Lga3103 Stories Module
Lga3103 Stories Module
Lga3103 Stories Module
Contents
Introduction ...................................................................................................................................... 8
Objectives ..................................................................................................................................... 8
Materials ....................................................................................................................................... 8
Timetable ...................................................................................................................................... 8
Topic 1: Importance of Stories for Young Learners ............................................................................. 9
Who is this book for? ..................................................................................................................... 9
Storytelling .................................................................................................................................... 9
Courses in Storytelling ................................................................................................................. 10
Top 10 Benefits of Reading Aloud to Children .............................................................................. 11
Features of childrens stories ....................................................................................................... 11
Getting Started - A Storyteller's Vocabulary List ....................................................................... 11
Basic Creative Tools ................................................................................................................. 12
Raw Material ........................................................................................................................... 12
First Steps to Retelling a Plot.................................................................................................... 12
Story Elements ............................................................................................................................ 13
Character ................................................................................................................................. 13
Storyline .................................................................................................................................. 13
Time sequence ........................................................................................................................ 13
Setting ..................................................................................................................................... 13
Diction ..................................................................................................................................... 14
Length ..................................................................................................................................... 14
Illustration ............................................................................................................................... 14
Works Cited in this Topic ............................................................................................................. 15
Topic 2: Exploration of Types of Stories ........................................................................................... 16
Types of Story .............................................................................................................................. 16
Genres of Childrens Literature .................................................................................................... 17
Classic Story Types ....................................................................................................................... 18
Story Genres for Young Learners.................................................................................................. 19
Exploring Story Types .................................................................................................................. 20
Exercise 1. Categorise ........................................................................................................... 20
Exercise 2. Explore and Select ............................................................................................... 21
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Presentation ............................................................................................................................ 87
Story setting ............................................................................................................................ 87
How to choose, tell, and read stories aloud ................................................................................. 88
Telling or reading aloud? ......................................................................................................... 88
Your English and the telling of stories ...................................................................................... 89
Choose a story: ........................................................................................................................ 89
Remembering a story............................................................................................................... 89
Different ways of beginning ..................................................................................................... 91
Your manner ............................................................................................................................ 91
Important Practical Considerations .............................................................................................. 95
Voice projection ...................................................................................................................... 95
Diction ..................................................................................................................................... 95
Poise........................................................................................................................................ 95
Gesture.................................................................................................................................... 95
Facial expression...................................................................................................................... 96
Body movement ...................................................................................................................... 96
Time ........................................................................................................................................ 96
Intonation................................................................................................................................ 96
Props ....................................................................................................................................... 96
An example of a Reading Aloud lesson......................................................................................... 97
Works Cited in this Topic ............................................................................................................. 98
Topic 7: Exploring Language through Stories .................................................................................... 99
Developing Fluency and Cohesion................................................................................................ 99
What is fluency? ...................................................................................................................... 99
What teachers should know about cohesion ............................................................................ 99
Why Stories? ............................................................................................................................. 101
Motivation ............................................................................................................................. 101
Meaning ................................................................................................................................ 101
Fluency .................................................................................................................................. 101
Questions for Why Stories? .................................................................................................. 102
Building Fluency through the Repeated Reading Method ........................................................... 104
Background of the Repeated Reading method ....................................................................... 104
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Objectives
Students will:
1. Classify types of stories [1.5]
2. Determine unique features of the different types of stories [6.1]
3. Apply innovative teaching strategies, devices and relevant activities to elicit students
responses to stories [6.5]
4. Stage a storytelling performance incorporating appropriate elements/techniques of
storytelling [5.6, 8.5]
5. Reflect on ones own strength and weaknesses as a storyteller [7.3]
Materials
Lecturer and students need this module, a computer with access to the Internet, and access to a
variety of childrens books and stories.
Timetable
The IPG course involves 3 hours of classes per week.
This module has not been designed to fit the course hour by hour, only to cover all topics in the
Course Proforma. Lecturers are free to present materials in any way they choose.
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In the Language Arts text book Carole Cox writes this about storytelling:
Storytelling
Even with the large number of books available for children today and the variety of stories they are
exposed to on television and videos, children never seem to lose their fascination with storytelling.
As one first-grade child put it, as I was about to read a picture book of a favourite folktale, Tell it
with your face!
The tools of the storyteller are so deceptively simple and so basically human that storytelling is often
neglected as a way of teaching listening and talking. It is, however, a powerful way for children to
listen to and use spoken language. Its also a wonderful way to share traditional literature and
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stories of the past, whether historical event or even personal life stories perhaps yours or your
students.
Here are some suggestions for storytelling by teachers and students:
1. Finding Stories: In addition to stories about personal experiences and those heard told by others,
traditional folk literature is an excellent source for storytelling. Young children enjoy timeless tales,
such as The Three Billy Goats Gruff, The Three Pigs, and other tales of three. Tales like Jack and
the Beanstalk and The Gingerbread Man are sure winners, too.
2. Telling Stories: Storyteller Ramon Royal Ross advises that above all, the storyteller should know
the story very well. In addition, he suggests the following approach for actually telling the story,
which works well for him:
a.
b.
c.
d.
e.
f.
g.
Read the story aloud several times. Get a feel for its rhythm and style.
Outline the major actions in the story, identifying where one ends and another starts.
Picture the characters and setting in the story carefully. Describe them to yourself.
Search for phrases in the story that youd like to work into telling it.
Practise gestures that add to the story.
Prepare an introduction and conclusion before and after the actual telling.
Practise telling the entire story complete with intonation, colourful phrases, gestures, and
sequence in a smooth and natural fashion.
h. Make an audio- or video-tape of yourself telling the story, and listen and look for areas in
which you might improve Also time yourself.
3. Props: Even though props arent necessary, some teachers like to use them for storytelling,
especially with younger children. Props might be picture cards, flannel boards, puppets, or objects
like a handful of beans for telling Jack and the Beanstalk. Mood makers like candles and incense
and background music and noisemakers (e.g., rattles and tambourines) effectively enhance the
telling, too.
4. Costumes: When used with props, costumes can create a dramatic impact. For instance, wearing a
black cape and witchs hat adds drama to telling scary stories in autumn. Even simple costumes, like
hats and shawls, can be used in many creative ways.
(Cox, 2008, pp. 158-9)
Courses in Storytelling
Courses in storytelling to children are generally a minor elective subject in Teacher Training, and yet
for those who master this craft it quickly becomes their most valuable and well-used skill.
As an old Indian proverb says:
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Tell me a fact and Ill learn. Tell me the truth and Ill believe. But tell me a story and it will live in my
heart forever.
Some of the advantages of using stories in any part of the curriculum are that
On the Great Books to Read Aloud website we find this list of the benefits of reading aloud to
children. It is recommended that parents read books to their children from a very early age, and that
this practice continues with regular and frequent stories from the teacher.
1 Reading aloud creates the perfect bond between parent and baby its cosy, comforting and its fun.
2 Listening to stories provides children with new friends characters whom they learn to love.
3 Hearing new words gives children a richer vocabulary.
4 Children can understand stories that are beyond their own reading ability.
5 Hearing books read aloud improves a childs ability to listen for periods of time and increases attention spans.
6 Reading aloud allows children to interact by interrupting and asking questions about meaning.
7 Hearing a story read aloud enables children to make connections with others personal experiences.
8 Listening to more complex stories can help children to extend their knowledge and understanding.
9 Listening to a story being read aloud shows beginner readers how fluent readers read.
10 The words children hear in books give them a rich language when they begin their own writing.
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Story Elements
Students need to be familiar with all of the terms listed here.
Character
Definition: A character is a person depicted in a narrative or drama. Characters may be flat, minor
characters; or round, and major. The main character in a story is generally known as the protagonist;
the character who opposes him or her is the antagonist. Character is revealed by how a character
responds to conflict, by his or her dialogue, and through descriptions. (Wiehart, 2013)
Give an example of 3 well-known story characters:
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Storyline
Well, the storyline is basically the plot.
The story create considers what event (problem) propels their main characters life from ordinary to
extraordinary and shakes up their everyday existence. It could be:
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Diction
Diction is about speaking clearly. Even though children may not fully understand every word they
hear in a story, the storyteller needs to speak clearly and possibly more slowly than they usually
would. There are also other aspects of voice use that can improve storytelling such as change in
the volume (loudness) and pitch of the voice to indicate different characters and their emotions.
Describe good diction by a storyteller in an ESL setting?
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Length
No matter how well the storyteller is, young children only have a limited attention span. Also, a
longer story is likely to contain a great many more twists and turns and complications. However, by
interspersing movement and activities, even young children can remain interested for longer.
How long should your storytelling session go for with young children?
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Illustration
When children look at a book (and likewise for many adults!) the first thing they look for is pictures.
Story illustrations can be line drawings, colourful paintings, photographs, or even diagrams or maps.
When telling a story aloud, the children look to the storytellers face for illustration of emotions
about the story. Sometimes the storyteller will also have pictures or photos to show, and/or realia,
costumes, or puppets. Even the storytellers movements, gestures and actions serve as an
illustration to the listeners.
Give examples of 3 different kinds of illustrations for a story:
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Types of Story
- by Helen McKay and Berice Dudley
There are many different types of stories. The most important consideration when choosing a tale
to tell is whether you like it enough to tell it with enthusiasm. Stories should communicate to you a
need to be told. Some of the different categories of stories available to storytellers are: -Fable - a short moral story not based on fact, using animals as characters, such as, Aesop's Fables The Fox and the Grapes, Lion and the mouse and others.
Fairytale - The best-known would be Grimm's fairytales about imaginary folk, such as elves, giants,
witches, gnomes, and fairies. Closer to home is Mary and the Leprechaun, by Irish-Australian writer
John Kelly.
Folk tale - a traditional story, in which ordinary people gain special insight, transforming them and
enabling them to overcome extraordinary obstacles. See The Magic Orange Tree & other Haitian
Folktales by Diane Wolkstein.
Legend - a story based on the life of a real person in which events are depicted larger than life, for
example, The Stories of Robin Hood, or King Arthur and the Knights of the Round Table.
Myth - a story about gods and heroes, explaining the workings of nature and human nature. See
Psyche and Eros or Inanna by Diane Wolkstein.
Parable - a fictitious story told to point to a moral, for example, The Sower and the Seed from the
New Testament of the Bible.
Personal story - a life story from your own or your family's experience, such as, Streets and Alleys by
Syd Lieberman.
Religious story - an historical and philosophical story based on a particular culture and religious
persuasion, for example, The Story of Lazarus from the Bible.
Tall tale - an exaggerated story, often humorous. Fishing stories, Australian Bush stories, see The
Loaded Dog by Henry Lawson.
Traditional tale - a story handed down orally from generation to generation, such as the Polynesian
stories - Maui, and The Coming of the Maori.
(McKay & Dudley, 1996)
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Poetry: Works of carefully chosen, condensed, and artfully arranged language that looks
selectively at the world in unique and unusual ways.
Read-Aloud Rhymes for the Very Young (Prelutsky, 1986)
A light in the Attic (Silverstein, 1981)
Where the Sidewalk Ends (Silverstein, 1986)
Picture Books: Works in which illustrations and text combine equally to tell a story:
Tar Beach (Ringgold, 1992)
Grandfathers Journey (1994)
Traditional Literature: Stories that have been told for many years, across many cultures, first
orally and then written down:
Lon Po Po: A Red Riding Hood Story from China (Young, 1990)
The People Could Fly: American Black Folktales (Hamilton, 1993)
Fantasy: Stories told in the real or an unreal world, with characters or events that probably dont
really exist and events that may depend on magic or the supernatural:
The Stinky Cheese Man and Other Fairly Stupid Tales (Scieszka, 1993)
Harry Potter and the Sorcerers Stone (Rowling, 1997)
Science Fiction: Stories that explore the possibilities of science in our lives through invention or
extension of the laws of nature:
Tuesday (Weisner, 1992)
The Giver (Lowry, 1990)
Contemporary Realistic Fiction: Stories of real people, living here and now:
Smoky Night (Bunting, 1995)
Maniac Magee (Spinelli, 1991)
Historical Fiction: Stories set in real time and place in history but with some or all fictional
characters:
Encounter (Yolen 1992)
Eleanor Roosevelt: A Life of Discovery (Freedman, 1994)
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Action:
Classroom
drama:
Escape:
Pioneer:
Swashbuckler:
Adventure:
Comedy:
Espionage:
Psychological
thriller:
Teen drama:
Biographic
drama:
Courtroom
drama:
Fantasy:
Rescue:
Thriller:
Body swap:
Crime:
Horror:
Romance:
Tragedy:
Caper:
Disaster:
Kitchen-sink
drama:
Science
fiction:
War:
Chase:
Docu-drama:
Mystery:
Slapstick:
Western:
Chick Flick:
Drama
Period
drama:
Survival:
Whodunnit:
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Genre / Type
Age / Level
Use *
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This can be confusing for some teachers. It is important to notice that stories are not only part of the
World of Stories, and they can (and should) appear in any and all topics. For example:
In the Year 2 Text Book, Unit 5:
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Lets consider the three themes, especially in relation to the stories we tell.
World of Self
As children grow they become more aware of the world further away from themselves and their
mother, then father, and brothers and sisters. The home is the centre of their world, and then they
discover the yard, and the car. When they start school they discover a whole new realm with school,
and friends, and so on.
Stories for young children centre on the family and home.
In the story examples in the Appendix, can you think of any that would fit into this category?
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What genre / type would this story fit? .............................................................................................
What genre(s) of stories would you expect to find in this theme? .......................................................
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World of Stories
In a way, all stories could fit into the World of Stories theme, but there are a great many that can
only fit here.
Which genres / types of stories would you expect to find in this theme? ..............................................
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Name some stories (from your memory or from the Appendix) which would fit this theme. ................
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World of Knowledge
Sometimes we tell stories to share knowledge. This would be a factual story, like a biography, or it
could be a fictional story where someone discovers knowledge in the process of their journey.
Or it could simply be a nonfiction book such as the one in the Appendix, called:
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Year 1
Year 2
Year 3
Unit 1: Things I do
Unit 3: Where am I?
Unit 4: Listen to me
Unit 5: May I?
Unit 5: I am special
Unit 7: Look at me
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Read this excellent short article by Janet Freemantle and answer the questions below.
Children need stories
Once upon a time and so the magic begins. Children need to hear stories, and love to hear stories.
Stories that are read to them, or that they read themselves; sometimes, and best of all, stories told
from direct experience or made up on the spot. Tell us about the time when is often preferred to
a story read from a book.
But why are stories so important for children? I asked Georgie, 10 years old and an avid reader.
Children need stories so that they can learn about the world and what life can be like. I like reading
because its like you are entering another world and you just want to read more and more and see
what happens. It makes me feel nice.
You can experience all the emotions that characters go through. Stories invite you into a world
beyond your personal experience where you can vicariously try out different experiences without
having to deal with the actual consequences in real life. I was asked once by a mother to meet with
her daughter who she felt was being bullied. When I met with the girl I asked her what strategies she
could think of to deal with some of the difficult situations she was facing. She came up with a variety
of clever and appropriate ideas. I was impressed, and asked where she got such bright ideas. From
reading she said. She noted how characters in stories dealt with situations and could apply this in
her own life.
I asked my friend Sally, the only school principal I know who is often to be found reading to groups
of spellbound children, why she considers reading so important. Stories are about situations, real or
imagined, featuring characters, calling out emotional responses from our minds. The richest thing in
the world is LISTENING to stories, which is why children love to be told stories (and be read to), and
have favourites which they can hear again and again. The story goes into the listeners very mind and
heart complete with all its details, and with such emotional connection, often becomes beloved, like
a personal treasure, shared with the storyteller/author.
Through stories a child is also helped to build a rich vocabulary which enables them to articulate
their thoughts and feelings more clearly. As a school counsellor I am struck by how limited childrens
vocabularies often are. I can be told of any number of varied problem situations, and when I ask how
the child is feeling about it all, the answer is invariably one word, sad.
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Reading allows a child to enter a safe private world. It is very nice not to be told what to do by adults
all the time and instead, for an interlude, be free to learn from imaginary characters. So what is
wrong with stories we hear via the electronic media - TV and the Internet? I can best answer this
question with an example. I met once with a boy whose life was very difficult. His mother had died
when he was very young, and he and his father and sister moved a lot between countries so that it
was hard for him to settle and make friends. I often feel lonely, sad, tired, grumpy, he said. I asked
him what he did when he felt that way. I play computer to stop feeling lonely, or watch TV, but the
feeling comes back when the TV is turned off. I wonder what is worse - sad or lonely - l think lonely.
I asked him if he ever read, and how that made him feel. I feel normal when I read he said. Stories
nourish and feed the imagination. And if you can dream it you can do it. We can begin to see our
own lives as a story or a play, where we are the lead character, and find ways to write the kind of
script we would enjoy reading from.
Even Einstein said When I examine myself and my methods of thought, I come to the conclusion
that the gift of fantasy has meant more to me than any talent for abstract, positive thinking.
(Freemantle, 2010)
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Examine a story
1. Choose a story (from the samples in the Appendix, or one of your own).
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2. What topics could you use it in? (There is never just one possibility.) Consider the topics listed in
the KSSR text books, but also your own ideas.
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3. What theme could you use it for? (Again, there is more than one possibility.)
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4. Think about how this story could affect the children in terms of:
Their hopes and dreams, what they could become. ...................................................................
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Forming moral judgements....................................................................................................
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Stimulating mental processes...............................................................................................
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If this seems a little overwhelming, have a look at the example below. (Scans of the book are
included below.)
Example of Examining a Story
1. Choose a story (from the samples in the Appendix, or one of your own).
Rascal, by Linda Strahan. [Scans included in following pages]
2. What topics could you use it in? (There is never just one possibility.) Consider the topics listed in
the KSSR text books, but also your own ideas.
The most obvious topic is (y3) Pets World (although it is not only about pets).
The list of topics is less than the number of weeks / lessons, so we can add others such as
Monsters or Not being afraid, or even Going to the Doctor.
3. What theme could you use it for? (Again, there is more than one possibility.)
World of self, (or World of Knowledge).
4. Think about how this story could affect the children in terms of:
Their hopes and dreams, what they could become. Children could think about
becoming a pet owner, or a vet as a career. Or they could just decide to be less
afraid.
