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IELTS 2024

Writing Task
1 & Task 2:
A complete
Study Material
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Contents
Note For the Students  3

About the eBook  4

Academic Writing Task - 1 5

Academic Writing Task - 2 30

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A NOTE TO THE
STUDENTS

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ABOUT THE eBOOK

T
ake your IELTS writing section preparation to the next level using our, “IELTS: Writing Task -
Complete Study Material,” carefully designed to help you with the essential skills for success
in the IELTS Academic Writing section. This resource is structured around two key compo-
nents, providing an in-depth study and research of ‘IELTS Academic Writing 1 - Data Interpretation’
and ‘IELTS Academic Writing 2 - Essays.’.

IELTS Academic Writing 1 - Data Interpretation:


Often judged as one of the most trickiest and confusing sections of the IELTS examination, stu-
dents face a lot of challenges while learning the data interpretation section of the IELTS examina-
tion. But do not worry. Explore detailed explanations and strategies for tackling questions related
to Bar graphs, Line graphs, Combination graphs, Pie charts, and Process charts using our ebook.
Each section not only breaks down the complex questions but also teaches you the methodology
to approach them confidently in the exam.

IELTS Academic Writing 2 - Essays:


Master the art of essay writing through our exploration of five essay types. Whether you’re strug-
gling with Opinion essays, Discussion essays, Solution essays, Direct question essays, or Advan-
tages and disadvantages essays, our ebook has you covered. Each essay type is accompanied
by tips and tricks, providing you with all the necessary steps that help you navigate through the
complexities of IELTS essay writing. These tips are designed to enhance your understanding of
the specific requirements for each essay type, helping you to articulate your thoughts effectively.

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ACADEMIC WRITING

TASK - 1

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SET - 1
ACADEMIC WRITING 1 - DATA INTERPRETATION - TABLE-BASED

The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and
2005 with estimated figures for 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Percentage of Land Percentage of Land Percentage of Land


Country
Covered by Forest 1990 Covered by Forest 2005 Covered by Forest 2015
Australia 21.9 21.3 20
New Zealand 28.8 31 32.3
Brazil 62.2 57.2 53.5
Chile 20.4 21.5 22

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Assessment English

TIPS AND TRICKS FOR ANALYZING THE DATA

Tips and Tricks for Data Analysis


Aspect of Analysis 1990 (%) 2005 (%) 2015 (%)

Observe changes over 15


Identify Trends Look for trends over time. Note any significant shifts.
years.
Comparisons Between Compare percentages Analyze variations between Identify disparities in forest
Countries across countries for each countries for each year. cover.
Calculates the rate of Assess the speed of envi- Examine fluctuations in for-
Rate of Change
change from 1990 to 2015. ronmental transitions. est coverage.
Highlighting Significant Note any remarkable shifts Explore notable changes in
Identify pivotal years.
Changes in forest coverage. the forest landscape.
Explore similarities or dif-
Regional Patterns Group countries by region. Analyze regional behaviours
ferences within regions.
Summarize key findings. Analyze implications of Conclude with insights into
Drawing Conclusions
Discuss implications of environmental changes. environmental scenarios.

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SOLUTION
The data given in the table illustrates the proportion of land that is covered by forests in four different countries,
Australia, New Zealand, Brazil and Chile between the years 1990 and 2005.

Going through the data, it can be comprehended that countries New Zealand and Chile have exhibited an
increase in the proportion of forest land. The forest area of New Zealand was initially 28.8% in the year 1990
but it increased to 31% in 2005 mounting to an overall increase of 2.2%. On the other hand, the proportion of
forests in Chile rose from 20.4% in 1990 to 21.5% in 2005 accounting for an increase of 1.1%.

It can also be understood that the forest proportions of Australia and Brazil have diminished. Although Australia
had a forest proportion of 21.9% in 1990, it was reduced to 21.3% in 2005 and is also estimated to reduce to
20.4% by 2015. Similarly, the forest proportion of Brazil fell from 62.2% in 1990 to 57.2% in 2005 marking a
reduction of 5%. It is also projected to drop to 53.5% in 2015.

Overall, while both New Zealand and Chile demonstrated an increase in the forest proportion, there was a con-
siderable reduction in the forest proportion in both Australia and Brazil. The future estimates also show that
the same trend would be followed.

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SET - 2
ACADEMIC WRITING 1 - DATA INTERPRETATION - BAR DIAGRAMS

The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize
the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least
150 words.

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Assessment English

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TIPS AND TRICKS TO ANALYZE THE DATA

Analytical Aspect Tips and Tricks

Begin by obtaining a general overview of the data. Look at the provided table to understand
Overview of Data
the estimated maximum population of Asian elephants in various countries over the years.

Identify trends in the population changes over the years for each country. Note whether the
Identifying Trends
elephant population is increasing, decreasing, or remaining relatively stable.

Compare the maximum elephant populations between different countries in both 1997
Comparing Countries and 2004. Look for significant changes or patterns, and note any countries with noticeable
declines or increases.

Identify years with substantial changes in elephant populations. Investigate reasons behind
Years with Significant
these changes, considering factors like conservation efforts, environmental conditions, or
Changes
human activities.

Calculate the percentage change in elephant populations for each country between 1997
Calculating Percentage
and 2004. This provides a quantitative measure of the magnitude of change, aiding in the
Changes
interpretation of trends.

Look for regional patterns in Asian elephant populations. Analyze if there are common
Understanding Regional
trends or if specific regions show distinct patterns in the changes in elephant populations
Patterns
over the years.

Identify any countries that stand out as outliers in terms of population change. Explore
Highlighting Notable
reasons behind these variations, considering ecological factors, conservation policies, or
Outliers
geographical influences.

Consider creating visual representations, such as graphs or charts, to illustrate population


Creating Visual
changes more effectively. Visuals can enhance your analysis and make it easier for the
Representations
reader to comprehend trends.

Based on the data, make predictions or inferences about the future of Asian elephant popu-
Making Predictions/
lations. Consider the implications of current trends and potential measures for conserva-
Inferences
tion and population management.

Utilize appropriate language to describe trends. For instance, use terms like “experienced a
Language for Describing
significant decline,” “demonstrated a steady increase,” or “remained relatively constant” to
Trends
articulate your observations.

Conclude your analysis by summarizing the key findings. Highlight the most notable trends,
Summarizing Key
variations, or patterns observed in the data, providing a concise summary for the IELTS
Findings
writing task.

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SOLUTION
The given graph shows the estimated comparison of the evaluation of the maximum numbers of elephants
throughout the years 1997 and 2004.

We can observe from the graph that there is a very significant decline in the numbers in most of the countries
causing an alarming threat to the Asian elephant population. The figures for Thailand and Malaysia showed the
greatest decline among the other countries. The value seems to be almost half of what it was in 1997 when
compared to 2004 in both countries. Malaysia also exhibited a figure that was as low as 1000. We can also
see that India continued to be the country with the greatest number of Asian elephants but again, the numbers
showed a significant fall in 2004 when they fell to 7500.

Another interesting trend that could be observed in the graph was that in countries such as Vietnam and Laos,
the population of Asian elephants was seen to remain stable while most of the other countries exhibited a
steady decline. Conversely, in Cambodia, the trends were observed to be positive. The population of Asian ele-
phants rose by almost 25% in Cambodia in 2004 compared to 1997. This can also be seen in the case of China

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SET - 3
ACADEMIC WRITING 1 - DATA INTERPRETATION - PIE CHARTS

The chart shows the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004
and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever
relevant.

