The House On Mango Street Analysis: Franklin 1
The House On Mango Street Analysis: Franklin 1
The House On Mango Street Analysis: Franklin 1
Rachel Franklin
Shaffer
English
8 October 2016
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says, I have inherited her name, but I dont want to inherit her place by the window. (11). This
metaphor means that although Esperanza is a woman, she does not want to end up in an unhappy
marriage like her grandmother was forced into. Her grandmothers name was also Esperanza,
and though Esperanza has the same name as her, she does not want to have the same fate. The
metaphor Esperanza uses with inheriting her grandmothers place by the window is used to
symbolise the freedom Esperanzas grandmother craved but could never get. This is important
because Esperanza already has an idea of the future she wants to live and knows what she wants
and does not want. She does not want to end up like her grandmother.
Esperanza wants to change her name to fit her true self and personality. Near the
beginning of the story, Esperanza says, I would like to baptize myself under a new name, a
name more like the real me, the one nobody sees. (11). This quote means that Esperanza knows
her true self enough to know that the name she currently has does not display who she really is
and she wants to change it so people know what kind of person she is. She also uses the word
baptize to show that she wants to start anew with a name that reveals who she truly is. This
shows that already Esperanza wants to change a part of herself so that it would say more about
the real her and it matters because she does not want people to misunderstand her and is willing
to actually change parts of herself to achieve this.
In The House on Mango Street, Esperanza Cordero refuses to believe that she belongs on
Mango street and tries to find and make her true self visible to the world. She knows she does not
belongs on Mango Street and, despite living there for a year, refuses to believe it is her home.
She does not want to become a sad housewife like her grandmother, who Esperanza shares her
name with, and instead wants to experience happiness and freedom while carving her own path
throughout the remainder of her life. Esperanza wants people to know the real her and is willing
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to change details such as her name to achieve this goal. Unfortunately, Esperanza also believes
she does not have a home to turn to and is ashamed of the house on Mango street. Other people
could be facing the same struggle to find their identity around the world. They could be dealing
with it in different ways other than how Esperanza dealt with it, but the book can serve as a guide
for people who dont know what to do in this crisis. People who are in denial and choose not to
believe that their home is really their home can also read the book and realize that they do have a
home to turn to.
Hook
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M.U.G.: 10/10
Rubric rating submitted on: 10/10/2016, 5:24:27 PM by ashley.shaffer@salinasuhsd.org
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Hook
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M.U.G.: 10/10