Forming moral judgements Children should realise that they should consider the
feelings of others who are smaller / larger than themselves.
Affecting their personality Help them to become more considerate, maybe also more
obedient.
Initially this appears to be a book about keeping pets, with the child (who the listener
relates to in hearing the story) as the pet owner. But very quickly the child falls into the
role of carer or parent and the pet dog has become the child. The emotions in the story
are those of the dog as it relates to other animals, some of whom it wants to terrorise (or
play with) and some it is terrified of. And in the end it realises that the vet (who it
originally was not keen to see) is its best friend.
So much to talk about ...
Discuss your books and your answers with your partner / group.
Together create a presentation for the class about your chosen book / story.
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(Strachan, 1999)
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contexts in which students play an active role in learning. Roles of the teacher and student are
therefore shifted, as a teacher should collaborate with his or her students in order to help facilitate
meaning construction in students. Learning therefore becomes a reciprocal experience for the
students and teacher.
For more information, see:
Driscoll, M. P. (1994). Psychology of Learning for Instruction. Needham, MA: Allyn & Bacon.
Crawford, K. (1996) Vygotskian approaches to human development in the information era.
Educational Studies in Mathematics. (31) 43-62.
Vygotsky, L.S. (1978). Mind and society: The development of higher mental processes. Cambridge,
MA: Harvard University Press.
Wertsch, James V. Sohmer, Richard. (1995). Vygotsky on learning and development. Human
Development. (38 ) 332-37.
Theories of Learning
Social Constructivism
Social constructivism is a variety of cognitive constructivism that
emphasizes the collaborative nature of much learning. Social
constructivism was developed by post-revolutionary Soviet psychologist,
Lev Vygotsky. Vygotsky was a cognitivist, but rejected the assumption
made by cognitivists such as Piaget and Perry that it was possible to
separate learning from its social context. He argued that all cognitive
functions originate in, and must therefore be explained as products of
social interactions and that learning was not simply the assimilation and
accommodation of new knowledge by learners; it was the process by
which learners were integrated into a knowledge community. According
to Vygotsky (1978, 57),
Every function in the child's cultural development appears twice: first, on the social level and, later
on, on the individual level; first, between people (interpsychological) and then inside the child
(intrapsychological). This applies equally to voluntary attention, to logical memory, and to the
formation of concepts. All the higher functions originate as actual relationships between individuals.
Vygotskys theory of social learning has been expanded upon by contemporary psychologists such as
Miller and Dollard, and A. Bandura.
Knowledge
Cognitivists such as Piaget and Perry see knowledge as actively constructed by learners in response
to interactions with environmental stimuli. Vygotsky emphasized the role of language and culture in
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cognitive development. According to Vygotsky, language and culture play essential roles both in
human intellectual development and in how humans perceive the worlds. Humans linguistic abilities
enable them to overcome the natural limitations of their perceptual field by imposing culturally
defined sense and meaning on the world. Language and culture are the frameworks through which
humans experience, communicate, and understand reality. Vygotsky states (39),
A special feature of human perceptionis the perception of real objects I do not see the world
simply in colour and shape but also as a world with sense and meaning. I do not merely see
something round and black with two hands; I see a clock
Language and the conceptual schemes that are transmitted by means of language are essentially
social phenomena. As a result, human cognitive structures are, Vygotsky believed, essentially socially
constructed. Knowledge is not simply constructed, it is co-constructed.
Learning
Vygotsky accepted Piagets claim that learners respond not to external stimuli but to their
interpretation of those stimuli. However, he argued that cognitivists such as Piaget had overlooked
the essentially social nature of language. As a result, he claimed they had failed to understand that
learning is a collaborative process. Vygotsky distinguished between two developmental levels (85):
The level of actual development is the level of development that the learner has already reached,
and is the level at which the learner is capable of solving problems independently. The level of
potential development (the zone of proximal development) is the level of development that the
learner is capable of reaching under the guidance of teachers or in collaboration with peers. The
learner is capable of solving problems and understanding material at this level that they are not
capable of solving or understanding at their level of actual development. The level of potential
development is the level at which learning takes place. It comprises cognitive structures that are still
in the process of maturing, but which can only mature under the guidance of or in collaboration with
others.
Motivation
Behavioural motivation is essentially extrinsic--a reaction to positive and negative reinforcements.
Cognitive motivation is essentially intrinsic--based on the learner's internal drive. Social
constructivists see motivation as both extrinsic and intrinsic. Because learning is essentially a social
phenomenon, learners are partially motivated by rewards provided by the knowledge community.
However, because knowledge is actively constructed by the learner, learning also depends to a
significant extent on the learner's internal drive to understand and promote the learning process.
Instruction
Collaborative learning methods require learners to develop teamwork skills and to see individual
learning as essentially related to the success of group learning. The optimal size for group learning is
four or five people. Since the average section size is ten to fifteen people, collaborative learning
methods often require GSIs to break students into smaller groups, although discussion sections are
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essentially collaborative learning environments. For instance, in group investigations, students may
be split into groups that are then required to choose and research a topic from a limited area. They
are then held responsible for researching the topic and presenting their findings to the class. More
generally, collaborative learning should be seen as a process of peer interaction that is mediated and
structured by the teacher. Discussion can be promoted by the presentation of specific concepts,
problems or scenarios, and is guided by means of effectively directed questions, the introduction
and clarification of concepts and information, and references to previously learned material. Some
more specific techniques are suggested in the Teaching Guide pages on Discussion Sections.
Reference
Vygotsky, L. (1978). Mind in Society. London: Harvard University Press.
Questions about Vygotskys Social Constructivist Theory.
From the first article:
1. Every function in the childs cultural development appears twice:
first, .........................................................................................................................................
and later, ...................................................................................................................................;
first, between .............................................................................................................................
and then inside ...........................................................................................................................
2. What or who is the MKO? ...................................................................................................................
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3. What is the ZPD? ..................................................................................................................................
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4. What do humans use tools such as speech and writing for? ...............................................................
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5. What do children use these tools for initially? ....................................................................................
6. How do the teacher and students roles shift in the learning environment promoted by Vygotskys
theory? .....................................................................................................................................................
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7. In this environment, what kind of experience is learning? .................................................................
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Flip through the book and notice the commas and full stops pay attention to the types of
sentences. Are the sentences mostly simple and/or compound, or are there a lot of complex
sentences which can be hard to follow (and even hard to read aloud).
Look for the verbs what tense are they? Are they mostly simple present and simple past?
Present perfect is not too hard, but past perfect can start being difficult. Passive verbs could
be a problem if there are a lot of them. Generally these more complex types of verbs tend to
go along with complex sentences.
Look at the nouns are there a lot of different nouns that you are going to have to explain
the meanings of? Are there some words that you have been teaching them? This could be a
good way to reinforce their learning.
If the story has slightly difficult language but its a really good story you can tell it in slightly
simplified language rather than reading it.
Content
You probably need to select a story to fit a particular content theme (World of Self, World of Stories,
World of Knowledge), or a particular topic, rather than simply a language concept. It is not vital to
make a perfect match between the content and the story; it can help reinforce learning - such as
vocabulary - if you can make a strong link.
As well as reinforcing vocabulary acquisition, a story can be used to reinforce learning about a
natural or scientific phenomenon, to teach about culture or history, or to teach about morals and
consequences.
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Visuals
For young learners, this may be the most important issue when selecting a story! There must be
something for them to look at and focus on or they will not be able to concentrate.
If you are reading the story aloud from a book, there need to be enough pictures, and big enough,
for you to hold up and let everyone see them.
If you are telling the story, then you need to be the visual with lots of facial expression, gestures,
and movement. You could also use pictures (big enough), puppet(s), and/or realia.
What do you do if there are no visual aids in the book?
So what can you do if you find a book with a great story in it but there are just not enough, or not big
enough pictures? Some ideas are:
Scan/photograph the (too small) pictures and create a PowerPoint from the pictures.
Collect suitable clip-art or pictures (from Google Images, for example) and make a
PowerPoint presentation.
Use some of the children as the characters in the story, and get them to act out a little as
you tell/read the story.
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However, when selecting a story the teacher will be thinking ahead to what could be learnt from it.
Looking for Language Learning Potential
Read/think through the story and notice the language. For example:
Notice the prepositions are there lots of different prepositions, maybe some repeated
ones too, that could be paid special attention to, along with actions or gestures, to help
reinforce this difficult learning.
Notice the adverbs of time and verb tenses could the sequence of the plot be used to
teach progress of time and how to express it?
Look at the characters names, and the use of pronouns could careful use of intonation and
gestures along with the story telling/reading help to make this concept clear?
Look at the nouns are there a lot of related vocabulary items, such as animals, fruits,
colours, family members, or transport?
Look for numbers does this story have times, dates, money or other numbers?
Look for predictable patterns. Children love stories with predictable patterns, and they are
great for language learning practice. These could be for example: Familiar sequences,
repeated phrases, rhyming patterns, recurring patterns, or cumulative patterns (Cox, 2008).
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depends primarily on the works selected." If the selection is too easy, students will feel bored and
you will have difficulty designing enough activities. If the selection is too difficult, students will feel
frustrated and you will be overwhelmed. The following guidelines may help you narrow down the
field of choices.
When evaluating potential books, look at:
The length and complexity of the story. Simple, short stories with repetitive language work best
for young EFL learners.
Does the book look overwhelming? Type that is too small, or too many words on a page, can
intimidate young students.
The level of vocabulary. How much of it will be review for your students? If students know less
than 75% - 80% of the vocabulary, they may lose confidence in their ability to understand the
story.
Illustrations should be interesting and should help students understand both the vocabulary and
the story.
Finally, select a book that you think you will enjoy. It will be difficult to convince students to be
enthusiastic about a story you don't like.
A selection of recommended titles is provided in the Appendix.
Preparing to Teach
Lesson Planning
Before you start designing worksheets and wordlists, make sure that you know where you're going.
Think about your teaching objective, consider how much time you have to spend with the book, and
then create a plan so that you have a systematic approach in mind as you design materials.
Allow Enough Time
Spending enough time with the book is very important. In order for young students to fully absorb
an English language book, they must interact with it extensively. Dr. Seuss's The Foot Book contains
131 words, 47 of which are the word feet or foot, yet spending five or six hours on a simple book like
this is appropriate with young, beginning learners. Even more advanced young learners need plenty
of time. We're Going on a Bear Hunt, a book based on a popular children's summer camp song, is
very short and simple by adult standards, but my second grade EFL students spent over ten hours
and sixteen class periods studying it. They were never bored, and, in fact, their enthusiasm for the
book seemed to increase in proportion to the time they spent studying it. This observation is
supported by Sabrina Peck (2003, p. 141), who advises teachers of young learners that, "Many
children do not tire of practicing a repetitive and rhythmic text several times a day, many days a
week."
Use What You Find
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Look for features of the book that you can highlight in the classroom. For example, The Foot Book
uses opposites and counting. You can work these two concepts into your supplemental activities.
We're Going on a Bear Hunt is a great springboard for teaching vocabulary about nature (forest,
river, cave, mud, snowstorm) and prepositions (over, under, through). Inside a Barn in the Country
provides an obvious focus on animal names and sounds.
Developing Materials
Developing materials yourself, while challenging and time-consuming, can be very rewarding. Not
only is it a good learning experience which may help give you insight into your teaching, it also
allows you to target the types of activities that will be most valuable to your students, and to tailor
them exactly to fit their needs. To go a step further, Brian Tomlinson (1999, Introduction section,
para. 2), asserts that the most meaningful learning takes place when students are "involved
intellectually, aesthetically, and emotionally" in their own education. When teachers choose to use
student-created materials, instead of pre-fabricated, one-size fits all published ones, they can begin
to accomplish goals like these.
Workbook
Young students need hands-on activities. A teacher-created workbook can act as a basis for one of
those types of activities.
Keep things simple. The workbook need be nothing more than a collection of papers stapled
together. On the first day of teaching a new book, allow students to illustrate the covers of their own
workbooks. This can provide a personal connection to the story at the outset of their study. You can
use the pages as a place for students to draw artistic responses to the story. For example, if they've
learned "house/mouse/train/rain" in class, then the lesson wrap-up may include time for them to
draw a picture featuring the vocabulary words and labelled in English.
Flashcards
Again, materials do not need to be professionally produced to be effective. Assign different key
vocabulary words to different students and have them help make flashcards. You can collect and
laminate the drawings and use them for various activities in follow up lessons. It is amazing to see
the rapt attention students are willing to give materials they created themselves.
Cassette Tape
Many books are available with a companion cassette tape, which often includes versions of the story
set to music or with sound effects. These tapes are well worth the investment and, if possible,
students will benefit from purchasing their own copy as well so they can listen at home. The story
set to music is more entertaining for your students, who might express it by borrowing from Emma
Goldman, and saying, "If I can't dance, I don't want to be in your EFL classroom."
If no tape is available, don't despair! If you are a virtuoso, you could set the story to music yourself
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record it as a class project. You could enlist precocious young ones to make drumming sounds at predetermined intervals or, if you have truly musical students, you could find some way to use their
talents. My sixth grade students particularly enjoyed noticing how "easy" the literature for first
graders was as it gave them a real sense of their own progress.
Teaching Ideas
Sequencing Activities
Young learners in particular need a very active classroom and variety throughout the lesson. Ten
minutes is probably the maximum length of time you can expect students of this age to focus their
attention before you need to change gears. One guideline that works well with young learners is to
assure that, in any given lesson, there is always a little enthusiastic singing, a little quiet listening, a
little enthusiastic dancing, and a little quiet artwork.
The following approach is one that works very well:
Sing. Students sing, recite, or read a passage from the story in teams.
Listen. Students listen to the story from beginning to end.
Dance. Students get out of their chairs for some physical activity. Often, this can be
acting out the actions from the story, but there are unlimited possibilities.
Draw. Students sit back down and illustrate new vocabulary.
While considering how you will allocate class time, don't underestimate the students' enthusiasm for
listening to a story again and again. In fact, according to Anne Burns (2003, p. 22), a surprising result
from her study of second-language learner attitudes toward literacy learning included the insight
that "students were almost unanimous in their desire for teachers to read aloud to them." She
credited the value of hearing fluent reading in English, listening to the written words, hearing correct
stress and intonation patterns, as well as providing a model for imitation as possible reasons.
Types of Activities
Listen to the story on tape/as read by the teacher without looking at the text.
Listen to the story and read along.
Listen to the story and put illustrations depicting parts of the story in order.
Read the book silently.
Read the book to a partner, then switch.
Write your favourite words/new words/words starting with A from the story in your
notebook.
Write a portion of the story in the workbook.
Answer (or practice asking) simple who, what, when, where, and why questions about
the story.
Play Pictionary. Divide students into teams. One member of the team draws a picture
on the board while team members try to guess what it is within a limited time period.
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Speed reading game. Call out a word from the text, then let students race to find it. The
first one to find it reads the sentence aloud. A word of caution: this game is rather hard
on books.
Have students display the flashcards they made, let them be the teacher and ask the
class, "What is this?"
Make up a dance or do actions to the words of the story. A good example of this kind of
story is The Foot Book. The text repeats, "Left Foot/Left Foot/Right Foot/Right." Students
can get out of their chairs and jump from left to right as suggested by the text.
Do the opposite of dancing. Have students "freeze" a moment of the text by acting out
exactly what is described in the text at some specific moment, and holding perfectly still.
You could photograph these moments if you have a digital camera.
Do a verbal fill-in-the-blank exercise. As you read, stop at random and have students
shout out what word comes next.
Check comprehension of key concepts by asking students to draw pictures. For example,
students could demonstrate understanding of the difference between "I like kimchi."/"I
don't like kimchi." by drawing two different pictures.
A note about memorization. A lot of students really do enjoy memorizing the books.
Allow them to recite what they've memorized in teams. Many students love to show off
their English, and feel very proud of being able to produce a minute or so of non-stop
English.
Conclusion
Using children's literature can be an effective and enjoyable way to teach language. Students who
are enthralled by a story forget their worries and anxieties about the new language. In an interview
with Tova Ackerman (1994, para. 2), storyteller Dvora Shurman says that, "The best way to teach is
not to impose teaching, but to allow the listener to become so involved in hearing a story that his
'defences' are no longer active." It is our sense of enjoyment, excitement, and emotional
involvement that is a necessary condition for learning, and using literature in the classroom can
provide the content base for the magic.
References
Ackerman, T. (1994) Storytelling: A Way of Freeing the Imagination. An Interview with Dvora
Shurman. The Journal of the Imagination in Language Learning and Teaching, 2. Retrieved December
31, 2003, from http://www.njcu.edu/cill/journal-index.html.
Burns, A. (2003). Reading Practices: From Outside to Inside the Classroom. TESOL Journal, Volume
12, 18-23.
Haynes, J. (2001). Four Stages of Second Language Acquisition. Retrieved December 31, 2003 from
http://everythingesl.net/inservices/language_stages.php.
O'Sullivan, R. (1991). Literature in the Language Classroom. The English Teacher. Retrieved
December 31, 2003 from http://www.melta.org.my/ET/1991/main6.html.
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Peck, S. (2001). Developing Children's Listening and Speaking Skills in ESL. In Celce-Murcia, Marianne,
(Ed.), Teaching English as a Second or Foreign Language. (pp. 139-149). Boston, USA: Heinle &
Heinle.
Tomlinson, B. (1999). Humanising the Coursebook. Humanising Language Teaching, Year 3, Issue 4.
Retrieved December 31, 2003 from http://www.hltmag.co.uk/sep01.
Appendix
Suggested Titles
For Absolute Beginners:
These are very short stories with a few simple words that repeat over and over again. They will not
overwhelm beginning students.
I Like Books by Anthony Browne
Brown Bear, Brown Bear What Do You See? by Bill Martin, Jr. and Eric Carle (Illustrator)
For Beginners:
These stories have more text, but still use simple vocabulary and a repetitive narrative structure.
The Foot Book by Dr. Seuss
Inside a Barn in the Country by Tedd Arnold (Illustrator) and Alyssa Satin Capucilli
Silly Sally by Audrey Wood and Don Wood (Illustrator)
For Intermediate Students:
These books are well-suited for young learners with a full year of English study experience.
