Invasion Script
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1 SPACE 1
The earth slowly enters frame. We’re on the dark side of the
planet so ‘nightglow’ is visible; a lustrous green haze in
the upper part of the atmosphere.
The earth fills the screen and we see patchworks of city lights.
Dense labyrinthine constellations.
2 EARTH 2
3 FOREST 3
4 OMITTED 4
5 LAND 5
6 SKIN 6
WE PAN across human skin. Hard to tell what part of the body.
It’s hairless and has soft undulating ridges of veins.
7 VEIN 7
8 BRAIN 8
I N V A S I O N
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CUT TO:
MACRO CLOSE on Malik's eye. The iris fills the frame. The eye
moves up, down, left, right. The TV plays in the background:
NEWSCASTER (O.S.)
Rioters are storming parts of the
city, looting stores and setting
buildings on fire...
NEWSCASTER (O.S.)
The mayor has issued a statement
saying that “thugs are trying to
tear down the city and incite
violence”.
Malik enters the bedroom and watches the news report - a riot
rages in an American city. Civilians throw rocks at police,
tear gas is fired into crowds. A bus is on fire. Total chaos.
But from Malik's steady gaze it’s nothing he hasn’t seen before.
This is the world now.
NEWSCASTER
The National Guard fired into the
crowd taking three lives. It’s not
yet clear whether this was an act --
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Malik's eyes roam the wall and sees -- a Red Wasp crawl out
of a crack above his bed.
Malik takes the Bible from the bedside table and SLAMS the wasp.
CUT TO:
Jay's mother, PIYA (30s), opens the door, and quietly studies
her son. She radiates a kindness.
PIYA
Jay, you can’t stay in all day.
JAY
It stinks out there.
PIYA
You’ll get used to the smell.
PIYA
Dylan’s taking Bobby out on the
tractor.
JAY
Dylan stinks.
PIYA
Ow. Getting eaten alive today.
She brushes the remnants away, enters and hugs Jay from behind.
PIYA
This is incredible baby.
Jay shuffles himself away from her hug. Piya stands, rethinks:
PIYA
Want me to send it to your dad?
Jay nods.
PIYA
Okay. But you gotta do me a favor.
Malik enters his Jeep Cherokee and places his duffel bag on
the passenger seat.
He starts the ignition, turns to look out and sees a CHILD (5),
in the adjacent car staring at him.
Malik presses his mouth to the window and blows - his cheeks
expand and he crosses his eyes.
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The kid laps it up. Does the same - pressing his face against
the glass and blowing.
MOTHER
What are you doing to my child?
MALIK
Just being a dumbass.
MOTHER
You leave us alone.
DYLAN
(To Piya)
You know Bobby practically drove
the tractor all by himself. Ain’t
that right?
BOBBY
Uh-huh. Jay was too scaredy-cat --
JAY
No I wasn’t dumbass.
BOBBY
Mom!
PIYA
Jay, what is the matter with--
Piya drops her fork and winces. She stands, exits and walks
down the hall. We hear the muffled sound of Piya VOMITING.
JAY
(to Dylan)
Is Mom alright?
DYLAN
Just a bug. Don’t worry about it.
(moving on)
So how about I take you both
fishing after school tomorrow? My
Daddy says you ain’t truly fished
till you fished the Chewaucan.
BOBBY
Can Franklin come too?
DYLAN
Well that depends, does Franklin
like fishing?
DYLAN
Then hell yeah Franklin can come.
DYLAN
Wowzers, that is an awesome picture
Jay. Maybe we can frame it.
Jay looks Dylan dead in the eye and slowly SCRUNCHES it up.
DYLAN
That’s it, go to bed young man.
Jay digs in the box and takes out a frayed 80s sci-fi comic,
‘Space Solider’. The source of his inspiration.
WIDE - vivid stars in the country night sky. The house below,
vulnerable and isolated. The surrounding farmland is alive
with twinkling fireflies, mirroring the stars above.
Jay's hand dangles off his bed. Beside his fingertips is the
letter. Malik's hand comes into frame and picks it up.
MALIK
(whispered)
Wakey-wakey Jay.
JAY
Dad!? Dad! You’re back!
MALIK
Sorry it took so long.
MALIK
Look at you, overtakin’ me as
handsomest man in the family.
MALIK
Hold still a sec...
MALIK
Okay get changed, I’m taking you on
a road trip.
Jay rises, leaps onto Bobby’s bed and jumps up and down.
JAY
Wake up, wake up, wake up. Dad’s
back, Dad’s back, Dad’s back.
MALIK
Shhhh, Jay, calm down.
Malik picks Jay up and plonks him next to the cupboard and
hands him the clothes.
MALIK
Come on, we’re movin’ out in two
minutes.
BOBBY
Dad?
MALIK
Come and give me a hug little man.
MALIK
Just gotta check something...
BOBBY
You look different.
Malik turns off the penlight. Ruffles Bobby’s hair and smiles.
MALIK
You too kid.
MALIK
Get up Bobby we’re going on
vacation.
BOBBY
Is Mom coming?
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MALIK
Nope. Just the three of us.
BOBBY
I wanna sleep some more.
MALIK
Bobby if you don’t get up the Zoids
are gonna come and get you.
MALIK
(whispered)
Hey, hey, hey! What are you doing?
BOBBY
Sayin’ bye to Mom.
MALIK
Bobby it’s the middle of the night,
she’s fast asleep. We’ll call her
over breakfast, okay?
Jay and Bobby put their sneakers on. Malik approaches the
front door and looks out the window. Always watching.
Jay ties his laces and glances down the hall -- into the
kitchen -- and sees an upturned chair. Strange.
MALIK
Okay boys we’re going to play a
game - it’s called ‘get in the car
as fast as humanly possible’.
Who do you think’s gonna win?
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MALIK
Let’s see about that. One... two...
two and half...
JAY
Come on, come on --
MALIK
Three!
JAY
I won dip shit.
BOBBY
Shut up fart breath.
MALIK
Boys get those seatbelts on.
The boys clip themselves in. Malik pulls onto the road and
breathes a first-hurdle-sigh.
JAY
Why didn’t Mom tell us we’re going
on this road trip?
MALIK
Well obviously she wanted it to be
a surprise.
BOBBY
Where are we going?
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MALIK
That’s also a surprise.
BOBBY
Disney Land!?
MALIK
No we’re not going to Disney Land.
BOBBY
Why?
MALIK
Why!? Because... it’s closed.
BOBBY
Why?
MALIK
Because...
(improvising)
a ride broke and lots of children
died. Ain’t that right Jay?
JAY
Why aren’t Mom and Dylan coming?
MALIK
They’re going on their own
vacation... skiing... in Canada.
BOBBY
I want to go skiing.
MALIK
Come on, you want to freeze your
ass off on top of a mountain with
Mr. Stick Up His Butt?
MALIK (CONT’D)
Besides this is going to be way
more fun than Disney Land and
Canada combined. This is a Special
Operations road trip. Code name:
‘avoid the zoids’ There’s no bed
times. You can eat what you want.
And, if you follow the rules, I
might let you fire my pistol.
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The boys eyes light up like this is the coolest thing they
ever heard.
MALIK (CONT’D)
Rule number one - don’t talk to
anyone. No telling whose a Zoid.
Rule number two - keep yourself
sprayed with insecticide.
JAY
What is it?
MALIK
Don’t want you boys getting sick on
vacation.
Bobby SPRAYS his arms. Jay snatches the bottle from him.
JAY
My turn.
MALIK
Boys get your heads down.
MALIK (CONT’D)
Down! NOW!
JAY
Why are we hiding?
MALIK
Um... we got a Zoid following us.
Don’t make a sound.
The boys cover their mouths with their hands and giggle.
The cop car sidles up next to them. Malik glances across at it:
JAY
Dad!?
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MALIK
Shhhh Jay. Everything’s okay.
Malik turns the radio on. A 50s ROCKABILLY TUNE blares out.
MALIK (CONT’D)
Lets take the scenic route.
JAY (O.S.)
Dad can you tell us a war story?
Like all the battles you got in?
And have you ever driven a tank?
BOBBY (O.S.)
And have you ever jumped out of a
helicopter? No wait have you blown
up a helicopter?...
MALIK
I got to fill up and pick-up a few
things.
JAY
Can we come with you?
MALIK
You could, or you could stay right
here and open up your presents.