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TIPS AND TRICKS TO ANALYZE THE DATA

Parameter Tips and Tricks

Examine the data to understand the mode of transportation over the years. Identify the
Understanding the Data
different modes, such as car, bus, bicycle, train, and walking.

Compare the percentages across the two years (2004 and 2009) to identify trends or
Comparing Across Years
shifts in transportation preferences.

Determine the dominant modes of transportation each year. Note any significant chang-
Identifying Dominant Modes
es or patterns, such as a decrease in car usage from 2004 to 2009.

Highlight any notable changes in the percentages for each mode of transportation. Ana-
Highlighting Changes
lyze the reasons behind these changes if possible.

Understand that percentages represent the proportion of each mode relative to the total.
Interpreting Percentage
For instance, 51% in 2004 indicates that cars accounted for 51% of the total modes.

Consider creating visual aids, such as charts or graphs, to better illustrate the distribu-
Visualizing the Data
tion of transportation modes over the years.

Pay attention to modes with lower percentages, such as walking (4% in 2004). Analyze if
Noting Lesser Used Modes
there are notable changes or if these modes remain consistent.

Based on the trends observed, make predictions or hypotheses about future transporta-
Making Predictions
tion preferences. Consider external factors that may influence these trends.

Scrutinize the data for anomalies or irregularities. Ensure that the percentages add up
Checking for Anomalies
correctly, and verify the data source and methodology if available.

Relating to Real-World Con- Relate the data to real-world scenarios. Consider economic, environmental, or societal
text factors that may contribute to changes in transportation patterns.

Draw conclusions based on the analysis. Summarize the key findings and insights
Drawing Conclusions
gained from examining the data on transportation modes.

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SOLUTION
The above pie chart shows the percentage of modes of transport preferred by commutators in the UK in 2004
and 2009 for both study and work purposes.

After going through the pie chart, we can realise that there is a substantial decrease of 23% in the percentage of
people who travel by car in 2009 as compared to 2004. It can also be noticed that all other modes of transport
have seen a surge from 2004 to 2009.

In 2004, almost half of the population preferred to travel by bus but in 2009, it was replaced by bus. Due to this,
the greatest surge was seen in buses as it had a surge of 13% compared to all other modes of transport. The
commutation through cycles also increased to almost double in 2009 as compared to 2004.

There is a stable change in the proportion of travellers who commute using trains and walking. After buses, the
second greatest increase was seen in the number of cyclists as it increased by 7% from 2004 to 2009.

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SET - 4
ACADEMIC WRITING 1 - DATA INTERPRETATION - LINE CHARTS

The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information
by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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TIPS AND TRICKS TO ANALYZE THE DATA

Aspect of Data Analysis Tips and Tricks

Review the provided data on employment rates in different sectors for 1930 and 2010.
Understanding the Data Set
Familiarize yourself with the categories and their corresponding percentages.

Comparing Employment Compare the employment rates between 1930 and 2010 for each sector. Identify sec-
Rates tors that have experienced significant changes, whether growth or decline.

Look for overall trends in employment rates over the 80-year period. Determine if there's
Identifying Trends Over Time
a shift towards or away from certain sectors.

Analyze each sector individually. For example, explore the drastic decline in farming,
Sector-Specific Analysis fishing, and forestry employment. Consider factors contributing to the changes in each
sector.

Identify sectors with the most significant changes in employment rates. Discuss poten-
Highlighting Significant
tial reasons behind these changes, such as technological advancements or economic
Changes
shifts.

Interpreting Percentage Val- Interpret the percentage values in relation to the total employment. Understand that a
ues percentage decrease in one sector may correspond to an increase in another.

Correlating Data Across Sec- Explore correlations between sectors. For instance, investigate if the increase in indus-
tors try employment is linked to a decrease in farming, fishing, and forestry employment.

Formulate conclusions based on your analysis. Discuss the implications of the shifts in
Drawing Conclusions employment rates and consider the broader socio-economic context of the given time
periods.

Consider creating visual representations such as charts or graphs to enhance your


Visual Representation analysis. Visuals can help communicate trends and changes more effectively during
discussions or presentations.

Look for any outliers in the data—sectors that deviate significantly from the general
Addressing Outliers trend. Investigate the reasons behind these outliers and assess their impact on the
overall analysis.

Take into account external factors that might have influenced employment rates, such
Consideration of External
as economic recessions, technological advancements, or changes in consumer prefer-
Factors
ences.

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SOLUTION
The given line graph shows the pattern exhibited in different employment in America from 1930 to 2010.

It can be inferred from the line graph that, in the 1930s 75% of the American population was employed in sectors
such as farming, fishing and foresting. Of the remaining only 10% were engaged in sectors such as sales and
trade and office jobs. Merely 2% of the entire workforce constituted to technical and industrial sectors. These
trends showed gradual changes in the next 20 years except for the technical sector.

The game changer was the year 1980. There was a very conspicuous change in the workforce by then. People
then preferred to incline more towards sales and trade and industrial sectors than the conventional agriculture
sector. This is evident from the decline in the agricultural, fishing and foresting workforce from 75% in the 1930s
to 40% in 1980 and the surge in the industrial and technical workforce by 13% and 10% respectively.

The greatest dip from the entire line graph is seen in the agricultural, fishing and foresting sectors in the 2000s.
Once dominant in the mid-19th century, this sector dwindled to a mere 1% of the workforce in the 2000s. The
sales and office sectors also saw a surge in the 2000s. It can also be seen that except for the agricultural, fishing
and foresting sectors, all other sectors constituted more than 10% of the total workforce in the US in post-2000.

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SET - 5
ACADEMIC WRITING 1 - DATA INTERPRETATION - EXPLAINING THE PROCESS

The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea. Summarise the information by select-
ing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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TIPS AND TRICKS FOR ANALYZING THE PROCESS DIAGRAM

Aspect Tips and Tricks

Compare each stage in traditional and modern methods to understand differences and
Comparative Analysis
nuances.

Consider how changes in the tea-making process may influence the flavour and aroma
Impact on Flavour
of the tea.

Efficiency and Automation Assess the level of automation in the modern method and its impact on efficiency.

Consistency Analyse how each method contributes to the consistency of the tea product.

Consider the environmental implications of each method, including energy consump-


Environmental Impact
tion.

Reflect on how the shift from traditional to modern methods might impact cultural
Cultural Aspects
aspects.

SOLUTION
The given image gives two different processes to manufacture black tea. The first is the traditional method and the
second is the modern method. The former is beneficial in making loose tea while the latter can be useful in produc-
ing tea bags.

When selecting the tea leaves for manufacturing the black tea, the worker picks only the two top leaves and the bud
to ensure a high-quality tea. The second process is called withering. During this process, air is passed through the
leaves on the rack. This helps to remove up to 60% of the moisture.

The leaves are then left for the third process called rolling or cutting. It can be done manually following the traditional
methods and can also be done through modern methods to facilitate faster processes of cutting, tearing and curling to
make teabags. The end product of both processes would be the release of natural enzymes produced from the leaves.

The last and final step in the manufacture of black tea is oxidation. Here, the enzymes released from the leaves mix
with the air. It is during oxidation that the colour changes into black and tea gets its smell and flavour. The leaves are
then fired and dried. Almost all the moisture is removed from the leaves after this process leaving only around 3%
left on the leaves.

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SET - 6
ACADEMIC WRITING 1 - DATA INTERPRETATION - FLOW CHART

The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or col-
lege lecturer describing the information. Write at least 150 words.

