKONIS
They're on the next level up.
STANDARD
Let's get moving with this net.
Flamethrower.
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Melkonis is staring at his screen.
Melkonis is staring at his screen.
MELKONIS
They're getting pretty close now.
STANDARD
ri
All right, then -- when it gets to
the other side of the door, you
sing out, then drop the door. Okay?
MELKONIS
Okay.
(to Roby)
STANDARD
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ROBY
(tensely) Uh-huh.
HUNTER
(whispers) Hey, you guys.
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STANDARD: Yes!
STANDARD
(into communicator)
Yes!
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HUNTER: I don't think this shaft goes on too much farther...
anyway it's getting pretty hot in here...
HUNTER
(whispering)
I don't think this shaft goes on
too much farther... Anyway it's
getting pretty hot in here...
ri
89. INTERIOR. CLIMATE CONTROL ROOM -
STANDARD
(into communicator)
Okay, our screens show you as being
Near to the opening. We'll open it up, then we'll cue you and
you can start blasting. That'll drive it right out. You don't
have to go any farther.
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STANDARD
Okay, get ready.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
Open the vent, Sandy.
Melkonis reaches over and throws the switch. The metal gate
drops down, opening up the shaft.
te
Melkonis lets out a horrible shriek, and the thing grabs his
head in one claw and TWISTS IT OFF LIKE A MAN PULLING THE
HEAD OFF A CHICKEN, THEN THROWS IT TO THE FLOOR WITH AN
AUDIBLE CLUNK.
Melkonis lets out a horrible shriek, and the thing grabs his
head in one claw and TWISTS IT OFF LIKE A MAN PULLING THE
HEAD OFF A CHICKEN, THEN THROWS IT TO THE FLOOR WITH AN
AUDIBLE CLUNK.
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92. CLUTCHING MELKONIS' BODY TIGHTLY AGAINST ITSELF, IT TURNS AND
BOUNDS DOWN THE HALL. MELKONIS' HEADLESS BODY IS STILL
KICKING AND STRUGGLING AS THE MONSTER LEAPS HEAD-FIRST INTO
ANOTHER AIR SHAFT -
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HUNTER
What happened? Where is it?
They break from their paralysis, and run toward the opening
the creature just leaped into. It is another shaft, going
down into darkness.
STANDARD
(awed)
How did it get so big?
ROBY
By eating our food supplies.
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HUNTER
Where's Melkonis? INTERIOR - FOOD
STORAGE ROOM
FAUST
(into his communicator) Hey, are
you guys still there? What's going
on?
(over, filtered)
Meet us on the bridge. Be careful
-- it's huge now.
FAUST (CONT'D)
Right.
Faust lets himself out of the food storage room and carefully
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locks the door behind him.
HUNTER
You mean his body was still kicking
when it ran off with him?
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ROBY
It was horrible -- horrible. Like a
chicken.
FAUST
What happened? Where's Sandy?
ROBY
Dead.
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Dead!
FAUST
ROBY
FAUST (CONT'D)
It's still in the ship?
STANDARD
We'd better seal off the lower
maintenance level; at least trap it
there.
(throws a switch;
circuitry lights up)
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HUNTER
At least it can't get up here now.
ROBY
Two down, four to go.
STANDARD
(angrily)
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What's that supposed to mean?
ROBY
Nothing.
HUNTER
Listen, it sure didn't like this
flamethrower.
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HUNTER (CONT'D)
Thing is, I'm about out of fuel.
FAUST
There's some more combustible fuel
down in the storage lockers next to
the lounge.
STANDARD
No, I don't want us separated.
FAUST
You just sealed it off; it can't
get to that section.
ROBY
Don't count on it.
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HUNTER
We sure need this flamethrower.
STANDARD
All right... But do not go below
decks.
FAUST
Right.
(heads for the door)
STANDARD
And be right back.
Faust exits.
ROBY
I think it's time we took a hard
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look at those heiroglyphs.
ROBY (CONT'D)
Can you make out any pattern in all
that?
