Extended - Essay - Outline 1

EXTENDED ESSAY OUTLINE
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Step 1: Brainstorming the Topic
Theme HEALTH
 One-word theme
Topic ELECTRONIC SPORTS
 One / two /
three-word topic
Proposed Title E-SPORTS CAN BENEFIT PEOPLE HEALTH
 Action statement
Thesis Statement E-sports, which are frequently underappreciated in terms of their
 Stance + main health benefits, can have a substantial positive impact on people's
ideas physical and mental health by enhancing cognitive abilities, creating
social bonds, and promoting physical activity. Rephrase title
Step 2: Brainstorming the Main Ideas
Main Ideas Major Support

can provide children and adults Communication among teammate
1 with a sense of community and
social connection No. Think of a better one
improve cognitive functions
such as decision-making,
2 Strategy based-games
strategic thinking, and reaction
time
Esports can also promote
Physical movement games
3 physical activity and healthy
No
habits.
NOTE: STEPS 1 AND 2 ARE DUE IN WEEK 5
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Step 3: Outlining the Introduction
Drafting – one paragraph per table
Attention Grabber Health refers to the overall well-being of a person, both physically and
 Introduce the mentally.
theme
General Health as a theme encompasses various aspects related to the well-
Statement(s) being of individuals and communities. It includes physical health,
 Explain the mental health and social well-being. Physical health involves
theme maintaining a healthy body through exercise etc. Mental health focuses
on emotional well-being and managing stress. Social well-being
involves building positives relationships and being part of a supportive
community.
Sustainability One of the Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) that relates to

Elements health is SDG 3: Good Health and Well-being. This goal aims to ensure
 Relate the healthy lives and promote well-being for all at all ages. It focuses on
theme with various aspects of health, including reducing maternal and child
areas of mortality, combating communicable diseases, promoting mental health,
sustainability and ensuring universal access to healthcare services. SDG 3 highlights
(society / the importance of achieving good health as a fundamental aspect of
environment / sustainable development.
economic) or
specific SDG
(goals/targets)
 ONE in-text
citation
Transitional Esports, short for electronic sports, refers to competitive video gaming.
Statement(s) It involves professional players or teams competing against each other
 Introduce the in various video games. Esports has gained significant popularity in
topic recent years, with organized tournaments, leagues, and a dedicated
fan base. In terms of career opportunities, esports offers a wide range
of possibilities.

Definition eSports is formally defined as an area of sport activities in which
 Define the topic people develop and train mental of physical abilities in the use of
taken from a information and communication technologies" (Wagner, 2007 as cited
journal article in Seo, Jung, 2014:2).
 ONE in-text
citation
Transitional This definition very much applies to eSports player because this is
Statement what they basically do every day as their routine.
 Relate the
above definition
to the context of
the essay
Issues / Problem In the context of esports, it's important to consider the physical and
Statements mental well-being of the players. Just like any other competitive
 Illustrate activity, esports can be demanding and intense. Players may
relevant issues experience long hours of practice, high levels of stress, and potential
related to the risks of sedentary behaviour.
title
Factual Statement Due to that, many people would not consider eSports can benefit one’s
 State evidence health stating that it can increase the risk of cardiovascular disease
(numerical / (Wongsiri, 2022).
statement) from
source(s)
related to the
title
 ONE in-text
citation
Transitional Nevertheless, the drawbacks of eSports can be mitigated through
Statement comprehensive measures.
 Relate to the
essay title
Thesis Statement Hence, the promotion of eSports is warranted, given its potential to
 State stance positively influence mental health, enhance physical well-being, and
and main ideas foster meaningful social connections.

Step 4: Outlining the Body Paragraphs
Drafting – one paragraph per table
Main Idea 1: [insert main idea]
Topic Sentence 1 Mental health from a psychological perspective in the benefits of esports.
General From a psychological perspective in esports, mental health is a crucial aspect
Statement(s) that affects athlete performance and well-being. Studies show that problems
such as burnout, anxiety, depression, and psychological distress can be
significant risks for esports players. Emotional regulation, stress management,
and attention to mental well-being are the main focus in ensuring the success
and sustainability of esports athletes' careers. With a deep understanding of
psychology and mental health, players can optimize their performance
whileining a healthy emotional and psychological balance.
Major Support Better Emotional Regulation, Improved Cognitive and Psychological Abilities:
 State opinion A professional esports player learns through practice and play experience, he
learnt to manage stress and negative emotions while competing. This ability
helped him not only in the game, but also in everyday life, proving the benefits
of emotional regulation of playing esports. A case study showed that a teenager
who was active playing esports experienced an improvement in
communication skills, teamwork, and time management. It helped him face the
challenges in the field of education and in his social relations.
Minor Support Adapting the narrative from veteran Esports athlete Farand "Koala" Kowara,
 State a relevant who formerly competed for Rex Regum Qeon. He discusses the various
fact (evidence - scenarios and settings that arise when playing the game, whether one is
citation) pursuing personal goals or contending for a trophy on the championship stage.
Discipline is not necessary to avoid errors and promote effective team
 ONE in-text
communication when playing without the pressure to earn a championship
citation
title. "But when it gets to a professional level, they respond differently; they
have rights and obligations, they have to win, and especially if they lose, they