Vocabulary is generally simple, but the stories are much longer. They do retain the features of
repetitive passages and the first three on the list are set to music, which will help students absorb
them.
We're Going on a Bear Hunt by Michael Rosen and Helen Oxenbury (Illustrator)
Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star Illustrated by Iza Trapani
The Itsy-Bitsy Spider Illustrated by Iza Trapani
Green Eggs and Ham by Dr. Seuss
Resources on the Internet for Finding More Titles:
The Children's Literature Web Guide (David K. Brown) http://www.ucalgary.ca/~dkbrown
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2. What pleasure do students feel when they turn the last page of a book?
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3. The key to success in using literature in the ESL classroom depends primarily on.............................
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4. What five things should you look at when evaluating potential books?
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5. What would be an appropriate length of time to spend on a book like Dr Seusss The Foot Book?
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6. What do young children never tire of doing several times a day, many days a week?
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7. What Language Learning Potential does the writer find in:
The Foot Book ........................................................................................................................................
Were going on a bear hunt ..................................................................................................................
Inside a barn in the country ...................................................................................................................
8. What goals can be accomplished when teachers choose to use student-created materials, instead
of pre-fabricated, one-size fits all published ones?
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9. Give some examples of what could be included in a teacher-created workbook about a story.
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10 What four possibilities are recommended for sequencing activities?
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The article above is talking mostly about story reading rather than telling. The following excerpt from
Carole Coxs text book Teaching Language Arts: A student-centred classroom incudes a list of Dos
and Donts for reading aloud, as well as some pointers for selecting books to read aloud.
Some of these points may be useful when you create your checklist at the end of this topic.
The article below by Mart makes some excellent points about both choosing books and using stories
in order to encourage young learners of English.
As always, the questions below are designed to help you focus on the important points in the article.
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of language. Galda and Cullinan (2002: 7) claim that literature entertains and informs and it
enables young people to explore and understand their world and enriches their lives and widens
their horizons and through literature children learn about people and places on the other side of
the world as well as ones down the street. They can travel back and forth in time to visit familiar
places and people, to meet new friends, and to see new worlds. They can explore their own feelings,
shape their own values, and imagine lives beyond the one they live. Tomlinson and Lynch-Brown
(2002:2) define children literature as good quality trade books written especially for children from
birth to adolescence, covering topics of relevance and interest to children. Lewis (2001) states that
there are good reasons for children reading picture-books:
Consider the fact that children born into the first years of the twenty-first century are likely to possess
a richer and more deft understanding of visual imagery and its modes of deployment than any other
generation in the history of humankind. Their world is saturated with imagines, moving and still,
alone and in all manner of hybrid combinations with texts and sounds. This is the world in which they
must function (p.59).
Ghosn (2002: 173) summarizes the reasons why authentic literature is valuable for children:
Authentic literature provides a motivating, meaningful context for language learning, since
children are naturally drawn to stories.
Literature can contribute to language learning. It presents natural language, language at its
finest, and can foster vocabulary development in context.
Literature can promote academic literacy and thinking skills, and prepare children for the
English-medium instruction.
Literature can function as a change agent: good literature deals with some aspects of the
human condition, can thus contribute to the emotional development of the child, and foster
positive interpersonal and intercultural attitudes.
3. How to Select Story Books?
Brown (2004) claims that appropriate selections of childrens literature give students exposure to
new, illustrated vocabulary in context, provide repetition of key words and phrases that students can
master and learn to manipulate and provide a sense of accomplishment.
Smallwood (1988:66) recommends that criteria for the selection of childrens literature for
language learners should include age-appropriate theme; simple language; limited use of metaphor
and unfamiliar experiences; use of rhyme; unambiguous plot; realistic but simple dialogue; potential
for reading aloud; brevity; and good illustrations.
Smallwood adds these criteria some more:
Does the book help meet curriculum objectives or enhance the thematic units being
studied?
Is the books content appropriate to the childrens age and intellectual level?
Does the book use language that is at or slightly above the level of the learners?
Does the book contain repeated, predictable language patterns?
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Are different types of storybooks (animal stories, fantasy stories ) represented in the
classroom?
Are there differences in the style of the illustrations between the books?
Are the main characters boys as well as girls?
Is the book (psychologically) suitable for the age group?
Can children identify with the main character or with any other character?
Will there be links to their personal experiences?
Is the book fun, has it got humour in it?
How does the language match the childrens language skills?
Does the book match cross-curricular topics?
Is it a book the children can read themselves?
Is it a book they can read words or passages from?
Is it a book they can understand without reading the text?
According to Vardel, Hadaway, and Young (2006: 735) the most important criteria in selecting books
for learners of English as a second language is that they are appropriate in relation to age, interests,
and maturity.
4. Teaching Young Learners through Story Books
Stories contribute to childrens language development. According to Winch et al. (2004: 402),
childrens literature provides a wonderful opportunity for children to see language in action, a
great resource for more formal learning about the structures of language, and a locus for learning
about these structures in meaningful contexts.
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Storybooks are part of a countrys culture and thus they combine language learning and
cultural awareness.
Storybooks are challenging the imagination.
Storybooks help children expand their own world, sometimes they may even help them cope
with their reality.
Storybooks provide language in a meaningful context.
Storybooks provide grammatical structures in an authentic context.
Storybooks provide children with the possibility to browse, choose their own pace, look
carefully at details.
Storybooks introduce topics and language in a child oriented way.
Storybooks help children develop creative powers.
In picture books the combination of a text and illustration is supportive for the
understanding and the interpretation of a story.
Stories are useful in language learning for young learners. Young learners acquire language
unconsciously. The activities you do in class should help this kind of acquisition. Stories are the most
valuable resource you have. They offer children a world of supported meaning that they can relate
to. Later on you can use stories to help children practise listening, speaking, reading, and writing
(Slatterly & Willis, 2001). Story telling can be effective for teaching English to young learners for the
following reasons.
Xu (2003) states that literature in English can provide language learners with opportunities to master
structure through exposure to repeated and predictable linguistic patterns. Huck et al. (1997:12)
claim that literature plays an important role in all aspects of oral language development. When
young children are read to their own phonological production- the number and range of sounds that
they produce-increases significantly, and reading aloud has significant effects on the complexity of
childrens sentence structure and expository text. Gambrell et al. (2000:2) lists the characteristics of
their approach to literature-based instruction as:
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High quality narrative and informational literature provides the basis for a consistent readaloud program in which children read daily www.ccsenet.org/elt English Language Teaching
Vol. 5, No. 5; May 2012 104 ISSN 1916-4742 E-ISSN 1916-4750
Literature is the sole or primary basis for initial reading instruction, or it is a significant
supplement to a basal program.
Opportunities are provided for students to listen to and read books of their own choosing.
Students are provided with sustained time for both independent and collaborative book
sharing, reading and writing activities.
Discussions of literature among students and teachers are commonplace.
Children delight in imagination and fantasy. It is more than simply a matter of enjoyment, however,
in the language classroom this capacity for fantasy and imagination has a very constructive part to
play (Halliwell, 1993: 7).
Stories may bridge the gap between language study and language use and also to link classroom
learning with the world outside. Some of the activities do not always have a very large language
element but are nevertheless important in creating a feeling among the pupils that learning English
means fun, activity, creativity and enjoyment.
(Ellis &Brewster 2002: 17)
Repetition of stories enables young learners master the language better. Children enjoy listening to
stories over and over again. This frequent repetition allows certain language items to be acquired
while others are being overtly reinforced. Many stories contain natural repetition of key vocabulary
and structures. This helps children to remember every detail, so they can gradually learn to
anticipate what is about to happen next in the story. Repetition also encourages participation in the
narrative (Ellis &Brewster, 2002: 2).
Stories are motivating, challenging and great fun for young learners. They can help develop positive
attitudes towards the foreign language, culture and language learning(Ellis and Brewster, 2002:1).
Winch et al. (2004:401) states that through literature-based activities guided discussion promotes
many literate oracy behaviours: it improves vocabulary, offers opportunities for more sophisticated
sentence constructions and syntax, and lets the children hear the sounds of words as their peers say
them. Fox (1993:185), about literature based instruction, writes storytelling and hearing stories
read aloud, expose children to linguistic and narrative conventions in the course of the power and
pleasure they experience in the play. Using stories allows the teacher to introduce or revise new
vocabulary and sentence structures by exposing the children to language in varied, memorable and
familiar contexts, which will enrich their thinking and gradually enter their own speech (Ellis
&Brewster, 2002:2). Listening to stories helps children become aware of the rhythm, intonation and
pronunciation of language (Ellis and Brewster, 2002:2). About literature for children Ferguson and
Young (1996:598) claim that (literature) provide language-rich illustrations of the uses of dialogue
and often elicits a chime in response from students, thus providing a natural link to the give and
take of conversation, vocabulary usage, and appropriate syntactical structure.
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Young learners exercise their imagination through stories. They can become personally involved in
a story as they identify with the characters and try to interpret the narrative and illustrations. This
imaginative experience helps (Ellis & Brewster, 2002:1) students develop their own creative
potential.
Stories also develop the different types of intelligences that contribute to language learning,
including emotional intelligence (Ellis &Brewster, 2002:2). Stories develop childrens learning
strategies such as listening for general meaning, predicting, guessing meaning and hypothesizing
(Ellis &Brewster, 2002:2). Learning English through stories can lay the foundations for secondary
school in terms of learning basic language functions and structures, vocabulary and language
learning skills (Ellis &Brewster, 2002:2).
It seems a pity to deprive learners of opportunities to hear authentic uses of past tense forms and
contrast with the other tenses, in the meaningful contexts of stories, and I can see no intrinsic
reason for supposing that use of past tense would prevent children understand a story. In fact, if
they are familiar with stories in their first language, they will probably expect to hear past tense
forms and may misconstrue the verbs (Cameron, 2001: 166). According to Hsieh (2006), storytelling
combined with total physical response can motivate young learners and is beneficial to their learning
of English vocabulary, sentence patterns, and comprehension.
For teachers stories allow to use an acquisition-based methodology by providing optimal input
(Ellis & Brewster, 2002:2). It is great to use real storybooks because they add variety and provide a
springboard for creating complete units of work that constitute mini-syllabuses and involve pupils
personally, creatively and actively in an all-round whole curriculum approach. They thereby provide
a novel alternative to the course book (Ellis & Brewster, 2002:2).
A Canadian critic, Michele Landsberg (1987) writes:
Good books can do so much for children. At their best, they expand horizons and instil in children a
sense of the wonderful complexity of life. No other pastime available to children is so conductive to
empathy and the enlargement of the human sympathies. No other pleasure can so richly furnish a
childs mind with the symbols, patterns, depths, and possibilities of civilisation (p.34).
The following are some recommended storytelling techniques from Brewster, Ellis & Girard (2004).
If students are unfamiliar are with storytelling, begin with short sessions which do not
demand too much from them and over-extend their concentration span.
Read slowly and clearly. Give your pupils time to relate what they hear to what they see in
the pictures, to think, ask questions, make comment. However, do vary the pace when the
story speeds up.
Make comments about the illustrations and point to them to focus the pupils attention
Encourage your pupils to take part in the storytelling by repeating key vocabulary items and
phrases. You can invite them to do this by pausing and looking at them with a questioning
expression and by putting your hand to your ear to indicate that you are waiting for them to
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join in. Then repeat what they have said to confirm that they have predicted correctly, and if
appropriate, expand by putting the word into a full phrase or sentence.
Use gestures, mime, facial gestures to help convey the meaning.
Vary the pace, tone, and volume of your voice. Are you going to whisper to build up
suspense? Are you going to introduce an element of surprise by raising your voice?
Pause where appropriate to add dramatic effect or to give children time to relate what they
hear to what they see, and to assimilate details in the illustrations.
Disguise your voice for the different characters as much as you can to signal when different
characters are speaking and help convey meaning.
Ask questions to involve children. What do you think is going to happen next? What would
you do?
Do not be afraid to repeat, expand and reformulate. This increases opportunities of
exposure to the language and gives children a second chance to work out the meaning and
have it confirmed.
(Shin)
5. Conclusion
Stories are motivating for young learners, and stories can create a happy and enjoyable learning
environment.
Stories are the most ideal sources for young learners in effective language learning. Children like
stories, and they find stories easy to access and understand. Stories provide an outstanding
opportunity for young learners to master the foreign language.
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1. In .......................................................................................................................................................
we are using something much bigger and more important than language teaching itself.
2.Through literature children:
learn ................................................................................................................................................
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They can travel .......................................................................................................................................
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They can explore ...................................................................................................................................
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3. What criteria should be included when selecting books, according to Smallwood?
........................................................................ theme
.......................................................................language
and ..............................................................................
use of ...........................................................................
unambiguous ................................................................
........................................................................dialogue
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good ..........................................................................
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6. Summarise each of Niemanns 12 suggestions for parents selecting books for their children.
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Now look at the criteria in 3, 4, 5 and 6 (above) and classify them into four groups:
Age/ability/language level
Suitable Content
Appropriate Visuals
Language Learning Potential
Place them in the table below. [Note: You may find that some items could potentially fit into more
than one column.]
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Level
Content
Visuals
Language Learning
Potential
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What target language and/or language learning outcomes could you use it for?
What activities could you do with the children before, during, or after reading/telling the
story to teach or reinforce these language learning aspects?
3. Present your assessment of the book/story and your activity ideas to your partner/group/class.
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Type of Response
Percentage of Responses
A
A
A
A
E
E
E
A
E
Questioning
Text part
Associating
Hypothesizing
Explanations
Print and language
Content
Performance
Analysis
19.0
17.4
15.0
13.6
10.2
8.0
7.0
6.8
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2. There was a dynamic interplay between the two types of stances, but more efferent responses,
such as understanding print and expanding a story, were always part of a broader aesthetic
response.
3. Children most often asked questions about the text when they were puzzled or wondered about
something they wanted to know about.
In their student-centred classrooms, teachers focus on students responses, rather than their own
predetermined ideas or those found in a teachers guide to using literature. Children are encouraged
to respond openly, drawing on their own experiences and funds of knowledge. In transactional
teaching with literature, teachers begin by asking open questions So what did you think of it?
and directing children to take an aesthetic stance toward literature.
(Cox, 2008, pp. 65-7)
Here are examples of both aesthetic and efferent questions and prompts:
Aesthetic (more open)
Is it fact or fiction?
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1. What provides the basis for asking questions and planning further teaching with literature?
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2. Look at this statement:
There was a dynamic interplay between the two types of stances, but more efferent responses,
such as understanding print and expanding a story, were always part of a broader aesthetic
response.
This is stating that even when children gave an efferent response (to do with facts and
information), it was still part of.........................................................................................................
3. When did children ask questions about the text? ..........................................................................
...........................................................................................................................................................
4. In student-centred classrooms, what do teachers focus on? ..........................................................
rather than .......................................................................................................................................
5. What are children encouraged to do? ............................................................................................
6. In transactional teaching with literature, how do teachers ask questions?
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Look carefully at the chart of efferent and aesthetic questions. Mark you favourites with a
highlighter pen you may need to refer back to this page when you do your assignment.
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Sing. Students sing, recite, or read a passage from the story in teams.
Listen. Students listen to the story from beginning to end.
Dance. Students get out of their chairs for some physical activity. Often, this can be
acting out the actions from the story, but there are unlimited possibilities.
Draw. Students sit back down and illustrate new vocabulary.
(Brown, 2004)
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Questioning
As mentioned earlier, we tend to think of questions as seeking information, and teachers ask
questions to receive a correct answer. With an aesthetic response there is no one right answer and
children are encouraged to express their own responses to a poem, story, song, play or other piece
of literature. Cox (2008, pp. 74-5) has this to say about Questioning:
Questions: Aesthetic and Efferent
The types of questions teachers ask direct children to take aesthetic or efferent stances toward any
text. Ideally, teachers should first direct students to take aesthetic stances toward literature. Think
about the analysis of childrens response types described earlier. Their preferred types were
aesthetic. They questioned, talked about favourite parts, hypothesized, and made associations. Out
of these broad, rich, aesthetic responses (which were focussed on the development of personal
meaning), more efferent concerns will emerge, such as developing explanations or attending to print
and language, content, and analysis.
Focus first on aesthetic questions and prompts. Begin with an open question or prompt that has
many possible responses:
1. Questioning
What did you think of the story?
Tell me anything you want about the story.
Many times, children will state a preference, such as I liked it, I didnt like it, or It was okay.
Follow up on this response by asking the children to tell why they did or didnt like the story. Next,
ask questions or prompts that are based on the childrens comments or that invite them to respond
first aesthetically and then more efferently. The following questions and prompts are based on
characteristic responses of children described in the earlier section on aesthetic and efferent
stances.
2. Focussing on a part
What was your favourite part of the story? Tell about it.
3. Making associations
Has anything like this happened to you? Tell about it.
Have you ever had feelings like a character in the story? Tell about them.
Does this story remind you of other stories? Tell about them.
4. Hypothesizing
Was there anything in the story you wondered about? Tell about it.
Did something puzzle you? Tell about it.
What else do you think might happen?
Is there anything you would change in the story? What? How?
5. Explaining
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Questioning Exercise:
Did you notice how the questions (above) moved from aesthetic to efferent? The Considering Print
and Language and Considering Content ones in the middle are clearly efferent. But the final
question is once again aesthetic.
Take two different highlighter pens and try to mark which is which. Compare with your
partner/group.
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Listen to the story on tape/as read by the teacher without looking at the text.
Listen to the story and read along.
Listen to the story and put illustrations depicting parts of the story in order.
Read the book silently.
Read the book to a partner, then switch.
Write your favourite words/new words/words starting with A from the story in your
notebook.
Write a portion of the story in the workbook.
Answer (or practice asking) simple who, what, when, where, and why questions about
the story.
Play Pictionary. Divide students into teams. One member of the team draws a picture
on the board while team members try to guess what it is within a limited time period.
Speed reading game. Call out a word from the text, then let students race to find it. The
first one to find it reads the sentence aloud. A word of caution: this game is rather hard
on books.
Have students display the flashcards they made, let them be the teacher and ask the
class, "What is this?"
Make up a dance or do actions to the words of the story. A good example of this kind of
story is The Foot Book. The text repeats, "Left Foot/Left Foot/Right Foot/Right." Students
can get out of their chairs and jump from left to right as suggested by the text.
