The Border Builder - Notes
The Border Builder - Notes
The Border Builder - Notes
Carol Rumens
Overview:
- Rumens explore the frustrations and hypocrisy of racism and xenophobia within his
poem through a trip through an immigration office.
- In the poem, a zealous immigration officer demands his customers to take a side in a
perceived good vs. evil fight and be defined by their blood, colour and nationality rather
than who they are.
Context:
- Rumens is a British poet who has won numerous awards over the last 40 years; her
poetry often tackles key issues that have arisen in modern European history.
- The poem was published in an anthology called “Best China Sky” in 1995, a few years
after the fall of Berlin Wall. It is noted that the collection was written while Rumens
was in Northern Ireland in the year before the ceasefire.
Content:
- Rumens begins by speaking of one wall coming down and then another going up. This
may refer to the Berlin Wall being torn down by David Hasselhoff in 1898. The new
wall going up may refer to the changing in focus of foreign policy at the beginning of
the 21st century where Muslims became the new face of fear thanks to the attack on the
Trade Towers and the wars in Afghanistan and Iraq.
- Rumens then touches on the idea that we are all judged on the basis of our background;
she, thereby, presents the common notion of xenophobia that a country needs barriers
to protect its bold and heritage, despite in reality, we are mongrels due history of
invasion and migration.
- Rumen places us in an immigration office of an officer who is blunt and merely seeks
to judge the customers by putting them into appropriate box so they can be judged. He
presents the traveller with the choice: are you with us or against use? As if the traveller
has no independence from his blood or nationality, and is in fact not an individual.
Structure:
- Single stanza composed in free verse: mirrors the utopia of a world without border and
division as advocated by Rumens.
- Repetition of “which one” “which side”: reflects on society and its controlling
influences that try to condition us to view the world as a case of us vs them and good
vs evil rather than the starting point of humanity amongst everyone on earth.
- Repetition of “O”: illustrates the frustration the attitude and division cause.