Malik takes out two gift-wrapped presents from his duffel bag
and hands them to the boys.
JAY BOBBY
Cool. Whoa. *
Bobby plays with his action man. Jay opens his pens but then
realizes he doesn’t have his sketchbook.
JAY BOBBY
AH! Aggghhh. *
Jay and Bobby turn to see the cleaner staring at them through
the smeared glass. Hard to discern if he’s benign or
sinister.
He lays down his items: red bull, energy bars and a map:
‘California & Nevada’. The cashier begins to scan the items.
MALIK
Full tank on number four.
CASHIER
Goin’ on a road trip?
MALIK
Something like that.
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CASHIER
Where you headin?
MALIK
North.
MALIK
I collect them.
MALIK
What was that?
CASHIER
What was what?
SLOW TRACK TOWARDS the large barn doors beneath the house.
MALIK
Jay, come up here.
MALIK
So you kept my letters.
JAY
Yeah.
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MALIK
I kept all your drawings too. Some
days I thought I’d never make it
back. Those drawings kept me going.
JAY
Dad why do you have pictures of
monsters?
MALIK
Monsters?
JAY
In your file.
MALIK
You’re not supposed to go through
my stuff.
JAY
That wasn’t a rule.
MALIK
It is now; rule number three.
And they’re not monsters. They’re
parasites.
JAY
What’s a parasite?
MALIK
It’s a tiny organism that lives
inside another creature.
JAY
Inside humans?
MALIK
Why don’t you get some sleep and we
can talk about it in the morning.
JAY
I gotta pee.
MALIK
How bad?
JAY
Real bad.
They exit and walk into the shrubland. After a few feet:
MALIK
Alright that’s enough.
They stop, unzip and begin to pee. Malik looks down at Jay.
MALIK
You getting any hair round your
pecker yet?
‘WOOP’. Red and blue lights throb across the landscape. Malik
turns and sees a STATE TROOPER pull up behind his Jeep.
MALIK
Jay get in the car.
BOBBY
Are we there yet?
JAY
Shut up.
Malik approaches.
MALIK
Evening officer.
TROOPER
You can stop right there.
TROOPER
What’s going on here?
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MALIK
(shrugs)
We’re on a road trip and stopped
for a toilet break.
TROOPER
And didn’t think to put your hazard
lights on?
MALIK
Oh. No one was on the road so...
TROOPER
I was on the road.
MALIK
My bad. I apologize.
Beat as the trooper squints and sees the boys inside the Jeep.
TROOPER
You say you’re on a road trip?
MALIK
Uh-huh.
TROOPER
At 3am?
MALIK
The early bird...
TROOPER
Put your hands on the trunk and
spread your legs.
MALIK
Shit, there ain’t no need for--
TROOPER
I got an ‘easy-way hard-way’ speech
prepared if you want to hear it.
Jay and Bobby nervously watch from inside the jeep. Malik
sees the fear in their eyes.
The Trooper finds Malik's Glock tucked in the back of his jeans.
TROOPER
You got a permit for this?
MALIK
Not on me. That against the law?
TROOPER
It’s a class A misdemeanor if the
firearm is loaded.
TROOPER
Do you have any other concealed
weapons on you?
MALIK
No sir.
The Trooper tucks the gun into his belt then taps Malik on
the shoulder. Malik turns.
MALIK
Look I’m a Marine, just came back
from tour.
Malik slowly takes out his Marine I.D from his wallet and
hands it to the Trooper.
MALIK
I’m taking my boys on a camping
trip in Tahoe. I only have them for
the weekend so I drive at night to
make the most of it.
TROOPER
Guess you should know better. I’m
placing you under arrest. Put your--
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MALIK
You’re arresting me for a
misdemeanor!?
TROOPER
And a traffic violation.
TROOPER
Woah, woah where you going?
MALIK
Let me just get my driver’s license
officer. You can write me a ticket
and we’ll be on our way.
The Trooper whips out his tazer and aims it at Malik’s back.
TROOPER
Stop right there.
Malik freezes.
TROOPER
Place your hands behind your head.
MALIK
Okay, chill, let’s just--
The Trooper fires his tazer, the probes dart into Malik's chest.
He collapses to his knees and his muscles lock up as 50,000 volts
surge through his body.
MALIK
AGGHHHHH--
The Trooper FIRES - the bullet tears through the peak of Malik’s
truckers cap sending it spinning into the air.
MALIK
BOYS!?
JAY
We’re okay.
QUICK SHOTS:
Malik GUNS the engine. The boys are adrenalized with fear.
MALIK
Sorry you had to see that boys.
BOBBY
I wanna go home.
MALIK
Arggghh, I know kid.
BOBBY
I wanna go home RIGHT NOW!
MALIK
We can’t go home Bobby!
JAY
Why can’t we go home?
JAY
Dad!? Why can’t we got home?
MALIK
Okay Bobby chill, chill. Come on,
take a breath. Nice and slow.
MALIK
That’s it. You too Jay, breathe
in... and out...
Jay and Bobby mimic their father. After a few calming breaths:
MALIK
Okay look. This is isn’t a road
trip. It’s a rescue mission.
MALIK
You know I’ve been away fighting.
What I couldn’t tell you was what
I’ve been fighting. Boys I’ve been
in a war that no one knows is going
on, fighting an enemy we weren’t
even sure existed. Something’s come
to our planet.
JAY
Aliens?
MALIK
Non-terrestrial microorganisms.
BOBBY
I haven’t seen any aliens.
MALIK
You have you just don’t know it.
They live inside us and use us as
hosts. Folks look like they’re
normal but they’re not, they’ve got
a tiny creature inside them.
BOBBY
There’s an alien inside of me?
MALIK
No, not unless you’re infected.
It’s spread through insects that’s
why we use the spray. Think of it
like a force field.
JAY
What happens if you’re infected?
MALIK
The parasite alters the neurochemisty--
(remembers his audience)
Okay you know that voice inside your
head that tells you right from wrong?
That’s called your conscience. The
creature stops that from working.
BOBBY
So you become.... a baddie?
MALIK
Exactly. Even if you’re a goodie.
JAY
How many people have been infected?
MALIK
A lot. We don’t know exactly. Could
be as many as half the population.
BOBBY
We gotta go back and save Mom.
Sombre beat. Malik doesn’t say anything. Jay connects the dots.
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JAY
Mom’s an alien.
MALIK
She’s got one inside her. She’s
still alive, just not in control.
MALIK
I’m gonna save her boys. Trust me.
But I got to get you safe first.
I’m taking you to a base that’s
still operational where there’s a
whole team of scientists working on
a cure. Hell, they might even have
found one already.
MALIK
Take my hand.
MALIK
We’re like the Three Musketeers.
Know who they were? The toughest
soldiers there ever was and there
were three of them. And they could
survive anything because they stuck
together.
The Trooper enters, reaches into his mouth, TEARS out a molar
and throws it out the window. He starts the car and drives away.
His one working eye doesn’t blink.
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The Trooper pulls into the parking lot. He takes his pump-
action shotgun from the car holster and exits.
He peers inside and sees Jay and Bobby fast asleep in the
backseat. Jay's head is pressed against the window.
MALIK
How’d you sleep?
JAY
Had a nightmare.
MALIK
I know the feeling.
Malik PATS the hood. Jay climbs up and sits next to him.
JAY
What you reading?
MALIK
I’m trying to become a
Neuroparasitology expert.
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JAY
What’s that?
MALIK
The study of mind control
parasites.
JAY
What’s this one do?
MALIK
Diplostomum pseudospathaceum. It
burrows inside a fish’s eye and
manipulates its behavior so it gets
itself eaten by a bird. Then it
reproduces inside the birds guts.
JAY
Are the aliens reproducing inside
Mom’s guts?
MALIK
God no. No, no, no. And even if
they did your mother’s got guts to
spare. She’s gonna be fine.
Malik shuts the file and steps down from the hood. He takes
out the map from his back pocket and lays it out and points
to a location in Nevada.
MALIK
So, our mission is to get here.
Groom Lake.
MALIK
And this is where we’re at.
JAY
And this is where we came from.
MALIK
Shit who needs GPS when I got you.
You just got yourself a job
navigating.
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MALIK
Woah, those muscles?
MALIK
You grew. Bobby and all.
MALIK (CONT’D)
Bet you got a big appetite to help
those muscles grow don’t you.
