Analysing Sentence Structure and Function-Part One
Analysing Sentence Structure and Function-Part One
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Abstract
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ing ideas in an order of gradual rise in importance co-determines word order in
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tain phonological and morphological features of English, was accompanied by
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paper tests this reduction by an analysis of written Old English and Modern
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(1) In the middle of the night the villagers heard a fearsome cry.
(2) A fearsome cry could be heard in the middle of the night.
Mathesius (1975: 15363), Firbas (1992: 117140) and Vachek (1994: 3240)
identify principles determining word order in Indo-European languages. The most
important are the linearity principle (ordering elements in accordance with linear
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with a grammaticalized word-order pattern).1 The linearity principle is stronger
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order, in which the linearity principle is subordinate to the grammatical principle.
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English sentences observe the grammatical principle without necessarily violat-
ing the linearity principle.
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of information structure of a sentence. According to the Brno theory of function-
al sentence perspective created by Firbas, the interpretation of the information
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spoken language prosodic criteria (cf. e.g. Firbas 1989 and 1992; Dukov 1985
and 2002; Svoboda 1981 and 1989; and Chamonikolasov 2005 and 2007). Dif-
ferent degrees of communicative prominence (dynamism) carried by communi-
cative units (sentence elements) correspond to different FSP functions. A simpli-
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the most dynamic, i.e. rhematic elements is presented below:
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with a rhematic element in penultimate position followed by a thematic element
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The sentences above all observe the leading grammatical principle. With the ex-
ception of sentence (3), they also observe the linearity principle: they start with
thematic context-dependent or easily accessible elements carrying low degrees of
communicative dynamism and end with context-independent rhematic elements.
When occurring in the most natural context, sentence (3) is interpreted as a
sentence presenting the rhematic phenomenon the sunRQWKHVFHQH7KHVXEMHFW
carries the highest degree of communicative dynamism and the highest degree of
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The syntactic structure of present-day English outlined above results from a sub-
stantial transformation of the syntactic structure of Old English and Middle Eng-
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order, in Modern English as illustrated above word order variation is very
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linguistic and sociolinguistic changes in the history of the English language. The
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tion accompanied by the loss of morphological signals indicating semantic rela-
tions between syntactic elements of a sentence, e.g. the relation between the agent
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the principle of end-weight, the integration and grammaticalization of language
units expressing afterthought, and language acquisition in contact areas (cf. e.g.
Seoane 2006 and Jucker 1995).
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logical shift of English from a predominantly synthetic to a predominantly ana-
lytical language. The wide range of grammatical changes involved in this process
WORD ORDER AND LINEAR MODIFICATION IN ENGLISH 21
have been described e.g. by Firbas (1957); Mathesius (1975); Breivik (1983) and
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(2001); Pintzuk and Taylor (2006); and Seoane (2006).
The syntactic change of the English language manifests itself in the word-order
patterns applied at different stages of the development of the language. Numerous
studies (e.g. Breivik 1983: 358403) describe Old English as a V2 language, i.e.,
a language with the verb-second constraint similar syntactically to Modern Ger-
man and Dutch. The common feature of languages that have or have had the verb-
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there or the dummy it in English (cf. Haiman 1974; Breivik 1983: 358403 and
1991). During its historical development, English changed from a verb-second
language to a verb-medial language: in Modern English, the verb has a tendency
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not necessarily as the second element in a sentence. Even if the sentence starts
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Looking at the gradual syntactic change of English from a different angle, some
authors (cf. Pintzuk and Taylor 2006) describe it as a change from an OV to a VO
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5. Analysis
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English language will be tested by the analysis of the communicative loads of
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material analyzed includes selected extracts from the Anglo-Saxon Chronicle,4
and the &KURQLFOHRI%ULWDLQDQG,UHODQG (1992).5 The Modern English chronicle
is written in a contemporary language and style but it resembles ancient chroni-
cles in form: historical events are presented as if they happened recently. The
material consists of 100 Old English and 100 Modern English sentences.
Below are examples of the analysis of the syntactic and information structure
patterns of sentences selected from the two chronicles.6 The syntactic analysis
is based on conceptions presented in $&RPSUHKHQVLYH*UDPPDURIWKH(QJOLVK
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dynamism. Subordinate clauses are considered as a component of the main clause
functionally equivalent to simple (non-clausal) elements; clausal and non-clausal
22 JANA CHAMONIKOLASOV
Anglo-Saxon Chronicle:
(12) We || witon || oer igland her beeastan, r ge magon eardian gyf ge wylla.
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(13) 7 gyf hwa eow wistent, || we || eow || fultumia || t ge hit magon gegangan.
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(16) Patricius (Patrick), the missionary who converted many Irish to Christianity, || has died.
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(19) Opposite the mouth of the Rhine || is || a great island, divided down the middle by a wall.
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WORD ORDER AND LINEAR MODIFICATION IN ENGLISH 23
6. Results
The results of the analysis of the Old English and Modern English texts are pre-
sented in Tables 16 below. Tables 1 and 2 provide a survey of word-order patterns
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position is usually occupied by the verb, performing the transitional function.
S V O A C Total
ThPr 14 --- --- 11 --- 25
theme 85
DTh 6 --- 15 39 --- 60
TrPr+Tr transition --- 15 --- --- --- 15
RhPr rheme --- --- --- --- --- ---
Total 20 15 15 50 --- 100
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S+s V O A C Total
ThPr 20 --- --- --- --- 20
theme 74
DTh 29 --- --- 25 --- 54
TrPr+Tr transition --- 17 --- --- --- 17
RhPr rheme 9 --- --- --- --- 9
Total 58 17 --- 25 --- 100
S V O A C Total
ThPr --- --- --- --- --- ---
theme 7
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RhPr rheme 6 13 20 42 5 86
Total 8 20 21 47 5 100
S V O A C Total
ThPr --- --- 1 --- --- 1
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Total 8 7 22 47 16 100
Notes
4 Manuscript D, Cotton Tiberius B iv (copied from older manuscripts around 1050): Introduction
and entries for years 47, 6268, 716, and 755.
5 Entries for years 480, 490, 500, 540, 550, and 563.
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elements Firbas (1992) distinguishes the following units: theme proper, theme proper oriented
theme, diatheme oriented theme, and diatheme. In this paper, the abbreviation ThPr denotes
themes proper and theme proper oriented themes; DTh denotes diathemes and diatheme
oriented themes.
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factors have not been dealt with. However, it should be noted that of the 30 occurrences of
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to different categorization of sentence types, however, a precise comparison of the data is not
possible.
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&KURQLFOHRI%ULWDLQDQG,UHODQG (1992). Heald, Henrietta (ed.) JL International Publishing.
