Test 1 CAE
Test 1 CAE
Test 1 CAE
You are going to read three extracts which are all concerned in some way with scientific research. For
questions 1 6, choose the answer (A, B, C or D) which you think fits best according to the text.
Mark your answers on the separate answer sheet.
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YOUNG ENVIRONMENTAL JOURNALIST COMPETITION
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In the second paragraph, the writer makes a comparison between the cupboard and
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Part 2
You are going to read an extract from a magazine article. Six paragraphs have been removed from the
extract. Choose from the paragraphs A G the one which fits each gap (7 12). There is one extra
paragraph which you do not need to use.
Mark your answers on the separate answer sheet.
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One morning, Tim decided to count the number of
hippos we saw, in an attempt to gauge the
population in this part of the river. Most of the
wildlife keeps a cautious distance, and we were
assured that, safe in our canoe, any potential
threats would be more scared of us than we were
of them but we had been warned to give these
river giants a wide berth. Theyd normally stay in
mid-stream, watching us with some suspicion, and
greeting our departure with a cacophony of grunts.
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Tim yelled Paddle! and over the next 100 metres
an Olympic runner would have struggled to keep
up with us. The hippo gave up the chase, and
although Tim said he was just a youngster
showing off, our opinion was that he had
honeymooners on the menu. That would certainly
be the way we told the story by the time we got
home.
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At some times of the year, you can even enjoy a
natural jacuzzi in one of the rock pools beside the
falls. No permanent structures are allowed on the
island everything has to be removed when you
leave.
The travel brochures say its the worlds most
exclusive picnic spot. Its certainly the ideal place
to wind down after a near miss with a hippo.
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Part 3
You are going to read a newspaper article. For questions 13 19, choose the answer (A, B, C or D)
which you think fits best according to the text.
Mark your answers on the separate answer sheet.
Groomed for TV
Martyn Harris looks back on his experience of being trained to appear on TV.
I am terrible on TV. I slouch, sneer, stammer,
fidget, forget my lines and swallow the ends of my
words. It rankles, because I know inside I am
scintillating, sensitive and sincere. Television can
make any fool look like an intellectual.
Newsreaders can contrive to look nice and even the
worst presenters can seem sensible, but I come over
as a shifty subversive.
The single television
programme I have presented was so awful that even
my mother couldnt find a good word for it. After a
catastrophic radio show last year, when I addressed
the interviewer by the wrong name throughout, I
swore Id never do broadcasting again.
Until now, that is. I have my first novel out next
month, which is called Do It Again, and the PR
people inform me you just have to get out there and
promote it. Scotland one day, the south coast of
England the next. Its going to be hectic and I have
to get my act together. Which is how I find myself
being scrutinised for televisual potential by two
svelte creatures from Public Image Ltd, while
cameraman Alastair focuses on my trembling upper
lip. Public Image is the outfit which has been
teaching MPs how to look good on TV. They also
groom executives from major companies in
everything from corporate presentations to handling
broadcast interrogation, but as far as Im concerned,
if they can make politicians look like real people,
they are good enough for me.
He blinks a lot, doesnt he? says Diana, the
speech specialist, studying my image on a video
monitor. And the crossed legs look defensive. But
the voice isnt bad. Jeannie, who is introduced to
me as Public Images charisma consultant, takes a
step backwards to study the general posture. Needs
to get his bottom back in the sofa. And the jacket
makes him look a bit deformed. Where does he get
his clothes from?
Honesty is the most important thing, says
Diana. We dont want to turn people into actors.
We want to bring out the personality. And of course
speech is most important too. Lots of politicians
dont breathe properly, so they have to shout. They
give themselves sore throats and polyps on the vocal
chords. Breathe from the diaphragm and you can
speak quite loudly and for quite a long time without
strain. Then most importantly, there are the three
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The writer has become involved with Public Image Ltd because
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B
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D
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insincere.
silly.
rude.
predictable.
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The writer believes that his response to Dianas first question sounds
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B
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Diana and Jeannie both say that one of the writers problems when appearing on TV concerns
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B
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Part 4
You are going to read an article containing reviews of crime novels. For questions 20 34, choose
from the reviews (A F). The reviews may be chosen more than once.
Mark your answers on the separate answer sheet.
