Sega AM3 has been listed as one of the Video games good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: May 9, 2020. (Reviewed version). |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Sega AM3/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Namcokid47 (talk · contribs) 05:24, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
Namcokid47 (Contribs) 05:24, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Namcokid47: Reminder to not neglect your review duties. These are supposed to be finished within 7 days. Cognissonance (talk) 13:32, 6 May 2020 (UTC)
@Red Phoenix: - A month overdue, but here are my comments.
- I'd remove the "also" from the first sentence.
- "The AM3 designation would continue until 2009 until it was merged into other departments." - This reads a bit awkwardly. I'd change this to something like: "The AM3 designation continued until 2009 when it was merged into other departments."
- The last two sentences in the History section are better as being part of the previous paragraph.
Other than that, I think this looks good. I think I'm going to simply stop reviewing Good Articles from now on considering the colossal amount of time it's taken for me to review two, rather short articles that I had said I'd get to many months ago. I understand the frustration of waiting so long, so I apologize. Once these issues are taken care of, I'll pass this and Sega AM2. Namcokid47 (Contribs) 16:19, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Namcokid47: All right, we should be good. I get the way you feel about reviewing Good Articles; between them and FACs, they take time to do reviews and you really have to be able to dedicate to it. I wouldn't stop "from now on", you have a decent knack for it. But I'd maybe take a break until you're ready to go again - for me, it's often months, but it could be different from you. If it helps, I wasn't really that frustrated - I just looked at AM2 and went, "Hey, how long ago was that?" and I think some of the GA regulars are monitoring because of the backlog drive. (Oh, and big FYI: put your name down here with the GA's you've reviewed since April 1 and they'll send you a barnstar at the end of the month. Then you can at least walk away with a little more sense of accomplishment that you deserve).
I appreciate you reviewing my articles aggressively the last month; it's made for good improvements and rapid advances to GA quality. Red Phoenix talk 00:19, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
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