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IMAGINE STORY DEPT.

UNTITLED DETROIT PROJECT

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Scott Siker

First Rewrite
April 27, 2001
•1f you have the guts to be yourself ... other people 1
ll pay
your price."'
- RABBIT AHGSTROX
John Updike, •Rabitt, Run•
1..
Run it under a harsh green fluorescent light.
CLOSE ON AN .ANGRY BLONDE PUNK, bis head flying in and out of
frame. Hard against SOME GIRLrs face. Banging against a
dirty mirror. Sweating. Moaning.
GIRL
Jim Jim Jinny Jii:mny Jim:ny oh god
Puck me Rabbit Rabbit yes oh yes
Jia:my Rabbit Fuck PU.ck l?uck
Be's fucking her on top of a nasty sink. Fast. And furious.
Her short skirt hiked up high around her waist.
A wool cap pulled down tight over his face. This is Jim,
James, B, Bunny, Rabbit, B-Rahbit & Jin:my Smith Jr.
To us he 1 s just plain JIMMY.
GIRL
Oh Rabbit fuck yes oh yes

They're in a desolate bathroom. Wet. Full of noise.

Seats thumping through the walls. Fists banging on the door.
The girl moan-moaning. It's all so fucking loud.
CLOSE ON JIMMY, catching sight of him.self bouncing up & down
in the mirror. Ignoring the girl, hc 1 s some~hcre else.
Gone. Always moving. We hear her coming. Jimmy stops.
Stares. The harsh light crowns his head. a burning halo.
He doesn 1 t look so good, cold sweat.
JIMMY
- I gotta run.
She jumps off the sink, yanks down her skirt.
GIRL
(pissed)
Why? You still nervous? You're
lucky I ran into you •cause I'm
tryin 1 to help calm you down. But
it's like you ain't even fuckin'
here -
JIMMY
(pulls up his pants;
dic:t- ?:acted)
- What_? Wasn • t it good for you?
GIRL
Yeah. You know I love the way you
fuck me. Rabbit. Why do you always
gotta ask?
Before Jimmy can answer a queer look crosses his face--
He rushes for a dirty stall and
we hear him puking his fucking brains out.
2 ..
Jim:uy. leaving the bathroom. Still a little green.
No sign of the girl. A line of guys waiting outside.
They scream. shout. Jin:my just laughs and gives •em all the
finger. Heads down the corridor alone into the darkness.

3.
An underground hip-bop club. THE SHELTER. A basement cave.
You can see the Doise and the heat. Wall-to-wall kids, all
that sex. Mashing to the beat. Mostly black. Some white.
Whatever. Jimmy wipes his mouth, slips on headphones.
getting back into character. We hear his nrusic, the song
being pumped into his head. Angry_ D~fiant. Beautiful.

He makes bis way through c"~ cr3wd. a hip-hop gladiator.

Walking tall. All attitude. Everybody arowid him dancing to
a different beat. We're sampiing Tony Manero strutting down
the block from the opening of •SATURDAY NIGHT FEVER.•
Jirmiy (Tony) checks out the girls, smiles their way. heading
backstage. But this ain't no fucking disco.
Before he gets far some BIG BAD DUDE stops him--
Shines a flashlight in his face. Hollas some shit at him.
Jinmy tears off his headphones. The song cuts out-
JIMMY
{yells over the music)
- Yo what the fuck you call me?
BIG BAD DUDE
Where ya goin'. dawg you ain't
backstage, are ya?
JIMMY
What you say about rue?
{gets ~ight up in the
big man's face)
Do you even know who I am?

The big dude shines the light bright back in Jimmy's face.
He's security.
BIG BAD DUDE
Fuck no. You wanna go backstage or
what?

J!MMY
I ain't gain' nowhere 'til you tell
me what the fuck you said, man -
Before the big'guy can respond, a skinny black superstar
pulls Jinmy away. It's THE FUTURE aka Future, Fuche & David
Porter. Also in his 20s. the Future 1 s all good.
 3.

Fm'URE".
(to the Big Bad Dude)
It's all good, brotha. Be 1 s with
me -

FU.ture drags J'im:ny past the big guy backstage. Laughing at

him with love.

FtITURB
- You crazy muthafucka. Why din•t
ya just tell 'im you backstage for
tbe battle. Jinmy?
JIJ.1MY
He said some shit -
{pulls away from
Future; spots
something on his
shirt)
Fuck.

4.
Outside the club. Downtown Detroit. Bleak winter night.
Cold as hell. A mess of kids waiting to get in. Jimmy
hustles up some stairs, Future right on his tail.
FUTURE
Where ya runnin 1
to?
JIMMY
- I fuckin• puked on my shirt.

FlITURE
(laughs)
First time's c>.lways crazy -
you.knowhatimsayin'? Didn't fucking
Mary calm you down?
A needy white guy in his late 20s with a big head, •CHEDDER•
BOB ZUROWSKY aka Head, standing near the top of the line sees
Jirmn:y & Future heading in the opposite direction. He's slow.
OIEDDER BOB
Hey Rabbit - where ya--?
Jimmy turns, gestur~s •one-minute-I'll-be-right-back• and
keeps walking away. Future laughs, follows.
Chedder Bob grabs two black guys huddled against the wall
smokin' dope; a short roly-poly freak in his early 20s named
SOL GEORGE aka Mista Kingpin & Mista and his laid-hack older
brother. DJ IZ aka Israel George, Izzy k Iz, a pseudo-
intellectual with dreads and glasses.
 4.

They're Jimny k Future's crew, RU4S6 (•Real Unforgiven For

Killin•• - also the abortion pill}.
CHEDDKR BOB
C 1 mon. Rabbit a.n' Future•re goin'
without us -

5.
Jirrmy & Future head into a dark alley next to the club.
The crew follows. We can still hear the music booming
through the walls. A lone spotlight pierces the gloom.
Jinmy stops at a dumpster near the back.
SOL
- T'night's the night. boy. You on
your way up. yo. Next stop - Deal.
DJ IZ
{goes to hug Jimny)
No doubt no doubt - S'up, brotha?
JIMMY
(pulls back)
Puked on my shirt.
Chedder Bob tries to get a closer look at Jimmy•s T-shirt.

CH.EDDERBOB
Lemme see -
JIMMY
(pushes him away)
Fuck off, Chedder Bob -
Jirrmy scrapes the dumpster away from the wall. Grabs a trash
bag hidden behind it.
SOL
(laughs)
Now listen, Bunny - if you battle
that muthafucka Papa Doc, nigga was
talkin 1 some serious shit, yo -
Jinmy opens the trash bag. starts rooting around inside-
All the guys stop and ~tare.
JIMMY
(pulls out some clean
clothes froJn the bag}
Fuckin 1 Janeane an• I jus• broke
up
an• shit, an• she took the house an'
the goddamn car -
 s.

FUTURB
- Again?
DJ IZ
Maybe it's 'cause you keep fuckin'
all those other girls for a minute -
SOL
Yeah, Rabbit -
CHEDDER BOB
No you just need to forget that ·
Janeane bitch, Rabbit. Just think
about all tbe fine bitches you goWJa
get t 1 night after you win -

JIMMY
( looking through
the garbage bag}
She says she's pregnant, whatever,
yo -

A long beat.
FUT1JRE
- Now that's the heaviest influence
in that movie right there, man.

CHEDDER BOB
I bet that bitch is lyin', Rabbit.

SOL
(to Chedder Bob)
Lemme ask you a question, bitch -
I bet you probly never even bust in
a bitch befoe. Have you?
CHEDDER BOB
(turns red; to Jirrmy)
You gonna stay at your mom•s?
JIMMY
- fuck, Bob.
~- (pulls out a clean
T-shirt from the bag)
Yo can I please get some privacy
here, please -
The three guys acquiesce, walk toward the lit mouth of the
alley. The FUture stays.
JIMMY
(laughs)
my lucky shirt.
(more}
 6.

JIMMY ( cont Id)

(peels off the dirty
shirt; shivering in
the cold)
It 1 s my birthday in a couple weeks,
Fuche - An' it's like, I gotta do
some thin• , ya know? Somethin • real .
(puts on the clean T)
- I mean all lever wanted to do was
rap, yo - be an emcee. But I know
they ain't gonna like me in there -
FUTURE
If you rap, you rap muthafucka. lt
don•t m.atter. You just gotta stop
givin' a fuck what other people
gonna say. Jim. -
JilTI.TI.j' hides the garbage bag back behind the dumpster.
JIMMY
- People can•t talk shit about me
like that, yo.
FUTURE
Just wreck those mies an• gain some
respect, youhearwhatlmsayin 1
?

JIMMY
It's like do or die time for me now.
Fuche.
PUTURE
{la.ughs}
I know whatchya sayin• I'm tryin'
to get straight with the Lord these
days.

They both head back up the alley toward their friends and the
light.
JIMMY
Are you high?
FUTURE
You're yo_ I believe
B-Rabbit, in
you thoroughly.
(jumps; shouts out}
B-RABBIT, yo - youknowhatrmsayin'?
B-RABB!T~ B-RABBIT!
They meet up with the rest of the crew. 1',..ndthey all shout
out. jumping, laughing, barking, •B-RA.BBlT! B-RABBIT! B--
SLAM TO:
 7.

,_
CLOSE ON A FREESTYLE BATTL.B, up on stage in the club.
Spotlights glare. DJ spins. Two emcees squaring off.
One-on-one. Two 60 second scoreboard clocks tick down ...
It's Fight Music. And right now one very short brother named
LIL 1 TIC (Little Lunatic) is battling Jinmy. Up in his face.
He's spittin• about--
1. Jinmy's name - B-Rahbit.
2. Jinmy's sk:i.n color - White.
3. Jimmy 1 s inexperience - 1st battle.
Jiurny just stands there. his wool cap pulled down tight.
Bouncing a little to the beat. Shaking out the nerves.
Lilt Tic's killin' him The clocks hit 0. Time_
The CROWD goes crazy. Judge and j ucy.
FUture takes center stage, he's hosting the battle.
-SPLIT SO.EE.N:

F1.ITURE JIMMY
[starts introducing {checks out the crowd;
Jimmy} all watching him}

COT SPLIT SCREEN:

THE CROWD FUTIJRE
{shouting at Jimmy; (finishes introducing
White can•t rap) Jimmy)

CUT SPL!T SCREEN:

JIMMY THE CROWD
(staring out at the (screaming out his
crowd; at all name, giving him
those people shit, calling him
judging him) names)

CUT SPLIT SCREEN:

JIMMY JIMMY
(Future hands him (Future hands him
the m.ic:) the mic)

EHD SPLJ:7 SCRBDr:

Future hands him the mic. All eyes on Jimmy. Under the
blinding hot lights. The beat kicks in. The clocks start ...
CLOSE ON JIMMY, bobbing his head up & down collecting his
thoughts, opens his mouth to rap and--
People start booing him right away.
Calling him names. Booing.
Booing.
 8.

Booing JitlJIIY. And nothing comes out of his mouth.

Mute. Burning up under the lights. Failure.
Jiumy freezes.
And the picture J"REJ:ZES.•
:u::wnws. And PLI.YS again.
Jimny opens his mouth to ~ap and nothing come:s out. Freeze.
Failure. Rewind. Play. We're SOATCB:DiG the film.
Back & forth.
Forth" back.
SLAM TO:
MAIN TITLE:

right
music

We still hear the scratching which leads us into our title

song, the song we first heard playing in Jimmyts headphones ...

7.
Poor Detroit. Jinrny runs through the diseased streets of his
life past all the crack whores and dead ends. Holding onto
his garbage bag full of clothes, headphones back on his head.
His breath visible in the night air. He and it the only
white around. We still hear our title song.
Jimmy runs. Runs through a busy intersection, right on by
the entrance of a ratty trailer park. running down a side
street. Running up to a big vacant fj.eld down at the end.
Urban blight. nying grass. A graveyard for shopping carts,
broken appliances, used needles & other shit.
Jinmy stops.
And screams out at the top of his lungs.
Loud and long.
Then he runs to a chain link fence at the edge of the field,
looks both ways making sure no one sees him, and hops over it.

8.
JillltltY tnakes his way through the maze of trailers. Up to a
drab double-wide mobile home. A beat-to-shit big-ass '79
Lincoln abandoned in front. Down. And out.

,.
Jimmy lets himself in. Drops the garbage bag. Re's cold,
blowing on his hands trying to warm himself up. The place is
a dump. All white trash.
 9.

The title song still blaring-in his headphones and on our

soundtrack.
JIMMY
Mcxn?

Be heads for his mom.1 s bedroom. As he gets closer, we hear

some noise. Moans. And grunts. A breathless scream.
We hear sex. Raw. And loud.
Not Jimny. All he hears is music.
JIMMY
Mom?

Be slides open the flimsy vinyl bedroom door and sees his mom
fucking some guy! On top. Riding away--
Jinmy pulls off his headphones. The title song ends.
JIMMY
(in shock}
Mom!? 1

STEPHA.NIE
Rabbit?

10.
Later. Jimrny 1 s eating cereal in the lousy kitchen, dry no
milk. A small TV, beer bottles, comic books litter the
countertops. A nisty electric space heater vibrates heat.
It's almost quiet for the first time in the movie.

His mother, STEPHANIE. slinks in wearing an oversized

•Osborne High• sweatshirt and little else. Her hair 1 s a sex
mess, she slurs her words a little maybe a little drunk.
She's a young 40, small, sexy in that bleached blonde
trailer trash sorta way.
STEPHAtHE
You okay. baby - Wan'me ta make ya
somethin'?
(.ruffles his hair)
- Dontchya think maybe ya shoulda
knocked or maybe called first or
somethin'?
JIMMY
Yo - the phone•s disconnected.
STEPHANIE
(defensive)
Yeah I know, Rabbit. I know. l jus•
gotta run down to the - um .. the
phone place tomorrow -
 10.

JIMMY
(mouth full of dry
cereal)
- An' there's no milk. Ever.
STBPIIAN!E
Bey - I been busy. ya know.
JIMMY
Still goin 1 to bingo or get a job
yet?

A thick lame white dude, GREG MINOR, stumbles into the

kitchen on one good leg like he owns the place. Just a few
y~-..rs alder than Jimmy, all Grrg•s got on is a two-day beard,
pair of •Osborne High• sw,"at.nants, and a sb.it-eatin' grin.
GREG
(slaps Jimmy on the
back of bis head)
Rabbit - ~hat the fuck you doin'
here? Bow tbout knockin*?
Jirrm:ry doesn'treact. Too tired to fight. It 1 s clear that
Greg makes him uncomfortable. Mak.es him feel like he's back
in high school. Jimmy seems to shrink when he's around.
JIMMY
(turns to his mom)
Janeane an I I broke up -
STEPHANIE
None of those girls are right for
you, baby. She say she's pregnant?
Jircmy nods.
STEPHANIE
Right. I bet she took the car too -
JIMMY
(doesn't want to talk
a.bout it; gets up)
- I gotta work in the mornin'.
STEPHANIE
- You and Future still at that
Little caesars in warren?
She lights a cigarette. Greg takes it from her, smokes.
JIMMY
No I - a.hh - I--
 11.

GREG
C I mon. man, you got fired from
Little caesars? Nobody gets fired
from Little Caesars -
JIMMY
- yo I'm too tired for this shit.
STEPHANIE
You stayin' here. baby?

JIMMY
- just for a few weeks •til I save
enough to get my own place.
GREG
Just like Bob Zurowsky- All your
friends still livin' at home -
aren't they, Rabbit?
{laughs)
Guys're a bunch a fucking losers -

Without skipping a beat Jimmy grabs a beer bottle & fi~es it

at Greg's head! It just misses. smashing against the wall--
Greg bolts up, cigarette still stuck in his mouth--
Jitnmy instinctively takes a step back.
Violence about to break.
Stephanie jumps in the middle--
STEPHA.NIE
{screams at Jimmy)
YOU STOP IT! JAMES SMITH JIDlIOR!
STOPIT NOW!

Just then a sleepy little angel appears in the doorway of the

kitchen, six-year-old LILY, Jimmy•s little half-sister_
She lights up when she sees Jimmy_ Runs to him_
He gives her a big hug. Violence broken. Greg laughs, gets
himself a cold beer from the •fridge instead.
JIMMY
Yo - shouldn't you be sleepin 1
, Lily?
LILY
You woke IDJ-1 1p ya know_
(whispers to him)
- will you sing to me?

JIMMY
c•mon - back to bed. It 1
s late.
 12.

11.
Jimny carries Lily into her little girl bedroom. Neat, clean.
A mountain of stuffed animals on her bed. As he puts her
down. we hear him quietly sweetly lovingly rapping to her.
And he 1 s good. Real good.
suddenly they hear Stephanie shout out frcxn the kitchen--
STEPHANIE (OS)
Rabbit Ya Better Clean AlltbisShit
Upinhere Or I'll KickYouout For Good!
Jirrmy & Lily look at each other, share a laugh.

12_
Later. Jinmry's picking up the broken beer bottle in the tiny
kitchen. Stephanie stands in the doorway ~atching.
STEPHANIE
- Rabbit, if you're gonna stay here
you better get along or--
JIMMY
What'd I do? Yo he started this shit -
STEPHANIE
- don't fuck this up for me, baby.
You're not in high school anymore,
okay?

Rabbit pushes the last bits of broken glass against the wall
with his foot. It 1 s been a long night.
J!MMY
(sarcastic)
Forget it. whatever. I love Greg.
Can I get a ride to work in the
mornin'?
Stephanie goes over to the kitchen table, grabs her car keys
and tosses them to Jimmy.