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the main character having a personal connection which brings disturbing revelations
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Part 1
3 minutes (5 minutes for groups of three)
Select one or more questions from any of the following categories, as appropriate.
People
Is it a good idea to continue studying throughout your life? (Why? / Why not?)
When do you prefer to work or study in the morning, afternoon or evening? (Why?)
Part 1
3 minutes (5 minutes for groups of three)
What are the advantages and disadvantages of living abroad for a short time?
If you could live in another country, where would you choose? (Why?)
Entertainment
Experiences
If you had the opportunity to try a new activity, what would you choose? (Why?)
How has your life changed in the last two or three years?
1 Travelling by train
2 Face to face
Interlocutor
Part 2
4 minutes (6 minutes for groups of three)
In this part of the test, Im going to give each of you three pictures. Id like you to talk
about them on your own for about a minute, and also to answer a question briefly
about your partners pictures.
(Candidate A), its your turn first. Here are your pictures. They show people travelling
by train.
Place Part 2 booklet, open at Task 1, in front of Candidate A.
Id like you to compare two of the pictures, and say what different aspects of train
travel they show, and how the people might be feeling.
All right?
Candidate A
1 minute
Interlocutor
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Thank you.
(Candidate B), which picture do you think best shows the advantages of travelling
by train? ... (Why?)
Candidate B
approximately
..
30 seconds
Interlocutor
Thank you. (Can I have the booklet, please?) Retrieve Part 2 booklet.
Now, (Candidate B), here are your pictures. They show people talking face to face.
Place Part 2 booklet, open at Task 2, in front of Candidate B.
Id like you to compare two of the pictures, and say why these people might be
talking to each other, and how they might be feeling.
All right?
Candidate B
1 minute
Interlocutor
..
Thank you.
(Candidate A), which of these people do you think know each other the best?
(Why?)
Candidate A
approximately
..
30 seconds
Interlocutor
Thank you. (Can I have the booklet, please?) Retrieve Part 2 booklet.
Parts 3 and 4
8 minutes (12 minutes for groups of three)
Part 3
Interlocutor
Now, Id like you to talk about something together for about three minutes.
(5 minutes for groups of three)
Here are some pictures showing different ways in which computers affect our
lives.
Place Part 3 booklet, open at Task 21, in front of the candidates.
First, talk to each other about how these pictures show the role of computers
nowadays. Then decide which picture best reflects the difference computers have
made to our lives.
All right?
Candidates
3 minutes
..
(5 minutes for
groups of three)
Interlocutor
Thank you. (Can I have the booklet, please?) Retrieve Part 3 booklet.
Part 4
Interlocutor
How far do you agree that the computer is the greatest invention of modern
times?
In future, what role do you think there will be for people who are not interested
in technology? ... (Why?)
Part 1
For questions 1 12, read the text below and decide which answer (A, B, C or D) best fits each gap.
There is an example at the beginning (0).
Mark your answers on the separate answer sheet.
Example:
0
A
0
expressed
B
directed
indicated
guided
It has also been shown that the left and right halves, or
hemispheres, of the brain are (1) .. for different functions. While language is processed in the left,
or analytical hemisphere, music is processed in the right, or emotional hemisphere. (2) .. of
music like tone, pitch and melody are all probably processed in different parts of the brain. Some
features of musical experience are processed not just in the auditory parts of the brain, but in the
visual ones. We dont yet fully understand the (3) .. of this.
The tempo of music seems to be (4) .. related to its emotional impact, with fast music often
(5) .. as happier and slower music as sadder. It is the same with the major biological rhythm of
the body: our heart (6) .. quickens when were happy, but slows when were sad. Military music
may have (7) .. from attempts to get us ready for (8) .. by using fast drumming to (9) ..
our hearts into beating faster. Music is perhaps one of the most complex experiences the brain
(10) .. with and it has become an absolutely (11) .. part of our rituals and ceremonies. It has
power beyond language to (12) .. mood and co-ordinate our emotional states.
amenable
dependable
responsible
reliable
Views
Aspects
Factors
Pieces
expectations
implications
assumptions
propositions
surely
plainly
evidently
directly
felt
endured
encountered
touched
pulse
speed
pace
rate
evolved
extended
advanced
elevated
battle
fight
quarrel
struggle
activate
motivate
stimulate
animate
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manages
copes
bears
holds
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vital
important
compulsory
dominant
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notify
report
associate
communicate
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Part 2
For questions 13 27, read the text below and think of the word which best fits each gap. Use only
one word in each gap. There is an example at the beginning (0).