Do the opposite of dancing. Have students "freeze" a moment of the text by acting out
exactly what is described in the text at some specific moment, and holding perfectly still.
You could photograph these moments if you have a digital camera.
Do a verbal fill-in-the-blank exercise. As you read, stop at random and have students
shout out what word comes next.
Check comprehension of key concepts by asking students to draw pictures. For example,
students could demonstrate understanding of the difference between "I like kimchi."/"I
don't like kimchi." by drawing two different pictures.
A note about memorization. A lot of students really do enjoy memorizing the books.
Allow them to recite what they've memorized in teams. Many students love to show off
their English, and feel very proud of being able to produce a minute or so of non-stop
English.
(Brown, 2004)
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Using your highlighter pens, identify which activities reinforce linguistic learning.
Carole Cox (Literature-based teaching: A student response-centred classroom, 1997, pp. 207-8)
offers these suggestions for activities in a reading aloud session. Take note of which are aesthetic
and which are linguistic strategies:
Reading Aloud
Here are some suggestions for reading aloud:
1. When to Read Aloud: Teachers should read aloud to students several times every day, such as at
the close of sharing time in the morning, before or after recess, to initiate a writing or drama
activity, before or after lunch, or at the end of the day. In addition to serving a modelling purpose,
reading aloud is one of the best ways to create a quiet, peaceful atmosphere in the classroom.
Teachers who feel they need more control in the classroom should get out a good book and read it
aloud to students.
2. How to Read Aloud: Teachers should share books they love. By doing so, they will be more likely
to read dramatically and with enthusiasm. Others should be invited to read, too: principals,
counsellors, parents, and community members. Likewise, children should be encouraged to read
aloud to each other (i.e. buddy reading), perhaps favourite books they have brought to share and
even their own stories read from the Authors Chair. Children learn to read by hearing stories read
aloud and by reading aloud themselves. Time should be provided to do both often.
3. Predictable Pattern Books: Most predictable pattern books are based on familiar cultural
sequences, like the alphabet, numbers, days of the week, and seasons. Other such books use
repeated phrases that invite children to chime in. Remember Sam I am, that Sam I am from Dr
Seusss Green Eggs and Ham? (Seuss 1988). Some pattern books are cumulative tales, in which new
parts of the story are continually added, as in the nursery rhyme The House that Jack Built. Many
pattern books are based on traditional rhymes, songs, or folktales; others are new and original.
Predictable pattern books encourage children to participate in the reading experience by guessing
what will happen next, by joining in a repeated phrase, or by repeating everything thats been said
before. Books such as these should be read often with young children.
4. Big Books and Shared Reading: New Zealand educator Don Holdaway (1979) introduced the
idea of using big books (i.e. books with oversized pages and print) and shared reading in emergent
literacy classrooms. The purpose for doing so is to replicate the bedtime story experience and the
good feeling children have when a parent or caretaker sits close to them and reads aloud. Today,
many publishers have enlarged popular childrens books to the big book size. Teachers can also
create big books by copying stories on paper large enough so that the children can see the words
from up to 20 feet away. (7 metres)
(Cox C. , 1997, pp. 207-8)
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This article by Tedjaatmadja and Renandya suggests a lesson framework that they have tried and
found useful. Whether or not you would consider following their example, pay particular attention
to the right-hand column of their table which lists the principles behind what they are doing.
Read, answer the questions below, and discuss with your partner / group.
Description
All good teachers understand the importance of this
step, especially when working with young learners. This
is where we introduce and prepare the students
affectively, cognitively and also linguistically for the
main part of the lesson. With young children, the hook
should be fun and enjoyable. Fun activities include, but
Principles
a. Learning is best facilitated
when children are cognitively
and affectively ready, when
they can devote their full
attention to what they are
about to learn.
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Book
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Look
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structures, etc.
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structure are sound too and reflect what second language experts believe to be important for
teaching young learners. The key steps of the HBLT lesson structure, the Book and the Look, reflect a
balanced view of instructed language learning principles that promote both meaning-focused and
language-focused learning (Ellis, 2005; Nation, 2007) through the use of high interest story books
(Elley, 2001).
The teacher read-aloud methodology is also well-suited for young children before they can read
independently and later benefit even more from engaging in extensive or pleasure reading
(Renandya, 2007).
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Blok, H. (1999) Reading to young children in educational settings: A meta-analysis of recent research.
Language Learning, 49, pp.343-371
Elley, W.B. (2001) Book-based approaches to raising literacy in developing countries. International
Journal of Educational Research, 35 (2), pp.127-135
Ellis, R. (2005) Principles of instructed language learning. System 33, pp.209-224
Jacobs, J., & Hannan, D. (2004) Combining cooperative learning with reading aloud by teachers.
International Journal of English Studies, 4(1), pp.97-118
Krashen, S.D. (2009) Language Education: Past, present and future. RELC Journal, 39(2), pp.178-187
Nation, P. (1996) The four strands of a language course. Tesol in Context, 6(2), pp.7-12.
Nation, P. (2007) The four strands. Innovation in Language Learning and Teaching, 1(1), pp.2-13
Odean, K. (2003) Reading aloud to children: Tips for parents. Retrieved on 12 April 2012 http://www.
kathleenodean.com/tips_reading.htm .
Renandya, W.A. (2007) The power of extensive reading. RELC Journal, 38(2), pp.133-149
Richards, L.O., & Bredfeldt, G. J. (1998) Creative Bible Teaching. Chicago: Moody Publishers
Trelease, J. (2006) The read-aloud handbook (6th edition). New York: Penguin Books
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5. Give some examples of activities to use in the Hook stage of the lesson.
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6. What is the multi-sensory approach and why is it useful?
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7. How many hooking activities might be needed to keep children engaged in a 30-minute lesson?
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8. What is the best kind of hook and why? ............................................................................................
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9. What is a good way for teachers to provide comprehensible input? .................................................
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10. How does teacher read-aloud affect language input? .......................................................................
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11. What promotes incidental learning? ..............................................................................................
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12. What kind of materials are likely to get the young learners full attention? .....................................
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13. What has research has shown about reading with children? ...........................................................
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14. How does the Read and Predict technique help learners? ................................................................
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15. How does the Tell and Check technique assist students learning? ...................................................
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16. How does the Listen and Draw technique help during a lesson? ......................................................
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17. What can be a problem with student read-aloud lessons? ...............................................................
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18. How can teachers increase the chance of language features being incorporated into the learners
developing language system? ..................................................................................................................
19. What is a less productive way of learning language features? ..........................................................
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20. Give two reasons why the Took method is a good way to end the lesson.
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Discuss with your partner / group which of the activities involve aesthetic values, and which are
more concerned with linguistic features.
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important milestone -- early language development, a sign that they are developing some symbolic
abilities.
Preoperational Stage
During this stage, young children are able to think about things symbolically. Their language use
becomes more mature. They also develop memory and imagination, which allows them to
understand the difference between past and future, and engage in make-believe.
But their thinking is based on intuition and still not completely logical. They cannot yet grasp more
complex concepts such as cause and effect, time, and comparison.
Concrete Operational Stage
At this time, elementary-age and preadolescent children demonstrate logical, concrete reasoning.
Children's thinking becomes less egocentric and they are increasingly aware of external events. They
begin to realize that one's own thoughts and feelings are unique and may not be shared by others or
may not even be part of reality. Children also develop operational thinking -- the ability to perform
reversible mental actions.
During this stage, however, most children still can't tackle a problem with several variables in a
systematic way.
Formal Operational Stage
Adolescents who reach this fourth stage of intellectual development are able to logically use
symbols related to abstract concepts, such as algebra and science. They can think about multiple
variables in systematic ways, formulate hypotheses, and consider possibilities. They also can ponder
abstract relationships and concepts such as justice.
Although Piaget believed in lifelong intellectual development, he insisted that the formal operational
stage is the final stage of cognitive development, and that continued intellectual development in
adults depends on the accumulation of knowledge.
(Benarock, 2012)
The second article, about Kohlberg, is from the Simply Psychology website (McLeod, 2011):
Kohlberg
by Saul McLeod, published 2011
Lawrence Kohlberg (1958) agreed with Piaget's (1932) theory of moral development in principle but
wanted to develop his ideas further.
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He used Piagets story-telling technique to tell people stories involving moral dilemmas. In each case
he presented a choice to be considered for example between the rights of some authority and the
needs of some deserving individual who is being unfairly treated.
One of the best known of Kohlbergs (1958) stories concerns a man called Heinz who lived
somewhere in Europe.
Heinzs wife was dying from a particular type of cancer. Doctors said a new drug might save her.
The drug had been discovered by a local chemist and Heinz tried desperately to buy some, but the
chemist was charging ten times the money it cost to make the drug and this was much more than
the Heinz could afford.
Heinz could only raise half the money, even after help from family and friends. He explained to the
chemist that his wife was dying and asked if he could have the drug cheaper or pay the rest of the
money later. The chemist refused saying that he had discovered the drug and was going to make
money from it. The husband was desperate to save his wife, so later that night he broke into the
chemists and stole the drug.
Kohlberg asked a series of questions such as:
1. Should Heinz have stolen the drug?
2. Would it change anything if Heinz did not love his wife?
3. What if the person dying was a stranger, would it make any difference?
4. Should the police arrest the chemist for murder if the woman died?
By studying the answers from children of different ages to these questions Kohlberg hoped to
discover the ways in which moral reasoning changed as people grew.
Kohlberg told several dilemma stories and asked many such questions to discover how people
reasoned about moral issues. He identified three distinct levels of moral reasoning each with two
sub stages. People can only pass through these levels in the order listed. Each new stage replaces
the reasoning typical of the earlier stage. Not everyone achieves all the stages.
Kohlberg Stages of Moral Development
Level 1 - Pre-conventional morality
Authority is outside the individual and reasoning is based on the physical consequences of actions.
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Stage 5. Social Contract and Individual Rights. The child/individual becomes aware that while
rules/laws might exist for the good of the greatest number, there are times when they will work
against the interest of particular individuals. The issues are not always clear cut. For example, in
Heinzs dilemma the protection of life is more important than breaking the law against stealing.
Stage 6: Universal Principles. People at this stage have developed their own set of moral
guidelines which may or may not fit the law. The principles apply to everyone. E.g. human
rights, justice and equality. The person will be prepared to act to defend these principles even if
it means going against the rest of society in the process and having to pay the consequences of
disapproval and or imprisonment. Kohlberg doubted few people reached this stage.
Critical Evaluation
Criticism of Kohlbergs theory comes from Gilligan, who argues that the theory is androcentric (male
bias) after Kohlberg reporting that most men were at stage 4 while most women were at stage 3.
Gilligan (1982) claims that the female participants of Kohlbergs study were being judged using a
male standard due to the gender bias of Kohlbergs original research, which was based solely on
studying men. Gilligan reached the conclusion that Kohlbergs theory did not account for the fact
that women approach moral problems from an ethics of care, rather than an ethics of justice
perspective, which challenges some of the fundamental assumptions of Kohlbergs theory.
The fact that Kohlbergs theory is heavily dependent on an individuals response to an artificial
dilemma brings question to the validity of the results obtained through this research. People may
respond very differently to real life situations that they find themselves in than they do to an
artificial dilemma presented to them in the comfort of a research environment. Further, the gender
bias issue raised by Gilligan is a reminded of the significant gender debate still present in psychology,
which when ignored, can have a large impact on results obtained through psychological research.
The way in which Kohlberg carried out his research when constructing this theory may not have
been the best way to test whether all children follow the same sequence of stage progression. His
research was cross-sectional, meaning that he interviewed children of different ages to see what
level of moral development they were at.
A better way to see if all children follow the same order through the stages would have been to carry
out longitudinal research on the same children. However, longitudinal research on Kohlbergs theory
has since been carried out by Colby et al. (1983) who tested 58 male participants of Kohlbergs
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original study. He tested them 6 times in the span of 27 years and found support for Kohlbergs
original conclusion, that we all pass through the stages of moral development in the same order.
References (for Kohlberg article)
Colby, A., Kohlberg, L., Gibbs, J., & Lieberman, M. (1983). A longitudinal study of moral judgment.
Monographs of the Society for Research in Child Development, 48 (1-2, Serial No. 200). Chicago:
University of Chicago Press.
Gilligan, C. (1982). In a Different Voice: Women's Conceptions of Self and Morality. Harvard
Educational Review, 47 (4).
Kohlberg, L. (1958). The Development of Modes of Thinking and Choices in Years 10 to 16. Ph. D.
Dissertation, University of Chicago.
Piaget, J. (1932). The Moral Judgment of the Child. London: Kegan Paul, Trench, Trubner and Co.
(McLeod, 2011)
Discussion questions
Consider these questions with your group (or partner).
According to Piagets stages of development:
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Assessment / Exercises
These exercises are designed to help you apply what you have been reading. Your lecturers may
choose to use one or more of them as assessment tasks.
1. Turn a story into a drama activity
Identify a story or story book you could use to develop a drama performance.
Why is the book suitable?
What are the benefits of such activities?
Which of the activities / questions require an aesthetic response from the children, and
which are strategies to teach linguistic features?
Prepare a presentation (PowerPoint OR other) to tell the class about your ideas.
2. Create language focussed activities
Using the same book or a different one:
Create 3 (different!) language focused activities or worksheets. (Refer to the notes above!)
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3. Explore development
Choose a story / book that you could tell to children.
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Dry data is boring, and delivering a set of facts and figures using this method means it is likely to be
forgotten as quickly as it is absorbed. Because story engages us on so many levels, we easily retain it
in our memory to use it as needed. The natural form of story makes sense to human beings. It
contains all that we care about: people, problems and solutions. A story is really just a mass of
information organised in the form of a situation with characters who we can relate to; settings we
can envisage; problems we want to know the answer to; and resolutions that give us hope. Stories
are food for thought. They help us to discern right from wrong, and give us the heroes and heroines
we wish to model ourselves on.
A well-developed and presented story can hold the interest of an entire audience, and it will reach
out and touch them at any age. Knowing and applying the few simple basics of storytelling will help
strengthen your stories.
The storytelling persona
The most successful storytellers will tell you that they have a totally separate persona which they
adopt when working. Many will also tell you that it was something they only realised later, and
developed over time. In other words, they were not initially aware they needed this separate
identity, but that it came with experience. So, with this valuable experience now shared, remember
before you begin to tell a story to take on your storytelling persona.
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Choose your persona and act it out right from the start. For example, you could be the
storytelling fairy or the old woman of the woods.
Whatever you choose as your persona, think of yourself as that person, and act and dress
accordingly your storytelling performance will be better for it.
If you wish, you can have more than one storytelling persona.
Finding stories
There are many kinds of stories you can work with. Try starting with simple fairy tales or folk tales
that you know, for example, choose your favourite Grimms fairy tale, and then, as your experience
grows, you can explore various different types and branch out.
With time, you will probably find many kinds of tales that will interest you personally. There are all
sorts to choose from, including folk tales from other countries and cultures; humorous tales;
traditional fairy tales in numerous versions; wish tales; trickster tales; scary tales; tall tales; myths
and legends; and Bible stories. The list is endless, but do not let that put you off.
It is far best to work with traditional folklore or tales in public domain, than to plagiarise a living
author or storyteller without their permission. With experience, you may want to try a variety of
stories, and perhaps even go on to tell your own personal stories.
Prepare and practise
Once you decide on a story, spend plenty of time with it. For some people it may take some time
and a number of tellings before a new story becomes their own. Others are naturals and can pick
up a story and run with it almost immediately. However, this does not necessarily make them any
better in the long run.
Preparation
Read the story several times, first for pleasure, then with concentration.
Analyse the storys appeal the word pictures you want your listeners to see, and the mood
you wish to create.
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Live with your story until the characters and setting become as real to you as the people and
places you know in real life.
Visualise the story. Imagine the sounds, tastes, smells and colours. Only when you see the
story vividly yourself, will you be able to paint the word pictures to enable your audience to
see it.
Delivery techniques
Use your voice to good effect when you are telling the story in a calm and relaxed way.
If you are telling the story to very young children, maintain their attention by keeping it
quite short (approximately ten minutes).
Show enthusiasm and use hand and eye gestures to convey meaning younger children love
this.
Demonstrate sincerity and whole heartedness be earnest.
Express animation and variety in your storytelling to make the story seem more interesting.
Presentation
Practise in front of a mirror, or a friend, and ask for their honest feedback.
Remember that the words are only part of the package that includes body language,
clothing, tone and other components.
Unless you are an accomplished musician who is used to talking while you play, do not use
music as it will take away from the storytelling performance. Instead, use props, such as
small hand bells or pipes, to indicate certain noises.
Use various puppets if you feel confident about doing this and talking at the same time.
Story setting
Storytelling is best carried out in a relaxed atmosphere that is free from distractions. The audience
should be comfortable and sitting close together. Make sure that the room is quiet, and empty
except for your audience.
Ensure that all toilet trips are carried out beforehand and, in the case of adults, all mobile phones
are switched off or put on silent. Give careful attention to the setting beforehand, and be prepared
to rearrange the room to bring the listeners closer, or use a backdrop or hanging to create the
correct atmosphere, especially in early years settings.
Remember to give credit to sources, but above all, enjoy telling stories!
(Wright, 1995)
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read the story or listen to it a few times and then try to retell it on a tape or to a friend.
explicitly select the key points, write them down, perhaps in bubbles as in the example here
for 3.8, Ma Liang.
Chinese
First part of my
Ma Liang
bubbled Ma Liang
Likes
drawing
stick
ground
very poor
old man
brush
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This is a technique that I use. Note how I have added extra details to the bubbles but if I forget them
I know that I can still tell the story. It is important to make each bubbled story look different because
it will then be easier to remember visually. It is the actual making of the bubbled story which helps
me to get it into the memory. Later the bubbled story acts as a useful and rapid mnemonic.
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Instead of putting the key points in bubbles, you might prefer simply to write out the key
points. This is called a story skeleton.
- See the story as a film in your imagination and let your telling of the story be guided by that
inner vision.
- You could remember a dramatic or verbal rhythm in the story. (I think I am right in saying
that the great West Indian storyteller, Grace Hallworth, learns he stories this way.)