JIMMY
- you're lettin' me take the car?
STEPHANIE
Nope. I'm givin' it to ya -
It's your birthday present.
JIMMY
- thanks. My birthday's not for two
weeks, yo -
 13.

STEPHANIE
(laughs; almost
flirtatious)
You're still my lil' Rabbit, right?

l.l.
The next morning, cold & clear outside the trailer. Jinny,
trying to start the big-ass '79 Lincoln. Click. Nothing.
Click. Click. It's dead.
JIMMY
(jumps out. checks
hi:· watch)
Shiiit -

He's late. Jimmy pops the hood, looks underneath.

Just then a chubby charismatic white hipster named WlNK
EPSTEIN aka 3rd Person, ambles up. Early 20s, soul patch,
and the harnx:,nies of hip-hop verbalization.
WINK
Yo Bunny you back home -
JIMMY
ain't my home, Wink. How the fuck
you know I was here?
WINK
(smiles}
Please. Who ya·think you talkint to?

JIMMY
(slams down the hood)
Don•t tell nobody. okay?
(checks his watch;
dirty hands)
Yo I gotta run - gimme a ride to
work? I 1 m gonna be fuckin' late -
WINK
My mom's got the cat -
(kicks the Lincoln)
Yo you should just blow this shit
up, B-

1,.
Jimmy hops the fence at the edge of the dirty trailer park.
Wink hot on his heels.
WINK
- Why we goin• this way?
 14.

JIMMY
(just gives him a
look)
Yo where were you last night?
They head th.rough the vacant field together.
WINK
I heard ya got caught out. People
sayin• some fucked up shit, boy.
Jimmy stops before he hits the street. Wipes his dirty hands
on his pants, wanting to nm away from Wink and last night
and the trailer park and everything else in his fucking life.

JIMMY
- like what?
He checks up & down the busy intersection making sure no one
sees him, and hustles away from the trailer park.
Wink follows.

WINK
You just gotta bounce wit' Wink, B.
You tha franchise, baby. They just
jealous, like Janeane -
JIM:MY
You talked to •er?
WINK
Forget it. An' fuck battlin' down
at the Shelter, yo. Justa bunch a
losers who ain't got deals.
JIMMY
- What else am I gonna do?
WINK
Stay home, Bunny. You ain't goin 1
nowhere down at that club. And you
know 3rd Person's gotchya -
JIMMY
Who?

WINK
3rd Person.
(laughs; pounds his
chest}
Wink•s all 3rd Person now. 'Bout to
blow up. for real. An' I'm takin•
you wit' me, B.
They make it to the bus stop, a few people waiting.
 15.

JIMMY
- how we gonna do that? l'm ta.kin'
the fuckin• bus to work, man.
Jitl'.llIY anxiously looks down the street for his bus.
Wink puts his arm around Jilt'lttY 1 S shoulder, bringing him in
close.
WINK
Don't tell no one, but I jus•
recorded a demo up at Paisley Park.
JIMMY
- Paisley Park?
wn.::
With Prince. The Artist. 3rd
Person? Prince gave me that name.
JIMMY
Youtre full a shit, yo - How the
fuck you know Prince?
Wink pulls out an envelope from his pocket.
WlNK.
- He's friends with Lee Darucher.
man. Serious. I just recorded at
Paisley Park. yo.
Wink opens the envelope, shows Jinmy some photographs.
CLOSE ON PHOTOGRAPHS OF WINK & PRINCE, hanging out in a giant
studio control room. The massive console all lit up with
bright bright lights.
JIMMY
(impressed)
Shiiit. That 1
3 really Prince. You
ain't lyin' -
WINK
Yeah an• r •m ta.kin' a song down to
96.3, try to get it on. They
playin' one local demo evecy Friday
night now -
Jinmy 1 s bus finally arrives. Belching black exhaust.
WINK
(puts away the
photographs)
- And yo you got next. Bunny. For
real. Recordin' at Paisley Park -
we can both fly outta here. Right?
 16.

15.
Jinmy on the bus, looking out the window. Poverty. Hard
times k pain. Be slips on his headphones, pulls out a pen
and starts writing on his dirty hand.
CLOSEON JIMMY'S BAND, letters.
Words.
Rhymes.
CLOSE ON JIMMY'S FACE, closing his eyes.
And we hear the opening lines to the song, a cappella.
And then a beat kicks in. the bass line. and a groove.
And as the words & 1m.1sic come together in a song,
Jin:my•s set free. He opens his eyes ...
'l'he buti, the poor,, Detroit., it rs a.11 AKDO.TED. By ll. Crumb.
And Jimmy, he•s a SUpei:man. Costume, J1111sc1es, the who1e deal.
Sl'.JPEEJ.DOIY. Be'• rapping the song £or a.l.1 to hear. Jumps up
• bursts through the window of the bus,- flying away for good.
Escaping hi.a eilrthly bonds• duil reality.
SUperJi.m:my flying~ rapping over the animated bad streets of
Detroit beading up tova.rd the sun, leaving the ea..rth behind,
flying rcarus high. Ire flies up up a.rou.nd && a.round the globe
faster" faster. A blur. Going BACE:I::H TIXE to last night.
LAST N:Imrl. SnperJ.in.msy flies onstage in the Shelter, grabs
the m.ic from LI:L• rrc with one ha.nd • with the other squeer:es
Tic•s animated head right off. Blood gushing everywhere as
SUperJimmy just freestyles cool to the crowd.

The rhymes and the b1ood flowing fast. The audience applauds
screaming - going crazy - loving all of SUperJi.mmy a.ud his
.mu1de_ lie finishes ~ waves goodbye, flying off BACI'.nrro TBE
FOTOU, heading for the suburbs a.nd the nice part of town ...
TODAY. The nice part of town. SUperJimm:y f1ies over a five-
star hotel. Up-scale. grand. Sti1l singing his song.
He darts doWD toward the back of the hotel and heads through
a big opex:t vindov. flying into a locker rOODLin the basement.

Be dives at a locker changing super fast out of his costume.

And into his u.uifo:cm....
Shirt. Tie. Vest.

Becoming JIMMY THE BELLMAN. BAO: TO llEALll'Y (film).

He takes off his headphones. glancing at his reflection in a
locker room mirror. the song cutting out--

16.
Jimmy hurries up to the front of the fancy hotel lobby, his
tie 1 s a mess, co1lar askew. He's late.
 17.

Slides into position next to.his friend Chedder Bob. and a

thin black bellman in his early 30s named PAUL, who's
greeting guests at the door. Classical 'lllllsic plays in the
background.
PAUL
(to Jimny)
Mr_ Springer wants to see you in his
office, James -
OiEDDER BOB
(to Paul)
Fuck you. homo -
{straightens out
Jinrrcy's tie~ collar)
You okay?
JIMMY
Are you drunk?
CHEDDER BOB
(he is}
Sbhhhhh. You okay about last night?
JIMMY
FUck last night, bitch -

- 17 ..
CLOSE ON JIMMY, taking shit. Pissed off.
Beat.
MR. SPRINGER (OS)
- is that why you were late again,
Mr. Smith? Kell?
Jimmy doesn't say anything just looks down at his hands ...
They're still smudged dirty, lyrics scrawled all over them
like strange tattoos. He shifts in his seat and hides his
hands under his legs.
MR. SPRINGER (OS)
What do you have to say for
yourself, Mr. Smith?

Jinny and his boss, MR. SPRINGER. a dark-skinned white man in

his late 40s with a mustache, are sitting right across from
each other in a cramped basement office. The door behind
Mr. Springer's desk isn't closed all the way.
JIMMY
- You can call me Jimmy.
 18.

MR. SPRINGER
Okay. Ji!!!&:. You know we were
hesitant to take you on in the first
place, Jimuy, because you' re friends
with Mr. Zurowsky. But,-- Are you
sure you can cut it here. Jin:ny?
Before Jilln:IY can answer that bullshit question the phone
rings. Mr. Springer snaps it up.
MR. SPRINGER (into the phone)
Rooms diVision -
(some air goes out of
him; whipped}
- Yes. hon, I'll be h,~e at seven ...
Yes ... Yes. of CO\li!=:P. I will ... Yes?

As Mr. Springer continues to tolerate his wife. Jirrmy notices

a girl sitting down outside the office. He shifts in his
seat trying to get a better look through the door.
And catches sight of a BONEY-DIPPEDGIRL, maybe 18 or so, so
sexy and indifferent she's obscene, impossible. Short hair.
Long legs. Oh God ...

Mr. Springer hangs up the phone, all business.

Jimmy can't keep his eyes off of the girl, the girl.
MR. SPRINGER
Okay, Mr. Smith. r have another
meeting now so - If you're late
again we're gonna have to let you
go. You have to do better,-- I know
you can be a better bellman -
Jimmy snaps out of it_ Gets up. Shoves his dirty hands in
his pockets and heads out. Time to eat more shit.
JIMMY
Yes, sir. I will
When he gets to the door he turns back to Mr. Springer.
The girl's now standing right behind him in the doorway.
JIMMY
I guess it 1
s not the right time to
ask for extra shifts, Mr. Springer.
Is it? But I - ahh - really need the
money.
MR. SPRINGER
- I'm sure you do, but let's just
see how this week works out first,
Jimmy. Okay?
(more}
 19.

MR. SPRINGER. (cont'd}

(motions the girl in)
Miss?
Jimuy leaves humiliated, still managing to smile at the girl
as she enters the office.
Reading out, he turns back around
pulling his dirty hands frOUl of his pockets & throws up a
middle finger in the direction of Mr. Springer•s office--
The Honey-Dipped Girl looks up as she closes the door, sees
Jinmy flipping her off. And gives him the finger right back!

18.
Dusk. Darkness falling visible on the ratty trailer park.
Jimmy's working under the hood of the Lincoln. The Future's
kickin• hack in the front seat. They hear LYNYRDSKYNYRD 1
s
•sweet Home Alabama• drift out of the mobile home.
JIMMY
- yo you should.a seen this girl,
Future. She was,-- I mean. Shit.
She•s perfect, yo.
FlIT1JRE
Perfect? Perfect got a name?
Jimmy shrugs, puts up the hood on his hooded sweatshirt_
It's getting cold. They hear Greg inside the trailer start
singing along with Lynyrd Skynyrd.
FUTURE
- Who the fuck is that?
JIMMY
That dude Greg Minor's practically
livin• with my mom, yo. Met at
Bingo up in Windsor. Neither of 'em
ever fucking win -
FUTURE
- we went to school ~ith •im, right?

JIMMY
He was a senior with Chedder Bob,
man. I got·_ save some money an•
get the fuck outta here. yo -
They listen to Greg sing; he's terrible. Hear him turn up
the stereo inside. And Future starts singing along at the
top of his lungs, off-key. making up the words as he goes ...
Then be begins to freestyle over the rock & roll beat.
Jimmy takes a turn. Rapping over •sweet Home Alabama.•
They go back & forth spittin' out verses over the music-
 20.

FtmJRE
- Yo there's another battle next
week. Jirimy. Winner•s takin• my
place as host. I'm signin 1 you up -
JIMMY
Don•t.
FUTURE
You gotta come down, ride those
Illies. you.knowhatimsayin'? Keep
workin• at it. That•s the only way
you gon get any betta'.
JIMMY
Don't sign me up. yo. I •m just
gonna play it by ear -
{goes back to work
wider the hood)
Try it DOW -

Future tries to turn the car over. Click. Click. Shit.

Jimmy keeps working on the car.
F1ITURE
You gotta let those people know you
ain't playin', you.knowhatlmsayin'?
Ya know they say. that man, •Ill,
ill; ill, ill. •

JIMMY
Puck, I don't wanna get booed again,
Fuche. It's gonna kill me. An'
anyway, Wink says he knows Prince.
Says I can record a demo up at
Paisley Park an• shit, yo -

FUTURE
{busts out laughing}
Wink says he knows Prince? What the
fuck does Prince gotta do with our
music, Jimmy? Win.k's jus• talk.
There will be no action. only talking.
JIMMY
- No. he had pictures, yo. This
could be a r.~ ....1 opportunity for me -
Greg limps out of the trailer singing •sweet Rome Alabama• to
himself. sees Jimmy and Future working on the car.
They throw him a look. He just laughs and heads back inside
singing his ass off.
FUTURE
- yo, that dude mentally ill?
,·
f
 21.

JIMMY
car accident. man. S 1 pposed to get
some big settlement soon -

FtmJRE
Puck:.. Hear what Wink 1 s callin'
himself now?
JIMMY
3rd Person.
(motions to the car)
Try it again -
FlmJRE
3rd Person? Shit. I don't wanna
bring too much negativity towards my
positive, but he is not a good
rapper. That muthafucka's weak.
I'd rather listen to funky al• Greg
sing -
Future tries to start the car. It groans. Sputters. Spits.
And starts. Jimmy smiles, he fixed it. The Future's up.
FtmJR.E
Yo son. we goin' out t'night!
JIMMY
(slams down the hood}
- I dunno, people talkin• shit,
yo - ya know about last night an•--
FUTURE
{laughs)
Fuck last night.
JIMMY
I ~bought you wanted to start
gettin• straight with the Lord.
FUTIJRE
C'mon it's Saturday night, yo -

l.9.
Night. The whole gang's riding in the big-ass '79 Lincoln.
Jimmy and Future up front, hip-hop thumping from the car's
shitty radio, tinny speakers tuned to 96.3. Sol, DJ Iz and
Chedder Bob in the back seat gettin' high_
DJ IZ
Yo boy, this is your mom's birthday
present?---U it was me I'd--
 22.

JIMMY
(cuts him off; on
edge)
Don't fuck.in• start, Izzy -
Sol smokes, exhales.
SOL
We betta• than this, fellas - We
gotta get us a deal - Go platinum,
get cheesed out-.--
Chedder Bob pulls out a bottle of vodka from inside his coat.
FUTURE
- Stealin 1
from your mom again, Bead?
CHEDDER BOB
She don't notice, she's too lit up
most a the time. Where•s Wink?
He takes a drink and passes the bottle to Sol who hands him
the joint.
SOL
- meetin 1
us there. Fuck, we need
to be slidin• in Navs, 600s an'
Double Rs.
CHEDDERBOB
Yeah an' get us all the hot bitches -
DJ IZ
- no we gotta save up, put our money
into Savings Bonds every week if we
wanna make it. No doubt. Keep
stackin• it, an' then build our own
studio. cut a demo an• get it on
96.3 -

Beat. What? Bonds?

FlffiJRE
What the fuck you talkin• 'bout, Iz?
SOL
(to DJ Iz)
Lemme ask you a question - How the
fuck're we brothers? Nigga we need
a nruthafuckin' deal, fine women an'
cars - not no mutha.fuckin' Savings
Bonds, fool.
 23.

JIMMY
Fuck. That • s all you motherfuckers
ever do is talk bullshit -
(mimics Sol)
•we gotta get us a deal - •
(mimics Chedrier Bob)
•Get us all the hot hitches - •
(mimics DJ Iz)
•Put our money into savings bonds - •
(in his own voice)
Just shutthefuckup. I'm tired of
everything. None a you ever do ·shit
about nuthin' - WR ALL STILL BROKE
AS FUCK LIVIN' WITH OUR MOMS!
(laugh~)
Right. Fuche?

SOL
Now hold on there, Bunny -
FUTURE
Yo, I'm jus' tryin' to get straight
with the Lord.
(laughs)
And big titties. I 1 d like to get
straight ~ith that Big Titty Mary,
man - youknowhatimsayin"?
JIMMY
I hit that -
CHEDDER BOB
- I heard she got VD.
SOL
So what. nigga - I'd still fuck--
Before Sol can finish the car goes black. cuts off.
The radio. The lights. The steering wheel. The brakes.
EVerything, dead. All the power's gone.
Jimmy tries to maintain control of the car.
The guys are screaming.
The •19 Lincoln gently coasts to the side of the road.

20 ..
Later. Dark side of the road. Silhouetted against the sky,
the guys stand around the car like hunters examining kill.
FtmJR.E
That was crazy -
Jimmy hops in, starts up the car. Lights.
 24.

The car running.

,JIMMY
- Jua 1 must be a short in the
electrical system, yo, whatever.
Let's go -
SOL
Uh-uh. I'm not gettin• back in that
piece a shit -
DJ IZ
(quiet so JitIUl!Y can't
hear)
- it•s a fuckin• deathtrap. I think
his mom must be tryin• to kill 'im.
CHEDDER BOB
(laughs; whispers)
You think Rabbit's mom's tryin 1
to
kill 1
im'?
Jimmy's ears are so good he hears everything. He jumps back
out of the car--
JIMMY
What you say?
CHEDDER BOB
Nothin•, Rabbit -
JIMMY
I hear everythin', yo - my mom ain't
tryin' to kill me. Fuckin' kill
your~ self, bitch -
CBEDDER BOB
- Hey I don't wanna die. Rabbit.
(thinks about it)
I mean. I dunno what the fuck I'm
livin 1 for. but I really don't wanna
die.

21.
They pull into the crowded parking lot of a seedy Chinese
restaurant, SfANLEY'S CAFE. Red neon. Kids hanging out
talking groping and getting high. Noise and hip-hop fill the
air. Jin:my gets out of the car first, keeps moving.
The other four slip out with attitude and head for the
restaurant.
Jimmy leads the way. FUture right behind him, a few steps in
front of Sol & DJ Iz, Chedder Bob pulling up the rea·r.
 25.

CLOSB ON JIMMY. looking around the parking lot. Outside

himself.
Stops.
His friends catch up to him.
FtJ'.flTRE
You okay, Jim?
SOL
Yeah c 'mon, B. Where ya goin 1
-

They all keep moving. Jintny stays there for a niinute.