Write your answers IN CAPITAL LETTERS on the separate answer sheet.
Example:
B Y
Mosquitoes
According to the World Health Organisation, malaria, a disease spread (0) ........ mosquitoes, affects
millions of people every year. Everyone knows how irritating the noise made by a mosquito,
(13) .. by a painful reaction to its bite, can be. It is astonishing that so (14) .. is known about
why mosquitoes are drawn to or driven away from people, given (15) .. level of distress and
disease caused by these insects. We know that the most effective chemical (16) .. protecting
people against mosquitoes is diethyltoluamide, commonly shortened (17) .. deet. (18) .. deet
works well, it has some serious drawbacks: it can damage clothes and some people are allergic to it.
Scientists know that mosquitoes find some people more attractive than others, but they do not know
(19) .. this should be. They also know that people vary in (20) .. reactions to mosquito bites.
One person has a painful swelling while (21) .. who is bitten by the same mosquito (22) ..
hardly notice.
Scientists have (23) .. discovered the reason for this, but they have carried
(24) .. experiments to show that mosquitoes are attracted to, or put (25) .. by, certain smells.
In the future, scientists hope to develop a smell that mosquitoes cannot resist. This could be used in
a trap (26) .. that, instead of attacking people, mosquitoes would fly into the trap and be
destroyed. For the time (27) .. however, we have to continue spraying ourselves with unpleasant
liquids if we want to avoid getting bitten.
Part 3
For questions 28 37, read the text below. Use the word given in capitals at the end of some of the
lines to form a word that fits in the gap in the same line. There is an example at the beginning (0).
Write your answers IN CAPITAL LETTERS on the separate answer sheet.
Example:
C O M P A R I S O N
An ancient tree
In Totteridge, in north London, there is a yew tree estimated to be between
1,000 and 2,000 years old.
(0) .. with others of the species. The record in the UK is held by a yew in
COMPARE
Scotland that is thought to be between 4,000 and 5,000 years old. However,
such trees are becoming (28) .. rare and the Totteridge specimen was
INCREASE
SUFFICE
DOUBT
MAINTAIN
down so low that they have taken root. But this is part of the trees natural
architecture and contributes to its (32) .. in high winds. With the best of
STABLE
(33) .. , ancient yew sites are often tidied up with no benefit to the tree.
INTEND
Dead branches are not (34) .. shed by the tree and their wood harbours a
READY
DIVERSE
Something of the trees history is lost with the (36) .. of dead wood. After
REMOVE
all, the decaying, twisted and (37) .. parts give the tree character.
ATTRACT
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Part 4
For questions 38 42, think of one word only which can be used appropriately in all three sentences.
Here is an example (0).
Example:
0
They say the new minister is a lovely person and very .. to talk to.
My neighbours have not had a very .. life, but they always seem cheerful.
Its .. enough to see why the town is popular with tourists.
Example:
E A S Y
Write only the missing word IN CAPITAL LETTERS on the separate answer sheet.
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I think its .. to say that not everyone in the boardroom agreed with the decision
about the site of the new factory.
Rita complained that it was not .. that she had a smaller company car than her
colleagues.
My husband looks nothing like his brothers and sisters because he is so .. .
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The workers at the car factory are at present .. in negotiations to improve their
position.
As the business expanded and more staff were required, the company .. the
services of a recruitment agency.
When my brother and his new girlfriend announced that they were .. it took the
whole family by surprise.
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The instructions were written in such a complicated way that Joe had to spend a long time
.. out how to set up the printer.
First results indicated that the new drug was .. and had no side effects.
John was annoyed to find the drinks machine was not .. yet again.
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Part 5
For questions 43 50, complete the second sentence so that it has a similar meaning to the first
sentence, using the word given. Do not change the word given. You must use between three and
six words, including the word given. Here is an example (0).
Example:
0
The gap can be filled with the words insisted on speaking, so you write:
Example:
INSISTED ON SPEAKING
Write only the missing words IN CAPITAL LETTERS on the separate answer sheet.
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There were a lot of things that we had to think about before we could accept their offer.
