Talk:Free radical scavengers

Just tried to edit for clarity but there was an edit conflict. User:Petrosino

I'm done editing Equendil 05:50, 31 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

There you go, a nice introduction anyone can understand, I like it. Sorry if I came across a little rude with my tags earlier by the way, it's a quick and dirty way for me to remind people they're not adressing an expert crowd (should that be in a scientific article, litterature or something about comic books). Equendil 06:04, 31 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Context, and other problems

Alright, I added the {{context}} tag again, because it's really hard to tell what the entry is about unless you happen to know enough chemistry/biology. A sentence as an introduction making clear what the context is would be nice, before diving into technical jargon.

Actually, I just edited the text, I'm perfectly illiterate in that area however, so I'm not even sure it's biochemistry. Equendil 05:36, 31 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Also, please see WP:STYLE for an overview of the style used on wikipedia for writing an article. Equendil 05:25, 31 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Also thanks for clarifying a bit. Equendil 05:45, 31 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]