Assignment Feedback Example
Assignment Feedback Example
11 March 2019
Date Received 1st 11 March 2019
Submission Date submission
Date Received 2nd
Re-submission Date submission
Assessor Feedback:
P1: Examine the difference categories and dimensions of events using specific examples to illustrate the differences
a) Strengths of performance: When working with a set of data, you are beginning to learn how to organize the results.
a) Limitations of performance: You complete more than 50% but less than 75% of assignments and not yet ready or competent
enough to draw the right conclusions. You need to explain about: dimension of event; examples of dimension; differences
between categories and dimension of event.
b) Any improvements needed in future assessments: For next time, you should complete an assignment on time and to a high
standard.
P2: Using specific examples from different categories of events discuss the features and current trends influencing the
events sector
You not provided clear evaluation yet on specific examples from different categories of events discuss the
features and current trends influencing the event sector.
M1: Analyse current event trends to explain how events are adapting to stay innovative using specific examples
from different categories of events
You not provided clear evaluation yet on the analyse current trends to explain how events are adapting to stay
innovative using specific examples from different categories of events
D1: Critique the development of the event sector providing specific examples from a range of different
categories of events
You not provided clear evaluation yet on the developing of the event sector providing specific examples from a
range of different categories of events.
Grade: NOT PASS Assessor Signature: Date: 1 October 2019
Resubmission Feedback:
*Please note resubmission feedback is focussed only on the resubmitted work
* Please note that grade decisions are provisional. They are only confirmed once internal and external moderation has taken place
and grades decisions have been agreed at the assessment board.