OBLIGED
There were several things that we .... consideration before we
could accept their offer.
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48 Unless the weather improves, they will have to stop the tennis match.
MEAN
If the weather doesnt get .... stopping the tennis match.
49
I dont mind whether we stay in or go out this evening, but John wants to go to the cinema.
DIFFERENCE
It doesnt .... whether we stay in or go out this evening, but John
wants to go to the cinema.
50 Its possible that the thieves entered the building by forcing a window at the back.
BROKEN
The thieves may .... the building through a window at the back.
Part 1
You must answer this question. Write your answer in 180 220 words in an appropriate style on the
opposite page.
Last summer you had a job with an international company that organises music festivals. Your
friend Jan has written to you asking about it.
Read the extract from your friends letter and from your diary below. Then, using the
information appropriately, write a letter to your friend saying whether or not you would
recommend the job to your friend and giving your reasons.
Do you think Id like the job? Most of all I want to hear plenty of music. Id
like to make enough money for a holiday too. If I could use my English and get
useful work experience, that would be great!
Cheers,
Jan
July 2
Boring office work! No chance to learn anything. I answer the phone and
make coffee.
July 10
Pay day! Things are improving! The moneys not bad.
July 15
Did some translation and dealt with enquiries from English visitors.
July 22
Another free visit to festival!
Write your letter. You do not need to include postal addresses. You should use your own
words as far as possible.
Question 1
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Part 2
Write an answer to one of the questions 2 5 in this part. Write your answer in 220 260 words in an
appropriate style on the opposite page. Put the question number in the box at the top of the page.
2 You have been asked to provide a reference for a friend of yours who has applied for a job as a
receptionist in an English language college. The person appointed will be good at dealing with a
range of different people and will have excellent administrative skills.
You should include information about your friends character and personal qualities and skills,
their previous relevant experience and reasons why they should be considered for this job.
Write your reference.
3
Which
What do you think are the advantages for a student of staying with a host family
compared with college accommodation?
What qualities is it necessary for a successful host family to have?
Why would you like to host international students?
Mr S Martin
Hosts International Ltd.
Answer one of the following two questions based on one of the titles below. Write the letter (a) or
(b) as well as the number 5 in the question box on the following page.
(a)
(b)
Question
PART ONE
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PART TWO
PART THREE
2
It's
in
the
uncovering
and
investigative bits that student hackery
really comes into its own. We have no
budget, very little time and no library
of resources at our disposal. But
then, all you really need is a hunch,
a telephone and an abundance of
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D
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Which word or phrase from the text is used to express the goal of the investigative
journalist?
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You are going to read three extracts which are all concerned in some way with communication. For
questions 1 6, choose the answer (A, B, C or D) which you think fits best according to the text.
Part 1
PAPER 1: READING
Test 2 Part 1 (questions 12)
PAPER 1: READING
Answer keys
Test 1
PART FOUR
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Test 2 Question 1 (sample script)
Range
Language of description,
proposal must:
headings.
Target reader
Would be informed.
consistent.
Candidate G
Examiner comments
The aim of this proposal is to suggest a suitable venue for the weekend trip
the social committee is organising.
Content
All points addressed, though last paragraph
needs more expansion.
The people taking part of this weekend activity attend college, therefore the
activities involved should be proper.
One of the first suggestions given was mainly about phisical exercise. It would
be a great opportunity for them to keep fit and relax doing a sport. Second,
the students expressed their wish for quiet and peace, are also concerned
about the food they will receive and also about going shopping for presents.
The last comment was related to entertainment, either a film or a concert.
Regarding the students opinions and wishes for the trip but also taking into
consideration the two choices of locations, I recommend that the Briar Park
Hotel. Although Lakeside Activity Centre offers a peaceful setting in woodland
and opportunities for walking, canoeing and sailing, Briar Park Hotel best
meets all the demandings. It has beautiful grounds outside Leightonbury, a
swimming pool and also tennis courts for sports. The free bus to and from city
centre is perfect for going shopping and the international menu has good food.
range of structure.
Range
Reasonable range of vocabulary but good
Accuracy
Several non-intrusive errors.
Target reader
Would be informed.
As a conclusion, I believe that Briar Park Hotel is a good option which the
social committee should choose for the weekend trip
Marks awarded
Band 3.