will be criticized," Koala stated. But ultimately, it comes down to each person's
mental toughness; some people might not be resilient and feel under strain,
while others have the mental fortitude to bear it. Discipline, effective
communication, and maintaining focus through to the very finish are crucial in
championship competitions. Thus, when pursued and handled seriously,
esports can enhance mental health by fostering excellent habits that translate
into daily life through discipline, perseverance, and effective communication
 Explain the fact Esports demands for self-control, seriousness, tenacity, clarity of
(opinion / voice thought, and communication might help participants develop beneficial
- analysis) habits outside of the game itself. People can be trained in discipline and
other areas by the pressure and demands they face, or even by the
poisonous circumstances created by others' expectations of success and
the view that failing is a humiliation by teammates or others. Because
playing esports involves repetition, positive habits developed there can
therefore be carried over into everyday life and become deeply ingrained
 Relate to the Every person is under intense pressure to succeed in competitions; the
context of the drive to succeed is constant, whether it comes from within or from the
essay (opinion / external environment. Aside from the possibility of taking home a
voice - championship title, competing generally has the positive effect of
analysis) teaching people self-control over their emotions and mental states.
Therefore, people with both excellent physical skills and good mental
control are usually the ones that win competitions
Mini Conclusion Competitors in the esports industry demonstrate a great commitment to

• Restatement of victory, which calls for both tremendous competence and sound
topic sentence emotional control. It's clear from playing in esports competitions that
each participant is focused on winning. Thus, to accomplish this goal,
one needs skills, discipline, and effective communication. Players are
nearly certain to win championships once they get used to training with
the goal of developing discipline, skill, and effective communication.
This indicates that because of the abilities and training players
continuously put themselves through, esports offers psychological
advantages and strong mental health
 Summary of Mental health is a crucial aspect in the world of esports that requires
main idea 1 serious attention from all sides. From a psychological perspective, there
are potential benefits and risks that need to be well managed to ensure
the optimum well-being and performance of esports players.
Psychological benefits that can be obtained from playing esports include
improved emotional regulation, development of mental endurance,
improved communication and teamwork skills, and reduction of stress
and anxiety. To support mental health in esports, comprehensive efforts
are needed, including the provision of counseling and psychological
support, training in psychological skills, adequate supervision and

support, and increased education and awareness throughout the eSports
ecosystem.
Topic Sentence 2
General
Statement(s)
Major Support
 State opinion
Minor Support
 State a relevant
fact (evidence -
citation)
 ONE in-text
citation
 Explain the fact
(opinion / voice
- analysis)
 Relate to the
context of the
essay (opinion /
voice -
analysis)
Mini Conclusion
• Restatement
of topic sentence
 Summary of main
idea 2

Topic Sentence 3
General
Statement(s)
Major Support
 State opinion
Minor Support
 State a relevant
fact (evidence -
citation)
 ONE in-text
citation
 Explain the fact
(opinion / voice
- analysis)
 Relate to the
context of the
essay (opinion /
voice -
analysis)
Mini Conclusion
 Restatement of
topic sentence
 Summary of main
idea 3

Step 5: Outlining the Conclusion
Drafting – One paragraph per table
Restatement of
thesis
Overview of main
idea 1
 Include the major
detail
Overview of main
idea 2
detail
Overview of main
idea 3
detail
Recommendation(s)
 Give practical
recommendation
s for parties
involved
Incorporating Islamic Perspective(s)
Islamic
Perspective /
Maqasid Shariah (in
any part of the
essay)

 ONE in-text
citation
NOTE: STEPS 3 – 5 ARE DUE IN WEEK 6.

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EXTENDED ESSAY OUTLINE

Matric Name Department Kulliyyah

Step 1: Brainstorming the Topic

Step 2: Brainstorming the Main Ideas

Main Ideas Major Support

NOTE: STEPS 1 AND 2 ARE DUE IN WEEK 5

EXTENDED ESSAY OUTLINE V2 EFFECTIVE SEMESTER 1, 2023/2024

Sustainability One of the Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) that relates to

EXTENDED ESSAY OUTLINE V2 EFFECTIVE SEMESTER 1, 2023/2024

EXTENDED ESSAY OUTLINE V2 EFFECTIVE SEMESTER 1, 2023/2024

EXTENDED ESSAY OUTLINE V2 EFFECTIVE SEMESTER 1, 2023/2024

Mini Conclusion Competitors in the esports industry demonstrate a great commitment to

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Main Idea 2: [insert main idea]

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Incorporating Islamic Perspective(s)

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NOTE: STEPS 3 – 5 ARE DUE IN WEEK 6.

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