2008-2009 2D My Group’s Publication

2nd Term Limited Collection

Chief Editor: Mr. Victor Chow

Assistant Editors: Debbie Kong
Copyright © 2009 by Tsung Tsin College 08-09 2D Students

[Warning: Most mistakes by original writers are still kept!]

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Group 1

Title: A special guest in my birthday party (R.S. Units 23& 24) Writer: Alex Chiu

Birthday makes me grow 1 year (only name).So if I hold my birthday party. I need scenery to hold the party.
But a special guest does not have any chance to go to my birthday party. Because I don't hold the party on
future or last birthday.

If a special guest go to my birthday party. I think I could treat him polite. I can do this one. I can make some
good taste food to give him to eat and took about him because he is very special. So I can take the present
for him. I can think this thing is very different. I will kick him away because also with my know people. Kick
him away is best for me because special guest maybe robber.

So this can make me secure. (134 words)

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Group 2

Title: My dream wedding (R.S. Unit 16) Writer: Tracy Chan

My dream wedding is very romantic. My wedding will be held in the sandy beach. There are a lot of flowers
and shells on the sand. There are a lot of bright-colored colours. I will wear a all white wedding dress. The
bridegroom is wear white wedding dress too. The bride's head yarn look like jellyfish very mush. Head have
a lot of flash pearl one at the yarn, very beautiful. At the last times in the wedding, all attend wedding people
will change the swimming clothing and swim in the beach, we will carry on the swimming contest. This is my
dream wedding. (104 words)

Comment from Jack Wong:

I think this wedding is well, because is very beautiful and romantic, and they is happy and excited. But today
rain, what can to do. I very like this wedding and i will go to join this wedding, I think it happy! (42 words)

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Group 3

Title: You choose your own topic Writer: Andy Chan

Today is my school's sport day. I have join play the netball, I can flow the ball over the standard, but t can't
go into the final. Although I can go into the final, I think it is very interesting and I have to try my best. Today I
saw many people's mark in sport, look like some people run can run very fast, I can also saw the Red Cross
walk, they are very regular. Some cheer squad shout very loudly. Then their voices are very hoarse. (88
words)

Comment:
Your passage tells me what you feel in the sports day but you can write more about what you do in the
sports day. That will make you more interesting and funny! You should write more about yourself feeling
because I feel a bit boring. (45 words)

Title: The best way to earn money (R.S. Units 9 & 10) Writer: Iverson Chung

I think the leading role of wedding is the new appointee, is it because the wedding is prepare to appointee.

So I want to with my dream wife to go to church, if her is not my dream wife, I feel the wedding is not have
denotation, in my dream wedding, I with my wife will have some beautiful clothes, we will invite the friend,
folks......to enjoy we wedding.

After the wedding, every thing is complete I will go the travel with my wife, go to Japan, USA...many many
countries, I think we will very happy.

In the end, we should said thank you to we mother and father, is it because is mother and father to give we
the life. So, we should say thank you to they. (129 words)

Title: My dream wedding (R.S. Unit 16) Writer: Ken Lau

My dream wedding... this thing is long long time, but I have think this in me not busy, my dream wedding is
have a many cartoon character so my wedding dream place is Disneyland. The wedding has many snacks.
I may buy many potato chips, prawn cracker. It is very delicious. I and my wife will wear very beautiful
clothes and dress, have a many people and family come and my classmate, I think it is me dream wedding,
but i want to say one thing, if you is real love your wife, I think you not mind your wedding is your dream

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wedding! (104 words)

Comment from Katie Ngai

I think his passage the dream wedding quite funny but I don't like the wedding has too much snacks
because it is unhealthy food. He should order a healthy food, like fish, vegetable etc. i also hope he would
have this dream wedding in the future (46 words)

My special guest in my birthday party (R.S. Unit 16) Writer: Katie Ngai

My birthday party held in last Saturday. I was very pleased about this wonderful party! It is an unforgettable
experience too!

My birthday party took part in my home. In the Saturday morning, my friends went to my home, started
decorating my home! Second, we made delicious dishes together, like salad, fried rice, chicken wings,
baked potato and tomato soup. In the Saturday evening, my birthday party began! All guests were on time.
First, we ate many food, then played a game called "Bingo". It is a funny game!

Finally, we ate a birthday cake but they turned off the light. In a moment, they turned on the light and I saw a
beautiful birthday cake "Happy birthday to you, Katie!” I saw my emigrant classmates too! I didn't know she
will came to my birthday party! I was surprised about this! She emigrated very long time, I missed her very
much! She was my special guest in my birthday party!

