Parallelism
Parallelism
Parallelism
Problem
Parallelism, or parallel construction, means the use of the same pattern of words for two
or more ideas that have the same level of importance. When a sentence or passage
lacks parallel construction, it is likely to seem disorganized. The reader may have to
reread it to grasp the meaning or may misunderstand the relationship among ideas.
Solutions
Not parallel: The position required experience, friendly, and get up early.
Parallel (all adjectives): They wanted someone who was experienced, friendly,
and willing to get up early.
Parallel (all verbs): They wanted someone who had experience, was friendly,
and liked to get up early.
Not parallel: Good health requires eating right and exercise regularly.
Not parallel: Three reasons were given for the concerts cancellation: the lead
singer was sick, low ticket sales, and because the drummer had left the band.
Parallel Sentences: Three reasons were given for the concerts cancellation: the
lead singer was sick, ticket sales were low, and the drummer had left the
band.
Not parallel: The county explained when the cleanup would begin and it would
be funded by a referendum.
Parallel Clauses: The county explained when the cleanup would begin and
how it would be funded.
Parallel Clauses: The county explained that the cleanup would begin in June
and that it would be funded by a referendum.
As you work on the overall style or flow of your writing, CONSIDER USING
PARALLELISM TO STRENGTHEN THE RELATIONSHIP AMONG SENTENCES.
Anson, Chris M., and Robert A. Schwegler. The Longman Handbook for Writers and Readers. New York:
Longman, 2000. 387398.
Hacker, Diana. A Writers Reference. 5th ed. Boston/New York: Bedford/St. Martins, 2003. 8184.