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Descriptive Writing

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Descriptive Writing

(An event)
Learning Objectives
At the end of the lesson, students should be able to:

•Identify at least 20/25 past tense used in the recount /


descriptive writing.
•Identify 4 out of 7 descriptive words/phrases/
figurative language in the recount.
•Deconstruct and identify the structure of a descriptive
writing.
•Joint construct a descriptive writing on a different
event.
Setting the Context: Let’s watch this!
The Fourth Of July
This summer, I spent the Fourth of July at
Gibson Park with my family. My grandpa came to
visit and celebrate the holiday with us.
At the park, we needed to find a place to sit.
There were more people there than grains of sand
on a beach. We walked endlessly through a maze
of blankets, picnic baskets and smells of various
Fourth of July feasts. Finally I spotted a patch of
grass in the sea of people so my brother and I
quickly claimed the spot by spreading our own
oversized blanket.
My stomach rumbled, which let me
know that it was time to prepare
something to eat. I helped my grandpa
make his world-famous cheeseburgers on
our small grill. While cooking, grandpa told
me funny stories about when my dad was
little. We laughed so hard that we both
forgot about the cheeseburgers, which
ended up more burned than world-famous.
Once the fireworks started, my
eyes focused on the sky. The bright
colours lit the dark night like a sunny
afternoon. The patterns reminded me of
sprinkles on top of birthday cakes. When
I realized that the fireworks were
reflected on the lake, it was like I was
seeing two fireworks shows, one above
and one below.
After the fireworks finale, it was
time to go home. With the fireworks and
spending time with my grandpa, it had
been a great Fourth of July.
Deconstruction
Language Focus:
1.Past tense
2.Descriptive words / phrases /
figurative language.
Deconstruction
The Fourth Of July
After the fireworks finale, it was
time to go home. With the fireworks and
spending time with my grandpa, it had
been a great Fourth of July.
Deconstruction
Structure:

Para. 1: Orientation – answers WH questions.

Para. 2,3,4: Body – in chronological order


-1 topic sentence, 3 supporting details.

Para. 5 : Reorientation – summing up /


feelings.
Deconstruction
Exercise 2:

In small groups, fill in the graphic


organizer to identify the structure of a
recount / descriptive essay of an event.
Joint Construction
Exercise 3:

Complete the graphic organizer on ‘An


Evening at a Concert.
Individual Construction
Exercise 4:

Using your own notes, write a recount


of the concert that you went to on the
worksheet provided.

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