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STANDARD
(baffled)
Well... Yes... There's a pattern...
But it's meaningless to me.
ROBY
I know it looks like a senseless
jumble, but if you look closely,
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HUNTER
Recognizable! In that?
ROBY
In symbolic form... Very
stylized... But if you stare at it,
you can see
HUNTER
Well... I suppose that star-shaped
thing could be the parasite that
got on Broussard. Is that what you
mean?
ROBY
And right next to it, that oval
design with the markings -- it's a
dead ringer for the spore casings.
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STANDARD
That next thing there -- six legs,
tentacles -- that's the thing we
saw in the food locker.
ROBY
So the next step should be --
HUNTER
-- The big one. And there it is.
ROBY
This is all the same creature.
We're seeing the different stages
in its life-cycle.
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STANDARD
Then that tomb... Must have been
some kind of fertility temple...
Where they stored their eggs, and
maybe held mating rituals...
HUNTER
... And Broussard got caught in
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their reproductive cycle.
ROBY
You will notice, though, that there
are no more phases. Only four forms
are shown. After that the pattern
repeats.
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STANDARD
Which presumably means...
ROBY
... More spores coming.
Faust hesitates and peers into the lock. INTERIOR - AIR LOCK
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(whispering)
It's in the lock -- blow the main
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lock.
STANDARD
(into intercom)
What?
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The creature comes flying out of the lock and DEALS FAUST A
BACK- HANDED BLOW, KNOCKING HIM ACROSS THE THRESHOLD OF THE
AIR LOCK DOOR.
The creature comes flying out of the lock and DEALS FAUST A
BACK- HANDED BLOW, KNOCKING HIM ACROSS THE THRESHOLD OF THE
AIR LOCK DOOR.
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HIS WAIST, -
Despite the fact that the inner door is still held open a
few inches by Faust's squashed body, THE OUTER DOOR BEGINS
TO SLIDE OPEN.
Despite the fact that the inner door is still held open a few
inches by Faust's squashed body, THE OUTER DOOR BEGINS TO
SLIDE OPEN. IMMEDIATELY, THERE IS A TREMENDOUS SCREAM OF
ESCAPING AIR.
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108. INTERIOR. CORRIDORS -
A huge plume of steam grows from the side of the ship, with
all kinds of tiny loose particles tumbling out in it.
A huge plume of steam grows from the side of the ship, with
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Ignoring the monster, he pushes off from the wall and starts
running again.
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end of the hall down from the airlock. Here, the wind is
really terrific -- his clothes flap on his body and all kinds
of things fly by -- the sound is a DEAFENING WHISTLE.
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Clutching his throat, he comes across the others -- Standard
and Hunter -- and they are all choking, clawing at their
throats, gasping like fishes out of water.
Clutching his throat, he comes across the others -- Standard
and Hunter -- and they are all choking, clawing at their
throats, gasping like fishes out of water. They are sweating
heavily and their noses bleed.
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They try to speak to each other, but the sound is so muffled
we can only hear distant croaks.
The door bursts open and Standard reels in, his footsteps
pinging thinly on the metal flooring.
The door bursts open and Standard reels in, his footsteps
pinging thinly on the metal flooring. We see several rows of
large oxygen tanks, all connected by hoses to a few petcocks.
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ROBY
How much oxygen did we lose?
STANDARD
We've got six hours left.
HUNTER
(groans) Oh my God.
STANDARD
Does anybody know what happened?
ROBY
I saw it. Faust got himself jammed
in the air lock door. His body held
it open.
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STANDARD
Can we get to him?
ROBY
No, I had to seal off a whole
section. We'd lose too much of our
remaining air if we opened the
connecting door.
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114. INTERIOR. AIR LOCK -
of dried blood.
ROBY
(picking up the cat) Poor kitty;
puss puss puss.
STANDARD
At least we're rid (MORE)
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
of the damn monster. It must have
been the first thing sucked out of
the ship.
