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IN THIS UNIT YOU WILL


LEARN HOW TO
• identify the main features of a line graph
• achieve a high score for Task Achievement
• describe and compare using adjectives
and adverbs.

I LEAD-IN I
Using the verb to grow and the adverb rapidly, complete the sentences to describe
the information in the graphs. Focus on the correct verb tense in each case, bearing
in mind the time phrases you are given and the dates in the graph.
1 Since five years ago, s:ales: have grown rnP-k!!Y- to 90,000.
2 Between to 90,000.
3 From 2020 to 2030 to 90,000.
4 By the year 2000, to 90,000.
5 By the year 2020, to 90,000. 5 years ago today

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100
II
100
II
100
II
50 50 50
7 / /
1980 1990 2020 2030 1980 2000 Now 2020

� With a partner, make correct sentences using a verb from column 1, an adverb from
column 2 and a time phrase.
Example:
Student A: increase, slowly, by the year 2000
Student B: By the year 2000, it had increased slowly to 90%.
Verb Adverb Time phrase
increase dramatically by the year 2000
decrease slowly I from 1995 to 2000
I
fall sharply I for the next ten years
rise I consistently between 2010 and now
climb I gradually by the year 2030
drop \ steadily l since 2016
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TASK 1 - TASK ACHIEVEMENT]

@ Task Achievement (TA) is the mark you get for how well you answer the question. There are a
number of common mistakes that prevent candidates from getting a high score in TA. These are:
• not including an overview statement
• misreporting data
• not highlighting key information or trends
• not including enough or any data
• speculating or giving an opinion about why changes have occurred
• using an inappropriate tone
• writing fewer than 150 words
• not including a final summary or concluding paragraph, or producing one which
doesn't summarise the main features.

As you look at a graph/table/chart


� With a partner, make notes on the main features in this Task! line graph. for the first time, ask yourself:
The line graph below shows the main reasons people gave for moving away from a • Are there any common trends
particular capital city to the countryside. in the graphical information?
• Does any of the information
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make differ from the rest in an
comparisons where relevant. obvious and significant way?
1------------------------ If so, how?

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90,000 • Is there anything that two or
more categories have in
80,000 common?
• Is there anything that only
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10,000 �----------------------

1990 2000 2010


rising cost of living -traffic - lifestyle

� Look at this description of the line graph above. It would not get a good score for
Task Achievement. Why not?
Answer 1

The line graph illustrates the main reasons people gave for moving away from a capital
city to the countryside.

The main reason was traffic. In 1990, 66,000 people left the city because of this, followed
by 85,000 in 2000. 70,000 left in 2010, so it actually went down in those last ten years.

It was different for the other two reasons, which both started a lot lower than rising cost
of living and both kept going up between 1990 and 2010. Subsequently, both categories
saw large increases, with traffic first going up a lot between 1990 and 2000 and then
even more clearly after that. Lifestyle went up to 30,000 initially, then up again until 2010.

UNIT 01 / WRITING
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The description from exercise 4 has been rewritten, but there is still room for
improvement. Read it and think about how it could be improved. Then match the
teacher's comments (A-D) to the numbered sections (1-4).
Answer 2

The line graph sets out the main motivations people expressed for relocating to the
countryside from the city in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010. The overall trend for the
period is of an increase in the numbers moving away from the city.

According to the graph, the main reason for relocation was the rising cost of living.
In 1990, 65,000 people left the city because of this, then 85,000 left in 2000, then 80,000
people moved away in 2010, so it actually increased by 20,000 initially (between 1990 and
2000), before going down by 5,000 in those last ten years between 2000 and 2010 (1).
This drop of 5,000 could have been because people generally had less money in 2010
than they did in 2000, so they couldn't afford to move. (2)

It was a different story for traffic and lifestyle. Both had the same number of city leavers
at the start of the period. Subsequently, both categories saw increases, with traffic first
going up by a large number between 1990 and 2000 and then even more steeply after
that. Lifestyle leavers rose consistently over the whole period, going up to 30,000 initially,
then up again to 2010. (3)

So, what does it all mean? For me, the answer is crystal clear. Overall, the graph shows
that a huge number of people moved away from the city to the countryside in a
twenty-year period. (4)

A Don't speculate -you shouldn't suggest reasons for any change. All you need to do
is report what you can see on the graph.