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28 JANA CHAMONIKOLASOV
JANA CHAMONIKOLASOV is an associate professor in the Department of English and American Stud-
ies at the Faculty of Arts, Masaryk University in Brno, Czech Republic, where she teaches classes
in functional syntax and the history of the English language. She has published a monograph ,Q-
tonation in English and Czech dialoguesDQGSDSHUVLQYDULRXVOLQJXLVWLFMRXUQDOV,QKHUUHVHDUFK
she focuses on the interpretation of spoken language from the viewpoint of the theory of functional
sentence perspective and intonation.
Address: doc. PhDr. Jana Chamonikolasov, Ph.D., Department of English and American Stud-
ies, Faculty of Arts, Masaryk University, Arna Novka 1, 602 00 Brno, Czech Republic. [email:
chamonik@phil.muni.cz]
Brno Studies in English
Volume 35, No. 2, 2009
ISSN 0524-6881
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Abstract
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1. Introduction
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ple of academic prose (Morris), see Sources. They are attached in the Appendix.1
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representative grammars, in pursuit of uncovering some less investigated, poten-
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samples and the number of excerpts. Moreover, authors styles vary, especially
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ter of the respective text sort, they can be afforded some stylistic relevance.
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of academic prose (254 instances). All noun phrases, i.e. both with and without
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preposition + noun + preposition (e.g. RQEHKDOIRI, IRUWKHVDNHRI, etc.) and nouns
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1985: 326). Accordingly, the concept of determiner is here limited to the articles
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The material includes some noun phrases with non-substantival heads, mostly
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proforms. These instances, generally regarded as noun phrases2, were registered
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of the type of NP here studied. Containing neither a determiner, nor a noun in their
structure, they were left out of account, i.e. they are not included in the group of
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was not followed because in the examined samples the structure is marginal.3 Noun
phrases with non-substantival heads are illustrated in (1).
(2) There is a label [1] on a cage [2] at a certain zoo [2b] (Morris)
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Tables 1 and 2.
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take into account the proportion of the two groups of nouns subsumed under non-
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noun phrases in academic prose are almost exclusively accounted for by NPs with
determiners, there being only one proper noun (a geographical name, for that matter,
cf. $IULFD0RUULV>@LQFWLRQWKHSURSRUWLRQRISURSHUQDPHVLVPXFKKLJKHU
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here personal names referring to the characters of the story being told. If proper
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differs only by 1% (77 instances out of 254 [30.3%] in academic prose, and 81 out
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name). Thus the only distinction between the two texts sorts emerging from the
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less independent of the style of the author and the role of the narrator.
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sented in Tables 3 and 4.
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7\SHVRIPRGLFDWLRQ Abs. %
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The differences in the totals between Tables 1 and 2 on the one hand, and Tables 3
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an NP in its structure, cf. the examples listed under (3):
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b. the special food of the district [Morris 43, 43b]
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c. The great advantage we have when studying [Morris 64]
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the prepositional phrase, 36.4% and 31.3% in Ishiguro, and 45.3% and 27.1 in
Morris, respectively. These results are in agreement with the data in Biber et
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FDWHJRU\RISUHPRGLHUVLQDOOUHJLVWHUV3UHSRVLWLRQDOSKUDVHVDUH
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In the examined texts prepositional phrases were more frequently registered in
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relative frequencies of occurrence being presented only for the different forms of
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prose (5% and 18%, respectively) cannot be related to comparable data in Biber
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al. 1999: 589), but the difference between the two registers in this respect does
not appear to be so prominent.
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tion may be partly accounted for by the recurrence of collocates of the descriptive
DGMHFWLYHnew + IRUP(3 instances), species (3 instances), squirrel(s) (2 instances),
typeRQHLQVWDQFHLQUHIHUHQFHWRWKHK\SHUWKHPHRIWKHSDVVDJH7KHDGMHFWLYH
new has altogether 11 occurrences in the text, its use with other head nouns being
also connected with the novelty feature of the hypertheme, cf. (4) a. and b.
(4) a. new form [Morris 22, 28, 51], new species [46, 55, 102], new squirrel(s)
[35, 73], new type [45b]
b. new trend [23] , new medium [138]
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the realization form of some zoological terms, which includes, in addition to the
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a new hypertheme and is derivable from the text build-up, the two-word structure
of zoological terms is a noticeable terminological feature in general and may be
assigned stylistic relevance.
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of this type in the former being commensurate with the overall predominance of
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converted nouns, participles and the possessive case, cf. (6) a. and b.
(6) a. this old and hidebound family [Ishiguro 91], certain interesting rumours
[Ishiguro 107]; various other anatomical features [Morris 75d], their pro-
tective furry covering [Morris 117]
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high body temperature [Morris 121b], a thick hairy, insulating coat [Mor-
ris 127b].
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(8) a most curious some may say foolish procedure [Ishiguro 28]
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(9) a new species [Morris 46] would have evolved, separate and discrete,
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LQVWDQFHVDQGWZRRFFXUUHQFHVRIWKHDGMHFWLYHworth (cf. (20) c.), the texts under
study did not provide any examples.
3.1.3 Potential stylistic relevance was further sought in the semantics of the
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tinction between the two groups consisting in the delimiting or restricting func-
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prototypically denote such features as colour, size, weight, age, etc. Needless to
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cal. Hence the quantitative data are of the more-or-less kind rather than repre-
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this text, the only measure of comparison thus being the relative representation of
the different semantic groups within each sample.
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emotive or attitudinal evaluation, the evaluators in the academic sample are intel-
lectual. Compare examples (3) a., (6), (8) and (10) a. with (3) c. and (10) b.
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ladies [54c], an eccentric procedure [88], some bitter arguments [110]
b. a primate of a very odd kind [Morris 76c], of vital importance [126], sim-
ple observation [104ib], a slight advantage [29]
Notably, the evaluator simple occurs three times (Morris 104, 59). Evaluating
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to odd in (10) b., a clear example is drastic (this drastic step [136]).
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converted nouns and the possessive case (see Tables 3 and 4). The representation
of these forms in the two samples (converted noun and possessive case in Ishig-
uro 12 and 9 instances, respectively; in Morris 9 and 3 instances, respectively)
suggests that only the possessive case may have some stylistic relevance.
3.2.1 According to Biber et al. (1999: 589) converted nouns account for c. 30%
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pears to be rather atypical. Of the many semantic relations obtaining in the noun
+ noun sequences (cf. Biber et al. 1999: 590591), most premodifying nouns in
the academic sample express the genitive relation (RI-relation), cf. (11) a. Other
relations are illustrated in (11) b.
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body temperature [121ib], body processes [122b]
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[145])
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relevance remains to be ascertained on the basis of larger and more varied text
samples.
3.2.2 The possessive case appears to be more suggestive in this respect. Although
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3 and 4). This is expectedly connected with the nature of the head nouns in the
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the characters of the story, the remaining forms being comparable both in number
and semantic type with the head nouns of the genitives found in academic prose,
cf. (13) a. b. and c.
(13) a. our childrens marriage prospects [Ishiguro 39b], Akira Sugimuras house
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the Sugimuras high-handedness [148b]
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feature, thus contributing to this features stylistic relevance.