ROBY
No such luck. I saw it running down
one of the corridors.
HUNTER
(groans)
Oh no! We can't fight this thing!
There's only six hours of air left
STANDARD
I don't buy that. There's still
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time to destroy it and get
ourselves in the freezers.
How?
HUNTER
STANDARD
STANDARD
That kind of remark is pointless.
Now come on -- I want to hear every
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HUNTER
We can't kill it on board. It's
huge now and must have tremendous
amounts of that acid in its body.
ROBY
I've got an idea, but you're not
going to like it.
STANDARD
Let's hear it.
ROBY
Okay. First we shut down all the
cooling systems on the stardrive
engines.
STANDARD
That'll blow the ship up.
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ROBY
Right... But it'll take a few
minutes for the engines to overheat
and melt down the core. In the
meantime, we get in the lifeboat
and leave the ship.
HUNTER
Blow the ship up?
ROBY
And the creature with it. We can
make it back to Irth in the
lifeboat.
STANDARD
But the lifeboat can't accelerate
to light speed.
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ROBY
Doesn't matter -- we're already at
light speed. And when we get back
to the Colonies, they'll pick us up
in the network.
HUNTER
What about all the minerals and
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elements in the cargo hold? That's
the only reason we came out here.
ROBY
Our lives are more important.
Anyway, we can take a small amount
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STANDARD
No, it won't work and I just
realized why. There's only one
hypersleep freezer on the lifeboat.
Only one of us could survive.
ROBY
Yeah... I forgot.
STANDARD
But the idea's good, if we could
just turn it around somehow.
They think.
STANDARD (CONT'D)
If we could just get the creature
into the lifeboat, we could launch
it into space and blow it up.
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HUNTER
Good! That's good!
STANDARD
We can load the lifeboat up with
explosives and trigger them
remotely, once the lifeboat is in
space.
ROBY
I think it's going to be almost
impossible to drive it up into the
lifeboat.
HUNTER
We can use the flamethrower.
ROBY
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It's not going to work.
STANDARD
You can't say that; I think it's a
good plan.
HUNTER
The flamethrower needs more fuel.
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STANDARD
Right. We've got a lot to
accomplish. Let's get moving.
The three men come down steps into this rather dirty area of
the ship.
Sc
The three men come down steps into this rather dirty area of
the ship. A lot of tools and large items of machinery are
stored around.
SHAPES.
SHAPES. Each container is well packed and labelled.
HUNTER
Which explosive should we use?
STANDARD
I'd suggest the N-13 (MORE)
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
sticks. They're portable, and they
can be radio detonated.
One of them.
ROBY
You know, it's funny -- this stuff
we went to so much trouble to dig
up
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just fine
STANDARD
Here, carry these.
STANDARD
(grinning)
It's stable; it doesn't hurt to
drop it.
Sc
The three men are carrying their equipment along the hallway,
when Hunter's tracker suddenly BEEPS.
HUNTER
Hold it!
They all stop. The tracker BEEPS AGAIN. Hunter puts down his
stuff and points the tracker around.
HUNTER (CONT'D)
(nodding up some steps) Up there.
They all look at each other. Standard puts down his bundle
and picks up the flamethrower.
ROBY
So what do we do? Do we (MORE)
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ROBY (CONT'D)
ignore it and finish loading the
explosives into the boat -- or do
we flush it out now?
STANDARD
Now. If we can get it into the
boat, we won't have to blow it up
-- we
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Then he continues up.
STANDARD
(shouts)
You can come up! It's safe!
ROBY
(spying the corpse) Oh -- Jesus --
STANDARD
The ship's gravitational attraction
must have drawn him back.
HUNTER
(horrified)
(MORE)
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HUNTER (CONT'D)
Should we go outside and bring him
in?
STANDARD
No... The risk is too great.
Perhaps after we've destroyed the
thing.
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The floor slopes upward slightly here as the corridor funnels
in and ends in the entrance to a narrow passageway or crawl-
way. This passageway connects the nose of the ship with the
lifeboat.