Throws up his sweatshirt hood, hiding.
And finally follows after them.

They pass by a group of kids hanging out under a streetlight

at the edge of the parking lot. Kids spittin 1
out verses.
Kickin' some rhymes. In a circle. This is a cipha.
It's not competitive, just people checking each other out.
Free. Jmd easy.

RU486 joins in, FUture leading the way.

Jimmy still trailing behind.
FtITURE
RU486 is here, my people -
Let us show you the way -
SOL
Gonna kick some serious shit -
FUTURE
Yeah, Mista.

Jinny looks out

from under his hood. Checks the crowd.
Future joins the cipha,
in spits some alien shit.
He is a motherfucking star. Finishes.
Now Sol's up (Mista Kingpin}. A freak.
A bigger crowd gathers. Bouncing.
We see Wink hustle up, smiling and banding out flyers.
Future pulls off hood, pushes him forward.
Jin'l1I). 1 •~ His turn.
CLOSE ON JIMMY, starting out slowly, unsure. hesitant.
Working into it. Faster. Quicker. Forgetting the crowd.
Tbe words flow setting him free ...
Easily the best. The Future laughs. he knows.
While Jimny'6 rapping, we see the Boney~Dipped Girl from work
join the crowd. She's with a group of· hip young kids.
They all listen to Jimmy. He doesn•t see her.
Jimmy finishes.
DJ Iz steps up & smooths out some rhymes.
 26.

Jitmry spots two guys heading in his direction; a solid black

dude with a baseball cap pulled down tight over his face
named PAPA DOC; aka Papa, and his sidekick LC LYCKETY-SPLYT
aka LC & Lyckety-Splyt, a vecy skinny black clown. They• re
both part of RU486's rival crew, LEADAZOF THA FREE WORLD,
aka tha Free World. Aka the enemy.
Jiamy looks for someplace to run.
LC Lyckety-Splyt jumps onto the hood of a car near the middle
of the cipha--
LC LYCKETY-SPLYT
(hyping; screaming)
LISTEN UP NOW - LEADA2. OF THA PREE
WORLD IN THA MIJTH..."..___-.;CfCtl'
HOUSE an 1

shit! ME AN' PAPA DOC - WE'LL

BA.TTLEANY MlIT'Hl\.FUCKAS
HERE -
Papa Doc steps up on the car with Lyckety-Splyt.
They now have everybodyts full attention. Cipha over.
Jirrrny takes a step back into the crowd.
Bis friends all up in arms--
SOL
Yo, told y•all - Papa Doc an• LC
Lyckety-Splyt been talkin• shit -
FUTURE
Puck tha Free World, man -
CHEDDERBOB
{yellsout)
Yeah, Man. Fuck •Em.

LC Lyckety-Splyt looking for someone to challenge, 5till

working the crowd over, eyes Jimmy and his crew.
LC LYCKETY-SPLYT
Yo all you muthafuckas are weak an'
shit - Lookit RU486, boy -
(points to Sol I
Mista Kingpin~
(freestyles a few
rhymes about him;
points to the Future)
The Fu--
Before LC can even say his name Future points right back at
him & yells out--
FUTURE
Shut Up Bitch -
Papa Doc takes a step toward the FUture.
 27.

PAPA DOC·
(menacing)
What tha fuck you gonna do about it?

Jim:oy stands up for his friend.

JIMMY
Yeah? c•mon motherfucker -
LC LYCKETY-SPLYT
(points to Jinmy)
Yo Rabbit - B-R.abbit - You don•t
wanna battle me, white boy - You
should be afraid. Caught your act
at Shelter last night -
(opens his mouth k
nothing comes out -
& does it again,
then falls over on
the car, choking)
AAAAAAAAAAAAH-

Some people in the crowd laugh. Humiliating Jimmy.

And he just fucking loses it, all that anger.
Jimmy yanks LC Lyckety-Splyt off the car by his neck slamming
his head hard into the ground.
The violence real. Ugly. Loud. Fast.
Starts kicking him in the face--
Papa Doc dives off the hood, tackling ,Jirrmy to the ground-•-
Jimmy shoves him away, gets up ready to fight.
Future, Sol and DJ Iz nm up getting Jimmy's back--
Chedder Bob trying to act all tough and shit just stands over
Lyckety-Splyt.
And Wink jumps right into the middle of it all--
Pushing Papa Doc away from the fight, staying in the middle.
Breaking it up. It•s clear from the way Wink talks to Papa
Doc they know each other. They•re friends.
WINK
- Yo what tha fuck, Papa? Please.
LC's full a shit, yo - Actin' up
like that -
111.PA DOC
Stay outta this, Wink. Jtts none a
your fucking business -
WINK
Just chill. yo -
Papa goes over to help up Lyckety-Splyt.
Future drags Jimmy away from the fight.
 28.

JIMMY .
( insane with anger)
Fucking Motherfuckers! l'll fucking
kill those fucking pussies -
Sol, DJ Iz and Chedder Bob help to hold Jimny back. trying to
calm him down.

FUTIIRE
- Not here, Jim. Don 1 t worry. We1 ll
rush 'em later, youhearwhatimsayin•?
SOL
Fuck yeah.
OfEDDER BOB
- they don•t even know who they
talkin• to, do they?

22.
CLOSE ON JIMMY, bouncing up & down. Still wired, on edge.
It's later. He's inside stanley•s Cafe. Old-school Chinese.
Red. Crowded. Hip-hop nrusic. We hear Sol talkin' on & on
in the background.
SOL (OS)
- This gon be your only opportunity
to blow the both of us. •cause
after we go platinum, you won't even
he able to get to me an• the FUture,
baby -

Jimmy's standing next to Sol~ Future, both sitting on one

side of a booth, a real PRETTY GIRL squeezed in between them.
Chedder Bob alone on the other side. Chinese take-out's
open. Restaurant's closed. Red booths line the mirrored
walls, tables cleared out for a DJ and a dance floor.
CHEDDER BOB
(to Jimmy}
- do you think I got a big head?
JIMMY
'What?
PRETrY GIRL
{flirting with Future)
And why•re you the FUture?
FUTURE
I had a lotta names, baby - the most
jealous names.
(more)
 29.

FtmJRE [ cont • d)
I used to be called Maximum,
Brimstone, God.father D, Devastating
D, Everlasting D - None of 'em
worked, you.knowhatirnsayin'? 'Til
one day someone said I was the
future of hip-hop in Detroit_ And
that was it. You gotta find your
name. Sometimes it finds you an'
shit -
SOL
(to the Pretty Girl)
- Let's jus• go an• make this happen
so ya can hu ry un an• tell all your
friends!?!:!!: names. Say ya blew both
the Future and Mista Kingpin!

FUture laughs. And the girl cracks up too.

Wink walks up to the table.
All the guys look at him.
Beat.
WINK
- Yo yo I•m sorry fellas, ya know I
didn't know Papa an' LC were such
muthafuckas till tonight. And I
dunno what to say, I'm.a. - ahh -
{pulls out a flyer
from his jacket,
hands it to Jimmy)
And I'rn promotin• a show with them
next week ya know - and -

CHEDDER BOB
Tha fuckin• Free World?
FUTURE
(to Jimmy)
Hear what I'm sayin 1
?

Jimmy reads the flyer. Cbedder Bob looks at it over his

shoulder.
WINK
(straight to Jimmy)
- If ya wan• I'll pull outta tha
show. You're my friend. yo. And I
don't wantchya bein' ma.d at me -
Jimmy looks up and sees the girl, the Honey-Dipped Girl, the
girl (wearing a sexy little concert T-shirt} on the other
side of the crowded dance floor ...
He can't believe it. She disappears into the crush.
Jimmy balls up the flyer and throws it away.
 JO_

r Fuckit,
JIMMY
whatever -
(looks over to PUture)
A'ight?
cmmoER BOB
- yeah, whatever_ Fuckit_

FUTIJR.E
(to Wink)
That okay wit• you, Benedict Arnold?
WINK
Hey fuck you, man -
The Future laughs. Jimmy starts to walk away.
CHEDDERBOB
Where ya goin'. Rabbit?

JIMMY
(keeps walking,
looking out for the
girl)
You gotta see this girl. she's -

WINK
(follows after him)
Yeah?

FlmJR.E
Yo Jimmy, slide us your car keys -
JIMMY
{stops)
What for?
SOL
We gon be famous!

23.
Jimmy, Wink and Chedder Bob snake their way through the mess
of bodies packing the dance floor tight- All bumpin' &
grind.in•. Booming music. They have to shout to be heard--
WINK
- I Dunno Why Future Oon•t Like Me.
JIMMY
(looking for the girl)
It's Not Like That - Ya Know, He
Just Thinks Sometimes You Talk Some
Bullshit
 31.

WINIC
Who Tb.a Puck Is He To Say What 1 s
Real? Just •cause Be Hosts Those
Battles? I Know He•s Your Friend,
B - But The Guy's Still FUckin•
workin' At Little Caesars.
JIMMY
So?
WINK
You Still Wanna Record At Paisley
Park Or What?

JI~
Yeah. But I •m Gonna Need To Get
Some Songs Together First.
WINK
Cool_ Have Sol & DJ Iz Bring Their
Shit over To My House -

CHEODERBOB
Ito Jimmy)
- Will You Teach Me Howta Write
Rhymes Like You, Rabbit? That's A
Way To Get The Ladies - Right? I
Mean I Wanna Be An Emcee Like,--
{points into the
dance floor)
Shiiit, Is That Th~t Bitch Janeane?
JIMMY
Fuck Off -

WINK
Where?

Chedder Bob points again. Jimmy spots his e.,c-girlfriend

JANEANE GASKELL, a pretty 20something bombshell smoking &
drinking on the edge of the dance floor.
CHEDDER BOB
Thought She Was Pregnant, yo -

Jimmy turns around. Starts heading the other way.

JIMMY
- I Gotta Go.
WINK
What About Your Other Girl, Bunny?
Jimmy stops. Gives another quick look over the dance floor.
 32.

Sees the Honey-Dipped Girl dancing with ber friends right

near Janeane. Ee turns hack around, lowers his voice.
JIMMY
Fuck. There she is, man - that girl
in the concert T next to Janeane -
Whadd.aya think?

WINK
(checks her out; wow}
-
Yeah.
[leans in)
Don 1 t worry - Winkis gotchya.
JIMMY
What?
WINK
I 1 ma go invite her, her friends to
an after hours party, yo -
JIMMY
Where at?
WINK
My house, dawg.
JIMMY
- What about your mom?
WINK
Please_ She's workin' nights now_
aust meet me outside - I'll ta.lee
care a the whole thing for ya, B -

lf..
Later. Jimmy, DJ Iz and Chedder Bob standing in front of the
restaurant, off to the side. In the bitter cold.
The joint's closing, kids streaming out.
OJ IZ
Shit it•s =~ld. Where the fuck 1
s
Wink wit• your girl. yo?
Jimmy throws up his hood keeping his head low. Biding.
JIMMY
(to Chedder Bob}
- You seen Janeane yet?
CHEDDERBOB
Nope.
 33.

Hi.nit walks out with the Boney-Dipped Girl, three of her

girlfriends and a couple guys. They're all very young, arms
around each other. high on Ecstasy. Touching, in love.
WINK
Yo Jio:my is it okay if some of us
ride wit• you?
JIMMY
{hides a smile under
his hood}
Yeah.

25.
Jim:ny and his friends, the girl and one of her girlfriends,
all walk up to the big-ass '79 Lincoln. The windows all
steamed up.
DJ IZ
C'mon. Let's go, I'm cold -
Just then a naked foot slides against the foggy rear window
smudging a view_ A girl's ass flashes into frame, a head
bobbing up & do.m, hands grabbing.
A scream.
CHEDDERBOB
Are they killin• that bitch or what?
DJ Iz opens the back door. a pretty naked leg spills out.
DJ IZ
- She ain't dead yet.

DJ' lz jumps right in. More screams--

.SOL (OS)
What the fuck, yo? Can't you knock
first?
DJ IZ (OS)
It 1
s a car. n""'..:;Ja An 1
it'.s
muthafuckin' cold out -
While Sol & DJ Iz argue, everybody starts piling into the car.
Jiuuny and the Honey-Dipped girl suddenly find themselves
standing next to each other. Alone. Eyes meet.
Time for names. She' 5 ALEXANDRA lAT0URNO, Alex ' Al, and she
shivers just a little bit in the cold.
JIMMY
{slips off his hood)
- hey.
 34.

ALEX
(big eyes; fucked up)
You're Jinmy Smith Jr. - right?
JIMMY
(smiles; flattered
sh~ knows his name}
Yeah -
ALEX
You went to Osborne with my older
sister, Janice Latourno -
JIMMY
(no idea who sne is)
- yeah I think I rememb~c her.
ALEX
My name's Alex.
JIMMY
- yo you don't look like an Alex.
She smiles at him. Oh god, she smiled at him.
ALEX
( smiling at him)
It's Alexandra. But nobody ever
calls me.that ya know. Sounds like
an old actress or whatever -
Alex slides into the Lincoln. Before Jirm:ny gets in he hears
someone call out •Hey Rabbit!• from across the parking lot.
It 1 s Janeane.
He jumps into the car.
FlJTURE
(laughs, shouts out
from the back seat)
Quick. It's the baby mama drama!
And Jimmy peels out before Janeane gets close--

26.
Fast ca.r flying. Nine people packed inside tight. Future~
Sol with their girl on their laps playing around in the back
seat next to DJ Iz & Chedder Bob squeezed together. Up
front. Wink flirting with Alex•s girlfriend. Alex on her lap
sittingthisclosetoJimmy driving.
It's crazy# loud. 96.3 on the radio. Fighting, tickling,
laughing, singing. Everybody doing their own thing.
JillUlIYtrying to stay cool. So close. To her.
 35.

It's agony.
ALEX
(low under
the music)
- So you work at the hotel? That
Springer guy alwa.ys such a dick - or
ya know just with you?

Jimmy laughs, shrugs his shoulders.

ALEX
What are you, like a bellboy -
JIMMY
No, yo - bell man.

ALEX
(smiles)
- Whatever. I'm justa tea girl.
Not for long ya know -
There's a commotion in the back between Sol and DJ Iz
jockeying for position.
DJ IZ
- yo what kinda shit you pullin',
Sol?

PRETTY GIRL
Whets Sol?
Future grabs the girl and starts kissing her in the jam.
Sol pushes DJ Iz.
SOL
Shut up, Izzy -

Sol and DJ Iz fight in close quarters. Chedder Bob sees

Future and the girl gain' at it hands all over each other.
He starts barking. Chaos.
Everybody in front turns to see what's going on in the back.
Alex leaning even closer to Jimmy when she looks, heL face
brushes against his, her hand on his shoulder, steadying.
Oh.. . .
Jinmy swerves the car
She falls against him. on him. over him.
He straightens it back out trying to concentrate on the road.
She leans over, a short distance, almost kissing his face ..
ALEX
{laughs)
- Lucky you rap better than you
drive. Jimmy.
 36.

JIMMY
Huh?

ALEX
I beard you were a real dope rapper.
JIMMY
(giving her shit)
- •dope rapper?•
ALEX
(pushes him; joking)
Shit yeah -
JIMMY
(hides a smile)
- ya know.
ALEX
So are you like signed or anything,
whatever yet? Ya know what's your
deal?
SPLIT SO.D:R:

WINK JIMMY
Not yet, but he's recordin 1 Well - I dunno -
with me & Prince at Paisley
Park. He jus• needs to get ALEX
some songs together - - Really?
CUT SPLIT SCREEN;
JIMMY ALEX
- Yeah. It•s cool. (touches Jimmy's arm}
Prince?
cur SPLIT SCREEN:
FlTl'1JRE (OS) JIMMY
(calls out from {looks down at Alex
underneath the touching his arm)
Pretty Girl) Well I - um -
- Did I hear one a you
muthafuckas say Prince1

ClIT SPLIT SCREEN~

WINK FUTURE (OSt

Yo don•t be jealous, (laughs)
Future - I'm 3rd Person Jealous? You crazy.
now, man - nruthafucka? Fuck Prince -
ctn SPLIT SCREEN:
 37.

FtmJ'RB JIMMY
{squeezes the yo, man, whatever.
Pretty Girl out of
the way; to Alex) CJIEDDER BOB
- If you really wanna see {leans in, drunk)
Jirmry trip, baby, c•mon out Yeah he's gonna kill those
to the next battle Free World mutb-er-fuck-ers
CUT SPLIT SCREEN;

JIMMY ALEX
Yo shut-up, Bob - When's that?
CUT SPLIT SCREEN:

Fl1l1.1RE ALEX
- Next week.end. Yeah? Shit, Jimny - all
that and Prince too?
CUT SPLIT SCREEN:
JIMMY JIMMY
{looks like he {looks like he
wants to run; wants to run;
stuck) stuck}

END SPLIT SCREEN:

Jimmy looks like he wants to nm, but he's stuck between Wink
and Future's plans for him, going nowhere.
So he just hits the gas;· he can 1 t run but he can drive faster.
Kick it into H~GH SPEED. ~e hear another song, letting us
into Jimmy's head--

27.
RXGU SPEED. Speeding up k do"'7n the streets of Detroit,
driving into a neighborhood of small two-story brick houses,
parking in front of Hink•s mom's house, a bunch of other kids
parking heading inside smoking laughing drinking yelling
cranking music dancing partying inside, Sol making out with
Pretty Girl while Wink leads a little girl past OJ Iz who•s
all over some other girl in the corner near Chedder Bob
hanging out drunk alone watching a bunch of young girls
dancing in the living room in front of a big picture window,
including Alex who's moving slow & sexy playfully touching her
friends and herself kissing them laughing high on E.
CLOSE ON ALEX, moving slow & sexy playfully touching her
friends and herself kissing them laughing high on E-- Jump to
UGlJLll. SPEED.
 38.