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study contain ing- and ed-participles and the gerund. Biber et al. (1999) offer
relative frequencies of occurrence only for each of these forms with respect to
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scribed as more common in academic prose than in any other register (Biber et al.
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3.3.1 In the texts under study the ing-participle has 12 occurrences in academic
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the group of the four least frequent forms. Out of the 12 ing-participles in Morris,
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convey evaluative, qualifying meaning, cf. (15):
(15) a commanding position on the hill [Ishiguro 5, 5b], the imposing air of
the house [10, 10b]
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[Morris 41ib]; a starting point, telling us [57i]
b. the steep path leading [2i] up from the little wooden bridge [Ishiguro 2i];
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a. and b.
(18) a. the exaggerated [Ishiguro 51i] respect my pupils always had for me
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lustrate the postmodifying function, the academic sample contains three premodi-
fying gerunds (in one case gerunds in coordination) which, in connection with
what has been observed about a QRWDEOHQXPEHURISUHPRGLI\LQJDGMHFWLYHVDQG
ing-participles in this sample, appears to be of stylistic relevance, cf. (19):
(19) their mating calls and displays [Morris 44ia, ib], heating and cooling
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being well on the way to becoming terms.
Gerunds in the postmodifying function were found after several prepositions,
of which only RI had more than one occurrence (three instances), and two gerunds
occurred as complements of worth, cf. (20) a. b. c.
(20) a. the importance of our having a house [Ishiguro 37i], the great physiologi-
cal advantage of being able [Morris 121i] to maintain a constant, high
body temperature
b. my surprise at receiving [Ishiguro 55i] such personal attention, a very
powerful reason for abolishing it [Morris 134i]
c. one worth having suffered [Ishiguro 143i] a few inconveniences for,
something worth pursuing [Morris 57non-sb head iii]
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apposition and relative clauses, are represented by a number of examples that al-
lows drawing some conclusions.
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c.
(22) a. the symptoms, the rash [Morris 52b] that gives a doctor a clue; the mark-
ings of its fur its black feet [Morris 50c]; another species, a strange form
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b. the tailless great apes such as the chimpanzee and the gorilla [Morris 83c,
d]; the burrowing mammals the naked mole rat, the aardvark and the
armadillo [Morris 144b, c, d]; the aquatic animals such as the whales, dol-
phins, porpoises, dugongs, manatees, and hippopotamuses [Morris 146b,
c, d, e, f, g]; those abnormally heave giants, the rhinos and the elephants
[Morris 153b, c]
c. we ourselves are not black-footed squirrels a fact [Morris 65b] which
forces us into an attitude of humility
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academic prose. An obvious factor that plays a role here is the inherent need of
academic texts to express meaning with maximal exactness. The other two types
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(22) b.
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prose in the texts under study, viz. 18 vs. 12 instances. This is in agreement with
the data in Biber et al. (1999: 606, Fig. 8.13) which show relative clauses to be
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demic prose ranking in between, the former taking the place next to news. Even
the distribution of the relativizers and the registered types of relative clauses cor-
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of the relative clauses (9, i.e. 50.0%) identify or characterize personal anteced-
ents. In all but one of these clauses the relative pronoun is who LQ WKH VXEMHFW
function. The only other relativizer with a personal antecedent is zero in the ob-
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(23) a. two haughty grey-haired ladies who turned out to be the daughters of
Akira Sugimura [Ishiguro 54bi]; the younger sister, who had barely spo-
ken [Ishiguro 73i]
b. the house should pass to one our father would have approved of [Ishig-
uro 68ibi]
Inanimate entities were antecedents of relative clauses mostly where the relativ-
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b. In one clause the relativizer performed adverbial function, cf. (24) c.
(24) a. the exaggerated respect my pupils always had for me [Ishiguro 51i]; the
house our father built [Ishiguro 68i]
b. In the days which followed [Ishiguro 102i]; things that will be to our ad-
vantage [Ishiguro 128i]
c. such a contest, in which ones moral conduct and achievement are brought
as witnesses [Ishiguro 137i]
In the sample of academic prose the difference in the syntactic function of the
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relativizer, when. Compare (25) a., b. and c.
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(25) a. i. Even for the zoologist, who is used to calling an animal an animal
[Morris 68i]
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gation [Morris 65icii]
iii. abnormally heavy giants which have heating and cooling problems
[Morris 153i]; other species that appear to be closely related [Morris 74i]
b. all we can be certain about [Morris 49i]; The great advantage we have
when studying such animals [Morris 64i]
c. the moment would eventually arrive when it would be advantageous for
them to become isolated [Morris 37i]
As regards the realization form of the relativizer, the two samples are basically
FRPSDUDEOH,QERWKWKHREMHFWUHODWLYL]HULVLQYDULDEO\]HURFIDDQGE
ZKLOHWKHVXEMHFWIXQFWLRQLVLPSOHPHQWHGE\who (referring to a personal antecedent,
cf. (23a. and (25) a. i.), and which and that (in reference to non-personal inanimate
and animate antecedents, cf. (24) b. and (25) a. ii and a. iii). Whether that or which
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there being two examples in all. In the academic sample that was found to be more
FRPPRQYHYVWKUHHLQVWDQFHVRIwhich). This differs from the data in Biber et
al. (1999: 611), where which is characterized as the most frequent relativizer in all
registers of academic prose. Looking for potential factors motivating the choice
between the two relativizers in the academic sample, a point that presents itself is
the nature of non-personal antecedents, viz. animate vs. inanimate. However, the
registered examples fail to suggest any tendency in this respect insofar as both
that and which are used to refer to either antecedent type.
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ference between the two samples, apart from the prominent prevalence of the
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mostly personal, viz. the individual characters of the story, in academic prose
there is only one instance of this kind, illustrated in (25) a. i. Notably, even in this
instance the antecedent differs in having general reference. In the academic sam-
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instances), as in (25) a. ii., and non-personal animate (2 instances, cf. (25) a. iii).
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structure of the noun phrase in (25) c. in that the postmodifying relative when-
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apposition, cf. (9).
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the adverb, each represented by three examples, are mentioned for the sake of
completeness.
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prose, which is suggestive of formal text sorts, and on the phraseological nature
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tion, cf. coordination in the head noun in (27) a. and in different kinds of post-
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(27) a. their mating calls and displays [Morris 44a, b]; overheating and damage
[Morris 131, 131b] to the skin;
b. other living species already known and described [Morris 15i]; every as-
pect of its behaviour and structure [Morris 61b, c]; species of monkeys
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(28) a. ones moral conduct and achievement [Ishiguro 137ib, ic]; the state of the
house and alterations [Ishiguro 159b, c]
b. on grounds purely of good character and achievement [Ishiguro 66, 66b];
a closer investigation of my background and character [Ishiguro 86b, c]
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most examples in both texts display two subordination levels in different combi-
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sive dependence, cf. (29).