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PAPER 1: READING
Answer keys
Test 2
PART ONE
PART TWO
PART THREE
PART FOUR
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PART THREE
PART TWO
PART FOUR
PART FIVE
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followed
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increasingly
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point
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little
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sufficient
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fair
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the
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engaged
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for
undoubtedly/
doubtlessly
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working
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maintenance
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charge
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Though/Although/
While/Whilst
stability
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intentions
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why
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readily
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their
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diversity
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another
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removal
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may/might/will
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unattractive
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not/never
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out
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off
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so
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being
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to
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PART TWO
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as
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every/any
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for/by/from/through
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who/that
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to
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yet/but/although/
though
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60
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worldwide/
world-wide
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infancy
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beginnings
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increasingly
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unimaginable
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consequently
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archaeologists/
archeologists
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expansion
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accuracy
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influential
over
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PART THREE
in
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are
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what
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How/how
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than
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whether/either
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your/an
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which
PART FOUR
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common
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field
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torn
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favour/favor
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buying/having bought
the/a/his car ][ without
getting/having
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PAPER 4: LISTENING
Answer keys
Test 1
PART ONE
PART TWO
PART THREE
PART FOUR
planning
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drawings
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equipment
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10
creative
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24
11
permission
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storms
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26
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food
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magazines
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PAPER 4: LISTENING
Answer keys
Test 2
PART ONE
PART TWO
PART THREE
PART FOUR
newsagent()s (shop)
15
21
botany
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22
management/managerial
17
23
10
landowners
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24
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(visible) benefits
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25
12
(farmland) birds
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forest areas/forests
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seasonal
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Test 1 Question 1 (sample script)
Range
letter must:
and recommendation.
Target reader
Would be informed.
Candidate A
Examiner comments
Dear Jan,
Content
I was happy to hear from you again after such a long period of time. So I
send you the information you wanted.
First, the job with this international company organizing music festivals has
two sides.
Range
I had days where I sat behind a desk in an unfriendly office giving information
to people who called. I had to do nothing important except making coffee for
the organising committee during their long hours of talk. But, those few days
were soon forgotten, because after I had shown my ability to work hard I
was responsible for more important tasks. I worked as an interpreter several
times, but also had to advise and help English visitors. So I improved my
English skills and learned a lot about official and politically correct language.
The next important point is that you will be able to make a really
extraordinary journey. Really, there is not need to worry about money.
vocabulary.
Accuracy
Generally accurate with occasional
awkwardness in choice of structure
(e.g. I send you).
As I know your interest in music I especially point out the fact that one gets
free entry to several festivals and sometimes even the change to meet one of
the performing stars face to face.
I believe this job to be perfect for you and might even affect your future
career.
Target reader
Would be fully informed.
Marks awarded
Band 4.
Cheers,
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Test 1 Question 2 (sample script)
Range
reference must:
and recommendation.
Target reader
Would be informed.
be selected.
Candidate B
Examiner comments
Content
Good realisation of the task.
Michelle Wong
Michelle and I have been working for seven years for ACB Ltd, an international
company specialised in the use of plastics engineering.
During the time we have worked together she proved herself to be a very
competent and efficient receptionist. She is undoubtedly a trustworthy and
punctual person, rarely absent from work. She has a level-headed approach to
problems and is never daunted when things go wrong, remaining selfpossessed. She is extremely dedicated to her job and she is known to be a
hard-worker, working overtime should the need arise.
As a colleague, she is a friendly person who is always on hand to help.
Therefore, she is liked and respected by everyone.
Range
A very good range of vocabulary and
structure.
Accuracy
Minimal errors; controlled and natural use of
language.
Regarding dealing with customers, she has a great deal of experience, and her
polite and tactful manner is vital in customer relations.
Target reader
Very positive effect on target reader, who
When she started work in the company, due to her organised manner, she
used to get a little nervous when she was under stain. Nevertheless, she
soon changed drastically and became more self-assured.
Marks awarded
Band 5.
It is undeniable that Michelle has a talent for foreign languages, and she is
fluent in English, French and Chinese. This is a great advantage when working
in an English language college. Despite being such an intelligent person she
keeps a low-profile.
For all these reasons, I strongly believe that Michelle would have much to
contribute, and therefore I have no hesitation in supporting her application
wholeheartedly.