MALIK (CONT'D)
Bobby rise and shine. It’s time for
breakfast.
MALIK
Jay I thought you were drawing a
picture for me.
Malik TAPS a napkin. Jay takes out a pen and starts drawing.
MALIK
Bobby try to relax. Nothing bad’s
going to happen while I’m around.
And shit if this ain’t an adventure
I don’t know what is. When it’s all
over you’ll have one hell of a
story to tell your school buddies.
Just keep a smile on your face,
best disguise there is.
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MALIK
Besides. I drove halfway across the
state last night. That Trooper
ain’t gonna find us.
JAY
What if Bobby gets infected when we
ain’t looking. How will we know?
BOBBY
I ain’t turning into an alien.
JAY
You sure smell like one.
Bobby shoves Jay. Jay grabs Bobby’s action man and rips off
his head. Bobby CRIES OUT. Malik grabs their hands.
MALIK
Stop! He’s your kid brother.
Malik POPS the head back on and hands the action man to Bobby.
MALIK
So, y'all remember this place?
MALIK
We used to come here all the time.
Shit we lived only ten klicks up
the road.
Zilch from the boys. Malik SIGHS. Notices Bobby’s not eating.
MALIK
You’re not hungry Bobby?
BOBBY
My tummy hurts.
MALIK
That’s because you’re anxious.
You’ve got an overflow of cortisol
in your bloodstream which is
stimulating your stomach acid.
MALIK
It’s a perfectly natural reaction
to a stressful situation. But you
still gotta eat.
Malik picks up the maple syrup and oozes it onto Bobby’s plate.
Bobby and Jay exchange a glance.
MALIK
What, you don’t like maple syrup?
BOBBY
I’m not allowed.
JAY
Dylan says sugar makes him hyper.
MALIK
Well hell yeah it does, that’s the
damn point - gives you a buzz.
They tuck in and their unease melts away. Malik savors the
moment - almost a regular family meal.
MALIK
So Dylan a pain in the ass like
that - ‘don’t eat that sugar’?
BOBBY
He cooks macaroni and cheese and he
helps with homework and he lets me
drive his tractor...
JAY
Tells lame jokes. Has bad breath.
BOBBY
He takes us to Dave and Buster’s.
Remember he won a big bear playing
skee-ball?
MALIK
Skee-ball huh? My 4th grade science
teacher liked skee-ball. Turned out
to be a swinger. Now I’m not sayin’
there’s a correlation but it’s
worth thinking on.
BOBBY
What’s a swinger?
MALIK
The worst kind of aliens.
BOBBY
People still play skee-ball when
they’re aliens?
MALIK
They do lots of the same things we
do. They’re just like us, just
without the soul.
A 40s Jazz song plays on the car radio “It’s so Peaceful in the
Country”. Hattie MURMURS along, half-remembering the words.
HATTIE
You can leave.
The caretaker walks away. Hattie walks around the room and
inspects everything: empty cans of red bull in the trash, an
ashtray stacked with cigarette butts, empty cupboards.
Bobby races ahead holding his Action Man in the air. Jay and
Malik walk behind him.
MALIK
I’m getting a few supplies. Can you
hold fort and look after Bobby?
MALIK
Big responsibility. Kind of a
promotion. You up to it?
MALIK
Good man. I’ll be five minutes
tops. Just stay in the Jeep
Malik puts on his truckers cap and Oakleys and walks away.
JAY
Dad says I’m in charge so you got
to do what I say.
BOBBY
Well my blood is all anxious so I’m
not doing nothing.
JAY
Fine. You lay low and I’ll stand
watch.
Bobby lays down on the back seat and plays with his action man.
BOBBY
Jay what do you think it’s like
when there’s an alien inside you?
JAY
It’s like you can hear everything
and see everything, but you can’t
make a sound and can’t move. You’re
a prisoner inside your own body.
BOBBY
You think the Red Sox are aliens?
JAY
Who cares. Why do you even like the
Red Sox?
BOBBY
Dylan says they’re going to win the
season.
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JAY
If Dylan likes them they’re
definitely aliens. And everyone on
that dumb show he watches about
doctors got aliens inside them. And
his dad.
BOBBY
Grandpa’s an alien?
JAY
Yup. That’s why he smells funny.
She turns to the boys -- they sink in their seats and whisper:
BOBBY
I think she saw me.
JAY
Shhh. Just stay down.
Bobby picks up the insect repellent from the floor and sprays
himself - TSSsssss - empty.
JAY
(whispered)
Maybe she’s gone.
BOBBY
AHHHH!
JAY
Bobby!?
The woman BANGS on the passenger window. She has dried puke
down her shirt. Wild eyes.
FRENZIED WOMAN
Hey you got ten dollars!?
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Jay races down the aisles looking for Bobby. He bumps into a
PREPPER (40s), wearing a World War II gas mask. He stares at
Jay through the goggle eye holes.
JAY
Dad, dad, dad...
JAY
I lost Bobby.
MALIK
How the hell d’you do that? I told
you to stay in the car!
JAY
There was an alien... and Bobby got
scared... and he ran away... and...
MALIK
Okay, calm down, calm down.
(scans the aisles)
Fuck.
MALIK
Christ Bobby. What do you think
you’re doing running off like that?
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BOBBY
I got scared.
MALIK
That’s not a goddamn excuse!
MALIK
Look if you cry you’re just gonna
draw attention to us.
MALIK
Bobby...
Malik crouches down, takes off his Oakleys and puts them over
Bobby’s wet eyes.
MALIK
You gotta pull yourself together
kid, we’re behind enemy lines here.
You want us to get through this in
one piece you got to follow orders.
Understand?
Bobby nods. Malik lifts him up, places him in the trolley
then approaches Jay.
MALIK
This isn’t a game. You mess up
again we got problems.
JAY
Why are you angry at me when he’s
the dumb shit that ran off!?
MALIK
Because he’s just a kid.
JAY
So am I.
MALIK
No you’re not, not anymore. The
situation we’re in calls for you to
grow up real fast. Which means
looking after your little brother.
We’re a family and families take
care of each other. Understand?
JAY
Yessss.
MALIK
Alright. At ease Marine.
Malik takes off his truckers cap and places it on Jay's head.
Jay takes off the cap and studies the bullet hole.
QUICK SHOTS:
- Hot dogs.
- Six pack of beer.
- Two toothbrushes.
- Six pack of Red Bull.
- Burner cell.
- Box of 9mm’s rounds. *
- Bobby’s hand comes into frame and grabs transfer tattoos.
She enters her office sees a PAROLEE (40s), waiting for her. *
An insect is tattooed across his shaven skull. *
HATTIE
Stand.
HATTIE
Why are you in my office?
PAROLEE *
You told me to come at noon.
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HATTIE
And what time is it?
PAROLEE *
(glances at his watch)
So I’m early.
HATTIE
I don’t want you to be early.
I want you to be on time.
HATTIE
Oh you want to get real?
Hattie sits down at her desk, picks up the phone and dials.
She adopts a polite voice, almost transforming as a person:
HATTIE
Hi, is this Mrs González? ...
This is Hattie Hayes, yeah... so
have you seen Malik... Hmm, okay...
okay... thank you.
Hattie puts the phone down then takes out the photo of Malik
and his boys and pins it against a cork board of headshots.
She takes out her vape and inhales -- we hear the GURGLING...
CLOSE on the photo. Thick vapor enters frame and clouds our view.
JAY
How come Bobby gets to sit in the
front?
MALIK
Cos he ain’t lookin’ at me like I
took a giant dump in his pillow.
MALIK
Look at that. Brothers in arms.
MALIK
How’d you get that?
BOBBY
Fell out a tree.
JAY
Dylan told him not to climb it.
MALIK
(to Bobby)
But you went and did it anyway huh?
MALIK
That’s my boy.
JAY
He just wants to look like you.
MALIK
And what’s so bad about looking
like your old man?
Malik studies Jay through the rear-view. He opens his window and
puts his foot down. AIR GUSHES in.
MALIK
Hey Jay you think this can hit a
hundred?
BOBBY
Go, Dad!
MALIK
Come on...
The needle passes 85, 90, 95... teeters on a hundred. Jay grins.
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MALIK
Y'all ready to leave this planet?
MALIK
Four. Three. Two. One. Lift off--
They SHAKE WILDLY in their seats as they RUMBLE across the rough
ground. Dust clouds billow out from behind the Jeep.