- Remember the personalities of the characters and this will remind you of the story. (Duncan
Williamson, one of whose many stories is 3.6, The little white cat, told me this is what he
does.)
Whatever technique you use, it is probably best not to tell it dramatically the first tie. Find a friend
who will listen to you and try it on them. Warn them that you will just concentrate on getting the
gist of the story right. Once you are confident that you can remember the basic story, you can
concentrate on expressing what you feel about the story in future tellings. The more often you tell
the story, the more you will feel at home with it. Do not expect to tell it brilliantly the first time.
Furthermore, the more stories you learn, the easier it is to learn new ones.
Just before you tell or read the story
I am referring here to the craft of storytelling and story reading rather than to the pedagogical
preparation, which is discussed in a later section (see pages 23-33 and 64). Half the success of a story
depends on what you do before you begin! The children must be in the right frame of mind for a
story. It they think it is all part of the normal lesson they will be in their normal frame of mind and
not in their story frame of mind, and you will probably not have much success.
So they must be in a story frame of mind!
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Try to get the children much nearer to you than is normally the case. This is partly because it
is important for them to see you (and your book if you are using one), but it is also because
it changes the relationship between you and them and each other. They know they are going
to share something. Younger children can be asked to sit on the floor around your feet.
If at all possible change the seating before the story is told. I always try to do this before the
children come into the class. My preferred arrangement is a U-shape of chairs with a Ushape of table immediately behind. Some children sit on the chairs and some children sit on
the edges of the tables.
If you cannot change the arrangement of tables and chairs, then try to find some other way
of helping the children to feel that something special is going to happen (rather than merely
saying so). Children are so used to hearing you talk; they just assume it is going to be what
they have had before. Some teachers always sit on their table or stand in a particular part of
the room when they are going to tell a story and never do this at any other time.
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Some teachers have a story bag (which might just be an ordinary plastic bag) which they
have only to hold up for the children to get into their story frame of mind. Other teachers
often make use of a friendly puppet. Others might want to wear a particular hat or coat.
You can put some music on always use the same music and then the children will know
and get themselves ready.
Once, in a noisy class, I wrote on the board Id like to tell you a story. Then I sat down on a
chair in an open space in front of the children and waited. I didnt have to ask them to be
quiet. You might write A story for you or just Story time.
Perhaps have a regular time for your storytelling or story reading and the time will put them
into the right frame of mind.
For particular stories you might display a picture before you begin, or an object like an old
umbrella, or a basket with food in it for 3.7, Little Red Riding Hood. An antique doll can be
used to tell the story of her times. A Cinderella puppet can tell the Cinderella story.
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inappropriate. On the other hand, many people do not make sufficient use of this potential richness,
and produce a monotone.
You have probably not got the time to go on a course in voice training! On the other hand, there are
some basic things that we can all do.
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Sit or stand to that you can breathe easily dont be all hunched up.
Keep breathing while talking so you dont become breathless.
Speak loudly enough for the children at the back to hear easily, but not by using a harsh
teachers voice designed to cut through school corridors and across school playgrounds.
Adopt a different voice for the narrator and for each of the characters. Make these voices
different: high/low, soft/harsh. A simple experiment try saying an ordinary sentence so
that it sounds like the start of an amazing story. For example, I got up this morning and
opened the curtain.
A second experiment try saying the same sentence in several moods: happily, unhappily,
wickedly, innocently, in a thoughtful way, in a casual way, in a frightened way.
Pace and pause: the pause is one of the most powerful of all qualities in storytelling and
reading. The listeners have to become active in order to fill it in they try to predict what
you will say next. It is one of the most vital elements in dramatic storytelling. Use it at key
moments.
Remember that in English we tend to stress the important words in a sentence. This helps to
convey meaning.
The language
Be prepared to pre-teach important words and phrases which are an intrinsic part of the story. They
might be important for the meaning of the story (for example, chimney sweep is an important pair of
words in 3.6, The Little White Cat), or they might be important for their play on words and sounds
(for example, the repetition of dark, dark, in 3.2, In a dark, dark town).
Even simpler word can be spoken as if they are important. Speak slowly and enjoy the sound of the
words you say. Of course, this is easier to do in ones mother tongue than in a foreign language. A
feeling of rhythm and rhyme almost certainly helps people to learn and remember. Stories in verse
are loved and effective.
Make sure you are confident of how to begin and finish the story. Many storytellers say that you
should learn the first and the last lines by heart. Personally, I do this with some stories, but with
others I like to slide the listeners into the story before they know they are in it.
Make the story yours and theirs. You might pause in the story to say to a child, if it is true, Youve
been to China, havent you, Hans? Omit, add, change, and emphasise if you have a good reason. But
be careful the great traditional stories have stood the test of time.
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If you are telling a story rather than reading aloud from a book, you can easily move like
Little Red Riding Hood as she picks the flowers (see 3.7), or you can hold up one of your
hands in front of your face and slowly look around it with a wicked smile to represent the
wolf. As you creep into the dark cave with the Little Indian Boy (3.4) you can hold out your
hands and pretend to be putting them down on the ground very, very slowly and you can
switch your eyes from side to side as if searching the darkness.
Involve the children, for example, as you lift the axe off the paper in the Ma Liang story
(3.8), walk across to a child and pretend to give it to him or her.
-Very often I find that I begin to make the action with my body a split second before I refer
to it. So, for example, I might hold up my hand to my ear and switch my eyes to and fro just
a moment before I say, He listened.
Make your movements simple, slow, and never apologetic! I think body movements in
storytelling should be just a little slower and bigger than you would do them in normal
conversation. Give the children time to appreciate your movements and time to feel how
they contribute to the meaning of the story. We are gripped by stories and storytellers
because we feel they really know what they are doing and saying; your storytelling must be
clear and simple and not fleeting and confusing like normal life. But I say, think, because we
must all find out own way of telling.
-Look at people as you tell the story. Dont just scan their faces so that you can claim you
were looking, but really look. (p18) It doesnt do any harm to look at one particular child for
several moments as you tell the story. Other children feel that you are concentrating on
them and not just the story.
Interruptions
One child might chatter to a neighbour. The school caretaker might knock at the door. Someone
might drop a book. What do you do?
Children not paying attention
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If it is several children, it may be that you are not being dramatic enough. Liven things up.
Move around as you tell the story.
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Involve the children, for example, by asking them what they would do in the situation in the
story.
If one child is chattering then go and stand very near to him or her as you tell the story or
even tell the story directly to him or her.
Pause, show no expression of annoyance, perhaps pick up the book yourself, and then carry
on.
- Make a joke out of it, perhaps related to the story.
The important thing is not to break the magic spell. You have lifted the children off the ground and
you are holding them there. Avoid returning, however momentarily, to your normal teaching voice
and manner. That would jolt them off the magic carpet and out of their story frame of mind.
Dont use the cancellation of a storytelling as a punishment.
Extra tips on reading from a book
- Read the story beforehand and get to know it and how to read it with some sense of drama.
Also make sure you can pronounce all the words and know what they mean.
- Dont speak into the book. As general guidance, read the story to the children at the back of
the group.
- Read slowly and with a more dramatic quality than in normal speech.
- Stop to comment, or to invite comments, quite often.
- Look up and try to make eye contact. Check that the whole group is with you.
- Stop to show the pictures and make sure all the children can see them.
- Have your finger ready to open the next page.
- Dont read for longer than about 10 minutes (less for younger children).
(Wright, 1995, pp. 10-19)
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You can also make gestures by the movements of your head, hips, legs and feet. (Always be aware of
safety, and especially if the children are moving around too.)
Facial expression
Tell the story with your face! Your facial expression should depict the various characters, and their
feelings, and your feelings in response to the events in the story. The children should be looking at
your face and eyes and reading your lips. Dont be in a hurry. Allow the children to take in the
expressions on your face, and even try copying them. Ask them to show with their faces how they
feel, or how they think that a character feels. (And then, of course, they can try drawing this as a
follow-up to the story.)
Body movement
While you are being careful of your poise, and using gestures and facial expressions, your body can
still do a lot of storytelling as well. For example, each of your important characters has a different
way of standing, and walking. As you mention a character you can get into their special body shape,
take a few steps the way they walk, use their particular gestures and facial expressions, and speak
with their voice. (It is a lot to think about while you are nervously telling, but concentrate on one
aspect the first time until it becomes natural.)
You can also use your body position in front of the children to make it obvious who is talking in the
story, a bit like you are taking the place of two (or more!) different actors in a play. Stand on the left
when the old man talks and on the right when the cat replies.
Time
Young children, especially, cannot concentrate for more than 10 minutes at the most. Your story
needs to be carefully planned so that you dont get too carried away on one particular point and
then lose them before you get to the exciting ending. Write yourself a bubble plan, or a series of
pictures, or whatever works for you, and add the timing in minutes and/or seconds and then
practice. All of your brilliant work and preparation will go down the drain if you dont pay careful
attention to your timing. (The opposite is bad, too, when the audience are ready and the story is all
over in 30 seconds because you forgot parts of it!)
While you are keeping to a tight schedule, it is very important not to hurry speaking too fast will
simply mean no one gets what you are saying, and you will get into a muddle trying to do all your
movements and gestures.
Intonation
The English language has a very different tune to Bahasa Malaysia. One of the (many) reasons for
telling stories is to get the children used to this. So you need to make sure you are getting it right. Do
not speak in a monotone. Make sure you emphasise the important words. Make sure you know
when your voice should rise at the end of a sentence, and when it should fall. Practice.
Props
Props are not essential, but can be very useful. This could include puppets to indicate the different
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can also use simple costumes a hat, umbrella, shoes, jacket to give clues as to the setting and
characters and keep the children interested. And the children may also like to try using/wearing the
costumes, become the characters ... leading on to a play or drama related to the story.
Other types of realia can be useful props equipment, food, a toy, anything that relates to the story,
gets the children interested, and even helps their understanding.
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Fluency refers to the ability to produce rapid, flowing, natural speech, but not necessarily
grammatically correct speech. This is often contrasted with accuracy.
(Bogglesworld ESL, 2013)
Discuss with your partner/group: Why is fluency often contrasted with accuracy?
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Here is a short article explaining cohesion, which is slightly more complex. Read it and summarise
below discuss with your partner/group.
What teachers should know about cohesion
Introduction
Cohesion is the term for the quality of a text such that it appears as a single unit, not as a random
sequence of thoughts or sentences. Cohesion is achieved by a number of devices or ties as explained
below.
ESL students may have trouble understanding a text that seems to have easy words and concepts
because they fail to identify the cohesive ties. Conversely, the teacher may fail to understand the
ideas or arguments that the ESL student is trying to express because the student has not yet learned
how to tie English sentences together clearly and naturally with the appropriate cohesive devices.
Mainstream teachers who have explicit knowledge of the following cohesive techniques will be in a
better position a) to help their ESL students understand the difficult texts in their coursebooks or
found on the internet, and b) to avoid problematic cohesion in their own worksheets and tests.
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Backward reference
The most common cohesive device in texts is the backward reference to something that has been
mentioned before. The technical term for this type of reference is anaphora. Three examples of
anaphoric reference are:
1. Use of a pronoun to refer back to an already-mentioned noun.
2. Use of the definite article to qualify a noun that has been already been introduced with
the indefinite article.
3. Substitution of an already mentioned noun by a synonym or hyponym.
Here are examples of each:
My sister's on the phone. She says she needs the drill that she lent us.
When I looked out of the window yesterday I saw a man and a woman standing by the
gate. The man was wearing a hooded jacket and the woman was carrying a baseball bat.
There was so much delicious food on display, but I'm on a diet so I had to stick to the
salad.
Forward reference
Another common cohesive device is forward reference or cataphora. Here are two examples of
cataphoric reference:
Perhaps I shouldn't tell you this, but when I was young I had hair down to my waist!
Please send your reply to the following address.
Ellipsis
Ellipsis is a third cohesive device. This is the omission of words on the assumption that the listener or
reader will be able to supply them mentally. Examples:
The horse (that was) injured in the road accident had to be put down.
I would love to visit New Zealand but I can't afford to. ( .. visit New Zealand.)
I'd rather talk to someone on the phone than send them an email. Wouldn't you? (..
rather talk to someone on the phone than send them an email?)
Conjunctives
A final and very important device that makes texts cohesive is the use of conjunctives or adjuncts.
These are the words that show how ideas are connected. For example: firstly, secondly, so, however,
nevertheless, in conclusion, by contrast, on the other hand, etc.
(Shoebottom, 2013)
Summary What is Cohesion?
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In his book Storytelling with Children, Wright explains some of the language benefits of
storytelling, including various types of fluency. Read the section and answer the questions below.
Why Stories?
Stories, which rely so much on words, offer a major and constant source of language experience for
children Stories are motivating, rich in language experience, and inexpensive! Surely, stories should
be a central part of the work of all primary teachers whether they are teaching the mother tongue or
a foreign language.
Here are some of the most important reasons why stories should play a central role in teaching a
foreign language to teaching.
Motivation
Children have a constant need for stories and they will always be willing to listen or to read, if the
right moment is chosen.
Meaning
Children want to find meaning in stories, so they listen with a purpose. If they find meaning they are
rewarded through their ability to understand, and are motivated to try to improve their ability to
understand even more. This is in contrast to so many activities in foreign language learning, which
have little or no intrinsic interest or value for the children.
Fluency
Listening and reading fluency
In conversations with native speakers the most important ability is to be able to understand a
sustained flow of the foreign language in which there are words which are new to the listener. The
ability to do this can only be built on practice.
Listening and reading fluency is based on:
a positive attitude to not understanding everything
the skills of searching for meaning, predicting and guessing.
Children are expert at doing this in their own language but it takes time and encouragement for
them to build up these skills and attitudes in the foreign language. If you feel that you are not fluent
in English that is partly because your teachers did not give you enough time and encouragement!
Speaking and writing fluency
Fluency in speaking is not only essential in conversation but is, for many people, the spearhead of
how they learn. Fluency is based on a positive attitude to having a go with the language one knows
and not being afraid of making mistakes. It is also based on the skill of constructing meaning with
limited language. Some people learn best by having a go when they have nothing to fear or be
anxious about; all their intelligence and creativity is employed to the full. I am sure that for many
children this is the natural way to learn. This means that the teacher must give more importance to
what the child achieves than to the mistakes he or she might make. It also means that the teacher
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must encourage situations in which the child can be fluent and can have a go. Stories offer a
perfect diet for the build-up of fluency in all four skills.
Language Awareness
Stories help children become aware of the general feel and sound of the foreign language. Stories
also introduce children to language items and sentence construction without their necessarily having
to use them productively. They can build up a reservoir of language in this way. When the time
comes to move the language items into their productive control, it is no great problem because the
language is not new to them.
An obvious example of a language point introduced and made familiar through stories before the
children are expected to use it fluently themselves is the simple past tense.
Stimulus for speaking and writing
The experience of the story encourages responses through speaking and writing. It is natural to
express our likes and dislikes and to exchange ideas and associations related to stories we hear or
read.
Communication
Listening to and reading stories and responding to them through speaking and writing, drama,
music, and art develop a sense of being and having an audience and sharing and collaborating.
Learning a language is useless if we do not know how to communicate how to listen to others and
how to speak and write so that listeners and reader will want to listen and read and be able to
understand. Story sharing builds up this crucial sense of awareness of others.
General Curriculum
Most stories can be used to develop the childrens powers of awareness, analysis, and expression, as
well as relating to other aspects of the curriculum, such as cultural and social studies, geography,
history, mathematics, and science. (See chapter 4).
Danger! Story health warning!
If the teacher uses stories merely to introduce and practise grammar or particular lexical areas or
functions, the children may lose their faith in the teacher and what she or he means by the word
story. When focusing on features of the language be careful not to lose the magic of the story
altogether!
(Wright, 1995, pp. 3-10)
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2. Why will children always be willing to listen or read to stories?
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3. Why are children motivated to try to improve their ability to understand?
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4. What are listening and reading fluency based on?
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5. What is, for many people, the spearhead of how they learn?
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6. Fluency is based on a positive attitude to what?
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7. What must the teacher do to encourage this positive attitude and lack of fear?
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8. What do stories help children to become aware of?
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9. What happens when children finally need to use language items heard in stories?
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10 How does listening to stories help in speaking and story writing?
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11. What do listening to and reading stories and responding to them through speaking and writing,
drama, music, and art develop a sense of?
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12. What warning is given about focussing on features of the language?
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This much longer article talks about three strategies all related to what is called Repeated
Reading - which are designed to improve fluency.
The author is talking about use of stories, but not only in the original read/tell by the teacher, more
in the ongoing activities. Also note that the author is not talking about young learners as such, and
so not all of the strategies will necessarily be applicable in the Malaysian Primary School situation.
Read the article quickly (skim) and answer the questions below:
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experience through RR builds their confidence and encourages them to invest more time and effort
into achieving the skill of reading fluently (Dowhower 1994; Nuttall 1996).
However, RR has not received the same recognition in L2 classrooms, where the method has been
slow to catch on. Its benefits have seemingly gone unnoticed, and very little research has been
published in support of the method as a fluency-building tool for L2 learners (but see Taguchi 1997;
Taguchi and Gorsuch 2002; and Taguchi, Takayasu-Maass, and Gorsuch 2004 for excellent coverage
of RRs great potential in developing reading fluency among L2 learners).
One explanation for RRs relative absence from L2 classrooms may be that some educators feel
fluency develops naturally over time. As other reading skills progress and gradually improve, so too
does the ability to read fluently. Another possibility is that teachers faced with big class sizes, limited
contact hours, and strenuous curriculum demands may not have the time to focus on fluency as an
essential reading skill.
Fortunately, the RR method is firmly rooted in sound linguistic theory, and good theory often leads
to practical outcomes. There are a variety of simple-to-implement techniques for using RR in the L2
context that require little preparation on the teachers part, including:
(1) Oral Repeated Reading,
(2) Paired Repeated Reading, and
(3) Readers Theatre.