Say it again. Alex tnoving slow & sexy, playfully touching

her friends and herself, kissing them,·1aughing high on E.
Jitrmy & Future hanging out drinking on the couch, watching
Alex dance. They talk over the music never taking tbeir eyes
off of her.
JIMMY
Yo Fuche - Why1 d you say that shit
in the car?
FUTURE
Damn - you weren't fuckin• around.
were ya, James - she is perfect.
yo - What•s her name?
JIMMY
- I told you I ain t gonna battle,
1

yo.
Sol walks by holding hands with the Pretty Girl. laughing.
JIMMY
She reall~ blow the both of ya?

FUTURE
Hell yeah - I'ma sinne~, James.
What's your girl's name?

JIMMY
- Alex.

FUTURE
You sho as hell gonna battle if Alex
is there. boy - you gon care what
she says, youknowhatlmsayin'?
JIMMY
- 1 dunno.

FUTURE
Youlrnowhatlmsayin• -
They sit and watch Alex dance sexy with her friends.
Course he knows what he's saying.
FUTURE
You know what I'm sayin 1 •
--(lights up a
cigarette)
We all weak in the flesh, yo -
That's the devil right there. ain't
it?
(more)
 39.

FlJTlJ'RE ·ccont ' d)

(laughs)
Just like Wi..nk. Tryin• to keep us
all in division an' shit wit' all
his Paisley-fuckin'-Prince talk.
You gotta come to church With me in
the morn.in• , yo -

JIMMY
(shakes his head no}
- You ever meet Win.k's morn?
FUTURE
Uh-uh- I don•t think she exists,
man. No one's .~ver seen • er - right?
They look at each other and crack up laughing. All of a
sudden they see Chedder Bob race across the room and jump
into the middle of all the young girls dancing spilling his
drink barking, jumping~ dancing like a freak_
Jimuy - Future bop up off the couch and join Chedder Bob and
the girls jumping & dancing & laughing. And then Sol & DJ Iz
join in. And Wink. And before ya know it the whole crew's
loving each other and dancing and Alex moves closer to Jimmy.
Moves in and starts kissing him hot & heavy so high needing
to touch him and tlien they' re all over each ot.her and- -
CUT TO;

28.
Morning. Jimmy getting out of the skinny trailer shower.
singing PRINCE•s •sexy M.F.• to himself. Grabs a towel.
Dancing silly and sexy, motherfucker_

Suddenly he hears his mother scream out •Not•

Hears the front door slam shut!

2,.
JilllJJIY runs out of the bathroom, towel wrapped around his
waist_ His mother's holding onto a piece of paper. Freaking
out. Lily's on the couch. The TV on.
JIMMY
'What 1 s the matter?
STEPHANIE
- I just got served, goddamnit.
We're gettin• evicted. Why me?
{more)
 40.

STEPHANIE (cont'd)
Cleans against the
wall; trying not to
cry)
Shit -
JIMMY
(uncomfortable)
c•mon, not in front a ya know -
Be motions to Lily, leads his mom toward her bedroom.
JIMMY
- Bow many months late•re you?
STEPHANIE
- ob God Greg can't find out.
JIMMY
Fuck Greg -

They walk into her bedroom. It's a mess. He slides the

flimsy vinyl door shut.
STEPHANIE
Shit - Okay,-- Three months late -
{losing it)
So we got - what - thirty days to
come up with the money, right -
JIMMY
Whaddaya mean •we?•
STEPHANIE
{ snaps)
- Hey you need to start chippin' in,
Rabbit, if you're livin• here.
JIMMY
Fuck that, yo l'm savin' money to
get the fuck outta here, Mom.
When•s Greg gettin' his settlement
check? Get the money from him -
STEPHANIE
No I think he might ask me an• Lily
to move away with him someplace
nice, and I just don•t wanna freak
him out, baby, and--
JIMMY
Yo I don't need this. I got a lotta
shit goin• on right now. I'm goin•
to Paisley Park. Maybe even
record.in• with Prince an• shit.
 41.

Beat.
STEPHANIE
(starts to S'tll.ile)
- Really? Prince?
JIMMY
Yeah. Maybe.
STEPHANIE
[still smiling; gives
him a big hug)
I knew you were a genius. We gonna
be rich, Rabbit!

30 ..
Jill'D.nY the bellman, unloading luggage from a cart into a
suite. A hip guest in his early 30s named MR. LEONARDis
across the room talking on the phone like Jimmy iso•t even
there.
MR. LEONARD (into the phone)
- I didn't sleep with her. I 1 m in
love with you ... of course I think
you're beautiful ... Hold on -
(puts his hand over
the phone; to Jinuny)
Hey busboy -

Jimmy stops, did the guy just call him •busboy?•

Jimmy holds his tongue, continues unloading the luggage cart_
Mr. Leanard snaps his fingers, motions him over.--
MR. LEONARD
Busboy -
JIMMY
Excuse me - my na~e is Jimmy, Mr.
Leonard. .A.nd I 1 m a bellman, not a
busboy -
M&.. LEONARD
(doesn't give a -shit)
Sorry - can you get me a pack a
M.arlboros, man?
JIMMY
Sure. Mr. Leonard -
MR. LEONARD {into the phone)
- sorry. sweetie, I just gotta find
some money for the busboy ... You sure
you're okay?
 42.

Mr. Leonard turns bis back on Jiumy, looking around the

nightstand for cigarette money.
Jinmy closes his eyes; we hear an angry song thump on the
soundtrack. Be opens up ...
'f'he :room is .IJllXl.".l!'ED. SUperJh=:y f.lies at D.. LEOJtU.D. G'I:'abs
the phone out of his hand. Starts strangling hi.a to death
with the chord, rapping out a.bout ca1ling hi.a a btts:boy.

Jlr .. Leona.rd turns cartoon bl.ue. And dies .. SUperJim:ary just

picks hia up a throwz hi. out the window# still spitting.
Jb:'. Leona.rd c.rashes down to the ground.

Ana SUperJi.mm,y f1iea np up & atiray into the sky.

31.
BAO: TO :R.llLITY (fillll}. Jimmy, wheeling the cart back to the
front lobby. Pissed off. Runs into EARL, a quiet old
bellman in his 60s, tired. Classical music in the background,
EARL
What's the m.atter?
JIMMY
Some fuckin 1
guest just called me a
busboy

EARL
- Huh?
JIMMY
{raises his voice)
Some Sonuvabitch Called Me A Busboy.
A Busboy. Earl. And now I 1 m 9ettin 1
•im cigarettes -
(laughs, leans in
closer)
Le1m1eask you, man, how you put up
with all this shit for like 30 years?
Just then, Mr. Springer walks by. Slows down.
Checking up on Jinrny and Earl.
MR. SPRINGER
(already knows the
answer)
On time today, Mr. Smith?
JIMMY
Yessir ..
Mr. Springer smiles, continues on his way.
 43.

And Jin:IUY flips him off behind his back.

EARL
(t:aJces the cart from
Jinny)
- sometimes it helps to be hard a
hearing, Jim.
JIMMY
Yeah -
EARL
(smiles)
Or ya could just rip out their vocal
cbord.s.
What? Earl walks off with the cart.
Jimny watches him for a moment.
Shakes his head, gets moving.
He passes by the lobby lounge and sees Alex shadowing an
older woman, getting trained. Serving tea to wealthy old
ladies. mothers & daughters. It's formal afternoon tea, and
Alex is a •tea girl• dressed in a short black skirt, black
hose, black shoes, and white blouse. Sexy in that French
maid way.
Alex looks up and sees Jimmy.
She smiles and discreetly gives him the finger. Flirting.
He laughs.

32.
Jimmy, heading into the hotel 1 s gift shop.
He hears someone call out •Rabbit!•
Shit. It's Janeane.
Jimmy looks around. No place to run. No place to hide.
Janeane finally catches up to him.
JANEANE
Why haven't you called?
JIMMY
Yo Janeane - shit, I can•t talk
now - I'm we :;;:ing -
(to the salesperson)
Can I get a pack a Marlboros?
J.ANEANE
- I don't care. I'm your
girlfriend, Rabbit.
 44.

JIMMY
{looks around; lowers
his voice)
Keep your voice down. Shit. I ~ork
here, yo.
Jimmy pays for the cigarettes and heads out of the store.
Janeane follows after him.
JIMMY
- An' you•re not my girlfriend
anymore. We broke up.

JANEANE
But you took off this titne without
even sayini a word. We weren't even
tighting -
JIMMY
At least I left you the car an' shit.
JANEA.NE
Was it •cause I said I was pregnant?
Jimmy heads down the hallway back toward the front lobby.
JIMMY
(getting pissed)
I can't talk now, Janeane - You
gotta get the fuck outta here -
JANEANE
I just wanna be your girlfriend,
Rabbit -

JIMMY
- you're gonna get me fired.
JANEA.NE
(stops; starts to
lose it)
- Just tell me why you left,--
Whattd I do, What 1 d I do - tell me,
an 1 I'll leave you alone, Rabbit -
Jimmy pulls Janeane a: ·je, fast. Trying to calm her dawn.
He looks over to the lounge to see if anybody 1 s watching
them. Alex is working. No one notices him & Janeane.
JIMMY
(keeping an eye on
Alex; talks fast)
- you ·didn 1 t do anything, Janeane.
It 1 s my shit.
(more)
 JIMMY (cont 1
d)
I just bad to get out,-- l felt all
trapped an• shit - yak.Dow the
dishes were pilin' up, you were
always outta cigarettes, an' the TV
was always goin' - and, and, and I
knew you weren't pregnant. you jus•
told me that shit to get me to stay,
but -
J.ANEANE
{pushes him away)
Fuck You, you ain't willin' to do
the work, R?bbit - what•re you
runnin• fron.i?
JIMMY
- Nothin 1
•

And Jirnray just walks away. The classical music playing in

the background. Janeane keeps up the fight, eyes red--
JANF..ANE
{calls after him)
Why do you always gotta I1lll away?
He doesn't answer, keeps walking.

JANEANE
RABBIIIIT!
Everyone in the place looks over at Janeane. Jimmy turns red.
He hurries back, putting his arm around Janeane and quickly
leads her out toward the front door, desperately trying to
avoid any further embarrassment.

JIMMY
Janeane, you gotta go -

JANEANE
I'm your girlfriend, Rabbit - you
canct do this to me -
Everybody 1
s now watching them.
Jinmy hustles her outside, out into the cold.
Storm clouds loom overhead. It's gonna rain, maybe snow.

JIMMY
C'mon, baby, go home -
JANEANE
- Ya know everybody 1
s callin' you a
loser from the other night.
 46.

JIMMY
Who told ya that?
JANKANE
(she grabs his a.rm;
holding
on)
I heard ya got booed off stage at
the Shelter. Froze up. They're all
talkin' about it -
JIMMY
{yanks his arm away;
hard)
Fuck you, Ja.oeane. Go home.

Jitmty heads straight back inside.

Alex is waiting for him by the door, standing next to Paul,
the other bellman.
ALEX
Is everything, ya know, okay?
JIMMY
(keeps walking; head
down)
Yeah -
{quiet so Paul can•t
hear)
- Did everybody hear that shit or
what?

Alex looks at him.

ALEX
{hides a stn.ile)
Yeah.
Jimmy just shakes his head, walks to the elevators.
Alex follows after him.
ALEX
Was that your girlfriend?
JIMMY
No -
Alex just laughs.
ALEX
-.Hey. can you gimne a ride home or
whatever after work?
 47.

33.
After work. Pouring rain. Dark, it's getting darker.
Jimny's car is parked in an empty lot near the hotel.
Be and Alex are in.side the Lincoln. Out of uniform.
..Jinmy can't get the car started. Click. Click .
Dead.

He looks over at Alex. He's still fucked up from his fight

with Janeane. The windows fogging up. It's the first time
they're all alone. Silence. Tension. Are they gonna kiss?

Alex lights up a cigarette, inhales deeply.

Jimmy tries again. Click. Nothing.
Exhales.

JI1"1MY
- l think there's an umbrella in the
trunk, yo.
And we hear a more upbeat jazzy version of our opening title
song ...

lf..
Jimmy & Alex walking in the rain, sharing an umbrella.
Heading for a crowded bus stop. Bright headlights
intermittently cut the darkness.
Jimmy's lost in his own world.
we still hear the song.

A car drives by and splashes a puddle all ovez: Jinmy.

JIMMY
Fuck -
(looks down at his
wet clothes)
Fuck fuck fuck fuck -
Alex cracks up_ Jinmy throws a fit.
Which make Alex laugh even harder.
We hear the song.
He looks at her laughing, pulls away the umbrella and jurrrn~
into a puddle, splashing Alex.
She's soaked. Kicks water right back at him.
We hear the song_
They make their way down the street jumping and kicking water
back & forth at each other ...
And Jimmy starts singin' in the rain, just singin' in the
rain_ Showing off for Alex. Trying to impress her.
Singing along to the song_
Splashing in puddles. Playing with the umbrella.
 48.

Singin• and dancin• in the rain. just a.u.p1ing some old

fucking movie.
~inmy finishes the song just as the bus pulls up.
They run to make it, drenched and laughing.

35.
~immy and Alex on the crowded bus. Standing up, packed tight.
Dripping wet. And cold.
1\LEX
( leans into
him)
- I hate the bus, ya know, it's such
a drag. Makes me look like a loser.
But I 1 m saving up my money so -
S~inging back & forth, Alex grabs onto Jinmy for support.
She shivers a bit. Turning him on. He shoves his hands into
his pockets, covering. Excited riding the bus.
JIMMY
- How was work?
ALEX
Yak.no~. Serving tea to rich ladies
and their daughters all dressed up,
thinking they're better than me -
Jimmy smiles. He knows.
ALEX
- And I know that look, •cause I
used to have this •I'm better than
you attitude• that made me like a
real bitch. But I'm not gonna be
doing this that long ya know. I can
hardly wait to get outta this
shithole before l kill some.body -
JIMMY
(laughs)
- you know where ya goin'?
ALEX
New York or Germany - I won this
modeling contest and this guy was
all, •Hey would ya like to come to
New York?• And I was all like sure
why not - I just gotta put my book
together.
 49.

JIMMY
What if the guy's full a shit, yo?
Then what?
AI.RX
- Bey rrm not an idiot. Be's with
Elite. And I just know I wanna get
famous. If I don•t make it as a
model, I'll just become an actress
or whatever -
(laughs)
- It's gotta be exciting for you -
recording with Prince and everything.
JIMMY
I dunno about Prince. But Paisley
Park sounds cool.
ALEX
When•re you goint? I wanna come -
JIMMY
I dunno, yo. Soon.
(leans in closer)
- You wanna do son1ethin• tomorrow
night?
ALEX
[raises her voice;
fucking with him)
You asking me out on a date, Jimmy?

People look over at them. Listen in. Eye Jimmy.

JIMMY
( looks around)
Yeah -
Beat.

ALEX
Okay.

He smiles.
ALEX
- But! can't tomorrow night.
JIMMY
Why not?
ALEX
Wink invited me to his show.
 50.

JIMMY
Tha Free World show?
ALEX
(nods her bead yes)
- Ya know I saw you fight those guys
in the parking lot the other night
at Stanleyts Cafe_
JIMMY
( surprised)
- You were there?
ALEX
Yeah. Me and all-· f~iends - They
think you're crazy.
JIMMY
(snaps)
They don't even fuckin' know me -
Alex just looks at him.
An awkward beat.

JIMMY
(trying to stay cool}
- and you heard all that shit
Lyckety-Splyt said?
ALEX
Yeah.
The bus pulls over for a stop, the doors open.
Jimmy wants to go.
JIMMY
- This's my stop, yo.

ALEX
(looks out the window)
Nice neighborhood.
Jimmy heads out the door. In a hurry.
Hurting Alex 1 s feelings.
JIMMY
Thanks. 1 1 11 see ya later, yo.

Jinmy gets off the bus in the rain, stays on the sidewalk.
Waits for it to drive away.
And then screams out . Angry. Loud .

Beat.
 51.

36.
Later. Chedder Bob driving Jinny and Future in some old
beater. He's a terrible driver. The rain has let up.
The world is grey, blue.
JIMMY
(hard; on edge)
- head down to the Shelter. Bob.

OIEDDER BOB
I thought we were goin' to Winkrs.
mom• s house.

JIMMY
I wanna jump those Free World
motherfuckers first - It's time they
got theirs.
CHEDDER BOB
(looks at Jimmy)
But Sol & DJ Iz're already settin'
up all their shit at Winkls.
FlJTURE
Hhat?

Chedder Bob almost rear-ends the car in front of them.

JIMMY
Watch the road, fool! Where 1
d ya
get this car from anyway?
CHEDDERBOB
Stole it from my sister.
FUTURE
{shakes his head at
Jimmy)
Yo I can't believe you're takin'
this Wink bullshit serious, Jim.
JIMMY
Back off, yo -
OlEDDER BOB
(to • ...i.ture}
Maybe you jus' jealous - like Wink
keeps sayin' .
FUTURE
Yo I don't give a fuck what any man
says. I only need God. I went back
to church the other day -
{to Jimmy; pointed)
Youhearwhatlmsayin'?
 52.

3?.
The car•s parked across the street down from the Shelter.
The guys are sitting low, staking out the joint.
Jiumy and FUture not talking. Still tense.
CBXDDER BOB
(to Future)
Ya know Rabbit's gonna teach me
howta write rbymes, yo -
Beat.

You?