MALIK
(yawns)
I feel like a nap all of a sudden.
JAY
Dad wake-up, wake-up!!
MALIK
What I miss?
BOBBY
I was driving.
MALIK
Yeah right, kids can’t drive.
MALIK
So we all friends again now?
JAY
Sure.
MALIK
Alright.
MALIK
What y'all don’t like Heavy Metal? *
MALIK
Come on - Megadeath? Guns’N’Roses?
Iron Maiden???
JAY
I like K-Pop.
MALIK
That’s why you’re in the back seat.
Jay looks outside and sees a small bee farm huddled around
grove of desert trees. A DOZEN BEEKEEPERS, looking like space
men, puff smoke around the beehive boxes.
JAY
Dad why doesn’t the government just
spray insecticide from planes?
MALIK
You know how many insects there are
in the world? Two billion. For
every human being. We can’t just
spray them to oblivion. Never mind
the ecological implications even if
we could. No pollinators means no
food, means we’d starve.
JAY
So how are they going to stop it?
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MALIK
I don’t know. I’m not a scientist,
just a Marine. And my mission’s not
to save the world. Just you two.
JAY
And Mom.
MALIK
Right, and Mom.
BOBBY
And Dylan?
MALIK
Mmmm, might be too late for Dylan.
JAY
You think there’s a part of mom
still fighting it?
MALIK
(laughs)
Sure sounds like your mother.
JAY
I think there was. I mean she’d
been acting real funny recently.
MALIK
Yeah?
JAY
Yeah like barfing all the time.
MALIK
Barfing huh. Like in the mornings?
JAY
Uh-huh. And eating weird stuff like
chicken nuggets and peanut butter.
JAY
Dad, what’s wrong?
MALIK
Just gotta check in with base.
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An Akita dog runs towards her but is yanked against it’s chain.
It BARKS at Hattie, possessed by some feral instinct.
Her phone RINGS. She answers and walks away from the dog.
INTERCUT:
MALIK
Hattie it’s me, Malik.
HATTIE
Malik! Where the hell you been?
MALIK
Hattie I’m sorry I --
HATTIE
You didn’t turn up for work.
MALIK
Listen --
HATTIE
You missed your psych-evaluation.
MALIK
I know, I --
HATTIE
You want to go back to prison?
MALIK
Hattie shut up and listen! I need
you to go check on Piya.
HATTIE
Check on Piya!? Tell me what’s
goin’ on and where you --
MALIK
I went and got my kids.
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HATTIE
What do you mean ‘got them’?
MALIK
They’re with me now.
HATTIE
Christ Malik that’s called
kidnapping, and if you’ve crossed
state lines that’s a federal offense.
MALIK
Didn’t kidnap them, I saved them.
Can’t explain it all now but
they’re safe.
HATTIE
Malik stop, stop talkin’. Tell me
exactly where you are right now!
MALIK
Can’t do that Hattie, you might be
one of them.
HATTIE
One of what!?
MALIK
Just go check on Piya, she’s in the
garage with Dylan.
HATTIE
Garage!? What!? Malik, have you
lost your mind?
He switches the phone off and looks at the boys staring at him
from the Jeep.
SLOW TRACK towards the large garage doors. TWO COPS watch as
a HANDYMAN uses a buzzsaw to cut through the chain lock.
CLOSE Jay's forearm where he’s drawn a skull with stars around
it, emulating Malik's tattoo.
Piya and Dylan, sit on the sofa talking to two FBI agents:
PIYA
He says he just wants to talk so I
let him in. But then he starts
acting really strange, shining a
flashlight in my eye.
SHEPARD
Hmm. Then what?
DYLAN
I try to get him to back off and he
throat punches me and then whips
out a fucking gun --
PIYA
And then he just explodes, never
seen him like that, told us not to
come near him, like he was afraid
of us even though he was holding
the gun. Tells us he’s going to
‘save’ the boys.
SHEPARD
And you weren’t expecting him?
PIYA
Well, no, I knew he was out but he
was supposed to come next week. See
the boys didn’t know he was in
prison. Malik felt they were too
young to come to terms with it.
PIYA
So we pretended he was still in the
military and he was going to tell
them when he was out.
HATTIE
Hi, I’m Malik's parole officer. I
called this in.
LANCE
Your office said he’d missed a
psych-eval?
HATTIE
That’s right, I was chasin’ him up
on it.
LANCE
And you waited twenty four hours?
HATTIE
Excuse me, Malik wasn’t deemed a
flight risk!
SHEPARD
Let’s not play the blame game. Miss
if you don’t mind stepping aside.
(gestures to the corridor)
We’ll talk when we’re done here.
A COP edges Hattie out the living room and closes the door on
her. She stands in the hallway looking at the closed door,
feeling wretched.
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LANCE
I’m Special Agent Lance Dunn from
the FBI Child Abduction Rapid
Deployment Team.
HATTIE
Um, Hattie Hayes. Shasta County *
Parole.
SHEPARD
And I’m just plain ol’ Shep.
(gestures)
Take a seat Hattie.
SHEPARD
Mind showing me the number he
called you on? *
SHEPARD
What cases you work Hattie?
HATTIE
Mostly drug’n’thug.
SHEPARD
So tell us what you know about our
kidnapper.
HATTIE
Grew up in foster care. Not all of *
it good. Staff Sergeant in the *
Marine Raider Regiment. Did ten *
tours in all. He was court- *
martialed for beating up his *
Captain. *
LANCE
Broke the guy’s jaw into five *
pieces... nerve damage... permanent *
scarring... had to be placed in a *
medically induced coma for a week. *
Did two years in Leavenworth *
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HATTIE
That’s right.
SHEPARD
And your experience with him?
HATTIE
He’d been out for nearly a month so
we only met four times. He was very
polite, called me ‘Ma’am’, not
everyone does that. He seemed like
a good guy. The only reason I
arranged the psych-test was because
he said he wasn’t sleeping.
LANCE
That was your assessment - ‘he
seemed like a good guy’?
HATTIE
Excuse me I’m a good judge of
character.
LANCE
Everyone thinks they’re a good
judge of character.
HATTIE
Well I turn over a hundred and
twenty clients a year, been doin’
this for eighteen years and
that’s...
(tries to do the math)
A lot of cases. And I got to look
each of ‘em in the eye and see if I
can find the good in them. That’s
what I do, that’s my job. Now Malik
has royally fucked up but... he’s a
good guy.
LANCE
Look it’s very sweet you’re one of
those ‘benefit of the doubt’ P.O’s
but by not putting out an arrest
warrant straight away you’ve
exponentially increased the risk of
these boys being hurt or killed.
HATTIE
Malik ain’t gonna hurt anyone,
least of all his boys.
LANCE
There’s a State Trooper in Tehama
who would beg to differ. Malik damn
near took his face off.
HATTIE
Is he gonna be okay?
LANCE
After reconstructive surgery.
SHEPARD
Lance go and see if tech’s finished
up, we’re headin’ out in five.
Lance exits.
HATTIE
What’s up with Johnny Utah?
SHEPARD
We think Malik could be a family
annihilator. That's when a parent--
HATTIE
I know what it is.
SHEPARD
But you don’t buy it?
SHEPARD
He sure ticks a lot of the boxes:
Separated from his wife. Isolated
from his children. Dishonorably
discharged from the one thing he
did well. No benefits, no
healthcare, no pension. A complete
and total loss of status. A few
years inside for all that to
ferment - the resentment, the rage.
Add PTSD into the mix and you got
yourself a ticking time bomb.
SHEPARD
He packed no clothes for the boys.
No toys. Not even a toothbrush. You
know he had a gun on him? What’s a
convicted felon doing buying a
pistol?
HATTIE
But... he loves his boys.
SHEPARD
Practically all annihilators are
considered loving fathers. That’s
why no one sees it coming.
SHEPARD
If we don’t stop him Malik Khan is
going to execute his children then
kill himself because that's the
ultimate revenge on his ex-wife.
SHEPARD
He calls again get in touch.
And with this chilling diagnosis echoing in our minds we cut to:
JAY
Hey you’re on my side.
BOBBY
No I’m not.
JAY
Ow.
MALIK
Quit it!
Beat.
BOBBY
Are we there yet?
MALIK
No.
BOBBY
Are we there soon?