Technique 1: Classic Oral Repeated Reading
Oral Repeated Reading (ORR) is a technique that is fun and easy to carry out and that provides a
window into readers ability to integrate the skills associated with reading fluently (National Institute
of Child Health and Human Development 2000). Oral reading helps students associate printed
language with spoken language, improves their reading rate and rhythm, and provides opportunities
to experience the pleasure of reading with a real purpose (Rasinski 2003). It can also build
confidence and strengthen learners perceptions of themselves as readers (Greenberg, Buggey, and
Bond 2002). Oral reading has also been shown to correlate with reading comprehension (August and
Shanahan 2006) and to help learners acquire a greater understanding of how to comprehend
material that is read silently (Opitz and Guccione 2009).
In the classic version of ORR, students read and reread short, meaningful passages of text aloud,
typically four times. I find setting short-term goals, such as reading faster or reading with more
appropriate phrasing, helps learners stay focused. Alternatively, you can set criteria for speed,
accuracy, and comprehension.
After four readings or when the criteria are met, learners may proceed to the next section of the
text. Other versions of ORR include using pre-recorded audio to provide a model and the use of
computers to record, time, track, and chart learners progress.
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measure for self and peer-assessment. Research reports from L1 teaching environments indicate
significant improvement in support of oral fluency and comprehension when teachers incorporate
PRR regularly into their classrooms (Fuchs and Fuchs 2005; Koskinen and Blum 1986).
To use PRR, simply select an interesting reading passage and have your students work in pairs. I use
novels serialized into instalments to maintain learner interest and enthusiasm; however, short
stories, poetry, and fables work nicely too. If it is not possible to give each student a copy, make an
overhead transparency or write the text where all students can see it. You can also pass out one
handout per student pair to cut down on copy costs and encourage more teamwork and
cooperation between learners.
Alternatively, you can ask students to self-select materials. Be sure the content is on their
independent reading level and does not contain too many unknown words or difficult grammatical
structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive phrasing, or ambiguous time references).
Paired Repeated Reading classroom suggestion: Free yourself
The real beauty of PRR lies in its capacity to free up teachers, allowing them to monitor their
students progress with minimal management. Following is a three-step technique, adapted from
Koskinen and Blum (1986), that I use to kick off PRR and help students collaborate in developing
fluency.
Step 1: Teach the role of the reader
Learners need opportunities to practice reading. Explain to students they will be reading and
rereading a passage several times to improve their skills. An analogy such as soccer players taking
corner kicks to improve their accuracy may help students realize the value of practicing repeatedly.
You can also remind them that good readers keep their listeners engaged by reading with
appropriate speed, rhythm, and intonation.
Step 2: Teach the role of the listener
It is worthwhile for teachers to explain that listeners can help their partners improve their reading
fluency in two big ways with PRR: first, by giving help where possible with unknown words or
mispronounced phrases, and second, and perhaps more importantly, by providing feedback about
how the reader has improved between readings. Do not worry about your students inability to
catch every word; listeners do not need to be high-level learners to appreciate and comment on
good delivery and effort.
Teachers can encourage active listening and collaboration by calling on students to report how their
partner read or by making a handout and collecting it after the activity. Something as simple as one
or two sentences jotted on the board can provide students with positive things to say to one
another. For example, in response to the question How did your partner improve? suggest
answers such as (name) read more smoothly, (name) knew more words, or (name) read with
more expression. Another option is to develop a Likert scale for learners to give and receive
feedback to each other while working together. The scale can be passed out (or written on the
board). A single question such as How well did your partner read today? written two or three
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times should suffice. Label the accompanying Likert scale ranges from Nice job to Needs work as
in the example below and show learners how to respond to it.
First Reading: How did your partner read today?
----Nice Job
Nearly perfect
----OK
Nearly there
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parts!) You can also cut characters out completely or combine two roles together. If your groups are
large, use more than one narrator and split character roles into two or more parts. Very often a
character can be divided to create two or more speaking parts. You can also assign silent characters
to help with the storytelling or assign non-speaking roles. Crowd scenes can also incorporate groups
of extra readers. Figure 1 contains an excerpt of a script I wrote to introduce my learners to a series
of tasks revolving around life at sea.
NARRATOR 1: Bunglie was hungry. He quietly left his pen and looked down out of the window onto
the deck below. Sparky was there, along with the sheep.
SPARKY: Got any food?
LOXY: No. Not a thing.
TRIXIE: My heavens, no. We havent had anything for almost two days. Whatever are we to do?
SPARKY: Birds!!! How bout you? Have you got any food?
BUB AND CHUB: [together] Sorry no.
SPARKY: Cows You have any food?
COWS 1, 2, 3, and 4: [singing] No, no, no. We havent got any food.
ZOOTIE: [looking at husband] Were going to get some food. I know a safe place.
HUSBAND: [scared, in a whisper] Are we going without asking a human? Wont it be dangerous?
SPARKY: Well be careful. [creeping away] Dont worry!
NARRATOR 2: Then Sparky left with Zootie and her husband in search of something to eat.
NARRATOR 1: But Bunglie could not stay in his pen. He had to eat something
[in a louder voice] now!!
Figure 1: Excerpt of Readers Theatre Script
Scripts can be simple or detailed and complex. I prefer to keep the writing simple because I feel it
leads to more authentic dialogue. For busy teachers who do not have time to write original material,
the Internet can be a valuable resource, as there are dozens of adaptable RT scripts online. If your
Internet access is limited, you can always have your students write their own RT scripts. This is a
popular alternative to teacher-selected content because student-generated material provides
teachers with a chance to observe what learning objectives have been internalized by their students.
Teachers can encourage the inclusion of important dates, vocabulary, or grammar points to raise the
complexity of the dialogue or the assignment. Regardless of where the script comes from, doing RT
almost always leads to laughter and language learning. Following is a five-session plan for a Readers
Theatre presentation.
Readers Theatre classroom suggestion: All the worlds a stage
Session 1:
Model fluent and expressive reading by reading aloud from the script or the story on which your
script is based. Time and interest allowing, consider focusing on some aspect of problematic
pronunciation for students to keep in mind as they practice (e.g., reduced schwa sounds, consonant
clusters, suprasegmentals). Pass out copies of the script and encourage students to read silently all
the parts by themselves. If you lack the resources to give each student a script, you can create pairs
or small groups and have students share. Once they have read over the dialogue fully, allow time to
discuss the meaning and content.
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Session 2:
Divide students into groups and hand out scripts. Students read through the scripts entirely, each
time concentrating on a different role. For example, if there are four students and four roles, the
script should be read four times with each student reading aloud a different role every time. In
situations where there are more roles than readers, ask students to take on more than one
character. Circulate among the groups, coaching and offering advice and support.
Session 3:
This is the same as the Session 2; however, toward the end of this session, have students divide up
the parts. Alternatively, you can assign the roles for the final session. Students read their parts as
homework and begin preparing for their performance.
Session 4:
Students read and rehearse their parts together with their group members. Toward the end of the
session, students can make character nametags and plan any necessary movement or decide where
groups will stand during their turn.
Session 5:
Each group performs the reading for the class or possibly in front of an audience. To set the stage for
future endeavours, you may wish to have learners assess themselves and their group members
effort leading up to the reading. Ask learners to respond to statements like these: Next time, to
improve my reading fluency, I plan to , or To achieve my goal, I will Another simple and effective
way to encourage self- or peer-reflection is to provide students with a checklist of statements
grouped into the following categories:
Put a check mark () next to the areas you feel you/your partner did well:
1. Phrasing/Fluency
(I/My partner) paid attention to the authors language.
(I/My partner) read longer phrases.
(I/My partner) had good expression.
2. Pace
(I/My partner) used good speed when reading.
(I/My partner) did not pause too much.
3. Accuracy
(I/My partner) could read the words easily.
(I/My partner) read quickly, but
(my/my partners) words sounded meaningful.
Conclusion
Readers who lack fluency often read in a plodding, word-by-word manner and are slower and less
accurate than fluent readers. Moreover, because their reading is so laborious, their understanding of
the text is often limited. With such ineffective reading patterns, non-fluent readers typically fall
behind their peers and do not learn to enjoy the act of reading. In the past, fluency-building
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techniques like oral reading have been neglected in the L2 reading classroom for a variety of
reasons. Time constraints, teacher philosophy, and misuse of techniques like Round Robin Reading
(taking turns reading aloud around the classroom) have eclipsed the benefits of fluency
development and have cast a negative light on oral reading.
The method of RR was developed to help struggling readers improve their fluency, accuracy, and
comprehension. In the L1 classroom, reading aloud to a teacher or to a peer is an important first
step toward developing fluent decoding and comprehending skills; both are a necessary preparation
for silent reading. The three techniques presented in this article are designed to help learners
achieve reading fluency and have just as much value in the L2 classroom as in the L1 classroom. As
L2 learners read aloud and convey the message of the text to sympathetic and interested listeners,
they strengthen their skills and self-confidence. Most importantly, RR activities encourage L2
learners to enjoy reading and to practice the skill more frequently, which is critical to the
development of advanced proficiency.
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JOSHUA COHEN is an instructor of English as a Foreign Language in the Business Department at Kinki
University in Japan. This article is dedicated to his late mother, Diane, who introduced him to the
value of repeated reading by reading (and rereading!) tirelessly to him when he was young.
(Cohen, 2011)
Questions about Building Fluency through the Repeated Reading Method
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The article below discusses several strategies and techniques for improving fluency. Read the
article and make notes in the questions below.
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Repeated reading
After you model how to read the text, you must have the students reread it. By doing this, the
students are engaging in repeated reading. Usually, having students read a text four times is
sufficient to improve fluency. Remember, however, that instructional time is limited, and it is the
actual time that students are actively engaged in reading that produces reading gains.
Have other adults read aloud to students. Encourage parents or other family members to read aloud
to their children at home. The more models of fluent reading the children hear, the better. Of
course, hearing a model of fluent reading is not the only benefit of reading aloud to children.
Reading to children also increases their knowledge of the world, their vocabulary, their familiarity
with written language ("book language"), and their interest in reading.
Activities for students to increase fluency
There are several ways that your students can practice orally rereading text, including student-adult
reading, choral (or unison) reading, tape-assisted reading, partner reading, and readers' theatre.
Student-adult reading
In student-adult reading, the student reads one-on-one with an adult. The adult can be you, a
parent, a classroom aide, or a tutor. The adult reads the text first, providing the students with a
model of fluent reading. Then the student reads the same passage to the adult with the adult
providing assistance and encouragement. The student rereads the passage until the reading is quite
fluent. This should take approximately three to four re-readings.
Choral reading
In choral, or unison, reading, students read along as a group with you (or another fluent adult
reader). Of course, to do so, students must be able to see the same text that you are reading. They
might follow along as you read from a big book, or they might read from their own copy of the book
you are reading. For choral reading, choose a book that is not too long and that you think is at the
independent reading level of most students. Patterned or predictable books are particularly useful
for choral reading, because their repetitious style invites students to join in. Begin by reading the
book aloud as you model fluent reading.
Then reread the book and invite students to join in as they recognize the words you are reading.
Continue rereading the book, encouraging students to read along as they are able. Students should
read the book with you three to five times total (though not necessarily on the same day). At this
time, students should be able to read the text independently.
Tape-assisted reading
In tape-assisted reading, students read along in their books as they hear a fluent reader read the
book on an audiotape. For tape-assisted reading, you need a book at a student's independent
reading level and a tape recording of the book read by a fluent reader at about 80-100 words per
minute. The tape should not have sound effects or music. For the first reading, the student should
follow along with the tape, pointing to each word in her or his book as the reader reads it. Next, the
student should try to read aloud along with the tape. Reading along with the tape should continue
until the student is able to read the book independently, without the support of the tape.
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Partner reading
In partner reading, paired students take turns reading aloud to each other. For partner reading,
more fluent readers can be paired with less fluent readers. The stronger reader reads a paragraph or
page first, providing a model of fluent reading. Then the less fluent reader reads the same text
aloud. The stronger student gives help with word recognition and provides feedback and
encouragement to the less fluent partner. The less fluent partner rereads the passage until he or she
can read it independently. Partner reading need not be done with a more and less fluent reader. In
another form of partner reading, children who read at the same level are paired to reread a story
that they have received instruction on during a teacher-guided part of the lesson. Two readers of
equal ability can practice rereading after hearing the teacher read the passage.
Readers' theatre
In readers' theatre, students rehearse and perform a play for peers or others. They read from scripts
that have been derived from books that are rich in dialogue. Students play characters who speak
lines or a narrator who shares necessary background information. Readers' theatre provides readers
with a legitimate reason to reread text and to practice fluency. Readers' theatre also promotes
cooperative interaction with peers and makes the reading task appealing.
Excerpted from: Guidelines for Examining Phonics and Word Recognition Programs, Texas Reading
Initiative, Texas Education Agency (2002)
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One of the things that children can learn through stories whether reading them or listening to
them is critical thinking skills. Children do not necessarily just develop skills without guidance from
the teacher. Read the article and answer/discuss the questions below:
Tools of the mind (mental/cognitive tools) help to extend a child's cognitive capabilities.
Tools of the mind reduce the workload for the teacher.
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a button
a brick
a blanket
Here, you are encouraging children to think outside the box.
A typology of thinking skills areas to be taught with EFL for young learners
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Making comparisons
Categorising
Sequencing
Focusing attention
Memorising
Exploring space
Exploring time
Exploring numbers
Creating associations
Cause and effect
Making decisions
Solving problems
Creative thinking
Practical examples
1. Where's Tom?
This is an example from Herbert Puchta and Marion William's book 'Teaching Young Learners to
Think'.
It focuses on the 'exploring space' skill. To develop this skill, students need:
a reference system to understand and control the space they live in.
a sense of position, distance, direction, proximity and dimensions.
the ability to imagine a change in position. This is necessary for hypothetical thinking - the
ability to imagine another viewpoint.
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there is enough information to establish a cause and effect relationship. If not, what other
information is needed? The attention to detail required here is a great exercise for students.
To conclude:
Quoting Vygotsky's model:
Learning moves away from the goal of getting the answer correct to getting the answer correct
because a specific process was used to get the answer.
(Puchta, 2012)
1. According to Punta, why do todays youngsters have a very short attention span? ...........................
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2. Is it true?
Do your younger siblings have a shorter attention span than you did at their age?
Or are you one of todays youngsters?
Or has it always been this way?
Discuss.
3. What reduces the workload of the teacher? .......................................................................................
4. What are the three reasons given for teaching reading skills?
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Do you agree with them? (Dont just say yes!)
Discuss.
5. What is a divergent thinker? ............................................................................................................
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Are you a divergent thinker? Have you ever met anyone who is?
Discuss
6. With your partner/group do the button activity. How many ideas can you come up with? Try
harder to think of some really crazy ideas.
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Discuss
7. Look at the list of 5 points under What does critical thinking involve?
Choose of a particular story you might be telling/reading.
Think of questions for at least three of the critical thinking points.
Discuss
8. Look at this typology of thinking skills.
Making comparisons
Categorising
Sequencing
Focusing attention
Memorising
Exploring space
Exploring time
Exploring numbers
Creating associations
Cause and effect
Making decisions
Solving problems
Creative thinking
Exploring numbers
Mark the ones which you could apply to a story telling/reading session. Discuss and share ideas.
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Sometimes students get confused when the person is actually many people. A few students
thought that the army in The Mysterious Giant of Barletta represented society. They eventually
came to realize that person can mean one, two, or a whole group of people, or even animal
characters. Later when we discussed person vs. society they realized that that type of conflict had
more to do with societal issues. Many students had read The Giver and we talked about how that
future society was set up in a different way than what we are used to today. At first the main
character was excited to receive his job on the day the assignments were given out. But as the story
continued, we get a real sense of a person vs. society type of conflict. In the end, Jonas is ready to
separate himself totally from the society.
Oftentimes its not really clear which category the book falls in. But those discussions with the
students just take their thinking to a deeper level. In Amazing Grace the class is going to put on a
Peter Pan play. When Grace wants to play the part of Peter, some class members point out that she
cant be Peter because she is black or because she is a girl. Some students thought the text was a
person vs self text because Grace gains more confidence in her dancing ability and convinces her
classmates that she is indeed the best person to play the role. But others felt it was Grace against
those other classmates and therefore it was person vs. person.
And what about The Big Orange Splot? Is that a conflict of one man against society because the
community in which he lives believes that all houses should look exactly the same? Or is it a person
vs person conflict of the main character against all his neighbours?
We found the person vs self type of conflict to be the hardest to find examples of. We first saw
Owl Babies as this type of conflict. The baby owls try to get over their fear by telling each other
reasons why the mom has disappeared; then they gather together all on one branch to protect each
other. Some argued that it was more of a person vs nature story because the owls are feeling scared
because of many of the things in the dark woods.
In the book Suddenly, Preston is constantly almost being attacked by the Wolf. It seems obvious that
its the pig vs the wolf. But is it really a person vs. person conflict if Preston, the pig, never actually
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realizes that the Wolf is about to attack him? He doesnt escape his conflict by his own strength or
cleverness; its always just a coincidence.
There were many books that the students examined during independent reading time Jumanji,
Stega Nona, Big Anthony and the Magic Ring, Sylvester and the Magic Pebble, Caleb and Kate to
name a few. Students will notice that the main character in each of these books has a problem; he is
in conflict with something. But most of these books made us wonder if there shouldnt be a fifth
story conflict of person vs magic. And to that I say, Why not?
(Johnson, 2012)
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2. What kind of books are being used as examples of different conflicts? ..............................................
3. What age are the children in the writers class who are learning about story conflicts? ...................
4. How was the person confusion sorted? .......................................................................................
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5. Which is the hardest type to find examples of? ................................................................................
6. What could the fifth type of conflict be? .......................................................................................
7. Do you agree there should be a fifth type, or would you fit it into one of the others?
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Discuss your answers with your partner / group.
Exercises
1. Work with a partner / group.
Choose 3 books / stories either your own or from the APPENDIX.
Identify the conflict in each.
Try to choose books / stories with different conflict types.
Present your findings to the class.
2. Choose one story, and alter the point of conflict and/or the ending. Present your story to the class.
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Yr 2
4.2.2 Able to talk about book covers, pictures in books with guidance.
4.2.1 Able to respond to book covers, pictures in books, characters, with guidance.
Yr 3
4.3 By the end of the six year primary programme, pupils will be able to plan, organise and produce
creative works for enjoyment.
Yr 1
Yr 2
Yr 3
4.3.1 Able to produce simple creative works with guidance based on nursery rhymes,
action songs.