STANDARD
(pointing)
Along the base of the walls there.
HUNTER
This should do it.
ROBY
I should hope so! And we'd better
make sure it's pretty far from the
ship when we blow it.
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STANDARD
It will be.
HUNTER
(surveys the craft uneasily) What
we really need is some red meat in
here for bait.
ROBY
Well, if we had some, I'd eat it.
I'm starting to get hungry.
STANDARD
Well... Now we have to herd that
thing up here.
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HUNTER
(nervously)
Whoever's doing the herding is
gonna have their hands pretty full.
I think somebody should stay by the
lifeboat to slam the door on the
thing once it's inside, and to
serve as... As...
(searches for a word)
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ROBY
Isn't "bait" the word you used?
HUNTER
Hey look, somebody has to have his
hands free to lock the creature in
the lifeboat!
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STANDARD
Yes, and maybe launch the boat and
blow it too... If the others are
injured.
ROBY
Who gets the privilege?
HUNTER
Just keep your finger off the
button till she's way away from the
ship, that's all.
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Is it armed?
ROBY
HUNTER
If you press the button right now, it will blow the whole
nose of the ship off.
ROBY (CONT'D)
Thanks for the thought. (puts
detonator in his
Breast pocket)
STANDARD
All right, Martin, we'll be in
touch with you on the communicator.
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ROBY
And you'll let me know when you've
got it coming this way...
STANDARD
And you stand aside while we drive
it in, then shut the hatch, launch
the boat, and --
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ROBY
Kablooey.
STANDARD
Come on; we haven't much time, air
is a factor.
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
(over, filtered)
We've got something on the
tracker... Got to be it, it's too
big for the cat.
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HUNTER
(over, filtered)
It's coming from down there.
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HUNTER
It must have stopped moving. I'm
not getting anything.
STANDARD
Let me go first; you stay behind
me.
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Carefully, Standard advances down the corridor. Then THE
CREATURE POPS OUT OF HIDING BEHIND HUNTER, AND PICKS HIM UP.
HUNTER
The flamethrower!
STANDARD
I can't, the acid will pour out!
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hear the shrieks and crashing noises.
ROBY
Hello? Standard? Hunter?
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He waits quite a while for a response, but we can see from
his expression that he expects none.
He drops his face into his hands. When he lifts his head
again, he has managed to summon a certain amount of resolve.
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it.
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Something moves in the darkness -- Roby turns his light on
STANDARD
(a feeble whisper) Kill me...
ROBY
(sickened)
What did it do to you?
STANDARD
(moves his head slightly) Look...
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STANDARD (CONT'D)
(whispering)
That was Melkonis... It ate
Hunter...
ROBY
(looking around for a tool) I'll
get you out of there.
STANDARD
No... Don't...
ROBY
But I can save you -- get you to
the Autodoc!
STANDARD
No good... It's eaten too much of
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me...
ROBY
(in horror) What can I do?
STANDARD
Kill me...
Roby drops to his knees and gasps for breath, trying not to
throw up.
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Roby drops to his knees and gasps for breath, trying not to
throw up. At length, he regains control of himself.
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ROBY
Kitty go bye-bye.
ROBY (CONT'D)
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(reading from labels)
What'll it be, Kitty? Here -- how
about some Tacitum-35, ten kilos of
it. This'll buy us an island on
some nice planet.
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COMPUTER
Attention! Engines will overheat
and main core will melt in 4
minutes, 30 seconds!
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Roby comes hustling up to where the lifeboat is berthed.
Hands full, he starts to enter the connecting passageway.
COMPUTER
Attention! Engines will overload in
Minutes!
Like a maniac, Roby runs through the ship, level after level,
pounding down stairwells, his footsteps clanging metallically
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COMPUTER (CONT'D)
Attention! Engines will overload in
Minutes, 30 seconds!
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COMPUTER
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Attention! Engines will overload in
Minutes!
ROBY
Computer! I've turned all the
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COMPUTER
The reaction has proceeded too far.