MALIK
Bobby I need to think right. So
let’s all just quietly enjoy the
view.
Bobby brings his window down and holds his action man outside
so he ‘flies’ across the landscape.
MALIK
Bobby pull your hand in.
Bobby pulls his arm in but still dangles the action man out
the window. Malik watches at him through the rear-view.
MALIK
You drop that thing I ain’t turning
back.
BOBBY
It slipped.
MALIK
Well he’s gonna have to fend for
himself from now on.
It dawns on Bobby he won’t see his action man again. His lip
quivers. His face creases up and he begins to cry.
BOBBY
(sobbing)
Turn around.
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MALIK
Welcome to the school of life kid.
You fuck up you pay the price.
BOBBY
TURN AROUND! TURN ROUND!
MALIK
Whoa, woah, woah!!!
Malik, Jay and Bobby grip onto the roof handles. They’re too
terror-struck to make a sound. We hear the creak of metal,
anticipate the crash...
The Jeep miraculously falls back and SLAMS onto it’s other
wheels.
MALIK
You okay?
Jay and Bobby are too scared to speak. They simply nod.
MALIK
JESUS FUCKING CHRIST BOBBY YOU
NEARLY GOT US KILLED!
MALIK
You’re acting like a goddam baby!
When I tell you we’re leaving the
toy we’re leaving the damn toy!
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JAY
Jesus Dad, leave him alone.
MALIK
Bobby!? Fuck.
MALIK
BOOOOOBBBBBBYYYYYY!
Malik approaches and TACKLES him -- they collapse into the dirt.
Bobby SCREAMS, tries to wrestle free. Malik hugs him close.
BOBBY
(hysterical)
Get off me! I hate you, I hate you!
MALIK
Sorry Bobby, I fucked up, I’m sorry.
MALIK
It’s just survival instincts kid,
fight or flight, your body gets rid
of everything that might slow you
down. I’ve seen Navy Seals piss
themselves when the bullets start
flying. Toughest guys in the world.
Just means you’re still human.
MALIK
Come on Jay, Three Musketeers.
ZOE
You made it!
HATTIE
Sorry I’m late baby, you winning?
ZOE
We’re losing but I got two strikes.
HATTIE
Damn girl, look at you.
FRIEND (O.S.)
Zoe it’s your go.
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Zoe runs back to the lane. Hattie sits next to her husband, ERNIE
(50s), kind face that’s always on the verge of a smile.
ERNIE
Don’t worry I’ve been pretending to
be you so you’re actually doing
pretty good.
ERNIE
You okay?
She bobs her head side-to-side. Ernie swivels in his seat and
begins to massage her shoulders.
ERNIE
Jesus you got rocks under here?
Gonna break my fingers. Come on,
deep breaths.
ERNIE
Who got on the wrong side of you
today?
HATTIE
I got on the wrong side. Gave
someone the benefit of the doubt
that I shouldn’t have.
ERNIE
You can’t be right all the time.
HATTIE
Yeah but this guy could be bad
news.
ERNIE
How bad?
HATTIE
As bad as they come.
SHEPARD (PRE-LAP)
He's a desperate man willing to
take desperate measures:
Kidnapping, false imprisonment,
resisting arrest, aggravated
battery. We’ve put the AMBER alert
out but Malik Khan has a twenty-two-
hour lead on us and that’s a scary
head start so we need to tighten
the net real quick.
SHEPARD
This rescue operation extends to
all adjacent states. So make the
calls, scan every pixel of CCTV, at
every gas station and every ATM.
Piya surveys the room - it’s just as they left it. Clothes
scattered everywhere. Rumpled bedsheets. The imprint of their
heads on the pillows. *
SHEPARD (O.S.)
And remember he’s a highly trained
Marine who has had survival and
tactical training and multiple
combat experiences. Likely has
Complex PTSD and may exhibit
impulsivity and extreme aggression.
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Dylan enters. Piya looks up at him. Sees the tears in his eyes.
His heart is broken too.
He walks towards her. She stands and they embrace and cry
together. We HOLD on them grasping onto each other.
ERNIE (O.S.)
These the boys?
JAY
You shouldn’t have been so hard on
him. He’s just a kid.
JAY
And he just explodes if you provoke
him like that.
MALIK
Yeah, Bobby’s combustible like me.
But you’re something else.
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JAY
I ain’t tough if that’s what you
mean.
MALIK
Don’t know about that. You can keep a
level head when all hell’s breaking
loose. That’s a rare kind of tough.
That's why we need you around.
MALIK
Humble too. Girls’ll love that.
Learn to tell a few jokes and cook
a fancy meal you got yourself a
full deck of cards.
JAY
Dad, do you still love Mom?
MALIK
Sure I do. We had some tough years,
but we had plenty of good ones too.
Did I ever tell you how we met?
MALIK
A buddy of mine took me to a dance.
Now I’m not much of a dancer so I got
pretty loaded to loosen up. Must have
sunk a dozen whiskeys cos a few hours
later I'm all in. I mean you haven’t
seen anything like it, I’m the star
of the show. But then I try and do a
back flip and end up kickin’ her in
the face.
MALIK
Felt so bad I tended to her the
whole night getting ice to put the
swelling down. Must have said
something right because the next
evening we go on a date, ‘cept
because of her black eye we’re
getting funny looks, like I'm...
you know, beating her up. So
instead we drive to the lake and...
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MALIK
We had a good time.
MALIK
You know me and Dylan used to be
friends?
Jay nods.
MALIK
Would that Dylan have gotten with
her and pretended to be your
father? People change, but not that
much. Loyalty - that’s human.
MALIK
Jesus you see that.
JAY
What?
MALIK
Meteors.
JAY
I don’t see anything.
MALIK
What are you blind!? Must be a
hundred of ‘em.
MALIK
You see them explode?
JAY
(pretending)
Oh yeah. Must be a hundred.
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MALIK
We better move out. Only a matter of
hours before they’re in the ecosystem.
Malik stands and stops on the dying fire. Jay watches him.
MALIK
Sonovabitch.
JAY
You got a spare?
MALIK
Thousand dollar cars don’t come
with spares.
A FEW LOCALS dot the tables. PRO FOOTBALL plays on the TV.
Hattie enters and approaches an ALPHA, RAÚL (40s), at the *
counter.
HATTIE
Raúl?
(he turns)
Sorry I’m late.
RAÚL
Get in quick, they’re ‘bout to
close up.
HATTIE
Whatever he’s having.
(as she sits)
Thanks for coming.
RAÚL
Not a problem. So you said...
(quietly)
Malik kidnapped his boys?
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HATTIE
Yup. Pulled a gun on Piya and her
husband, tied them up and took the
boys. We don’t know where he is or
what he’s planning to do.
HATTIE (CONT’D)
I’m trying to figure out what
triggered him. You guys were close
right?
RAÚL
Yeah. Very. Been through hell and
back together. He was a good guy
that was handed a raw deal.
HATTIE
What kind of Marine was he?
RAÚL
Malik was a fucking badass. Excuse
my French. But he also knew how to
turn it on and off.
HATTIE
What about the assault? *
RAÚL
That was out of character. But you
got to take into account what we
were going through. We’d been in
three different firefights that *
day, seen two of our buddies get *
ripped up, it’s 120 degrees, we’re
gettin’ eaten alive by bugs. The
stress was just... unimaginable.
RAÚL (CONT’D)
We found some children in the *
wreckage. Our dip shit Captain made *
an offhand comment and Malik *
exploded. Something snapped. *
(he shrugs)
Then his fucking world came *
tumbling down. *
HATTIE
Did he ever mention Piya, or the
divorce, was he resentful?
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RAÚL
Resentful? No. He was the one who
asked for it. Told her to get on
with her life. *
HATTIE
Huh. You mentioned some letters?
Raúl digs into his backpack and hands Hattie some letters.
RAÚL
So we kept in touch but a year ago
I get these.
RAÚL (CONT’D)
Pretty out there stuff. Obviously I
thought he was having some kind of
breakdown so I wrote back telling
him to get help. Never got a reply.
HATTIE
How’d I miss this?
She shakes her head, trying to fathom where she went wrong.
HATTIE (CONT’D)
Mind if I take these?
HATTIE (CONT’D)
You think he’d ever hurt his boys?
RAÚL
The man adores them. But...
(gestures at the letters)
That’s way above my head.