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TIPS AND TRICKS FOR ANALYZING THE FLOWCHART

Analysis Aspect Tips and Tricks

Compare the steps involved in obtaining a high school diploma with those of completing the
Comparative Analysis
application process. Identify similarities and differences.
Examine the sequence of steps from obtaining a high school diploma to enrolment. Under-
Sequential Analysis
stand the logical flow of the process and identify any dependencies between steps.
Identify the critical path in the university entry process. Determine the key steps that must be
Critical Path Analysis
completed for successful enrolment and focus on potential bottlenecks or delays.
Analyze the documentation compilation process. Evaluate the types of documents required
Documentation Review
and assess the clarity of instructions provided for submission.
Acceptance Criteria Examine the conditions for acceptance, including both regular acceptance and provisional
Evaluation acceptance. Analyze the additional documentation required for provisional acceptance.
Outcome Analysis Analyze the outcomes of the application process - acceptance or rejection. Consider the rea-
(Acceptance/Rejection) sons for rejection and evaluate the options available in case of rejection.
Decision Point Evaluate decision points in the process, such as accepting provisional acceptance or cancel-
Assessment ling the application. Consider the implications of each decision on the overall outcome.
Assess the efficiency of the process by considering the time taken from obtaining a high
Efficiency Assessment school diploma to enrolment. Identify areas where delays may occur and suggest improve-
ments.

SOLUTION
This flowchart describes in detail about the various processes that occur during attaining admission into the desired
high school.

The first and mandatory step is attaining high school. After that, each student is asked to complete the university
entrance application form that can be downloaded from the official website of the high school. The form must be
completed by the student and submitted to the administration office.

The administration office is responsible for granting the admission to the students. It might take up to two weeks for
a student to get a reply from the administration office. It can be one among an acceptance, provisional acceptance
or a rejection. In case the student is rejected, they can either cancel their admission or apply for an alternate course
by reapplying to the administration office.

In case a student is provisionally accepted, this means that more documentation is needed. This must be done by the
student and sent to the administration office. If a student receives an acceptance from the office, they would have to
complete the enrolment form followed by selecting the subjects they wish to study and register the same with the
dean. After all these formalities are completed, the student is permitted to join the university.

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SET - 7
ACADEMIC WRITING 1 - DATA INTERPRETATION - COMBINATION GRAPHS

The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries, The bar graph
shows the results of a survey of car use.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Journeys made by Canada Belgium Germany Netherland

Car 90% 72% 68% 47%


Bicycle 1% 2% 2% 26%
Public transport 3% 12% 18% 8%
On foot 5% 11% 11% 18%
Other 1% 3% 1% 1%

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TIPS AND TRICKS FOR ANALYZING THE GRAPHS

Analysis Aspect Tips and Tricks


-Carefully read the table to understand the transportation modes used in Canada, Belgium,
Understanding the Data
Germany, and the Netherlands.
-Observe the percentages to identify the dominant transportation mode in each country.
Identifying Dominant
-In Canada, the dominant mode is the car with 90%, while in the Netherlands, bicycles have
Modes
a significant usage at 26%.
-Compare the usage of each mode across countries. For example, note that public transport
Comparing Across is more prevalent in Germany (18%) compared to Canada (3%).
Countries -Look for patterns or differences, such as the higher bicycle usage in the Netherlands com-
pared to other countries.
Analyzing Changes -Analyze changes in percentages within a country. For instance, Belgium has a notable
Over Modes increase in bicycle usage from 2% to 12%.
-Identify trends in transportation preferences. For example, note the consistent popularity of
Recognizing Trends
walking in all countries, ranging from 5% to 18%.
-Look for anomalies or unexpected data points. In Belgium, the percentage of “Other” trans-
Noting Anomalies
portation mode is relatively high at 3%, compared to other countries.
-Make inferences about lifestyle or cultural influences. The high bicycle usage in the Nether-
Making Inferences
lands may be linked to a culture of cycling.
Interpreting Overall -Consider overall patterns; for instance, car usage is high in all countries, but the extent var-
Patterns ies.
Using Comparative Lan- -Practice using comparative language in your analysis, such as “compared to,” “more preva-
guage lent than,” or “higher/lower than.”
Highlighting -Focus on significant data points that stand out, such as the dominance of cars in Canada
Significant Data or the substantial increase in bicycle usage in Belgium.

SOLUTION
The table shows the comparison of different modes of transport in four different countries, Canada, Belgium, Germany,
and the Netherlands.

It is very evident from the above table that in all the four countries, cars stand out the most preferred mode of trans-
port. Canada has the highest number of commutators using cars with 90% while the Netherlands has the least stand-
ing at 47%. The dip in transport by car is made up by travelling on bicycles and on foot in the Netherlands. This is
evident from the table because 26% and 18% of the Netherlands population travel on bicycles and on foot respectively.
Germany stands out in using public transport with one commutator in five preferring public transport.

The bar graph is also very helpful while analysing the usage of cars in Canada. As stated before, Canada has the
most commutators in cars. We can understand through the bar graph that this is mainly due to the absence of any
other alternative as 38% of the commutators agree to this. While 23% chose cars because of the convenience they
offers, 13% preferred it so they can reach the destination quickly. Other reasons include requirement for work and
nightshifts etc.

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SET - 8
ACADEMIC WRITING 1 - DATA INTERPRETATION - BAR GRPAH

The bar charts below give information about the railway system in six cities in Europe.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

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TIPS AND TRCIKS FOR ANALYZING THE BAR GRAPH

Parameter Tips and Tricks

Review the provided data on city, year, and kilometers of route for trains to grasp the basic
Understanding the Data
information presented.
Examine the chronological aspect of the data by observing how the kilometers of train
Temporal Analysis
routes have changed over the years.
Compare the kilometers of train routes between different cities to identify patterns or varia-
Comparative Analysis
tions in the development.
Look for trends or shifts in train route lengths over time and across cities. Note any notable
Identifying Trends
increases or decreases.

City with Longest Route Determine which city has the longest train route by checking the corresponding data point.
Temporal Changes for
Analyze how the kilometers of train routes have changed for each city over the given years.
Each City
Consider why certain cities might have seen significant changes in train route lengths dur-
Significance of Changes
ing specific periods

SOLUTION
The railways of six European cities, Paris, Stockholm, Lisbon, Rome, Madrid, and Berlin are depicted in the bar graph
above. Generally speaking, Lisbon has the largest number of commuters, whereas Paris has the oldest and greatest
train network.

According to the bar diagram, the Paris railway was founded in 1863 and presently operates 400 kilometres of tracks.
With its foundation in 1900, Stockholm’s railway system is the second-oldest as well as the second-largest in the world,
spanning about 200 km. For Rome and Lisbon, their respective founding years are 1976 and 1927. They have train
lines that extend to 126 and 155 kilometres respectively. The smallest rail track in Madrid is only 11 km long and was
established in 1981. Berlin, on the other hand, debuted in 2001 and included a 28-kilometer route.

When it comes to passenger service, the Lisbon rail system leads when compared to other city rail systems with over
200 million passengers annually. The Paris railway system only serves 775 million passengers annually, despite being
the largest and oldest train system. Rome’s passenger service each year is 144 million, which is three times more than
that of Berlin and Madrid’s train networks.

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SET - 9
ACADEMIC WRITING 1 - DATA INTERPRETATION - BAR GRPAH

The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in UK in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

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TIPS AND TRCICKS FOR ANALYZING THE PIE CHART

Parameter Tips

Begin by understanding the data provided. Identify the two key columns: "Household type"
Understanding Data and "Percentage of people living in poverty." Know that the percentages represent the pro-
portion of people in each household type living in poverty.