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(30) a. the symptoms, the rash that gives a doctor a clue (apposition + relative
clause) [Morris 52bi]
b. the steep path leading up from the little wooden bridge still referred to
around here as the Bridge of Hesitation [Ishiguro 2, 2i, 2ii] (ing- and
ed-participle)
c. a visit [Ishiguro 54] one afternoon [54b] from two haughty, grey-haired
ladies [54c] who [/R clause/ i] turned out to be the daughters (preposi-
tional phrase + relative clause)
3RVWPRGLFDWLRQLQQRXQSKUDVHVDVFRQVWLWXHQWVRIQRQQLWHFODXVHVLQYROYHVDQ
additional dependency level, cf. (31).
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(32) a. a fact which [Morris 65bi] forces us into an attitude [65ic] of humility
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tion by prepositional phrase);
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in successive dependence, followed by a postmodifying ing-participle, the
whole structure occurring in apposition);
c. WKHQHFHGDUJDWHZD\ [21], the large area [/Co-Ord/ 21b] bound [/-ed/
i] by the garden wall>EL@the roof [/Co-Ord/ 21c] with its elegant
tiles>F@ and its stylishly carved [/-ed/ i] ridgepole>&R2UGF@
pointing out [/-ing/ ii] over the view >LLG@ FRRUGLQDWLRQ RI KHDG
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sitional phrases)
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creases across registers with conversation at one extreme and academic prose at
the other. Of the other registers the one closest to academic prose is news. The
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samples does not essentially differ but rather shows a fairly comparable degree of
complexity. The differences that have been found consist in a greater representa-
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combination of multiple coordination and subordination in the academic sample,
especially in the case of apposition. The similarity between the two text sorts
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shown in addition to the adduced features, even by one instance of discontinuous
structure (cf. (30) c.)
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In the academic sample this category is marginal. On the other hand the higher
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partly connected with the structure of technical terms, which are frequently two-
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designating a subcategory of the concept denoted by the head noun.
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function.
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the texts were further noted in the case of the possessive case and apposition.
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the case of relative clauses. The syntactic functions of the relativizers differed
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differences, either quantitative or qualitative, were noted in the two texts. This
is ascribable to the formal, rather than informal tenor of the narrative, and may
be classed as a feature of the authors style. Similarly, the high representation
of apposition and the particular types in the academic sample may be due to the
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points that have been made, notably the role of proper names, the distribution
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general stylistic relevance.
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a way of paying her a modest but heart-felt tribute.
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noun.
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Appendix
Text Ishiguro
If on a sunny day [1] you climb the steep path [2] leading up [/-ing/ i] from the little wooden
bridge [2ib] still referred to [/-ed/ ii] around here as the Bridge [2iic] of Hesitation>LLF@\RXZLOO
not have to walk far before the roof [3] of my house [3b] becomes visible between the tops [4] of
two gingko trees [4b]. Even if it did not occupy such a commanding [/i/-ing] position [5] on the hill
[5b], the house [6] would still stand out from all others [non-sb head] nearby [6b], so that as you
come up the path>@\RXPD\QG\RXUVHOIZRQGHULQJwhat sort [8] of wealthy man [8b] owns it.
But then I am not, nor have I ever been, a wealthy man [9]. The imposing [-ing/ i] air [10] of the
house [10b] will be accounted for, perhaps, if I inform you that it was built by my predecessor [11],
and that he was none other than Akira Sugimura [12]. Of course, you may be new to this city [13],
in which case [14] the name [15] of Akira Sugimura [15b] may not be familiar to you. But mention
it to anyone [non-sb head] who [/R clause/ i] lived here before the war [16i] and you will learn that
for thirty years or so [17], Sugimura [18] was unquestionably amongst the citys [19b] most re-
VSHFWHGDQGLQXHQWLDOPHQ [19]. If I tell you this, and when arriving at the top [20] of the hill [20b]
you stand and look at WKHQHFHGDUJDWHZD\ [21], the large area [/Co-Ord/ 21b] bound [/-ed/ i] by
the garden wall>EL@the roof [/Co-Ord/ 21c] with its elegant tiles>F@ and its stylishly carved
[/-ed/ i] ridgepole>&R2UGF@pointing out [/-ing/ ii] over the view>LLG@\RXPD\ZHOO
wonder how I came to acquire such a property [22], being as I claim a man [23] of only moderate
means [23b]. The truth [24] is, I bought the house [25] for a nominal sum [26] - DJXUH [26b] prob-
ably not even half the propertys >E@true value>E@at that time [27]. This was made pos-
sible owing to a most curious some may say foolish procedure [28] instigated [/i/ -ed] by the
Sugimura family [28ib] during the sale [29]. It is now already a thing [30] RIVRPHIWHHQ\HDUV
[30b] ago. In those days [31], when my circumstances [32] seemed to improve with each month
[33], my wife>@KDGEHJXQWRSUHVVPHWRQGa new house [35]. With her usual foresight [36],
she had argued the importance [37] of our having [/gerund/ i] a house [37ib] in keeping [/gerund/
ii] with our status [37iic] not out of vanity [38], but for the sake of our childrens [39b] marriage
NOUN MODIFICATION IN FICTION AND ACADEMIC PROSE 47
prospects [39]. I saw the sense [40] in this, but since Setsuko [41], our eldest [41b], was still only
IRXUWHHQRUIWHHQ,GLGQRWJRDERXWthe matter [42] with any urgency [43]. Nevertheless, for a year
or so [44], whenever I heard of a suitable house [45] for sale [45b], I would remember to make
enquiries [46]. It was one [non-sb head] of my pupils [47b] who>5FODXVHL@UVWEURXJKWLWto my
attention [47ic] that Akira Sugimuras [48b] house [48], a year [48c] after his death>F@ZDVWR
be sold off. That I should buy such a house [49] seemed absurd, and I put the suggestion [50] down
to the exaggerated respect [51] [/R clause/ i] my pupils [51ib] always had for me. But I made en-
quiries [52] all the same, and gained an unexpected response [53]. I received a visit [54] one after-
noon [54b] from two haughty, grey-haired ladies [54c] who [/R clause/ i] turned out to be the
daughters [54id] of Akira Sugimura >LG@:KHQ , H[SUHVVHG P\ surprise [55] at receiving [/