Malik's jeep ROARS down a dark desert road. The burst front
tire means the car shudders and leans to one side.
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Malik's eyes scan the landscape for refuge. Jay studies the
map shaking wildly on his lap. Somehow Bobby sleeps through
this in the back seat.
JAY
Dad if half the world are aliens
how come nothing’s been on TV?
MALIK
They don’t want to create panic.
JAY
So the president knows?
MALIK
He probably got turned first. Sure
would explain a lot.
JAY
Has anyone else seen one of these
meteors?
JAY
Wouldn’t there be videos online?
Wouldn’t NASA know about them?
MALIK
They take that stuff down.
JAY
Why would they take it down?
MALIK
(taps on the map)
Jay you’re supposed to be the
navigator remember. I’m the
commanding officer. Leave the big
picture stuff to me.
CLANG! The car sinks down further as the tire rips away
leaving the wheel rim to SCRAPE VIOLENTLY across the ground.
MALIK
You think I’m making this up?
JAY
No.
MALIK
You don’t look so sure.
JAY
It’s just... a lot to take in.
Malik takes out his penlight, grabs Jay's head and shines it
in his eye. Jay tries to wriggle free.
JAY
Get off me.
MALIK
Stay still.
BOBBY
SSSSTTTOOOOOOPPPP!
MALIK
Pack the gear up and wait here.
Malik walks up the path sweeping his Maglite across the yard.
He flips the lights on and sees a key hanger by the front door.
GRANT
Easy now.
GRANT
Two boys, eight and ten. A thirty
eight-year-old male. Armed and
dangerous, driving a blue Cherokee
with California plates; my camera
couldn't pick out the plates but if
I were a betting man...
MALIK
Our car broke down.
GRANT
So you were fixing to take mine?
MALIK
I wasn’t looking to hurt anyone.
GRANT
That gun you in your hand loaded?
MALIK
Yeah.
GRANT
So there’s that.
MALIK
You in the military?
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GRANT
Not the one you’re talking ‘bout.
MALIK
I did five tours.
GRANT
Yeah? Whose side were you on?
MALIK
The side that awarded me the bronze
star.
GRANT
(laughs)
You can put whiskers on snake and
call it a kitty don’t mean it ain’t
gonna bite.
MALIK
Look I can just leave, walk to the
next town.
GRANT
You coulda done that but you chose
to come in here. Onto my property.
And that’s a helluva mistake when
you got a ten thousand dollar
reward on your head.
GRANT
Then again, can’t say I hold much
esteem for the federal government.
So why don’t you put your gun away
and we can talk like men. Maybe
there’s a way we both come out of
this on top.
A tense beat. Then Malik tucks the gun in the back of his jeans.
Grant stands and steps forward into the light - his skin is
ravaged with clusters of tiny holes, like a beehive, inside
each cavity yellow larvae writhe to the surface. He lets out
a HORRIFYING WARPED SOUND.
Malik darts back, runs into the living room -- jumps over the
couch -- Grant FIRES - BOOM - feathers erupt from the
cushions. The HI-FI system is hit too - it turns on and ‘YACHT *
ROCK’ plays from the speakers. *
Malik lands on the floor with a THUD. His gun scatters away.
Grant LOADS two more buckshots and PACES towards the sofa--
Malik scans the floor for his Glock - sees it several feet away.*
He goes to reach it but sees Grant's shadow approaching...
And swings - the base SMASHES into Grant's face. Grant drops
to the floor like a marionette that’s had it’s strings cut.
Jay and Bobby stare at the ranch house from the Jeep.
BOBBY
You think dad shot an alien?
JAY
How the hell am I supposed to know
I’m sitting right here with you!?
BOBBY
What are you doing?
JAY
Calling base.
Jay exits the jeep and paces on the gravel path outside.
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INTERCUT:
HATTIE
Malik!?
JAY
It’s Jay, his son. Is this base?
HATTIE
Base!? No Jay, my names’s Hattie
Hayes, I’m your father’s parole
officer, where are --
JAY
What’s a parole officer?
HATTIE
They help people who come out of
prison. Is your dad with --
JAY
My dad was in prison?
HATTIE
Yes he was, for two years.
JAY
Why was he in prison?
HATTIE
Jay I need to know where you are
right now.
JAY
I don’t know. We entered Nevada a
few miles back. Why was he in
prison?
HATTIE
How many miles was that?
JAY
How do I know you’re not an alien?
Car lights glare, Jay turns - sees the Crown Vic approaching.
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HATTIE
Alien? Jay listen, you’ve been
kidnapped, Your Mom is terribly--
JAY
Mom. Is my Mom okay?
HATTIE
Yes she is but she wants you to come--
The Crown Vic pulls up beside the jeep. Jay hangs up.
MALIK
Boys get in.
Bobby exits the Jeep and dives in the Crown Vic. Jay hesitates.
JAY
Did you shoot an alien?
MALIK
Sure I did. A mean ugly one.
JAY
How’d you know it was one of them?
MALIK
You want to go and see for yourself?
JAY
You’re bleeding.
MALIK
Flesh wound. I’ll fix it up later,
Got to get some miles under us.
JAY
But you’re hurting real bad.
MALIK
I’m fine.
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Malik RETCHES. He quickly opens his door and VOMITS onto the
road. The Crown Vic RUMBLES onto a rocky embankment...
Malik swerves back onto the road and brakes. He looks at Jay.
Puke-tears in his eyes, spittle hanging from his mouth.
MALIK
Think it’s time you learnt to drive.
MALIK
It’s automatic. You can’t fuck it up.
Jay quickly exits the car and dashes to the driver’s side.
Malik scoots over to the passenger seat.
Jay enters, clips his seatbelt and grips hold of the wheel,
which he can barely see over. Malik points at the pedals.
MALIK
Right - accelerate. Left - brake.
MALIK
D’s - drive.
MALIK
Whoa, whoa, whoa!
MALIK
Okay, split the difference.
Jay puts his foot down firmer, building to 20... 30... 40.
MALIK
Attaboy. You got it.
MALIK
(mumbled)
You’re doing great Jay. You’re
doing great.
*
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A rock smashes the door window. Jay's hand reaches in and unlocks
it. He enters and sweeps the flashlight across the house - it’s
part-gutted - but it’s spacious and there are beds.
Jay turns the flashlight off and lays down next to Bobby.
He takes out the burner cell and flips it open, the blue LCD
screen illuminates his face. He calls Hattie...
A door opens. Lance, Shepard and FOUR AGENTS exit. They walk
down the corridor, unaware of Hattie. Hattie stands.
HATTIE
Agent West.
They stop and turn. Shepard mumbles to the other agents who
continue walking. He then walks towards Hattie, conjuring a
polite smile as he approaches.
SHEPARD
How’d you get in the building?
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HATTIE
I know people.
SHEPARD
Well there was no need to come all
this way. Thank you for relaying
all the information, we’re heading
down there now, I’ll update you --
HATTIE
I want to go with you.
SHEPARD
What? Why? You know what - doesn’t
matter, you can’t come.
HATTIE
Shep, please. I feel responsible and
it's killing me and I want to see
this through.
SHEPARD
Hattie you’ve done your job, let me do
mine. We appreciate your contribution.
HATTIE
Look I think Malik has an
undiagnosed psychotic disorder.
SHEPARD
You’re a psychiatrist now?
HATTIE
Nope. But I spoke to a Marine buddy
of his who was sent these.
Hattie rummages into her bag, digs out Malik’s letters and
hands them to Shepard.
HATTIE
His son asked me if I was an alien.
Maybe Malik’s not out to hurt his
boys. Maybe he thinks he’s on a
mission to save them.
SHEPARD
Maybe. Maybe makes him even more
dangerous.
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SHEPARD (CONT'D)
Imagine: A cashier at a 7-Eleven
gives him a funny look, Malik
thinks he’s an alien so he shoots
him. Thinks his kids are aliens so
he shoots them too. Doesn’t change
what I need to do.
HATTIE
Surely it changes how you engage him?
SHEPARD
Look I’ve been doing this for
twenty eight years. Used to head up
the hostage negotiation. I’m not
going to antagonize the man.
HATTIE
I’m not doubting you know how to do
your job. But I am saying that
Malik called me. And his son called
me. So I am an asset to you. Why
not just bring me along for the
ride. And if you need me, I'm
there. If you don’t, I just sit in
the backseat, keep my mouth shut
and learn from the best.