4.3.2 Able to take part with guidance in a performance based on nursery rhymes, action
songs, fables.
4.3.1 Able to produce simple creative works with guidance based on action songs, jazz
chants, stories.
4.3.2 Able to take part with guidance in a performance based on action songs, jazz
chants, stories.
4.3.1 Able to produce simple creative works with guidance based on jazz chants, poems,
action songs, stories.
4.3.2 Able to perform with guidance based on jazz chants, poems, action songs, stories.
Take note of the verbs in the statements because this is what it is we are trying to asses. There are
also stories-related standards in the other subjects too.
Listening and speaking
1.1 By the end of the 6-year primary schooling, pupils will be able to pronounce words and speak
confidently with the correct stress, rhythm and intonation.
Yr 1, 2, and 3
Reading
2.3 By the end of the 6-year primary schooling, pupils will be able to read independently for
information and enjoyment.
Yr 1 and 2
Yr 3
Writing
3.3 By the end of the 6-year primary schooling, pupils will be able to write and present ideas
through a variety of media using appropriate language, form and style.
Yr 3
3.3.1 Able to create simple texts using a variety of media with guidance.
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We are all familiar with the idea of a written exam to test knowledge, understanding (as long as the
skill of writing has been mastered) and even some skills. But how can we assess childrens aesthetic
response, whether children are listening, and whether they can read?
The following article lists some types of alternative assessments. Read the article and answer the
questions:
Focus is on documenting individual student growth over time, rather than comparing
students with one another.
Emphasis is on students' strengths (what they know), rather than weaknesses (what they
don't know).
Consideration is given to the learning styles, language proficiencies, cultural and educational
backgrounds, and grade levels of students.
Alternative assessment includes a variety of measures that can be adapted for different situations.
This Digest provides examples of measures that are well suited for assessing ESL students.
Nonverbal Assessment Strategies
Physical Demonstration.
To express academic concepts without speech, students can point or use other gestures. They can
also be asked to perform hands-on tasks or to act out vocabulary, concepts, or events. As a
comprehension check in a unit on Native Americans, for example, teachers can ask students to
respond with thumbs up, thumbs down, or other nonverbal signs to true or false statements or to
indicate whether the teacher has grouped illustrations (of homes, food, environment, clothing, etc.)
under the correct tribe name. The teacher can use a checklist to record student responses over time.
Pictorial Products.
To elicit content knowledge without requiring students to speak or write, teachers can ask students
to produce and manipulate drawings, dioramas, models, graphs, and charts. When studying Colonial
America, for example, teachers can give students a map of the colonies and labels with the names of
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the colonies. Students can then attempt to place the labels in the appropriate locations. This
labelling activity can be used across the curriculum with diagrams, webs, and illustrations.
To culminate a unit on butterflies, teachers can ask beginning ESL students to illustrate, rather than
explain, the life cycle of butterflies. Students can point to different parts of a butterfly on their own
drawing or on a diagram as an assessment of vocabulary retention. Pictorial journals can be kept
during the unit to record observations of the butterflies in the classroom or to illustrate
comprehension of classroom material about types of butterflies, their habitats, and their
characteristics.
K-W-L Charts
Many teachers have success using K-W-L charts (what I know/what I want to know/what I've
learned) to begin and end a unit of study, particularly in social studies and science. Before the unit,
this strategy enables teachers to gain an awareness of students' background knowledge and
interests. Afterward, it helps teachers assess the content material learned. K-W-L charts can be
developed as a class activity or on an individual basis. For students with limited English proficiency,
the chart can be completed in the first language or with illustrations.
Sample K-W-L Chart
K
Lincoln was important.
His face is on a penny.
He's dead now.
I think Lincoln was a President.
He was a tall person.
W
Why is Lincoln famous?
Was he a good President?
Why is he on a penny?
Did he have a family?
How did he die?
L
Lincoln was President of the U.S.
He was the 16th President.
There was a war in America when
Lincoln was President.
He let the slaves go free.
Two of his sons died while he was
still alive.
Before a unit of study, teachers can have students fill in the K and W columns by asking them what
they know about the topic and what they would like to know by the end of the unit. This helps to
keep students focused and interested during the unit and gives them a sense of accomplishment
when they fill in the L column following the unit and realize that they have learned something.
Oral Performances or Presentations
Performance-based assessments include interviews, oral reports, role plays, describing, explaining,
summarizing, retelling, paraphrasing stories or text material, and so on. Oral assessments should be
conducted on an ongoing basis to monitor comprehension and thinking skills.
When conducting interviews in English with students in the early stages of language development to
determine English proficiency and content knowledge, teachers are advised to use visual cues as
much as possible and allow for a minimal amount of English in the responses. Pierce and O'Malley
(1992) suggest having students choose one or two pictures they would like to talk about and leading
the students by asking questions, especially ones that elicit the use of academic language
(comparing, explaining, describing, analysing, hypothesizing, etc.) and vocabulary pertinent to the
topic.
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Role plays can be used across the curriculum with all grade levels and with any number of people.
For example, a teacher can take on the role of a character who knows less than the students about a
particular subject area. Students are motivated to convey facts or information prompted by
questions from the character. This is a fun-filled way for a teacher to conduct informal assessments
of students' knowledge in any subject (Kelner, 1993).
Teachers can also ask students to use role play to express mathematical concepts. For example, a
group of students can become a numerator, a denominator, a fraction line, a proper fraction, an
improper fraction, and an equivalent fraction. Speaking in the first person, students can introduce
themselves and their functions in relationship to one another (Kelner, 1993). Role plays can also be
used in science to demonstrate concepts such as the life cycle.
In addition, role plays can serve as an alternative to traditional book reports. Students can transform
themselves into a character or object from the book (Kelner, 1993). For example, a student might
become Christopher Columbus, one of his sailors, or a mouse on the ship, and tell the story from
that character's point of view. The other students can write interview questions to pose to the
various characters.
Oral and Written Products
Some of the oral and written products useful for assessing ESL students' progress are content area
thinking and learning logs, reading response logs, writing assignments (both structured and
creative), dialogue journals, and audio or video cassettes.
Content area logs are designed to encourage the use of metacognitive strategies when students
read expository text. Entries can be made on a form with these two headings: What I
Understood/What I Didn't Understand (ideas or vocabulary).
Reading response logs are used for students' written responses or reactions to a piece of literature.
Students may respond to questions--some generic, some specific to the literature--that encourage
critical thinking, or they may copy a brief text on one side of the page and write their reflections on
the text on the other side.
Beginning ESL students often experience success when an expository writing assignment is
controlled or structured. The teacher can guide students through a pre-writing stage, which includes
discussion, brainstorming, webbing, outlining, and so on. The results of pre-writing, as well as the
independently written product, can be assessed.
Student writing is often motivated by content themes. Narrative stories from characters'
perspectives (e.g., a sailor accompanying Christopher Columbus, an Indian who met the Pilgrims, a
drop of water in the water cycle, etc.) would be valuable inclusions in a student's writing portfolio.
Dialogue journals provide a means of interactive, ongoing correspondence between students and
teachers. Students determine the choice of topics and participate at their level of English language
proficiency. Beginners can draw pictures that can be labelled by the teacher.
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Audio and video cassettes can be made of student oral readings, presentations, dramatics,
interviews, or conferences (with teacher or peers).
Portfolios
Portfolios are used to collect samples of student work over time to track student development.
Tierney, Carter, and Desai (1991) suggest that, among other things, teachers do the following:
maintain anecdotal records from their reviews of portfolios and from regularly scheduled
conferences with students about the work in their portfolios; keep checklists that link portfolio work
with criteria that they consider integral to the type of work being collected; and devise continua of
descriptors to plot student achievement. Whatever methods teachers choose, they should reflect
with students on their work, to develop students' ability to critique their own progress.
The following types of materials can be included in a portfolio:
Conclusion
Alternative assessment holds great promise for ESL students. Although the challenge to modify
existing methods of assessment and to develop new approaches is not an easy one, the benefits for
both teachers and students are great. The ideas and models presented here are intended to be
adaptable, practical, and realistic for teachers who are dedicated to creating meaningful and
effective assessment experiences for ESL students.
References
Hamayan, E.V. (1995). Approaches to alternative assessment. Annual Review of Applied Linguistics,
15, 212-226.
Huerta-Macias, A. (1995). Alternative assessment: Responses to commonly asked questions. TESOL
Journal, 5, 8-10.
Kelner, L.B. (1993). The creative classroom: A guide for using creative drama in the classroom, preK6. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann.
Pierce, L.V., & O'Malley, J.M. (1992). Performance and portfolio assessment for language minority
students. Washington, DC: National Clearinghouse for Bilingual Education.
Tierney, R.J., Carter, M.A., & Desai, L.E. (1991). Portfolio assessment in the reading-writing
classroom. Norwood, MA: Christopher Gordon.
(Tannenbaum, 1996)
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The following anecdotal paper gives an example of using Oral Performances or Presentations as
well as Portfolios with primary school students as an assessment.
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The third solution for shyness was using puppets. Some children respond well to a hand puppet and
are happy to let the audience focus on the puppet speaking or singing rather than looking right at
them. For the genuinely severely shy children I used marionette-type puppets, and the child would
stand over them and make them dance to music. (They would be in full view of the audience, not
behind a puppet theatre, and again, they had to improve on this performance the next time.)
2. Group Support
Partly to be able to allow all of the children to be assessed in a reasonable time, and partly again to
help with shyness and other limitations, I allowed the children to perform in pairs or groups.
Obviously every child in the group had to play a specific part in the performance, however small, and
every child had to show an improved level of involvement at the next performance.
I had to be quick at evaluating and assessing individuals within the group as they performed, and it
helped if each child had a moment when they were front and centre.
3. Zero Tolerance
Naturally in the build-up to the twice-yearly performances some children would become quite
stressed, and parents would even come to the school to complain that they werent sleeping or
eating well.
I insisted that all children must perform, there were no exceptions. As mentioned earlier, there were
some very easy ways for them to do so. If we reached a crisis and they were still refusing then I
would allow them to give a private performance to me, or their friends, alone during a break time
and then tell them it was great and I still want them to perform in front of the class.
The fact is that I saw so many success stories. Sometimes in class time when it came to a particular
childs turn they would cry. I would send them to wash room to wash their face and return, and then
insist that they go ahead and perform. Every single child that cried and then performed said
afterwards: Can I do it again? Why? It gave them such a sense of being powerful, instead of weak
and shy and powerless.
4. Types of Performances
Over the years as the children progressed through primary school, especially the children that I had
taught from the first year onward, the children came up with better and better performances of
songs, dances, drama, and instrumental pieces. Children would spend extra time in my classroom
during breaks practising hard so that they could then give a performance at a school assembly or a
local competition. But the requirements for assessment performance were simple:
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5. Audience Participation
Generally there was no problem with student behaviour in my classes. However, if the students
were getting restless because there were a lot of performances and they were going slowly, I would
give them an evaluation task, with a rubric they could fill in about each group or performer. It was
very important to make sure this was an opportunity for them to make positive and constructive
evaluation and nothing derogatory.
Assessment Rubric
I would consider it unfair to try to assess students in something that has not been taught and/or
practiced. This was not like the X Factor where I was looking for perfectly in-tune singing. After all,
the students were all at different levels, and all I really wanted was for them to show improvement
since last time (which is called ipsative assessment).
What I was trying to find out:
Whether my teaching has been effective (if everyone fails I should teach it again)
Which of the children may be having difficulties and need help
Which of the children have made good progress
If we had been having lessons about training your voice to sing in tune, then tunefulness would be
a factor in the assessment but again only in terms of whether they were improving.
Here is an example of a possible rubric:
Name
Class
Amazing!
Good
Date
disappointing
Needs help
There could be more, or less, or more specific points. With younger students there would also be
fewer points. With one sheet per child and the names filled in ahead of time it was simply a matter
of ticking boxes in the 5-10 minutes as the children perform. Once the marks were entered into my
database, then the forms were included in the childs portfolio, along with photos, or childrens
drawings of the performance as their own response to the performance. With two assessments per
year it was obvious in the portfolio how the child was progressing.
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Conclusion
By watching each and every student give some kind of performance twice a year, I was able to be
fully aware of their abilities and progress throughout their primary school education. A record of
their progress could be clearly seen in their Arts portfolio.
The following article talks about the educational background and purpose of Portfolios.
Read it and discuss the questions below.
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Portfolio collections can form the foundation for teacher-student conferences, a vital component of
portfolio assessment. A conference is an interaction between the teacher and the student, and it is
through conferences that the students gain insights into how they operate as readers and writers.
Conferences support learners in taking risks with, and responsibility for, their learning. Through
conferencing, students are encouraged to share what they know and understand about the
processes of reading and writing. It is also a time for them to reflect on their participation in literacy
tasks. Portfolio assessment is an appropriate means of recognizing the connection between reading
and writing.
Portfolios Address Language Arts Goals
The use of portfolios for assessment is not a new concept. However, the idea has gained momentum
as curriculum experts have called for assessments that include a variety of work samples and have
asked that teachers confer with each student about his/her literacy development.
In the last few years, both the goals and instructional approaches to language arts have changed.
New curriculum designs advocate instructional approaches that place an emphasis on:
an integration of all aspects of language arts including reading, writing, listening, and
speaking;
a focus on the processes of constructing meaning;
the use of literature that inspires and motivates readers;
an emphasis on problem solving and higher-order thinking skills; and
the use of collaboration and group work as an essential component of learning.
For example, integrated language arts instruction is now the accepted model in many schools in the
country (Cal. Dept. of Education, 1987). Integrated language arts instruction for most of these
schools means that there are no longer separate reading and language arts instructional periods-and often that language skills are also taught when students are learning science and social studies.
Integration also means that reading and writing are not broken into separate objectives to be
taught, practiced, and mastered one at a time. Rather, it means that skills are taught as they are
needed as part of a total behaviour. Discussion preceding the reading of a selection helps to bring a
reader's knowledge to bear on what he/she is about to read. At the same time the verbal exchange
of ideas fosters speaking and listening skills. Despite the discussions of the importance of integrating
all aspects of language arts instruction, it is the teaching of reading and writing that has produced
the most obvious integration. Thus, a portfolio containing integrated reading and writing work
samples provides a valuable assessment tool.
Portfolios as Authentic Assessments
One of the key issues in the development of portfolios concerns the kinds of structured assessment
activities that should be included in them. Many curriculum and assessment specialists have been
calling for the development of performance or authentic assessments (Stiggins, 1987; Wiggins,
1989). Performance assessments have been developed and used in the business world and in various
professions for some time. Performance assessment is nothing more than the development of an
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activity that actually represents the task to be performed on the job--or the total behaviour that is
the goal of instruction.
Language arts portfolio assessments should:
Have value to both teachers and students beyond the assessment information provided by
the test.
The tests should be so much like good instruction that a teacher would want to administer the test
for its instructional value even if there was no assessment information provided. Value beyond
assessment means tests will take no instructional time since the test is good instruction.
Require students to construct responses rather than merely recognizing correct answers.
Perhaps the greatest concern with multiple-choice tests is that students are not required to develop
responses. Rather, they merely have to select an answer choice from several that have already been
constructed for them. Educators have long recognized that it is a far different matter to write a
complete sentence with correct punctuation than it is to answer a question that asks which of four
punctuation marks should be placed at the end of a sentence.
Require students to apply their knowledge.
Many tests provide students with a structure for the expected answers. Performance assessment is
open-ended and allows students to apply their knowledge. Student responses to performance
assessment should reveal ability to understand a problem and apply his/her knowledge and skills.
This means, of course, that a variety of responses will be acceptable.
Pose problems for students for which they have to use multiple resources.
The solution to real problems necessitates the use of multiple resources. The writing of a report, for
example, is based on the use of various source materials, reference aids, and the writer's
background knowledge. Assessments which attempt to replicate those situations will provide
information about students' abilities to use multiple sources. Such assessments should also
determine if students are able to select pertinent information from the available resources and put
the selected information together in a way that solves the problem posed by the assessment.
Present students with tasks that have a realistic focus.
Tests should look like the tasks that students have to perform in every-day life and should focus on
developing responses to realistic situations. Tests often ask only for right answers. Even when tests
ask for written responses, the questions posed are "teacher-type questions" that have as their goal
an assessment as to whether students have a basic understanding of a story (e.g., main events,
compare and contrast). A question with a more realistic focus might ask students to write a letter to
a story character suggesting how that character might deal with a problem. This presents a realistic
focus to which a student can respond, and the responses will reveal how the student has understood
the materials on which the response is based.
Taken together, the general attributes of performance assessment and the specific goals of
portfolios represent an integrated approach for language arts assessment. Since the contents of the
portfolio are generated by the student, may be typical or exemplary examples, and require
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continuous evaluation of reading and writing, students are actively engaged in their own growth and
development as language users.
References
California State Department of Education. (1987) English-Language Arts Framework. Sacramento,
CA: California State Department of Education.
Farr, Roger (1990). "Setting directions for language arts portfolios." Educational Leadership, 48 (3),
103.
Johns, Jerry L. (1990). Literacy Portfolios. 11 pp. [ED 319 020]
Krest, Margie (1990). "Adapting the portfolio to meet student needs." English Journal, 79 (2), 29-34.
[EJ 406 654]
Olson, Mary W. (1991). "Portfolios: Education Tools." Reading Psychology, 12 (1), 73-80. [EJ number
forthcoming]
Stiggins, Richard (1987). "Design and development of performance assessments." Education
Measurement: Issues and Practice, 6 (3), 33-42. [EJ 393 067]
Valencia, Sheila (1990). "A portfolio approach to classroom assessment: The whys, whats, and
hows." The Reading Teacher, 43 (4), 338-40. [EJ 403 672]
Valencia, Sheila, et al. (1990). "Assessing reading and writing." In Gerald G. Duffy (Ed.), Reading in
the Middle School (2nd ed.). Newark, DE: International Reading Association, 124-53. [ED 320 132]
Wiggins, Grant (1989). "A true test: Toward more authentic and equitable assessment." Phi Delta
Kappan, 70 (9), 703-13. [EJ 388 723]
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Language having sufficient vocab and language structure to tell the story in an
understandable form.