gerund/ i] such personal attention [55ib] from a family [56] of such distinction [56b], the elder [57]
of the sisters [57b] told me coldly that they had not come simply out of courtesy [58]. Over the
previous months [59], a fair number [60] of enquiries [60b] had been received for their late fathers
>F@house [60c], but the family [61] had in the end [62] decided to refuse all but four [non-sb
head] of the applications [63b]. These four applicants [64] had been selected carefully by family
members [65] on grounds purely of good character [66] and achievement [Co-Ord 66b]. It is of the
UVWLPSRUWDQFH [67] to us, she went on, that the house [68] [/R clause/ i] our father [68ib] built
should pass to one [non-sb head] [/R clause/ 68ibi] he would have approved of and deemed worthy
of it. Of course, circumstances [69] oblige us to consider WKHQDQFLDODVSHFW [70], but this is strict-
ly secondary. We have therefore set a price [71]. At this point [72], the younger sister [73], who [/R
clause/ i] had barely spoken, presented me with an envelope [74], and they watched me sternly as I
opened it. Inside was a single sheet [75] of paper [75b], blank but for DJXUH [75c] written [/-ed/ i]
elegantly with an ink brush [75id]. I was about to express my astonishment [76] at the low price
[76b], but then saw from the faces [77] before me [77b] that further discussion [78] RIQDQFHV
[78b] would be considered distasteful. The elder sister [79] said simply: It will not be in the inter-
ests [80] of any [non-sb head] of you [80b] to try to outbid one another. We are not interested in
receiving anything [non-sb head] beyond the quoted [/ed/ i] price [81b]. What we mean to do from
here on is to conduct an auction [82] of prestige [82b]. They had come in person [83], she ex-
plained, to ask formally on behalf of the Sugimura family [84] that I submit myself - along, of
course, with the other three applicants [85] - to a closer investigation [86] of my background [86b]
and credentials [/Co-Ord/ 86c]. A suitable buyer [87] could thus be chosen. It was an eccentric
procedure [88], but I saw nothing [non-sb head] REMHFWLRQDEOH about it [89b]; it was, after all, much
the same as being involved in a marriage negotiation>@,QGHHG,IHOWVRPHZKDWDWWHUHGWREH
considered by this old and hidebound family [91] as a worthy candidate [92]. When I gave my
consent [93] to the investigation [93b], and expressed my gratitude [94] to them, the younger sister
[95] addressed me IRUWKHUVWWLPH [96], saying: Our father [97] was a cultured man [98], Mr Ono
[99]. He had much respect [100] for artists [100b]. Indeed, he knew of your work [101]. In the days
[102] which [/R clause/ i] followed, I made enquiries [103] of my own [103b], and discovered the
truth [104] of the younger sisters >E@words [104b]; Akira Sugimura [105] had indeed been
something [non-sb head] of an art enthusiast [106b] who [/R clause/ i] on numerous occasions
[106ic] had supported exhibitions [106id] with his money [106ie]. I also came across certain inter-
esting rumours [107]: DVLJQLFDQWVHFWLRQ [108] of the Sugimura family [108b], it seemed, had
been against selling the house [109] at all, and there had been some bitter arguments [110]. In the
end [111], QDQFLDOSUHVVXUHV [112] meant a sale [113] was inevitable, and the odd procedures [114]
around the transaction [114b] represented the compromise [115] reached [/-ed/ i] with those [115ib
non-sb head] who [/R clause/ ii] had not wished the house [115iic] to pass out of the family [115iid].
That there was something [non-sb head] high-handed about these arrangements [116b] there was no
denying; but for my part [117], I was prepared to sympathize with the sentiments [118] of a family
[118b] with such a distinguished history>E@My wife [119], however, did not take kindly to
the idea [120] of an investigation [120b]. Who do they think they are? she protested. We should
tell them we want nothing [non-sb head] further to do [/inf/ 121i] with them. But wheres the harm
[122]? I pointed out. We have nothing [non-sb head] [/R clause/ i 123] we wouldnt want them to
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discover. True, I dont have a wealthy background [124], but no doubt [125] the Sugimuras [126]
know that already, and they still think us worthy candidates [127]. Let them investigate, they can
RQO\QGthings [128] that [/R clause/ i] will be to our advantage [128ib]. And I made a point [129]
of adding [/gerund/ i]: In any case [130], theyre doing no more than they would if we were nego-
tiating a marriage [131] with them. Well have to get used to this sort [132] of thing [132b]. Besides,
there was surely much to admire in the idea [133] of an auction [133b] of prestige>E@DVthe
elder daughter [134] called it. One wonders why things [135] are not settled more often by such
means [136]. How so much more honourable is such a contest [137], in which [/R clause/ i] ones
>LE@moral conduct [137ib] and achievement [Co-Ord 137ic]] are brought as witnesses [137id]
rather than the size [137ie] of oneV>LI@ purse [137if]. I can still recall the deep satisfaction
[138] [/R clause/ i] I felt when I learnt the Sugimuras [139] - after the most thorough investigation
[140] - had deemed me the most worthy of the house [141] [/R clause/ i] they so prized. And cer-
tainly, the house [142] is one [non-sb head ] worth having suffered [/gerund/ 143i] a few inconven-
iences [143ib] for; despite its impressive and imposing [/-ing/ i] exterior [144], it is inside a place
[145] of soft, natural woods [145b] selected [/-ed/ i] for the beauty [145ib] of their grains>LE@
DQGDOO>QRQVEKHDG@RIXV>E@ZKROLYHGLQLW>5FODXVHL@FDPHWRQGLWPRVWFRQGXFLYHWR
relaxation [147] and calm [Co-Ord 147b]. For all that, the Sugimuras [148b] high-handedness
[148] was apparent everywhere during the transactions [149], some family members [150] making
no attempts [151] to hide [/inf/ i] their hostility [151ib] towards us >LE@DQGa less understand-
ing buyer [152] might well have taken offence [153] and abandoned the whole matter [154]. Even
in later years [155] I would sometimes encounter by chance [156] some member [157] of the fam-
ily [157b] who [/R clause/ i], instead of exchanging the usual kind [157b] of polite talk>EL@
would stand there in the street [158] interrogating me as to the state [159] of the house [159b] and
any alterations [Co-Ord 159c] I had made [/R clause/ i]. These days [160], I hardly ever hear of the
Sugimuras [161]. I did, though, receive a visit [162] shortly after the surrender [163] from the
younger [non-sb head b] of the two sistersE@who [/R clause/ i] had approached me at the time
>ELF@of the sale>ELF@The war years [164] had turned her into a thin, ailing old woman
[165].
Text Morris
THERE is a label [1] on a cage [2] at a certain zoo [2b] [/R clause/ i] that states simply, This
animal [3] is new to science [4]. Inside the cage [5] there sits a small squirrel [6]. It has black
feet [7] and it comes from Africa [8]. No black-footed squirrel [9] has ever been found in that
continent [10] before. Nothing is known about it. It has no name [11].