A Dodge Ram pulls up outside. TWO MEN exit and approach the *
house. This is DWIGHT MCKINLEY (30s), skinny, wild curly *
hair, rectangular glasses. And KURT MCKINLEY(40s), gym-toned, *
drinking a protein shake. *
KURT
Hey, whose is that piece of shit
out --
DWIGHT
Dad!?
GRANT
Arrrggghhh, that motherfucker.
BOBBY
Is dad turning into an alien?
JAY
Why?
BOBBY
He smells funny.
JAY
No, he’s just wounded.
Jay and Bobby exit and survey the ravaged ghost town. It
looks like the vestiges of civilization after the apocalypse.
They see the Crown Vic passenger door ajar. Fragments of food
scatter the ground.
They approach the car and see Malik's duffel bag torn to shreds.
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BOBBY
You think aliens ate our food?
JAY
Probably.
BOBBY
Aliens like Pop Tarts?
JAY
Everyone likes Pop Tarts Bobby.
MONTAGE (improvised):
- Windows are smashed with rocks, just for the hell of it.
The Crown Vic enters frame and Jay attempts to park, crawling
diagonally across two spaces, one wheel mounts a curb, then
it abruptly brakes.
Jay turns off the ignition and hands Bobby ten dollars.
JAY
You get us something to eat, I’ll get
medicine. Meet back here in five.
BOBBY
What about aliens?
JAY
Bobby you got ten dollars. You can
literally buy anything you want.
You’re telling me you’re not going
to because of a six-year-old alien?
DEXTER
Howdy. What can I do you for?
JAY
My daddy got bit by a dog and...
there’s a tooth stuck in him.
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DEXTER
Son that sounds kinda serious. You
want me to call an ambulance?
JAY
No! It’s not that bad. Just...
medium bad. He can fix it.
DEXTER
Well if you say.
Dexter comes around the counter and picks out a few items.
DEXTER
I guess he’ll want some Tylenol for
the pain. Some antibiotic cream to
stop infection and some dressing.
Suggest y'all go to a hospital to
pull out the tooth.
Dexter walks back to the counter and dials the items into the
till and places them in a paper bag.
DEXTER
That’ll be nine forty.
Jay flicks through Malik’s wallet and hands Dexter ten dollars.
JAY
Keep the change.
Dexter takes the ten and notices dried blood on the money.
DEXTER
Hope he feels --
Jay turns the ignition. SPORTS NEWS plays from the radio.
He changes station: CLASSICAL, changes again:
RADIO ANNOUNCER
...a multi-agency task force are
looking for them. The FBI describes
Malik Khan as a hundred and eighty
pound Pakistani-American standing
five feet, ten inches with black
hair, brown eyes.
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RADIO ANNOUNCER
Khan served two years in prison and
is considered armed and dangerous--
DEXTER (O.S.)
You ain’t driving that are you son?
Jay turns off the radio and sees Dexter standing by the door.
JAY
No way, kids can’t drive. I’m
waiting for my brother. Bye.
Jay presses the window switch, it HUMS upward - Dexter stalls it.
DEXTER
Say you ain’t in any kind of
trouble are you?
JAY
Nope.
DEXTER
Cos you can tell me if you are.
JAY
But I ain’t.
DEXTER
That your brother?
JAY
I got two. Great talking to you.
TIGHT ON MALIK. Tiny beads of sweat dot his face. His eyes
jitter beneath his eyelids. Inner turmoil.
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Shepard notices.
SHEPARD
Nervous flier?
HATTIE
When that happens.
HATTIE
Shep. If Malik wants to kill his
family why'd he tell me to check on
Piya, why let her go?
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SHEPARD
Sometimes the revenge is greater if
they survive.
Hattie opens her eyes. Chilled by the idea. She turns to him.
HATTIE
You seen that happen before?
SHEPARD
Silver Springs, Nevada. A perfect
couple. Straight out of catalogue.
They had two daughters. Lilly and
Nadia. They’d experienced a few
knockbacks during the crash; his
building firm went bankrupt, their
house was foreclosed, moved into a
motel. And he got into huge debts,
just unpayable sums of money. Then
the wife got promoted and she was
sustaining the family. Guess that
was one two many indignities for
him so one day he takes the girls
to a lake where they used to camp,
shoots them then kills himself.
HATTIE
Oh my.
SHEPARD
He’d left the wife a note saying he
was ‘saving’ his daughters. Same
thing Malik said to Piya.
SHEPARD
I didn’t sleep for a week after
that one.
HATTIE
How’s your sleep now?
SHEPARD
I get my four hours. Most days.
SHEPARD
Should be there soon.
BOBBY
You think dad’s going to be okay?
JAY
I don’t know.
JAY
Bobby I think we need to call Mom.
BOBBY
But... she’s an alien.
JAY
What if she ain’t? What if Dad just
made it up? What if he made all of
it up?
BOBBY
You’re teasing.
JAY
Think about it - aliens taking over
the world!?
BOBBY
You just said they ate our pop
tarts.
JAY
You think aliens eat pop tarts!?
Are you an idiot? *
JAY
Ow!
Jay SLAPS Bobby. Bobby SCREAMS OUT, yanks Jay's hair. They
SCUFFLE, exchanging a flurry of wild slaps and punches. Jay
shoves Bobby backwards -- he SLAMS onto the ground and CRACKS
his skull on the dirt.
Bobby touches the back of his head and looks at his fingers,
there’s blood.
JAY
Bobby you okay?
JAY
Bobby!
Jay rises and chases after him. He runs around the burnt out
houses--
He turns back -- Kurts large hands grab hold of him and pull
him behind a tree.
KURT
It’s okay, we’re here to save you.
BOBBY
JAAAA --
Jay enters. Sees Malik laying down, his eyes half open. Malik
speaks quietly, his body drained of energy.
MALIK
Hey Jay.
Jay doesn’t respond. Just stares at Malik with new eyes. Sees
a different man than the one he knew.
MALIK
Where’ve you been? I was worried.
JAY
I got some things for you.
MALIK
You can drive all by yourself now?
MALIK
Look at you.
JAY
Are you going to be okay?
MALIK
Well it ain’t bleeding any more, so
its probably just stuck in some
muscle tissue. I’ll live.
MALIK
Come here.
MALIK
What’s wrong?
JAY
I know you’ve been lying to us.
You weren’t on a secret mission all
those years. You were in prison.
Jay holds back tears. Malik closes his eyes. Can’t bear to
watch.
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JAY
And you’ve been lying about aliens
coming down.
MALIK
That’s not the whole truth Jay.
JAY
Stay away from me!
Malik stops.
MALIK
Okay. Okay. Listen. FUCK.
(gathers thoughts)
You’re right. I was in prison. I
hid that from you. I thought it’d
be easier if you didn’t know, but
maybe it was just easier for me.
I’m sorry.
MALIK
Jay listen, I’ve been really...
confused. Something ain’t right up
here.
(taps his head)
Understand?
JAY
You’re lying. You’ve been lying
this whole time!
KURT (O.S.)
(from outside)
MALIK KHAN.
KURT
We’re here to arrest you for the
abduction of your two sons, the
assault of Joseph McKinley and the
theft of his motor vehicle. Come out
with your hands above your head.
A door BANGS OPEN. Dwight spins and FIRES at it with his Vector -
- a fusillade of bullets PUNCTURE the exterior.
Malik grabs Jay, pulls him down onto the floor and covers him
from the DEAFENING GUNFIRE --
The gun fire stops. Malik and Jay lay low, PANTING. Malik
looks above. No bullets have penetrated their house.
MALIK
Stay down.
Malik rises, peers out the window, sees the two men with Bobby.
Bobby runs from Kurt and sprints between the clearing of two
houses.
KURT
Fucking ASSHOLE! You want to shoot
a ten-year-old boy!? Get your
skinny ass in there.
MALIK
Where’s my gun?
JAY
(shrugs)
In the car?
MALIK
Keys?
Jay takes the keys from his pocket and throws them to Malik.
MALIK (CONT’D)
Curl up in a ball, put your hands
over your head and stay here. Okay?
Malik turns around, closes his eyes, breathes slow deep breaths.
WE SLOWLY ZOOM in on Malik as he:
OUTSIDE
Malik flips the seat back to avoid the bullets which SHATTER
the windshield, TEAR into the roof, RIP up the seats. The car
swirls with plastic, glass and foam debris.