I hope I can have this fabulous party next year again! (172words)

Comment from Ken Lau

It is very special birthday party for you, you have a emigrated classmates to come, and I see this party have
many many food, so I think it is a good party! (32 words)

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Group 4

Title: My Dream Wedding (R.S. Units 15&16) Writer: Winnie Chan

My dream wedding is a special wedding. Let me tell you how special is it! First, I want everyone wear
different colours of the clothes. Because I think different colours of the clothes are symbl of happy and I like
colourful. Next, also I want the wedding have many flowers around the wedding place. There are some
reasons I want to be that. The first reason is that I like different kinds of flowers and I like the flowers
surround us. The second reason is that I like the wedding place is colourful and I am very like colourful.
After that, I want the wedding place take place in the outdoor and it is in the flower nursery. I think it must be
very beautiful. Finally, I want play is a happy song. This song is very important because it may make all of
the guest be very unforgettable. That my dream wedding. It is my special dream wedding. (159 words)

Comment from Mi Fong:

I think your wedding is good. You can write “First”” “Next”, “Finally”… I think is good because can make you
have a good organization. And you can make me know what your dream wedding is. That good! I think your
dream wedding is special too. I hope have this wedding. (50 words)

The love most online game (R.S. Units) Writer: Jack Mui

The near future, My friends and i was playing a online game, it calls "TS2 Online”. It is made in ago's China.
Every player can say English or Chinese. "TS2 Online’s a new game! In 17of October 08 open in china. It
has "TS1 Online" too. I feel this game is very fun. It's picture is very good-looking, because it is 3D. It's
speed is ok too. I played this online with five friends. Now, I did not good at play this online game, because i
did not always play, but my friend play every week. I am 30 level now, they are 53,54,55,59,79!!! (104words)

Title: My Dream Wedding (R.S. Units 15&16) Writer: Harry Tang

My dream Christmas I think it is many people can feel very happy , many people will make some turkeys to,
I the turkeys tastes are so delicious. But in the Hong Kong I can't see have people eat turkeys. In the
Christmas, I will buy Christmas trees, play online games and the one is i do not like to do, it is holiday
homework .In the school, we will decoration the classroom, holding Christmas parties, exchanging presents
and singing carols. The December last night have countdown, many people go out to join the countdown,
but I think I would study in my home to see the TV film. (111 words)

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Comment from Mi Fong:
I think his dream Christmas is very good and best, because in his dream Christmas has can play online
game. I hope can with my friend play online game too. I think his writing very good, use some new word,
can write 120 words, it is very good. Add oil, never give up. (48 words)

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Group 5

Title: My dream wedding (R.S. Unit 15 &16) Writer: Iverson Chung

I think my dream wedding may wonderful. I hope my wedding is in the moon. Why I will choose my dream
wedding in the space? Because I think it is very interesting thing will happen.

And nobody try to have wedding in the space so I hope I can have the first married in moon. And I will wear
special clothes .I will make my dream wedding will very funny and make me and my wife can remember this
wedding forever. (81 words)

Title: (R.S. Unit 23 &24) Writer: Natalie Leung

Today was my birthday. I felt very excited and surprised. It was because it had the special guest came to
join my birthday party, my grandfather and grandmother.

They wear live in USA but I lived in Canada. It was a long trip. We were long time no see! I miss them very
much. I don't know they will come before. All my birthday, although they couldn't come to join, they will send
me many gifts for me, like clothes and toys. I love them and they were very useful.

In this birthday party, I always stayed with my grandparents. It is because I had many things to talk with
them. Although we will talk in computer but I like talk in face to face more. It will more nice than in the
computer.

I had many presents in this birthday but I had a special gifts is very surprised, my grandparents come to join
my birthday party! (158 words)

Comment from Iverson Chung:

I think this is happy story. She has happy party. Her grandparents come to Hong Kong from USA. She very
surprise. She very likes them and she talks a lot of things to them. I hope she can talk to them forever! (42
words)

Title: A special guest in my birthday party (R.S. Units) Writer: Ken Ng

Talking about my most unforgettable birthday, I think it was last year my birthday. The day I am very joyfully

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and suppring. The day, my friends like the chapter 23 and 24, how to prepare the birthday and invite a
special guest in my birthday party !!!=]

In the chapter 23, Tom want to help Sarah to celebration her birthday. Like held a barbecue in the park and
invite so many people to join it.

In the chapter 24, writer write a letter to his pen pal, he hope his a pen pal to join his birthday.

In this two chapter, I think the 23. Tom help his friend to held a party, I think Sarah would be very happy. The
chapter 24, writer hope his pen pal can join them birthday.