CHEDDERBOB
MC Bob.
JIMMY
What?
CHEDDER BOB
That a good name, homes?
JIMMY
What's the matter with Chedder Bob?
CHEDDERBOB
I dunno. I like MC Bob -
FtmJR.E
(laughs)
How about Big Fat Head Bob?
They see a white van pull up in front of the Shelter and park.
Papa Doc, LC Lyckety-Splyt and the rest of THA FREE WORLD
(t~o black guys and a white guy named E) pile out.
JIMMY
A.bout time.
FlITURE
Yeah, dawg.
JIMMY
(to -~·.edder Bob}
You ready?
CREDOER BOB
(nods; serious)
Yeah.
(pats his belt)
I'm ready.

They all slide out of the car.

 53.

38.
Jinmy and FUtu.re walk up to the club- Cb.edder Bob a step
back. Tha Pree World's unloading equipment for their show.
Stacking speakers and mixers and turntables.
They all stop when they see Jinmy and FUture.
Jinny just walks right up to Papa Doc. Shoves him--
JIMMY
c•mon motherfucker. Lets go.
PAPA DOC
[laughs)
You're gonn~ fuck wit' us?

LC Lyckety-Splyt jumps in, talking trash.

LC LYCKETY-SPLYT
Yeah, boy - you don• t wanna fuck
wit' us! You can't even battle us -
JIMMY
Get the fuck outta here -
He shoves Lyckety-Splyt, wheels and punches Papa Doc in the
face. It's on. Future grabs E--
The other guys close in.
All h€ll 1
s about to break loose and--
Bang! A gunshot !

JIMMY
- What the fuck?

Everybody freezes. Turns around.

Chedder Bob is standing there, holding a .38 up in the air.
Everybody checks.
Nobody was shot.

CHEDDER BOB
(waving the gun in
the air; hysterical)
Yeah fuck with us - huh? You wanna
fuck with us? Yeah?

Tha Free World just stands there_

Jimmy and Future stare at Chedder Bob.
Beat.
They hear police sirens in the distance.
CREDDER BOB
You don't wanna fuck with us!
{to Jinmty; panicked)
We-should-go-now -
 54.

Cheda.er Bob backs away, keeping the gun on tha Free world.
JiillllY just shakes bis head. Be and Future follow after
Chedder Bob. The sirens getting closer.
They make a run for the car.

39.
Speeding in Chedder Bob's sister's car. Be's still holding
onto the gun. Jimmy in the front seat. Future in the back.
Pumped up. And freaking out-

JIMMY
(yelling at Chedder
Bob)
Where the fuck ya get that, man?
CHEDDER BOB
- it's my dad's.

FlmlRE
You know bow to use it?
CHEDDERBOB
Just point an' shoot, homey.
He points the gun into the back seat.
FlmJRE
{leans out of the way)
- Yeah, well, don't be pointin' it
at me, •homey. •
JIMMY
(slaps Chedder Bob on
the head)
Put that shit away, fool - Before
you fuckin' shoot one of us!

Suddenly the white van appears behind them.

CHEDDERBOB
Oh shit!

-10 ~
The old car ~hips around a turn. Chedder Bob weaving in and
out of traffic. Driving like a maniac. The white van still
on their tail.
CHEDDERBOB
{panicking)
FU.ck fuck fuck -
 55.

JIMMY
Wbat 1 d ya think was gonna happen?
You pulled a gun on 1 em -
CBEDDER BOB
(looks at Jinny)
I dunno -

FtmJRE
Watch the fucking road, Head!
Chedder Bob takes another turn fast_ Almost hits a car.
Speeds up.

The van still there. G~lning.

Gaining.

CHEDDERBOB
(handsJimmy the .38)
Here. Shoot at 'em.
JIMMY
l ain't gonna shoot at anybody, you
idiot! Just fucking drive -
Chedder Bob floors it. A light up ahead changes from yellow
to red.
Chedder Bob doesn't slow.
Runs the red light--
Zigzags fast between two cars!
The van follows--
A horn beeps !
The van brakes! Skids just missing an oncoming car--
And sideswipes a parked car! Crashing to a stop.

The guys look back. See tha Free World jump out of their
car. Up in arms.

JIMMY
Turn the car around, Chedder Bob -
turn the fuck around.
CHEDDERBOB
Why?
JIMMY
Just do it -
Chedder Bob whips a U-turn. speeds back toward tha Free World.
Jimmy grabs the wheel from him, heads straight for Papa Doc.
Chedder Bob freaks.
Papa Doc doesn•t move.
Jimmy just keeps his hand on the wheel. Playing chicken.
Gonna rnn him right over--
 56.

And Papa Doc jumps out of the way just in time!

Jinmy spins the car around, takes his hand off the wheel and
leans out the window--
JIMMY
Yo -
He smiles. And gives them all the finger.

4.1.
Jinrny, .Future and Chedder Bob walk up to Wink's mother's
h~use. Laughing. All hopped up.
JIMMY
We fuckin• showed those guys -
FUTURE
- That shit was crazy.
CHEDDER BOB
(beside himself)
Yeah, I can hardly wait to tell
everybody!
Jimmy stops.
JIMMY
Fuck. Don't say shit to Wink. Bob.
FUTURE
Why not?
Jimmy checks inside the big picture window.
Doesn't see anybody.
JIKNY
You know -

FUTURE
Yeah, you don I t wanna fuck up your
chances with 'im - is that it?
JIMMY
Fuck you, Fuche -

FUTURE
(shakes his head}
I can't believe you give a shit
what ~hat little bitch is gonna
think, Jimmy.
 57.

(2.
Inside Wiuk 1 s mom's house. Jiu:my, Future and Chedder Bob
make their way down some dark stairs, descending into the
fluorescent lit basement. Panelled walls, couch, card table,
shitty TV.

Sol ao.d DJ IZ are setting up equipment. A crate of records,

a mixer, two turntables & a microphone. Wink' s got his arm
around some pretty YOUNGGrRL, carrying on.
WINK
- Yo where the fuck you guys been?
Beat.
JIMMY
(looks at Future)
Around.
Future sits do'WDon the couch, smokes a cigarette. Pissed
off.

DJ IZ
(hooking up the mixer)
We're almost all hooked up here.
SOL
Yeah. An' Wink was jus• tellin' us
how he got in wit' Prince.
CHEDDER BOB
Isn't he just called the Artist now-?

WINK
Naw he 1 s Prince again, dawg - And
he's friends wit Lee Darucher.
DJ IZ
lsn't that Moochie'.t
SOL
Moochie is Lee Darucher?
WINK
No. Lee Darucher's a concert
promoter. man. Re 1 s tight with
those guys down at 96.3 - And yo he
says they're gonna play some 3rd
Person this Friday. Said they
flipped over my songs an' shit.
Everybody stops.
Beat.
 58.

JIMMY
{impressed)
Shiiit_ They're gonna play it on
the radio?

FUTURE
So? Doesn't even raise my fuckin'
eyebrow.
WINK
(to FUture)
C'mon, man it's 96.3 -

FUTURE
Prince is a faggc,!'"
YOUNGGIRL
- Prince isn't gay. Michael Jackson
is gay.

SOL
Michael Jackson is not gay. Maybe
Tito -
JIMMY
Tito?
SOL
Hell, yeah. But not Michael - No.
You see, Michael just never had a
childhood or nothin•. yo

DJ IZ
{going through his
stack of records)
- no no, Michael has some serious
self-image issues. man.
(pulls out MICHAEL
JACKSON I s •Thriller•)
He used to be black. Now he's just
tryin 1
to make himself white to
please White America. Get that
~hite love an• shit - no doubt no
doubt.

SOL
What the fuck 1 re you talkin' about?
FUTURE
- It's always easier for a white man
to succeed in a Black man's medium -
(looks straight at
Wink; fucking with
him)
Youknowhatimsayint?
 S9.

wnnt
(to Future)
Why do you always gotta give me
shit? Just 'cause you host those
battles? Like that•s some big
fucking deal -
Future jumps up off the couch. gets right in Wink•s face.
Right betweea all the equipment (turntables & micropbone)--

DJ IZ
- Be careful, yo. That shit cost us
a fortune.
SOL
Why else you think we still livin'
at home, dawg?
FUTURE
(laughs
at Wink}
- If you're so good why don't you
spit for us right now, 3rd Person?
WINK
What?

Future grabs the mic and hands it to Wink.

FUTURE
You couldn't freestyle if your life
depended on it, bitch - c•mon. Rap
somethin 1 for us. You•re gonna be
on the radio -

Future flips on the turntables. Puts on Michael Jackson_

•wanna Be Startin• Somethin' __

WINK
(puts down the mic)
You're psycho, man -
FUTURE
Am I? Just •cause you recorded at
Paisley Park don 1 t mean you any
good. Anybody can record at Paisley
Park if you j~t the money, right?

Jimmy steps in between the two. Michael Jackson singing in

the backgroWld.
JIMMY
Leave 'im alone, FUche. This is
bullshit.
(more)
 60.

JIMMY ( cont 'd)

I'm fuckin' sick a you two always
talkin' shit about each other - Just
tryin• to pump your 2!!!E:selves up.
Ya know?
(walks away)
I'm outta here -

43.
lt's late. But Jiuay's still going home the back way.
Through the field.
over the fence.

,,.
Inside the trailer, Jimmy walks past the kitchen.
Stephanie 1 s at the table all alone watching TV.
JIMMY
Hey. didya win at bingo tonight?
STEPHANIE
- no. Did you hear frorn Prince yet?

JIMMY
No. Fuck -
{shakes his head)
You guys never win.
STEPHANIE
{whispers)
Shhh - Greg•s sleepin 1
• I know you
don• t like him an I
he don I t like you
but -
Stephanie sits there. Beat.
JIMMY
(whispers}
You alright?
STEPHANIE
(wh" -iJers}
I'm havin• a, a - ahh - a problem
with Greg -
JIMMY
{whispers)
What. Did he find out about the
eviction?
Stephanie shakes her head no.
 6L

JIMMY
(whispers)
Bis settlement cbeckls not comin 1
?

STEPHANIE
{belligerent}
No. ~- It's coming. It's me and
Greg's sex life. It's good, I mean,
ya know, real good. but the--
JIMMY
Yo I don 1 t wanna hear this shit -
'!TEPHANIB
(just ke~ps talking)
But see the problem is Greg doesn•t
like to go--
JIMMY
(cutting her off)
Mom Mom Mom Mom Mom Mom I don't
wanna hear it yo -
Jimmy heads for the bathroom. Getting ready for bed.
He peels off his shirt.

Stephanie follows after him.

STEPHANIE
Hey you've got a nice body, Rabbit -
JIMMY
(stops)
What?

STEPHANIE
Greg won't go down on me.
JIMMY
Mom!
STEPHANIE
(whispers)
He won 1 t go down on me. I mean I
keep askin' him an• like I have no
problem gain' down on--

Jimmy puts his hands over his ears. running into the
bathroom••-

JIHMY
Mom, stop, I"m not hearin' this -
He closes the door in her face.
 62.

4.5.
Early tnorn.ing, behind the hotel. Jinmy's getting out of
Sol's mother's shitty car. Sol drove him to work. Garbage
bags line the filthy alley. sun rising. Barsh reality.
ainmy pauses for a moment before he closes the door.
JIMMY
- Bey Sol, ya ever wonder at what
point ya just say •fuckit.• When ya
know ya gotta stop livin• up here -
(gestures over his
head, then drops his
hand down low)
And start livin 1
down here.
Beat.

SOL
{looks at him half-
asleep)
- It's fuckin 1 6:30 in the morning,
dawg.

JIMMY
(laughs)
Thanks for the ride, yo - and thank
your mom for lendin' you the car.
1 1 11 see ya after work.

4.6.
Hours later. Jimmy the bellman. finishes loading luggage
into a brand spanking new Porsche parked in front of the
hotel. Everything•s SILENT. Except we hear Jimmy rapping a
song to himself. Quiet. Simple. Poetry.
Ee closes the trunk and quickly looks around, n~ver stopping
his music. Everything else still SILEH".r.
Jimmy slips into the sports car. Checking out the interior.
suddenly the passenger side door s""'ings open, SOUND cras:,.ing
back--

And Alex jumps in, holding onto her •French maid• uniform.
Jimmy can't believe his eyes. He looks again
She's still there.
ALEX
C'mon, let 1
s get outta here -
JIMMY
Where to?
 63.

ALEX
(laughs)
!,n~here in this car -

She leans over to give him a kiss, all turned on. Looks up.
And stops.

Uh-oh -

Jimny follows her eyes ...

A chubby guest, MR. KOSKO. is standing there watching lhem
about to kiss in his new Porsche. Alex just laughs, gets out
of the car and heads for the hotel leaving Jirriny behind.
Jirrmy quickly jumps 01...t--

JIMMY
I can explain, Mr. Kosko - I-
.MR. KOSKO
{dismissive)
Don't. You're just a terrible
bellman -
A frantic woman, Mr. Kosko's wife, hurries up to the car.
JIMMY
(trying to stay cool)
- Your wife's luggage is aJl loaded
up, sir. will there be anything
else?

Mr. Kosko's cell phone rings.

MR. ROSKO
There's a blue suit in my room I
need dry cleaned. Do you think you
can handle that?
JIMMY
(forces a smile)
~ Yessir. Room 722, right?

4.7.
Jinny, running back into the hotel. Looks for Alex. Cheddcr
Bob and Paul are in the middle of an argument--
PAUL
Call me a faggot again and I 1 ll beat
your ass -
 64.

CHEDDER.BOB
But you're~ -
PAUL
(hard)
So?

Chedder Bob backs down.

JIMMY
(laughs)
Yo Chedder Bob, didya see Alex come
in -
CH.EDD.ER BOB
MC Bob.

JIMMY
W'hatever. Didya see her?
Cbedder Bob points down the hall.

4.8.
Jimmy rnns down the hallway. Catches up to Alex.
She's walking backwards, still holding onto her uniform.
A crooked smile pasted on her face.
ALEX
Hey. Why'd ya take off like that
yesterday?

JIMMY
- It was jus' my stop, yo. And then
I hadda show those Free World
motherfuckers what was up -
.1\LEX
( impressed)
You did?

JIMMY
Yeah I d.1.a.

She turns back around. They head down the hall together.
ALEX
- Ya know we shoulda just stolen
that fucker•s Porsche.
JIMMY
{laughs)
You ever steal a car before?
 65.

ALKX
No. But I figure ypu have, right?
And then we coulda just taken off
for good. whatever -
She turns down another hallway, toward the hotel's giant
kitchen+ Waiters & waitresses busy coodng & going.
JIMMY
Where ya goin' , yo?
ALEX
Pickin 1
up a little somethin 1
for
tonight, •yo• -

4:9.
In the kitchen. Busy & bright. Alex walks up to a thin
white prep cook, pulls him aside to the corner and whispers
into his ear. Jirrrrrcy talks to the other prep cook, CLIO, a
cool black chick. A cheap boom box whines in the background.
JIMMY
- Cljo, can you make me a hamburger?

CLIO
Sure thing. Rabbit
Alex makes her way over, slipping some pills (E} into her
front pock.et.
ALEX
- Hey why do some people call you
Rabbit?

JIMMY
That's jus' ODE a my names -

CLIO
(laughs)
'Cause he•s fast - and likes to fuck
a lot.

ALEX
Yeah?
JIMMY
- Yeah.

Alex smiles.
CLIO
Tell ya what, Rabbit - I'll battle
ya for the hamburger -
 66.

Some of the other kitchen help overhear. Get excited.

Jim:ny noticeB. Unsure.
JIMMY
Oh I dunno -
ALEX
(pushes him)
C'mon, •Rabbit•
Jimmy looks at her. Be cares what she says.

JIMMY
A'ight, a 1 ight -
Some of the other cooks and disuwashers pipe in.
A couple of •em start banging on the counters getting
a beat together.
Gathering aroWld Jitmty and Clio.
And Clio goes first. battling Jimmy.
Freestylins about--
1. Jimmy being a bellman.
2. Always late.
3. And white.

She's pretty good. Finishes. Now it's Jin:rny's turn.

Alex watching.
He looks at her.
Opens his mouth to spit a.ud
he goes off, freestyling like mad.
He 1 s fast and clear.
Words flowing# focused, kicking Clio's ass.
Showing off in front of Alex.
He finishes. The kitchen goes crazy. He looks over to Alex.
And she's hot. In love.

By no~. more waiters & waitresses are hanging around getting

into it, clapping, dancing. Someone turns up the boom box,
more music. Can anyone say •Hot Lunch• shit, we're
sa:m.ri1i.Dg •FAME.•

A teenage PUERTO-RICAN DISHWASHERjumps in to battle Jirmrr

Everybody clapping and moving, whooping and hollering.
Music everywhere.
Jinmy battles the dishwasher.
Back & forth.
The rhymes flow.
lt•s all good.
 67.

so.
Jinmy ~ A1ex leave the kitchen. She•s exhilarated.
Be's wolfing down his hamburger.
ALEX
That was,-- Ya know, that was
amazing -
Jinmy smiles as they head down the hall, a bounce in his step.
ALEX
- You're definitely gonna make it.
Not like all those losers back there.
JIMMY
They're not really losers, yo -
ALEX
They•re not recording with Prince -
JIMMY
(between bites)
I should probably get back to work
an~ shit -
ALEX
No I think me, you should--
Alex sees the older woman we saw training her the other day,
the tea director, her boss, heading their way.
ALEX
Shit. There's my boss. I 1 m late -
c•mon -
She grabs Jimmy's free hand. turns around and takes oft
running in the opposite direction--
Running together, Jimmy still with a mouthful of hamburger,
running down the hall.
They turn down another hallway. hauling ass and see--
Mr. Springer getting off an elevator.
They screech to a stop.
Searching for an es• · z,e :route, nowhere left to run.
or hide. Caught between two authority figures.
Mr. Springer sees them, waves and heads in the1r direction.
Alex checks around for her boss. Jimmy stuck with a mouthful
of food. Chews hard, fast to swallow.
Mr. Springer getting closer.
Jimmy doesn't know what to do with the hamburger in his hand.
Puts it behind his back.
 68.

