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Parallel Structure: With The - Ing Form (Gerund) of Words

Parallel structure refers to using the same grammatical pattern for elements that have equal importance. This helps join ideas and maintain consistency. Elements can be parallel at the word, phrase, or clause level when joined by coordinating conjunctions like "and" or "or". It is important not to mix forms like using a gerund phrase and infinitive phrase together or changing verb tense. Maintaining parallel structure is also important for items in a list after a colon. Proofreading strategies for checking parallel structure include scanning for conjunctions and organizing elements in a list to compare forms.

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Parallel Structure: With The - Ing Form (Gerund) of Words

Parallel structure refers to using the same grammatical pattern for elements that have equal importance. This helps join ideas and maintain consistency. Elements can be parallel at the word, phrase, or clause level when joined by coordinating conjunctions like "and" or "or". It is important not to mix forms like using a gerund phrase and infinitive phrase together or changing verb tense. Maintaining parallel structure is also important for items in a list after a colon. Proofreading strategies for checking parallel structure include scanning for conjunctions and organizing elements in a list to compare forms.

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Parallel Structure

Parallel structure means using the same pattern of words to show that two or more ideas have the
same level of importance. This can happen at the word, phrase, or clause level. The usual way to
join parallel structures is with the use of coordinating conjunctions such as "and" or "or."

Words and Phrases

With the -ing form (gerund) of words:

Parallel: Mary likes hiking, swimming, and bicycling.

With infinitive phrases:

Parallel: Mary likes to hike, to swim, and to ride a bicycle.


OR
Mary likes to hike, swim, and ride a bicycle.

(Note: You can use "to" before all the verbs in a sentence or only before the first one.)

Do not mix forms.

Example 1

Not Parallel:
Mary likes hiking, swimming, and to ride a bicycle.

Parallel:
Mary likes hiking, swimming, and riding a bicycle.

Example 2

Not Parallel:
The production manager was asked to write his report quickly, accurate ly, and in a detailed
manner.

Parallel:
The production manager was asked to write his report quickly, accurately, and thoroughly.

Example 3

Not Parallel:
The teacher said that he was a poor student because he waited until the last minute to study for
the exam, completed his lab problems in a careless manner, and his motivation was low.
Parallel:
The teacher said that he was a poor student because he waited until the last minute to study for
the exam, completed his lab problems in a careless manner, and lacked motivation.

Clauses

A parallel structure that begins with clauses must keep on with clauses. Changing to another
pattern or changing the voice of the verb (from active to passive or vice versa) will break the
parallelism.

Example 1

Not Parallel:
The coach told the players that they should get a lot of sleep, that they should not eat too much,
and to do some warm-up exercises before the game.

Parallel:
The coach told the players that they should get a lot of sleep, that they should not eat too much,
and that they should do some warm-up exercises before the game.

— or —

Parallel:
The coach told the players that they should get a lot of sleep, not eat too much, and do some
warm-up exercises before the game.

Example 2

Not Parallel:
The salesman expected that he would present his product at the meeting, that there would be time
for him to show his slide presentation, and that questions would be asked by prospective buyers.
(passive)

Parallel:
The salesman expected that he would present his product at the meeting, that there would be time
for him to show his slide presentation, and that prospective buyers would ask him questions.

Lists After a Colon

Be sure to keep all the elements in a list in the same form.

Example 1

Not Parallel:
The dictionary can be used for these purposes: to find word meanings, pronunciations, correct
spellings, and looking up irregular verbs.
Parallel:
The dictionary can be used for these purposes: to find word meanings, pronunciations, correct
spellings, and irregular verbs.

Proofreading Strategies to Try:

 Skim your paper, pausing at the words "and" and "or." Check on each side of these words to see
whether the items joined are parallel. If not, make them parallel.
 If you have several items in a list, put them in a column to see if they are parallel.
 Listen to the sound of the items in a list or the items being compared. Do you hear the same
kinds of sounds? For example, is there a series of "-ing" words beginning each item? Or do your
hear a rhythm being repeated? If something is breaking that rhythm or repetition of sound,
check to see if it needs to be made parallel.

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