Talk back my last year birthday, my friends and family helped me to held a party. And make me so
unforgettable was a special guest, who is I comes from distant place Canada's cousin. I thank her can in my
birthday party. (178 words)

Comment from Ronald Law:

I think this is good because it is use dictionary. I will use the dictionary to write letter. And it is write many
words. The word is very good, so I will study him and write letter. (38 words)

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Group 6

Title: My mother Writer: Oscar Lai

My mother is 42 years old, I’m call her Rita, she is a “Superwoman”, because she is very work hard,
everyday morning she need to go to work, 6:00p.m, she went to the market to buy the food for the dinner,
come back home, she go to cook the dinner, then have the dinner with me, then she go to washes the
dishes, up to 8:30pm,she can to rest.

I think my mum is too tired. I know she always sick, hope she can convalesce. I think my mum is the best
mother in this world, she very work hard to earn money to look after for me. I’m proud of her. I will repay her
when I grow up. Rita (my mum), I love you! (126words)

Comment From Happy Lee:

Oscar, I think you are so piety, and I know you love your mother very much. Your mother loves you too! Who
don’t love their children? I am very happy for you and your mother’s emotion is so nice. I hope you can keep
the feeling with your mother forever. (50 words)

Title: A dream wedding (R.S. Unit 15 &16) Writer: Yoyo Lam

Everyone also hope they can have a flawless wedding. They hope they can have a elegant and memorable
wedding. But whether anybody can realize their dream wedding?

My dream wedding only want to simple. I want to marry with my dearest. I hope he is my loving kindness. I
only hope this is true love...

And I hope we can reallize wedding's address.

This is a memorable. I hope it only have once time in my life! So it must be the most perfect wedding! My
husband and I must be the most beautiful and handsome in the world! (99 words)

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Group 7

Title: My favourite country (R.S. Units) Writer: Kelly Fok

My favourite country is Japan. It is because I think Japan is very beautiful. There has much oriental cherry. It
is very romantic. Tokyo is famous in Japan. Japanese like to eat sushi. It is very delicious. But I dislike to eat.
It is because I think sushi. It is very delicious. But I dislike to eat. It is because I think sushi is raw. Japan has
Disneyland too. There is very big. Japan Disneyland and Hong Kong Disneyland are different.

And then, I deem Japan is much different cartoon character. It is very interesting and funny. Japanese
usually wear kimono. It is very beautiful. I think Hello Kitty land is very exciting. Japan is very special. So I
like Japan very much but I did not go it. (129 words)

Comment from Yan Ng:

My favourite country is Japan too! I think it has so many comic books. Also, I dislike to eat sushi too! I think
it is very dirty because sushi don’t need to cook! It’s very horrible. Therefore, I agree with you very much. I
like your passage very much. (40 words)

Title: My dream wedding (R.S. Unit 15 &16) Writer: Ling Ho

My dream wedding is a cartoon costume wedding. It’s very special. It’s different from unit16. I will disguise
Sailor moon. Why I want to disguise her? It’s because I hope everyone has a happy day. When the guests
look at me, they may laugh at me. Also, I hope my lover can disguise Chibiusa, who is a character of Sailor
moon. It’s very exciting. And my bridesmaid may impersonate Sailor Mercury.

We will hold the wedding on a liner. In the middle of the wedding, a guest will act Gin who is a evil character
in detective Conan.

He will use a toy gun to prevent our wedding. Then I will take a toy gun from my boots. I will fire Gin. Of
course I will not use bullets. I will use cards. Finally Gin will go away. And the wedding will continue.

I think my dream wedding is very special and amazing. Maybe it is very difficult to execute but I hope I can
execute it in the future. (170 words)

Comment from Kelly Fok:

Her dream wedding is very special. Her wedding is a cartoon costume. I think it is very funny. And I think
this wedding is very well and very creative. I like it very much. I am looking forward to it. (40 words)

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Group 8

Title: A special guest in my birthday party (R.S. Units 23& 24) Writer: Cici Chan

Today is my birthday. I have to go to school and I will have my birthday party after school. My friends did not
remember my birthday, so I did not tell them, and they also don’t know my birthday. I had told one of my
classmate about my birthday party, but she also forget. I was so unhappy. After school, I quickly left the
school, and go to the place of my birthday party. It hold in a beach, I want to have a barbecue in the beach,
but now, there are no one. No one remember my birthday. I was sad and I want to cry. Suddenly, many
people sing the birthday song to me. I was surprised, I saw them. They are my friends, they didn't forget my
birthday. And there is a special guest, she is my primary school teacher. She is very nice. I love her very
much.