Arrange the data in a meaningful way. You may want to sort the information based on the
Sorting Data "Percentage of people living in poverty" column, either in ascending or descending order, to
easily identify the highest and lowest values.

Analyse the data to identify trends. Observe which household types have lower or higher
Identifying Trends
percentages of people living in poverty. Look for patterns or anomalies that stand out.

Compare the percentages between different household types. Note if there are significant
Comparing Categories
differences or similarities, and consider the implications of these variations.

Draw conclusions from the data. Consider what the percentages reveal about the preva-
Interpreting Results lence of poverty in various household types. Be cautious not to make assumptions without
proper analysis.

Look for outliers or extreme values that deviate from the general pattern. These values
Recognising Outliers could provide additional insights into specific situations or conditions that impact poverty
rates.

Consider the context of each household type. Understand the unique characteristics of
Contextual
single-person households, aged couples, couples with children, etc., as this knowledge can
Understanding
help explain variations in poverty percentages.

Create visual representations, such as bar charts or pie charts, to illustrate the data visually.
Graphical Representation Visual aids can enhance your understanding and make it easier for others to comprehend
the distribution of poverty across different household types.

Apply critical thinking to question why certain household types have higher or lower poverty
Critical Thinking rates. Consider external factors or societal influences that might contribute to these dispari-
ties.

Use the data to make informed inferences about the economic well-being of different
Drawing Inferences household types. Consider how policies or support systems could be tailored based on the
observed poverty rates.

Relate the data to real-world scenarios. Think about how these statistics might impact indi-
Relating to Real-world viduals and families in society and how policymakers could use this information to address
poverty effectively.

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SOLUTION
The various family categories that were living in substandard conditions in the UK in 2002 are examined in the
pie chart.

At a glance, 14% of all households in the nation were living in poverty during the given year. Compared to cou-
ples, individuals face greater challenges. When it comes to individuals having children, single parents made
up the largest percentage of respondents (26%), whereas couples reporting children reported a significantly
lower percentage (15%). This indicated that they had faced severe adversities due to issues in managing their
finances and providing for the children.

Regarding the single population without children, the proportion was quite high (24%), nearly matching that of
the single population with children. Conversely, just 9 per cent of childless couples suffered from poverty in
2002. When it came to the elderly, the percentage of singles was marginally higher than that of couples. Merely
5% and 7% of the elderly population, respectively, reported living in substandard conditions. This indicates that
the elderly population are not very prone to poverty in the UK in 2002.

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SET - 10
ACADEMIC WRITING 1 - DATA INTERPRETATION - PROCESS DIAGRAMS

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.


The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above, and below the
surface of the Earth.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

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TIPS AND TRICKS FOR ANALYZING THE PROCESS DIAGRAM

Aspect Tips and Tricks

- Recognize that evaporation is initiated by the sun's heat.


Evaporation - Understand that water from oceans, lakes, and rivers transforms into vapor and ascends into the
atmosphere during this phase.
- Acknowledge that transpiration involves plants releasing water vapor through their leaves.
Transpiration
- Connect transpiration to the contribution of rising moisture in the air.
- Comprehend that condensation occurs when water vapor cools and forms tiny water droplets, creat-
Condensation ing clouds.
- Note that this phase is crucial in the formation of cloud structures in the atmosphere.
- Understand that precipitation involves the falling of water droplets back to Earth as rain, snow, hail,
Precipitation or sleet.
- Differentiate between various forms of precipitation and their impact on the environment.
- Recognize that some precipitation soaks into the ground during infiltration.
Infiltration
- Understand the significance of infiltration in replenishing groundwater resources.
- Identify that runoff is the flow of precipitation across the surface, not infiltrating the ground.
Runoff
- Realize that runoff eventually reaches rivers, lakes, and oceans, contributing to the water cycle.
- Understand that collection signifies the accumulation of water in oceans and other bodies of water.
Collection
- Note that this marks the completion of the water cycle, leading to the restart of the entire process.

SOLUTION
The water cycle which is responsible for rain in nature is seen in the process diagram given above.

After considering all the factors, it is evident that this process consists of three main phases, starting with the evapora-
tion of water and subsequent cloud formation. The path of the water once it hits the ground is depicted in the following
phase, which concludes with saltwater intrusion.

The heat from the sun causes water to evaporate into the air at the beginning of the process. Eighty per cent of all
water vapour is thought to originate from the ocean. The condensation of water vapour that follows creates a cloud.

The next phase is marked by snow or rain due to the dense clouds. Water which is the byproduct of precipitation now
enters the lakes and seeps into the earth. Rainwater from the surface runoff forms the groundwater, which eventually
returns to the ocean without passing through the impermeable barrier. Seawater intrusion, or the movement of ocean
water into freshwater aquifers, is the final process of the water cycle.

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ACADEMIC WRITING

TASK - 2

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SET - 1
ACADEMIC WRITING - 2 - OPINION ESSAY

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want
online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Assessment English

TIPS AND TRICKS TO ANALYZE THE QUESTION

Aspect Tips and Tricks

- Carefully read and understand the statement.


Understanding the
- Recognize that the statement discusses the potential decline of printed newspapers and
Statement
books due to free online access.
Identifying the - Clearly state your agreement, disagreement, or balanced view on the given statement.
Position - Develop a concise thesis statement that outlines your stance.
Providing Supporting - Offer specific reasons supporting your agreement or disagreement.
Points - Include relevant examples or real-world scenarios to strengthen your arguments.
- Acknowledge potential counterarguments and address them to demonstrate a nuanced
Considering understanding of the topic.
Counterarguments - Present counterarguments in a balanced way, followed by reasons for dismissing or qualify-
ing them.
- Organize your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Organizing Ideas
- Ensure a logical flow of ideas, with each paragraph focusing on a single point.
- Aim for sentence variety to enhance the overall quality of your writing.
Using Varied Sentence
- Mix simple, compound, and complex sentences for a more sophisticated expression of
Structures
ideas.
Vocabulary and - Utilize a range of vocabulary to demonstrate lexical resources.
Language Use - Avoid repetition and showcase a command of academic and task-specific words.
Grammar and - Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and use proper punctuation.
Punctuation - Proofread your essay to eliminate errors and ensure clarity.
Staying within the Word - Be mindful of the word limit and allocate your words wisely.
Limit - Prioritize key points and avoid unnecessary elaboration to stay within the prescribed limit.
Providing a - Summarize your main points in the conclusion and restate your position.
Conclusion - End the essay with a strong closing statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

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SOLUTION
In the twenty-first century, technology has advanced rapidly, and human civilization has made significant strides
in the fields of internet-based services and technology. Currently, a portion of the world’s population still actively
uses books, journals, periodicals, newspapers, etc. But many people think that these kinds of media are about to
become outdated because of the rise of news websites and free internet access to books, magazines, and other
materials. I completely agree with this statement, and I will provide suitable examples to support my views.

It is common knowledge that the first thing people do these days whether they want to read a book or simply
review the news of the day is search the internet. With the help of gadgets like tablets and smartphones, peo-
ple can now find information online more quickly and easily than ever before, allowing them to spend minutes
relaxing in the comfort of their own homes while enjoying their favourite media. Because there are now many
more handy options, individuals are beginning to give up their interest in print media.

In addition, several websites frequently offer individuals access to free versions of the various print media that
they appreciate. For example, the majority of news outlets post their daily news on their public website, which is
open to all users. Additionally, the public may access popular books, journals, and periodicals in digital format
for a small subscription price, or sometimes for free, thanks to the availability of lots of websites and databases.
As a result, most users of these types of media have stopped purchasing hard copies.