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Test 1 Question 3 (sample script)
Range
and justification.
nominate a scientist
describe their achievement(s)
Target reader
Would be informed.
Examiner comments
Candidate C
Dear to whom it may concern,
I am writing to you to express my delightness about the planned series of TV
programmes about science, and paralelly I do so, because I would like to
nominate one person, who is in my opinion, the most important scientist of all
times Albert Einstein.
I am convinced about this because of three main reasons: the impact of his
discoveries on our lives, the effect of his theories on a modern science and
finally the extraordinary charisma and attitude of Einstein, who became an
eternal symbol of free-thinking.
Content
All points covered with some expansion.
Range
A good range of appropriate vocabulary and
structure.
Firstly, the discoveries of this man changed our lives more than we think. His
work led to constructing such devices as nuclear bomb or laser. Today we know
that all history of human mankind from 1940s is deformated by the threat of
nuclear war. A technological progress of mankind is based on abilities that laser
offer to us. This man influenced the way of our lives more than anybody else,
beyond the shadow of a doubt.
What is more, the ideas of Einstein are somehow even more powerful than
their application in our life. The three papers on photoelectric effect he
published in 1920s shaped science in every aspect. E-mc2 has become the
symbol of a modern science and despite the fact that only few people are able
to understand to it, we have it all of us in our minds. I think that the level of
our understanding of phenomenons and questions as a speed of light, how the
time works, what is space, what are black holes about, and so on, still havent
reached the level of Einsteins mind.
Accuracy
Ambitious attempt at task with some errors,
particularly with word choice (e.g.
delightness, deformated, refused), which,
however, do not impede communication.
Target reader
Achieves the desired effect.
Marks awarded
Band 3.
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Test 1 Question 4 (sample script)
Range
and explanation.
Target reader
Formal to unmarked.
application.
Candidate D
Examiner comments
Dear Mr S. Martin,
Content
Some attempt at task but with notable
Besides lodging we offer three meals per day and he would be more than
wellcome to any family outings and activities.
Satisfactory.
We are making this application because we would like to experience living with
someone coming from another culture and also because my boys are going to
leave soon to France as exchange students and I would like to know what
would be the best option for us as parents, to send them to college
accomodation or to families like us.
Range
Satisfactory for the task.
Accuracy
Appropriacy of register and format
Target reader
Marks awarded
Band 2.
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Test 1 Question 5a (sample script)
Range
Language of description,
review must:
Target reader
Would be informed.
Candidate E
Examiner comments
Pelican Brief is very exciting story. It is writen by John Grisham, who wrote
lot of thrillers. The book begins when two judges are murdered. Darby Shaw is
heroine of book and she tries to find reasons of the murders. She believes that
oil tycoon Victor Mattiese guilty, because he want to get oil on land where live
special pelicans. He has to make legal process for permission to work on that
land. Two murdered judges protected the environment. Darby understands
that Mattiese, who made business before with President of USA thinks
President can now make new judges who will let him to use land. Darby tells
to her boyfriend her idea that tycoon is corrupt and he tells other person.
Boyfriend and that other also murdered. Darby knows she correct. Journalist,
Gray Grantham, helps to Darby to prove she is right. The bad guys try to kill
Darby and Gray. Of course, all well that ends well. Darby is not murdered and
falls in love again.
Content
I liked very much this book and recomend to read it to other readers on your
website. Is very good film too but book is better, from my point of view. I bit
my nails when I read the book because it so exciting and thrilling.
Range
Attempt to use a range of vocabulary
(e.g. I bit my nails). However, little evidence
of successful use of a range of structure.
Accuracy
Lack of control of basic structure.
(e.g. Boyfriend and that other also
murdered.).
Target reader
Very negative effect.
Marks awarded
Band 1.
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Test 1 Question 5b (sample script)
Range
essay must:
Target reader
Appropriacy of register and
format
Would be informed.
Candidate F
Examiner comments
There are many interesting characters in Lucky Jim but as for me the most of
these is the protagonist Jim Dixon.
Content
Jim is a young professor at university in England just after the WW2. He says
that he became it because he doesnt know what to do in his life and is not at
all happy to work there. He doesnt like teaching and he doesnt like his boss
the professor Welch. Instead he imagines to work for a rich man to help him
not to be bored and this happens in the end of the story. In fact Jim doesnt
like a lot of the other personages in the book and the story is mainly about
his life in battle with them.