Mr. Springer walks up. And. Jitrll'IY stuffs the sandwich into
his back pocket .
MR. SPRINGER
Mr. Smith. Miss Latourno -
ALEX
Bey, Mr. Springer -
Jinny smiles, swallowing the last of his food.
MR. SPRINGER
(to Jinmy)
I just wanted to say, Mr. Smith,
you 1 ve been doing a much better
job -

JIMMY
- thanks. So how 'bout those extra
shifts?

Alex catches a glimpse of her boss turning the corner ..

ALEX
(so innocent)
Excuse me, Mr. Springer - But l
gotta go change for work. I don•t
ya know wanna be late -
MR. SPRINGER
And where are you going. Mr. Smith?
JIMMY
I 1 m running an errand for a guest,
sir.
MR. SPRINGER
(looks at both of
them)
Okay. Well, get to work -
They walk slowly away from Mr. Springer, Jimmy keeping his
han~s behind his ass covering the hamburger in his pocket
They round the next corner, then take off running again--
Down the hall. Take~ turn.
Up to another bank or elevators.
They jump into an open elevator. just as the doors close.

51.
In the elevator, Jimmy~ Alex catching their breath.
It's empty.
 69.

They look at each othe~ and· start laughing.

Their eyes meet.
Still out of breath.
JIMMY
(crooked smile}
- what do you think we should do now?
ALEX
What do you think we should do?
He leans in closer. Both of them having a hard time catching
their breath. Excited, turned on.
JI.MM"!
You know -
ALEX
- yeah. Yeah. Yeah, yeah I think
you should fuck me.
He slides his hands down her pants. She moans.
They kiss, still out of breath, pulling at each other's
clothes--

52.
Jimmy, opening the door to room 722. He pulls her inside and
they fall in on and all over each other. Breathing heavy.
He pushes her up against the door. Pulls up her shirt.
Her face hot and red.
ALEX
(whispering)
I want it all
JIMMY
- yeah
ALEX
Everything

She pulls down her pants. No unde.rwear:.

ALEX
(slowly)
I wantchya to do everything to me
Jimmy. Take me everywhere. Promise

She kisses him.

ALEX
FUcking promise me, Jimny
 70.

She moans.
And he fucks her, banging against the door in rhythm with
their breathing and moa.oin9.
JIMMY
Bow does this feel. do you like it?
Pucking her harder.
1!..LEX
Yes yes yes

53.
Sitting down, against the door. Both sweaty, hot & wet.
Disheveled. Happy. After sex.
He looks at her.
Beat.

JIMMY
(stands up, pulling
up his pants)
- I gotta get back to work, yo.
ALEX
Uh-uh, Rabbit.
JIMMY
Why? Wasn•t that good for you?
ALEX
Yeah. But -
JIMMY
(sits back down)
- oh this is the par~ where Irm
supposed to like open up an 1 share
some shit with you - right?
ALEX
(smiles)
Yeah.
JIMMY
But l don't want to -
ALEX
Like why dontchya wanna battle on
stage again? Wink says the last
time you tried you--
 71.

JIMMY
(snaps)
Fuck. I don•t want people talkin'
shit about me no tn0re - \iihat 1 s so
fuckint hard to understand about
that? You ever been booed before,
have a whole crowd label you?
ALEX
No -
JIMMY
Well it sucks. And I got enough to
worry about - if r•m ever gonna
really do any •.!:ling. ya know - I •ma--
(bea:..)
I'm just tired a - a.hh - I -
Before Jimmy can finish, he hears someone talking at the
door. Good ears. Be motions to Alex to be quiet.
It•s Mr. Kosko.

They look at each other. Shit.

Grab their clothes, hop into the closet fast.

SI.
Inside the closet. trying to stay quiet. Darkness.
They hear Mr. Koska come into the room, arguing on the phone.
Upset.

JIMMY
(mouths to Alex)
Oh fuck - fuck -
Alex's eyes go wide. A naughty smile.
They can still hear Mr. Kosko babbling away on the phone.
And Alex leans over and quietly goes down on Jimmy.
CLOSE ON JIMMY, biting onto his bottom lip.
Having to stay quiet.
It 1 s so fucking good.
Alex's head bobbing in and out of frame.
Up & down. ·

55.
After work, late afternoon. Jimmy fixing his car in the
hotel parking lot. He can't stop smiling.
Future, Sol and DJ rz hanging out.
 72.

Sol's sitting on the hood of-his 1DOther1 s car in the middle

of telling a story--
SOL
- you won't believe what happened ta
me this 1110rnin' , yo.
JIMMY
Bitch, it ain•t gonna beat what
happened to me -

SOL
Yo lenwe finish, dawg. So I was up
6:30 in the mornin' with my mom's
car an' nut.hin• to do, so I decide
to do laundry.
DJ IZ
What?

SOL
{ignores him)
- An' there was this girl in the
lawidromat, an' she wasn•t that good
lookin• - not ugly - just not good
lookin 1 , ya know what I mean? So we
get to talking an• we hit it off.
I'm talkin• all this shit an' she's
givin' it right back to me, ya know
we 1 re really gettin' into it. An 1
then she says a good man like me
must have a good woman somewhere.
an' I tell her the truth, I tell her
that me an' my woman just broke
up~ an• she asks why. an• I say
that she did me wrong ya know. An'
she says she know women like that.
But that's not her, that's not how
she treats her man. An' then she
says she•s lookin• for a good man.
Sol jumps off the hood of the car, and starts talking to it
like it was the woman in the laundromat.
SOL
(all cool an' shit)
- So I say. •What would you do with
a good man?• An' she tells me, I
mean she tells me exactly what she
would do with a good rnan. And I
mean it includes muthafuckin•
everything - everything, man - anal
sex., everything.
(more)
 73.

SOL ( cont I
d)
{moves his hips back
~ forth, humping the
car)
So man, I know this•s the girl for
me. yo. 6;30 in the mornin' at the
laundroma.t an• 1•m talkin' about
fuckin' this girl in the ass - shit,
she wasn't that good lookin• man,
hut she wa.sn 1 t ugly either. Know
what I mean, Future? Maybe me & you
can~ do 'er -
FUTURE
C'mon, Mista - ~•m tryin' to flip
the script with that shit. You know
that -
DJ IZ
(to
Sol)
So what happened?
SOL
(stops humping the
car}
- I got 'er number an• finished my
laundry.

JIMMY
(laughs)
That's it? C'mon. Guess who I
fucked at work this afternoon?

SOL
Chedder Bob?
Beat.
JIMMY
Alex.
FUTt1R.E
Get the fuck outta here -
SOL
She's so fucking hot. dawg. we
should share her -
JIMMY
(shakes his head no)
She's on me, yo. We fucked this
afternoon in this dude's roam.. An'
then he came back.
(more)
 74.

JIMMY (cont'd)
An' we hid in the closet, an' get
this - She sucked my click until be
1eft. Serious. I'm in love -
The guys all gather around, whooping and hollering high-
fiving Jinmy. Be's the man.
DJ IZ
Shit. When ya gonna see •er again?

JIMMY
- I think she 1 s goin' to Win.k's show
tonight. Hopefully I'll see 'er
after that.

56.
The sun goes down. Jimmy parks the newly-fixed Lincoln in
front of the drab double-wide mobile home.
Slips on his headphones.
Getting lost in his own world.

S7.
Jimmy hurries into the trailer, tuning out.
Walks past the kitchen. Sees Alex and Wink: hanging out
drinking cheap champagne with Stephanie.
What?

Jimmy pulls off his headphones. Horrified.

STEPHANIE
- Hey, Rabbit - c•mon in we're
havin• a party! Greg's settlement
check 1
s comin 1
in tomorra! our
luck's changin• -
(pours Wink more
cheap champagne;
flirting)
Dontchya love the car I gave Rabbit
for his birthday, Wink? I love
being generous -
She grabs Wink 1 s hand. He smiles at her_

ALEX
(to Stephanie)
You call him Rabbit too?
 75.

STEPHANlE
(hissesJ
- I gave im that nickname.
1 When he
was little be had these buck teeth
and big ears and he was so cute,
wike a wittle wabhit -
(to Jim:uy)
Right, baby?

Jinmy turns red, turns back around. And leaves.

sa.
Jimmy, walking away from the trailer. Fast. It's almost
dark. Walking through the trailer park.
Getting the fuck outta there.
out toward the field.
Wink runs out after him. Catches up to him at the chain link
fence.
WINK
Yo where ya goin', B - What's the
matter?
JlMMY
(grabs Wink & thro~s
him up against the
fence)
- I thought I fucking told you not
to Lell nobody I was living here!
WINK
You got nothin' to be embarrassed
about, B. And I didn•t think ya'd
mind if it was Al -
Jimmy pushes Wink harder up against the fence.
WINK
- Shit. yo. We were goin• to my
show an' she said we hadda come get
you. ·What was I supposed to do?
Jinmy•s so fucking ~nqry it looks like he's gonna cry.
WINK
c•mon, Bunny. Chill out. Al really
likes you. man - Really. I'm
helpin' •er find a photographer for
her book that•s all -

A long beat.
 76.

WINK
- Did Ched.der Bob really shoot at
those guys yesterday?
JIMMY
Fuckit.
Jim:ny lets him go and turns around, heading back to the
trailer. Wink follows after him.
WINK
- I got some good news, yo. Spoke
to Lee Darucher today. We can get
into Paisley Park on Monday if you
can get your shit together in time -
Jiurny stops.
JIMMY
This Monday?

WINK
(smiles)
Yeah, dawg - you got four days.
Jimmy softens. Thinks.
JIMMY
Yeah - yeah, I can do that -
Jinuny sees Alex heading their way.
Too late to run. Alex walks up. Looks to Wink.
Then Jimmy.
Beat.
ALEX
Everything okay?

Jitrmy can't look at her. Caught in a lie. So embarrassed.

JIMMY
(looks down)
Yeah.
f\T,EX
Cuncomfortable)
Do you hafta stay home tonight?
.JIMMY
(sti11 staring at the
ground; dying)
- Yeah I should work on some songs
for my demo an• shit.
(more)
 77.

JIMMY (cont• d)
Wink jus• told me we• re gain• to
Paisley Park on Monday, so -
.Al..EX
Okay.
JIMMY
(finally looks up at
her)
Yeah.
Okay. It's awkward.
Beat.
WINK
{to Jitrmy}
Yo B - don•t forget, tomorrow night
we're all gain• down to 96.3, right?
JIMMY
Yeah okay -
The three of them stand there for a moment.
Beat.

S!L
CLOSE ON A PENCIL, scratching on a wall.
Words. Flying fast• furious.
Rhymes pouring out about all the shit Ji'iffl1Y sees.
Jimmy and Lily are hanging out in her little girl room.
Stuffed animals. She•~ drawing. He's a giant. Both in
their own worlds. He shakes his right fist back & forth, in
rhythm. And quickly scribbles some more shit on the wall
above her bed. puking out his feelings. ·
CLOSE ON JIMMY'S FACE. closing his eyes. We hear the song
he's working on. Opens his eyes ...
The trai1er park is AlCOIATKD. Baek to the Adventures of
SUpe1:Jimmy by ll. Crumb .. Be flies out the window. rapping the
song, flying up over dirty Detroit, heading for the Shelter.
the p1ace where be cartoon ki1ls. Sto:aa.s into the club, sees
w:cn:: sitting with. .&LEX. And somebody else •••
:X:t's animated PRINCE!
LUDAZ 01' TBA ft.IE WORLDare playing 011 stage .. PA.PADOC, LC
LYCD:1'1-SPr.Y'l', E and the other two guys. When they see
SUperJimmy enter they Jll.o'!lkea run for it!
SuperJimmy chases after them--
 78.

Running thraa.gb. the club. Lyckety-Splyt grabs Ale% hostage.

Papa Doc pu.1la out an a:c:iwated g,m and holds it to her bea.d.
Wink cowers. Supe.rJi:amy stops. He•s stil1 rapping the ~ong-
Xt•s, a stando£f.
SUpe.rJ~ aakes eye eontaat with Prince. 'l'hey e:z:cbange
smiles .. And Prince starts singing al.OD!l with hi.a.
A super duet.

Tha Free World ca.n•t help themselves. The song's too good.
Getting into the beat. Bouncing. Papa Doc lowers the gun--
And SnperJi..mmy re.shes them.. Beating thea a11 to the ground.
Prince jlIIIJ>• in and he1ps out.
They beat the shit out of tha Free World. Blood evecywbere.
And Stlpe:rJially grabs llex, rescuing her. Tal::i.ng he:r away.
They fl.y out the door and into the dark alley.
She ca.u•t keep he% hands off of him., kissing hi.SIi..
Pul1i.ng at his costume.
He pu1ls off her shirt and yanks down her animated jeans and
starts fucking her up against the wall, super fast and super
hard--

Suddenly we bear someone shout out--

GREG {VO)
You are such a fucking LOSER!

60 ..
CLOSE ON JIMMY, startled awake. BA.CI:TO REALITY (f.ilm).
The next day. He's under a blanket, on the ratty couch.
Greg and Stephanie are in the middle of a fight--
GREG
- Just like Rabbit was in high
school. Jesus, the both of ya a~e,
ya know - fucked -
Jinny sits up.
JIMMY
Yo did you just call me a loser?
Greg laughs yeah, limps up to Jimmy showing him the eviction
papers.
GREG
Didjya know your mom's gettin'
evicted?

Stephanie follows after him, holding Lily in her arms.

 79.

JIMMY
{grabs the papers
from Greg)
Tbatls none a your fucking business,
Greg -
STEPHANIE
Stay outta this, Rabbit•
(puts Lily down; to
Greg)
Don't worry, baby - I'm gonna take
care a it - it•s gonna be okay -
Okay?
She goes to hug him. He shoves her away. Hard.
GREG
- You•re so fucking stupid sometimes~

JIMMY
(jumps off the couch)
Keep your fucking hands off my mom,
asshole!
Jimmy jacks Greg up against the wall--
Greg shoves him away.

GREG
Get off me -
Stephanie pulLs Jimmy away from Greg.
STEPHANIE
Rabbit! Stop it!
Beat. Jitnmy looks at his mom. He wants to kill Greg.

JIMMY
(to Stephanie)
How can you let him do that lo you?

STEPHANIE
(pleading with Jimmy)
Don•t do this. Please -
GREG
- Bow the fuck can I go out with
someone who's homeless?
Lily starts to cry.
JIMMY
( to Stephanie)
Are you just gonna let 'im talk to
you like that?
 80.

STEPHANIE
Stay out of it, Rabbit
She goes to calm Lily down.
GREG
- With two homeless fucking kids.
JIMMY
{flips him off}
Fuck you. I'm outta here -

E>1.
brey skies. Storm clouds overhead.
Jirmny walks up to Wink 1 s mother's house. Still wired.
Looks inside the big picture window.
Wink•s passed out on the couch, the TV blaring.

62.
Wink and Jin-my descending into the basement. Wink 1 s still
half asleep. rt•s dark down there.
WINK
- It went good last night - that
shit was sold out - but they ain•t
as good as you, Bunny -
JIMMY
- did Alex like it?
WINK
Yeah. A lil' bit, ya know - but she·
was kinda drunk so. Where the
fuck•s everybody else?
JIMMY
Sol's mom1 s droppin' 'em all off an•
shit on her way to work -
Wink turns on the light. The equipment•s still all set up.
WINK
Even Future?
JIMMY
Yeah. Why?

The doorbell rings.

 WINK
-
1
Cause I beard he signed you up to
battle this weekend.
JIMMY
( surprised)

KINK
Be's killin• you. yo. Runnin' your
life an 1 shit. B - You dontt wanna
be a loser your whole life workin'
at some Little Caesars when you"re
like 40, now - Do you?

Wink n.ms back up the stairs, leaving Jimmy behind.

Starts pacing the room ...
Getting more and more agitated.
He sees the photographs of Wink & Prince on top of DJ Iz's
records. Picks one up. Hears the guys upstairs.
SOL (OS)
Wbere•s your mom. dawg?
WINK (OS}
Workin 1
-

Wink leads Sol, DJ Iz and Future down the stairs.

Jimmy stuffs the photograph into his front pocket.
As soon as he sees Future, Jimmy speaks up.
JIM.MY
(angry)
- yo did you fucking sign me up to
battle down at the Shelter this
weekend?
FUTURE
What?
JIMMY
You heard me. Did you sign me up -
Future walks down to the bottom of the stairs.
Looks at Jinmy.
Beat.

FUTURE
Jinmy, you gotta come down.
You gotta come down. That's the
only way you gon get over the other
night, youknowhatlmsayin 1
? An' the
winner takes my place as host, yo -
That's instant respect -
 82.