However, there is a sizable portion of the population who appreciates traditional print media. However, given
how affordable it is to make this kind of data and material available online, businesses will soon fully transition
to internet-based services.

In conclusion, let me state that individuals consistently choose the most comfortable option. It is safe to pre-
dict, then, that internet media services and goods will completely replace traditional print media in the years
to come.

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SET - 2
ACADEMIC WRITING - 2 - OPINION ESSAY

Development in technology has brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live sim-
pler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Assessment English

TIPS AND TRICKS TO ANALYZE THE QUESTION

Aspect Tips and Tricks

- Carefully analyse and understand the statement, noting the opposing views on the impact of
Understanding the technological improvements on the environment.
Statement - Recognise the argument that advocates for simpler lives as a solution to environmental issues
and the counter-argument supporting technological advances.
- Clearly state your position, which, in this case, supports the idea that technological advances
Identifying the can address environmental problems.
Position - Develop a concise thesis statement that outlines your stance, providing a roadmap for your
essay.
- Offer specific reasons supporting the belief that technology can help address environmental
Providing issues.
Supporting Points - Include real-world examples or case studies to illustrate how technological advances have had
positive effects on the environment.
- Acknowledge the viewpoint that advocates for simpler lives as a solution to environmental
Considering problems.
Counterarguments - Present counterarguments in a balanced way, followed by reasons for dismissing or qualifying
them.
- Organize your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Organizing Ideas
- Ensure a logical flow of ideas, with each paragraph focusing on a single point.
Using Varied Sen- - Aim for sentence variety to enhance the overall quality of your writing.
tence Structures - Mix simple, compound, and complex sentences for a more sophisticated expression of ideas.
Vocabulary and - Utilize a range of vocabulary to demonstrate lexical resources.
Language Use - Avoid repetition and showcase a command of academic and task-specific words
Grammar and - Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and use proper punctuation.
Punctuation - Proofread your essay to eliminate errors and ensure clarity.
Staying within the - Be mindful of the word limit and allocate your words wisely.
Word Limit - Prioritize key points and avoid unnecessary elaboration to stay within the prescribed limit.
Providing a - Summarize your main points in the conclusion and restate your position.
Conclusion - End the essay with a strong closing statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

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SOLUTION
The environment is currently being negatively impacted by technological advancements. While some think that
living simpler lives is the only way to solve these environmental issues, I believe that technological advance-
ments may help in their solution.

On the one hand, people think that individuals should lead simpler lives and use less technology. The first rec-
ommendation is that instead of using cars, individuals should walk or ride bicycles. This is due to the fact that
there are currently more automobiles being produced and driven, which results in high exhaust fume levels and
air pollution being a major problem. In order to limit the exploitation of natural resources like nuclear power
and fossil fuels, people should also make an effort to use less electricity. The yearly Earth Hour event, in which
everyone is asked to turn off their lights for sixty minutes, serves as an illustration of this concept.

On the other hand,, I think that technological advancements can make a significant difference in environmental
preservation. First off, such advancements have made it possible for individuals to find methods of recycling
items like glass and paper, which lessens the issue of disposing of waste. Second, technology can contribute
to the use of renewable resources in the production of power. For example, numerous nations across the globe
have constructed solar-powered power plants. Because of this, producing electricity does not require using
non-renewable resources, nor does it cause grave environmental harm.

In conclusion, while some believe that living a simpler life can help prevent environmental difficulties, I believe
that technical advancements can help address these challenges.

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SET - 3
ACADEMIC WRITING - 2 - OPINION ESSAY

Traffic on roads has become a problem in nearly every country in the world. What can be done to reduce the amount
of traffic at a society level and at an individual level?
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Assessment English

TIPS AND TRICKS TO ANALYZE THE QUESTION

Aspect Tips and Tricks

- Carefully analyse and understand the statement, focusing on the global issue of traffic conges-
Understanding the
tion.
Statement
- Note that the question asks for solutions both at the societal level and the individual level.
- Identify key areas to address, such as societal-level interventions and individual-level actions.
Identifying the Focus
- Establish the importance of addressing traffic issues both on a broader societal scale and
Areas
through personal actions.
- Offer specific reasons supporting societal-level solutions, such as infrastructure development
Providing and public transportation improvement.
Supporting Points - Propose individual-level actions like carpooling, using public transport, or adopting alternative
modes of transportation.
- Consider potential counterarguments, like the complexity of implementing societal changes or
Considering individual resistance to altering commuting habits.
Counterarguments - Address counterarguments with valid reasons or propose mitigating measures to overcome
challenges.
- Organize your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Organizing Ideas - Ensure a logical flow of ideas, addressing societal-level solutions first and then individual-level
actions.
Using Varied Sen- - Aim for sentence variety to enhance the overall quality of your writing.
tence Structures - Mix simple, compound, and complex sentences for a more sophisticated expression of ideas.
Vocabulary and - Utilize a range of vocabulary to demonstrate lexical resources.
Language Use - Avoid repetition and showcase a command of academic and task-specific words.
Grammar and - Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and use proper punctuation.
Punctuation - Proofread your essay to eliminate errors and ensure clarity.
Staying within the - Be mindful of the word limit and allocate your words wisely.
Word Limit - Prioritize key points and avoid unnecessary elaboration to stay within the prescribed limit.
- Summarize your main points in the conclusion, restate the significance of addressing traffic
Providing a
issues, and suggest the potential impact of the proposed solutions.
Conclusion
- End the essay with a strong closing statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

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SOLUTION
It is undeniable that traffic is becoming a bigger problem for cities all around the world. In order to lower the
amount of traffic in our cities, I look at the causes of this trend in this essay and offer a few feasible options
that the government may put into place.

Understanding the reasons behind the rise in traffic in towns and cities is the first step. There are essentially
three basic causes for this. One is that cars are now more reasonably priced for the typical customer and are
expected to be owned by most families rather than being a luxury items. A second factor is that the reliability
of public transportation has declined recently, in part due to the reduction of several bus and train services due
to financial difficulties. The third factor is that more people are willing than ever to drive themselves to work as
society as a whole has become more mobile.

Given the complex nature of its reasons, there is most likely no one solution to this issue. To encourage people
to take the bus or train rather than drive a car, and increase the dependability of public transportation. Another
way to discourage people from driving to work would be to charge extra for using the roads, particularly during
rush hours. The London congestion charge program is one effective example of this, as it has undoubtedly
decreased traffic in inner-city regions.

In conclusion, a number of reasons have contributed to increased traffic in metropolitan areas. Finding a per-
fect answer might not be feasible, but any action that is taken should most likely focus on raising the usage of
public transportation and raising the cost of driving in cities.

