User contributions for ILike2BeAnonymous

17 November 2018

• 11:3911:39, 17 November 2018 diff hist +7 m Camp Fire (2018) →Wildland-urban interface discussion: If you're not going to spell out "population", at least put a period after "pop.".
• 11:3811:38, 17 November 2018 diff hist −5 m Camp Fire (2018) →Wildland-urban interface discussion: reword
• 11:3411:34, 17 November 2018 diff hist −13 m Paradise, California →2008 fires: Eliminate clumsy wording ("fire" used 3 times in a short sentence).
• 11:3111:31, 17 November 2018 diff hist +1 m Paradise, California →2008 fires
• 11:3011:30, 17 November 2018 diff hist +5 m Paradise, California →Naming: referred --> referring; is --> can be
• 11:2811:28, 17 November 2018 diff hist −8 m Paradise, California →Naming: Removed coy "yet", which implies that some evidence for "Pair o'Dice" might *yet* be forthcoming.

2 January 2013

• 00:0400:04, 2 January 2013 diff hist −19 Stretto Clarify, remove somewhat breezy "We talk about ...".

29 July 2010

• 04:5404:54, 29 July 2010 diff hist −108 Chris Daly →Controversial demeanor: Removing parenthetical sentence fragment: not sure what was intended here.
• 04:5204:52, 29 July 2010 diff hist −23 Chris Daly Undid revision 375447185 by 72.174.14.37 (talk) Not really relevant that he didn't graduate.

28 July 2010

• 07:0107:01, 28 July 2010 diff hist −115 Cigar Undid revision 375859197 by Cayden Ryan (talk) -- reference was to a commercial "blog", just more SEO-grubbing.
• 06:5106:51, 28 July 2010 diff hist +2 m Music of Hungary →Hardcore, metal: Remove lazy, sloppy usage of "&" instead of "and".
• 06:5006:50, 28 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Music of Hungary →Hardcore, Metal: lc
• 06:4506:45, 28 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Cello →Popular music, Jazz and Neoclassical: Why capitalized?
• 06:4406:44, 28 July 2010 diff hist −28 Cello →Orchestral: Concision; "first chair" is so high-school, not used by orchestra players generally.
• 06:4006:40, 28 July 2010 diff hist +4 m Cello →Sul ponticello/sul tasto: It's customary to set off translations in parentheses.
• 06:1706:17, 28 July 2010 diff hist +89 Violin making and maintenance →Maintenance: Using chalk on pegs to correct slippage
• 06:1506:15, 28 July 2010 diff hist −33 Violin making and maintenance →Sound post adjustment: Reformatting, rephrasing.
• 06:1206:12, 28 July 2010 diff hist −72 m Violin making and maintenance →Sound post adjustment: "Structural sense" = meaningless; "sound is chocked"? WTF?; other cleanup.

22 July 2010

• 00:1400:14, 22 July 2010 diff hist −683 Chris Daly →Political career: How is this (his arrest) in any way relevant to his political career? This may be appropriate elsewhere in the article, but not here.
• 00:1100:11, 22 July 2010 diff hist −85 Chris Daly →Early political activity: This business of never having finished college is neither here nor there for the purposes of this section. Seems just like more mud ...
• 00:0500:05, 22 July 2010 diff hist +27 East Palo Alto, California Tag w/{{cleanup}}; article is full of just plain bad writing.
• 00:0300:03, 22 July 2010 diff hist −277 East Palo Alto, California →Culture: Remove two non-notable sentences (there are many Major Taylor Cycling Clubs around the country).
• 00:0000:00, 22 July 2010 diff hist −190 East Palo Alto, California →Overview: Remove badly-written sentence that doesn't belong in the lead.

21 July 2010

• 23:5723:57, 21 July 2010 diff hist +14 m Rent control in the United States →Purpose and scope: Use actual name of Costa/Hawkins
• 22:2922:29, 21 July 2010 diff hist +85 m Microphone →Condenser microphone: Replace reference, since USD site seemed not to be accessible.
• 22:1722:17, 21 July 2010 diff hist +54 Microphone →Condenser microphone: Make a real reference using {{cite web}}.
• 22:0722:07, 21 July 2010 diff hist +63 Microphone →Carbon microphone: Make a real reference; rephrase stuff re:Boudet microphone.
• 22:0122:01, 21 July 2010 diff hist −110 m Microphone →Carbon microphone: Remove redundant stuff about Boudet microphone.
• 21:5521:55, 21 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Richmond, California refinery: LC
• 21:5021:50, 21 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Talk:Chevron Richmond Refinery moved Talk:Chevron Richmond Refinery to Talk:Chevron Richmond refinery: "Refinery" shouldn't be capitalized.
• 21:5021:50, 21 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Chevron Richmond Refinery moved Chevron Richmond Refinery to Chevron Richmond refinery: "Refinery" shouldn't be capitalized.
• 21:4921:49, 21 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Point Richmond, Richmond, California lc
• 19:4919:49, 21 July 2010 diff hist +14 m Aaron Peskin →Personal life: More proper reference to local news crew; no need to plug local TV station.
• 19:4419:44, 21 July 2010 diff hist +19 Aaron Peskin →Political career: Cite, pleeze?
• 18:5918:59, 21 July 2010 diff hist −7 m Orchestra →Organization: Just a little N.B. in there about "period". Remove needless example.
• 18:5118:51, 21 July 2010 diff hist −1 m Richard Wagner →Early stage (to 1842): Lifetime = 1 word.
• 18:4818:48, 21 July 2010 diff hist +7 m Richard Wagner →Opera: Further copy editing for concision, punctuation (incl. real em dashes w/no spaces around)

12 July 2010

• 04:4804:48, 12 July 2010 diff hist −15 m Martini (cocktail) →Martini origins and mixology: Remove needless "footnote" ref.
• 04:4604:46, 12 July 2010 diff hist +59 m Martini (cocktail) →Martini origins and mixology: Replace pretend reference w/real one
• 04:3404:34, 12 July 2010 diff hist +2 Martini (cocktail) →Martini origins and mixology: Take out incorrect capitalization, restate more succinctly.
• 04:1504:15, 12 July 2010 diff hist −1 m Killing of Oscar Grant No buildings were destroyed that night.
• 01:4801:48, 12 July 2010 diff hist −1,051 Richmond, California Remove business of "roughness", which is an unencyclopedic description, no matter the references.
• 01:3601:36, 12 July 2010 diff hist −72 Oaksterdam, Oakland Mostly formatting; removing some fluff.
• 01:0301:03, 12 July 2010 diff hist +29 N Andre grubacic Create the redirect (for Andre, rather than the proper spelling Andrej)

26 August 2009

• 06:0206:02, 26 August 2009 diff hist +119 m Berkeley, California Better reference formatting.
• 05:5505:55, 26 August 2009 diff hist +11 m Golden Gate, Oakland, California "Announcing"--> marking. Reword sentence (still not happy with it ...).
• 05:3805:38, 26 August 2009 diff hist −84 m Violin No reason to italicize these words. Fix parallel sentence structure. Get rid of "he or she" nonsense.
• 05:3205:32, 26 August 2009 diff hist 0 m Violin →Jazz: Jazz not a proper noun, not capitalized.
• 05:3105:31, 26 August 2009 diff hist −126 Violin →External links: WTF?!?

23 August 2009

• 08:0208:02, 23 August 2009 diff hist +4 m Fire Arts Festival Wrong stub category.