Range
Another reason Jim is the most interesting is that funny things happen to
him, especially when he had drunk. For example at Welchs house he runs
away from singing and goes to the pub. When he returns he by accident burns
down his bed. Also he drinks to give him courage before his speech and finishes
by mocking the university stuff.
Though Jim is not always a good man I find him interesting and am very
happy when in the end of the story he gets a good job and Christine at the
same time.
Marks awarded
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Accuracy
Appropriacy of register and format
Consistent and appropriate.
Target reader
Would be informed.
Band 3.
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Test 2 Question 1 (sample script)
Range
Language of description,
proposal must:
headings.
Target reader
Would be informed.
consistent.
Candidate G
Examiner comments
The aim of this proposal is to suggest a suitable venue for the weekend trip
the social committee is organising.
Content
All points addressed, though last paragraph
needs more expansion.
The people taking part of this weekend activity attend college, therefore the
activities involved should be proper.
One of the first suggestions given was mainly about phisical exercise. It would
be a great opportunity for them to keep fit and relax doing a sport. Second,
the students expressed their wish for quiet and peace, are also concerned
about the food they will receive and also about going shopping for presents.
The last comment was related to entertainment, either a film or a concert.
Regarding the students opinions and wishes for the trip but also taking into
consideration the two choices of locations, I recommend that the Briar Park
Hotel. Although Lakeside Activity Centre offers a peaceful setting in woodland
and opportunities for walking, canoeing and sailing, Briar Park Hotel best
meets all the demandings. It has beautiful grounds outside Leightonbury, a
swimming pool and also tennis courts for sports. The free bus to and from city
centre is perfect for going shopping and the international menu has good food.
range of structure.
Range
Reasonable range of vocabulary but good
Accuracy
Several non-intrusive errors.
Target reader
Would be informed.
As a conclusion, I believe that Briar Park Hotel is a good option which the
social committee should choose for the weekend trip
Marks awarded
Band 3.
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Test 2 Question 2 (sample script)
Range
article must:
suitable linking.
Film-related vocabulary.
Target reader
Would be informed and consider
publishing the article.
Candidate H
Examiner comments
Content
Everybody knows about these names. You dont? Then ask a teenager and you
will quickly get the answer. They are all titles of famous science fiction films or
series.
Range
Good range of vocabulary and structure.
Accuracy
Generally accurate with occasional slips
(e.g. impossible to happen, reluctant to
saying) where more complex language
attempted.
Target reader
Would be informed and interested.
Marks awarded
Band 4.
And that is why this kind of movies is so popular among young people. Their
imagination is generally much bigger than the imagination of older people. They
are often less reluctant to saying this is impossible, it cant happen,
compared with adults whose rational mind is an obstacle to enjoying this
type of movies.
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Test 2 Question 3 (sample script)
Range
contribution must:
paragraphing.
speculation.
lifestyles.
Target reader
Would be informed.
Candidate I
Examiner comments
Content
If you come to Spain, you will discover so many interesting things about
different topics: music, sport, dance, food, holidays in the beach ....
You will realize all these experiences just by the mere fact of living during ten
days in July in Pamplona. We have a lot of Hotels, Residences, Hostels ....
which you can book for the summer from now. You can make your reservations
in www.spainhotel.es.
Range
The 7th of July is the typical day of Pamplona: Sanfermin, and you can see the
bulls running in the streets. There are so many events programmed around
that day: the Pablo Sarasates Orchestra plays a very emotive performance
which consists on Spanish Composers, there is a football match between Real
Madrid and Barcelona every year, the Government of Navarra organises a
festival where dancers from every cities of Spain are invited to dance with the
regional music of each city, restaurants have their best cookers and they
prepare delicious typical menus for people from other countries.
Limited.
You can learn costumes from all different places of Spain if you come to
Pamplona in July!
It is possible also to rent a car and to go to San Sebastian just for a day. It
is wonderful! You will be able to swim in the sea while seeing the snow in the
Pyrinees Mountains.
Band 2.
Accuracy
A number of errors, some of which impede.
Target reader
Marks awarded
These ways of life in Pamplona are very important because it is known in all
the World. People from America, Europe, Asia .... everywhere use to come, and
Pamplona becomes the centre point in the news.