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SET - 4
ACADEMIC WRITING - 2 - ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES BASED ESSAY

More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of
studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
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Assessment English

TIPS AND TRICKS TO ANALYZE THE QUESTION

Aspect Tips and Tricks

- Carefully analyse and understand the statement, noting the trend of students opting to study in
Understanding foreign countries.
the Statement - Recognise that the question requires an evaluation of both the benefits and drawbacks of study-
ing abroad.
- Identify key areas for discussion, such as the advantages of studying abroad and the potential
Identifying the challenges associated with it.
Focus Areas - Establish the importance of considering both sides of the argument to provide a balanced
response.
- Offer specific reasons supporting the benefits of studying abroad, such as exposure to diverse
Providing
cultures, better educational opportunities, and personal growth.
Supporting Points
- Discuss potential drawbacks, including cultural shock, homesickness, or financial challenges.
- Consider counterarguments, such as the idea that the drawbacks might be temporary or that the
Considering
benefits outweigh the challenges.
Counterargu-
- Address counterarguments with valid reasons or propose mitigating measures to overcome chal-
ments
lenges.
- Organize your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Organizing Ideas - Ensure a logical flow of ideas, addressing the benefits first and then the drawbacks, or vice versa,
as per your chosen structure.
Using Varied Sen- - Aim for sentence variety to enhance the overall quality of your writing.
tence Structures - Mix simple, compound, and complex sentences for a more sophisticated expression of ideas.
Vocabulary and - Utilize a range of vocabulary to demonstrate lexical resources.
Language Use - Avoid repetition and showcase a command of academic and task-specific words.
Grammar and - Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and use proper punctuation.
Punctuation - Proofread your essay to eliminate errors and ensure clarity.
Staying within the - Be mindful of the word limit and allocate your words wisely.
Word Limit - Prioritize key points and avoid unnecessary elaboration to stay within the prescribed limit.
- Summarize your main points in the conclusion, restate the significance of considering both ben-
Providing a
efits and drawbacks and offer a balanced perspective.
Conclusion
- End the essay with a strong closing statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

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SOLUTION
These days, pursuing an education abroad has become one of the most sought-after endeavours. The major-
ity of students intend to pursue their education abroad, particularly for master’s degrees. A contributing factor
to the growing popularity of studying abroad is the relaxation of international travel regulations and policies.
Studying abroad has benefits and drawbacks, though, and the paragraphs that follow will discuss the subject
and go into more detail about why the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

Many first-world nations have more advanced and sophisticated educational systems, which is one of the main
reasons people study overseas. Students from emerging or undeveloped nations, such as Brazil, China, India,
Argentina, and others, frequently search for better academic opportunities abroad than they can find back
home. Living abroad also gives people exposure to the global community and promotes the development of
social and interpersonal skills, all of which are critical for qualifying for well-paying employment possibilities.

However, there are a lot of disadvantages to studying abroad. First of all, it is an expensive process from the
time you apply to a foreign university until you finish your degree. Many households find it unaffordable to invest
in such an expensive endeavour. That being said, due to cultural and social traditions that differ, getting used
to the norms and customs of a foreign nation can be a challenge for many people.

In conclusion, if pursuing an education abroad is financially possible for aspirant students, it can truly be a boon.
I also strongly believe that the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages.

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SET - 5
ACADEMIC WRITING - 2 - DIRECT ESSAYS

In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts while boys like science. What are the reasons for this trend and
do you think this tendency should be changed?
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Assessment English

TIPS AND TRICKS FOR ANALYZING THE ESSAY

Aspect Tips and Tricks

- Carefully analyse and understand the statement, which discusses the tendency for girls to choose
Understanding arts and boys to prefer science in schools and universities.
the Statement - Recognise that the question requires an exploration of the reasons behind this trend and an opin-
ion on whether it should be changed.
- Identify key areas for discussion, such as the reasons behind the gender-based preferences and
Identifying the the potential implications of this trend.
Focus Areas - Establish the importance of considering the societal and educational factors contributing to this
pattern.
- Offer specific reasons supporting the tendency, such as societal expectations, cultural influences,
Providing
or personal interests.
Supporting
- Discuss potential drawbacks, including reinforcing gender stereotypes and limiting individuals’
Points
choices based on societal norms.
- Consider counterarguments, such as the idea that individual preferences play a significant role in
Considering
subject choices.
Counterargu-
- Address counterarguments with valid reasons or propose measures to provide a more inclusive
ments
and unbiased educational environment.
- Organise your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Organizing Ideas - Ensure a logical flow of ideas, addressing the reasons first and then the opinions on whether the
trend should be changed, or vice versa, as per your chosen structure.
Using Varied Sen- - Aim for sentence variety to enhance the overall quality of your writing.
tence Structures - Mix simple, compound, and complex sentences for a more sophisticated expression of ideas.
Vocabulary and - Utilise a range of vocabulary to demonstrate lexical resources.
Language Use - Avoid repetition and showcase a command of academic and task-specific words.
Grammar and - Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and use proper punctuation.
Punctuation - Proofread your essay to eliminate errors and ensure clarity.
Staying within - Be mindful of the word limit and allocate your words wisely.
the Word Limit - Prioritise key points and avoid unnecessary elaboration to stay within the prescribed limit.
- Summarise your main points in the conclusion, restate the significance of addressing gender-
Providing a Con-
based educational preferences, and offer a balanced perspective.
clusion
- End the essay with a strong closing statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

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SOLUTION
There is no denying that schoolgirls tend to be more interested in subjects relating to the arts than schoolboys
are in the scientific fields of study. This inclination makes sense for a number of reasons, in my opinion, and it
has to be changed.

The reason why boys and girls choose different subjects is primarily due to two factors. It develops mostly from
each gender’s natural strengths. It is an indisputable fact that certain male students are more skilled at using
reason and logic when studying science; as a result, they tend to show an aptitude for the mathematical and
physical domains, whilst the other sex may be more sensitive and emotional, which gives them an edge when it
comes to understanding the arts or languages. Also, the conventional wisdom also plays a role in determining
that difference. As a matter of fact, many parents encourage their sons to major in science and their daughters
in the arts in order for them to grow up to be honed individuals.

I think that the previously described trend needs to be rectified. It is important to support children, both male
and female, in achieving the correct balance between academic fields like science and the arts. Numerous sci-
entific studies demonstrate how learning the arts can increase children’s capacity for creativity and imagination,
which helps them understand scientific subjects more effectively. In the meantime, majors in math or physics
provide opportunities for female students to strengthen themselves and improve their problem-solving skills.

In conclusion, there are a number of previously discussed reasons why boys typically choose science courses
for school while girls favour the arts. However, I argue that this scenario needs to be remedied.

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SET - 6
ACADEMIC WRITING - 2 - OPINION ESSAY

Some people say part-time jobs are useful for full-time students because they not only earn money but also gain career
experience. Do you agree or disagree?
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Assessment English

TIPS AND TRICKS FOR ANALYZING THE ESSAY

Aspect Tips and Tricks

- Carefully analyse and understand the statement, noting the assertion that part-time jobs are ben-
Understanding eficial for full-time students, providing both financial support and career experience.
the Statement - Recognise that the question requires an evaluation of the agreement or disagreement with this
viewpoint.
- Identify key areas for discussion, such as the advantages of part-time jobs for students, the
Identifying the potential drawbacks, and the impact on academic performance.
Focus Areas - Establish the importance of considering both sides of the argument to provide a balanced
response.
- Offer specific reasons supporting the benefits, such as gaining practical experience, developing
Providing
time-management skills, and financial independence.
Supporting
- Discuss potential drawbacks, including potential negative effects on academic performance,
Points
stress, or limited time for extracurricular activities.
- Consider counterarguments, such as the idea that part-time jobs might enhance time-manage-
Considering
ment skills and provide a realistic view of the job market.
Counterargu-
- Address counterarguments with valid reasons or propose measures to balance work and aca-
ments
demic commitments effectively.
- Organise your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Organizing Ideas - Ensure a logical flow of ideas, addressing the advantages and disadvantages, or vice versa, as per
your chosen structure.
Using Varied Sen- - Aim for sentence variety to enhance the overall quality of your writing.
tence Structures - Mix simple, compound, and complex sentences for a more sophisticated expression of ideas.
Vocabulary and - Utilise a range of vocabulary to demonstrate lexical resources.
Language Use - Avoid repetition and showcase a command of academic and task-specific words.
Grammar and - Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and use proper punctuation.
Punctuation - Proofread your essay to eliminate errors and ensure clarity.
Staying within - Be mindful of the word limit and allocate your words wisely.
the Word Limit - Prioritise key points and avoid unnecessary elaboration to stay within the prescribed limit.
- Summarise your main points in the conclusion, restate the significance of considering both ben-
Providing a
efits and drawbacks and offer a balanced perspective.
Conclusion
- End the essay with a strong closing statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

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SOLUTION
Students in universities and colleges frequently work part-time jobs these days in order to help pay for their
education or obtain experience in the workforce. It benefits pupils in numerous ways, in my opinion.

