User contributions for Giovanni Dreyer
A user with 2,515 edits. Account created on 8 December 2018.
7 June 2022
- 04:2104:21, 7 June 2022 diff hist +244 List of longest-reigning monarchs Undid revision 1091888576 by GoodDay (talk) The accusation of "disruption" is difficult to understand, since the correction that was reverted simply addresses a grammatical error; the relative pronoun "who" in the earlier caption refers to Louis XIV, but he himself is not being "verified," rather the length of his reign (or his distinction as longest-ruling sovereign); this simple clarification is not "disruptive" in any way Tags: Undo Reverted
6 June 2022
- 22:2222:22, 6 June 2022 diff hist −25 Bernard VII, Lord of Lippe →Life: red link removed
- 22:2122:21, 6 June 2022 diff hist −1 Bernard VII, Lord of Lippe →Life: extraneous comma removed
- 22:1422:14, 6 June 2022 diff hist +8 List of longest-reigning monarchs Poorly-phrased caption repaired Tag: Reverted
27 May 2022
- 22:1722:17, 27 May 2022 diff hist −6 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: unknown why there needs to be the word "first" in this sentence at all
- 22:1522:15, 27 May 2022 diff hist −8 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: there is no appropriate grammatical use for a dash immediately following a semicolon; Christian names should be used for members of royal families instead of awkward forms that include prepositions
- 22:1222:12, 27 May 2022 diff hist −9 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: the continued inclusion of the confusing alternate form of Isabella de Beaumont's name is best suppressed
- 22:1122:11, 27 May 2022 diff hist −4 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: two uses of the word "during" in such close proximity constitutes bad style
- 22:1022:10, 27 May 2022 diff hist −9 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: unknown why yet another "however" needs to be placed in this spot
- 22:0822:08, 27 May 2022 diff hist +3 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: confusing mess of a run-on sentence broken up and rationalized; Isabella de Beaumont should be identified by the name accorded her on her own Wikipedia page rather than the alternative form Isabella de Vesci; the latter form of the name also obscures the importance of support from Henry de Beaumont and makes one wonder how she was even a member of the Beaumont family; improper semicolon replaced by a comma
- 22:0022:00, 27 May 2022 diff hist −2 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: no need for possessive form in this case
- 22:0022:00, 27 May 2022 diff hist +13 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: correction, Thomas of Lancaster was the uncle of both Edward and Isabella, even though the relationship with Isabella was less pure (as he was a half-brother of Isabella's mother)
- 21:5121:51, 27 May 2022 diff hist −3 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: the family of Henry de Beaumont are properly referred to as the "Beaumonts," not the
- 21:4921:49, 27 May 2022 diff hist +32 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: Thomas of Lancaster was certainly not Isabella's uncle, rather second cousin once removed; Thomas was the uncle of King Edward II as brother of his father Edward I
- 21:4021:40, 27 May 2022 diff hist +4 Thomas, 2nd Earl of Lancaster →Family: link missing
- 21:3521:35, 27 May 2022 diff hist +1 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: comma missing
- 21:3421:34, 27 May 2022 diff hist −1 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: extraneous comma removed
- 21:3221:32, 27 May 2022 diff hist +1 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: comma missing
- 21:3121:31, 27 May 2022 diff hist +1 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: comma missing
- 21:3021:30, 27 May 2022 diff hist 0 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: unknown why these two clauses should be separated by a semicolon instead of a period
- 21:2821:28, 27 May 2022 diff hist 0 Isabella of France →Queenship: comma missing
- 21:2721:27, 27 May 2022 diff hist +1 Isabella of France →Queenship: unknown why these two clauses should be separated by a semicolon and not a period; comma missing
- 21:2521:25, 27 May 2022 diff hist −1 Isabella of France →Queenship: extraneous comma removed
- 21:2521:25, 27 May 2022 diff hist +3 Isabella of France →Queenship: odd phrasing repaired
- 21:1321:13, 27 May 2022 diff hist −4 Isabella of France →Early life and marriage: 1295–1308: no justification for italics if the name of the Wikipedia page of the Palais de la Cité is not italicized
- 21:1221:12, 27 May 2022 diff hist +1 Isabella of France →Early life and marriage: 1295–1308: comma missing
- 21:1021:10, 27 May 2022 diff hist +1 Isabella of France →Early life and marriage: 1295–1308: comma missing
- 21:0921:09, 27 May 2022 diff hist −2 Isabella of France →Early life and marriage: 1295–1308: There should not be two forms of the name of Philip IV within this page
- 20:4420:44, 27 May 2022 diff hist +1 Isabella of France comma missing
26 May 2022
- 22:1922:19, 26 May 2022 diff hist +2 Philippa of Hainault →Political influence: article missing
- 22:1122:11, 26 May 2022 diff hist +1 Eleanor of Castile →Queen consort of England: comma missing
- 22:0922:09, 26 May 2022 diff hist +2 Eleanor of Castile →Crusade: two commas missing
- 22:0322:03, 26 May 2022 diff hist −1 Eleanor of Castile →Second Barons' War: extraneous comma removed
- 22:0322:03, 26 May 2022 diff hist +1 Eleanor of Castile →Second Barons' War: comma added
- 22:0222:02, 26 May 2022 diff hist +1 Eleanor of Castile →Marriage: comma missing
- 22:0122:01, 26 May 2022 diff hist −19 Eleanor of Castile →Marriage: link repaired
- 22:0022:00, 26 May 2022 diff hist 0 Eleanor of Castile →Marriage: better syntax
- 21:5921:59, 26 May 2022 diff hist −183 Eleanor of Castile →Marriage: the sentence about Eleanor's ancestors being spurned is an irrelevant non-sequitur on this page
- 21:5421:54, 26 May 2022 diff hist 0 Eleanor of Castile →Marriage: dash missing
- 21:5221:52, 26 May 2022 diff hist −165 Eleanor of Castile →Marriage: Beatrice of England, daughter of Henry III, was only married to John II, Duke of Brittany, who was not a brother of anybody named Alfonso
- 21:4521:45, 26 May 2022 diff hist −1 Eleanor of Castile →Marriage: extraneous comma removed
- 21:4421:44, 26 May 2022 diff hist +1 Eleanor of Castile →Marriage: comma missing
- 21:4421:44, 26 May 2022 diff hist 0 Eleanor of Castile →Marriage: overly complicated sentence better case
- 21:4221:42, 26 May 2022 diff hist +1 Eleanor of Castile →Prospective bride to Theobald II of Navarre: comma missing
- 21:4121:41, 26 May 2022 diff hist +3 Eleanor of Castile →Prospective bride to Theobald II of Navarre: improper use of a participle ("dangling participle")
- 21:3921:39, 26 May 2022 diff hist +1 Eleanor of Castile →Birth: comma missing
- 21:3121:31, 26 May 2022 diff hist −1 Eleanor of Castile extraneous comma removed
- 21:3021:30, 26 May 2022 diff hist +47 Eleanor of Castile links missing
- 21:2521:25, 26 May 2022 diff hist −1 Berengaria of Navarre →Queen dowager: extraneous comma removed
- 21:2421:24, 26 May 2022 diff hist +6 Berengaria of Navarre →Queen dowager: better means of illustrating the possibility of Berengaria's presence in England