For the zoologist [12] it presents an immediate challenge [13]. What is it about its way [14]
of life [14b] that has made it unique? How does it differ from the three hundred and sixty-six
other living [/ing-participle/ i] species [15] of squirrels [15b] already known and described [Co-
Ord /ed-participle/ i]? Somehow, at some point [16] in the evolution [16b] of the squirrel family
>E@the ancestors [17] of this animal [17b] must have split off from the rest [18] and estab-
lished themselves as an independent breeding [/ing-participle/ i] population [19]. What was it in
the environment [20] that made possible their isolation [21] as a new form [22] of life [22b]? The
new trend [23] must have started out in a small way [24], with a group [25] of squirrels [25b] in
one area>E@EHFRPLQJ>ing-participle/ i] slightly changed and better adapted to the particular
conditions [25ic] there>DGYHUE@%XWat this stage [26] they would still be able to interbreed
with their relatives [27] nearby [/adverb/ i]. The new form [28] would be at a slight advantage
[29] in its special region [30], but it would be no more than a race [31] of the basic species [31b]
and could be swamped out, reabsorbed into the mainstream [32] at any point [33]. If, as time
[34] passed, the new squirrels [35] became more and more perfectly tuned-in to their particular
environment [36], the moment [37] would eventually arrive when [/R clause/ i] it would be ad-
NOUN MODIFICATION IN FICTION AND ACADEMIC PROSE 49
vantageous for them to become isolated from possible contamination [38] by their neighbours
[38b]. At this stage [39] their social and sexual behaviour [40] would undergo VSHFLDOPRGLFD-
tions [41], making [/ing-participle/ i] interbreeding [41ib] with other kinds [41ic] of squirrels
>LF@XQOLNHO\DQGHYHQWXDOO\LPSRVVLEOH$WUVWtheir anatomy [42] may have changed and
become better at coping with the special food [43] of the district [43b], but later their mating
[/gerund/ i] calls [44a] and displays [Co-Ord 44b] would also differ, ensuring that they attract
only mates [45] of the new type [45b]. At last, a new species [46] would have evolved, separate
and discrete, a unique form [46b] of life>E@a three hundred and sixty-seventh kind [46c] of
squirrel>F@
When we look DWRXUXQLGHQWLHGVTXLUUHO [47] in its zoo cage [47b], we can only guess about
these things [48]. All [non-sb head] [/R clause/ 49i] we can be certain about is that the mark-
ings [50] of its fur [50b] its black feet [50c] indicate that it is a new form [51]. But these are
only the symptoms [52], the rash [52b] that [/R clause/ i] gives a doctor [53] a clue [54] about
his patients>E@disease [54b]. To really understand this new species [55], we must use these
clues [56] only as a starting [/-ing participle/ i] point [57], telling [/-ing participle/ ii] us there
is something worth pursuing [non-sb head] [/gerund/ iii]. We might try to guess at the animals
[58b] history [58], but that would be presumptuous and dangerous. Instead we will start humbly
by giving it a simple and obvious label [59]: we will call it the African black-footed squirrel [60].
Now we must observe and record every aspect [61] of its behaviour [61b] and structure [Co-Ord
61c] and see how it differs from, or is similar to, other squirrels [62]. Then, little by little, we can
piece together its story [63].
The great advantage [64] we [/R clause i] have when studying such animals [64ib] is that we
ourselves are not black-footed squirrels [65] a fact [65b] which [/R clause i] forces us into an
attitude [65ic] of humility>LF@WKDW>5FODXVHLL@LVEHFRPLQJWRSURSHUVFLHQWLFLQYHVWLJD-
tion [65iid]. How different things [66] are, how depressingly different, when we attempt to study
the human animal [67]. Even for the zoologist [68], who [/R clause/ i] is used to calling an animal
[68ib] an animal>LF@LWLVGLIFXOWWRDYRLGthe arrogance [69] RIVXEMHFWLYHLQYROYHPHQW [69b].
We can try to overcome this to some extent [70] by deliberately and rather coyly approaching [/
gerund/ i] the human being [71i] as if he were another species [72], a strange form [72b] of life
>E@on the dissecting [/gerund/ i] table>EL@DZDLWLQJ>ing participle/ i] analysis [72ibi].
How can we begin?
As with the new squirrel [73], we can start by comparing him with other species [74] that [/R
clause/ i] appear to be most closely related. From his teeth [75], his hands [Co-Ord 75b], his eyes
[Co-Ord 75c] and various other anatomical features [Co-Ord 75d], he is obviously a primate [76]
of some sort [76b], but of a very odd kind [76c]. Just how odd becomes clear when we lay out in
a long row [77] the skins [78] of the one hundred and ninety-two living [/-ing participle/ i] spe-
cies [78b] of monkeys>E@DQGapes>&R2UGE@DQGWKHQWU\WRLQVHUWa human pelt [79] at
a suitable point [80] somewhere in this long series [81]. Wherever we put it, it looks out of place.
Eventually we are driven to position it right at one end [82] of the row [82b] of skins>E@QH[Wto
the hides [83] of the tailless great apes [83b] such as the chimpanzee [83c] and the gorilla [Co-Ord
83d]. Even here it is obtrusively different. The legs [84] are too long, the arms [85] are too short and
the feet [86] are rather strange. Clearly this species [87] of primate [87b] has developed a special
kind [88] of locomotion>E@ZKLFK>5FODXVHL@KDVPRGLHGLWVbasic form [88bic]. But there is
another characteristic [89] that [/R clause/ i] cries out for attention [89ib]: the skin [90] is virtually
naked. Except for conspicuous tufts [91] of hair>E@RQWKHKHDG>E@in the armpits [Co-Ord
E@DQGaround the genitals>&R2UGE@the skin surface [92] is completely exposed. When
compared with the other primate species [93], the contrast [94] is dramatic. True, some species
[95] of monkeys [95b] and apes [Co-Ord 95c] have small naked patches [96] of skin [96b] on their
rumps>E@their faces>&R2UGE@RUWKHLUFKHVWV>&R2UGE@EXWQRZKHUHamongst the
other one hundred and ninety-two species [98] is there anything [non-sb head] even approaching
[/-ing participle, i] the human condition [99i]. At this point [100] and without further investigation
>@LWLVMXVWLDEOHWRQDPHthis new species [102] the naked ape [103]. It is a simple, descrip-
50 LIBUE DUKOV
tive name [104] based [/-ed participle/ i] on a simple observation [104ib], and it makes no special
assumptions [105]. Perhaps it will help us to keep a sense [106] of proportion [106b] and maintain
RXUREMHFWLYLW\ [107].