Dont forget to be dressed in white and red colours.
You will enjoy yourself so much at the same time as you will learn our
costumes, history, etc ....
(For further information www.navarrasummer.com)
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Test 2 Question 4 (sample script)
Range
report must:
recommendation.
advantage.
Target reader
describe problems
suggest improvements.
Formal or unmarked.
Would be informed.
Candidate J
Examiner comments
Content
The aim of this report is to evaluate the facilities and services of Oslo Airport,
Gardemoen.
Oslo Airport Gardemoen was first open in 1996 and was and still are the main
airport of Norway. it is located about half an hour north of the capital and can
easily be reached by the airport-train from the city centre. You will find a large
number of different aircraft-companies, which can take you to any parts of the
world.
The silent, clean airport:
In addition to many other airports Gardemoen is known as an silent airport.
The idea is not to make the travellers stressed, so you will therefore never
hear a voice speaking over the speaking system. However, information can
easily be found on the information screens.
Range
Sufficient range of language
(e.g. information can easily be found on
the information screens.).
Accuracy
Some basic but non-impeding errors
(e.g. Oslo airport was first open and still
are the main airport , an silent airport.).
The airport is also clean at any time of the day, because of the large number of
cleaners who look after the buildings.
Target reader
Marks awarded
Band 3.
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Test 2 Question 5a (sample script)
Range
essay must:
explanation.
Target reader
Would be informed.
Candidate K
Examiner comments
The main character in The Pelican Brief is Darby Shaw. At the beginning of the
novel she is studying law and having a relation with Thomas Callahan, one of
her professors. Together they become interested in the suspicious deaths of
two Supreme Court judges. Darby writes a report about it and this document
leads to Callahans violent death. Darby knows she is in great danger but this
does not prevent her to continue the investigation.
Content
As this brief description suggests, Darby is a very brave person. She was very
lucky that she did not die with Callahan. She knows that her actions are
making dangerous men become angry, she tries to hide from them but she
does not stop her investigation. She is afraid but she still wants to find the
truth.
Range
Darby also possesses many other strengths. She is a very intelligent person,
for example she is able to work out the connection between the two judges.
In addition, she has very deep principles. She realises that very important
people are involved in the situation but she is still determined to make the
truth public. She knows that the environement is in threat and this is very
important for her.
So, I hope I showed that Darby has many strengths. The aspect of her
personality that I most admire is her braveness. However this does not mean
that she is not afraid. Instead, it means that she acts with courage despite
her fear.
Accuracy
The language is generally very accurate. The
threat and environement) do not in any way
impede the readers understanding.
Target reader
character and what the writer admires about
her.
Marks awarded
Band 5.
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Test 2 Question 5b (sample script)
Range
review must:
and opinion.
Target reader
Would be informed.
Candidate L
Examiner comments
Lucky Jim is the story of a university professor. Lucky Jim is Jim Dixon. He
teaches history and he doesnt like very much his job. He doesnt like the
another teachers, especially the chief professor, and even he doesnt like very
much his girlfriend Margaret. Sometimes she is his girlfriend and sometimes
she isnt. She teaches also history in the university. He particularly not like
Bertrand the chief professors son and he try to steal his girlfriend. He does a
lot of stupid and embarasing things and he has often drank very much. When
he stays at the professors house one weekend he smokes in bed and makes
fire. He burns his bed. Then he has to make a very important lecture called
Merrie England and he nervous about it so he becomes too drunk. He looses
his job. Then he also gets another job in London and the girlfriend of the son of
the chief professor. One day they see that same professor and his wife and
Bertrand in London and they can just laugh at them.
Content
This story is quiet funny. The people are all too stupid and not one is nice or
kind but the book make me laugh. It make a good film. I certainly recommend
the story to the other students.
Range
The candidate displays a slightly narrow
range of language here.
Accuracy
There are a number of errors in the writing
(e.g. the another, word order in he doesnt
like very much his job, looses rather than
loses, quiet instead of quite and so on).
Although some errors are quite basic for the
level (try instead of tries, for example), they
do not prevent the reader from understanding
the writers intention.
Target reader
Would be informed about the plot of the play
but would not be informed about the reason
for the title.
Marks awarded
Band 2.
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