Thinking skills and problem-solving ability to logically sequence the story in telling it.
Limited writing skills to produce their story in written form.
Shyness/fear about speaking aloud in front of others.
Insufficient suitable practice time because of listeners (especially adults) getting bored with
them and telling them to be quiet and/or to stop lying.
As part of our storytelling and language teaching we need to encourage ad assist children to
become storytellers. Amongst other things, this will make it easier to assess their progress both by
an aural/oral test such as Performance, and by getting them to create something to include in their
portfolio.
Assessing Children as Storytellers
The teacher can encourage the children to respond to stories in a variety of ways so that they can
visualize and experience the story, and to improve their language, sequencing, social awareness
(listening and allowing others to listen).
Remember also that responding to stories is one of the learning standards.
Ask them to:
o Create art work related to the story including creating puppets to show particular
characters.
o Dramatize all or part of the story
o Join in with rhymes and chants in the story
o Suggest variations or different endings to the story
o Retell the story
o Use puppets in the dramatization and/or telling of the story
Stimulate their imagination with ideas and suggestions. Notice the worthwhile parts of stories
created by them, even if they only make a start (rather than picking up on errors) and provide
encouragement and genuine constructive criticism.
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Firstly teach them to tell stories orally and avoid the difficulties involved in writing. Their stories
can be recorded in video form and they can create pictures to show their story sequence. Once they
have the story well established and organised, then then can work on the written form.
Activities to assist children as storytellers
Here are some activities that are designed to help children develop their storytelling skills.
Participating will both assist trainee teachers to improve their own storytelling skills, and provide
them with strategies to use in the classroom.
Some of the ideas for these activities were taken from Storytelling! (Codell, 2012), Storytelling in
the Early Years (Mynard, 2005), Teachers Guide: Teaching Storytelling (Storytelling Arts of
Indiana, 2012), and Early Years Starter Pack (Ferguson, 2007). These are all available on the
Internet, and are listed in the Bibliography. (Go look them up!)
1. Story Sequence
Firstly the student storytellers need to know the story sequence really well. We dont want to
necessarily memorise the story, but we need to remember what happened in exactly the right order.
It sounds really simple, but for children this is a very important skill.
Activity
On index cards, ask the children to draw simple pictures (stick figures) to indicate the stages of their
story. Lay them out in order like a Story Map.
Do not write words!
Do not write numbers!
They should have about 6 pictures. If they have more than 10 then either their story is too long, or
they are being too detailed about the stages of their story.
The first time you do this activity with the children, they could do it about a story they have already
heard and know so essentially this is a retell activity.
NOW let them take their 6-10 cards in a stack and throw them up into the air! Then they gather
them together, and see if they can rearrange them into the correct order. They can do this several
times for practice.
Observing the children doing this (with a checklist in your hand) will give you a chance to assess their
abilities, and the cards can be included in their portfolio (put in order by them).
2. Character Map
A good storyteller needs to know the story characters (good and bad) and be able to talk about the
freely as if they were friends.
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Activity
Ask the children to draw a character map for each of their characters.
They can start with a circle with the name of the character. Then they add lines, and put a
characteristic or trait at the end of each line. When young children are doing this, we are trying to
get away from the hassle of writing and spelling at this stage, so it could all be done with pictures.
Again, the character map can be looked at for an assessment (year 3 4.2.1) and then also entered
into the portfolio.
3. Paired Storytelling
Children should practise their storytelling with a partner first. This does not necessarily mean that
one tells and the other listens that can come at a later stage. At this stage we just want them to tell
the story together with each other, not strictly taking turns, but both adding parts of the story as
they go along.
The teacher can observe the pairs, and take notes on a checklist. They could also take photos (and
enter them into the portfolio) or video of the children working in pairs. The paired storytelling could
be private with each pair working at the same time and ignoring the others, or it could become a
paired performance (for assessment).
4. Character Voices
This is an easy activity to help your students practise using different character voices without
having to think of the words to say. Speaking with (interesting and) correct intonation is one of the
learning standards for Language Arts. Teacher can observe and keep a checklist.
Activity count to 10
Working with a partner, children take it in turns to try saying the numbers 1 to 10 in each of these
different styles. (Can you think of any others - ?)
1. As an angry parent (or teacher?) telling a child to obey right now.
2. As a young child learning to count maybe making mistakes and repeating and
correcting.
3. Its their party and they have a disappointing number of presents, count them.
4. They are the referee in a boxing match. One man is down, count him out.
5. It is a bad phone connection and they are trying to give someone their phone number
(which is 1234 5678 9 10)
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6. They are counting their coins that they have been saving up in their money-box.
5. Circle Stories
Circle time is a great opportunity to share stories and snippets of stories in a non-threatening
environment. There are a great many storytelling type games you can play such as The Emperors
Cat where each child repeats what the previous one says and adds a line.
Activity circle story
Choose a story the students know (because you have told them) and divide it into 6-10 parts.
Students sit in a circle (on a mat or on chairs), and each in turn around the circle tells one part of the
story. After the last part of the story, the next student starts the story again. If the class is very big,
there could be several smaller circles but it is better if everyone gets to listen to everyone else.
(You could use a set of story sequence cards to divide up the story.)
Teacher can observe, and keep a checklist.
6. Faces
This is another circle activity but this time students practise the storytelling art of showing a face.
Again the teacher can observe the students one by one as they have their turn.
Activity Pass the Face
Students sit in a circle (on a mat, or on chairs) which includes the teacher.
1. The teacher makes a face at the first student. The student copies the face, and turns to show
it to everyone in the circle.
2. The student then makes a different face at the second student.
3. The second student then copies the expression and shows everyone.
4. The second student then chooses a different facial expression to show to the third student.
7. Actions and Gestures
This is another circle activity for students to practice using actions and gestures.
Activity Catch It
Students stand in a circle which can include the teacher. (Once the game is underway the teacher
can move away and start observing and using a checklist.)
1. The first student (or the teacher) looks as something imaginary in their hands - a spider; a
cold, wet, slimy fish; a china teapot; a feather; a dinosaur; a balloon .... etc.
2. They call out another students name across the circle, and what it is that they are throwing
and call Catch it! For example: Faris! An egg! Catch it!
3. The catcher then thinks of a different object and throws it to someone else.
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walking home from school knowing there are tons of chores waiting
through heavy sand;
barefoot from a very sticky and squishy swamp;
through a blistering hot desert;
through a scary place at midnight;
with your right foot in a cast;
through honey.
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Portfolio assessments
Portfolios are practical ways of assessing student work throughout the entire year. With this
method, you can systematically collect descriptive records of a variety of student work over time
that reflects growth toward the achievement of specific curricular objectives. Portfolios include
information, sample work, and evaluations that serve as indicators for student performance. By
documenting student performance over time, portfolios are a better way to crosscheck student
progress than just one measure alone. Portfolios can include:
Samples of written student work, such as stories, completed forms, exercise sheets, and
descriptions
Drawings representing student content knowledge and proficiencies
Tapes of oral work, such as role-playing, presentations, or an oral account of a trip
Teacher descriptions of student accomplishments, such as performance on oral tasks
Formal test data, checklists, and rating sheets
Checklists or summary sheets of tasks and performances in the student's portfolio can help you
make instructional decisions and report consistently and reliably. Checklists can also help you collect
the same kind of data for each student. In this way you can assess both the progress of one student
and of the class as a whole.
In addition, here are a few ways that your ELLs can have an active role in the portfolio process:
Students can select samples of their work and reflect on their own growth over time.
You can meet with ELLs to develop their goals and standards.
Together with students, you can set tangible, realistic improvement goals for future projects.
Students as a class, in groups, or individually can create their own rubrics.
(Colorado, 2007)
Tasks
Work with a partner or group.
1. Discuss and create a set of criteria for portfolio assessment
rationalize each criterion
suggest suitable documentation.
2. Design aural-oral and written assessment using stories as a resource
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b) Mime
Most people find mime a little awkward and even difficult. But this is a
very important step in preparing the story for telling. As Gere says:
Bad storytelling is often static and word- based. Children respond to
physical movement and it enlivens the tales. Mime forces the
storyteller to start learning scenes and to visualize
the story.
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The facilitator should first model making sound effects. (yes, really!)
Encourage participants to experiment with various sound effects. People will find some sounds more
difficult than others. Work in groups to discuss the most suitable and recognisable sound effects to
make. (Page 9 in participants notes.)
d) Words
The important thing is not to lose the actions and sounds when we
add the words.
Facilitator should model this step.
Tell part of a story using actions, sound effects and words as well.
Putting it all together
The participants should now work in pairs, telling each other their stories using actions, sound
effects and words. The listener needs to give feedback. Facilitator should monitor.
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Listener Feedback
The partner needs to ask questions about parts that are difficult to visualise, if its not clear who is
speaking or what is happening.
Participants should each pair up with another partner and try again.
So to keep the audience informed about who is talking when, the storyteller needs to keep the
characters clear in space and in relation to one another. Each character should have a position
where the teller stands/sits/bends down, and each character should have specific facial expressions,
gestures, and voice quality pitch, gruffness, vocab range etc.
Facilitator should demonstrate this with a segment of story!
Participants consider a story with a couple of characters, and plan how to depict each one.
Discuss choices with their group / partner and if necessary adapt ideas.
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Reflection
Ideally you should watch yourself on video after presenting a story, and examine what went right as
well as wrong.
The children who are listening will reflect back to you on their faces how well you are doing. But
sometimes you can get so involved in the story and trying to remember all of the aspects of your
performance that its hard to even notice accurately what the children are feeling.
Naturally you should keep a reflections journal and write down the things you did notice. How you
felt before you started, as you went along, and how you felt after, and what you noticed about how
the children were feeling. This will only be useful to you later if you can pinpoint what might be
causing these reactions, the things you should try again and the things you should avoid.
In the workshop / class situation (at the IPG) when you are practicing, you should be working with a
partner. And then you should be able to be very honest with each other about how well your various
strategies are working. Is your diction clear? (Are you speaking too fast?) Are your gestures
meaningful or just silly? Are your voices distinct enough? Etc.
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from
Story
Arts:
Story
from
Story
Arts:
Straker, D. (2008, March 2). Classic Story Types. Retrieved July 4, 2012, from ChangingMinds.Org:
http://changingminds.org/disciplines/storytelling/plots/classic/classic.htm
Wiehart, G. (2013). Fiction Writing. Retrieved June 20,
http://fictionwriting.about.com/od/glossary/g/Character.htm
2013,
from
About.com:
Wilson, J. (2006). Great Books to Read Aloud. Retrieved July 4, 2012, from Random House:
http://www.randomhouse.co.uk/childrens/GreatBookstoReadAloud/
Wright, A. (1995). Storytelling with Children. Oxford: Oxford University Press.
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Search on the Internet using the names of authors seen here, as well as authors mentioned
in other parts of the module.
Go to the library there is a room full of books to look through there.
Search for childrens books in a particular genre, or for a particular age-group.
Look in the primary school library.
Flip through some books in a book shop, and then follow up by searching for those titles or
authors.
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He has terrible
tusks,
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(Lakin, 2004)
Look up other books by this writer.
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(Stine, 2009)
Search for other
stories
by
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famous childrens
author.
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(Homzie, 2009)
Find other books by this author on the Internet.
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(Fullerton, 2010)
Can you find more books in this series, or more stories by this author?
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(Medcroft, 2008)
Notice that this author just retold this story.
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(Noonan, 2000)
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Fly, fly, fly. I made a picture in my mind of my feet lifting off the ground. Nothing happened. I tried
even harder. I could just imagine my brains splattering on the walls if I didnt stop.
Harder, harder, harder. Fly, fly, fly.
Slowly my feet started to lift off the floor. It was amazing. I had lifted about fifty centimetres in the
air. It felt like walking on water. Whoo, hoo, I yelled. Look at me. Look at me. I can fly.
Mum rushed into the room followed quickly by Dad. I dropped to the floor like a stone.
What? What? What? she yelled.
I flew. I flew. Did you see it?
I saw you give a little jump, Ricky. Now she had a really worried look on her face. She must have
thought I was losing my marbles.
No, no, I flew.
Dont do it, said Mum. Join the football team or something sensible.
I did, I did it, I flew, I shouted. Watch this.
I closed my eyes and concentrated. Fly, fly, fly, I said to myself. Lift off the ground. Feet rise up.
My brain was boiling. My skull felt like the shell of a hand grenade about to go off. But nothing
happened. I gave it one last, desperate try. My toes tingled but I didnt move even a millimetre. I
groaned with the effort of it. But it was no use.
Stop, it, said Mum. You will do yourself an injury.
I opened my eyes. I did fly, I yelled. But even as I said the words I started to doubt. Was it a dream?
Was I going nuts? Did I really lift off the ground when she left me alone in the kitchen?
I did fly, I said. My feet ... The words trailed away.
I turned to Dad. Did you want to fly when you were a kid?
He nodded slowly.
Yes said Mum. But it didnt work for him, either.
What do you mean? I said.
Dont, said Dad. But Mum tightened her lips and kept talking.
It was when you were just a baby, Ricky. You know that old lady over the back fence?
Mrs Briggs?
Yes. Her kitten got stuck up the flag pole in the front yard. She was crying something terrible and
there was no one there to help. Except Dad. She rushed inside to call the fire brigade and while she
was gone he shinned up the pole like a monkey.
I stared at Dad with pride. You climbed a flag pole to save a kitten? You are a hero, Dad.
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Dad blushed.
Except, said Mum. That when Mrs Briggs came outside, the kitten was down on the ground and
your father was stuck up the top of the pole. He couldnt get down.
Thats enough, Mary, said Dad. He doesnt want to know all this.
Mum kept going.
Everyone in the street came to look. There he was a grown man sitting on top of a flag pole and
couldnt get down. By the time the fire brigade came to save him there were hundreds of people
watching.
Wow, I said.
Dad gave a little groan.
It was on the television, said Mum. We were a laughing stock. That cat had saved itself and
climbed down. And your father got stuck. The whole country knew that he climbed a flag pole and
couldnt get down. Thats how well he could fly.
She gave a little smile and then she added. But I still love him.
So do I, I said.
Believe in yourself, Ricky, said Dad.
I do, Dad, I said. I believe in myself.
I did fly. Just a bit. I lifted myself off the ground. But no one else knew.
No one at all.
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The next morning I put on my back pack and walked slowly to school. I went through the park so that
I could try to lift myself off the ground with the power of thought. I didnt want anyone to see me
going red in the face and groaning with the effort.
I stopped half way across the park and checked things out. There was no one around only a
spotted dog with its head inside a rubbish bin. It was sniffing around for scraps.
I stood still and concentrated. Fly, fly, fly, I said under my breath. I could feel my ears growing hot. I
could feel my eyes throbbing. I could feel ... my feet lifting. I was doing it. I was really, really flying.
Not high, just a few centimetres off the ground.
Now I needed someone to see me. Now I needed someone to almost faint at the sight of my
amazing powers.
Look at me, I shouted to the empty park.
The dog looked. It pulled its head out of the bin and stared at me. And I plopped straight down to
the ground.
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I closed my eyes and tried again. I strained and strained but nothing happened.
I walked away from the dog and along the winding path. One more try. I would give it one more go.
There was nothing I wanted more than to get to school and demonstrate my flying ability.
I concentrated really hard. And once again it happened. Slowly I rose from the ground. I looked
around but there was no one in sight.
The word, forward sprung into mind. Slowly I began to move along the path floating just a few
centimetres above the ground. Higher, I said to myself. I rose about fifty centimetres more. I was
skating along the path and my feet werent even touching the ground.
This was amazing. This was fantastic. Incredible. It was like skidding along on ice except there was
nothing under my feet but air.
I flew around a tree. There was a sign saying, DONT WALK ON THE GRASS. I didnt. I flew out over it,
standing upright and just shooting along as if my body was filled with helium.
A gardener appeared from behind a bush. He stared at me. I fell heavily and crumpled onto the
grass.
Hey, he yelled. Cant you read? Get off there you little brat.
I ran to the other side of the lawn and disappeared into the bushes. I tried to make sense of it.
Sometimes I could fly and sometimes I couldnt. I needed to show someone. I needed someone to
believe in me. Then everything would be okay.
A far off beeping noise floated through the trees. It was the school bell. I was going to be late. There
would be big trouble if I was late.
Up, I said to myself.
Up I went. Not high. Just a little bit.
Forward, I said. I began to skid forward on nothing.
Faster, I said. I went faster.
I didnt say anything to myself, I didnt have to. I just thought it. Brain power was enough.
Faster and faster I sped through the park, standing straight up and skidding forward like a bishop on
a chess board. It was fantastic. The feeling of speed and power and lightness filled my head. I was
dizzy with happiness.
I sped along in silence. My heart was thumping. I was so excited. This was my big chance. Everyone
was going to see me fly. The school gate came into view.
There were kids all gathered around staring at something on the ground. No one was looking at me.
Except one little girl. She gave a gasp. I fell straight down and landed with a small plop. The little girl
shook her head and joined the other kids. They were all staring down into the ground. There was
orange netting surrounding a deep hole where workers had been digging for several days.
But there were no workers. Only kids.
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I did as he said. When I reached ten I opened my eyes. He was gone. I looked to the left. I looked to
the right. Nothing. No one. Not a soul in sight.
Up here, came Dads voice.
I looked above my head. Still nothing. Then I stared at the top of the town hall. And saw him.
Perched on the flagpole way up above the clock. Sitting up there and not a cat in sight.
How did you ... ?
Close your eyes and count again, He yelled.
I did what he said but when I got to five and opened my eyes I could see that he was still coming
down. Slowly, slowly like an upright soldier being lowered with invisible hands. He was about two
metres above the ground. As soon as my eyes took in the sight he fell like garbage bag full of rocks.
Ouch, he screamed as he hit the footpath.
Dad, I shouted. Sorry, I looked too soon.
He stood up and dusted himself down. There was a moment of silence. Then he smiled at me.
I hate that bit of it, he said.
I grinned.
Me too, I said. The flying is fantastic...
We both finished the sentence together. ... but we have to smooth out the landings.
Gees we laughed.
Life was great. Really great.
*
PS Dad and Mum took me to Water World for saving the dog. The Super Sucker Water Slide was
good.
But not nearly as good as flying.
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