User talk:Calebleechii
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Caleb's Peer Review
[edit]There is much more relevant information that can be added based on the sources. A brief 1-2 sentence lead of what the Wildlands Network is before the History section could be useful. The section describing the cats sounds a bit subjective without further details to explain why the Cougar is the "most adaptable of all wild cats" or the Jaguar being the "largest wild cats in the world." References section titled needed.
Michelleg0296 (talk) 09:48, 21 November 2017 (UTC)Michelle Gonzalez
Peter's Peer Review
[edit]I feel like there is much more information for this article that were missing. Perhaps the goal and current results for example. The history and specific animals references are helpful, but they don't quite address the theme of this movement. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hyungseoklee (talk • contribs) 14:30, 22 November 2017 (UTC)