The first clear benefit is that employment can result in income. In many nations, parents cannot afford to send
their children to school, or the students are on their own. Consequently, a student’s financial situation can be
greatly improved by taking a part-time job. For example, in Britain, tuition costs have skyrocketed in recent
years, making it difficult for some bright but struggling students to focus on their studies because they are
frequently deeply in debt and have few resources. Therefore, many students are forced to work in addition to
their academic responsibilities if they wish to pursue their selected course.

Additionally, working a part-time job can assist someone in getting ready to leave the ivory tower and enter the
real world of employment. Employers have been complaining a lot lately that new hires don’t understand the
needs of the company and don’t put their academic knowledge into practice. However, a little work experience
from school can come in handy when starting a new job. There have been a lot of instances where the workers
with prior experience excelled in their workplace thereby enhancing productivity.

While it is true that the main goal of a university education is to focus on academics, practical knowledge is as
important and should not be disregarded. However, I think there are numerous benefits for students who work
a part-time job in addition to their studies.

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SET - 7
ACADEMIC WRITING - 2 - DISCUSSION ESSAYS

Some teachers tend to reward students who achieve high academic results. Others, however, support and reward
students who show the most improvement. Discuss both approaches and give your opinion.
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Assessment English

TIPS AND TRICKS FOR ANALYZING THE ESSAY

Aspect Tips and Tricks

- Carefully analyse and understand the statement, noting the two approaches to rewarding stu-
Understanding dents: one based on high academic results and the other on improvement.
the Statement - Recognise that the question requires an evaluation of both approaches and the formulation of a
personal opinion.
- Identify key areas for discussion, such as the advantages and disadvantages of rewarding high
Identifying the achievers and those who show improvement.
Focus Areas - Establish the importance of considering both approaches in fostering a well-rounded education
system.
- Offer specific reasons supporting the rewarding of high academic results, such as motivation,
Providing
recognition, and the encouragement of excellence.
Supporting
- Discuss the benefits of rewarding improvement, including fostering a growth mindset, acknowl-
Points
edging effort, and addressing individual progress.
- Consider counterarguments, such as the idea that focusing solely on high achievers may create a
Considering
competitive environment, while exclusively rewarding improvement might neglect innate talent.
Counterargu-
- Address counterarguments with valid reasons or propose measures to combine both approaches
ments
for a balanced and inclusive system.
- Organise your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Organizing Ideas - Ensure a logical flow of ideas, addressing the advantages and disadvantages of each approach
and concluding with your personal opinion.
Using Varied Sen- - Aim for sentence variety to enhance the overall quality of your writing.
tence Structures - Mix simple, compound, and complex sentences for a more sophisticated expression of ideas.
Vocabulary and - Utilise a range of vocabulary to demonstrate lexical resources.
Language Use - Avoid repetition and showcase a command of academic and task-specific words.
Grammar and - Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and use proper punctuation.
Punctuation - Proofread your essay to eliminate errors and ensure clarity.
Staying within - Be mindful of the word limit and allocate your words wisely.
the Word Limit - Prioritise key points and avoid unnecessary elaboration to stay within the prescribed limit.
- Summarise your main points in the conclusion, restate the significance of considering both
Providing a
approaches and offer a balanced perspective.
Conclusion
- End the essay with a strong closing statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

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SOLUTION
Certain individuals believe that academic rewards ought to be given to students who achieve the highest levels
of success. The primary objective of this argument is that to get the best grade, students may be encouraged
to study hard, and those who perform very well in school need to be commended for their efforts. On formal
exams, only a select few really bright students can succeed, and normal students may believe they are not
smart enough to compete with brighter students at all. Thus, to improve their overall performance, other stu-
dents must be also acknowledged for their efforts and commended.

On the other hand, I agree with people who believe that students who make a dedicated effort to learn should
receive rewards from their schools. For instance, my parents used to frequently give me small gifts when I did
better on a test than I had on the previous one when I was a child. I still recall that this helped me to be top of
my studies in the classroom and made a big difference in my studies. It is advised that to motivate students to
learn, schools use a similar strategy. Teachers may commend students as a way of acknowledging their work
during the semester.

In conclusion, I believe that academic progress should be recognized by schools, not just the students who
achieve the highest scores.

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SET - 8
ACADEMIC WRITING - 2 - PROBLEM-SOLVING ESSAYS

Scientists tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people
still continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions for this?
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Assessment English

TIPS AND TRICKS FOR ANALYZING THE ESSAY

Aspect Tips and Tricks

- Carefully analyse and understand the statement, which highlights the paradox of people engaging
Understanding in unhealthy activities despite awareness of their adverse effects.
the Statement - Recognise that the question requires an exploration of the causes behind this behaviour and
potential solutions to address it.
- Identify key areas for discussion, such as the reasons for persisting in unhealthy activities, the
Identifying the impact on public health, and potential measures to encourage healthier lifestyles.
Focus Areas - Establish the importance of considering both individual and societal factors contributing to this
pattern.
- Offer specific reasons supporting the causes, such as lack of awareness, addiction, societal influ-
Providing
ences, or stress.
Supporting
- Discuss potential solutions, including education, public awareness campaigns, policy interven-
Points
tions, and support systems for behaviour change.
- Consider counterarguments, such as individual choice, cultural influences, or the difficulty of
Considering
breaking habits.
Counterargu-
- Address counterarguments with valid reasons or propose measures to navigate the challenges
ments
associated with encouraging healthier behaviours.
- Organise your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Organizing Ideas - Ensure a logical flow of ideas, addressing the causes first and then potential solutions, or vice
versa, as per your chosen structure.
Using Varied Sen- - Aim for sentence variety to enhance the overall quality of your writing.
tence Structures - Mix simple, compound, and complex sentences for a more sophisticated expression of ideas.
Vocabulary and - Utilise a range of vocabulary to demonstrate lexical resources.
Language Use - Avoid repetition and showcase a command of academic and task-specific words.
Grammar and - Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and use proper punctuation.
Punctuation - Proofread your essay to eliminate errors and ensure clarity.
Staying within - Be mindful of the word limit and allocate your words wisely.
the Word Limit - Prioritise key points and avoid unnecessary elaboration to stay within the prescribed limit.
- Summarise your main points in the conclusion, restate the significance of addressing the causes
Providing a
and proposing solutions, and offer a balanced perspective.
Conclusion
- End the essay with a strong closing statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

45
SOLUTION
People in the modern era are frequently educated about the risks associated with unhealthy lifestyles. Even
with incredible developments in medicine, diseases still claim the lives of a great number of people and cause
most of their pain.

There are a few reasons why engaging in unhealthy hobbies is still a common habit. The first explanation for this
is that most people tend to be overly optimistic. Although there are frequent and strong reminders of the harm
that unhealthy lifestyles can do everywhere one looks, individuals continue to believe that these consequences
are rare. Even people who are aware of it are frequently misled into thinking that unhealthy behaviours are not
as bad as the media portrays them to be. Second, it is extremely hard for people to quit bad habits once they
become addicted to them. For example, smokers find it difficult to give up cigarettes because of their strong
addictive qualities, while sedentary persons find it difficult to motivate themselves to be more active since they
don’t enjoy working out.