Today I was very happy. I hope I can have the birthday party with them next year. (169 words)

Comment from Oliver Hui:

I feel the story is very funny, it is very exciting. I think this story is so good, birthday party is made people
happy day, I hope you can have one birthday party. Finally, I hope you happy very much. (34 words)

Title: My Christmas holiday and sport day Writer: Carmen Chan

My Christmas holiday was long, and has some fun. At Christmas, my family with my aunt and uncle go to
have barbecue. At Christmas I played with my aunt's baby. They were one boy and one girl. The boy was
brother. Their girl was sister. They were very cute. They were like to play with me , so at Christmas I played
very happy.

At sport day, I was join my agency's cheer team. It was very hard, and the weather was cold, but I can
endure.

At the other sport day, my cheer leader have five girls. One among them was heatstroke, the other cheer
leader were very sad and cry, so we want to work hard, and win the champion.

At the finally, "Deborah" get the cheer team champion cup. All leader and member were very happy, and we
give a loud shout : " DEBORAH DEBORAH, WE ARE PLAYER, DEBORAH DEBORAH WE ARE WINNER!
" (158 words)

Comment from Cici Chan:

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At sport days, I also joined agency's cheer team. And we got the third of the cheer team. Although we got
the third, "Caleb" got the champion of the sport days, it was the fourth times. At Christmas, I didn't go out.
So I only do homework at home. (49 words)

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Group 9

Title: Sports Day Writer: Kiki Chow

On Wednesday and Thursday were Tsung Tsin College's sport day, all student needed to attend. In this
sport day ,I joined Long jump, 100hundred and 200hunderd meter, also I joined the TTCTV. I was an
anchorwoman and joined the Jusha's cheer squad.I had many things to do.

My first item was Long jump. It was many student join this. But unlunkly, when I jumped in the sandbox, I
broke my leg, it was very pain. I was very obstinate, I wanted it finished my second jump, so my leg as bad
as before. I was very sad, because I could not join the 100hundred and 200hundred meter, so I only could
go to the TTCTV help them to asked someone to interview. It was my Form.2'S sport day. (127words)

Comment from Bobo Lui:

I think Kiki’s passage is good, and I think she at the sport day is really have many things to do.(is good) and
she take part at the long jump broke her leg, so I hope she will take a rest, (for her leg). (43 words)

Title: My dream wedding (R.S. Unit 16) Writer: Fatcha Cheng

I think the bride was very bliss, many people can not find they are life companion. But Ann and her husband
can do it. And she have a happy and funny wedding. I was very envying them.

I want have a special wedding. I will wore the bridegroom wedding clothes. My husband will wore the
wedding dresses. I think this is very funny^0^.I'm not to forget this special wedding. I want all of our friends
and relatives went to our wedding. Benediction us and to share our joyful. I think we can to hold our
wedding in TTC. Because I study in here 6 years. At last. A CATHOLIC FATHER ASK ME ''YOU DO'' I will
said ''YES, I DO''. (122 words)

Comment from Bobo Lui:

I think fatcha the dream weeding is so good, because she want to hold their wedding in Tsin Tsung
College,and she want a athdic father to ask her ''you do?'', I think this is so good! (36 words)

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Group 10

Title: My dream wedding (R.S. Unit 16) Writer: Tom Cheng

My dream wedding? It is will in the Hong Kong .Disneyland to hold the my dream wedding. I will very happy
to my wedding. I will have very very money. I will have be a man of great or lareat or large weabth. I will
have a to take as wife. My wife is very nice funny face. Her will very helpful. but my wedding is this. I don't
know my wedding is will what so i feel very unhappy. I don't think this. (84 words)

Comment from Edison Pang:

I see the writing he the dream wedding is so luxury. Because he say will in Hong Kong Disneyland to hold.
An then he say he have many many money. I think have more people attend, I think I will go he dream
wedding. Because I think have some delicious food eat. Haha... (53 words)

Title: A special guest in my birthday party (R.S. Units 23& 24) Writer: Edison Pang

Today is my birthday party. My family with my friend with me will go to my home holding the birthday party.
My birthday party is a very big party, have more food and drink. e.g.: potato chips, sandwich, hamburger,
rise, coke, cake, pizza, chicken wing, orange juice, apple juice, lemon juice… have some more. Then, my
family will give me money, and sing the birthday song. I think was move.

Then, have a one super star go to this party with me. He is a Alex Fang. He is my idol. I very like listen to he
sing a song, and he was very handsome, is some more girl idol.

He go my party with me play. I think very very happy. He with me eat food, drink, play more game, take
photo and sing he's song was very pleasant to listen to, so I think this birthday is very good. I will not forget.
(155 words)

Comment from Tom Cheng:

I think this writing is very funny. He party is have a super star Alex Fang. He is very more money. He is think
this party is very big, I think this writing is very funny. (36 words)

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