Staring at this strange specimen [108] and puzzling over WKHVLJQLFDQFH [109] of its unique
features [109b], the zoologist [110] now has to start making comparisons [111]. Where else is
nudity [112] at a premium [113]? The other primates [114] are no help [115], so it means look-
LQJIDUWKHUDHOGA rapid survey [116] of the whole range [116b] of the living [/-ing participle/
i] mammals >E@ VRRQ SURYHV WKDW WKH\ DUH UHPDUNDEO\ DWWDFKHG to their protective, furry
covering [117], and that very few [non-sb head] of the 4,237 species [118b] in existence>E@
KDYHVHHQWWRDEDQGRQLW8QOLNHtheir reptilian ancestors [119], mammals [120] have acquired
the great physiological advantage [121] of being [/gerund/ i] able to maintain a constant, high
body temperature [121ib]. This keeps the delicate machinery [122] of the body processes [122b]
tuned in for top performance [123]. It is not a property>@WREH>LQQLWLYHL@HQGDQJHUHGRU
discarded lightly. The temperature-controlling devices [125] are of vital importance [126] and
the possession [127] of a thick, hairy, insulating [/-ing participle/ i] coat [127b] obviously plays
DPDMRUUROH [128] in preventing [/gerund i] heat loss [129]. In intense sunlight [130] it will also
prevent over-heating [131] and damage [Co-Ord 131b] to the skin>E@from direct exposure
[132] to the suns>E@rays [132b]. If the hair [133] has to go, then clearly there must be
a very powerful reason [134] for abolishing [/gerund/ i] it. With few exceptions [135] this drastic
step [136] has been taken only when mammals [137] have launched themselves into an entirely
new medium [138]. 7KH\LQJ [/-ing participle/ i] mammals [139], the bats [139b], have been
forced to denude their wings [140], but they have retained their furriness [141] elsewhere and can
hardly be counted as naked species [142]. The burrowing [-ing participle/ i] mammals [143] have
in a few cases [144] the naked mole rat [144b], the aardvark [Co-Ord 144c] and the armadillo
[Co-Ord 144d], for example reduced their hair covering [145]. The aquatic animals [146] such
as the whales [Co-Ord 146b], dolphins [Co-Ord 146c], porpoises [Co-Ord 146d], dugongs [Co-
Ord 146e], manatees [Co-Ord 146f] and hippopotamuses [Co-Ord 146g] have also gone naked
as part [147] of a general streamlining [147b]. But for all the more typical surface-dwelling
mammals [148], whether scampering about on the ground [149] or clambering around in the
vegetation [150], a dense hairy hide [151] is the basic rule [152]. Apart from those abnormally
heavy giants [153], the rhinos [153b] and the elephants [Co-Ord 153c] (which [/R clause/ i] have
heating and cooling [/gerund/ ii] problems>LG@RIWKHLURZQ>LG@the naked ape [154]
stands alone, [marked off by his nudity from all the thousands of hairy, shaggy or furry land-
dwelling mammalian species.]
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NOUN MODIFICATION IN FICTION AND ACADEMIC PROSE 51
LIBUE DUKOV is Professor Emerita of English Language at the Department of English Language
and ELT Methodology, Charles University, Prague. Her books include 0OXYQLFHVRXDVQpDQJOLWLQ\
QDSR]DGtHWLQ\ (A Grammar of Contemporary English against the background of Czech) and
two volumes of Studies in the English Language. She is the author of the translation of Vilm
Mathesius 2EVDKRYUR]ERUVRXDVQpDQJOLWLQ\QD]iNODGREHFQOLQJYLVWLFNpP (A Functional
$QDO\VLVRI3UHVHQW'D\(QJOLVKRQD*HQHUDO/LQJXLVWLF%DVLV), editor of the English translation
of Dictionnaire de lcole linguistique de Prague ('LFWLRQDU\RIWKH3UDJXH6FKRRORI/LQJXLVWLFV)
DQGFKLHIHGLWRURIWKHLQWHUQDWLRQDODFDGHPLFMRXUQDOLinguistica Pragensia. Her recent research
concentrates on the relations between syntax and information structure, with extension into text
organization.
Address: Prof. PhDr. Libue Dukov, Dr.Sc., Department of English Language and ELT Method-
ology, Faculty of Arts, Charles University, nm. Jana Palacha 2, 116 38 Prague 1, Czech Republic.
[e-mail: libuse.duskova@ff.cuni.cz]
Brno Studies in English
Volume 35, No. 2, 2009
ISSN 0524-6881
ALE KLGR
Abstract
It has become canonical when listing the factors signalling Functional Sentence
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context and (emphatic, contrasting, and focusing) intonation. The paper argues
for the inclusion of one more candidate for the status of a potential FSP indica-
tor typography or punctuation to cover cases where FSP-relevant intonation
is marked by typographic devices, such as italics, boldface, small capitals, etc.,
in written text. Acknowledgement of punctuation marking FSP-relevant prosody
in writing, however marginal and discretionary, as a potential contributory fac-
WRUWKHIWKHOHPHQWLQGHFRGLQJ)63ZRXOGEHPHWKRGRORJLFDOO\VRXQG
and consistent. It would also be a useful antidote to the widespread practice of
using self-supplied intonation in the FSP analysis of written communication,
which, strictly speaking, somewhat presumptuously amounts to confusing two
different modes of language and oversteps the boundary between the writer and
the reader of the text.
Key words
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emphasis. Cruse (2006: 181) goes on to add that the two main dimensions of
thematic meaning are topic vs comment and given vs new information.
4XLWHFOHDUO\WKHPDWLFPHDQLQJZLWKDQLQIRUPDWLRQVWUXFWXUHLQGLFDWLQJIXQF-
tion is not an inherent feature of linguistic units. It has to be generated each
time anew with every new text/context. It arises from speaker-hearer interaction
and is in principle calculable from the text. Such a description, of course, falls
straight into the realm of pragmatics and, although FSP theory came into being
long before and independently of the emergence of pragmatics, the investiga-
WLRQRILQIRUPDWLRQVWUXFWXUHLVQRZDGD\VVXEVXPHGXQGHUWKLVHOGRIVWXG\6R
for example, Horn and Wards (2004) 7KH+DQGERRNRI3UDJPDWLFV devotes two
chapters to FSP issues. Both of them mention Firbas (though not his compre-
hensive monograph), but only the second one, Gundel and Fretheims Topic and
)RFXVJLYHVGXHFUHGLWWRWKHH[WHQWRIUHVHDUFKLQWRWKLVHOGLQ&]HFKOLQJXLVWLFV
(175176): Work of the Czech linguist Mathesius in the 1920s (e.g. Mathesius
LQLWLDWHGDULFKDQGKLJKO\LQXHQWLDOWUDGLWLRQRIUHVHDUFKLQWKLVDUHDZLWK-
in the Prague School that continues to the present day (see Firbas 1966, Dane
1974, Sgall et al. 1973, Sgall et al. 1986, inter alia).
In the Brno approach to FSP the distribution of thematic meaning in the sen-
tence is viewed in terms of communicative dynamism (CD) conveyed by the
sentence elements with varying degrees of CD. The pragmatic functional load,
i.e. the degree of CD, carried by sentence elements is computed primarily from
WKUHH)63IDFWRUVWKHOLQHDUPRGLFDWLRQFRQWH[WDQGVHPDQWLFVWUXFWXUHRIWKH
sentence. (The semantic factor broadly speaking refers to Leechs other types of
meaning, conceptual and associative.) In the spoken language, the interplay of
these factors is extended by a fourth factor, intonation (prosody). To quote Firbas
(1992: 218), Intonation, which is absent from the inventory of the means of the
ZULWWHQODQJXDJHLQGHHGUHHFWVWKH&'GLVWULEXWLRQDVGHWHUPLQHGE\WKHLQWHU-
play of the non-prosodic FSP factors.