There are several potential solutions to these issues. One of them is raising the tax on unhealthy products such
as cigarettes, alcohol, and foods high in fat content. Direct effects are promised by this solution. Furthermore,
it is important to continue promoting healthy lifestyles and to harshly criticize harmful lifestyles in the media.
People would, in my opinion, find it simpler to give up their old, damaging habits if they felt compelled to defend
themselves and realise that everyone around them shared the same behaviour.

Thus, it may be concluded that with conscientious health measures, the threat of an unhealthy lifestyle could
be mitigated.

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SET - 9
ACADEMIC WRITING - 2 - DISCUSSION ESSAYS

In many countries, the tradition of families having meals together is disappearing. Why is this happening? What will
be the effect of it on the family and society?
Extracted from - IELTS Reading Practice Sets. Copyright © 2018 by IDP Education, British Council and Cambridge
Assessment English

TIPS AND TRICKS FOR ANALYZING THE ESSAY

Aspect Tips and Tricks

- Carefully analyse and understand the statement, recognising the observation that the tradition of
Understanding families having meals together is diminishing in many countries.
the Statement - Note that the question requires an exploration of the reasons behind this trend and an assess-
ment of its potential impact on both families and society.
- Identify key areas for discussion, such as the reasons for the decline in family meals and the
Identifying the potential consequences for family dynamics and societal bonds.
Focus Areas - Establish the importance of considering both the individual and collective implications of this
social change.
- Offer specific reasons supporting the trend, such as changing work schedules, increased use of
Providing
technology, or societal shifts in values.
Supporting
- Discuss potential effects, including weakened family relationships, reduced communication, and
Points
implications for societal cohesion.
- Consider counterarguments, such as the idea that changing meal patterns may reflect evolving
Considering
family structures or individual preferences.
Counterargu-
- Address counterarguments with valid reasons or propose measures to maintain family bonds and
ments
ensure meaningful social interactions.
- Organise your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Organizing Ideas - Ensure a logical flow of ideas, addressing the reasons first and then the potential effects, or vice
versa, as per your chosen structure.
Using Varied Sen- - Aim for sentence variety to enhance the overall quality of your writing.
tence Structures - Mix simple, compound, and complex sentences for a more sophisticated expression of ideas.
Vocabulary and - Utilise a range of vocabulary to demonstrate lexical resources.
Language Use - Avoid repetition and showcase a command of academic and task-specific words.
Grammar and - Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and use proper punctuation.
Punctuation - Proofread your essay to eliminate errors and ensure clarity.
Staying within - Be mindful of the word limit and allocate your words wisely.
the Word Limit - Prioritise key points and avoid unnecessary elaboration to stay within the prescribed limit.
- Summarise your main points in the conclusion, restate the significance of considering the rea-
Providing a
sons and effects of changing meal patterns, and offer a balanced perspective.
Conclusion
- End the essay with a strong closing statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

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SOLUTION
It’s true that the customary family mealtime is disappearing. There are a few explanations for the change in
behaviour due to which family life and health are significantly impacted.

Families no longer share mealtimes as much as they previously did for two obvious reasons. First of all, parents
occasionally let their impatient children eat in front of the TV or on the computer because they are frequently too
restless to eat at the table. Second, due to financial strains, close-knit families are splitting. Setting up regular
mealtimes for the entire family when they are together can be quite difficult in homes with a single parents or
families where the mother works.

Meals shared as a family are considered to be a vital component of a stable family environment. Throughout
a child’s early years, the consistency of their family mealtime plays a critical role in forming their personal-
ity. During family mealtimes, plans are made, advice is given, and news is shared. Family meals provided an
opportunity to provide everyone in the family with a healthier diet centred on good home-cooked food, which
was beneficial to the children’s health. When this schedule is broken, kids are occasionally left to eat fast food
junk food or snacks from snack shops. Childhood obesity and hyperactivity are common health implications
that arise from children not eating a balanced diet, as was previously supplied.

In conclusion, there are a number of explanations for the decrease in family mealtimes spent together, and
most of them are undesirable.

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SET - 10
ACADEMIC WRITING - 2 - ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES BASED ESSAY

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than
secondary schools.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

TIPS AND TRICKS FOR ANALYZING THE ESSAY

Aspect Tips and Tricks

- Carefully analyse and understand the statement, highlighting the suggestion that starting foreign
Understanding language learning in primary schools is advantageous.
the Statement - Recognise that the question requires an evaluation of whether the advantages outweigh the dis-
advantages.
- Identify key areas for discussion, such as the potential benefits of early language learning, the
Identifying the drawbacks, and the long-term impact on language proficiency.
Focus Areas - Establish the importance of considering both sides of the argument to provide a balanced
response.
- Offer specific reasons supporting the advantages, such as enhanced cognitive skills, improved
Providing
language acquisition abilities, and increased cultural awareness.
Supporting
- Discuss potential drawbacks, including potential stress on young learners or challenges in main-
Points
taining interest in language learning.
- Consider counterarguments, such as the idea that early language learning might not necessarily
Considering
result in higher proficiency levels later in life.
Counterargu-
- Address counterarguments with valid reasons or propose measures to ensure the effectiveness
ments
of early language learning programmes.
- Organise your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Organizing Ideas - Ensure a logical flow of ideas, addressing the advantages and disadvantages, or vice versa, as per
your chosen structure.
Using Varied Sen- - Aim for sentence variety to enhance the overall quality of your writing.
tence Structures - Mix simple, compound, and complex sentences for a more sophisticated expression of ideas.
Vocabulary and - Utilise a range of vocabulary to demonstrate lexical resources.
Language Use - Avoid repetition and showcase a command of academic and task-specific words.
Grammar and - Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and use proper punctuation.
Punctuation - Proofread your essay to eliminate errors and ensure clarity.
Staying within - Be mindful of the word limit and allocate your words wisely.
the Word Limit - Prioritise key points and avoid unnecessary elaboration to stay within the prescribed limit.
- Summarise your main points in the conclusion, restate the significance of considering both ben-
Providing a
efits and drawbacks and offer a balanced perspective.
Conclusion
- End the essay with a strong closing statement that leaves a lasting impression on the reader.

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SOLUTION
Primary school is favoured by some as the best age for kids to begin learning a foreign language, although
this is a heavily debated topic. The pros and cons of implementing foreign language instruction in elementary
schools will be discussed in this essay. The advantages of this strategy, in my opinion, outweigh any possible
disadvantages.

The possible increased load on young learners is one major drawback of beginning foreign language instruction
in elementary school. Many contend that young students may already be burdened with a significant amount
of academic work throughout their early school years, and adding foreign language study might worsen their
stress levels. For example, young students may find it difficult to efficiently manage their time, which can result
in burnout and negatively affect their learning process as a whole.

However, there are several benefits to starting foreign language instruction in elementary schools. Early expo-
sure can promote natural language development and improved cognitive development, as younger minds are
typically more open to language acquisition. Studies have indicated that young children who begin learning a
foreign language at an early age typically demonstrate greater learning capacity as well as improved pronun-
ciation and fluency. For example, a Harvard University study discovered that students who started learning
a foreign language in elementary school were significantly better in other subjects and demonstrated higher
language proficiency than students who started in secondary school.

In conclusion, there are significant benefits to introducing foreign language instruction at the primary school
level, despite potential worries regarding the increased workload for young learners. I believe that the best
way to improve their language skills and nurture their general growth is to begin learning foreign languages in
primary school instead of senior school.

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