B This section is too mechanical - avoid simply listing the changes to a single
category like this. Focus more on highlighting the key figures and trends.

C Better - you have included a conclusion this time, but it doesn't really summarise
the key features. Your tone here is inappropriate - it sounds like you're writing a
magazine article. Remember to keep the tone more formal and scientific.

D This section makes its points more clearly but fails to include key data to
demonstrate the points.

� With a partner, discuss which option works best as a summary/conclusion for this
task. Give reasons.
Don't include data in your
A To sum up, people left the city for three main reasons, all of which rose significantly conclusion - it is a summary
between 1990 and 2000. Traffic changed the most rapidly, lifestyle changed the of the trends shown in the
least, and rising cost of living was the only reason that went down. whole graph, and you do not
need to repeat specific
B Overall, the graph suggests the number of people relocating to the countryside rose information.
across the period. Cost of living was the main reason for relocation by some
distance, despite a fall in numbers in the second half of the period. Traffic saw the
greatest overall increase, with lifestyle seeing a relatively slow but steady rise.
C All in all, the rising cost of living rose from 65,000 to 85,000 and then 80,000, and
was the highest of all three reasons. Traffic had the biggest increase from 20,000
up to 60,000, while lifestyle changed the least (20,000 / 30,000 / 40,000).
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I DESCRIBING CHANGES WITH ADJECTIVES AND ADVERBS I


(QlzD Look at these notes that another candidate made for this line graph, which helped
them to write a more effective description. Complete the sentences with the
adjectives in the box.

consistent highest joint-lowest lowest notable overall stable

Rising cost ofLiving: tne (1) point of /il,Vl,f'.1 re/il,son, in, /il,vt,!j 0eti1,r
(85,000 in, 2000); tne onL!j one to ciecre/il,se (to 80,000 in, 2010)
Tmffic: gre/i!,test (2) rise (40,000); most (3) ______
rise l'.Jetween, 2000 /il,n,ci 2010 (25,000)
LifestljLe: Most (4) ti1,n,cl (5) _______ incre/il,se
(onL0 20,000); rem/il,in,eci tne (6) of /i!,LL tnree re/il,son,s
Tmffic /il,n,ci LifesttjLe: (7) ______ in tnejirst !je/il,r presmtect
(20,000 in, 1990)

� Look at the following adverbs which describe the manner of change.


With a partner, decide which ones would be inappropriate for a Task 1 answer.
T�is kind of task requires you to
report the data objectively. Avoid
abruptly amazingly gradually inconsistently
using adverbs which give your
markedly noticeably predictably progressively subjective interpretation or
sharply shockingly significantly surprisingly opinion of the data, e.g. worryingly.
steadily

� For the adverbs in exercise 8 that are appropriate for a Task 1 answer, discuss
how you would expect the line to appear on the graph.
Example: steadily= the line went up or down at a constant rate without
many fluctuations

Change the underlined words in the sentences into the form given in brackets
and then rewrite the sentences. The first one has been done for you.
1 The category of 'Lifestyle' increased the most consistently and stably. �lructures, you can improve your
(adjective+ noun) score in another category,
The most consistent and stable increase was seen in the category of 'Lifestyle'. G�ammatical Range and
2 Traffic rose steadily as a reason for moving to the countryside between 1990 Accuracy (GRA), so vary your
�ombinations (verb + adverb,
and 2000 ... (adjective+ noun)
�djective + noun). When using an
3 ... but then there was a marked increase between 2000 and 2010. (verb+ adverb) adjective+ noun combination,
4 The number of people moving to the countryside for lifestyle reasons grew we can use the structure There is/
consistently across the whole period shown in the graph. (adjective+ noun) are or verbs like see or
experience. For example: The
figures saw Cl sudden fall in 2010.

UNIT 01 / WRITING Ill


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EXAM SKILLS ]
[![!D Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this Writing Task 1.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved
to the capital city of a particular country.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

Survey results: reasons for moving


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20,000

10,000 ;;;�=======::::=========--
2000 2005 2010 2015
- employment - study - family/friends - adventure

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