Thus, decoding FSP in a written sentence, according to Firbas (1992: 219),
goes by the signals provided by the (i) syntactic implementation of a given sen-
tence element and its relations to other elements, which activates its semantic
content and character, and/or its (ii) linear position, and/or (iii) the elements rela-
tion to the immediately relevant context. As regards intonation, Firbas explains
WKDW>LW@DVVHUWVLWVHOILQLWVVSHFLFFRQWULEXWRU\ZD\LILWHIIHFWVSURVRGLFLQWHQ-
VLFDWLRQQRQUHHYDOXDWLQJRUUHHYDOXDWLQJDQGWKHUHE\UDLVHVWKHGHJUHHRI&'
DOUHDG\DVVLJQHGWRWKHHOHPHQWE\WKHQRQSURVRGLFIDFWRUV+HQFHKHUHMHFWV
claims that CD can be equated with prosodic prominence (PP): As a participant
in the interplay of FSP factors, intonation cannot operate independently of the
other FSP factors. Firbas is said (Adam 2007: 35) to have likened it to a running
attitudinal commentary on the content of the utterance, capable of changing the
overall distribution of CD, even causing the theme to become the bearer of the
highest degree of CD.
The standard description of the role of intonation as an FSP feature, i.e. the
relation between the degrees of communicative dynamism and those of prosodic
THE FIFTH ELEMENT: A REMARK ON THE FSP FACTORS 55
non-prosodic factors, or whether there are instances, for example, where punctua-
tion (typographic prominence) coincides with the other FSP factors and produces
a typographically extra marked rheme.
Certainly the information provided in the standard accounts of English punc-
tuation is not very helpful in this respect, as a look at the two largest authoritative
JUDPPDUV DQG D VSULQNOLQJ RI RWKHUV VKRZV :KLOH$SSHQGL[ , LQ 4XLUN HW DO
(1985) is described as surveying a set of prosodic devices that help to commu-
nicate grammatical and other distinctions in spoken English, Appendix II is said
to examine the visual devices that perform a similar role for written English.
The question is to what extent prosodic marking in speech is matched by visual
marking in writing. Obviously, there are limits to what typography/punctuation
can do as well as limits determined by the prevailing conventions as to the use of
the existing punctuation marks. A section in Appendix I called Prosodic marking
compared with punctuation (1606) points out that conventional punctuation is in
many respects inadequate to deal with important aspects of prosody, although
we can indicate emphasis in written English (usually by means of italics in print
and underscoring in typescript or handwriting), we cannot distinguish emphases
of radically different sound and value as in You shouldnt give her any RZ-
er; and it indicates how prosodic notation can represent these differences (You
|shouldnt give her n1\RZHUV|). It also shows how prosodic marking helps
to identify focused items in cases like these:
The Battle of New Orleans was fought in January 1815, two weeks DIWHUthe
peace treaty had been signed.
According to the linguist Steven Pinker, Many prescriptive rules of gram-
mar are just plain dumb and should be deleted from the usage handbooks
[emphasis added].
Standard English usage requires insensitive rather than unsensitive.
Lemmings have, not two, but three kinds of sex chromosome.
7KHUVWWZRH[DPSOHVKHH[SODLQVLOOXVWUDWHHPSKDVLVDQGWKHODVWWZRLOOXV-
trate contrast. This is the standard way of representing emphasis or contrast
Describing boldface letters (A colon is never followed by a hyphen or a dash),
he says they are sometimes used to provide very strong emphasis, as an alterna-
tive to italics, and concludes by a note on small capitals, Very occasionally,
small capitals are used for emphasis, but it is usually preferable to use italics for
this, or even boldface.
The only quantitative study focusing on a punctuation mark and its uses (with
possible relevance for FSP) that I have come across so far is Douglass (2009)
conference paper Encoding Intonation. The Use of Italics and the Challenges
IRU7UDQVODWLRQ,QLWKHH[DPLQHVWKHGLVWULEXWLRQRILWDOLFVLQWZR(QJOLVKF-
tion texts (Henry Jamess What Maisie Knew, Frank OConnors The Complete
Stories, including the total of 278 000 tokens) and two Italians texts and ana-
lyzes the functions of this punctuation mark and the way it was dealt with in the
respective translations into Italian and English. He distinguishes between uses
58 ALE KLGR
vices available to signal emphasis and contrast also includes capitalization, font
size, wriggly underlining, quotation marks, coloured highlighting, and possibly
others.) Firbas (1954), in his article on English sentence punctuation, observes
that one of the differences between English and Czech is the fact that in the
English punctuation practice the emotive-volitional factor is far more prominent,
although even here it is subordinate to the grammatical factor.
To sum up, we started by pointing out the pragmatic nature of the FSP mean-
ing which is inferred from text by considering its linear arrangement, context and
semantic structure, and in the case of spoken language, by considering its (em-
phatic, contrasting, focusing) prosody. At the same time, it is taken for granted
that in writing intonation relevant for FSP may be, if partially, denoted by punc-
tuation (italics, etc.) or other typographic means. It was also pointed out that it
is common practice to use self-supplied intonation in the FSP analysis of written
communication, thus mixing up two different modes of language and blurring the
distinction between the producer and the recipient of the text. Yet, punctuation,
DIHDWXUHVSHFLFWRZULWLQJLVQHYHUPHQWLRQHGDVDSRWHQWLDOFRQWULEXWRU\IDF-
tor in decoding FSP at all. It is therefore argued, for the sake of methodological
consistence and completeness, that punctuation marking FSP-relevant prosody
in writing, however marginal and optional, should be listed among the four FSP
IDFWRUVDVWKHIWKHOHPHQWIURPZKLFK)63PD\EHLQIHUUHG
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ALE KLGR is Professor of English Linguistics at the Department of English Language and ELT
Methodology, Faculty of Arts, Charles University, Prague. He specializes in English lexicology and
lexicography. His publications include the monographs The Noun in Translation (1996) and Eng-
OLVK&RPSOH[3UHSRVLWLRQVRIWKH7\SHin spite of and Analogous Sequences (2002), translation of
Josef Vacheks 'LFWLRQDU\RIWKH3UDJXH6FKRRORI/LQJXLVWLFVZLWK/'XNRYi-HUPiN
M. Mal, and P. aldov), bilingual collocational dictionaries, e.g., Czech-English Combinatory
'LFWLRQDU\1RXQDQG9HUE (2005; with P. Key and N. Hronkov), and the Roget-style onomasio-
logical dictionary of Czech, 7H]DXUXVMD]\NDHVNpKR (2007).
Address: Prof. PhDr. Ale Klgr, CSc., Department of English Language and ELT Methodology,
Faculty of Arts, Charles University, nm. Jana Palacha 2, 116 38 Praha 1, Czech Republic. [email:
ales.klegr@ff.cuni.cz]