Ji'Cllll'Y picks up one of the records and wings it at PUture--

I!e ducks. It misses.
Jiapy walks up in his face.
JIMMY
Fuck the other night. I'm fuckin'
tired of you always tellin• me what
to do, al~ays thin.kin• you know
what•s best for me. Well Fuck You.
I told you not to sign me up -
FUTURE
You wanna fight me? Is that it?
Jinmy pushes him.
JIMMY
Why not? You ain't the future a
shit, bitch. You're just David
fuckin• Porter -
FUture looks at him.
Turns and walks away.
FUTURE
Do whatever the fuck ya want, man -
(laughs)
- I don•t give a shit about what you
& Prince gonna do.
Future leaves.
The guys all just stand there.
That was heavy.
Beat.
SOL
Shit.
DJ IZ
What are we gonna do now?
WINK
I wanna go get high -
JIMMY
( turns a-way)
- No let's do some fuckin' work.
Kick into R'.CGB.SPEED, as the guys start making music. We
hear some song play over--
 83.

63 ..
B:IGB.SPEED. Writing lyrics back & forth fucking around in
the ltla.ke-shift basement studio bouncing beats and hooks and
shit all off each other bobbing their heads together getting
it right all perfectly choreographed like a dance or a
symphony running faster• faster until they're all just a
blur of non-stop music.
Suddenly Wink jumps in the middle of it all.
Puts up his bands. Stop. Stop.
STOP-- Jump to UGO'Lll SPEED.
The song ends.
JIMMY
What?

WINK
Al jus 1 called from work. yo - She
needs a ride to this photographer I
set •er up with.
JIMMY
- Does she want me to pick 'er up?
WINK
I dunno.

SOL
Can we come?

64.
lt 1 s gonna rain soon. Jimmy and Wink sit in the front seat
of the car parked at the hotel. Chedder Bob's ducking
through the rear window. dressed in bis bellman's uniform,
rapping for Sol & DJ lz. He sucks.
Wink leans over to Jimmy, who's keeping an eye out the window
for Alex. Fidgety. Embarrassed.
WINK
You com.in' to 96-3?
JIMMY
(distracted)
Yeah -
WINX
Cool. But the radio DJ was at the
show last night an• she invited Papa
Doc & Lyckety-Splyt up. So ya know
they might be there.
 JIMMY
(seea Alex leaving
the hotel)
Fuckit then -

WINIC
(defensive)
Yo there was nuthin• I could do
about it, B -
Before Jitm:ty can respond Alex walks up to the car, holding
onto a garment bag. All the guys quiet down.

CHEDDER BOB
- Gotta go, homes. Ya know ya can't
leave old Earl all alone for long.
Chedder Bob hustles back to the hotel. Wink pops out of the
car, letting Alex into the front seat. Then sits right back
down next to her.

Jimmy throws him a look.

It starts to rain.

65.
Rain spits. Jimmy. driving next to Alex and Wink. He can't
even look at her. Doesn't know what to say. low.
Music
Alex lights up a cigarette, excited. Sol and DJ Iz lean in.
She•s the center of attention--
ALEX
- I saw this model on a TV show and
she was sayin 1 that looks alone
don't mean anything if you don't
have confidence and self-esteem. Ya
know like a confidence in yourself
that you•re you and everything.
Jimmy finally looks at her. And Wink smiles.
WINK
Yeah, Al. And this guy's gonna help
you do that.
_,LEX
(to Wink; excited)
- yeah I just wish 1 had more time
to ya know,-- I mean if I had known
it was today I wouldn't have gone
out drin.kin' last night -
Wink turns up the stereo, making sure it's on 96.3.
 85.

WINK
Don't worry, yo. 1•m sure there'll
be make-up & hair people there.
This is a professional photo
shoot -
Sol leans forward, all smooth and shit.
SOL
So how soon we gonna see this
pictorial in a magazine, Alex?
OJ IZ
Pictorials are Playboy, yo. In
fashion it's called an editorial,
Sol.

SOL
Shut up, Iz. Who gives a fuck -
JIMMY
{yells at Sol; on
edge)
It's just for her book, fool~ so
she can get a job.
SOL
- Damn. That 1 s one book I'd read.

DJ IZ
No doubt.

Alex laughs. Jimmy's still uncomfortable.

JIMMY
(to Sol & DJ Iz)
Alex won a modeling contest and this
guy from Elite asked 'er to come to
New York City -

ALEX
It's no big deal -
SOL
[ irrpressed)
You won a contest? For Elite?
I heard a them. Shit - that's the
big time, yo. Who were the judges?
Anybody famous?

WINK
(points out the
window)
Hey it's right over here. B -
 86.

66.
Still spitting rain. Downtown Detroit. bleak industrial
buildings. Fog. Lonely" blue. Alex crossing the street to
a run-do'WD. warehouse. leaving the guys hel:lind in the car.
Jimmy jumps out and catches up to her.

JIMM".l
- Is everything okay?
Alex doesn•t stop walking.
ALEX
With what?
JIMMY
Us -

ALEX
(without skipping a
beat; cold)
Yeah. But I really gotta go -
They walk together.

JIMMY
You want me to come up -
ALEX
No that's okay.
JIMMY
- You sure everything•s okay?
ALEX
I'm justa l1ttle hungover from last
night or whatever and ya know r•m
worried that I won•t photograph
good. This is really important to
me - Okay?

Jimmy stops.
And. she just keeps walking up to the building.
JIMMY
(calls out after her)
Am I gonna see you later?

ALEX
You goin 1
to the radio station?
JIMMY
- No.
 87.

ALEX
(not listening}
Okay. I'll see ya later then -
maybe we can talk about goin' to see
Prince next week.
He stands there, watching her go. And we hear a same kinda
remake of THE wao•s •Love Reign Qter Me.•

67.
The sun dies in the sky. Jim:ciy standing in the drizzle, out
in the fog covered f1eld next to the trailer park.
Headphones on. White out. You can•t see any trash.
It's almost beautiful. Otherworldly. And S~LEHT.
All we hear is •Love Reign O'er Me• in Jimmy's head.
Jin-my closes his eyes and screams.
But we don't hear it, only the song.
He screams loud and long.
Screams his fucking heart out.
He opens his eyes and
sees a giant shape emerge from the fog ...
It's a HORSE.
A big brown horse.
Jimmy can't believe it's real.
The horse looks at him, and then begins to graze in the field.
Another horse appears from the fog.
And then another.
And another. One of them has a blue blanket on, •DETROIT
MOUNTEDPOLICE.•

Jimmy stands there. With the horses, snorting and pulling up

dead grass in the fog.
Jitm:ry takes off his headphones. SOURDcomes rushing in.
The song fades away. He hears police sirens off in the
distance. Jint'f'IY walks up to the big brown horse.
It looks back up at him.
Jinmy•s now face to face with the horse. The horse goes back
to grazing. Jimmy :rubs its head. The police sirens getting
closer. Darkness closing in.
Jimmy just keeps patting the horse's head.
The song 1 s playing.
The sirens wailing.
 88.

68.
Later. Still wet and foggy. Jimny walls up the trailer.
Sees his mom passed out on the front steps.
Be stops. The song ends.
Be looks at her for a moment.
Then puts an arm under her, struggles to help her up to her
feet. You can tell hers done this before.
STEPHANIE
(coming to; mumbles)
Greg leftme -
.JIMMY
What?
Jiumy drags his mom inside.
STEPHANIE
we•re gonna goto bingo but, he came
over an' said now that he had money
he, that he couldn't be with someone
likeme -

69.
Jimmy, putting Stephanie down in her unmade bed. Goes to
take off her wet shoes.
She gets back up.
STEPHANIE
- I gottagoto bingo it's Friday
night. Maybe he'll be there -

JIMMY
You ain't goin' nowhere, Mom -
(gently pushes her
back down)
And you're better off without 'im.
STEPHANIE
(snaps)
Yeah ya know Rabbit it's your fault
he leftme -
Stephanie stumbles out of bed.
STEPHANIE
You ruined it, you fucked.itallup -
that's why Greg really left, it's
•cause a you, an' now what? Who's
gonna wantme? Where we gonna 1ive?
we got not money. WhataboutPrince?
 JIMMY
What?
STEPHA.NIE
You an' Prince. We can be rich -
JIMMY
(shakes bis head;
disgusted)
Wby does everybody keep bringin• up
Prince all the fuckin' time - ya
know?
(beat)
- shit. Puck him and fuck Greg too.
S'I'Etc-HANIE
No no no. I don•t haveanybody now,
James. Why didya do this to me?
Why?
(pushes Jimmy out)
Just getthefuckout!
JIMMY
It's pouring rain -
STEPHANIE
(screaming; pushing)
I DON'T CARE I WAN'1' YOU OUT OP MY
FUCKING HOUSE GET OUT GET OUT GET
OUT GET Ct.IT GET OUT GET OUT OF MY
FUCKINGHOUSE!
She keeps pushing Jimmy out the door.

70.
Night. Jinmy, driving in the rain. A downpour.
He turns on 96.3. They're playing Wink•s song ...
And it's terrible. Bad rhymes.
Weak voice.
Jimmy stares at the radio.
He shakes his head.
Can't help but laugh to himself. FUture was right.
JillltlY shuts off the radio.

Suddenly the car goes black. Cuts off.

The lights. The steering ~heel. The brakes. It•s dead.
Again.
The Lincoln silently coasts to the side of the road.
Stops.
 90.

And Jiu:my just sits there.

In the dark.
JIMMY
Fuck -

71 ..
Jimmy, walking down the dark side of the road. Pouring rain.
Empty neighborhood.
Pouring rain.
He ~alks up to Wink's mother's house. Soaking wet.
Pears voices. Pouring rain. Takes a quick look in the
window before he heads inside.
Sees Wink on top of some naked girl.
Jimmy takes a closer look.
Pouring rain wherever he goes.
The naked girl rolls on top of Wink.
It's Alex.
The girl is Alex.

Alex.

SPLl:'1' SCJl.ED:

WINK ALEX
(grabbing & kissing (moaning and writhing
her) on top of him)
Alex, yes Alex I want it all
ctrr SPLlT SCREEN:

JIMMY JIMMY
(staring into the (staring into the
sun; drowning) sun; drowningl

CUT SPLIT SCREEN:

ALEX ALEX
(moaning on top of (moaning on top of
Wink) Wink)
All of it All of it
DD SPLIT SO.ED:
JIMMY
(staring into the
sun; drowning)
 91.

12.
Jinmy. busting into Wink 1 s mother's house. Enraged.
surprising wink & Alex on the couch--
She screams, covering herself up.
Wink pulls up his pants, gets tangled up with Alex.
WINK
Yo, B - I can--
Jimny grabs Wink up off the couch, and slams him onto the
ground. Starts hitting him. All that rage.
It isn't a fight. It's a beating.
Alex stands on the couch, freaking out.
ALEX
Leave him alone - STOP IT!
Jimmy pounding Wink. over. And over. And over again.
It's loud. Wild. And out of control.
Blood splatters on Jirrmy's shirt.
Alex ju111ps off the couch, screaming, crying.
Tries pulling Jimmy off of Wink--
ALEX
LEAVE HIM ALONE! Just fuckin 1
get
out! Get out! GET OUT!

Jimmy gets up, out of breath. Worked up. Looks at her.

Beat. Beat.
Beat.
Is he gonna fucking hit her?
We hear CONTROLMACHETEbang out •si Senior.•
And Jimmy takes off. Rwming away.

73.
Jimmy x:u.nning down the dead streets of Win.k's mother's
neighborhood in the cold rain. We still hear the song
pumping-~
JUMP CUT:
Jimmy running, cro~·~s the street. Almost gets hits by a
car, slanm.ing on its brakes. JitrallY just keeps nmning--
JUMP CUT:

Rwm.ing through another shitty neighborhood--

JUMP ClJT;
 92.

Jin:my runs up to a plain ola house on a street called Novaro.

Falling apart porch. Lights on inside. The song blasting on
the soundtrack.
Jinmy knocks on the door. screams. out of breath.
JIMMY
Janeane - fuckin' Janeane let me
in - I'M FUCKINGSORRY LET MR IN,
PLEASE LET ME IN -

He knocks again.
Janeane cracks open the door.
JANEAN:E
- What are you doing here, Rabbit?

Beat.
Beat.
JIMMY
(catching his breath)
I dwma. I was runnin' and, and
this is just where l ended up - and
I'm sorry, Janeane -
(beat)
You were right and. I'm really sorry.
She looks at him for a moment.
And shuts the door in his face.
Jimnry just stands there.
He puts his hands in his packets. Cold. And wet.
Feels something in one of them ...
Pulls out the photograph of Wink - Prince.
And rips it up into little pieces.
Throwing it in the air.
Jimmy sits down on the porch steps. out of the rain.
Exhausted.

The.song finishes-

7t ..
Later. Jimmy still sitting on the porch. Shivering.
And cold. The rain's letting up. The white van pulls over
in front of the house. Dented side. Stereo booming, bass
thumping. Bright lights shine in Jimmy's face.
Jimmy just sits there.
 93.

Papa Doc, LC Lyckety-Splyt and the rest of tba Free Korld

jump out of the van. They all walk up toward the porch.
Papa Doc leading the way, his hat pulled down over his eyes.
PAPA DOC
Yo wassup. man. You ready to go
down?
Jinmy gets up. Sees Ale.x and Wink get out of the van.
Wink 1 s a mess. Broken nose. All bloody and shit.

Jimmy takes a few steps toward Papa Doc.

JIMMY
hever taking hi:;
eyes vf f Alex)
What?
Papa and the rest of tha Free world surround Jinnry.
Wink makes his way over, blood all over his shirt.
Alex stays near the van.
PAPA DOC
You heard rue. You ready to go?
Before J'immy can respond, E, the white guy, hits Jimmy in the
back of the head.
Jimmy falls onto his knees.

LC LYCKETY-SPLYT
c•ruon, Rabbit. get back up - Get up.
bitcb -
Jinmy gets up, turns around and smashes E.
Then takes a swing at Lyckety-Splyt--
Papa Doc kicks Jimmy in the balls.
Jimmy falls onto his knees again. Papa hits him in the face.
PAPA DOC
You like talkin' shit? Ruh? You
fuckin' faggot! You like it?
Jimmy falls to the ground. And then they•re on him like
animals. Wink too. All six of •em. Kicking him. Yelling
at him.
LC LYCKETY-SPLYT
Puck you muthafuckaf
PAPA DOC
Yeah. faggot -

Jimmy tries to get back up.

 94.

Alex just stands there watching. Silent.

WINK
(hold.i.Dg his nose;
kicking Jinnry in the
ribs)
You•re gonna fuck with Wink, huh?
You don't know who you're fucking
with! You fucking laser -
The light inside the house goes off. It's now almost pitch
black. The front lawn lit up only by the van's highbeams.
Jimny tries to get up again. Drops. Falling.
Giving up. Tbe ground.
Going down.
Letting go.

Falling, falling.
ctrr TO:

75.
The sun rises. The rain's stopped.
rt•s a new day. The next morning. Light.
Jirmny limps up to the trailer park. His eye black.
His body beat.

Instead of running past the entrance like he always does,

Jimmy just walks right in through the front gate.
At the busy intersection.
For the whole fucking world to see.

76.
Jirmny lirnps into the trailer. He looks like shit. Bloody
shirt. Hurt ribs. Face a mess. Stephanie is in the
kitchen. pouring milk for Lily's cereal.
They both look up at him. Horrified.
And run to hirn.
STEPHANIE
Ohmygod -
LILY
Jimmy!

Lily grabs him around the waist. Stephanie hugs him.,

smothering him..
 95.

JIMMY
(winces in pain)
- Easy, easy. I'm okay. r•m a•ight.
I just came by to pick up ury stuff
ant shit like you wanted -
STEPEIANIB
Ohmygod - What happened to you?
JIMMY
I fell -
STEPHANIE
What happened?
t:::MMY
(stronger}
I fell.

Stephanie looks at him. He fell.

STEPHANIE
Okay. Okay. Siddown. I'll make ya
some breakfast -
JIMMY
What?

STEPHANIE
I'm makin 1
breakfast -
Jimmy go~s to the sink to wash up, clean off the blood.
Lily doesn't leave his side.
JIMMY
{to Stephanie)
What•s gotten into you? I thought
you wanted me aut.

STEPHANIE
- Do you want some goddamn cereal or
not?

She holds up the milk.

JI.MMY
Why the fuck're you in such a good
mood?
STEPHANIE
I went to bingo last night -
JIMMY
Shit -
 96.

STEPHANIE
And I won. $3200!

JIMMY
You•re fucking kiddin' me -
STEPHANIE
(tries not to smile;
can't help it)
Nope. We're good -
No eviction.
JitllllY looks at her.
And busts out laughing.
Laughing. Laughing so hard he 1 s almost czying.

77_
Later. JilTIII}', making his way through a crowded bus.
There's one empty seat between two older black women.
Jiuny sits down between them.
He just sits there looking off, stuck between the two wonen
we•re samp1ing the •s:1s• scene from •QUADROPHENIA.•
Jinniy's weary. And in pain. Riding the bus.
No fantasy. No music. No love.
Just; reality.
Sitting on the bus.
Looking straight ahead.

78 ..
The hotcl 1 s basement locker room. Jimmy taking off his
shirt. getting ready for work. Purple black & blue covering
his body. Bruised ribs. Chedder Bob's standing next to him,
changing out of his uniform. Done for the day.

OlEDDER BOB
{staring at Jimmy 1 s
bruises)
- Ya know that fuckin 1 bitch didn't
show u~ ~or work, Rabbit. I bet
she's gonna get fuckin 1 fired.
Jiumy doesn't respond.
CHEDDERBOB
And didya hear old Earl strangled
some guest yesterday?

JIMMY
What -
 97.

