Avy Critique Paper
Avy Critique Paper
Avy Critique Paper
G12 – SIMPLICITY
Equation of a Straight Line, Equation of a Circle is a story written by Mar Anthony Simon
Dela Cruz. From the title itself, one will be curious what is the story all about. The author of the
story was graduated from the University of the Philippines-Diliman where he finished Bachelor of
Arts in Arts Studies (Interdisciplinary), and Master of Arts in Filipino: Malikhaing Pagsulat. It is
about the two kinds of equation which represent the two kinds of life of people. I read this story
during our 21st-Century Literature from the Philippines and the World class. You can either relate
to the equation of a straight line or equation of a circle. You have to read the story for you to find
out.
The story is narrated at the first point of view. Butch, who is the main character took the
exam that day. He remembered how his mother will scold him for not doing what she told him to
do. But at least he enjoyed the end of exam day with his friends. But his exam does not go smoothly
like he expected. It happened that he was not able to answer the equation of the straight line which
he defined as plain and not colorful. Amazingly, he was able to answer the difficult equation which
is the equation of the circle that for him is a good shape. Circle is a kind of shape that you can see
as a whole. Like his life, he is wholeheartedly accepted by his friends as a gay especially his
mother. Butch is a smart, loud, direct to the point, talkative, and also, he is a gay. The story is not
a boring one although it is a long narrative since Butch narrated it well in a tone that many can
engaged easily. The connection of the two equations are also interesting. The story has also a good
timeline or series of events that made the story understandable by all. There has no unclear events
that will make the reader mislead while reading.
All in all, I thought that the book was really good. It is interesting since the author really
worked on giving the story a good series of events and made the characters lively and not boring
that made me invested in reading the text selection. The equation of the straight line and the
equation of the circle has a good connection to the story of the main character. It is recommendable
to other readers as it can give them the understanding about the people belonging the LGBT
community.