The core has begun to melt. Engines
will overload in 2 minutes, 35
seconds.
Again, Roby must run through all the levels of the ship,
this time up the stairs, exhausted, stumbling, while the
computer counts down:
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Again, Roby must run through all the levels of the ship, this
time up the stairs, exhausted, stumbling, while the Computer
counts down:
COMPUTER
Attention! Engines will overload in
Minutes!
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it toward the passageway.
Dripping with sweat, his face a mask of fear, Roby enters the
passageway, flamethrower gripped tightly in his hands. He is
goaded on by the siren and the Computer:
COMPUTER
Attention! Engines will explode in
Seconds!
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COMPUTER
Attention! Engines will explode in
Seconds!
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144. INTERIOR. LIFEBOAT -
He comes in on the run, hurls the catbox and bag toward the
front, and does a dive over the back of the control chair.
He comes in on the run, hurls the catbox and bag toward the
front, and does a dive over the back of the control chair. He
is no sooner in the seat than he hits the "LAUNCH" button.
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145. EXTERIOR. NOSE OF SHIP - OUTER SPACE
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151. AN EXPANDING ORANGE FIREBALL WITH PIECES OF METAL FLYING IN
ALL DIRECTIONS. -
Roby unhooks himself from his straps, rises, and goes to the
back of the lifeboat. He stares out through the porthole. His
face is bathed in orange light.
154. BEHIND HIM, THE CREATURE EMERGES FROM SOME HIDING PLACE. - IT
HAS BEEN INSIDE THE LIFEBOAT ALL ALONG -
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Roby whirls, and finds himself facing the thing across the
length of the boat. It squats, then pulls out its trophy -- a
man's arm.
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It throws down the arm. With that, Roby dives for the open
locker door, hurls himself inside, and slams the door shut.
There is a clear glass panel in the door, and the thing puts
its face right up to the glass, peering in at Roby.
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There is a clear glass panel in the door, and the thing puts
its face right up to the glass, peering in at Roby. The
locker is so small that Roby's face is only inches away from
the creature's. The sight is disgusting. It turns its head,
looking at him in curiosity.
Trying to distract the monster away from the cat, Roby TAPS
ON THE GLASS.
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on the oxygen.
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Roby pulls on the helmet, latches it into place, then turns
ROBY
Try a little of this, you fucking
bastard.
Before the acid can touch the floor, Roby reaches back and
pulls a switch -- BLOWING THE REAR HATCH.
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Looking for any salvation, Roby grabs the hatch control
lever and yanks it.
Looking for any salvation, Roby grabs the hatch control lever
and yanks it.
The hatch slams shut, closing Roby safely inside but TRAPPING
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THE END OF THE CREATURE'S TENTACLE IN THE DOORJAMB.
The jet exhausts are located at the rear of the craft, right
where the creature is wriggling.
The jet exhausts are located at the rear of the craft, right
where the creature is wriggling. THE ENGINES BELCH FLAME FOR
A FEW SECONDS, THEN SHUT OFF.
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Roby hurries to the rear hatch and looks out after the
thing.
Roby hurries to the rear hatch and looks out after the thing.
EXTERIOR - OUTER SPACE
The burned mass of the monster drifts slowly away into space,
a writhing, smoking, foaming mass.
DISSOLVE TO:
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164. INTERIOR. LIFEBOAT - LATER
ROBY
(dictating)
... So it looks like I'll make it
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ROBY (CONT'D)
Poor Yorick here should go at least
partway toward proving I'm not a
He puts the skull down on a shelf and locks a glass lid over
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it.
ROBY (CONT'D)
This is Martin Roby, executive
officer, last survivor of the
commercial vessel SNARK, signing
off. Come on, cat, let's go to
sleep.
His chest. With one hand, he presses a switch, and THE LID
CLOSES OVER HIM.
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CLOSE-UP OF THE ALIEN SKULL, watching sentinel over the
slumbering Roby like some dead, melancholy pixie.
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