CIJEDDER.BOB
He tried to kill some dude who kept
snappin• his fingers at 'im -
Chedder Bob tries to get a closer look at Jim:ny•s ribs.
JIMMY
(pushes him away)
Fuck off, Cbedder Bob -
CHEDDER BOB
C'mon, homes - MC Bob.
(pointsto Jiu::my's
black eye, bruised
body)
And that I
s sonic fucked up shit right
there. Rabbit. You should.a just
come by my house. I'da grabbed my
gun and -
[mimes shooting off
a gun in each hand)
Bam! Bam! Bam! Shoot that Alex
bitch right in the fuckin' stomach.
yo - Just like tha Free World got it.
Jinmy ignores him. starts putting on his uniform.

CHEDDERBOB
- Ya know there(s a battle tonight,
Rabbit. A big one.
JIMMY
Yeah.
OIEDDER BOB
1 also heard you got into a fight
with Future.
JIMMY
Yeah.

He finishes getting dressed.

CHEDDERBOB
You gonna ~u dmm there anyway or
whatever?

Jinny glances at himself in the locker roam mirror.

Sees his black eye.
JIMMY
- Yeah.
( looks back at
Chedder Bob)
What the fuck.
 98.

79 ..
CLOSE ON JIMMYTHE BELLMAN,working the front with Paul.
He looks over to the tea girls serving. Alex isn't there.
Classical music plays in the background.
Alex isn't there.
Fuckit. Jin:my turns back and opens the door for some guests,
forcing a smile. Welcoming them to the hotel.
Mr_ Springer walks up.
MR. SPRINGER
- Can I talk to you, Mr. Smith?

80.
Mr. Springer's cramped basement office. Jimmy winces when he
sits down.
MR_ SPRINGER
Is everything okay, Mr. Smith?
JIMMY
Yeah. l just fell down some stairs
an' shit -
Mr. springer stares at him.
Beat.
MR. SPRINGER
Well, you've been on time all week.
JIMMY.
- Yeah?
( laughs)
What can I tell ya, it's been one
helluva long week, Mr. Springer -
MR. SPRINGER
(smiles)
I don•t know if you heard but, there
was a, an incident with Earl -
JIMMY
Yeah. Did be really try an' kill
somebody for snapping their fingers
at 'im.?
Beat.
MR. SPRINGER
- Do you really wanna be doing this
for the rest of your life, Mr. Smith?

I ,
 JIMMY
Not really. But I need the money
MR. SPRINGER.
Okay then. You can have Earl's
shifts. You•ve earned it -

Jiumy nods bis head yes. Hides a smile.

MR. SPRINGER
Good. I need you to work tonight.
JIMMY
Tonight?
The puone rings. We hear CURTIS MAYFIELD lie IAURYNHILL sing
•Here But r•m Gone• on the soundtrack.
MR. SPRINGER
Do you want the extra shifts or not,
Mr. Smith?

81.
Later. Jimmy's leaving a room on the 1th floor with the
luggage cart, stuffing some money into his pocket. The guest
closes the door behind him. We still hear Curtis & Lauryn.

Jin-my walks down the hall ...

Passes by room 722.
The room he fucked Alex in.
The door·s open.
Jinmry stops. Takes a peek inside.
The maid is cleaning the bathroom, just out of sight.
The closet doors are all open.
Empty.

82.
CLOSE ON JIMMY, riding the elevator.
Going down. The song plays on.

83.
Jimmy walks outside of the hotel. out into the cold night.
Paul's leaning against the wall waiting for a ride, checking
up & down the street, smoking a cigarette. The song ends.

JIMMY
- Big plans tonight?
 100.

PAUL
Just gain• dancing with some.
friends. But they're late - Wby1 re
you still here?
JIMMY
1•m pickin• up Earl's shift -
PAUL
(laughs)
Crazy what happened, huh?
Paul snaps his fingers.Jimmy laughs, stands there for a
moment. You can their breath white in the cold.
see
Paul offers him a drag off his cigarette.
Jimmy takes it. Smokes.

JIMMY
- Yo Paul - You ever get tired of
ta.kin' shit from everybody, people
always tryin' to label you?
Hands the cigarette back to Paul.
PAUL
Nah. I don't give a shit what
-· anybody says.
{beat)
Except for Chedder Bob. That guy
drives me nuts -
JIMMY
(laughs)
Yeah. Me too -
Beat.
PAUL
- Were you in a fight or something?

JIMMY
Yeah. These six fucking guys jumped
me. Kicked my ass, whatever.

PAUL
That's fur~~d. You gonna get 'em
back?
JIMMY
Shit yeah. But they down at the
Shelter tonight and I wanna battle
•em first, ya know - rip those
motherfuckers from head to toe -
 101.

Paul finishes his cigarette·.. Flicks it away.

PAUL
Hey if ya want, I 1 ll cover for ya.
JIMMY
Really?

PAUL
Yeah. Lucky for you, my friends a:i::e
late. so -
Beat.
JIMMY
( ~ooks at Paul;
smiles}
- Thanks, man. Just for a couple
hours, yo - I'll come right back.

84.
Jinmy hustles down the street to the Shelter. Back in his
own clothes. out of breath. In pain. There's a mob scene
out front ~aiting to get 1n. Twice the size of the last
crowd.
He passes by Sol, DJ Iz and Chedder Bob, who's drinking from
a brown paper bag.

CHEDDER BOB
(sees him; calls out)
Yo Rabbit - wait up!
Jimmy doesn't stop. Keeps on moving, heading down the dark
alley next to the club.
The other guys follow after him.
SOL
Damn, B - We gon fuck up Wink or
what? I heard he's sayin' you blew
up •cause they didn't want you down
at Paisley Park -
DJ IZ
(to Sol)
- but all our shit 1 s still at Wink•s
house, yo. If we had our own studio
we wouldn't need Prince and--
SOL
Just shutthefuckup, Iz.
 102.

c:ammm·BOB
Don' t worry. Rabbit - I got your
back, I know the real reason you
blew up, right?
JIMMY
(snaps)
- I don't wanna hear any more a that
shit!
SOL
Yo what•s the matter. Rabbit?
They're at the back door. Jinmy stops. Looks at his friends.
JIMMY
- Can't I ever get any fuckin 1

privacy?

SOL
Yeah. Cool -
CHEDDER BOB
Yeah. Can I come?

JIMMY
(looks at Chedder Bob
for a moment; smiles)
- sure, •Mc• Bob.

85.
Jimmy, sitting backstage on a cheap folding-chair dissin'
Chedder Bob. Practicing his freestyle. Making fun of him.
People coming & going all aroWld them in the small backstage
area.
Jinmy's flowing. Chedder Bob just sits there drinking,
taking it. Loving it. Seeing how Jimmy rhymes.
Be takes a break.
CHEDDERBOB
{drunk)
- Ya know I love you. Rabbit.
JIMMY
Yo, stop. I don•t wanna hear that.

CHEDDERBOB
Hey whaddaya want for your birthday?
Papa Doer LC Lyckety-Splyt, E and the other two guys from tha
Free World walk backstage. They stop when they see Jinmy and
Chedder Bob.
 103.

Cbedder Bob jumps to his feet. Jinny doesn•t.

Be just sits there. Cool.
LC LYCKETY~SPLYT
Looky wo it is - You really goo try
an• batt1e us, black eye bitch? You
should be afraid, very afraid -
Jimmy nods his head, sn:ri.les a little. Like a guy who knows
something. Doesn't say shit.
LC LYCKETY-SPLYT
Didn't you already die out thece on
stage?
(opens his mouth•
no~~ing comes out;
choking)
- Didn't he, E? Looks dead to me.
E
Got a black eye.
PAPA OOC
Yo, some guys jus' like gettin 1
their ass kicked - right, Rabbit?
JIMMY
(still sitting down}
- Yeah that's why it took six a you
motherfuckers. What kinda pussy
shit is that?
CHEDDERBOB
Yeah. And how's your car?
The Future comes backstage.
Papa Doc just walks away.
PAPA DOC
(laughing at Jimmy)
We'll see you on stage, faggot -
The rest of tha Free World follows after him .
.Future looks at JiimIIy's face.
Shakes his head.
JIMMY
(to Future)
- I gotta get some fuckin• privacy.

86.
Jimmy and Future hanging in the desolate bathroom.
I Back whece we started.
\
 104.

Under the harsh green fluorescent light.

FUTtJRE
- You know I didn't like that
m:uthafucka Wink from jump, yo.
Fucking backstabber. That Judas' 11
get his, youknowhatimsayin• -
JIMMY
Yeah. I •m sorry
An' about all that
shit l said before. You know I
didn 1 t mean it - I just,-- ya know -
FUTURE
Yeah. l know. I didn't even trip,
yo. l'm all about forgiveness now.
Let's go fuck 'em up -
JIMMY
Fuckit. I'm gonna battle •em first -
FlITURE
(smiles)
- We gon flip the script on this
shit for real now, JiD111Y- Aren't we?
Jimmy nods his head_ He knows what time it is.
Be slips on his headphones, bounces up & down to the music.
Bouncing.
Bouncing.
Bouncing.
Bouncing.
Bouncing.
FUTURE
(lights a cigarette)
- Yo you got Lyckety-Splyt in the
first roWld. You okay wit' that?

Bouncing.
JIMMY
- I don't give a fuck who it is.
Ya know?

87.
Jinny walks on stage. Under the toxic glare of the lights.
People crowded along the edges. The DJ spinnin'. The big
scoreboard clocks on the wall set at 60. LC Lyckety-Splyt's
already there, .standing next to Future. Shit-eating grin on
his skinny little face.
 105.

We see crowd from Jittmy•' 6 point of view.

the rt 's a mob
scene. Rowdy. OVerflowing. Electric. People get ready.
Jimny sees Alex b.a.nging out with Wink twhite band.age over his
nose), Papa Doc and the other two Free world black guys.
Everybody looking at him.
Future smiles Jimn:y's way and introduces Lyckety-Splyt.
Be's going first.
The DJ lays down a beat.
And LC Lyckety-Splyt•s all over Jin:my.
Freestylin• ahout--
1. s failure
Jinay 1
in the last battle.
2. Jimmy being white.
3. aimmy's black eye.
Jir.mty just bobs bis head to the beat, looking down, not
reacting to a thing Lyckety-Splyt spits.
The clocks tick down too. The crowd shouts.
Lyckety-Splyt laughs.
It's now Jimmy's turn. All the lights are on him. Blinding.
The Future hands him the mic.
Some people start booing.
Yell shit at him.
Booing Jimmy.
Jimmy bounces, collecting his thoughts, tuning out the world.
Not hearing it. This is it. It's just him.
The beat.

Beat.
And Jinrny just goes off--
All the anger pouring out of every muscle in his body.
Into this moment. Forgetting a.bout his pain.
Jiumy•s spitting fire.
Right up in Lyckety-Splyt•s face.
Ripping into him_
Destroying him.
cutting hirn.
If ~ords could kill.
He's so good.
Jimny finishes.
Beat.
And the crowd goes fucking crazy. Much louder than they were
for LC Lyckety-Splyt. Vocal. Approving. Screaming.
Jimmy won the round!
The Future laughs.
 106.

And JitmIY just walks off stage. passing by the Big Bad Dude
from the beginning of the movie. They pound fists.
The dude knows who he is now.
·---·
88.
Jinny makes his way through the noise and the crush, heading
toward the bathroom. He sees Alex still with Wink, Papa Doc
and the other guys.

JiUlllY and Alex make eye contact through all the bodies in
traffic.
Beat- A moment.

She smiles at him, awkw~==· And gives him the finger.

Flirting.
Jimmy just laughs at her. Puts on his headphones.
And walks away.
CLOSE ON JIMMY, walking away. Laughing.
Never looking back.
Bolding his head up, black eye and all.
CUT TO:

89.
Later. Jinmry, battling Eon stage.
In a zone. Fast. Flowing.
Clear & strong.
Touching a higher self.
Time up.
The crowd fucking loves it.

He exchanges pounds with Future. who takes the mic and hands
it to E.
E's up.
Starts freestyling--
And Jittmy sits down on the stage.

CLOSE ON JIMMY, just sitting there. Quiet. Looking out at

all the people. Ignoring E's rap. Not hearing it.
Not listening. Not caring. We stay on Jiu-my the whole time.
E finishes. Scattered applause. Jimmy won again.
Jinny gets up, walks off.
Sol, DJ Iz and Chedder Bob greet him at the edge of the
stage. They all gather around him.
 107.

Future runs up.

.Fl.n1JRB
- You are a fucking genius, man.
You in the fit1als, Jim. You an•
Papa Doc. Yessir, it's a fucking
blessing, youhearwhatlmsayin 1
?

SOL
You're gonna whoop that nigga•s ass -
DJ IZ
He ain't got no vocabulary.
Jirmny nods his head, game face on.
CEIEDDER BOB
(still drunk)
- You worried about what he's gonna
say, Rabbit?

JIMMY
What?

CHEDDER BOB
Like about Wink & that Alex bitch
gettin' it on ya know - And ya t...now
you not goin• to Paisley Park and
them beatin 1 you up and ya know
givin' you a black eye and shit -
Beat. Jimmy doesn't respond.
FUTURE
(pushes Chedder Bob,
Yo - shutthefuckup, fool!

.90.
The finals. The crowd's in a frenzy.
Jimmy vs. Papa Doc.
Both of them on stage.
Neither one looking at the other.
The showdown.
This is it.

Future hypes the c ...c1.rnpionship.

FUTURE
Give it up y'all - The championship
round, for the right to take my
place as host on all the open mic
battles. That's the sweetest part
about it, youknowhatlmsayin'?
 108.

CLOSE ON JIMMY. head already down. Staring at the floor.

Lost in his own ~orld. Total concentration on his face.
He bears Future finish. Jinmy looks back up.
People scream. Shout. Ready for blood.
And Future introduces hi~.
Jirmry•s up f1rst-
The DJ lays down the beat ...
And Jinmy pauses.
Be stares at Papa Doc.
Long.
And hard.

Suddenly a smile co~s to Jitmty 1 s face. A shining sun.

Beat.
And Jimmy freestyles about himself, from his side--
1. About not going to Paisley Park - bow it's not real.
2. 1!.bout getting his ass kicked - by 6 guys.
3. About Wink fucking Alex - and how she blew him in a closet.
About all the bullshit.
Making fun of it all.
Taking away all of Papa Doc•s material.
And turning it back on himself.
He's a genius.

Letting everybody know he just doesn't give a fuck.

About anything.
Be 1 s found his true voice.
He kills. Finishes.
JIMMY
(yells out at the
audience, 91v1ng
them all the finger)
Fuck you - You dunno who I am?
I know who I am -
The cro~d goes nuts. Bouncing off the walls. High-fiving
and screaming joy. All born again.

Future can't stop laughing. Se hands the mic to Papa Doc.

Papa Doc just stan-o there. The beat goes on.
The crowd still wild over Jimmy.
And Papa Doc just stands there.
Stares out at the crowd.
Freezes.
Re's got nothing.
He knows he•s already beat.
 109.

It's over.

91.
The 1ights come up. Night over. Jitm!j' and his friends walk
througn the crowd. They•re jumping up & down all around him,
so excited. Shouting his name out loud, laughing. barking,
•B-RABBIT! B-RABBIT! B-RABBIT,•

Everybody else reaching out wanting to congratulate Jin:ury,

tell him how good he is, loving him, basking in his glow.
Jinmy just keeps walking out. Not getting caught up in it
all.

92 ..
The crowd flowing out of the club. Hanging outside.
Freezing. Buzzing. Jitrmy and his crew make their way
through all the people.
CHEDDERBOB
Yo where we headed, Rabbit?
DJ IZ
You on your way, boy -
SOL
Gonna get that big deal now fa she -
CHEDDERBOB
Yeah. Fuck Wink. Fuck Prince.
Fuck tha Free World. RU486 IS THE
FUCKING SHITt
Jinmy heads off, leaving the crowd and the club behind.
The guys follow.
JIMMY
I gotta get back to work, yo -
SOL
(laughs)
c•mon, dawg. I told that girl from
the laundromat who wasn 1 t that good
lookin• we'd meet up with her
later - I need a second opinion, yo -
CiEDDER BOB
(excited)
Yeah. We gonna get all the hot
bitches now you won, Rabbit!
 110.

FUTURE ..
...
Cool that, cool that. That was sotne
alien shit ya did back there, man -
youknowhatimsayin'?
DJ IZ
No doubt, no doubt, he's the new
host -

JIMMY
(keeps walking)
Puckit.
[to Chedder Bob)
MC Bob, you can be the new host.
1 1 m late for work, yo. I 1 ll see you
guys tomorrow -

The guys stop. Don't know what to say.

Jimmy just keeps walking down the street into the winter
night.
Beat.
Future runs after hjm. Catches up.

FlITURE
- You okay, Jimmy?
JIMMY
Yeah - I'm just done wit• all the
bullshit, ya know what I'm sayin 1 7
FUTURE
- yeah. I think I do.
Jimmy and Future walk down the street together.
JIMMY
- Yo Fuche, you ever seen a horse
before?
FUTURE
You mean like the four legged kind?

JIMMY
Yeah -

Why?

Beat.
JIMMY
Fuckit, man - I gotta run.
 111.

JillllIY says goodbye to the Future, and takes off running down
the street. On bis own.
Away from bis friends.
Away from the crowd.
Away from. the club.

Running by himself dawn the dirty streets of Detroit.

Heading in the opposite direction of everybody else.
Sweet wind licks his face. Cold breath slips his mouth.
We hear our closing credit song .

.a.nd the scene beings to Alf.IXJ..TE.

But this time he ian•t a superhero £lying up in the sky.
This time be•s just pl.ain J:i.mmy. Running.
_ A 11 ttle s:m.i..1e comes to Ji.mm.y• s face.
Be runs, feet so1id on the ground.
Faster ..
Lighter.
Free.
lie runs, Jimmy runs.