OUTSIDE
The car turns -- but then stalls. Steam RASPS from the bonnet.
On the other side - Malik opens the door and crawls out and
hides behind the wheel. He checks his gun’s magazine - one
bullet. Closes it. Pulls the slide. Waits. Hoping for...
Jay exits the house and charges at Dwight - he grabs onto his
gun, tries to wrest it free. Dwight pulls Jay into headlock.
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Without breaking stride Malik comes into frame and picks him up.*
CUT TO: *
MALIK
Bobby what’s the biggest you can
count to?
BOBBY
(guessing)
Three hundred.
MALIK
Well I want you to get to six
hundred. Can you do that for me
kid?
DWIGHT
HEY ASSHOLE. I GOT YOUR BOY!
MALIK
Raise your hands.
MALIK
Jay get back in the house.
MALIK
Why you trying to shoot me?
DWIGHT
You attacked our daddy.
MALIK
He shot at me.
DWIGHT
In his home!
MALIK (CONT’D)
That water in that flask?
Dwight nods. Takes the flask from his belt and holds it up.
MALIK
Mind opening it up, please.
Dwight untwists the lid. Malik takes the flask from him and
thirstily gulps it down.
MALIK
Now take your shirt off.
SERIES OF SHOTS:
Jay sits on the floor with his head hung between his knees.
MALIK
You okay?
Jay nods.
MALIK (CONT’D)
I’m gonna make this right Jay.
I promise.
Malik drives. Jay and Bobby in the back. A leaden silence hangs
in the air. Aftershock reverberating through each of them.
MALIK
How’d you like these new wheels
boys? Bit of an upgrade huh?
BOBBY
Were they aliens?
JAY
Yeah Bobby. Evil aliens.
WIDE - a dust covered gas station and diner, sit next to each
other on a desolate desert highway.
MALIK
...I don’t know what else to say...
I’m sorry... I can’t... not now...
I know... Piya, I gotta go.
Malik puts the phone down. Stands there for a moment and
stoically lets the emotion course through him.
MALIK
Two buffalo burgers and two cokes.
MALIK
So I got good news and bad news.
The good news is that Mom and Dylan
have been cured. Just got off the
phone with them now.
MALIK
Told me they can’t wait to see you.
And they love you more than
anything in the world.
BOBBY
What’s the bad news?
MALIK
Bad news is I gotta keep fighting.
MALIK
Now don’t worry, one of the servers
here is a buddy of mine.
MALIK
He’s working undercover. Gonna keep
an eye on you both. You just stay
put and someone’s going to come and
get you. Can you do that?
MALIK
Three Musketeers.
MALIK
I want you to know I’m real proud
of you both. Bobby you got the
heart of a lion. And Jay... you
keep that level head when all
hell’s breakin’ loose.
Malik stands, takes out some money from his pocket - ten
dollars and handful of quarters - and lays them on the table.
MALIK
This is for ice cream. Bobby you
can have as much as you damn want.
MALIK
Look after your brother.
Malik pick up the pharmacy bag, exits and walks across the
forecourt to a restroom.
JAY
Bobby. You know I love you?
SERIES OF SHOTS:
Malik catches his reflection. Stops. Sees his red raw skin.
He leans against the sink. Grips tight onto the ceramic rim.
His body trembles.
A police officer enters the truck stop diner and sees Bobby *
alone at the table.
MALIK
I told you to look after your
brother!
Jay rises.
JAY
He isn’t the one that needs looking
after.
PILOT
I have visual on suspect driving a
Dodge Ram license - Nevada plate,
November, Lima eight, two, seven.
Driving on Highway twenty five,
heading south at a speed of ninety
miles an hour.
SHEPARD
The other boy in there?
PILOT (O.S.)
Yes he’s in the vehicle.
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SHEPARD
Thank God.
(into his HT radio)
We’re about three miles up the
rear. Keep that birdy nice and
close. Soon as he thinks his next
move I want to know about it.
SHEPARD
Noah I want a Bear to stop him in
case he goes cross-country.
MALIK
Fuck.
MALIK
Jay come up here.
MALIK
Hold on.
Malik’s Ram bursts into the bottom of the frame. Dust billows *
out behind the vehicle, like a rocket charging through the *
atmosphere. *
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JAY
Dad, stop!
Jay reaches down and pushes the gear stick into reverse.
The Ram SKIDS -- a mountainous cloud of dirt is thrown up
behind them.
Malik pries Jay's hands away and pushes it back into drive. *
MALIK
Whose side you on?
JAY
Yours.
Malik quickly jerks the wheel, the bonnets skim each other... *
JAY
Dad. I want to go home.
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The sun skirts the horizon. The police lights blink in the
twilight.
The FBI, SWAT team, cops and highway patrol exit their *
vehicles, load their weapons and aim at Malik. *
HATTIE
Shepard what’s with all the guns?
SHEPARD
Standard procedure Hattie, we’re
facing an armed and dangerous
individual.
HATTIE
There’s a ten-year-old boy in
there.
SHEPARD
That’s who I’m worried about.
(talks into his HT radio)
Noah I’m going to engage.
Shepard exits.
LANCE
Let Shep do his thing.
INTERCUT:
SHEPARD
Hi Malik I’m Special Agent Shepard
West. I want to work with you to
find a peaceful resolution to this.
We’ve kept the news crews away...
MALIK
Listen asshole you want to point
that hardware some place else I got
my boy in here.
SHEPARD
You’re right. Let me do that now.
SHEPARD
I’m sorry about that Malik. But now
you do the same for me. Surrender
your weapon so we can both talk on
the same level.
MALIK
Insult my intelligence again I’ll
be tempted to do somethin’ real
stupid in your direction.
MALIK
Hattie’s here?
SHEPARD
Yes she is. She wants you to
know...
MALIK
Put her on.
SHEPARD
Malik she’s not trained for this
kind of...
MALIK
Asshole put her on.
HATTIE
Malik?
MALIK
I dug myself in pretty deep here
Hattie.
HATTIE
I can see that but there is a way
out of this.
MALIK
Not for me. I deserve what’s
coming.
HATTIE
I’m sorry I’m going to have to
disagree with you there Malik.
There are things going on inside
your head you’re not in control of.
Your brain has played a horrible
trick on you. And everyone’s going
to take that into account. In fact,
given what you’ve been through I
think you’ve been pretty damn
heroic. Risking everything to save
your boys. And now they need you
more than ever.
HATTIE
I think if we do this right then
you will always be a hero to your
sons.
HATTIE
Wait, no!
Malik leans his gun out the window and blindly FIRES a round -
- it kicks the salt by the agent’s feet.
MALIK
You trying to fuck me Hattie?
HATTIE (O.S.)
No Malik, wait--
WIDE: The snipers behind the Ram walk back toward their Humvee.
The light is dying now, darkness closing in. Malik and Jay
are illuminated by the pulsating blue and red lights of the
vehicles that surround them.
JAY
Dad!? Dad what’s wrong?
MALIK
I’m seeing things that aren’t there
Jay. I’ve got demons inside me.
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Jay stares at Malik’s gun and deep in his gut he fears what
we fear; That Malik intends to shoot himself.
MALIK
You better run off now Jay. Go home
to your mother and Dylan.
JAY
I’m not going without you.
MALIK
Get out of the car.
JAY
No. Not without you. Families take
care of each other.
MALIK
Well I didn’t take care of you. I
put you in danger. You trusted me
and I lied to you. LOOK AROUND YOU.
MALIK
Look around you. LOOK WHERE I GOT
US TO!
JAY
Yeah but it was one hell of story.
JAY
And it was the demons that made you
do those things. And maybe we can
get them out.
A tender moment opens up. Jay slowly puts his hand onto
Malik's and gently takes the gun away.
JAY (O.S.)
Get back!!!
MALIK
HEY! OVER HERE.
The sniper trains his gun on Malik, the laser floats on his torso.
MALIK
Jay put the gun down.
Jay keeps his gun trained on the sniper... who keeps his gun
trained on Malik. A bullet could fire at any moment...
JAY
They’re going to shoot you.
MALIK
No they’re not Jay, I’m giving up.
Jay puts the gun on the ground and sprints towards his father.
Jay enters the circle of light and embraces Malik. Hugs him
as tight as a child can hug their parent.
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T H E E N D